Unit 5 Educational exchanges 单元主题写作（教育交流）满分范文15篇-2024-2025学年八年级英语上册重难点讲练全攻略（牛津深圳版）

2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品新课系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品新课系列资料，已编校！ Unit 5 Educational exchanges 单元主题写作（教育交流）满分范文15篇 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 1．假如你是李华，你收到了来自英国伦敦笔友 Tommy的求助邮件，请你根据邮件内容，给Tommy回一封邮件。 Dear Li Hua, Hello from London. How’s it going these days? Guess where I am going next month! I have got a chance to study as an exchange student in your school for 3 weeks. I am new in Nanjing, so I need your help. First, could you tell me something about your school life? Then, what are your classmates like? Can I make friends with them easily? The last question is what places of interest I can visit in Wuxi at the weekend. I am looking forward to your reply. Please write back to me soon. Thank you. Yours Tommy 注意： 1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，可适当发挥，书写规范； 3.词数不少于80，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tommy, Glad to hear from you! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to see you soon! Yours, Li Hua 2．假如你是李华，结交了一个来自美国的交换生朋友Jack，请你用英文向同学们介绍他，内容要点如下： 1. 活泼外向，喜欢阅读和运动； 2. 上周受邀参加了新年派对； 3. 想了解中国文化，打算努力学习汉语； 4. 对太空感兴趣，梦想成为一名宇航员； 5. 补充一到两点个人想法。 注意： 1. 文中不能透露个人姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数60-80； 3. 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译； 4. 开头已给出，不计入总数。 参考词汇：culture  n. 文化   astronaut  n. 宇航员   New Year’s party 新年派对 My Friend Jack I made a new friend Jack recently. He is an exchange student from America. I want to introduce him to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．Bill是一名来自英国的交换生，请你用英语向同学们介绍一下他的基本情况。 要点如下： 1. 已经来中国四年了，兴趣爱好广泛，喜欢读书、听音乐和旅游； 2. 对中国古代故事很感兴趣，美猴王是他最喜爱的人物； 3. 经常听乡村音乐，这会使他想起远在英国的朋友们； 4. 曾经去过长城，梦想环游世界； 5. 想更多的了解中国，希望得到一些建议。 要求： 1. 语句通顺、语法正确，包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 90词左右。 Bill is an exchange student from England. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．Bob是一名13岁的美国男孩，他作为交换生，刚结束在中国深圳学习的日子。请根据以下信息，帮他写一篇短文，向他的美国的家人介绍相关情况。 我的校园活动 最喜欢历史课，学习到中国的文化和历史；校园活动丰富，参加学校的社团活动。 我的周末活动 经常和朋友去当地的海滩和公园游玩；也会去各大商场逛街。上周末去梧桐山(Wutong Mountain)游玩，在那里玩得很开心。 我的好朋友李华 又高又瘦，擅长打篮球和下棋；最喜欢海豚，经常去看海豚表演。 我的感受 享受生活……(自行补充一点) 要求： (1)文章必须包含表格内的所有信息，要求句通顺，行文连贯。 (2)不可逐词翻译，可适当发挥。 (3)80词左右，书写工整。 A report on my exchange visit to Shenzhen, China Hi, I’m Bob, an exchange student in Shenzhen, China. This exchange visit has gone well. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你是李华，结交了一个来自美国的交换生朋友 Jack，请你用英文向同学们介绍他。内容要点如下： a.活泼外向，喜欢阅读和运动； b.上周受邀参加了新年派对； c.想了解中国文化，打算努力学习汉语； d.对太空感兴趣，梦想成为一名宇航员； e.补充一到两点个人想法。 注意：1、文中不能透露个人姓名和学校名称； 2、词数60—80； 3、内容连贯，不要逐条翻译； 4、开头已给出，不计入总数。 My Friend Jack I made a new friend Jack recently. He is an exchange student from America. I want to introduce him to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是李华，刚刚收到美国笔友的一封来信，请根据来信内容写一封回信。 Dear Li Hua, How’s it going? Things in 2023 were so unforgettable for me. I went to Beijing as an exchange student and visited many places of interest. It was so much fun. Did you go anywhere interesting in 2023? And what did you do there? 2024 is coming. I have made some resolutions, such as learning Chinese and doing more sports. Do you have any plans for the new year? Can you tell me about them? Hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes! Yours, Mike 注意：(1)需回复来信询问的要点，可参考提示词，适当发挥； (2)文中不能出现真实姓名和学校； (3)词数：80~100词（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，可以选择使用）。 提示单词： places of interest, learn about, improve Dear Mike, I am so happy to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7．假如你是李华，一年一度的端午节即将来临，你校打算针对交换生推出一期中国传统美食栏目，请你写一篇短文投稿，介绍制作粽子的方法并弘扬中国美食文化。 提示： （1）材料：大米，粽叶 (reed leaves) ，红枣 (red dates) ，蜂蜜，糖； （2）步骤：洗净所有食材；将大米和红枣放入粽叶中，加一些糖；把粽叶折叠 (fold) 好；然后放入锅里，烹调约一小时；根据需要加一些蜂蜜。 提示词：first, ingredient, put, pot, add注意事项： （1）必须包含提示里所有内容，可适当发挥； （2）不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I would like to introduce a kind of traditional Chinese food to you. As exchange students, you may not know how to make zongzi. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你是Alice，学校计划选拔几位学生到英国交流学习，你很希望能够成为其中一员。请根据下面的提示，给校长Mr. Brown写一份80词左右的申请书，希望得到学校的批准。 注意： 1. 文章必须包含表格所有的内容，并适当发挥； 2. 词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）。 【点拨】 1. 人称：第一人称          2. 时态：一般现在时 谋篇布局 1. out-going外向的          2. be eager to 热衷于 3. broaden one’s horizon 开拓眼界 好词 1. I am eager to be an exchange student in England because I want to know more about the English instead of depending on my parents. 我热衷于成为一位去英国的交流生, 因为我想知道更多关于英语的一切, 而不是只靠我父母告知的方式去了解。 2. I hope I’m good enough to be one of the educational exchange students. 我希望我足够优秀能成为这些交换生的其中一员。 好句 牛刀小试 Dear Mr. Brown, My name is Alice. I’m writing to get a chance to be an educational exchange student. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope I’m good enough to be one of the educational exchange students. Thank you for your time and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Alice 9．中国素有“礼仪之邦”之称，你的外国朋友Eric将作为交流学生来中国学习，想要了解一些中国礼仪。请你根据下面导图提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍中国的一些日常礼仪。 注意： 1. 要点齐全，省略号部分适当补充； 2. 词数不少于90词，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不提及真实的校名、人名。 Dear Eric, I’m glad to hear you are coming to China as an exchange student. I’d like to tell you something about manners in China. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope these tips will be helpful to you. I’m looking forward to meeting you in China. Best wishes, Zhao Hui 10．假如你是阳光中学的李华，来自英国的交换生Jim即将来你校交流。近期，他给你写了一封电子邮件，询问你校兴趣小组的相关事宜，请你根据下面的邮件内容，给Jim回一封邮件。 Dear Li Hua, I’m glad to tell you that I am going to your school as an exchange student. I hear there are many interesting clubs in your school, but I don’t know which one to join. Could you please recommend one to me? And why do you like it? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Jim 注意： 1.内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.词数90左右（已给出的文章开头和结尾不计入总词数） Dear Jim, I am so glad to hear that you are coming to our school.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your arrival! Yours, Li Hua 11．假设你是李华，即将参加一项交换生活动并住在John家里，为表示友好和宣传中国文化，你提前寄送了三份具有中国传统特色的手工品作为礼物。请根据提示内容写一封E-mail，给John及其家人介绍一下这些礼物及其特色。 注意： 1. 字数：80词以上（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 2. 要对所写内容进行适当的拓展。 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear John and your family, I am very excited to be staying with you as an exchange student. To show you my thanks and share some Chinese culture with you, I have sent you three traditional Chinese handicrafts as gifts. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will like these beautiful pieces of art. I am looking forward to meeting you soon. Best wishes, Li Hua 12．Dave是来自美国的交换生，他是你的好朋友。请你以My Friend Dave为题，用英语向同学们介绍他的基本情况。 要点如下： 1. 他已来中国两年，有很多爱好，喜欢读书、踢足球和听音乐等； 2. 他对中国古代故事很感兴趣，美猴王是他最喜爱的人物； 3. 空闲时间他喜欢旅游，曾经去过长城和故宫博物院，期待未来有一天能环游世界； 4. 他想更多地了解中国，请你给出一两点建议。 写作要求： 1. 根据要点可适当发挥，词数不少于80； 2. 书写规范。 提示词：exchange student交换生；ancient古代的；the Palace Museum 故宫博物院 My Friend Dave ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．假如你是李华，下学期将有一名英国交换生Jim来你们学校。下面是他发给你的一封e-mail，请根据邮件内容写一封回信。 Dear Li Hua, How are you doing? You might not believe it, but I’m going to your school in March as one of the five exchange students. And I’m so excited! However, as you know, 1 can speak only a little Chinese. What should I do? Biology is my favourite subject. Can you introduce a club to me? What will the weather be like in Suzhou? I’m getting prepared and can’t wait to see you! Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours, Jim 注意： 1．回信须包含邮件中提问的所有要点，可适当发挥； 2．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 3．词数90词左右（开头，结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Jim, I’m glad to hear from you. You said you were worried because you could speak only a little Chinese.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Welcome to our school. I can’t wait to see you, too! Yours, Li Hua 14．John是你国外的笔友，他要来你们学校当交换生啦，你的同学们都急于想了解John的情况，请你根据以下表格所给的信息向你的同学们介绍一下他吧！ 个人特质 开朗，友好，喜欢交朋友; 生活习惯 经常做家务，不熬夜，每天吃健康的早餐; 业余活动 喜欢旅行，在国庆节那天去了北京，参观了……， 他热爱中国 提示词：喜欢旅行：like travelling 熬夜：stay up late  在国庆节那天：on National Day 写作要求： 1.条理清晰，书写工整。 2.所给信息必须用到，可根据内容适当发挥。 3.词数：80词左右 4.文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 My pen pal John is my pen pal. He is coming to our school to be an exchange student.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．书面表达 假如你校要选三名交换生去澳大利亚学习，你想推荐八年级二班的李强。请你根据下列内容提示及要求，写一份email匿名推荐。 要求：1.内容必须包括表格中要点，可适当发挥； 2. 总词数在80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Information about Li Qiang Characters (性格) smart, friendly, helpful, … Abilities（能力） have many hobbies, good at sports, speak English well, … Experience(经历) win prizes, travel a lot, help poor children, … Dear Sir / Madam, I would like to commend Li Qiang to be one of the exchange students to Australia. ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, x x x 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 7 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品新课系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品新课系列资料，已编校！ Unit 5 Educational exchanges 单元主题写作（教育交流）满分范文15篇 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ 1．假如你是李华，你收到了来自英国伦敦笔友 Tommy的求助邮件，请你根据邮件内容，给Tommy回一封邮件。 Dear Li Hua, Hello from London. How’s it going these days? Guess where I am going next month! I have got a chance to study as an exchange student in your school for 3 weeks. I am new in Nanjing, so I need your help. First, could you tell me something about your school life? Then, what are your classmates like? Can I make friends with them easily? The last question is what places of interest I can visit in Wuxi at the weekend. I am looking forward to your reply. Please write back to me soon. Thank you. Yours Tommy 注意： 1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，可适当发挥，书写规范； 3.词数不少于80，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tommy, Glad to hear from you! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to see you soon! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tommy, Glad to hear from you! I’m excited to hear that you’ll be coming to Nanjing next month. School life here is quite interesting. We have a variety of classes, and after school, there are many clubs you can join. I think you’ll enjoy it. My classmates are friendly and helpful. They are always ready to make new friends, so I’m sure you’ll get along with them well. Don’t worry about making friends; just be yourself, and you'll fit in quickly. As for places to visit in Wuxi, there are several beautiful spots. You can visit the Taihu Lake for its stunning views, or the Xishan Scenic Area if you’re interested in history. There’s also the Wuxi Film and TV City, which is a popular destination for tourists. I hope this helps, and I’m looking forward to meeting you in person. If you have any more questions, feel free to ask. Hope to see you soon! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件回复； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“将来时”，因为需要描述当前的学校生活和同学情况，同时提及将来的活动建议； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于学校生活、同学情况以及无锡旅游景点的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“回复Tommy的邮件并提供帮助”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“学校生活、同学情况、旅游景点”几个方面重点介绍Tommy关心的问题； 第三步，书写结语。表达“期待Tommy的到来并希望他能享受在无锡的时光”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①a variety of 各种各样的 ②get along with与……相处 ③be ready to 准备好做某事 ④stunning views 令人惊叹的景色 [高分句型] ①We have a variety of classes, and after school, there are many clubs you can join.（定语从句修饰先行词clubs） ②There’s also the Wuxi Film and TV City, which is a popular destination for tourists.（非限制性定语从句修饰先行词the Wuxi Film and TV City） 2．假如你是李华，结交了一个来自美国的交换生朋友Jack，请你用英文向同学们介绍他，内容要点如下： 1. 活泼外向，喜欢阅读和运动； 2. 上周受邀参加了新年派对； 3. 想了解中国文化，打算努力学习汉语； 4. 对太空感兴趣，梦想成为一名宇航员； 5. 补充一到两点个人想法。 注意： 1. 文中不能透露个人姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数60-80； 3. 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译； 4. 开头已给出，不计入总数。 参考词汇：culture  n. 文化   astronaut  n. 宇航员   New Year’s party 新年派对 My Friend Jack I made a new friend Jack recently. He is an exchange student from America. I want to introduce him to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Friend Jack I made a new friend Jack recently. He is an exchange student from America. I want to introduce him to you. He is friendly and outgoing. Last week, he got an invitation and took part in a New Year’s party. He had such a great time that he planned to study Chinese hard to know more about Chinese culture. I’m glad to help him. As for hobbies, he likes reading and doing sports. He is also interested in space. When he grows up, he wants to be an astronaut. I hope his dream can come true. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。要求以李华的名义，写一篇短文介绍交换生朋友Jack。 2. 写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称展开叙述；时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。文章可分为三段式：第一段开门见山，引出介绍新朋友杰克。第二段根据要求展开，分述杰克的情况。第三段阐述个人观点，表达感受，感情升华。在写作时要做到无标点和语法错误，正确运用几种时态。 3．Bill是一名来自英国的交换生，请你用英语向同学们介绍一下他的基本情况。 要点如下： 1. 已经来中国四年了，兴趣爱好广泛，喜欢读书、听音乐和旅游； 2. 对中国古代故事很感兴趣，美猴王是他最喜爱的人物； 3. 经常听乡村音乐，这会使他想起远在英国的朋友们； 4. 曾经去过长城，梦想环游世界； 5. 想更多的了解中国，希望得到一些建议。 要求： 1. 语句通顺、语法正确，包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 90词左右。 Bill is an exchange student from England. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Bill is an exchange student from England. He has been in China for four years. He has many hobbies, like reading, listening to music and traveling. He is also interested in ancient Chinese stories. He likes Journey to the West and the Monkey King is his favorite character. Country music often reminds him of his friends in England. He listens to it quite a lot. He has been to the Great Wall and his dream is to travel around the world. He wants to learn more about China and hopes that we can give some advice to him.       【详解】1.题干解读：本文是材料作文写作。题目要求根据提示向同学们介绍来自英国的交换生Bill。 2.写作指导：时态用一般现在时和现在完成时，人称为第三人称。内容要包含题目所给要点，时态运用正确，单词无拼写错误，语句通顺。 4．Bob是一名13岁的美国男孩，他作为交换生，刚结束在中国深圳学习的日子。请根据以下信息，帮他写一篇短文，向他的美国的家人介绍相关情况。 我的校园活动 最喜欢历史课，学习到中国的文化和历史；校园活动丰富，参加学校的社团活动。 我的周末活动 经常和朋友去当地的海滩和公园游玩；也会去各大商场逛街。上周末去梧桐山(Wutong Mountain)游玩，在那里玩得很开心。 我的好朋友李华 又高又瘦，擅长打篮球和下棋；最喜欢海豚，经常去看海豚表演。 我的感受 享受生活……(自行补充一点) 要求： (1)文章必须包含表格内的所有信息，要求句通顺，行文连贯。 (2)不可逐词翻译，可适当发挥。 (3)80词左右，书写工整。 A report on my exchange visit to Shenzhen, China Hi, I’m Bob, an exchange student in Shenzhen, China. This exchange visit has gone well. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A report on my exchange visit to Shenzhen, China Hi, I’m Bob, an exchange student in Shenzhen, China. This exchange visit has gone well. Let me tell you something about my life in China. When I was studying in my school, my favorite subject is history from which I learnt a lot about Chinese culture and history. Since there are abundant activities, I had many chances to participate in different types of school clubs such as Go club and Drama Club that widen my eyes as well. On weekends, I often go to the local beach-Dameisha or the neighbouring park with my friends. We also go shopping for entertainment sometimes. Last weekend, we experienced a new way of killing time by visiting the beautiful and quiet Wutong Mountain and enjoyed ourselves a lot. Now, I have many friends in China. Li Hua, tall and thin, is one of them. He does well in both playing basketball and chess. He likes dolphins best so he often goes to watch the dolphin shows. I really appreciate and enjoy the life of learning and living in China. I also want to visit China again with my family when they are available. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中对我的感受的介绍，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，概括介绍自己，引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，介绍我的校园生活； 第三步，介绍我的周末活动； 第四步，介绍我的好朋友李华； 第五步，介绍我的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①let sb. do sth.让某人做某事 ②such as比如 ③go shopping去购物 ④enjoy oneself玩得开心 ⑤do well in在……方面做得好 [高分句型] ①Let me tell you something about my life in China. (祈使句) ②I also want to visit China again with my family when they are available. (when引导的时间状语从句) 5．假如你是李华，结交了一个来自美国的交换生朋友 Jack，请你用英文向同学们介绍他。内容要点如下： a.活泼外向，喜欢阅读和运动； b.上周受邀参加了新年派对； c.想了解中国文化，打算努力学习汉语； d.对太空感兴趣，梦想成为一名宇航员； e.补充一到两点个人想法。 注意：1、文中不能透露个人姓名和学校名称； 2、词数60—80； 3、内容连贯，不要逐条翻译； 4、开头已给出，不计入总数。 My Friend Jack I made a new friend Jack recently. He is an exchange student from America. I want to introduce him to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Friend Jack I made a new friend Jack recently. He is an exchange student from America. I want to introduce him to you. He is friendly and outgoing. Last week, he got an invitation and took part in a New Year’s party. He had such a great time that he planned to study Chinese hard to know more about Chinese culture. I’m glad to help him. As for hobbies, he likes reading and doing sports. He is also interested in space. When he grows up, he wants to be an astronaut. I hope his dream can come true. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的朋友杰克以及上周的活动； 第二步，合适他的爱好和想要做的事情； 第三步，最后表达自己希望杰克可以实现梦想。 [亮点词汇] ① take part in参加 ② like doing sth喜欢做某事 ③ be interested in对……感兴趣 ④ come true实现 [高分句型] ①He had such a great time that he planned to study Chinese hard to know more about Chinese culture.（结果状语从句） ②When he grows up, he wants to be an astronaut. （时间状语从句） 6．假如你是李华，刚刚收到美国笔友的一封来信，请根据来信内容写一封回信。 Dear Li Hua, How’s it going? Things in 2023 were so unforgettable for me. I went to Beijing as an exchange student and visited many places of interest. It was so much fun. Did you go anywhere interesting in 2023? And what did you do there? 2024 is coming. I have made some resolutions, such as learning Chinese and doing more sports. Do you have any plans for the new year? Can you tell me about them? Hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes! Yours, Mike 注意：(1)需回复来信询问的要点，可参考提示词，适当发挥； (2)文中不能出现真实姓名和学校； (3)词数：80~100词（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，可以选择使用）。 提示单词： places of interest, learn about, improve Dear Mike, I am so happy to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, I am so happy to hear from you. I also miss the days we spent together very much. 2023 is an unforgettable year for me, too. I went to Hangzhou to watch the 19th Asian Games with my parents. We watched many exciting matches. My parents and I visited West Lake and tasted much delicious food. We also took many wonderful photos. In the new year, I want to visit more places of interest. I want to learn more about our country’s splendid culture. My math is a bit weak. I need to put more effort into math to improve my grades. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：本文是一封回信，考生注意提示中已给出问题和建议，根据这些提示适当添加细节，重点突出。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作目的，问候对方 第二步，介绍自己在过去的一年的经历； 第三步，具体介绍自己在新的一年的愿望和决心。 [亮点词汇] ①places of interest名胜古迹 ②learn about了解 ③put more effort into投入更多的精力 [高分句型] ①I also miss the days we spent together very much.（定语从句） ②I need to put more effort into math to improve my grades.（不定式表目的） 7．假如你是李华，一年一度的端午节即将来临，你校打算针对交换生推出一期中国传统美食栏目，请你写一篇短文投稿，介绍制作粽子的方法并弘扬中国美食文化。 提示： （1）材料：大米，粽叶 (reed leaves) ，红枣 (red dates) ，蜂蜜，糖； （2）步骤：洗净所有食材；将大米和红枣放入粽叶中，加一些糖；把粽叶折叠 (fold) 好；然后放入锅里，烹调约一小时；根据需要加一些蜂蜜。 提示词：first, ingredient, put, pot, add注意事项： （1）必须包含提示里所有内容，可适当发挥； （2）不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I would like to introduce a kind of traditional Chinese food to you. As exchange students, you may not know how to make zongzi. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I would like to introduce a kind of traditional Chinese food to you. As exchange students, you may not know how to make zongzi. To make this special food, we need to have rice, reed leaves, red dates, honey and sugar. First, wash all the ingredients carefully. Next, put the rice and red dates into the reed leaves and add some sugar lightly. Then fold the leaves well. After that, put them into the pot slowly and cook for about an hour. Finally, add some honey if you like. Chinese food is popular all over the world. You are welcome to taste more delicious Chinese food. I believe you will enjoy it.   【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“如何制作粽子”的话题； 第二步，介绍制造粽子的材料和步骤； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①ingredient材料 ②popular受欢迎的 ③all over the world全世界 [高分句型] ①To make this special food, we need to have rice, reed leaves, red dates, honey and sugar. (to do不定式作目的状语) ②I believe you will enjoy it. (宾语从句) 8．假如你是Alice，学校计划选拔几位学生到英国交流学习，你很希望能够成为其中一员。请根据下面的提示，给校长Mr. Brown写一份80词左右的申请书，希望得到学校的批准。 注意： 1. 文章必须包含表格所有的内容，并适当发挥； 2. 词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）。 【点拨】 1. 人称：第一人称          2. 时态：一般现在时 谋篇布局 1. out-going外向的          2. be eager to 热衷于 3. broaden one’s horizon 开拓眼界 好词 1. I am eager to be an exchange student in England because I want to know more about the English instead of depending on my parents. 我热衷于成为一位去英国的交流生, 因为我想知道更多关于英语的一切, 而不是只靠我父母告知的方式去了解。 2. I hope I’m good enough to be one of the educational exchange students. 我希望我足够优秀能成为这些交换生的其中一员。 好句 牛刀小试 Dear Mr. Brown, My name is Alice. I’m writing to get a chance to be an educational exchange student. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope I’m good enough to be one of the educational exchange students. Thank you for your time and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Alice 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. Brown, My name is Alice. I’m writing to get a chance to be an educational exchange student. I am out-going and hard-working. In my free time, I often take part in voluntary activities, because I think helping others is happy. I am eager to be an exchange student in England because I want to know more about the English instead of depending on my parents. If I have the chance to study in England, I will make new friends and communicate with them in English. Then, I will travel around the country so that I can broaden my horizon. Also, I will introduce Chinese history and culture to my new friends in England. I hope more and more people can know more about China. I hope I’m good enough to be one of the educational exchange students. Thank you for your time and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Alice 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封申请书，属于书信作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：信件开头和结尾以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接信件开头，介绍自己的基本情况和性格特点； 第二步，表达自己对成为交换生的渴望，并说明原因； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①instead of而不是 ②depend on依赖 ③travel around the world环游世界 ④introduce sth to sb向某人介绍某物 [高分句型] ①In my free time, I often take part in voluntary activities, because I think helping others is happy.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②Then, I will travel around the country so that I can broaden my horizon. （so that引导的目的状语从句） 9．中国素有“礼仪之邦”之称，你的外国朋友Eric将作为交流学生来中国学习，想要了解一些中国礼仪。请你根据下面导图提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍中国的一些日常礼仪。 注意： 1. 要点齐全，省略号部分适当补充； 2. 词数不少于90词，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不提及真实的校名、人名。 Dear Eric, I’m glad to hear you are coming to China as an exchange student. I’d like to tell you something about manners in China. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope these tips will be helpful to you. I’m looking forward to meeting you in China. Best wishes, Zhao Hui 【答案】参考例文: Dear Eric, I’m glad to hear you are coming to China as an exchange student. I’d like to tell you something about manners in China. When greeting people, shaking hands is a common practice. When going to a party, it’s important to arrive on time and maintain a pleasant conversation. There are many manners at the dinner table, such as using the correct things and not sticking your chopsticks upright in your rice. Other ways to demonstrate politeness include respecting elders, offering seats to those in need, and always saying “thank you” when necessary. These are just a few examples of the rich etiquette culture in China. I’m sure that you’ll learn more as you immerse yourself in our culture. I hope these tips will be helpful to you. I’m looking forward to meeting you in China. Best wishes, Zhao Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明将介绍中国礼仪； 第二步，从“问候、参加聚会、餐桌礼仪等”入手，重点介绍中国的礼仪； 第三步，表达“建议能有所帮助并期待在中国见面”的心愿。 [亮点词汇] ① common practice 常规做法 ② etiquette culture 礼仪文化 ③ immerse yourself in... 沉浸于…… [高分句型] ① When going to a party, it’s important to arrive on time and maintain a pleasant conversation.（it固定句式） ② Other ways to demonstrate politeness include respecting elders, offering seats to those in need, and always saying “thank you” when necessary.（动词不定式作后置定语） ③ I’m sure that you’ll learn more as you immerse yourself in our culture.（that引导宾语从句，as引导时间状语从句） 10．假如你是阳光中学的李华，来自英国的交换生Jim即将来你校交流。近期，他给你写了一封电子邮件，询问你校兴趣小组的相关事宜，请你根据下面的邮件内容，给Jim回一封邮件。 Dear Li Hua, I’m glad to tell you that I am going to your school as an exchange student. I hear there are many interesting clubs in your school, but I don’t know which one to join. Could you please recommend one to me? And why do you like it? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Jim 注意： 1.内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.词数90左右（已给出的文章开头和结尾不计入总词数） Dear Jim, I am so glad to hear that you are coming to our school.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your arrival! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Jim, I’m so glad to hear that you are coming to our school. I think you can join the Cooking Club. I like it best because it’s interesting and useful. You will learn a lot of helpful cooking skills there. The teachers will teach you how to make a traditional Chinese dish every week. After that, you can try to cook it by yourself. If you have problems, you can ask the teachers for help at any time. You and your club members can share the dishes you make with each other after you finish them. What’s more, you can practise your Chinese when talking with the members and the teachers. I hope you will have a wonderful time here. Looking forward to your arrival! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明自己的建议以及原因； 第二步，表达对于对方到达的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①ask sb for help向某人求助 ②at any time在任何时候 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①I think you can join the Cooking Club.（宾语从句） ②I like it best because it’s interesting and useful.（because引导原因状语从句） 11．假设你是李华，即将参加一项交换生活动并住在John家里，为表示友好和宣传中国文化，你提前寄送了三份具有中国传统特色的手工品作为礼物。请根据提示内容写一封E-mail，给John及其家人介绍一下这些礼物及其特色。 注意： 1. 字数：80词以上（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 2. 要对所写内容进行适当的拓展。 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear John and your family, I am very excited to be staying with you as an exchange student. To show you my thanks and share some Chinese culture with you, I have sent you three traditional Chinese handicrafts as gifts. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will like these beautiful pieces of art. I am looking forward to meeting you soon. Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear John and your family, I am very excited to be staying with you as an exchange student. To show you my thanks and share some Chinese culture with you, I have sent you three traditional Chinese handicrafts as gifts. The first gift is a kite. It is made of paper and some pieces of bamboo. It has different kinds of shapes. Some are animals, others are cartoon characters. The second gift is a beautiful Chinese knot which is made of red ropes. It means good luck, happiness and best wishes. The last are some paper cuts. Chinese paper cutting has a long history of over 1,500 years. They have different shapes, like animals, flowers and so on. People in China usually put them on doors and windows during the Spring Festival. I hope you will like these beautiful pieces of art. I am looking forward to meeting you soon. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，为表示友好和宣传中国文化，送了三份具有中国传统特色的礼物给他； 第二步，结合题干提示，具体介绍三份礼物； 第三步，书写结语，希望对方喜欢礼物，并期待见面。 [亮点词汇] ①be made of 由……制成 ②different kinds of 不同种类的 ③and so on 等等 [高分句型] ①The second gift is a beautiful Chinese knot which is made of red ropes.（which引导的定语从句） ②I hope you will like these beautiful pieces of art.（宾语从句） 12．Dave是来自美国的交换生，他是你的好朋友。请你以My Friend Dave为题，用英语向同学们介绍他的基本情况。 要点如下： 1. 他已来中国两年，有很多爱好，喜欢读书、踢足球和听音乐等； 2. 他对中国古代故事很感兴趣，美猴王是他最喜爱的人物； 3. 空闲时间他喜欢旅游，曾经去过长城和故宫博物院，期待未来有一天能环游世界； 4. 他想更多地了解中国，请你给出一两点建议。 写作要求： 1. 根据要点可适当发挥，词数不少于80； 2. 书写规范。 提示词：exchange student交换生；ancient古代的；the Palace Museum 故宫博物院 My Friend Dave ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考例文： My Friend Dave I am glad to introduce my good friend Dave to you. He has been in China for two years. He has many hobbies. He likes reading, playing football and listening to music and so on. If he has time, he often goes to the playground with his friends to play football. He is interested in ancient Chinese stories. The Monkey King is his favorite character. In his spare time, he likes to travel. He has been to the Great Wall and the Palace Museum. He looks forward to traveling around the world one day. He wants to know more about China. He should visit Chinese museums and read some history books. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意标点符合及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语义连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的朋友Dave及他的兴趣爱好； 第二步，介绍Dave闲暇时候所做的事情及他的未来畅想； 第三步，关于更多了解中国提出自己的一些建议。 [亮点词汇] ①character人物 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③have been to去过某地 ④look forward to doing盼望做某事 [高分句型] ①If he has time, he often goes to the playground with his friends to play football. (if引导的条件状语从句) 13．假如你是李华，下学期将有一名英国交换生Jim来你们学校。下面是他发给你的一封e-mail，请根据邮件内容写一封回信。 Dear Li Hua, How are you doing? You might not believe it, but I’m going to your school in March as one of the five exchange students. And I’m so excited! However, as you know, 1 can speak only a little Chinese. What should I do? Biology is my favourite subject. Can you introduce a club to me? What will the weather be like in Suzhou? I’m getting prepared and can’t wait to see you! Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours, Jim 注意： 1．回信须包含邮件中提问的所有要点，可适当发挥； 2．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 3．词数90词左右（开头，结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Jim, I’m glad to hear from you. You said you were worried because you could speak only a little Chinese.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Welcome to our school. I can’t wait to see you, too! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Jim,   I’m glad to hear from you. You said you were worried because you could speak only a little Chinese. Don’t worry too much about it. Many students here can speak English, and we are all willing to help you learn Chinese. You can also join a Chinese club where you can practice speaking and improve your skills. Since you enjoy biology, I suggest you join the Biology Club. You can learn more about this subject there. As for the weather in Suzhou, it is generally very warm here. I hope you have a pleasant time here.   Welcome to our school. I can’t wait to see you, too!   Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要求已给出，考生注意不要遗漏邮件中的相关要点，适当增加细节，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接上文，安慰对方不要担心，并给出建议； 第二步，为对方介绍合适的俱乐部并介绍苏州的天气等； 第三步，表达祝福：希望对方在中国过多愉快。 [亮点词汇] ①be willing to很乐意做某事 ②As for至于 ③have a pleasant time过得愉快 [高分句型] ① Since you enjoy biology, I suggest you join the Biology Club.（when引导的时间状语从句） ② I hope you have a pleasant time here.（省略that的宾语从句） 14．John是你国外的笔友，他要来你们学校当交换生啦，你的同学们都急于想了解John的情况，请你根据以下表格所给的信息向你的同学们介绍一下他吧！ 个人特质 开朗，友好，喜欢交朋友; 生活习惯 经常做家务，不熬夜，每天吃健康的早餐; 业余活动 喜欢旅行，在国庆节那天去了北京，参观了……， 他热爱中国 提示词：喜欢旅行：like travelling 熬夜：stay up late  在国庆节那天：on National Day 写作要求： 1.条理清晰，书写工整。 2.所给信息必须用到，可根据内容适当发挥。 3.词数：80词左右 4.文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 My pen pal John is my pen pal. He is coming to our school to be an exchange student.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My pen pal John is my pen pal. He is coming to our school to be an exchange student. He is outgoing and friendly. He likes to make friends. He has a good lifestyle. He often does housework.  He never stays up late. He has a healthy eating habit and he eats a healthy breakfast every day. He never eats junk food because it is bad for health. He likes travelling best because he can learn a lot about local culture and enjoy delicious food. He went to Beijing on National Day and visited Tiananmen Square, the Forbidden City, and other famous attractions. He loves China. I’m looking forward to his coming. I hope we can become best friends. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从个人特质、生活习惯以及业余活动等方面做具体介绍。 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的期待和愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①make friends交朋友 ②do housework做家务 ③stay up late熬夜 ④learn about了解…… [高分句型] ①He never eats junk food because it is bad for health. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②He has a healthy eating habit and he eats a healthy breakfast every day. (并列句) 15．书面表达 假如你校要选三名交换生去澳大利亚学习，你想推荐八年级二班的李强。请你根据下列内容提示及要求，写一份email匿名推荐。 要求：1.内容必须包括表格中要点，可适当发挥； 2. 总词数在80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Information about Li Qiang Characters (性格) smart, friendly, helpful, … Abilities（能力） have many hobbies, good at sports, speak English well, … Experience(经历) win prizes, travel a lot, help poor children, … Dear Sir / Madam, I would like to commend Li Qiang to be one of the exchange students to Australia. ________________________________________________________________________ Yours, x x x 【答案】Dear Sir / Madam, I would like to commend Li Qiang to be one of the exchange students to Australia. Li Qiang is a nice student in Class2, Grade8 in our school. He's very smart and he always gets good marks at school. He's friendly to everybody and he is also helpful. He is always ready to help people in trouble. He has many hobbies, such as singing, playing the guitar, and playing football. He's especially good at sports and he’s a member in our school team. He has lots of exciting experiences. He has entered many kinds of competitions and won many prizes. And he has travelled a lot. He’s so kind that he has helped may poor children. I think it’s a good chance for Li Qiang to show himself and I’m sure he can do well in Australia. Yours, x x x 【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如get good marks，at school，be friendly to，be ready to do，in trouble，such as，play the guitar，be good at，lots of，many kinds of，so…that，a lot，be sure等。而多个并列句He's very smart and he always gets good marks at school./ He's friendly to everybody and he is also helpful.和He’s so kind that he has helped may poor children./ I think it’s a good chance for Li Qiang to show himself and I’m sure he can do well in Australia.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 7 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$