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Unit5 Art world
单元主题写作满分范文15篇
l,艺术陶冶情操,艺术使生活丰富多彩。你校英文报正举办以ly favourite art form为题的征文活动,
请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式,内容包括:
1你最喜欢的艺术形式:
2.分享一个与之相关的自己的故事:
3你的感受。
注意:
1.词数:90左右:
2短文需包括所给要点,可适当发挥:
3短中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
提示词汇:绘画painting书法calligraphy戏剧drama
剪纸paper-cutting
舞蹈dancing
唱歌singing摄影photography
乐器musical instrument
2.假如你叫李明,你所在学校准备宣传书写的重要性,你作为一名书写爱好者,你将给同学们进行
经验介绍。介绍的内容包括:
1)简单介绍你怎样进行书写训练:
2)书写的重要性(至少两点):
3)鼓励同学们练好书写。
注意:写作词数80词左右;请在答题卡相应位置作答。参考单词:handwriting书写。
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3.艺术陶冶情操,涵养生命。你喜欢的艺术形式是什么,有过怎样的经历,用英语写一篇短文。
Gr
注意
1.词数90左右,短文开头已给出
2.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Art
plays
an
important
role
in
our
life.
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4.研究表明音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响,因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情。请根据下表提
示内容,写一篇英语短文。
听音乐前的情绪状态
音乐类型
听音乐后的心境
压力大,过分焦虑
流行音乐
放松
沉迷电脑游戏,兴奋过度
乡村音乐
平静
困倦,疲劳
摇滚音乐
振奋
以自己为例:孤独,悲伤
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one's moods.
5,中国文化博大精深,各种艺术形式精彩纷星。舞蹈、音乐、绘画、茶艺、剪纸、泥塑、孔明灯、
京剧等,数不胜数。艺术陶治情操,涵养生命,丰富充实人生。请写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式,
并结合你的经历,谈谈喜欢它的缘由以及它对你的影响。
参考要点:
l.介绍你喜欢的艺术形式(art form):
2喜欢的缘由:
3.这种艺术形式对你的影响:
要求:
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1文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
2.80-120词(文章开头己给出,不计入总词数)。
Art
plays
an
important
role
in
my
life
6.舞狮(Lion Dance)是在广东地区非常流行的一种表演,请根据以下提示,介绍广东舞狮。开头已
给出,不算入总词数。
1.舞狮是传统表演;
2.结合功夫、舞蹈和音乐
3.在节日、重要活动中有舞狮:也有举行舞狮竞赛:
4.现状:练习很辛苦,越来越少人喜欢舞狮:
5.发展:自由发挥两点。
Lion Dance
Lion
Dance
very
popular
across
Guangdong
Province
7.舞狮是中国优秀的传统民间艺术。请你为班级英语角的“人物”版块写一篇短文,介绍一位舞狮(Lon
Dance)技艺传承人—叶天。短文内容包含以下要点:
1.叶天的基本信息(男,45岁,佛山人)和学习舞狮的经历(4岁学习舞狮,22岁获得全国舞狮比赛一等
奖)
2他是如何传承舞狮的(到国外表演、教年轻人舞狮,…):
3.你对叶天和舞狮的看法。
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要求:180词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数内:
2文中不得出现真实姓名和校名:
3可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯;
4标点正确,书面整洁。
提示i词:传承keep.alive
Ye
Tian
is
master
of
Lion
Dance.
8.假如你是李华,你的作品在“the Beauty of Nature”主题摄影展上获得了一等奖。你的英语老师邀
请你在“英语一分钟演讲”上给同学们做分享。要点如下:
1.拍摄的时间,地点,内容:
2.选择这张照片的原因:
3.参赛感受。
Dear
That's all!Thank You!
9.走进艺术世界,感受艺术魅力。你校英语社团正在组织“Enjoy Art”学习交流活动。假如你是李华,
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请你根据以下图式,写一篇英语发言稿参加活动。
Enjoy Art
4art forms
(film.music.painting....)
the art form you like best and reasons
(feel the beauty.leam about cultures....)
your hope
(experience the value....)
注意:
(1)词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
(2)发言稿应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯:
(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Enjoy Art
Hello,I am Li Hua.I'm happy to give you a speech on enjoying art.
That's all for my speech Thanks for listening!
10,假如你是学校国际部学生会主席李华,本周日将组织一次国际部研学活动:参观中国美术馆
(National Art Museum of China)。为了活动能顺利进行,请你给国际部的同学们用微信发布信息,内容包
括:你们集合的时间和地点,你们在美术馆将要做什么,以及参观时的注意事项。
提示词语:schoolgate,painting works,art exhibition,silence(静音)the phone,shout
提示问题:
1.When and where are we going to meet?
2.What are we going to do there?
3.What should we pay attention to?
Dear friends,
Here is some information about our visit to the National Art Museum of China.
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Yours.
Lihua
1l,请仿照下面的格式提示,用英语写一首五行诗(Cinquain)。(主趣不限)
Cinquain
Cinquain s precounced sing-cone.
A cnquoin poem has fhve lines.
How to write a Cinquain poem:
.Lne T:One noun for the fopic
word
Snow
Lne 2:Two odjectives that
describe the oplc word
Cold,silent
.Line 3:Three oction verbs that
end in -ing
Falling.dancing.glittering
.Lne 4:A senlence obout the
lopic word.
Tiny snowflakes kiss my nose.
Lne 5:One new noun that is
similar lo the topic word.
12.Write at least 60 words about the topic"The
I want to recommend”(请以“我想推荐
为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
在你的日常生活中,肯定有很多给你留下了深刻的印象,如观看过一部电影,阅读过一本书,欣赏过
一个表演。请你从以上三个方面选取其中一个内容,向你的朋友作推荐,并说明推荐理由。
(注意:文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)
The
I want to recommend
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l3.以"The art form I like best'"为题写一篇关于你最喜欢的艺术形式的文章,艺术形式不限,如:画画,剪
纸,乐器等,字数不少于90词.可用下列表达:
I have a real gift for...:I became interested in...when I was:I once did not like...because...:
I forgot...until.:
Since then,I have been crazy about...I enjoy myself...every time...
14.假设你是李明,你的外国网友Eic对中国剪纸很感兴趣,他发来邮件想请你介绍一下这一中国传统艺
术。请根据下表提示给他回复邮件。不少于90词。
Chinese paper cutting
long history
over 1.500 years
very popular
in different parts of China,young and old...
how to do
Paper..fold..cut with scissors..
common patterns
Birds,animals,flowers and other things about Chinese history...
places to put up
windows,doors,walls...
symbols
good luck,a happy new year,happy life.
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15,假如你是李明,你校英文报将征集以“摄影”为主题的征文。请选择你最喜欢的一张照片,分享照
片背后的故事。
要点:
1.描述照片:
2.分享故事:
3.
注意:
1.词数80-100:
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称:
4.短文题目已给出,不计入总词数。
I'm Li Ming and I'd like to introduce a photo that is very
special
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Unit5 Art world
单元主题写作满分范文15篇
1.艺术陶冶情操,艺术使生活丰富多彩。你校英文报正举办以My favourite art form为题的征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式,内容包括:
1.你最喜欢的艺术形式;
2.分享一个与之相关的自己的故事;
3.你的感受。
注意:
1.词数:90左右;
2.短文需包括所给要点,可适当发挥;
3.短中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
提示词汇:绘画 painting 书法 calligraphy 戏剧 drama 剪纸 paper-cutting
舞蹈 dancing 唱歌singing 摄影 photography 乐器 musical instrument
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【答案】例文
My favourite art form
Art is an important part of my life. My favourite art is making kites.
As a small kid, I had a big dream of flying. One day when I was five, my grandfather made me a bird kite. That made me really excited. When I held a line to let the bird kite fly into the sky, I had a feeling that my dream of flying came true. Since then, I have made it a rule to make a kite every spring. Now my study is full of colourful kites.
As I’m growing older, like a kite, I will leave my parents. But I know the line is always in my parents’ hand. They will watch me as I fly higher and farther.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式;
第二步,分享一个与之相关的自己的故事;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have a dream of doing sth梦想做某事
②come true实现
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①One day when I was five, my grandfather made me a bird kite.(when引导的时间状语从句)
② They will watch me as I fly higher and farther.(as引导时间状语从句)
2.假如你叫李明,你所在学校准备宣传书写的重要性,你作为一名书写爱好者,你将给同学们进行经验介绍。介绍的内容包括:
1) 简单介绍你怎样进行书写训练;
2) 书写的重要性(至少两点) ;
3) 鼓励同学们练好书写。
注意:写作词数80词左右;请在答题卡相应位置作答。参考单词:handwriting书写。
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【答案】例文
Chinese calligraphy is extensive and profound, representing traditional Chinese culture. I really enjoy calligraphy, so I insist on writing a calligraphy post every day to practice calligraphy. At the same time, I also copy some calligraphy books. I believe that using beautiful fonts can better promote Chinese culture. At the same time, it can also better promote China to the world. So we need to practice calligraphy well and contribute our own strength to the suggestions of our motherland.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单介绍你怎样进行书写训练;
第二步,说明书写的重要性;
第三步,最后鼓励同学们练好书写。
[亮点词汇]
①insist on坚持
②at the same time同时
③need to do sth需要做某事
[高分句型]
①Chinese calligraphy is extensive and profound, representing traditional Chinese culture.(现在分词作状语)
②I believe that using beautiful fonts can better promote Chinese culture.(that引导的宾语从句)
3.艺术陶冶情操,涵养生命。你喜欢的艺术形式是什么,有过怎样的经历,用英语写一篇短文。
注意:
1. 词数90左右, 短文开头已给出
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Art plays an important role in our life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Art is an important part of our life. My favourite art is making kites.
According to my grandparents, I looked forward to flying. One year, my grandfather made a kite for me. That made me quite excited. When I held a line to let my kite fly into the sky, I knew my dream of fliying came true.
As I’m growing older, I will leave my parents. But I know the line is still in my parents’ hand. With them behind me, I can fly farther and farther.
Art teaches us a lot. It makes our life rich and colourful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:采用一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:根据图片内容,阐述自己最喜欢的艺术以及怎样的经历。
[写作步骤]
第一步,阐述自己最喜欢的艺术形式;
第二步,阐述自己的经历;
第三步,总结艺术的魅力。
[亮点词汇]
①look forward to期盼;
②make sb adj.使某人……;
③come true实现
[高分句型]
①When I held a line to let my kite fly into the sky, I knew my dream of fliying came true.(when引导时间状语)
②With them behind me, I can fly farther and farther.(with复合结构)
4.研究表明音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响,因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情。请根据下表提示内容,写一篇英语短文。
听音乐前的情绪状态
音乐类型
听音乐后的心境
压力大,过分焦虑
流行音乐
放松
沉迷电脑游戏,兴奋过度
乡村音乐
平静
困倦,疲劳
摇滚音乐
振奋
以自己为例:孤独,悲伤
……
……
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods.
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【答案】One possible version:
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So people use different kinds of music to change moods.
If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music and you will feel relaxed. Some students are crazy about computer games and feel overexcited, so they can listen to country music and they will feel calm and peaceful. Some people feel tired and sleepy, so they can listen to rock music. After listening, they will feel excited. Sometimes I feel lonely and sad. I often listen to light music. It makes me feel happy again.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文。
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据提示材料分别写出听了不同音乐的情绪前后的对比。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,引出音乐的重要性。
第二步,具体阐述每一种音乐带来的不同感受。
[亮点词汇]
① has an important effect on sth对某事有重要的影响
② different kinds of各种各样的
③ be crazy about对……痴迷
[高分句型]
① If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music and you will feel relaxed(if引导了条件状语从句)
② It makes me feel happy again(make sb do sth结构中省略to的动词不定式作宾补)
5.中国文化博大精深,各种艺术形式精彩纷呈。舞蹈、音乐、绘画、茶艺、剪纸、泥塑、孔明灯、京剧等,数不胜数。艺术陶冶情操,涵养生命,丰富充实人生。请写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式,并结合你的经历,谈谈喜欢它的缘由以及它对你的影响。
参考要点:
1.介绍你喜欢的艺术形式(art form);
2.喜欢的缘由;
3.这种艺术形式对你的影响;
要求:
1.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
2. 80-120词(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Art plays an important role in my life. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Art plays an important role in my life. Both my parents and I have a gift for singing. However, once I didn’t like singing because I was afraid of singing in front of many people.
When I was five, I sang Happy Birthday To You in a low voice at my birthday party. After singing, all the people clapped hands. I won high praise from them. I felt happy. My mother encouraged me to keep trying and sing more beautiful songs. At that time I found that singing was interesting.
I get a lot of fun from singing and I also become more confident.
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据参考要点结合自己的经历介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式,谈谈喜欢它的缘由及这种形式对你的影响。要做到要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称为主,时态结合一般现在时和一般过去时。可分为三段式写作:第一段介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式是什么;第二段介绍喜欢这种艺术形式的缘由;第三段介绍其对自己的影响。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
6.舞狮(Lion Dance)是在广东地区非常流行的一种表演,请根据以下提示,介绍广东舞狮。开头已给出,不算入总词数。
1. 舞狮是传统表演;
2. 结合功夫、舞蹈和音乐;
3. 在节日、重要活动中有舞狮;也有举行舞狮竞赛;
4. 现状:练习很辛苦,越来越少人喜欢舞狮;
5. 发展:自由发挥两点。
Lion Dance
Lion Dance is very popular across Guangdong Province._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Lion Dance
Lion Dance is very popular across Guangdong Province. Lion dance is a traditional performance. It is a form of performance that combines Kung Fu, dance and music. Lion Dance is to celebrate a festive day or moment. In some festivals or important activities, there will be a Lion Dance. There are many people who enjoy watching performances. Lion dance competitions are now held in some places.
But this traditional performance is less and less now. Because practice is very hard. Fewer and fewer people like Lion Dance, and more and more young people like modern dance. I hope people can like Lion Dance and spread this traditional art. I hope we can learn more about Lion Dance in our spare time. Let’s join the Lion Dance and protect the traditional culture.
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,介绍舞狮的情况以及舞狮的现状以及发展等,可以适当发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要承接已给出的开头,本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般现在时;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
7.舞狮是中国优秀的传统民间艺术。请你为班级英语角的“人物”版块写一篇短文,介绍一位舞狮(Lion Dance)技艺传承人——叶天。短文内容包含以下要点:
1.叶天的基本信息(男,45岁,佛山人)和学习舞狮的经历(4岁学习舞狮,22岁获得全国舞狮比赛一等奖);
2.他是如何传承舞狮的(到国外表演、教年轻人舞狮,……);
3.你对叶天和舞狮的看法。
要求:1.80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数内;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯;
4.标点正确,书面整洁。
提示词:传承keep...alive
Ye Tian is a master of Lion Dance. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Ye Tian is a master of Lion Dance. He is 45 years old and he is from Foshan, Guangdong. When he was 4, he started to learn Lion Dance. He is very interested in it and practices hard. At the age of 22, he won the first prize in the National Lion Dance Competition.
To help keep the Lion Dance alive, he and the dancers go abroad and perform Lion Dance every year. Besides, he teaches the young in Foshan how to perform it. He also shoots the videos of Lion Dance and uploads them to the website so that more people can know about it.
Lion Dance is one of the traditional Chinese folk arts that brings people happiness during festivals. I really admire Ye Tian. In my view, we should learn more about Lion Dance from Ye Tian and pass it down.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于材料作文。以班级英语角的“人物”版块写一篇短文,介绍舞狮(Lion Dance)技艺传承人——叶天。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第三人称来叙述故事内容;时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。文章可以分成三个段落,第一段介绍叶天的基本信息和学习舞狮的经历;第二段描述他如何传承舞狮的;最后一段谈谈叶天和舞狮的看法。
8.假如你是李华,你的作品在“the Beauty of Nature”主题摄影展上获得了一等奖。你的英语老师邀请你在“英语一分钟演讲”上给同学们做分享。要点如下:
1. 拍摄的时间,地点,内容;
2. 选择这张照片的原因;
3. 参赛感受。
Dear________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all! Thank You!
【答案】例文:
Dear classmates,
My name is Li Hua, who is interested in photography. Here I would like to share my picture with you.
The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass. If you are careful enough, you will also find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture. How cute they are!
It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest. Actually, it also shows us the harmony between the animals and nature. Taking part in this competition makes me realize the beauty of nature and let us protect our Earth together!
That’s all! Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
②时态:以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息,可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先介绍演讲的主题,即介绍自己在摄影展上获得一等奖的照片;
第二步,介绍照片拍摄的时间、地点以及内容;
第三步,阐述选择这张照片的原因;
最后,表达自己的参赛感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②would like to do sth.想要做某事
③harmony和谐
④take part in参加
⑤realize意识到
[高分句型]
①The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass.(which引导定语从句)
②If you are careful enough, you will also find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture.(If引导条件状语从句)
③It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest.(such a/an adj.+名词+that从句)
9.走进艺术世界,感受艺术魅力。你校英语社团正在组织“Enjoy Art”学习交流活动。假如你是李华,请你根据以下图式,写一篇英语发言稿参加活动。
注意:
(1)词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)发言稿应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Enjoy Art
Hello, I am Li Hua. I’m happy to give you a speech on enjoying art.
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That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening!
【答案】例文
Enjoy Art
Hello, I am Li Hua. I’m happy to give you a speech on enjoying art.
Art is especially important in our lives. There are different forms of art in the world, such as film, painting, dance, music and so on.
My favourite art form is painting. I can feel the beauty when I’m painting. I can also learn a lot about different cultures around the world. I think painting is without boundaries, because it can make us know about the styles not only in China but also in other countries.
We need art in our lives! I hope everybody can experience the value of art.
That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,围绕“Enjoy Art”来写,注意不要遗漏要点,并注意适当添加细节,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,自我介绍,引出主题;
第二步,介绍艺术是什么;
第三步,介绍自己喜欢的艺术形式及喜欢的理由;
第四步,书写结尾,提出希望并感谢别人的倾听。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②and so on等等
③know about了解
④not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①I think painting is without boundaries, because it can make us know about the styles not only in China but also in other countries.(省略that的宾语从句;because引导原因状语从句)
②I can feel the beauty when I’m painting.(when引导时间状语从句)
10.假如你是学校国际部学生会主席李华,本周日将组织一次国际部研学活动:参观中国美术馆(National Art Museum of China)。为了活动能顺利进行,请你给国际部的同学们用微信发布信息,内容包括:你们集合的时间和地点,你们在美术馆将要做什么,以及参观时的注意事项。
提示词语:school gate, painting works, art exhibition, silence(静音) the phone , shout
提示问题:
1. When and where are we going to meet?
2. What are we going to do there?
3. What should we pay attention to?
Dear friends,
Here is some information about our visit to the National Art Museum of China. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Lihua
【答案】例文
Dear friends,
Here is some information about our visit to the National Art Museum of China. We are going to visit the National Art Museum of China this Sunday. We are going to meet at the school gate at 9:00 am. Then we will go there by coach.
We will have a variety of interesting activities. First, we will watch a video, which introduces Chinese painting works. Then we will admire an exhibition of the famous paintings by Qi Baishi and Zhang Daqian. Finally, we will have some time to enjoy other exhibitions.
As visitors, we have some rules to follow. Frist, we are not allowed to run or shout in the museum. Second, we munstn’t eat or drink anything there. Finally, we can’t take any photos there.
I hope you all will have a nice time there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是应用文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息中“问题提示”的三个问题的阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“这是有关中国美术馆的一些信息”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照图表提示的三个问题——见面时间和地点、做的具体事项、注意事项均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“我希望你们能在这里玩得开心”的心愿。
[亮点词汇]
①some information一些信息
②have a nice time玩得开心
③are not allowed to不被允许
[高分句型]
① We are not allowed to run or shout in the museum. (被动语态)
②We will watch a video, which introduces Chinese painting works.(定语从句)
11.请仿照下面的格式提示, 用英语写一首五行诗(Cinquain)。(主题不限)
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【答案】例文:
Rain,
Cool, fresh
Falling, splashing, ticking
Raindrop slide over my fingertips.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇五行诗;
②时态;时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:考生应注意要仿照所给出的格式来写五行诗。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作的中心词;
第二步,描述该中心词的一些现象;
第三步,运用完整的句子生动描述该中心词。
[亮点词汇]
①slide over滑过
[高分句型]
①Falling, splashing, ticking(动名词形式)
12.Write at least 60 words about the topic “The ________ I want to recommend”(请以“我想推荐________”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)
在你的日常生活中,肯定有很多给你留下了深刻的印象,如观看过一部电影,阅读过一本书,欣赏过一个表演。请你从以上三个方面选取其中一个内容,向你的朋友作推荐,并说明推荐理由。
(注意:文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)
The ________ I want to recommend
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【答案】例文:
The book I want to recommend
A good book is a good friend. I’d like to introduce a good book Harry Potter.
Harry Potter is a series of seven fantasy novels written by British author J. K. Rowling. The book tells us the adventures of Harry Potter and his friends from the Hogwarts School. Although the characters are complex, we get attached to them easily and feel for their pain and happiness. What’s more, it makes people think what they should do for the people they love and what is really important in life. Harry Potter can show you a fascinating world and inspire your imagination. The strong and lovely characters can help you build your own personality. I’m sure you can also learn about love and friendship from the book.
I do hope you will like the book and my recommendation can help you.
【详解】1.题干解读:题目是半命题作文,要求将标题“The ... I want to recommend”补充完整,向朋友推荐一部电影、一本书或一个表演,并说明推荐的理由。
2.写作指导:写作时要先把题目补充完整,使用一般现在时来介绍要推荐的内容,人称以第三人称为主,说明推荐的理由并做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
13.以"The art form I like best"为题写一篇关于你最喜欢的艺术形式的文章,艺术形式不限,如:画画,剪纸,乐器等,字数不少于90词.可用下列表达:
I have a real gift for …; I became interested in…when I was; I once did not like …because…;
I forgot…until..; Since then,I have been crazy about…I enjoy myself…every time…
.
【答案】Art is full of beauty.Art has many kinds of forms.The art form I like best is music.I have a real gift for music.But I once did not like music because I couldn't find the beauty of music.I became interested in music when I was 6 years old.I'll never forget my first music lesson.My music teacher,Mrs.Green gave me a wonderful music lesson.She let me sing a song before the class,and I did very well.Since then,I have been crazy about music.I enjoy myself every time I have a music lesson.
【详解】本文属于话题作文,描述最喜欢的艺术形式。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如like best,because,became interested in,wonderful,before 以及Since then等。
增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
14.假设你是李明,你的外国网友Eric对中国剪纸很感兴趣,他发来邮件想请你介绍一下这一中国传统艺术。请根据下表提示给他回复邮件。不少于90词。
Chinese paper cutting
long history
over 1,500 years
very popular
in different parts of China, young and old…
how to do
Paper…fold…cut with scissors…
common patterns
Birds, animals, flowers and other things about Chinese history…
places to put up
windows, doors, walls…
symbols
good luck, a happy new year, happy life…
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【答案】Dear Eric,
Hello! I’m very glad to tell you something about Chinese paper cutting.
Paper cutting is very popular in different parts of China. Many young and old people are fond of it and can do well in it. It has been around for over 1,500 years. It sounds very easy but it can be difficult to do well. The paper, usually red, is folded before it is cut with scissors. The most common patterns are birds, animals, flowers and other things about Chinese history. They are usually put up on windows, doors and walls as symbols of wishes for good luck, a happy new year and happy life.
Best wishes!
Your,
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求用英语写一封电子邮件,介绍中国传统的剪纸艺术,属于书信类写作,第一段点明写信目的tell you something about Chinese paper cutting;第二段介绍中国的剪纸文化:历史、颜色、图案和寓意;第三段是祝福语。
2.例文点评:这篇习作共三个自然段,是“总分式”结构,用第三人称叙述,时态是一般现在时。本文内容丰富,格式正确,表达条理,是一篇优秀的习作。
3.高分亮点:
短语:be glad to do、Chinese paper cutting、in different parts of China、be fond of、be difficult to do、be cut with、put up on、good luck
句型:Many young and old people are fond of it and can do well in it.(并列结构)
The paper, usually red, is folded before it is cut with scissors.(时间状语从句)
They are usually put up on windows, doors and walls as symbols of wishes for good luck, a happy new year and happy life.(复杂被动结构)
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
15.假如你是李明,你校英文报将征集以“摄影”为主题的征文。请选择你最喜欢的一张照片,分享照片背后的故事。
要点:
1. 描述照片;
2. 分享故事;
3. ……
注意:
1. 词数80-100;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文题目已给出,不计入总词数。
I’m Li Ming and I’d like to introduce a photo that is very special. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I’m Li Ming and I’d like to introduce a photo that is very special.
During last summer vacation, I visited the Great Wall with my parents. My father took this photo of me. In the photo, I was sitting in front of a huge rock. On the rock, there is a famous saying: “One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.”
The Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders in the world. As a Chinese, I’m very proud of it. I felt very excited when I stood on it.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示问题,介绍自己最喜欢的照片,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二、三两段描述最喜欢的照片,分享照片背后的故事和自己的感受。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
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