极简读后续写必背知识清单-2025届高三英语一轮复习

极简读后续写必背 目录 1. 五种衔接首句的方法 2. 四种句间衔接表达 3. 五种续写故事结尾方式 4. 八种不同情绪相应的肢体动作、面部表情表达 5. 三种情绪描写可用的句式 6. 六种身体动作描写表达 7. 两种动作描写句式+三种动作的润色方法 8. 环境描写的三大招式 9. 五类主题升华句型 · “自救与他救”（人与自然） · “逆境、成长、希望、态度、梦想”（人与自我） · 亲情(人与社会) · “诚信与友善”（人与社会） · 其他 10. 六大主体语境基本情节与主题升华 11. 五大主题高频微场景描写 · 善举助人型 · 个人成长类 · 脱困类故事 · 人与社会类(亲情、友情等） · 人与动物类 12. 读后续写高分句型倒装句 · 倒装句 · 定语从句 · 非谓语 · With的复合结构 · 名词性从句 · 独立结构 · 无灵主语 · 强调句 一、五种衔接首句的方法 1.延续首句主语，复现首句关键词 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. “Don’t panic!” he handed each one a wet towel, helping them clean the mess quickly. After that, Jeff stammered out their plan, his face flushing. However, Father laughed, “Sounds great! I can teach you to cook.” At this, Jenna and Jef almost jumped to their feet, joy in eyes. Under his careful guidance, it didn’t take long before the French toast and chicken porridge were ready. Everything settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.（2021年6月新高考Ⅰ卷） 2.描述首句引发的反应或动作(movement) The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Meeting their smiling eyes, Mother felt confused until they presented the breakfast and said “Happy Mother’s Day”. Mother gave them a tight hug, “Unbelievable! You can cook! It’s the biggest surprise I have received.” Her face lit up with happiness. “They have known how to take care of others.” Father said in response to her excitement, winking at Jenna and Jef. They couldn’t help giggling. It was a secret only shared between them. （2021年6月新高考Ⅰ卷） 3.增加情绪描写(emotion) When they came in my direction, I tried to show them the prettiest and happiest smile. Although I still felt a little scared of these dangerous people(情绪描写), I knew the burden on their shoulder--without a place called home, without a proper meal. So I truly hoped my smile could be some of the comfort. But hardly could I imagine that serving the salad could become so challenging and tough when facing a number of guests. They were almost like bees, coming one by one, never stopping！My smile froze gradually as one after another worn-out clothes were coming and pouring—now I was too busy to see their faces！Mixing the salad dressing and assigning one by one, I was almost like a cat on hot bricks，my hands racing. Fortunately, the helpful lady came to assist me, who took some loads off my shoulder. With her assistance, I finished my serving time smoothly.（2022年6月浙江卷） 4.增加场景描写(scene) We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. The only light came from the faint glow of the moon and the occasional flash of lightning.(环境描写) We got stuck in the forest. And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said, “Don’t worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home.” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to say, we ate a late dinner.(2018年6月浙江) 5.结合法（场景描写＋描述反应和动作/复现） At last, the town came into view but the sledge gave strange sounds. Barely slowing down, he went through the icy streets, avoiding anything that could met the sledge. And the sledge only stopped as he neared the doctor's house. The sledge, survived through the journey, broke down finally. Bob picked up his Jan eagerly and gently and made his way into the doctor's house. Luckily, Jan recovered fully from her fever. Love always makes miracles. （2021年6月新高考Ⅰ卷） 二、四种句间衔接表达 (一)、时间衔接 1.after a while/moment/ several minutes/a moment later shortly afterwards 不久之后 2.at that critical moment 在紧要关头 all of a sudden= suddenly day after day 日复一日 3.After what seemed like ages/centuries/eternity 似乎过了很久 4. It was not long before I made a full recovery.不久之后， … (二)、地点衔接 1.on the way to… on arriving at the hospital, … on arrival,… 一到达 (三)、情绪衔接/心理描写衔接 1.to one’s surprise/ amazement/ to one's relief 2. Encouraged/Inspired by his words, … 3.What amazed/delighted/disappointed me was that … 4.unexpectedly/surprisingly/amazingly/fortunately/unfortunately/thankfully (四)、感官反应衔接 1.看到：At the sight of ... What came into my sight was ...一看到...... Noticing Susan's unhappiness,… Seeing the messy room,… Looking around/scanning the room,… 2.听到:On hearing the scream, he… 一听到...... 3.感到: Sensing his anxiety,… Feeling anxious,… 4.想到; at the thought of …一想到 Thinking that …,… 三、五种续写故事结尾方式 1. 首尾呼应结尾： 文章开头：I had an interesting childhood . It was filled with surprise and amusements , all because of my mother -- loving , sweet , yet absent - minded and forgetful .我有一个有趣的童年，充满了惊喜和娱乐，都是因为我的母亲——有爱，却心不在焉，健忘。 结尾：Despite mom ' s being absent - minded and forgetful , she was still a kind and nice mom .尽管妈妈总是心不在焉，健忘，但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈。 2. 升华主题结尾：(详解在后面） 1　 总结概括整个故事 At last, the town came into view but the sledge gave strange sounds. Barely slowing down, he went through the icy streets, avoiding anything that could met the sledge. And the sledge only stopped as he neared the doctor's house. The sledge, survived through the journey, broke down finally. Bob picked up his Jan eagerly and gently and made his way into the doctor's house. Luckily, Jan recovered fully from her fever. Love always makes miracles. （2021年6月新高考Ⅱ卷）（总结概括：爱创造奇迹）  2　 表达自己的价值观； After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. Inside the bag was a chicken taco. The next few minutes saw my wolfing down the delicious food. Tears welled up as I was chewing. It was awesome to know that while many people tend to ignore those in need, there are some kind-hearted ones who go out of their way to lend a hand. The good deed the foreign family did will never escape me. I am going to pass it down to create a much friendlier world. (2021年1月八省联考) 3　 借用名言警句来升华主题   As a proverb says, ‘Every coin has two sides.’ Making full use of your strength is your achievement. Please remember that in no case will you give up especially in trouble. God is fair to everyone.” 3. 画面定格结尾： 1　 人物动作的画面定格  I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. It was me who had misunderstood my dad all the time, not the other way around. The next morning, I handed Dad my hard-earned cash. It only seemed fair. But he just took some of it. “That’ll do for now and thanks for helping with the family expenses, son. You are really growing up,” he said. After the talk, I went straight back to the farmer and took the extra work. (2021年6月浙江卷) 2　 特殊寓意的物品画面  Years later, looking through the pictures I took of the bear, I could still feel a shiver down my spine. The pictures lay quietly on my desk, reminding me of that dangerous but worthwhile moment. (2020年7月浙江卷)  3　 特殊寓意的写景画面  ①The sky cleared up and the grass was green. Dawn had come. 天空变得晴朗，草色青青。黎明已经来临。（寓意：崭新的开始）  ②Looking up, I saw the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree in the distance glisten gently as it reflected the sun's rays.   抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。（寓意：心情豁然开朗） ③The moon seemed to lighten the night. Dotted with glittering  stars, the sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairy tale atmosphere. 月亮照亮了黑夜，天空缀满星光，蓝色午夜赋予这一场景童话般的氛围。（寓意：美好）  4. 对话结尾： A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. To his great surprise, it was not just Poppy, but two dogs, that dashed out of the house as the doorbell rang. “Meet Pipan, Poppy’s new playmate,” exclaimed Dad. “Poppy has been gloomy ever since you left for university. We thought Pipan might cheer her up”. The boy beamed while patting both dogs: “I don’t know if I should feel thrilled for having a new puppy or sad because Poppy has found a new best friend!”.( 2020年1月浙江) 5. 留白结尾：（给予读者想象空间） The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. I looked just like a pumpkin head in it. Embarrassed and a little annoyed, I fled to my room, but Mom stopped me. “You haven’t read the comments yet.” I scrolled down the screen and marveled at the stories the viewers shared about Halloween. One girl recalled celebrating it with her brothers and sisters, and thanked us for “bringing her home”. The words brought warmth to my heart and tears to my eyes. I felt I felt a warm festival atmosphere spreading in my lovely family, which meant a wonderful Halloween night would begin. (2021年1月浙江卷) 练习提升 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事,写出5个不同结尾。 Everyone likes the beautiful Cinderella, but I like the ugly stepsister! The sidewalk was filled with shoppers as my mother and I hurried to the department store, I raised my neck for a look at the holiday window display, but at the age of six I was too small to see around the grown-ups with their winter coats and packages. When at last we reached the store, I stood with my eyes widened. “Look,” I shouted, pressing my hands against the glass, “Cinderella.” Before my eyes was the most beautiful I had ever seen! She wore a fairy princess suit made of shining red silk. I knew if I lifted her skirt I would find her crystal(水晶) . The tiny tiara(冠状头饰) fastened to her silky golden hair shone. “If only she were mine,” I dreamed. “We'd have tea parties, share secrets and dance with a handsome prince." But to my disappointment, my mother guided me away from the window, explaining that she and my father could not afford such an expensive doll. “But there will be a very special gift under the tree for you on morning, Madge,” she said “I promise.” Later that week I leaned against Mother's sewing machine, watching the needle flash up and down. “Bet you don't know what this is!" she joked, holding up the cloth for me to see. “My Christmas doll!" It was still in the early stages but I could make out the head, neck and body. “So much to my surprise!" Mother laughed as I danced around the room, already pretending Cinderella and I were at the. It wouldn't be long now. My excitement grew with each passing day. Mother continued to work on the doll, and whenever I walked into the room she would hide it under a pillow. I could tell by her smile she was pleased with her progress. On Christmas morning I jumped out of bed, ran down the hall and quickly arrived at the living room where the Christmas tree was placed. 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1: There, underneath the tree, was a beautifully packed gift box.__________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: But I could see Mother watching me, with an eager look on her face.____________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 Paragraph 1: There, underneath the tree, was a beautifully packed gift box. There, underneath the tree, was a beautifully packed gift box. Inside it was the “doll” I expected. With butterflies in my stomach, I breathed deeply and then opened it expectantly. However, much to my disappointment, it was nothing like the one that we saw at the store. She wore a plain skirt with a simple face. Her black woolen hair was pulled back in a pony tail, with no shiny tiara at all, not to mention the crystal shoes. She was nothing like Cinderella; she looked more like the ugly stepsister. ①首尾呼应结尾： But I could see Mother watching me, waiting for my response. Thinking of Mother staying up late into night making the doll for me, I hugged Mother warmly, saying with joy, “Thanks, Mum! This was really a special gift for me! ” A relieved smiled appeared on my mother’s face. It was not the doll itself, but the love attached to/sewn in the doll that struck me. Others love Cinderella but I love the ugly stepsister! ②升华主题结尾： But I could see Mother watching me, waiting for my response. Thinking of Mother staying up late into night making the doll for me, I hugged Mother warmly, saying with joy, “Thanks, Mum! ” A relieved smiled appeared on my mother’s face. Others love Cinderella but I love the ugly stepsister! This was really a special gift for me! It was not the doll itself, but the love attached to/sewn in the doll that struck me. ③画面定格结尾： But I could see Mother watching me, waiting for my response. Thinking of Mother staying up late into night making the doll for me, I hugged Mother warmly, saying with joy, “Thanks, Mum! ” A relieved smiled appeared on my mother’s face. Others love Cinderella but I love the ugly stepsister! It was not the doll itself, but the love attached to/sewn in the doll that struck me. This was really a special gift for me! Till today，the doll has been sitting on my desk, smiling at me and talking with me. ④对话结尾： But I could see Mother watching me, waiting for my response. Thinking of Mother staying up late into night making the doll for me, I hugged Mother warmly, saying with joy, “Thanks, Mum! ” A relieved smiled appeared on my mother’s face. Later Father asked me, “Others love Cinderella, but why do you love the ugly stepsister?” Without any hesitation, I answered, “It was not the doll itself, but the love attached to/sewn in the doll that struck me!This was really a special gift for me!” ⑤留白结尾： But I could see Mother watching me, waiting for my response. Thinking of Mother staying up late into night making the doll for me, I hugged Mother warmly, saying with joy, “Thanks, Mum! ” A relieved smiled appeared on my mother’s face. It was not the doll itself, but the love attached to/sewn in the doll that struck me. Others love Cinderella but I love the ugly stepsister! This was really a special gift for me! It accompanied me with each passing day, dancing with me and sharing secrets with me...... 四、八种不同情绪相应的肢体动作、面部表情表达 情感 相应的肢体动作、面部表情表达 开心 delighted /excited burst into laughter(突然大笑), clap one’s hands(拍手), Eyes twinkle.(两眼发光), rin from ear to ear（笑得合不拢嘴）；wear a broad smile (笑容灿烂), jump up and cheer(跃起欢呼)；eyes shining with wild joy and lips curving into a smile （眼里闪烁着狂喜的光芒，嘴角微微一笑） 失望 upset disappointed lower one’s head, One’s heart sinks.(心情沉重),drag one’s feet 拖着步伐；hold back tears 抑制住眼泪；eyes are wet with tears 眼含泪水；sigh with disappointment 失望的叹气；in low spirits 情绪低落；heart seemed to be torn 心都要碎了；feel a lump in my throat 喉咙哽咽 紧张 Nervous. anxious restless have butterflies(蝴蝶) in one’s stomach，feel like sit on pins and needles(入坐 针毡）, walk back and forth（来回) ;feel my heart beating wildly 感觉心跳加速；my palms are sweating and knees are soft 我的手心出汗，膝盖发软；tremble with panic 吓得发抖 尴尬/羞愧 embarrassed awkward shamed flush with embarrassment 窘红了脸；drop my head in shame 羞愧地低下了头；feel my face burning 脸上滚烫；want the floor to swallow me up 想找个地缝钻进去 愤怒 furious rage mad/angry anger boils over sb. 怒气冲天；glare at 怒视；flush with anger 气得脸通红 face twists with rage 脸因为愤怒而扭曲；be shaking/speechless with rage 气得颤抖/说不出话来；gnash my teeth 咬牙切齿；clench my fists 捏紧拳头；stamp my feet in anger 气得直跺脚 感动Grateful /moved take sb in one’s arms (拥抱), tears stream down, hold one’s hands tightly(紧握双手), bow to sb (鞠躬) 害怕/tense Frightened /scared Nervous freeze on the spot(僵在那里), One’s mind goes blank.(脑子一片空白), Palms sweat 掌心流汗, Legs tremble(双腿发抖). One’s throat tightens.(哽咽） his face turn pale(脸色苍白)，hold one’s breath 屏住呼吸 One’s heart beats/pounds violently.(心脏剧烈跳动). 惊讶Surprised /shocked freeze（froze） on the spot 当场僵住, One’s mouth hangs open 张大嘴. widen one’s eyes 瞪大眼睛, sb's jaw dropped 目瞪口呆 eyes widened with surprise/shock 惊讶地睁大了眼睛 be shocked beyond words/description 震惊地说不出话 五、三种情绪描写句式 (一)：情绪形容词1+情绪形容词2, sb do sth, doing sth. 感到...和..., 某人做某事1, 并做某事2 1. Delighted and confident, Director Xie shown his great talent for dancing, hoping to attract more people to visit his hometown.感到开心和自信的，解局长展示了他舞蹈的天赋，希望吸引更多的人来他家乡旅游。 2.Nervous and scared, Peter managed to step onto the stage, starting to deliver his speech. (感到)紧张和害怕,彼得勉力走上舞台,开始发表演讲。 3. Determined and inspired, David raised his head, looking at me with gratitude. 感到坚定和受到鼓舞,David抬起头，感激地看着我。 练习： 1. _________________(感到沮丧和无助的), Eric burst in tears, wondering what to do next. 2._________________________(感到放松的和快乐的), David waved at me immediately after crossing the finish line , conveying his happiness and gratitude . （2022全国1卷） 答案：1.Discouraged and hopeless 2. Relaxed and delighted (二)、情绪形容词+as sb+be动词，sb (still) do sth. 尽管某人（感到）...，某人仍做某事 1.尽管很紧张， David 决心完成赛跑。Nervous as he was , David became determined to finish the race. 2.尽管很伤心，他还是竭力忍住眼泪。Sad as he was, he tried hard to hold back his tears. 3.尽管很着急和不情愿，我还是按照爸爸的要求去洗碗。Anxious and unwilling as I was, I still did the dishes at Dad's request. 练习： 1._ (尽管他很害怕和紧张), Helctor still plucked up his courage to explain what had happened to Mr. Alder. 2. , he carried on climbing the mountain.(尽管他又累又饿) 答案：1.Scared and anxious as he was 2. Exhausted and hungry as he was (三)、sb was so+情绪adj+that从句 某人如此... ...以至于 倒装句：so+情绪adj + was +sb +that从句 某人如此... ...以至于 1. 他吓得一句话也说不出来。So scared was he that he was unable to utter a single word. 2. 她太伤心了，突然哭了起来。So sad was she that she burst into crying. 3. 她气得忍不住大叫起来。So angry was she that she couldn’t help shouting. 练习： 1. that she slept on the ground. 简太累了，只好睡在地上。 2. that my mind went blank. 我太紧张了，脑子一片空白。 3. that I walked closer to hug them tightly.我被深深地感动了，走近紧紧地拥抱他们. 4. that my face turned pale and my palms were sweating．我如此害怕以至于脸色变得苍白，手心出汗。 答案：1. So exhausted was Jane 2. So anxious was I 3. So deeply moved was I 4. So terrified was I 六、六种身体动作描写表达 眼的动作 spot /watch /observe/ notice  glance at /gaze at/ stare at/glare at catch a glimpse of 偷瞄一眼 peer over one's shoulder 回头看 stare sb up and down上下打量着看 raise/lift one's eyes  抬起眼睛 one's eyes widen  瞪大眼睛take one's eyes off    把视线移开 [具体描写] 1. 看+with/in great surprise/ amazement/sorrow/ sadness/joy/ delight  (介词短语修饰) 2. 看+ excitedly carefully happily / sadly (副词修怖) 嘴的动作 add 补充说 continue 继续说 whisper 悄悄说 criticize 批评 comfort 安慰 apologize 道歉 remind 提醒 promise 许诺 warn 警告 yell/scream at sb.某人尖叫 respond回应 [具体描写] 1. 说+情绪类副词(happily, excitedly, worriedly, disappointedly, sadly, surprisedly...) I said to my mum happily, “Mom, I have passed the exam!” 2. 说.+with+情绪类名词（excitement, surprise, fear, worry, joy, happiness, regret, guilt, doubt, sorrow...） I asked with surprise, “Why did you say so?” 3. 说.+in+情绪类名词（delight, fear, despair, relief） Mom cried in relief, “Finally, we found you!” 4. 说.+ in a +形容词(low, happy, caring, angry, soft, mild, ...)+voice/tone Tom comforted me in a caring voice, “Trust yourself. You can make it!” 5. 说.+ in a +形容词(low, high)+spirit I responded in a low spirit(失落地), “I am afraid I can’t join in the final competition.” 脚的动作 kick the door/ball hard. 用力踢门/球crawl 匍匐行进,爬行 flee/escape from 逃离wander/stroll  漫步闲逛；skip 蹦蹦跳跳着走；slip into/out of 悄悄溜进/溜出； dash to猛冲向； rush to冲向 ；make one's way to前往某处 头的动作 hung/dropped/lowered/bent/bowed his head in shame.羞愧地低下了头nodded one’s heads in agreement. 点头同意；shake one’s head in disbelief 怀疑地摇摇头 put/held one’s head in one’s hands双手抱头 脸的动作 A bright smile appeared on/ spread across/ crossed his face.脸上露出了灿烂的笑容；one’s face lit up/brightened/glowed脸上焕发出了光彩；have a slight frown on his face.愁眉不展 ；one’s face paled with fright.吓得脸都白了 手的动作 reached for one’s hand and held it tightly. 伸手抓住手并紧紧握住；hold hands手拉手；one’s hands shook/trembled 手颤抖着；hold out/reach out a hand伸出手；put one’s hands to one’s cheeks 双手捂住脸 七、两种动作描写句式+三种动作的润色方法 1.Having done sth., 主句 Having received the admission letter, Tom was seized by excitement. 2.done/doing sth., 主句 Criticized by my teacher, I lowered my head and flushed with guilty.被老师批评，惭愧低头。 3.动词+tightly/cheerfully/hopefully/helplessly/desperately/fiercely(fight)/violently/swiftly 4.动词+in+情感名词(terror/excitement/shock/sorrow…) 5.动词+with+情感名词(delight/pleasure/excitement/satisfaction/anger) 八、环境描写的三大招式 大招一：形容词+意象+动词+副词/方位介短 1）The wind blew. 改写：The gentle warm wind blew softly on the face. 2）The trees waved. 改写：The tall green trees waved quietly on the roadsides. 3）The sun shone. 改写：The morning sun shone on the ground warmly and gently. 大招二：写景+比喻+特点: 句式：写景句(本体)，+ like + 喻体 + that从句/非谓语动词 1. The stars are in the sky. ---The bright stars scattered in the sky, like gems twinkling brilliantly. 天上的星星像宝石一样闪闪发光。 2. The tree is waving. --- The trees waved wildly in the air, like drunken man trembling from side to side. 树像醉汉一样摇摇晃晃。 大招三：情景交融：写景+感受 意象+动词ing，+ 感受： 句式一：（无灵主语）a ripple of +情感名词 ran through sb’s heart; a flood of +情感名词 welled up in sb. 句式二：（人称主语）sb. was brimmed over with +情感名词；sb. was immersed in +情感名词. The icy wind howling, a ripple of tension ran through his heart. 示例：It got dark. --- The world was burdened with a sea of darkness. A sense of horror creeping up on me. I immediately turned around to slide into the bed and curled up. 九、主题升华句 (一).“自救与他救”主题升华（人与自然） 1. Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。 2. Perseverance prevails.坚持就是胜利。 3. Roses given, fragrance in hand.赠人玫瑰，手有余香。 4. Somebody sometime somewhere will shine a lamp of hope for you.有时某处有人会给你点亮一线希望。 5. A minor action could make wonders.一个小行为就能创造奇迹。 (二) “逆境、成长、希望、态度、梦想”主题升华（人与自我） 1.What doesn’t kill you makes you a fighter.杀不死你的终将使你强大。 2.A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit.吃一堑,长一智。 3.Fear never builds the future, but hope does.恐惧不会铸造未来，但是希望可以。 4.The journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行始于足下。 5.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 6.God helps those who help themselves. 天道酬勤。 7.No sweet without sweat. 没有汗水就没有收获。 8.When life gives you lemons, make lemonade.当生活给了你柠檬，就做柠檬水。 9.Happiness depends on your mindset and attitude.幸福取决于你的心态和态度。 10.If the dream is big enough, the facts don’t count.心中有目标，风雨不折腰。 11.The world always makes way for the dreamer.这个世界总是会给梦想家让路。 (三)、亲情(人与社会) 1.Family is a life jacket in the stormy sea of life.家庭是人生惊涛骇浪中的救生衣 。 2.When trouble comes, it’s your family that supports you.当麻烦来了，是你的家人来支持你。 3.In this world everything comes to an end except mother's love.在这个世界上，除了母爱，一切都会结束。 4.Our family is like the branches of a tree.We may grow in different directions, yet our roots remain as one. 我们家就像一根树枝。我们可能向不同的方向生长，但我们的根仍然是一个方向。 5.Families are stuck together by love, so spread it around like glue.家庭被爱粘在一起，所以把它像胶水一样分散在一起。 6.It was at that moment that I had a full understanding of the significance of family.就在那一刻，我充分了解了家庭的意义。 7.Only then did it dawn on me that we should never take love for granted. 直到那时，我才明白，我们永远不应该把爱视为理所当然的事。 8.Not until then did I become aware of the significance of family.直到那时，我才意识到家庭的重要性。 (四). “诚信与友善”主题升华（人与社会） 1.Honesty is the best policy.诚实乃上策。 2.A small act of kindness can make a big difference.一个小小的善举可以产生很大的影响。 3.Be the light that gives light to other people.成为指引人前进的光。 4.Kindness is repaid with kindness. 善有善报。 5.The acts of random kindness spread. 不经意的善举会广泛传播。 6.No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted.任何善举，无论多么微小，都不会被浪费掉。 7.It dawned on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another, and that a simple act could make the world so much better. 8.Never had I anticipated that a random act of kindness would inject such great power into others and change their life.我从来没有预料到，一个偶然的善举会给别人注入如此巨大的力量，改变他们的生活。 (五).其他 1. Learn to walk before you run. 在学会奔跑之前要学会走路。 2. Every coin has two sides. 凡是都有利弊。 3. Great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同。 4. More haste, less speed. 欲速则不达。 5. Look before you leap. 三思而后行。 6. Justice has a long harm. 法网恢恢疏而不漏。 7. Don’t put the cart before the horse. 不要本末倒置。 （六）.精彩结尾句式赏析 1. Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey, a pleasant smile would spread over Mon’s face.(动作类)每次我们提起旅途中有趣的事情，莫儿的脸上就会绽开愉快的笑容。 2. It was the narrow escape that made them love each other deeper than before.(情感类）正是这次死里逃生让他们比以前更爱对方了。 3.That whole morning witnessed a happy time spent among them with everyone bathed in the warmth of a family. 整个上午，大家都沐浴在家庭的温暖中，度过了一段快乐的时光。 4. Many years have gone by, but when I looked back to that day, I still remember the lesson he taught me.(感悟类)许多年过去了，但当我回想起那天，我仍然记得他教给我的一课。 5. Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.(哲理类)直到那时我才意识到，只有勇敢才能克服路上的任何困难。 6. That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever. (情感类）那一天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆中。 7. What an unforgettable experience! It would surely be remembered in our whole life.(感悟类)多么难忘的经历啊!它肯定会在我们的一生中被记住。 8. Nothing is more precious than love.没有什么比爱更珍贵了。 9.The early sunlight streaming in, the whole family bathed in love in happiness. 清晨的阳光照进来，全家人沐浴在爱的幸福中。 10.A ripple of warmth welled up in my heart. The flowers swaying in the breeze blossomed, so did our friendship.一阵暖意涌上我的心头。花儿在微风中摇曳开了，我们的友谊也是。 【句式表达积累】 Only then did sb realize···/ Not until then did sb realize···直到那时，某人才意识到······ 强调句 —— It is/was+A+that +其余成分 感叹句 —— What an/a +adj. +experience！ 否定+比较级 ——Nothing is more +adj.+than+n./V-ing 倒装 否定词(in no case/never/seldom...) +v. + subject 【练习】 1.直到那时她才意识到，人不应该放弃希望！ 2.正是心里的勇气帮助John战胜了恐惧。 3.正是这次特别的经历使我明白了家人才是世界上最重要的。 4.这是多么刺激却又难忘的回忆呀！ 5.没有什么比拍北极熊更刺激的了！ 6.我从未有过如此刺激的假期！(never句首倒装) 参考答案 1.Only then did she realize that one should never give up hope! 2.It was the special experience that made me realize family matters the most. 3.It was courage in his heart that helped John overcome the fear. 4.What a thrilling but memorable experience！ 5.Nothing is more exciting than photographing polar bears. 6.Never had I had such a thrilling vacation before! 十、六大主体语境基本情节与主题升华 Theme01-善举助人型 困难描写(消极情绪+困难处境)---助人过程呈现(想到办法+动作链)--- 圆满结局 (感激+升华) 句式1：from then on +行动 例句：From then on, I would try my best to help sb like sb.Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.从那时起，我会尽我最大的努力帮助某些人，就像某人一样。 只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。 【示例1 2020年山东卷】 讲述了主人公和孩子们想出在社区卖爆米花的主意，来帮助穷人的故事。我们可以借鉴这个写作公式，可以这么写。 From then on, Bernard made up his mind to help someone who needs help . Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.从那时起，伯纳德决定帮助需要帮助的人。只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。 【示例2 八省联考】 作者讲述一次吉普车爆胎和维修经历。先是路边标语求助无果，失望之际墨西哥人伸出援手。续写的第一段，主要要写帮助的细节。第二段就可以升华主题： From then on, I placed a jack and some common tools in my car.When meeting people in need on the road ,I would try my best to help them like the family.Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.从那时起，我在我的车里放了一个千斤顶和一些常见的工具。当我在路上遇到需要帮助的人时，我会尽力像家人一样帮助他们。只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。 句式2：动作+感动+感悟 例句：sb looked at sth / held sth, tears rolling down without control. 某人看到了某物或者拿着某物，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。 It is love that makes the world go around,which sb felt deep in one’s heart. 正是爱让世界转动，在某人的心里深深地感受到了这一点。 【示例1 八省联考】 在续写第二段开头，文章提到那一家墨西哥人递给作者一个纸袋，里面有食物。我们可以这么来写主旨升华句。 I held the paper bag tightly, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around,which I felt deep in my heart. 我紧紧地握着纸袋，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。 正是爱让世界转动，在我心里里深深地感受到了这一点。 【示例2】山东卷“卖爆米花帮助穷人”的故事 He held the coins tightly, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around,which Bernard felt deep in his little heart. 他紧紧地握着硬币，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。 正是爱让世界转动，伯纳德在他的心里深深地感受到了这一点。 Theme02-个人成长类 成长前的苦恼(负面情绪塑造)---成长中(蜕变塑造)---成长后的升华(喜悦+感激+升华) 第一类：学习知识促“改变” It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。 第二类：发挥天赋促“改变” Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end. 事实上，每个人都有天赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。 第三类：追逐梦想促“改变”  It's never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。 As long as we dare to dream and don't let difficulties get in our way, anything is possible.只要我们敢于梦想，不被困难所阻挡，一切皆有可能。 第四类：克服困难促“改变” The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don’t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal (success) finally.通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标（成功）。 第五类：战胜恐惧促“改变” Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.战胜恐惧和实现目标，需要决心和乐观。 第六类：战胜自卑促“改变” I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence.Now, I am proud of what I look like and much happier, because I have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are.我笑了，因为我最终意识到了自信的真正来源。现在，我为我的样子感到骄傲，而且更快乐，因为我已经意识到，决定你真正是谁的是你的个性。 第七类：战胜消极促“改变” Attitude is more important than facts for us. We cannot change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is hold a positive attitude. 态度对我们来说比事实更重要。 我们不能改变我们的过去；我们不能改变事实。 然而，我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度。 Theme 03-脱困类故事 救人之前(恶劣环境+负面情绪)--救人之中(努力+救人动作+如释重负)---救人之后(感激+升华) 主旨句一：入门句 That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever. 那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。 主旨句二：中级句 Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way. 直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。 主旨句三：高级句（强调句，定语从句，宾语从句） It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with (= we may face), we mustn’t give up our hope.“正是这种独特的经历使我理解了我们所面临的任何困难，我们不能放弃我们的希望。” 主旨句四：综合型 Finally, we did sth. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.最后，我们做某事。（这里写结果） 多么难忘的经历啊！ （这是一个万能句）事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。（作者的体悟，可以把“保持冷静”，换成“不放弃希望”等。） Theme 04-人与社会类(亲情、友情等） 亲情类:矛盾塑造(尴尬+紧张) + 快乐结局塑造(感激+开心) 友情类:友情出现危机或困难(故事冲突)+友情弥补(解释、认错、弥补)+友情升华(懂得珍惜) 感悟:意识到... 1.It was then that I came to the realization that families are connected not by blood but by love.就在那时，我意识到，家人不是由于血缘而是因为爱联结在一起。 2.At the same time, all of them laughed with excitement, the laughter echoed in the room.与此同时，他们都兴奋的笑了起来，笑声回荡在房间里。 3.Although we are not blood relatives ,the tie between us is even stronger than that.虽然我们不是血亲，但我们之间的关系甚至比那更紧密。 4.Radiant laughter burst out from the room constantly, and the whole family surrounded by intense happiness.房间里不断传出灿烂的笑声，整个家庭包围在强烈的幸福中。 5.From then on, I came to know a truth --- the string knot on the skirt could go untied but the family bond will never break.从那时起，我明白了一个道理——家庭的联结永远不会散开。 6.At that moment, we both realized we were an integral part of each other's lives. 那一刻，我们意识到我们彼此生命不可或缺的一部分. Theme 05-趣事型 1:矛盾塑造(尴尬+紧张) 2:快乐结局塑造(感激+开心) 1、趣事篇有关的后悔描写： With every angle tried in vain for my nose’s prevention, I was overwhelmed by a feeling of extreme regret and annoyance（被一种极度的遗憾和烦恼所淹没）.  2、趣事篇有关的开心描写： We all jumped to our feet, dancing and screaming with joy（开心得欢呼雀跃）.  3、趣事篇有关的感激描写： · They shrugged and grinned, which dissipated all her distress and consoled her.他们耸了耸肩，咧着嘴笑，这就驱散了她的一切烦恼，给了她安慰。 · ‘Thanks.’ Clinging her hands to the bag opening, she was overwhelmed by a surge of gratitude and warmth.谢谢。她紧紧抓住打开的袋子，充满了感激和温暖。 · The two strong strangers undoubtedly lit her day up.这两个强壮的陌生人点亮了她的一天。 4、趣事篇有关的紧张描写： ·  So nervous was he that （他太紧张了）he dropped the electric carving knife. 他太紧张了，所以他的电刻刀掉了下来。 · I got into a panic（ 陷入惊慌之中）as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. 我陷入了恐慌陷入惊慌之中，当我紧紧地靠在桌子上，并四处移动我的头，试图找到正确的角度，但没有用。 5、趣事篇有关的尴尬描写：  她立刻涨红了脸，感到尴尬几乎把她整个包围起来。Blushing scarlet instantly, she felt embarrassment almost wreathed her entirely.  Theme 06-人与动物类 动物和谐、忠诚等陪伴、珍爱生命、自然难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助 1.Despite the chill autumn wind, their home is full of love and the warmth of reunion.尽管秋风凛冽，他们的家充满了爱和团聚的温暖。 2. Appearing to be feeling better, the wolf slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Becky’s hand it seems like saying thank you. What a warm scene!  出现时已经好多了，这只狼慢慢抬起了头，给Becky的手一个吻，好像在表达感谢，多么温暖的一幕。 3. Many years has passed since Spotty left us, but the precious lessons he taught me will always be in my memory.Spotty离开我们已经很多年了，但是他给我的珍贵的教训会一直在我记忆里。 十一、六大主题高频微场景描写 （一）、善举助人型 1.鼓励他人 （1）“Don’t be embarrassed.” I said kindly. I told him that we were all afraid of some kind of silly stuff. I took myself as an example. I was totally freaked out by the darkness. Soon, we were both laughing heartily. That broke the ice enough for me to say, ” You know, when I’m feeling afraid of the dark, I turn on the light for a minute so I can see that there’s nothing to be scared of. You might feel better if you take a look at what’s actually under the water.” “I’ll go first, and then you follow me to go under water.” I waved to Max. I grabbed a pair of goggles and put it on. I dived under for a few seconds before coming up. “Nothing scary!? I reported. Max hesitated, and then took a deep breath, and went under the water for about three seconds. （2）Seeing depressed/gloomy 沮丧的 looks on his face, I felt sorrowful/sad 悲伤的, deciding to have a talk with him. Turning to David and patting 轻拍 his shoulder, I persuaded in a gentle tone, “I heard you had struggled so hard for this event. How I admire your strong determination. Why not give it a try?” “I…I …I am afraid kids from other schools will laugh at me. I think what the coach said is right.” stammered 结巴说 /murmured 轻声说 David, lowering his head and wriggling 扭动 his hands, “But David, what counts most is to participate to the best of your ability in whatever we’re doing. Just be yourself and you will not be looked down upon?” After a temporary hesitation, David took a deep breath and nodded in agreement, finally deciding to join in the cross-country team. 2. 网络上陌生人热心提供帮助 Melissa noticed how much creativity this move took, so she grabbed a copy of his resume and decided to post it on social media. Within hours , it had gone viral, with people from all over the world reaching out to Patrick with job offers and words of encouragement . “I thought it was a very brave thing to do,” Melissa said. “I wanted to help him get his story out there.”Thanks to Melissa’s post, Patrick’s phone started ringing off the hook . He received hundreds of job offers from all kinds of companies, ranging from small family-owned businesses to large corporations. “I was completely overwhelmed ,” Patrick said. “I never imagined that my little idea would turn into something so big .” （二）、个人成长类 1.比赛微场景 紧张-镇定-完美结束 (1)I stepped onto the stage. So nervous was I that I felt my tongue tighten, my mind going blank. But with the friendly smile flashing over my classmates, a sense of relief welled up in me. Smiling at them, I tried to calm myself down. I took a deep breath and began my speech. Focusing on my speech, I did what my teacher Mr. Li instructed me to do during my practice. Gradually absorbed in专注 it, I was even unaware that my speech came to an end smoothly. The audience gave me a big/thunderous applause and Mr. Li gave me a thumb-up with satisfaction. Then we waited for the result. (2) Thinking of all the efforts/endeavor 努力 he had made for the game, Messi, fully-prepared and confident, took a deep breath and stepped into the soccer field. Instead of chasing the ball up and down aimlessly, this time, he demonstrated/displayed 展示 his excellent running kick and long pass 长传球, which helped the Green Lighting take over 统治 the game. Heart pounding wildly, he kept on running as fast as he could, and finally here came the chance! Everyone presents held their breath and later, the field exploded with thunderous applause. GOAL! All the teammates ran to him thrillingly and threw him into the sky with deafening震耳欲聋的cheers. Breathing a sigh of relief, Messi eventually showed his victory smile. 2.解决困难微场景 慌张-镇定-解决问题 (1) Oh my gosh! What should we do? “she cried out. She was totally panicked/frightened and lost her calmness. I tried my best to calm her down and in the meantime, scanned/looked around for a temporary shelter. Suddenly, I spotted the tent. Holding Lily’s hand, I ran as fast as I could into the tent, where we found some towels to dry ourselves and slept in each other’s arms. we managed to make it through the night. (2) We had no idea /were at a loss where we were and it was getting dark. The thought that we might have got lost in such darkness made me tremble with fear uncontrollably. Tears of fear and regret filled my eyes. Fortunately, Dad was not so frightened as I was. He kept silent and listened very carefully as he took my horse rein and led the way. We had wandered for what seemed like ages when suddenly a river came into sight. Hopefully, we could find our way back to the farm house if we followed the river. Finally, we arrived home safely just in time for supper, but what an experience! It turns out there’s always a way out of any plight (困境） as long as we stay calm. 3成长的心理描写 纠结犹豫:Sather wanted me in this role. She shocked me, for I was always a shy person, not even dare to speak loud in public. Hearing Mrs.Sather's words I realized it was time to make a change. I decided/determined to throw off my shy cloak 遮盖物. I wanted to prove that I also could do something good in public. After seconds of hesitation, I nodded my head, confidently saying “Mrs. Sather, I want to, no, I am determined to play the role.” 4 改变 (1) 老师鼓励促改变Fast-forward through five months of practicing, we were ready. Still, I was as nervous as I had ever been. “It doesn't matter how you do tonight," Mrs. Sather encouraged me, as if reading my thoughts when she came backstage for a final check. “You have already shown yourself how wonderful you are.” She was right and the performance was very successful. (2)父母安慰鼓励孩子改变The next moment Papa was sitting beside her. Relief and joy flooded through Rani. She flung her arms around Papa and clung to him. “Rani! What’s wrong?” a visibly relieved Papa asked. Rani hesitated at first, but then broke down in tears, “I hate my hair!” She poured out everything about teasing. “And that’s not all,” Rani sobbed. “Mama even let Amit and Sumit get away with it.” Papa sighed, stroked her disheveled hair and planted a soft kiss on her forehead. “I know it’s tough being teased by those kids, but you can’t let it get to you. Look, you are beautiful just the way you are!” Papa said soothingly. Together, they sat in silence for a while, until Rani’s tears dried up and she felt ready to face the world again. (3)回忆促改变 Immediately, the scene flashed back when a cashier in the pizza shop gave them too much change by mistake, her father went straight back to return the unexpected money instead of keeping it. She soon understood what she should do. 5.努力的场景 （1）After returning home, Messi began to make up his mind to become a genuine player before the final. Thus, he spared no effort to practice kicking the ball, running after it and kicking it again attentively专心地 and painstakingly 尽力, regardless of wind or rain. Although sweat blurred (使)变得模糊不清 his vision, the goal in his mind became much clearer. Every time he felt worn out and exhausted, the words of Grace and Coach Jupiter would linger 流连,逗留 in his head, which undoubtedly lifted his spirits and pushed him to rise to his feet again. Day after day, Messi felt his muscles strengthened and his skills perfected, everything in good conditions. And clearly, all the extra hours that he’d spend practicing alone paid off. (2) However, my self-esteem wouldn’t allow me to yield to the challenge and I took a more active part in the test of the hypothesis. Days and nights witnessed my devotion to observing teenagers around us and interviewing them patiently and logically. My dedication gradually melted my teammate’s heart and his attitudes towards me began to change. He was no more an ice cube unwilling to discuss, and instead he listened attentively to my ideas and adopted some from time to time. It was the first time that I had perceived that we could be called a team. Everything seemed to go on so smoothly. 6成功的兴奋+感谢 (1)After what seemed like ages, the judge announced the result and I came first. With a sense/surge of excitement and thrill flooding over me, I jumped up and cheered, with my eyes twinkling. I approached Mr. Li and threw my arms around Mr. Li, whispering, “Thank you, Mr. Li. Without your guidance, I couldn’t have stood out in the competition.” Mr. Li patted me on the back, saying, “It is your great efforts that brings you success.” (2)Seeing Surrell, Tiara’s grandmother couldn’t hold back抑制her tears of gratitude. “Thank you, Surrell. Without your timely rescue, my granddaughter would have died in the fire” She said, holding his hand tightly. “It’s a small price to pay and it's my pleasure to do that. Surrell held her hand, saying in a hoarse嘶哑的voice. （三）、脱困类故事 1.被动物攻击 Andy stopped there, with the buzz louder and louder. Just at that moment, Eric rode rapidly towards him like an arrow. He stopped, threw off his clothes and wrapped up their faces. After that, he shouted to Andy, “This way! There is a lake ahead!” With no time to waste, they rode furiously in the direction of the lake, the crazy bees following them. Finally, they made it to the lake. Off their bikes and into the cool water they lived, disappearing below the surface and away from the savage insects. After holding their breath for as long as they could, they came up for air and noticed the bees had gone. 2.雨中自救 I did as he instructed, opening the door, stumbling 蹒跚而行 in the water and walking straight toward him, unafraid of surging 汹涌 water. Everything was going well until a powerful-looking wave approached me. I lost my balance but seized the rope tightly 紧紧地. Time passing, tiredness engulfed 吞没 me with my feet stiff 僵硬 and shivering. I screamed that I couldn’t make it. My lips quivered, big tears rolling down cheeks. Confronted with this situation, Joe constantly comforted me to calm down. Actually, the torrent was indeed temporary, so I gritted out my teeth and kept moving forward slowly and cautiously. The instant I grabbed hold of his hand, I struggle to throw myself at him. Joe patted me and sighed in great relief. 3. 河中求救 With desperate tears , she suddenly spotted a boat with a figure walking on it. She saw a glimmer of hope. She waved her hands wildly, yelling with all her remaining strength ,“ Help! Help!” It seemed like a century to wait for the boat to approach her. A middle-aged fisherman reached out his hand, carried her to the boat and asked her what had happened. With trembling voice, she replied, “ My father...sister....there. Help!” On hearing this, the fisherman’s face became serious. He headed the boat towards the direction where she pointed at with full speed, not knowing what would happen if he slowed down even a little bit. Meanwhile, he called for help. After a while, they caught sight of Kiana’s father and sister’s pale face. Having floating on the sea for a long time, they were on board eventually. 4.救溺水的人 As Paul got closer, he could tell that the mother seemed to be in the most trouble. Her head was then below the surface of the water. She was drowning. He recalled a movie in which a lifeguard grabbed a drowning victim, pulling the person ashore while swimming on his back. Paul tried this, but the woman's clothing made her so heavy; he kept being dragged under, too. He needed a new plan. Then he dived under the drowning woman, pushing her upward and finally toward the shore. He couldn’t recall if it had taken three, four or five pushes, but at some point, an onlooker was able to get close enough to grab the woman’s hand, pulling her to the shore.Paul knew he needed to rescue the two daughters further down the river. He dived into the current again, swam quickly downstream, held one girl and pushed her successfully toward the shore in the same way he had done her mother. Looking back to the river, he could see someone was helping the girl’s sister---which was a good thing because the teenager in front of him was unconscious. As Paul gently lay her down, a bystander with medical training came forward and attended to her. Thankfully, it was not long before she was conscious again. 6.火中救人 Immediately, Olav turned the van 面包车 round jumped out and opened the sliding doors to the empty cargo space. Everyone, get in here!" he shouted at the top of his lungs, pointing to the van and waving at the panicked crowd. At this moment, the frightened tourists poured in. The deadly fumes swept through the tunnel, contaminating all the air in its path. If they didn’t leave soon the smoke would choke and blind them all. “We are leaving!" shouted Olav, leaping to the driver's seat after making sure no one was left behind. He had hardly stepped on the accelerator when the thick smoke consumed the area. The color went from everyone's face. After a20 minutes' desperate drive, finally there they arrived-the exit of the tunnel! What a narrow escape! All of them breathed a sigh of relief. Without Olav, they would not have got away from it and even would have choked to death in the tunnel. 7.与坏人搏斗 Panic set in. And a sense of fright mingled with regret came dominating me. Suddenly I knew I must do something. I grabbed my fist, and hit the man’s head with all might. All at once, the motorcycle was out of control and both of us fell to ground. Fortunately I didn‘t get injured. Without thinking twice, I ran away as my leg could carry me. Lucky me! A police car passed at this moment. The man began to escape hurriedly but the police caught him. At last, the policemen sent me back home safely. （四）、人与社会类(亲情、友情等） 1.道歉的场景 （1）At this moment, Jeremy was walking by and saw them. Noticing Tamika’s teary eyes, Jeremy swallowed what he’d intended to say. A sense of guilt seized him and he stood there, frozen. Miss Snowden smiled and encouraged him, “An apology never comes late.” Jeremy raised his eyebrows and said in a low voice, “I shouldn’t have said that. Sorry.” Tamika looked down at her skates, wiped her tears and murmured, “Actually, that’s OK. It’s my skates”, spinning the loose wheel. “I can fix it,” Jeremy said with confidence. （2）The next day, I handed my pages of apology to Kash. I told him how much we were sorry for leaving him out and we valued his friendship. I handed him a cору of the graphic novel I had read the night before and suggested that we read it together as а team. Kash's face brightened, and he hugged me. We all knew that the prize for winning the Battle of the Books was now secondary. The real victory was the strengthening of our friendship. (3) Upon hearing our quarrels, Dad came up to me, patted on my shoulder and comforted, “The last mile is always the hardest to cover, you should be more patient, darling!” Dad’s encouragement echoing in my ears, I apologized to Paulie and began our next trail, and, as time dragged by, more trails. 2.和好的场景 1) 邻居和好Actually, we became close friends, forgiving and forgetting our unhappy beginning/past, and embracing拥抱our friendship as well. The following days witnessed her exchanging favorite recipes 食谱/菜谱 with me and joining us for more family occasions where she was enjoying respect and happiness. One day, when we chatted freely in the yard, she hugged me tightly and thanked me for the happiness we brought to her. I also felt grateful she could accept us and lucky to be her friend. 2)朋友和好 Samantha gave me a big hug, saying, “You are so brave and clever! I wouldn‘t know what to do without you! ”Right at that moment, I suddenly realized how mean 小气 and immature I had been. Hugging her back, I was secretly grateful to regain the friendship. 3)与父母矛盾后和好She remembered the countless times that she was admitted to the hospital for an allergic reaction while her family stayed and cared for her. Violet never really thought about the things she had, she only thought about the things she didn't have. Violate had a family which accounts for more than everything, even a dog. Family love is stronger than any love. Violet knew she was blessed to have this love. From that momene onwards, Violet stopped asking for a dog. She realized that her family's love was more important than any pet. She started to appreciate the things she had and stopped focusing on the things she didn't have. Violet's relationship with her family improved, and she started to spend more time with them. She realized that family love is irreplaceable and that she was lucky to have it. （六）、人与动物类 1.人与鸟互动 （1）When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty? As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. However, she approached within six inches of my face. For a long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For а moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, She must have come to say good-bye. （2）The next day , we were glad to see the bird was well enough . The bird flapped its wings as if in a test flight. The thought that I might never see her again made me suddenly a little reluctant to let her go. The bird seemed to feel our emotions, so when we cupped her out of the cage, she didn’t leave immediately. In the beginning, she landed on my shoulder. Then, you would find her standing on the back of Jack's hand, twittering gently, as if biding farewell to us. Finally, it circled the room and left unwillingly. What an unforgettable experience. 2.照顾动物的场景 （1）Realizing the ellie might be thirsty, I told Amanda to get her some milk. Amanda was considerate enough to pour the milk into a nursing bottle and gently sent the rubber part to her mouth. The ellie licked it first and then drank the milk in one go. Patting her, Amanda murmured “good job, girl. “The little friend calmed down, rubbing her nose on Amanda’s face. “See? She loves you! “I shouted. Looking at the cute creature we both breathed a sigh of relief. （2）" Why not do a search on the Internet ?" suggested Jack .We immediately took a few photos of the bird and posted them online, enquiring about its species and habits. Soon afterwards, some enthusiastic and knowledgeable netizens selflessly shared all the available information about the poor little thing. The following hours witnessed our meticulous care and attention to the bird. Not only did we put the carefully-prepared food in the cage, but we also switched on the heater to make the room a little warmer. Much to our delight and relief, it becomes increasingly refreshed and energetic. Eventually, the bird made it through the night safe and sound 3.与动物重聚的场景 After days or even weeks of searching, the owner finally receives a call or a message with good news. Their lost pet has been found! The owner rushes to the location, heart pounding with anticipation and hope. And then, at last, they see their beloved companion, tail wagging or purring with joy as they run towards each other. Tears flow freely as they embrace, grateful to be reunited once again. The happiness and relief on both their faces is palpable, and they know that they will never take their time together for granted again. 十二、七种读后续写句型升级 (一)、倒装句 1.部分倒装表情绪 so..that 1) During the exam, so nervous was I that my mind went blank. 2) So excited was he that he couldn't go to sleep. 句子练习： 1. 我震惊得睁大眼睛， 目瞪口呆。 So shocked was I that I was dumbfounded with my eyes wide open. 2. 他非常绝望，借酒消愁。 So desperate was he that he drowned his sadness. 3. 她心事太重，因此没听到妈妈的问题。 2.部分倒装强调动作发生的时间not...until... 1) Not until the fire die out did he wake up. 2)Not until he climbed into bed was he free to think about it. 句子练习： 1. 直到那只免子完全消失在我们的视线中，我们才不追了。 Not until the rabbit got completely out of sight did we stop chasing after it. 2. 直到那时Megan才说出了困扰她一整天的事。 Not until then did Megan poured out what had been disturbing her the whole day. 3.全部倒装 功能：为了强调时间、地点，将时间、地点状语放在句首，使用全倒装结构。 e.g.: 1)Now comes your turn to make a short speech. 2) On the top of the mountain sat a giant man. 高频例句： 1.Recalling these hurtful words, so furious was Paul that he stormed out and slammed the door heavily, striding away without looking back.他回想起这些伤人的字眼，气得暴跳如雷，重重摔门而去，头也不回地大步走开。 2.So scared did he feel that he felt his legs trembling unconsciously.他感到如此害怕，以至于感觉自己的腿在不知不觉中颤抖。 3.On his rigid face there stood an expression of horror and hatred.他僵硬的脸上有一种恐惧和仇恨的表情。 4.Never in my life had I been crushed by such a feeling of guilt.在我生命中，从未对母亲感到如此愧疚。 4.Such+be动词+名词 so+adj. +be动词+名词 so+ adv. +助动词+sb.+动词 e.g.: 1) Such is our home in the future. 2) Such was Albert Einstein, a simple man and the 20th century’s greatest scientist. 3)So cold was the weather that we had to stay at home. 4)So much did they eat that they could not move for the next hour? 5)So loudly did he speak that even people in the next room could hear him. 句子练习： 1. 这就是“有志者事竞成”这个真理。 Such is the truth that where there is a will, there is a way. 2. 这就是成功的秘诀，多一点点努力，多一点点决心，你就能创造出多一点点的奇迹。 Such is the key to success---a little bit more efforts and a little bit more determination will create a little bit more miracle. (二)、定语从句 结构1：格式：_______主句________, which 第二句话; 例句：玛丽打开门看到了小女孩，她有着令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的头发。 Mary opened the door and saw the little girl，who had familiar eyes and black hair. 结构2：格式：_______主句________, which enable/ forced/ allowed sb to do; _______主句________, which made/forced/allowed sb 感情词 例句：就在这时，我们听到了Uncle Paul远处传来的微弱声音，这重新点燃了我们回家的希望。 Just at the moment, we heard the faint voice in the distance from Uncle Paul, which allowed us to light the hope returning home. 结构3：格式：________ 主句 ________, which ________ 例句：兔子的意外出现使马受惊了，恐慌中，它发出了一声嘶鸣。（2018浙江） This unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which howled out loud in panic. (三)、非谓语动词 1.主语did sth., doing/done...或者 Doing/done..., 主语 did sth.. 1. He roared repeatedly, shattering what was left of silence.（2020.7 浙江高考） 2. I ran back to the camp, stumbling a hundred time in my haste.（2020.7 浙江高考） 句子练习： 1. 她聚精会神地听着,咬着嘴唇,眼睛盯着地板。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 2. “当然有圣诞老人啊”,妈妈说道,一边用手指拨弄着我的头发。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 3. 她感到累极了,坐在溪边,让疼痛的双脚放松一下。 _______________________________________________________________________________ KEY: 1. She listened with close attention, biting her lips and staring at the floor. 2. "Of course, there is a Santa Clause." mom said, stroking her fingers through my hair. 3. She felt exhausted and sat by the stream, resting her aching feet. 2.Having done sth., sb. did sth. 1.Having walked for quite a long time, she found herself lost. 4.Having experienced so many failures one after another, she finally picked herself up. 5.Having wondered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. 句子练习： 1.说出真相后，他心里轻松了很多，心情放松地回家了。 _______________________________________________________________________________2.做好充分准备后，她站在窗边，期待着女儿的到来。 _______________________________________________________________________________ KEY: 1.Having told the truth, he felt easier in his mind and returned home with a lighter heart. 2.Having made full preparations, she stood by the window, expecting the arrival of her daughter. 3.主语1 doing/done, 主语2 did sth.或者主语2 did sth., 主语1 doing/done. 1.She closed her eyes tightly, her hands covering her face. 3.Paula’s face flushed, her voice quivering with excitement. 5.As they were still out of breath, their heart beat wildly, they were consequently convinced what happened just now was true. 句子练习： 1他愤怒得脸色阴沉，冲出阳台怒视我们，质问“我的花怎么了？” _______________________________________________________________________________ 2汤姆眼里充满了泪水，声音里充满了绝望，他缓缓点头，加快了步伐。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 3她走到我身边，眼睛里的光线暗了下来，喃喃地说：“我失败了。” _______________________________________________________________________________ KEY: 1.His face clouded with anger, he stormed out of the balcony and glared at us, questioning “What happened to my flowers?” 2.Eyes full of tears, his voice full of despair, Tom nodded slowly and quickened his pace. 3.She walked to me, the light in her eyes darkened, and murmured, “I failed.” (四)、With的复合结构 With nobody noticing me, I put the money on the table. 没人注意我，我把钱放在桌子上。 With the pumpkin resting on the table, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. 南瓜放在桌子上，我俯身过去，把头挤进开口处。 With every angle tried in vain for my nose prevention, I was overwhelmed by a feeling of extreme regret and annoyance. 因为我鼻子的阻挡，每个角度都尝试失败了，我满是悔恨和懊恼。 (五)、名词性从句 结构1：It is +adj for sb that… 结构2：what I could do/say/… is to what (counts/matters/impress me) most is that … =it is important that… 例句1：我们能做的就是慢慢沿着原路回去。What we could do was to go back along the previous track. 例句2：我所看到的与我过去所经历的任何事情完全不同。What I saw was completely unlike anything I had experienced in the past. 六、独立结构 句式1：主1+谓...,主2+doing/done.... 句式2：主2+doing/done, 主1+ 谓语动词 Laughter lingering in the room, their precious friendship blossomed in the summer like a flower that never fades. 伴随着笑声回荡在房间里，他们珍贵的友谊之花盛开在这个夏季，永不凋败。 Her legs trembling and his heart beating nearly out of her chest, Jenny walked slowly to the front. 杰妮慢慢走向前台，腿发抖，心都要跳出来了。 The night falling, they put up a tent and wolfed down a simplified dinner. 夜幕降临，他们支起帐篷，快速地吃了个便饭。 7、 无灵主语 A big smile of excitement lit up his face as he heard the good news.听到这个好消息，他脸上露出兴奋的笑容。 The harsh words sent him into the depths of guilt.刻薄的话把他推向内疚的深渊。 Fear slowly flooded over/welled up in her face.恐惧慢慢涌上她的心头。 场景1：突出人物的心理描写 1.What if his ghost should rise up, angry at the way I was treated? The thought of it brought me no comfort, but only a growing terror. 写作句式：“事物或行为名词+有灵动词+sb. (因果关系)”，译为“某事使某人怎么了”。 如果他的鬼魂出来对我的遭遇感到愤怒，会怎么样呢？一想到这，我不但没有得到安慰，反而更加恐惧。 2.Horror and grief gave way to a desire to see her, but the nurse would not let me. 写作句式：“情绪名词+有灵动词+sb.”，译为“某人觉得怎么了”。 汉译：恐惧和悲痛也无法抑制想见她的强烈渴望，但护士就是不让我去。 场景2：烘托主题的场景描写 1. Night fell, the wind grew strong, and the tree creaked and groaned. A storm was gathering, but we stayed there until thunder and lightning crashed. It was midnight when we reached the house.夜幕降临，风刮得更大了，树嘎吱作响，不止地呻吟着。暴风雨即将来临，但我们一直待在那里，直到电闪雷鸣。我们到家时已是半夜了。 3. Flames were creeping along the bed curtains as I ran in. Wake up! I cried, shaking him, but the smoke had dulled his senses so I took the water jug and flung the water over him. As it quenched the flames, it woke him.当我跑进去的时候，火焰沿着床罩蔓延。醒醒啊！我边叫边摇晃他，但烟熏得他神志不清，于是我拿起水罐，把水泼在他身上。当火焰被扑灭时，他也被唤醒了。 场景3：推动故事情节发展 1. The typhoid finally wore itself out but news of it, and of the deaths at the school, had traveled.伤寒终于过去了，但是关于它和学校里死亡人员的消息已经传开了。 2. Still hoping to be unnoticed, I kept my head down, but the slate slipped treacherously from my hand and fell with a terrible smash on the floor。我仍希望不被注意，低着头，可是石板却背叛地从我手中滑落，重重地摔在地板上。 8、 强调句 1.Gratified and thrilled, I quickly told him what it was that we felt like doing.又高兴又激动，我很快告诉他我们到底想要做什么。 2.It was exactly at that moment that I finally realized mother's love weighed more than anything in this world.或realized that nothing is more precious than mother's love.正是在那时，我才意识到，母爱是世界上最珍贵的东西。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$