Unit 2 写作 教师版2024-2025学年外研版英语七年级上册

七上 U2 More than fun写作训练 本单元的话题是“爱好”,与之相关的话题作文是谈论爱好及爱好的益处。请以“My hobby”为题,写一篇不少于80字的英文短文,鼓励大家培养健康的兴趣爱好。 1、 审题指导 1. 写作内容:兴趣爱好 2. 写作时态:一般现在时 3. 写作人称:第一人称为主 4. 写作体裁:说明文 5. 写作要点:What’s your hobby? What can you get from your hobby? Who do you share it with? Share your happiness you get from your hobby. 2、 写作导图 3、 素材积累 单词积累 爱好 hobby 不同的 different 音乐 music 愉快,喜悦 joy 生气 angry 险境 trouble 练习 practice 每个人 everyone 享受 enjoy 短语,句子积累 众所周知 as we all know 对…感兴趣 have interest in 陷入麻烦 be in trouble 冷静下来 calm down 对…感到生气 be angry with 心情愉快 in a good mood 有益于 be good for 听音乐 listen to music 让某人做某事 make sb do sth 对…感到满意 be pleased with 我喜欢做某事 I enjoy doing sth …有很多乐趣 There is so much fun in… 我对…感兴趣 I have much interest in… 对…感到很满意 I’m really pleased with… 这个爱好有很多好处 There are many benefits of this hobby. 4、 分段写作 第一段:点明主题 1.众所周知,不同的人有不同的爱好。(as we all know) As we all know, different people have different hobbies. 2. 我的爱好是听音乐。听音乐有很多乐趣。(There is so much fun in…) My hobby is listening to music. There is so much fun in listening to music. 正文:具体描述爱好的益处 1. 我对音乐很感兴趣,它给我的生活带来了快乐。(have interest in) I have much interest in music and it brings joy to my life. 2. 当我遇到麻烦的时候,它可以让我冷静下来。(be in trouble; calm down) When I am in trouble, it can make me calm down. 3. 当我很累的时候,它可以让我放松。 When I am very tired, it can make me relaxed. 4. 当我对某事生气时,它可以使我快乐。(be angry with; make sb do) When I am angry with something, it can make me happy. 5. 听音乐让我心情好,对我的健康有好处。(in a good mood; be good for) Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and is good for my health. 6. 我经常和朋友们一起听音乐。 I often listen to music with my friends. 7. 一起享受音乐的乐趣感觉很棒。(enjoy the joy of) It feels great to enjoy the joy of music together. 结尾:总结全文 1. 没有爱好的生活就像没有盐的菜肴。(without) A life without hobby is like a dish without salt. 2. 我对我的爱好很满意。(be pleased with) I’m really pleased with my hobby. 5、 篇章写作 My hobby As we all know, different people have different hobbies. My hobby is listening to music. There is so much fun in listening to music. I have much interest in music and it brings joy to my life. For example, when I am in trouble, it can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me relaxed. When I am angry with something, it can make me happy. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and is good for my health. I often listen to music with my friends. It feels great to enjoy the joy of music together. A life without hobby is like a dish without salt. I’m really pleased with my hobby. There is so much fun in music. (教材P.32改写) For a long time, young people didn’t have much interest in traditional arts. (教材P.35改写) It feels great to enjoy our hobby together. (教材P.33改写) My hobby What's your hobby? What can you get from your hobby? Who do you share it with? Share your happiness you get from your hobby. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$