内容正文:
应用文写作专项
Learning Objectives:
After this class, you are able to:
1. learn to examine the topic by analyzing the title;
2. master the expression of data analysis by rewriting sentences;
3. perfect the writing by using writing trilogy;
一、“五定”审题,“三段”谋篇
写作三部曲:
审题: “五定”:定要点,定体裁、人称、时态,定结构谋篇:“三段式”:开头、主体、结尾
二、斟酌字句,设计亮点
三、巧妙连接,完美成篇
你校英文报近期开展了以“Which Matters More —Major or University?”为题的调查。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文并投稿,内容包括:
1 . 调查结果描述;2 . 观点分析;3 . 你的看法。
注意:1 . 词数80 左右;2 . 短文题目已给出。
体裁:
人称:
时态:
短文投稿
第三人称
一般现在时
原题再现
体裁不清,结构不明
Appreciation of articles
Generally speaking, both major and university play vital roles in senior high students’ academic performances and career paths. Recently, a survey was conducted about which matters more, one’s major or university.
Recently, a survey themed ‘which matters more---major or university?’ was conducted by our school’s English newspaper.
过渡句
二、斟酌字句,设计亮点 : para.1
巧用从句、非谓语
描述图表所反映的现象
The results are as follow.
二、斟酌字句,设计亮点 : para.2
如何描绘图表信息:
“如图所示:”
1) As the chart shows/indicates/illustrates….
2)According to the chart, …3)As is shown in the chart,…
4)As can be seen from the chart,…
二、斟酌字句,设计亮点 : para.2
如何描绘图表信息:
“描述结果:”
1)According to the chart, … percent of the students …, followed by …, which accounts for ….
2)Students who choose...are … percent and Students who choose…are… percent respectively.
词汇匮乏,表达单一
分析数据
如何表达“48% 的同学认为学校更重要”?
Around half of the students...
almost half of the students...
there are 48% of the students...
....account for 48%
分数
As it turned out, 48 percent believe the university plays a more important role in shaping their future. With access to academic training, lectures and experiences of different clubs in university, an excellent university brings many unseen benefits. However, 32 percent argue one's major matters more. After all, different majors will lead to different career paths which ultimately contribute to different incomes. Still, 19 % have ambiguous thoughts yet.
二、斟酌字句,设计亮点 : para.3
进行简单评论
·评论现象:数字背后反映的现象(一分为二:positive+negative)
分析原因:造成现象的原因
·个人评价:你的观点+原因
1)It is a rewarding sight to see that…
2)However, the importance of .... can’t be ignored since....
1)The reason why...is that
2)The change in...largely result from the fact that...
1)From my point of view, I …
2)As far as I'm concerned, it would be wise...
Personally, I believe our life is not necessarily determined by them. Individual development is closely related to our overall performance in the university.
个人观点
三、巧妙连接,完美成篇
Generally speaking, both major and university play vital roles in senior high students’ academic performances and career paths. Recently, a survey was conducted about which matters more, one’s major or university.
As it turned out, 48 percent believe the university plays a more important role in shaping their future. With access to academic training, lectures and experiences of different clubs in university, an excellent university brings many unseen benefits. However, 32 percent argue one's major matters more. After all, different majors will lead to different career paths which ultimately contribute to different incomes. Still, 19 % have ambiguous thoughts yet.
Personally, I believe our life is not necessarily determined by them. Individual development is closely related to our overall performance in the university.
图表类作文
描述图标所反映的现象
根据图表分析产生这种现象的原因
发表评论,提出自己的看法
(2022年·全国乙)学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:1. 学习活动状况描述;2. 简单评论;3. 你的建议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
链接高考
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’ m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’ re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’ s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’ s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.
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