Unit5 Off to space 单元主题写作（宇宙探索）满分范文15篇-2024-2025学年七年级英语上册重难点讲练全攻略（沪教版2024）

2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品新教材系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品新教材系列资料，已编校！ Unit5 Off to space 单元主题写作（宇宙探索）满分范文15篇 1．假如你是李翔，下周你将要乘坐宇宙飞船去月球。《太空英语报》对你的访问计划很感兴趣，请你根据以下内容写一篇短文，介绍你的计划。 Theme A Plan of Visiting the Moon Time At 8:00 a.m. next Monday Way By spaceship Clothes … Activities … 注意： 1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数70词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。        I’m Li Xiang, a schoolboy in Class 8, Grade 7. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．Frank与David 经过交流, 并且在看过航天员王亚平的太空“直播课”之后，对航天员这一圣神的职业更加向往和崇拜。假如你是Frank，写一篇英语短文。 Name Wang Yaping Age 43 Native place (籍贯) From Yantai, Shandong Hobby Sports: basketball Subject: science; P. E. Eating habits Apples, eggs, chicken Comment (评论) The second woman astronaut in China China’s first teacher in space 要求： ①短文须包含要点中的所有信息，可适当增加细节； ②词数：60词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．河南人才辈出，宇航员江新林就是其中之一。学校英文校报正举行“出彩河南人——The Pride of Henan”的征文大赛，请你根据写作要求写一篇英语短文。            Name Jiang Xinlin Age 36 Place of birth Kaifeng, Henan Looks … Experience (经历) ●grow up in a farmer family ●always study hard in school ● turn into a pilot in 2010 ●fly into space in 2023 What I can learn from him … 写作要求： 1. 文中须包括方框中提到的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The Pride of Henan Jiang Xinlin is the pride of Henan. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．天宫空间站的建设在学校掀起了一阵航天热。假如你是Allen，你班同学也在热议并遐想未来能进入空间站旅行，你班将举办一次主题为“My Trip to Tiangong Space Station”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下列提示，发挥想象谈一下你的太空站之旅。 注意： （1）短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （2）作文中不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； （3）词数80-100。 My Trip to Tiangong Space Station I have dreamt of travelling to space for many years. Now I’ve got a chance to make my dream come true. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你平时对太空很感兴趣，最大的梦想就是能够遨游太空，下周你就要乘坐宇宙飞船去太空了。请根据下列提示内容，写一篇遨游太空的计划。 提示：1．下周一早上八点半出发去太空； 2．到达太空后，去月球上漫步，拍很多照片； 3．去太空电影院看电影； 4．下周五返回地球。 要求：1．表达清晰，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2．包含提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥； 3．不少于90词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 I am a middle school student. I’m very interested in space. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．随着天宫空间站的建设，学校掀起了一阵航天热。假如你是Allen，你班同学也在热议并遐想未来能进入空间站旅行。你班将举办一次主题为“My Trip to Tiangong Space Station”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下图提示，发挥想象谈一下你的太空站之旅。 注意：1.短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； 3．词数不少于60。 My Trip to Tiangong Space Station I dream of travelling to space. Now I’ve got a chance to make my dream come true. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假设你将有一次去月球旅游的机会，请写一篇短文介绍一下你对即将到来的月球之旅的心情和计划。 提示：   1.介绍基本情况及你获得这次机会的心情；   2.谈谈你对月球旅行的了解；   3.最后谈谈你在月球上的生活计划。   要求：条理清晰，语句通顺，意思连贯，不少于80词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．随着天宫空间站的建设，学校掀起了一阵航天热。假如你是Allen，你班同学也在热议并遐想未来能进入空间站旅行。你班将举办一次主题为“My Trip to Tiangong Space Station”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下图提示，发挥想象谈一下你的太空站之旅。 注意： 1. 短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； 3. 词数不少于80。 My Trip to Tiangong Space Station I dream of travelling to space. Now I’ve got a chance to make my dream come true. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在指定位置上。 中国梦牵引航天梦，航天梦助推中国梦。为了更好地追求航天梦，我国专门将每年的4月24日定为中国航天日（Space Day of China），就是为了纪念中国航天事业的卓越成就，不断发扬中国航天精神。假如你也有一个航天梦，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文，谈谈你的梦想。 注意： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名； 3. 语句连贯，词数100左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Do you have a space dream? I have one. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am sure that I can make my dream come true! 10．假如你是李华，你的笔友Nick看了“神舟十七号”的成功发射后对宇航员充满了好奇，他给你发邮件询问宇航员将在太空中做什么以及如何才能有像宇航员一样的好身体。请你根据下面表格中的信息，用英语给他回一封电子邮件。词数80左右。 What will astronauts do in space? 1. do scientific experiments (科学实验) 2. take exercise to keep fit 3. Sometimes walk in space 4. … How to get a healthy body like astronauts? 1. Eating habits: … 2. Living habits: … 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Nick, Great to hear from you. Let me tell you something about astronauts. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 11．学校决定开展向航天女英雄王亚平学习的英文演讲活动，请你按下面表格要求写一篇演讲稿。先简单介绍王亚平的个人信息，再谈谈你从本卷完形填空B篇中感受到的她的优秀品质（personality），最后说说你打算如何向她学习。 写作要点 具体内容 1. Personal information ●Age: 42 ●Birthplace: a small village in Shandong Province ●Hobby: sports 2. Personality 根据完形填空B篇概括（不得照搬原文） 3. Your plans ①________ ②________ … 要求： 1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3.词数80—120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 12．在今天的英语课上，老师向你们介绍了中国第一位漫步太空的女宇航员王亚平的追梦故事。请根据以下信息卡内容，写一则英文日记，记录你所了解的相关内容以及所思所想。日记需包含以下所有要点，可适当拓展。 注意： 1. 参考词汇：astronaut 宇航员。 2. 词数：不少于70词（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Tuesday, June 18th Dear Diary, Today, I learnt something about Wang Yaping in our English class.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．假如你是李华，你校英文报The Unknown World栏目向全校学生征稿，请你根据下面的提示，以“My Favourite Space Hero”为题，写一篇介绍航天员刘洋的稿件。 要点： 个人信息 1. 刘洋1978年10月出生于河南，1997年8月入伍； 经历与贡献 2. 2012年6月15日，刘洋作为中国首名女航天员，与景海鹏、刘旺乘坐神舟九号飞船进入太空，在太空停留了13天； 3. 2022年6月5日，刘洋与陈冬、蔡旭哲乘坐神舟十四号飞船进入太空，将在太空停留 180天； 你的感受 …… 要求： 1. 须包含所有提示信息，语言通顺，行文连贯，内容充实； 2. 词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇： join the army 入伍，female astronaut女航天员，Shenzhou 9 spacecraft 神舟九号飞船 My Favourite Space Hero Chinese astronauts have made great contributions to our country’s space industry. They are our heroes. Now I’d like to introduce my favourite space hero Liu Yang. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．假如你是Lisa，你的笔友Peter想要去月球旅行，向你询问应该如何准备行囊，请你根据下列表格提示给他提至少三点建议，并以信件的形式给他回复。可适当发挥，不少于70词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 提示： 建议：多带点厚衣服，带足够的食物和水，…… 原因：月球晚上温度低，月球上没有食物和水，…… Dear Peter, I hear that you are going to travel to the Moon. I’m very happy for you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Lisa 15．    5月29日，随着神舟十六号航天员名单的公布，桂海潮出现在了公众的视野里。他成为中国执行载人飞行任务的首个载荷专家，实现了自己的飞天梦想。假如你是李华，最近你校英文报推出“Anyone can achieve their dreams”的主题征文活动, 请你根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文向校英文报投稿，介绍追逐梦想的英雄——桂海潮。 要点提示:                                   桂海潮 人生经历 1. 2003年, 杨利伟成为中国飞天第一人的消息鼓舞了他，17岁立志飞上太空； 2. 刻苦学习训练，已是大学教授的他成为了宇航员； 3. 2023年5月30号, 乘神舟16号进入太空，实现了自己的太空梦。 你的感悟 ……(不少于两点) 要求: 1.要点齐全、语言流畅、语句通顺； 2.可适当发挥, 使行文连贯； 3.不少于80词 (开头已给出, 不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：宇航员 astronaut   教授 professor The hero in my heart is the astronaut in Shenzhou 16, Gui Haichao. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．同学们对航天员（astronaut）这一神圣的职业十分崇拜和向往，请你根据下列表格内容为大家介绍一下在太空上“直播课”的航天员王亚平。 Name Wang Yaping Age 43 Birthplace (出生地) Yantai, Shandong Favorites Sport: basketball Subjects: science, P. E. Food apples, eggs, chicken, milk Evaluation (评价) the second woman astronaut in China, China’s first teacher in space 要求： 1.短文必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥。 2.注意书写，字迹工整，无勾抹。 3.词数不少于60词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 7 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品新教材系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品新教材系列资料，已编校！ Unit5 Off to space 单元主题写作（宇宙探索）满分范文15篇 1．假如你是李翔，下周你将要乘坐宇宙飞船去月球。《太空英语报》对你的访问计划很感兴趣，请你根据以下内容写一篇短文，介绍你的计划。 Theme A Plan of Visiting the Moon Time At 8:00 a.m. next Monday Way By spaceship Clothes … Activities … 注意： 1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数70词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。        I’m Li Xiang, a schoolboy in Class 8, Grade 7. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I’m Li Xiang, a schoolboy in Class 8, Grade 7. I am glad that I will travel into space by spaceship next Monday. I will wear a spacesuit before going into the spaceship. The spaceship will go into space at 8:00 a.m. When I get to the Moon, I will take a walk there. It will be interesting. I will also take as many photos as I can. There must be many beautiful stars in space. At last, I will come back to the Earth at 5:00 p.m. next Friday. I hope I can have a good time there. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍去月球的时间和方式； 第二步，其次介绍去月球所做的活动； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①by spaceship乘宇宙飞船 ②go into进入 ③take a walk散步 ④have a good time玩得愉快 [高分句型] ①I am glad that I will travel into space by spaceship next Monday.（宾语从句）   ②When I get to the Moon, I will take a walk there.（when引导的时间状语从句） ③There must be many beautiful stars in space.（there be句型） ④I hope I can have a good time there.（宾语从句） 2．Frank与David 经过交流, 并且在看过航天员王亚平的太空“直播课”之后，对航天员这一圣神的职业更加向往和崇拜。假如你是Frank，写一篇英语短文。 Name Wang Yaping Age 43 Native place (籍贯) From Yantai, Shandong Hobby Sports: basketball Subject: science; P. E. Eating habits Apples, eggs, chicken Comment (评论) The second woman astronaut in China China’s first teacher in space 要求： ①短文须包含要点中的所有信息，可适当增加细节； ②词数：60词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone! Here is a woman in the picture. Who is she? Her name is Wang Yaping. Wang Yaping is from Yantai, Shandong. She is 43 years old. She likes playing basketball best because it is interesting. Science and P. E. are her favorite subjects. She thinks they are useful. She has apples, eggs, chicken and milk every day. So she is very healthy. She is the second woman astronaut in China. And she is China’s first teacher in space. I like her and her classes very much. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出文章的主题，即要介绍王亚平； 第二步，具体介绍王亚平的个人信息，包括年龄，工作，家乡，爱好，喜欢的工作以及对她的评价等； 第三步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ① be from来自 ② like doing sth.喜欢做某事 ③ in space在太空 [高分句型] ① She thinks they are useful.（宾语从句） ② She likes playing basketball best because it is interesting.（because引导的原因状语从句） 3．河南人才辈出，宇航员江新林就是其中之一。学校英文校报正举行“出彩河南人——The Pride of Henan”的征文大赛，请你根据写作要求写一篇英语短文。            Name Jiang Xinlin Age 36 Place of birth Kaifeng, Henan Looks … Experience (经历) ●grow up in a farmer family ●always study hard in school ● turn into a pilot in 2010 ●fly into space in 2023 What I can learn from him … 写作要求： 1. 文中须包括方框中提到的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The Pride of Henan Jiang Xinlin is the pride of Henan. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Pride of Henan Jiang Xinlin is the pride of Henan. He is a hero in my heart. He is 36 years old. He is from Kaifeng, Henan. He has short hair and big eyes. He grew up in a farmer family. He always studied hard in school. He turned into a pilot in 2010 and flew into space in 2023. His hard work made him succeed. He never gave up when he met difficulties. I also want to study hard like him and become an astronaut in the future. I hope that my dream will come true in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时，一般现在时； ③提示：结合写作要点，介绍宇航员江新林，注意不要遗漏要点，避免语法及拼写错误，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍江新林的年龄、出生地和外貌； 第二步：介绍江新林的经历； 第三步：你从江新林身上学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①grow up 成长，长大 ②turn into 变成…… ③fly into space 飞往太空 [高分句型] ①He never gave up when he met difficulties. (when引导时间状语从句) ②I hope that my dream will come true in the future. (宾语从句) 4．天宫空间站的建设在学校掀起了一阵航天热。假如你是Allen，你班同学也在热议并遐想未来能进入空间站旅行，你班将举办一次主题为“My Trip to Tiangong Space Station”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下列提示，发挥想象谈一下你的太空站之旅。 注意： （1）短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （2）作文中不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； （3）词数80-100。 My Trip to Tiangong Space Station I have dreamt of travelling to space for many years. Now I’ve got a chance to make my dream come true. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Trip to Tiangong Space Station I have dreamt of travelling to space for many years. Now I’ve got a chance to make my dream come true. Next month, I’m going to take a trip to Tiangong Space Station with some of my classmates to learn more about space life. It will take about 6 hours to get there by rocket. It will be fast and exciting. After I get into the space station, I’m going to give some presents to the astronauts first. Then I’m going to have dinner with the astronauts and try space food. It must be delicious. After that, I’m going to visit the space station and take videos of the astronauts’ life in the space station. All in all, I believe it will be a wonderful trip. I can’t wait to start my trip. 【总体分析】① 题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ② 时态：一般将来时； ③ 提示：根据图示，考生需要把提到的要点写全，不得遗漏。 【写作步骤】第一步，引出话题，说明自己要去太空旅行了； 第二步，说明自己要去太空站的时间、同伴、去的方式、在太空站的活动、去的目的和在太空站的感受； 第三步，表明自己的期待。 【亮点词汇】① chance机会 ② take a trip旅行 ③ astronaut宇航员 ④ can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事 【高分句型】All in all, I believe it will be a wonderful trip. (宾语从句) 5．假如你平时对太空很感兴趣，最大的梦想就是能够遨游太空，下周你就要乘坐宇宙飞船去太空了。请根据下列提示内容，写一篇遨游太空的计划。 提示：1．下周一早上八点半出发去太空； 2．到达太空后，去月球上漫步，拍很多照片； 3．去太空电影院看电影； 4．下周五返回地球。 要求：1．表达清晰，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2．包含提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥； 3．不少于90词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 I am a middle school student. I’m very interested in space. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I am a middle school student. I’m very interested in space. I am so glad because I will travel into space on a spaceship next week. The spaceship will leave the Earth at 8:30 a.m. next Monday. There’s no air in space, so I will have to wear a spacesuit to help me breathe. When I get there, I’m going to go on a spacewalk and take as many photos as I can. After that, I will watch a film about space in the Space Cinema. Next Friday, I will go back to the Earth. I really look forward to the journey and I’m sure it will be an amazing experience! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“下周你就要乘坐宇宙飞船去太空了”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，分别从时间及到太空去做的事情等方面去叙述。 第三步，总结全文，对太空旅行进行展望。 [亮点词汇] ①as...as I can尽我可能…… ②look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①When I get there, I’m going to go on a spacewalk and take as many photos as I can.（when引导时间状语从句） ②I really look forward to the journey and I’m sure it will be an amazing experience!（“and”表示并列） 6．随着天宫空间站的建设，学校掀起了一阵航天热。假如你是Allen，你班同学也在热议并遐想未来能进入空间站旅行。你班将举办一次主题为“My Trip to Tiangong Space Station”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下图提示，发挥想象谈一下你的太空站之旅。 注意：1.短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； 3．词数不少于60。 My Trip to Tiangong Space Station I dream of travelling to space. Now I’ve got a chance to make my dream come true. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Trip to Tiangong Space Station I dream of travelling to space. Now I’ve got a chance to make my dream come true. Next month, I’m going to take a trip to Tiangong Space Station with some of my classmates to learn more about space life. It will take about 6 hours by rocket. It will be fast and exciting. After I get into the space station, I’m going to give some presents to the astronauts first. Then I’m going to have dinner with the astronauts and try space food. It must be delicious. After that, I’m going to visit the space station and take photos of the astronauts’ daily life on the space station. All in all, it will be a wonderful trip. I can’t wait to start my trip. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；   第二步，介绍去空间站旅行的计划。 [亮点词汇]   ①dream of梦想 ②get a chance to do sth得到了做某事的机会   ③take photos拍照 ④all in all毕竟 [高分句型] ①After I get into the space station, I’m going to give some presents to the astronauts first.（after引导时间状语从句）   7．假设你将有一次去月球旅游的机会，请写一篇短文介绍一下你对即将到来的月球之旅的心情和计划。 提示：   1.介绍基本情况及你获得这次机会的心情；   2.谈谈你对月球旅行的了解；   3.最后谈谈你在月球上的生活计划。   要求：条理清晰，语句通顺，意思连贯，不少于80词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My dream is to travel to space. I have always been fascinated by the stars and planets, and I am very interested to see them up close. I am so excited that I’ll be one of the first students to travel into space next week. I can’t wait. The Moon is around 380,000 kilometres from the Earth. We’ll go there by spaceship. There is less gravity on the Moon. So everyone will have to own a sleeping bag. I will sleep in the bag to stop me floating away. There is no air either. So I will have to wear a spacesuit to help me breathe. During my trip, I will travel in a spaceship and visit the International Space Station. I will experience zero gravity. It will be fun because I will float in space. I want to do experiments, such as growing food in space garden. I will look out of the windows and enjoy the view of the Earth. I expect to feel excited and amazed when seeing Earth from space. I will also communicate with people on Earth and share my experiences. Last, I will take as many photos as I can. I think my dream trip to space will be a wonderful journey. It will inspire me to learn more about the universe. I am sure I will have a good time there. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍月球旅行及获得月球旅行机会的心情； 第二步，详细介绍月球上的生活计划； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受与期待。 [亮点词汇] ①stop sb. doing sth.阻止某人做某事 ②communicate with sb.与某人交流 ③inspire sb. to do sth.鼓舞某人做某事 [高分句型] ①It will be fun because I will float in space. (because引导原因状语从句) ②I am sure I will have a good time there. (省略that的宾语从句) 8．随着天宫空间站的建设，学校掀起了一阵航天热。假如你是Allen，你班同学也在热议并遐想未来能进入空间站旅行。你班将举办一次主题为“My Trip to Tiangong Space Station”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据下图提示，发挥想象谈一下你的太空站之旅。 注意： 1. 短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； 3. 词数不少于80。 My Trip to Tiangong Space Station I dream of travelling to space. Now I’ve got a chance to make my dream come true. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Trip to Tiangong Space Station I dream of travelling to space. Now I’ve got a chance to make my dream come true. Next month, I’m going to take a trip to Tiangong Space Station with some of my classmates to learn more about space life. It will take about 6 hours by rocket. It will be fast and exciting. After I get into the space station, I’m going to give some presents to the astronauts first. Then I’m going to have dinner with the astronauts and try space food. It must be delicious. After that, I’m going to visit the space station and take photos of the astronauts’ daily life on the space station. All in all, it will be a wonderful trip. I can’t wait to start my trip. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：本文以“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：根据图片提示内容完成写作，不得遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步聚] 第一步，开篇点题（已给出）； 第二步，根据所给要点，依次描述去空间站的时间、目的、同行人员、具体活动等； 第三步，最后表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①learn about 了解 ②get into 进入 ③take photos 拍照 [高分句型] ①Next month, I’m going to take a trip to Tiangong Space Station with some of my classmates to learn more about space life.（动词不定式作目的状语） ②It will take about 6 hours by rocket.（it作形式主语） 9．根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在指定位置上。 中国梦牵引航天梦，航天梦助推中国梦。为了更好地追求航天梦，我国专门将每年的4月24日定为中国航天日（Space Day of China），就是为了纪念中国航天事业的卓越成就，不断发扬中国航天精神。假如你也有一个航天梦，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文，谈谈你的梦想。 注意： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名； 3. 语句连贯，词数100左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Do you have a space dream? I have one. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am sure that I can make my dream come true! 【答案】例文 Do you have a space dream? I have one. My dream is to be an astronaut. I’m very interested in everything in space. When I am free, I enjoy reading books and watching movies about it. The space is full of things unknown to us and I really hope that I can help people learn more about it in the future. Space travel can’t be easy so I must work hard and get well prepared to make my dream come true. To begin with, I will do sports as often as I can because a strong and healthy body is a must for a good astronaut. What’s more, I will read more books about space. In this way, I can learn more about it and work well in it in the future. I am sure that I can make my dream come true! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的航天梦，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己想成为一名宇航员； 第二步，介绍为什么会有这个梦想； 第三步，介绍将如何为梦想努力。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②be full of充满 ③come true实现 [高分句型] ①When I am free, I enjoy reading books and watching movies about it.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②To begin with, I will do sports as often as I can because a strong and healthy body is a must for a good astronaut.（because引导的原因状语从句） ③I am sure that I can make my dream come true!（that引导的宾语从句） 10．假如你是李华，你的笔友Nick看了“神舟十七号”的成功发射后对宇航员充满了好奇，他给你发邮件询问宇航员将在太空中做什么以及如何才能有像宇航员一样的好身体。请你根据下面表格中的信息，用英语给他回一封电子邮件。词数80左右。 What will astronauts do in space? 1. do scientific experiments (科学实验) 2. take exercise to keep fit 3. Sometimes walk in space 4. … How to get a healthy body like astronauts? 1. Eating habits: … 2. Living habits: … 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Nick, Great to hear from you. Let me tell you something about astronauts. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Nick, Great to hear from you. Let me tell you something about astronauts. In space, astronauts will do scientific experiments, take exercise to keep fit, and sometimes walk in space. They also need to observe many unknown planets carefully. To have a healthy body like astronauts, you should have good eating habits, such as eating more vegetables and fruit, and less junk food. Also, maintain good living habits, like getting enough sleep and exercising regularly. I hope this helps! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时与一般将来时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，介绍宇航员将在太空中做什么； 第二步，介绍如何才能有像宇航员一样的好身体。 [亮点词汇] ①observe观察 ②junk food垃圾食品 ③maintain保持 [高分句型] To have a healthy body like astronauts, you should have good eating habits, such as eating more vegetables and fruit, and less junk food.（不定式表目的） 11．学校决定开展向航天女英雄王亚平学习的英文演讲活动，请你按下面表格要求写一篇演讲稿。先简单介绍王亚平的个人信息，再谈谈你从本卷完形填空B篇中感受到的她的优秀品质（personality），最后说说你打算如何向她学习。 写作要点 具体内容 1. Personal information ●Age: 42 ●Birthplace: a small village in Shandong Province ●Hobby: sports 2. Personality 根据完形填空B篇概括（不得照搬原文） 3. Your plans ①________ ②________ … 要求： 1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3.词数80—120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【答案】例文： Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping. Wang is a 42-year-old woman born in a small village in Shandong Province. She likes playing sports very much. Wang Yaping is the first female astronaut who performed spacewalk by Shenzhou XIII. She deserves our highest respect for her persistence in hard training. She loves her work and never gives up. To learn from Wang Yaping, I am going to reflect on our weak points and work hard to do better. I’m going to overcome the difficulties I meet just as Wang did. Hard work can pay off. Thank you! 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求介绍王亚平的个人信息并结合本卷完形填空B篇中的内容谈谈她的优秀品质，在最后讲打算如何向她学习。 2.写作指导：写作时要结合一、三人称，时态结合一般现在时与一般将来时。演讲稿可分为四段式：第一段介绍王亚平的个人信息；第二段谈其优秀品质；第三段讲自己的计划；最后一段收尾，感谢大家的聆听。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 12．在今天的英语课上，老师向你们介绍了中国第一位漫步太空的女宇航员王亚平的追梦故事。请根据以下信息卡内容，写一则英文日记，记录你所了解的相关内容以及所思所想。日记需包含以下所有要点，可适当拓展。 注意： 1. 参考词汇：astronaut 宇航员。 2. 词数：不少于70词（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Tuesday, June 18th Dear Diary, Today, I learnt something about Wang Yaping in our English class.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Tuesday, June 18th Dear Diary, Today, I learned something about Wang Yaping in our English class. Born in a village in Yan Tai, Shan Dong Province in 1980, Wang Yaping was the first Chinese woman to walk in Space. In fact, it was not very easy for her. She studied hard from an early age. In 2003, she made up her mind to be an astronaut. She kept on trying with a strong will. She spent ten years training hard and finally made her dream come true. In the class, I was deeply moved by her story. She devoted all her time to achieving her dream. When she met difficulties, she never gave up. She sets a good example for me. To realize my dream, I think I should spare no effort to study and never lose heart. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求介绍了中国第一位漫步太空的女宇航员王亚平的追梦故事，结合提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时主要以第三人称进行写作，时态主要以一般过去时为主，作文可以分为三段，第一段已经给出；第二段可以从王亚平的个人信息以及她的追梦之路两方面进行写作；第三段进行总结收尾，描述自己的观点。要求语言连贯，无语法以及拼写错误。 13．假如你是李华，你校英文报The Unknown World栏目向全校学生征稿，请你根据下面的提示，以“My Favourite Space Hero”为题，写一篇介绍航天员刘洋的稿件。 要点： 个人信息 1. 刘洋1978年10月出生于河南，1997年8月入伍； 经历与贡献 2. 2012年6月15日，刘洋作为中国首名女航天员，与景海鹏、刘旺乘坐神舟九号飞船进入太空，在太空停留了13天； 3. 2022年6月5日，刘洋与陈冬、蔡旭哲乘坐神舟十四号飞船进入太空，将在太空停留 180天； 你的感受 …… 要求： 1. 须包含所有提示信息，语言通顺，行文连贯，内容充实； 2. 词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇： join the army 入伍，female astronaut女航天员，Shenzhou 9 spacecraft 神舟九号飞船 My Favourite Space Hero Chinese astronauts have made great contributions to our country’s space industry. They are our heroes. Now I’d like to introduce my favourite space hero Liu Yang. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Favourite Space Hero Chinese astronauts have made great contributions to our country’s space industry. They are our heroes. Now I’d like to introduce my favourite space hero Liu Yang. Liu Yang was born in Henan province in October 1978 and joined the army in August 1997. On June 15th, 2012, Liu Yang, as China’s first female astronaut, went into space with Jing Haipeng and Liu Wang aboard the Shenzhou 9 spacecraft. They stayed in space for 13 days. On June 5th, 2022, Liu Yang, Chen Dong and Cai Xuzhe went into space aboard the Shenzhou 14 spacecraft and will stay in space for 180 days. I must also study hard and contribute my share to the construction of the country. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍航天员刘洋。 第二步，介绍刘洋的经历与贡献。 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①join the army参军 ②go into space进入太空 ③stay in space在太空停留 [高分句型] I must also study hard and contribute my share to the construction of the country. (and连接并列成分) 14．假如你是Lisa，你的笔友Peter想要去月球旅行，向你询问应该如何准备行囊，请你根据下列表格提示给他提至少三点建议，并以信件的形式给他回复。可适当发挥，不少于70词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 提示： 建议：多带点厚衣服，带足够的食物和水，…… 原因：月球晚上温度低，月球上没有食物和水，…… Dear Peter, I hear that you are going to travel to the Moon. I’m very happy for you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Lisa 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, I hear that you are going to travel to the Moon. I’m very happy for you. I know something about the Moon. I’m glad to give you some advice. First, you should remember that it’s cold on the Moon at night. Therefore, it is important for you to take some warm clothes. Second, you must take enough water and food for yourself because there is no water or food on the Moon. Third, you need to wear special clothes to protect yourself. The reason is that there is no gravity in space. You will have to exercise each day as your body may become weak without gravity. If you plan to walk on the Moon, be sure to wear a spacesuit to help yourself breathe. Last but not least, remember to take your camera and its batteries. If so, you can take as many photos as you can. If you can share these photos with me, I will be very happy. Have a wonderful trip! Yours sincerely, Lisa 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：主要时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题； 第二步，提出建议及原因； 第三步，做出总结。 [亮点词汇] ①Therefore所以 ②be sure to一定要 ③Last but not least最后但同样重要的 [高分句型] ①Second, you must take enough water and food for yourself because there is no water or food on the Moon.（because引导时间状语从句） ②The reason is that there is no gravity in space.（that引导表语从句） 15．    5月29日，随着神舟十六号航天员名单的公布，桂海潮出现在了公众的视野里。他成为中国执行载人飞行任务的首个载荷专家，实现了自己的飞天梦想。假如你是李华，最近你校英文报推出“Anyone can achieve their dreams”的主题征文活动, 请你根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文向校英文报投稿，介绍追逐梦想的英雄——桂海潮。 要点提示:                                   桂海潮 人生经历 1. 2003年, 杨利伟成为中国飞天第一人的消息鼓舞了他，17岁立志飞上太空； 2. 刻苦学习训练，已是大学教授的他成为了宇航员； 3. 2023年5月30号, 乘神舟16号进入太空，实现了自己的太空梦。 你的感悟 ……(不少于两点) 要求: 1.要点齐全、语言流畅、语句通顺； 2.可适当发挥, 使行文连贯； 3.不少于80词 (开头已给出, 不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：宇航员 astronaut   教授 professor The hero in my heart is the astronaut in Shenzhou 16, Gui Haichao. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The hero in my heart is the astronaut in Shenzhou 16, Gui Haichao. In 2003, he was inspired by the news that Yang Liwei had become the first person in China to fly, and at the age of 17, he decided to fly into space. When he was a university professor, he studied and trained so hard that he finally became an astronaut. On May 30, 2023, he flew into space by Shenzhou 16 and realized his space dream. He became China’s first payload expert to carry out manned missions and made his flying dream come true. Through his story, I understand that as long as we have dreams in our hearts and work hard for them, our dreams will come true. So no matter what problems we meet, we can not give up. If we are brave enough to challenge difficulties, we will certainly win. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时，一般现在时； ③提示：根据表格所给提示，介绍桂海潮的人生经历和你的感悟。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，我心中的英雄是桂海潮； 第二步：介绍桂海潮的人生经历（受到杨利伟的鼓舞，刻苦训练，实现太空梦想），注意增加细节，使行文连贯； 第三步：说说你的感悟是什么。 [亮点词汇] ①at the age of 在……岁时 ②fly into 飞入 ③carry out 执行 [高分句型] ①He became China’s first payload expert to carry out manned missions and made his flying dream come true.  (动词不定式作后置定语）    ②Through his story, I understand that as long as we have dreams in our hearts and work hard for them, our dreams will come true.  (as long as引导条件状语从句) 16．同学们对航天员（astronaut）这一神圣的职业十分崇拜和向往，请你根据下列表格内容为大家介绍一下在太空上“直播课”的航天员王亚平。 Name Wang Yaping Age 43 Birthplace (出生地) Yantai, Shandong Favorites Sport: basketball Subjects: science, P. E. Food apples, eggs, chicken, milk Evaluation (评价) the second woman astronaut in China, China’s first teacher in space 要求： 1.短文必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥。 2.注意书写，字迹工整，无勾抹。 3.词数不少于60词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Wang Yaping is from Yantai, Shandong. She is 43 years old. She likes playing basketball best because it is interesting. Science and P. E. are her favorite subjects. She thinks they are useful. She has apples, eggs, chicken and milk every day. So she is very healthy. She is the second woman astronaut in China. And she is China’s first teacher in space. I like her and her classes very much. This is my heroine. Do you like her? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意主要用第三人称she书写文章，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，从“年龄、出生地、最喜欢的运动、最喜欢的学科”等方面介绍王亚平； 第二步，阐述对王亚平的评价； 第三步，书写结语，询问其他人是否喜欢王亚平。 [亮点词汇] ①like doing sth.喜欢做某事 ②interesting有趣的 ③useful有用的 ④healthy健康的 [高分句型] ①She likes playing basketball best because it is interesting.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②She thinks they are useful.（省略that的宾语从句） 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 7 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$