读后续写专项突破 课件-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

读后续写专项突破 读 确定主角 01 明确问题/矛盾 02 解决问题/矛盾 03 5W+1H 主旨 （who、when、where、what、why） （How） 续 如何讲好一个故事？ 情节 读后续写 描述之前或现在的世界，并涉及主要人物和人物关系 主要角色遇到了一些事情（导火索），冲突矛盾出现 角色直面恐惧，解决问题，过程可能有些不顺利 角色最终克服障碍，回到第一幕的状态或实现了想要的状态，并有所成长和进步（升华） 好故事源于好结构（续写部分） 冲突/矛盾 反应 （情感、动作） 尝试 自身努力 或 借助外界工具 危机缓解 或 失败告终 转折 灵机一动 关键人/物的帮助 解决！ 矛盾------解决 一、高级句式 1.定语从句（限制性、非限、后定） 2.非谓语（doing、done、to do） 3.被动(be done by) 4.with的复合结构 5.强调句（it is/was...that...） 6.倒装 7.修辞手法(比喻be like、拟人、排比) 二、语言描写 1、环境描写 2、情感描写 3、动作描写 1.环境描写 ①The sun shone. The morning sun shone on the ground warmly and gently. The warm morning sunlight fell on the ground mildly. 形容词+意象+动词+副词/方位介短 ②外面刮起了风，地上的灰尘(dust)乱飞(disorder)。 Outside, there was a strong wind, the dust on the ground flying in disorder. 外面刮起了大风，吹的树枝乱摆，地上的灰尘乱飞，让人睁不开眼睛。 Outside, there was a strong wind,______________(blow) the branches in all directions. The dust on the ground was flying in disorder,_________ made people unable to open their eyes. which blowing 即 学 即 练 1.昨天下了倾盆大雨。 2.西湖的美景是一场视觉盛宴，两岸bank布满绿树红花。（with复合结构） （概述）It was raining cats and dogs. It was raining cats and dogs yesterday when school was over. I was __________when I got home. The peaceful landscape of the West lake is a true feast for the eyes，with its both banks dotted with green trees and colorful flowers all wet 2.情感描写 ①I walked away sadly. I walked away with tears in my eyes. I walked away with sadness filling my heart. 离开的时候，悲伤如潮涌，泪水从脸颊滑落。 When walking away, disappointment and sadness came in waves and tears streamed down my cheeks. I burst into tears Everything in the world lost its color. Night was deep and there was nothing but dead silence. ②她回到家里，又累又饿，不想说一句话。 Tired and hungry, he went home, not______________(say) a word. adj 1 and adj 2, 主句，doing… / 独立主格结构 saying ③听到这个好消息，他开心地跳起来。 ____________(hear) this good news, he jumped for joy, _______ his eyes sparkling like shining stars. Hearing with 即 学 即 练 2.一瞬间，泪水涌上眼眶，我感动的说不出话。 1.Mary很害怕。 _______ frightened was Mary that she couldn't say a word or move,____________(sit)on the ground like a statue. So sitting In a flash, ________ tears_______________(well) up in my eyes, I was touched / moved beyond words. with welling a wave of excitement take hold of Mom (妈妈激动不已). 3.又意外又开心，他站起身来去领奖，感到非常自豪。 Surprised and delighted, he stood up to accept the prize, __________(feel) proud. feeling 3.动作描写 分解---合并---美化 ①我早上匆忙去上学。 穿衣服---拿书包---上学 I put on my coat, grabbed my schoolbag and rushed to the school. ②我把他的名字忘了。 措辞具体化 I forgot his name. His name had completely slipped from my memory. His name had completely escaped me. 即 学 即 练 这个天真的被妈妈抱着的女孩心疯狂地跳动着，兴奋地尖叫着，打开她一直期待着的精致的礼盒。 With her heart______________（beat） wildly, the innocent girl, _______was held by her mom and screaming ________ excitement, unwrapped / open her delicate gift box (,)________ she had been looking forward to without any_________________(hesitate) . beating who with which hesitation $$