期中复习之书面表达20篇（上海期中真题）-2024-2025学年九年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（牛津上海版）

期中复习之书面表达20篇（上海期中真题） 1．（23-24九年级上·上海普陀·期中）假设你是初三学生李华，你校正计划在12月底举办迎新年活动，有三项活动可供选择 1.新年音乐会 (a New Year Concert) 2.爱心义卖 (a charity sale) 3.制作短视频 (making short videos) 现向全校学生征求意见，请给负责任李老师写封信，信的内容包括： 1.你的一个选择； 2.你的理由 (至少两条) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24九年级上·上海静安·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “I Want to Do Something for My Parents” Use the following points as a reference. What do you want to do for your parents? Why do you want to do it? How are you going to do it? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（23-24九年级上·上海青浦·期中）Some of the Grade Nine students are too busy to take part in after-school clubs. Some parents also want them to give up their hobbies. Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic. “Is it time to give up everything except study? ”（以“是否要放弃除了学习以外的一切”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） Use the following questions as a reference.  (以下问题仅供参考) 1. What is your opinion on taking part in after-school clubs? 2. Why? (Please give two reasons to support your ideas. ) 3. Give one or two suggestions to solve the problems? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（23-24九年级上·上海闵行·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Spend time _____________”（以“花时间去……”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） 如果你把时间花在阅读上，你就会收获知识；如果你把时间花在运动上，你就会收获强健…… 你曾经把时间花在哪里？或者愿意把时间花在哪里？请分享你的经历或计划吧！ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（23-24九年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A/An ________ moment in my life”. (以“我生命中的________一刻”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) (注意：1、在答题纸上将题目补充完整。 2、短文中不得出现任何人名，校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（22-23九年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “His/Her/Their ________ Warmed My Heart.”(以“他/她/他们的 ________ 温暖了我”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个字的短文，标点符号不占格) 困难时期，志愿者们的帮助；孤独时，朋友的陪伴；沮丧时，师长的鼓励…… 我们总是被很多善意围绕着, 让我们感到温暖。请先补全题目，然后结合自己的经历，谈谈你的感悟。    （注意：短文中不得出现姓名、班级等个人信息，否则不予评分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（22-23九年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write at least 60 words to talk about the story that you read in Reading D．Think about what his mom gave Kemmons and how he succeeded. Combine yourself to write down your successful experiences or feelings. 想一想文中的主人公Kemmons是如何成功地成为了一名成功人士，他的妈妈给予了他什么？请结合你自己成功的一次经历谈谈对 D 篇故事中的最后一句话含义的理解或感悟，字数不少于 60 个词。 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（22-23九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Some advice for the younger students at my junior middle school”. (以“给我初中母校的学弟学妹们的一些忠告”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)（20 words) （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分） Suggested points: (下列问题供参考） 1. Now that you’re going to graduate, what do you think of your junior middle school life? 2. What advice do you have for the younger students? (Give at least 2 pieces) Add supportive details to each piece of the advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（22-23九年级上·上海普陀·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “________ can make a difference”. (以“……起重要作用”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 提示：在学习或生活中，我们有时候会遇到棘手的局面。什么因素帮助你度过了难关？什么因素对自身、他人或者周围环境产生了影响？请补全标题，并结合自身经历，谈谈它的重要性。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（22-23九年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I want to have ________”.(以“我想要________”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 在每个人的心中，总会渴望拥有某样东西。在你的生日来临之际，你想拥有什么样的礼物？一个宠物狗/猫，一台手提电脑，一次旅行……用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你想拥有它的理由及你会有怎样的想法或感受。 ( 注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) The following is for reference only. (以下内容仅供参考） （1）I want to have a/an/the/... （2）With..., I can... _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Please write a letter of at least 60 words to the school principal according to the given situation. (根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信，标点符号不占格） 美丽的环境，丰富的活动，让我们在学校的生活充满了欢笑与收获。然而，学校里还是不可避免地存在一些不文明现象。作为一名初三年级学生，你深感忧虑，并打算给校长写一封信。 在这封信中，请你列举在学校里见到的一些不文明现象并选择一个谈谈你对此的看法并提出一个（些）可行的建议。 （注意：文中不得出现考生姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） The following expressions are for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考） ·inappropriate behaviors ·What worries me the most is that. . . ·It might be a good idea for. . . to. . . ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．（23-24九年级上·上海黄浦·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假设你是中华中学初三学生李华。校学生会将代表全体初三学生在毕业典礼上送一份小礼物给本年级的每位老师，现正在征集礼物创意。请你给学生会主席王明同学写一封邮件，谈谈你的想法。 要点： 1.推荐一份你认为合适的礼物； 2.说明你推荐该礼物的原因。 请注意短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “At that moment, I felt______”. ( 以“那一刻，我感到......”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 在你的生活中，曾经有过哪一刻让你记忆深刻？那一刻发生了什么？带你给怎样的感受？请结合自己的真实经历，谈谈你的真实感想。 （ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（20-21九年级上·上海虹口·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My personal hero”. （以“我眼中的英雄”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Daisy’s class was asked to write about their personal heroes. Her father was excited to find out that she had chosen him. “Why did you pick me?” He asked. “Because I couldn’t spell Arnold Schwarzenegger （阿诺施瓦辛格）,” she said. 人们心目中的英雄各不相同，因为每个人选择的理由不同：可以是上面小朋友的爸爸；可以是在新冠（COVID-19），牺牲了时间甚至是生命的医护人员；也可以是不顾安危，谁是真正的英雄？请结合身边的实例（听到，看到或自己的亲身经历），谈谈你对英雄的诠释。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．（21-22九年级上·上海松江·期中）Some students take an active part in after-school clubs. Recently, as Grade Nine students, they feel too busy to care about so many activities. Some parents also want them to give up their hobbies. Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Is it time to give up everything except study?”　(以“是否要放弃除了学习以外的一切?”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Use the following points as a reference.　(以下问题仅供参考) 1.What is your opinion on taking part in after-school clubs? 2.Why? Please give two reasons to support your ideas. (注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．（21-22九年级上·上海奉贤·期中）In 60-100 words. write a letter of complaint according to the given situation and prompts. (根据所给情景和提示，写一篇60-100词投诉信) write a letter of complaint to the manager of an online shopping site about the products that you bought and aren’t happy with. In your letter. · explain why you’re writing the letter · give details of your order (订单) · describe the problem with the product(s). · say what you want the manager to do Dear Sir and Madam. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to a positive reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 17．（19-20九年级上·上海·期中）Writing.（作文） Write at least 60 words about the topic “My opinion on playing computer games”（以“我对玩电脑游戏的看法”为题, 写一段不少于60个词的短文, 标点符号不占格。） （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分。） Suggested questions：（以下内容仅供参考） 1. What is your opinion about playing computer games? 2. Why do you think so? （Give at least two reasons） 3. What suggestions will you give about playing computer games? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18．（19-20九年级上·上海金山·期中）Writing(作文) Write a passage in at least 60 words on the topic"________makes/make my life better”. (随着科技的发展,我们的生活方式有了很多变化,共享单车、网购、智能手机等已进入我们的 生活。请选择其中一项,结合你平时的使用体验,以“______使我的生活更美好”为题, 谈谈它是如何方便你的生活的,写一篇不少于60字的短文,标点符号不占格。) (注意: 文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。) 19．（19-20九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Writing (作文): Write at least 60 words about the topic “______ is more important a way to learn the world” （以“______是更好的了解世界的方式”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Some people think that reading is more important than travelling in order to understand the people and the world. Others think that travelling is more important. What’s your opinion? Suggested questions(以下问题仅供参考) 1. What is more important a way to learn the world, reading or travelling? 2. Why do you think it’s more important? (Give at least 2 reasons.) （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） ficult. I would choose a subject that best suits me as a major. (Any reasonable answers are acceptable) 20．（20-21九年级上·上海·期中）Writing（作文） Write passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A Trip to …”（根据题目“一次……之旅”，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） A Trip to… ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 期中复习之书面表达20篇（上海期中真题） 1．（23-24九年级上·上海普陀·期中）假设你是初三学生李华，你校正计划在12月底举办迎新年活动，有三项活动可供选择 1.新年音乐会 (a New Year Concert) 2.爱心义卖 (a charity sale) 3.制作短视频 (making short videos) 现向全校学生征求意见，请给负责任李老师写封信，信的内容包括： 1.你的一个选择； 2.你的理由 (至少两条) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. Li, The wonderful junior high school life is coming to an end. I hope our graduation ceremony is colorful and interesting. This is my activity plan. I think making short videos are good activities. We can make short videos of the three years’ experiences to show our study, life and love. Besides, it can be a good memory for us in the future. What’s more, it is also useful for us to promote our school’s cultures to others. I hope my advice is helpful to you. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求向负责任李老师阐述你对毕业典礼活动的初步设想，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出自己的活动计划； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍1-2个活动并说明设计理由； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①come to an end结束 ②in the future在将来 ③What’s more更多的是 ④useful有用的 [高分句型] ①What’s more, it is also useful for us to promote our school’s cultures to others. (it作形式主语的固定句型) ②I hope my advice is helpful to you.（省略that的宾语从句） 2．（23-24九年级上·上海静安·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “I Want to Do Something for My Parents” Use the following points as a reference. What do you want to do for your parents? Why do you want to do it? How are you going to do it? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: My parents work hard every day and they take good care of me. I want to do something for them. I will help do some housework. After a day’s work, they are usually very tired. I will try to clean the house to make it tidy. Usually they cook meals for me, so when I’m free, I will cook a meal for them, especially on weekends. When Mother’s Day and Father’s Day come, I will make a card for them by myself to give thanks to them. Parents bring us up. We should learn to look after them. I want them to feel proud of me. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：题目要求根据提示谈谈想为父母做的事情，并说明为什么，以及如何去做。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。 [写作步聚] 第一步，开篇切入主题； 第二步，根据所给要点，依次想为父母做的事情、原因以及如何去完成； 第三步，最后总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①take good care of 好好照顾 ②try to do 努力做 ③make...for...为……做…… [高分句型] ①After a day’s work, they are usually very tired.（名词所有格） ②When Mother’s Day and Father’s Day come, I will make a card for them by myself to give thanks to them.（when引导的时间状语从句） 3．（23-24九年级上·上海青浦·期中）Some of the Grade Nine students are too busy to take part in after-school clubs. Some parents also want them to give up their hobbies. Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic. “Is it time to give up everything except study? ”（以“是否要放弃除了学习以外的一切”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） Use the following questions as a reference.  (以下问题仅供参考) 1. What is your opinion on taking part in after-school clubs? 2. Why? (Please give two reasons to support your ideas. ) 3. Give one or two suggestions to solve the problems? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Is it time to give up everything except study?     It is a difficult task for Grade Nine students to balance their study and hobbies. Some people may say that we have already had a lot of homework and we have little time to do what we like. But I think it is very necessary for students to join the after-school clubs.     First, I think joining the after-school clubs can help us learn more knowledge and enter a better university in the future. If we go to a good university, we may get a good job in the future. Second, we can do what we like which makes us relax and study better.     In my opinion, we should learn to solve this problem. For example, maybe we can discuss with our club members when we have problems in study and help each other.     I don’t think it is just a waste of time to take part in after-clubs. Instead, it is good for our study and growth. 【详解】［总体分析］ ① 题材：本题是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：本文用一般现在时； ③ 提示：阐述自己对于初三学生是否要为了学习放弃俱乐部活动的观点，需要遵照所给要求写作，适当补充细节，理由充分合理，三观正确。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，阐述自己对于初三学生是否要为了学习放弃俱乐部活动观的点，为文章确定基调； 第二步，分条列举自己的观点，要注意理由充分合理，价值观正确； 第三步，提出解决方法； 第四步，总结观点，得出结论。 ［亮点词汇］ ① balance 平衡 ② in the future 在未来 ③ for example 比如 ［高分句型］ ① If we go to a good university, we may get a good job in the future. （条件状语从句） ② For example, maybe we can discuss with our club members when we have problems in study and help each other. （时间状语从句） 4．（23-24九年级上·上海闵行·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Spend time _____________”（以“花时间去……”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） 如果你把时间花在阅读上，你就会收获知识；如果你把时间花在运动上，你就会收获强健…… 你曾经把时间花在哪里？或者愿意把时间花在哪里？请分享你的经历或计划吧！ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Spend Time on Reading Nowadays, the pace of everyday life is faster than before. Most modern people are anxious living. However, I have entertainments to relax myself. One of them is reading. To my great joy, I was soon able to read books by myself. As soon as I finished my homework, I always chose a book and sat in front of my desk to enjoy it. I’m fond of reading novels, and my favorite is “Harry Potter”. In addition to Harry Potter book, I enjoy reading magazines, newspapers and so on in my free time. Reading not only makes me happy but also gives me plenty of information and knowledge as well. Never do I feel bored or tired when reading. In a word, it’s worthwhile to take time to read. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，引出话题。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“介绍自己喜欢阅读的书”、以及“阅读的好处”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。 第三步，书写结语，总结观点。 [亮点词汇] ①modern现代的 ②relax oneself 放松自己 ③one of………其中之一 ④to one’s great joy令某人非常高兴的是 ⑤be able to do sth能够做某事 ⑥by oneself通过某人自己 ⑦as soon as一……就…… ⑧in front of在……前面 ⑨be fond of doing sth喜欢做某事 ⑩in addition to除……之外 [高分句型] ①As soon as I finished my homework, I always chose a book and sat in front of my desk to enjoy it. (as soon as 引导的时间状语从句) ②Never do I feel bored or tired when reading.  (倒装句) 5．（23-24九年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A/An ________ moment in my life”. (以“我生命中的________一刻”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) (注意：1、在答题纸上将题目补充完整。 2、短文中不得出现任何人名，校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文                                                                                                                       An important moment in my life    An important moment in my life was when I won first place in the school science fair. I had spent weeks working on my project, and when the judges announced my name, I felt a rush of pride and accomplishment. It showed me that hard work and dedication really do pay off. This moment changed the way I saw myself and gave me the confidence to pursue my interests in science. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍了我生命中最重要的一刻； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”。 ③ 提示：本篇作文为话题作文，写作时需围绕话题进行展开描写，准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语等，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总结我生命中最重要的一刻是什么时刻。 第二步，描述这一刻的发生的事和感想。 第三步，总结生命中最重要的一刻对自己产生的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①spend time doing sth花费时间做某事 ②work on致力于 ③a rush of一阵 ④pay off回报 [高分句型] ①An important moment in my life was when I won first place in the school science fair.（表语从句） ②It showed me that hard work and dedication really do pay off. （宾语从句） 6．（22-23九年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “His/Her/Their ________ Warmed My Heart.”(以“他/她/他们的 ________ 温暖了我”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个字的短文，标点符号不占格) 困难时期，志愿者们的帮助；孤独时，朋友的陪伴；沮丧时，师长的鼓励…… 我们总是被很多善意围绕着, 让我们感到温暖。请先补全题目，然后结合自己的经历，谈谈你的感悟。    （注意：短文中不得出现姓名、班级等个人信息，否则不予评分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Her Actions Warmed My Heart Today, I want to say thanks to my best friend Tina. She is a lovely girl with big eyes. She’s always friendly to everyone. Also, she enjoys reading in her free time. One day, I cried sadly because I found it difficult to learn English well. When Tina saw that, she started to help me with my English after class. With her help, I am good at English now. Thank you, my dear friend. Her actions warmed my heart. 【详解】[总体分析] ①本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括基本信息、具体的事例和对自己的影响，注意不得出现个人真实信息。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍温暖自己的这个人是谁； 第二步，具体介绍这个人的基本信息以及温暖自己的事情； 第三步，书写结语，表达对朋友的感谢，呼应标题。 [亮点词汇] ①say thanks to sb向某人说谢谢 ②be friendly to sb对某人友好 ③help sb with sth帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ①One day, I cried sadly because I found it difficult to learn English well.(find it +adj+to do结构) ②When Tina saw that, she started to help me with my English after class.(when引导时间状语从句) 7．（22-23九年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write at least 60 words to talk about the story that you read in Reading D．Think about what his mom gave Kemmons and how he succeeded. Combine yourself to write down your successful experiences or feelings. 想一想文中的主人公Kemmons是如何成功地成为了一名成功人士，他的妈妈给予了他什么？请结合你自己成功的一次经历谈谈对 D 篇故事中的最后一句话含义的理解或感悟，字数不少于 60 个词。 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Kemmons’ story tells us that encouragement and hope can make people strong, which will help us overcome difficulties and achieve success. I had trouble learning English before. I got bad grades, so I lost heart. My teacher had a long talk with me, and she told me that I should keep hope in my heart. I found confidence again. So I kept on practicing English every day and working hard on it. Each time I had problems in English, I went to my teacher and asked for the solutions. About half a year later, I caught up with others, and I got an A in the final exam. I felt so happy. I think if you have hope in your heart, you will have confidence and be able to face the difficulties bravely and succeed one day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作重点已给出，结合阅读材料和自身经历，表达感悟。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据阅读材料的内容阐述自己的理解； 第二步，具体介绍一次相关的成功经历； 第三步，表达这次经历对自己的启发。 [亮点词汇] ①overcome difficulties克服困难 ②have trouble doing sth做某事有困难 ③keep on doing sth坚持做某事 ④catch up with sb赶上某人 [高分句型] ①Kemmons’ story tells us that encouragement and hope can make people strong, which will help us overcome difficulties and achieve success.（定语从句） ②Each time I had problems in English, I went to my teacher and asked for the solutions.（each time引导的时间状语从句） 8．（22-23九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Some advice for the younger students at my junior middle school”. (以“给我初中母校的学弟学妹们的一些忠告”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)（20 words) （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分） Suggested points: (下列问题供参考） 1. Now that you’re going to graduate, what do you think of your junior middle school life? 2. What advice do you have for the younger students? (Give at least 2 pieces) Add supportive details to each piece of the advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Some advice for the younger students at my junior middle school How time flies! Now you are students of Grade 9. I think my junior high school life is very colorful. Here I’d like to tell you something to make your school life more meaningful. First of all, it is important for you to keep healthy, so don’t forget to exercise every day and have a balanced diet. You should always look on the bright side when you’re in trouble. Second, you’ll be able to make great progress if you develop your study skills. For example, you can have a good study plan and preview the new lessons as well. Besides, you should finish the exercises on your own and solve problems with the help of your classmates or teachers. Third, you should be thankful for your parents because they are the people who are always behind you. You can communicate more and share the happiness and sadness with them. You can also help them with some housework. In addition, you should take good care of them when they feel sick. I hope you will enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：考生应注意提示的问题就是写作的基本方向，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，针对第一个问题，概括自己的初中生活，提出告诉低年级学生一些事情，开篇点题； 第二步，针对第二问题，向低年级学生提出三条建议； 第三步，提出希望。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ② keep healthy保持健康 ③tell sb. sth.告诉某人某事 ④for example例如 ⑤help sb. with sth. 帮助某人做某事 ⑥take good care of好好照顾 [高分句型] ①You should always look on the bright side when you’re in trouble.当你遇到麻烦时，你应该总是看到光明的一面。(when引导的时间状语从句。) ②Third, you should be thankful for your parents because they are the people who are always behind you.第三，你应该感谢你的父母，因为他们是一直在你身后的人。(because引导的原因状语从句。) 9．（22-23九年级上·上海普陀·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “________ can make a difference”. (以“……起重要作用”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 提示：在学习或生活中，我们有时候会遇到棘手的局面。什么因素帮助你度过了难关？什么因素对自身、他人或者周围环境产生了影响？请补全标题，并结合自身经历，谈谈它的重要性。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Love can make a difference In our study or in our life, we sometimes meet difficult situations. However, love from parents can help you out. I had a hard time last spring. I always felt bored and lost interest in everything. What was worse, I refused to communicate with my parents. Luckily, my parents tried every possible way to cheer me up. They cooked delicious food every day and talked about my favorite TV programs with me. I was moved deeply and shared my difficulty with them. Thanks to my parents, I’m getting better and better. I may have more difficulties in the future. But I will not be afraid of any difficulties, because my parents’ love makes me a difference. I’m sure they are always there to give me a hand. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：首先补全题目，然后介绍在学习或生活中帮助你度过了难关的一些因素，并结合自身经历，谈谈它的重要性。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明在学习或生活中，我们有时候会遇到棘手的局面； 第二步，具体阐述是什么让你度过难关，结合自身经历进行介绍； 第三步，最后表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①help sb out帮助某人摆脱困境 ②refuse to do拒绝做某事 ③Thanks to多亏 [高分句型] ①I was moved deeply and shared my difficulty with them.（and连接连个并列结构） ②I’m getting better and better.（比较级句型的使用） ③But I will not be afraid of any difficulties, because my parents’ love makes me a difference. （because引导的原因状语从句） 10．（22-23九年级上·上海奉贤·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I want to have ________”.(以“我想要________”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 在每个人的心中，总会渴望拥有某样东西。在你的生日来临之际，你想拥有什么样的礼物？一个宠物狗/猫，一台手提电脑，一次旅行……用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你想拥有它的理由及你会有怎样的想法或感受。 ( 注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) The following is for reference only. (以下内容仅供参考） （1）I want to have a/an/the/... （2）With..., I can... _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I want to have a magic paintbrush I want to have a paintbrush with magic power. It can make whatever I draw become a reality. With the paintbrush, I can draw a new earth. There will be no pollution on it. The rivers will be clean and the sky will be blue. With the paintbrush, I also want to draw a nice home where people can live happily together like a big family. I also want to have the magic paintbrush to draw a beautiful new world. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇半命题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求补充题目“I want to have ________”进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“简单介绍想要拥有一个魔法画笔”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。阐述想用魔法画笔做什么； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①want to do想要做某事 ②live happily together幸福地生活在一起 [高分句型] With the paintbrush, I also want to draw a nice home where people can live happily together like a big family.（where引导的定语从句） 11．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Please write a letter of at least 60 words to the school principal according to the given situation. (根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信，标点符号不占格） 美丽的环境，丰富的活动，让我们在学校的生活充满了欢笑与收获。然而，学校里还是不可避免地存在一些不文明现象。作为一名初三年级学生，你深感忧虑，并打算给校长写一封信。 在这封信中，请你列举在学校里见到的一些不文明现象并选择一个谈谈你对此的看法并提出一个（些）可行的建议。 （注意：文中不得出现考生姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） The following expressions are for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考） ·inappropriate behaviors ·What worries me the most is that. . . ·It might be a good idea for. . . to. . . ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear president,     I am writing this letter to you very carefully. We all know that the beautiful environment and rich activities make our school life full of laughter and harvest. However, there are still some inappropriate behaviors in schools.     For example, some students throw away rubbish everywhere. And some people destroy public property. I think we should take some measures to stop them from doing these. We can put some signs to tell the students to take care of flowers and trees. At the same time, we can also hold some speeches to let the students know the importance of protecting the environment.     I think the school environment will become more and more beautiful under everyone’s effort. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，陈述校园中的一些不文明现象； 第二步，针对这些问题提出合理的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①full of充满 ②for example例如 ③stop sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事 [高分句型] ①We all know that the beautiful environment and rich activities make our school life full of laughter and harvest.（that引导宾语从句） ②However, there are still some inappropriate behaviors in schools.（there be句型） 12．（23-24九年级上·上海黄浦·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假设你是中华中学初三学生李华。校学生会将代表全体初三学生在毕业典礼上送一份小礼物给本年级的每位老师，现正在征集礼物创意。请你给学生会主席王明同学写一封邮件，谈谈你的想法。 要点： 1.推荐一份你认为合适的礼物； 2.说明你推荐该礼物的原因。 请注意短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Wang Ming, Knowing that you intend to give some presents to all teachers of Junior 3 on behalf of us at the graduation ceremony, I’m writing with utmost pleasure to offer my recommendation to you. What I strongly recommend is the vacuum cup that can keep the water heated. As we all know, teachers need to talk a lot in class, so there is no doubt that drinking hot water is good for their throat. What’s more, if a name or a sentence can be inscribed on the cup to show our sincerity, it will be better. I sincerely hope that you take my recommendation into account. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，根据所给提示完成写作，人称为第一人称。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要表达自己想要推荐礼物的意图； 第二步，介绍自己想要推荐的礼物并说明推荐原因； 第三步，期望对方采纳自己的建议，表达自己的期待。 [亮点词汇] ① intend to do sth. 打算做某事 ② As we all know 众所周知 ③ there is no doubt 毋庸置疑 [高分句型] ① What I strongly recommend is the vacuum cup that can keep the water heated.（what引导的主语从句） ② What’s more, if a name or a sentence can be inscribed on the cup to show our sincerity, it will be better.（if引导的条件状语从句） 13．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “At that moment, I felt______”. ( 以“那一刻，我感到......”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 在你的生活中，曾经有过哪一刻让你记忆深刻？那一刻发生了什么？带你给怎样的感受？请结合自己的真实经历，谈谈你的真实感想。 （ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 At that moment, I felt moved In my life, there are many important moments, but I was moved by an incident which happened in my daily life. One day, when I was on my way home, it was raining heavily. An old lady with no umbrella was walking across the street slowly. Suddenly, a little girl came up to her and shared her umbrella with the old lady. The lady put a bigger part of the umbrella over the girl which made her leave shoulder and arm wet. Later, the little girl realized it and pushed the umbrella towards the lady. However, the lady pushed back. They kept doing this again and again. Finally, the umbrella was put in the middle of them. As a passer-by walking behind them, I felt pretty moved by their kindness for each other. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所有要点，不要遗漏。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍生活中存在很多重要的时刻，引入主题； 第二步，介绍我在回家路上看到的感人一幕； 第三步，介绍我对这一幕的感受。 ［亮点词汇］ ① share sth with sb 和某人分享某物 ② in the middle of 在……中间 ③ passer-by 路人 ［高分句型］ ① The lady put a bigger part of the umbrella over the girl which made her left shoulder and arm wet.（定语从句） ② One day, when I was on my way home, it was raining heavily.（when引导的时间状语从句） 14．（20-21九年级上·上海虹口·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My personal hero”. （以“我眼中的英雄”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Daisy’s class was asked to write about their personal heroes. Her father was excited to find out that she had chosen him. “Why did you pick me?” He asked. “Because I couldn’t spell Arnold Schwarzenegger （阿诺施瓦辛格）,” she said. 人们心目中的英雄各不相同，因为每个人选择的理由不同：可以是上面小朋友的爸爸；可以是在新冠（COVID-19），牺牲了时间甚至是生命的医护人员；也可以是不顾安危，谁是真正的英雄？请结合身边的实例（听到，看到或自己的亲身经历），谈谈你对英雄的诠释。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My personal hero Hi, everyone. The hero in my heart is Zhong Nanshan. He is 84 years old and he comes from Xiamen. He was brave and not afraid of the virus. He never worried about his own safety. He suggested shutting down Wuhan. His advice has saved thousands of lives. I want to be a doctor in the future. I want to save lives like Zhong Nanshan. I hope I can make a contribution to our country in the future. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己心目中的英雄。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第三人称为主。文章开头先点题，介绍自己心目中的英雄是谁，接着介绍他的英勇事迹，最后表达哲理感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 15．（21-22九年级上·上海松江·期中）Some students take an active part in after-school clubs. Recently, as Grade Nine students, they feel too busy to care about so many activities. Some parents also want them to give up their hobbies. Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Is it time to give up everything except study?”　(以“是否要放弃除了学习以外的一切?”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Use the following points as a reference.　(以下问题仅供参考) 1.What is your opinion on taking part in after-school clubs? 2.Why? Please give two reasons to support your ideas. (注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考例文 Most children take part in after-school clubs. Activities include sports, language learning, music, and math classes. It seems that many Grade Nine students who take part in after-school clubs feel too busy to care about so many activities. In order to have more time to study, some parents also want them to give up their hobbies. I think it’s wrong to give up everything except study. First of all, in the after-school club, we can do what we like, which makes us relax and study better. We can discuss with each other when we have problems in study or other aspects. I don’t think it is just a waste of time to take part in after-school clubs. Instead, it is good for our growth. 【详解】题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，议论文写作，写作时可以就话题发表自己的看法，然后就你的观点给出至少两点理由。 写作指导：应用第一、三人称叙述，时态采用一般现在时。首先简单叙述所给材料内容，叙述要条理清晰，应用第三人称，然后给出观点，以及就你的观点给出理由，发表观点应用第一人称。写作中注意叙述顺序，多种句式的使用，符合逻辑关系。保证语法、单词拼写和标点使用正确。 16．（21-22九年级上·上海奉贤·期中）In 60-100 words. write a letter of complaint according to the given situation and prompts. (根据所给情景和提示，写一篇60-100词投诉信) write a letter of complaint to the manager of an online shopping site about the products that you bought and aren’t happy with. In your letter. · explain why you’re writing the letter · give details of your order (订单) · describe the problem with the product(s). · say what you want the manager to do Dear Sir and Madam. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to a positive reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 【答案】例文： Dear manager, I am writing a letter of complaint to the manager of an online shopping site about the product that I bought and aren’t happy with. I feel bad to trouble you, but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about. I bought a pair of shoes of size 36. But it’s not like what the picture says. In addition, I find it very uncomfortable to wear. l am grateful if you take back the pair of shoes. I hope you can settle this matter by next week. I will be looking forward to your reply.   Yours sincerely, Li Ming 【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，写作时应先介绍你写这封信的原因，然后介绍你的订单和产品的问题，最后说出你希望经理做什么，可适当发挥。 2、写作指导：本文应该第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；介绍产品的问题和希望经理做什么时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。 17．（19-20九年级上·上海·期中）Writing.（作文） Write at least 60 words about the topic “My opinion on playing computer games”（以“我对玩电脑游戏的看法”为题, 写一段不少于60个词的短文, 标点符号不占格。） （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分。） Suggested questions：（以下内容仅供参考） 1. What is your opinion about playing computer games? 2. Why do you think so? （Give at least two reasons） 3. What suggestions will you give about playing computer games? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Different people have different ideas about playing computer games. Some people think that playing computer games is good, but others hold the opposite opinion. In my opinion, I think playing computer games is not good. On one hand, playing computer games can waste you a lot of time, which you can use in your study or rest. On the other hand, when you play computer games, you must spend a long time staring at the screen，and it’s harmful to your eyes. But if you want to play computer games, you must manage your time well. After playing computer games, you can do eye exercises to relax your eyes. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目为命题作文，内容围绕“我对玩电脑游戏的看法”展开，内容要包括题目中所提示的三方面内容。 2.例文点评：例文采用三段式结构，第一段提出不同的人们对于玩电脑游戏的不同看法，第二段提出作者自己的看法并陈述理由，第三段针对玩电脑游戏提出建议。整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称有第一人称、第二人称和第三人称；时态主要是一般现在时。 3.高分亮点： 短语：in one’s opinion；on one hand；on the other hand；a lot of；eye exercises。 句型：that引导的宾语从句；which引导的非限制性定语从句；spend time doing sth.；be harmful to。 18．（19-20九年级上·上海金山·期中）Writing(作文) Write a passage in at least 60 words on the topic"________makes/make my life better”. (随着科技的发展,我们的生活方式有了很多变化,共享单车、网购、智能手机等已进入我们的 生活。请选择其中一项,结合你平时的使用体验,以“______使我的生活更美好”为题, 谈谈它是如何方便你的生活的,写一篇不少于60字的短文,标点符号不占格。) (注意: 文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。) 【答案】例文 Internet makes my life better. Modern technology has changed our life and made it better. I think the Internet makes my life more and more convenient. Some years ago, people had to get what they wanted through looking up a lot of information. Finally, people could become tired and spent too much time. But now, if you use the Internet, everything becomes easy. We all hope that modern technology can reach a higher level, because modern technology does make life more convenient. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文介绍的是互联网让生活更美好。第一段点明现代科技的好处Modern technology has changed our life and made it better；然后以互联网为例介绍让生活更方便；最后表达愿望We all hope that modern technology will reach a higher level。 2.例文点评：这篇习作是“总分总”结构，用第一和第三人称叙述，时态以一般现在时为主；内容充实，介绍细致，表达条理，观点明确，是一篇优秀的习作。 3.高分亮点： 高分短语：more and more convenient, some years ago, have to, look up, a lot of, too much, 高分句型： 1). Modern technology has changed our life and made it better.（并列结构） 2). I think the Internet makes my life more and more convenient.（宾语从句） 3). We all hope that modern technology can reach a higher level, because modern technology does make life more convenient.（复杂原因状语从句） 4). But now, if you use the Internet, everything becomes easy.（条件状语从句） 【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。 19．（19-20九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Writing (作文): Write at least 60 words about the topic “______ is more important a way to learn the world” （以“______是更好的了解世界的方式”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Some people think that reading is more important than travelling in order to understand the people and the world. Others think that travelling is more important. What’s your opinion? Suggested questions(以下问题仅供参考) 1. What is more important a way to learn the world, reading or travelling? 2. Why do you think it’s more important? (Give at least 2 reasons.) （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） ficult. I would choose a subject that best suits me as a major. (Any reasonable answers are acceptable) 【答案】例文： Travelling is more important a way to learn the world Some people think that reading is more important than traveling in order to understand the people and the world, but I don’t agree with them. First of all, traveling can let us know more knowledge from the real world, which reading cannot give us. For example, boating in West Lake is far better than reading a book about it. Besides, the experience from your trip can enrich your knowledge and value your life. In my opinion, through traveling, we can learn how to communicate with strange people, protect our environment and make our life more meaningful. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作，写作时要按议论文格式写。开头介绍我认为旅行是更好的了解世界的方法；接下来介绍旅行更重要的原因。 2.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一或第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时，分析旅行是更好的了解世界的方法的原因，介绍全面，条理清晰，用连词连接并列成分，文章前后连贯。 3.高分亮点： 短语：in order to，first of all，for example，in one’s opinion，communicate with。 句型：宾语从句that reading is more important than traveling in order to understand the people and the world；定语从句which reading cannot give us.。 20．（20-21九年级上·上海·期中）Writing（作文） Write passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A Trip to …”（根据题目“一次……之旅”，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） A Trip to… ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A Trip to Hainan Island I still remember my trip to Hainan Island last year. I think Hainan is one of the most wonderful places in China. I went there in December. It was very cold in Shanghai at that time. However, when we arrived in Hainan Island, we felt very hot. It was about 33 centigrade there. It was the first time I saw the sea. The sea there is so blue and beautiful that I felt very relaxed. Diving was the most interesting thing I did there. I saw colourful fishes swimming around me when I was diving. How exciting！ Besides, I tasted fresh fruit there. I stayed there for 5 days. I'll never forget the pleasant trip. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按记叙文格式写。开头介绍我去海南岛的一次旅行；接下来介绍我的感受，看到的风景以及品尝的水果。 2.例文点评：例文采用两段式；用第一或第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时，描述海南的天气，风景和我的感受，介绍全面，条理清晰，用连词连接并列成分，文章前后连贯。 3.高分亮点： 短语：at that time；arrive in；the first time；see sb doing sth。 句型：时间状语从句when we arrived in Hainan Island；定语从句I did there；感叹句How exciting！ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$