一段式读后续写 导学案-2024-2025学年高一上学期英语作文复习专项

适合高一学生的一段式读后续写 原文 Jenny and Molly, aged 15, were twins. With their birthday approaching, they were filled with excitement at the thought of the gifts their friends would give to them. The special day finally coming, they got a huge bunch of flowers. Surprisingly, to be exact sixty. Facing so many flowers, they didn’t know how to deal with them. The next day, Jenny was reading a book when she found the encouraging words: small actions can make a difference to others. Suddenly, she had a great idea, and she couldn’t wait to tell her idea to Molly. Molly agreed immediately. As planned, they would give out these flowers to people they met on the street. In this way, they could bring smiles to others. So, they tied a smile card to every single flower. With everything ready, they went to the street. The first flower went to a dustman (垃圾工). They went up to him and handed him one. The dustman’s smile was so big, but theirs were even bigger! Everything went smoothly. It was lunch time, and they went to the nearby restaurant, where they gave a flower to the owner. When they were waiting for their meals, the owner came up to them with one bag of snacks. She said she really liked the flower and the card. As they ate the meal, they noticed that there was still a broad smile on the owner’s face. After the meal, they had only one flower in their hands. Wondering who needed it most, they saw an old woman in a wheelchair nearby._________ ________________________________________________________________________________ Step 1. 引导问题： 1. What is the theme of the passage? 2. How to highlight such a topic? Step 2. 语言组织： Link Sentence "她似乎正在遭受严重的健康问题，因为她的脸上布满了悲伤/头微微低垂，满脸沮丧/目光空洞，眼中充满了悲伤。" she was the serious health condition for her face sadness./her head ./she Main Action: Send flower ①送：毫不犹豫，双胞胎决定把最后一朵花送给老妇人。他们互相交换了一下眼神，走向老妇人，把最后一朵花递给她说：‘女士，这是一朵花送给您。’ ，the twins to presented the old woman with the last flower. They , and , “ A flower for you, lady.” ②老妇人神情转变：一看到那朵花，老妇人愣了一下，随即她脸上的悲伤开始消散。最终，一个宽广而明亮的笑容在她的脸颊上绽放开来。 the flower, the old lady , and immediately . Finally . ③感谢：她一次又一次地感谢珍妮和莫莉，眼中充满了激动的泪水。 She thanked Jenny and Molly , . 或者：然后，她向珍妮和莫莉表达了由衷的感激：“你们真让我今天开心。 She then Jenny and Molly, “You really made my day.” ④姐妹感受/theme： 就在此时，双胞胎对‘小行动确实能对他人产生影响’这句话有了更深的理解。 the twins the sentence---- small actions do make a difference to others. 或者：直到那时，双胞胎才真正理解这句话，并坚定地相信小行动的力量。 the sentence and the power of small action. 答案 Link Sentence "她似乎正在遭受严重的健康问题，因为她的脸上布满了悲伤/头微微低垂，满脸沮丧/目光空洞，眼中充满了悲伤。" It seemed that she was suffering from the serious health condition for her face was clouded with/filled with sadness./her head drooped in frustration./she stared blankly ahead with eyes full of sadness. Main Action: Send flower ①送：毫不犹豫，双胞胎决定把最后一朵花送给老妇人。他们互相交换了一下眼神，走向老妇人，把最后一朵花递给她说：‘女士，这是一朵花送给您。’ Without hesitation/a second thought，the twins made up their mind to presented the old woman with the last flower. They exchanged a glance, stepped to the old woman and handed the flower to her, “ A flower for you, lady.” ②老妇人神情转变：一看到那朵花，老妇人愣了一下，随即她脸上的悲伤开始消散。最终，一个宽广而明亮的笑容在她的脸颊上绽放开来。 At sight of the flower, the old lady froze in surprise for a second, and immediately the sadness on her face began to wear off. Finally a broad and bright smile spread across her cheeks. ③感谢：她一次又一次地感谢珍妮和莫莉，眼中充满了激动的泪水。 She thanked Jenny and Molly over and over again, with eyes full of excited tears. 或者：然后，她向珍妮和莫莉表达了由衷的感激：“你们真让我今天开心。 She then expressed her sincere/heartfelt gratitude to Jenny and Molly, “You really made my day.” ④姐妹感受/theme： 就在此时，双胞胎对‘小行动确实能对他人产生影响’这句话有了更深的理解。 It was at this moment that the twins gain a deeper understanding of the sentence---- small actions do make a difference to others. 或者：直到那时，双胞胎才真正理解这句话，并坚定地相信小行动的力量。 Not until then did the twins truly understand the sentence and firmly believe the power of small action. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$