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A friend in need
My friend Dave writes me an e-mail
to ask for help.
Dear Cloudy,
It has been a long time since we met last year. How 's everything going? I'm writing to you to get some advice on English learning.
I have trouble in learning this subject well. It takes me a long time to read and I don't understand my teacher most of the time.
You always do so well in English. Could you give me some advice?
Yours, Dave
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A friend in need
What is Dave’s problem?
He has trouble in learning English well.
It takes him a long time to read and he doesn't understand the teacher most of the time.
He wants to his English.
Dave writes this e-mail to me
to asking for some .
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A friend in need
advice
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Dear Cloudy,
It has been a long time since we met last year. How 's everything going? I'm writing to you to get some advice on English learning.
I have trouble in learning this subject well. It takes me a long time to read and I don't understand my teacher most of the time.
You always do so well in English. Could you give me some advice?
Yours, Dave
Pre-writing
What English-learning ways are mentioned in this film?
By watching English movies
By watching English TV shows
What other good ways and habits can you think of to learn English well?
What other good ways and habits can you think of to learn English well?
Pre-writing
Ways and habits to Learn English Well
By asking the teacher for help
By reading English books
By writing e-mails to your pen pals
By watching English movies/programs
Pre-writing
Ways and habits to Learn English Well
By listening to a tape and repeating out loud
By having conversations with friends in English
Pre-writing
Ways and habits to learn English well
By creating an interest in what you learn
By practicing and learning from mistakes
By developing English study skills
By asking questions.
Show the reasons and examples
Best ways
to learn
Creating an interest in what you learn.
Reasons
Examples
Pre-writing
If you are interested in something, your brain will be more active and it's also easier to pay attention for a long time.
If you like music, you can learn English by listening to English songs.
Pre-writing
Show the reasons and examples
Best ways
to learn
Reading English books.
Reasons
Examples
If you read English books that are well-written , you can learn many new words and see how they are used.
You like to read, you can learn English by reading well-known storybooks like Harry Potter.
Pre-writing
Show the reasons and examples
Best ways
to learn
Watching English movies to learn.
Reasons
Examples
If you watch English movies, you can practice listening and you can use body language and facial expressions to improve your understanding.
If you like to watch movies, you can learn
English by watching popular movies like Hunger Games and Kung Fu Panda.
Pre-writing
Structure
Your letter could be divided into three parts
The beginning part
The body part
The ending part
Pre-writing
Structure
The beginning part
The body part
The ending part
Salutation
Signature
Pre-writing
Structure
The beginning part
Express your feelings about receiving the letter.
State how many ways you think are useful
to learn English well.
I'm very glad to receive your letter about
asking for advice on how to learn English well.
There are three ways I often use to learn English and I find them really useful.
Pre-writing
Structure
The body part
Introduce the ways listed before in paragraph 2.
you may add one sentence or two about how much you have benefited from the ways or habits.
Pre-writing
Structure
The ending part
Make a summary of the advice you have given.
A journey of 1000 miles starts with baby steps.
Give your friend a few words of encouragement and your best wishes.
You have the potential to do better.
There is always time for everything.
Hard work never goes unrewarded.
Pre-writing
Sentence patterns
There are three good ways to ...
The secret to English learning is ..
I think you should/could ...
Why not develop/form/have good habits of doing ..
It is important/necessary to do ...
It is also a good idea to ... because...
You could try to improve your English by.
If you do this, you will...
These sentence
patterns
may help you
1.好的英语学习者会不断练习他们所学的东西并不害怕犯错误。
2.知识源于质疑。
3.熟能生巧。
4.非用即失
Pre-writing
These sentences can help you
Use it or lose it.
Translate the following sentences
Good English learners will keep practicing what they have learned and they are not afraid of making mistakes.
Knowledge comes from questioning.
Practice makes perfect.
Pre-writing
Linking words
首先
Last but not the least, Finally
再次,其次
还有
最后
First of all, To begin with, Firstly, Above all
Secondly, Further more, Besides
Thirdly, What's more, Moreover, In addition
Writing
While-writing
评价指标 得分
(满分20分) 评分标准
1.短文是否突出了主题 4 4 = Excellent (优秀)
3 = Good (良好)
2 = Acceptable (合格)
1 = Rewrite (重写)
2.短文是否有清晰的开头和结尾 4
3.短文是否结构完整 4
4.短文是否运用了正确的词语 4
5.短文的语法是否正确 4
Assesment
Show
Show
time
time
Post-writing
Sample
Dear Dave,
I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for advice on how to learn English well. There are three ways I often use to learn English and I find them really useful.
First of all, I think you could learn English by being interested in it. This is because if you are interested in something, your brain will be more active and it is also easier to pay attention for a long time. For example, if you like music, you can learn English by listening to English songs. My pronunciation improves a lot in this way. Secondly,you should read a lot of English books. It helps a lot. The more you read,the faster you will be. What’s more,watching movies is also a good way. Many English movies are so interesting. Last but not the least,you should listen to your teacher carefully and try harder to understand your teacher in class. Do more exercises and I'm sure it is helpful.
Follow my advice and I'm sure it is helpful. Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,Cloudy
Salutation
Signature
The beginning part
The body part
The ending part
1. I think (speak) English is more difficult than written
English.
2. She is a quick (learn), and her English has got better
day by day.
3. Be more careful! Don’t make any (mistake) in your
writing.
4. I can’t follow what you are saying. Could you please speak more
(slow)?
5. If you don’t spend money (wise), you may go broke.
Exercises
根据句意,用括号内所给单词的适当形式填空。
spoken
learner
mistakes
slowly
wisely
1.我们是否需要更多的食物,这要视到场人数而定。
Whether we need more food how many
people turn up.
我不知道这个单词怎么发音。
I don’t know this word.
他是否是个美国人仍然是个秘密。
he is an American is still a secret.
请您给他捎个信儿好吗?
Would you be kind a message to him?
他经常在空闲时间做大量的听力练习。
He often does lots of in his free time.
Exercises
根据所给汉语完成下列句子,每空一词。
depends
on
how
to
pronounce
Whether
or
not
enough
to
take
listening
practice
Learning English could be difficult.
But we should overcome the difficulties and find the best ways for us.
Learning English could be difficult.
But we should overcome the difficulties and find the best ways for us.
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