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期中复习之书面表达15篇 (上海期中真题) 1．（23-24八年级上·上海青浦·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “My proudest moment” (以“我最自豪的瞬间”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24八年级上·上海宝山·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格） 假设你是Anna，给你的笔友Mandy写一封信，告诉她：你一次不同寻常的经历或最近的困惑。 （注意：1. 信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。         2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。） Use the following points as reference. (以下问题仅供参考） 1. What happened? 2. Why did you think it was unusual/trouble? 3. How did you feel that day? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（23-24八年级上·上海静安·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “When I have trouble with my best friend” 【以“我与好朋友闹矛盾后”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格】 提示：生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢？请就此话题谈谈你的做法以及这样做的理由，可结合自身经历进行阐述。 (注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（23-24八年级上·上海杨浦·期中）According to the subject, write an e-mail to your teacher to explain a problem or trouble you have (60-100 words)，请根据邮件的主题(subject)， 写一篇60-100个词的邮件给你的老师Kim Hart，标点符号不占格。 From: Mary Lee To: Professor Kim Hart Subject: Absence from school for two weeks Dear Kim Hart, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Regards, Mary 5．（23-24八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）请以“That Day, I solved a Trouble”（《那天，我解决了一个麻烦》）为题，写一篇不少于 60 词的短文，标点符号不计入词数。 The following questions are for your reference: *What trouble did you meet with? * How did you solve the trouble? *What did you learn from this experience? 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（23-24八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据所给情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文） 我校正在征集模范学生，下图是其中的四条标准，你最认同哪一条？为什么？请结合自身经历或见闻说明 注意：1. 文中不得出现个人信息，否则不予评分 2. 照抄语篇不得分 3. 请选择一条填在横线上 Be _______________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（22-23八年级上·上海徐汇·阶段练习）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My daily life” (以“我的日常生活”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) Suggested questions: What do you do in your daily life? What do you think of your daily life? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（22-23八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A busy Day at School”.（以”学校里忙碌的一天”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 Use the following points as a guide.（短文须包含下列要点） 1. What do you do at school every day? 2. Why do you think it is a busy day? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（22-23八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about “An unforgettable experience”(以“一次难忘的经历”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文). Suggested points: 1. When and where did the story happen? 2. What happened and how did you deal with it? 3. What have you learned from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（22-23八年级上·上海普陀·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “The hero in my heart” (以“我心中的英雄”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 提示：每个人在成长的过程中总会遇见一些对你产生深远影响的人，他/她是“你心中的英雄”。请你用一件具体事例来讲述你心中的英雄激励你的故事。 （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（22-23八年级上·上海嘉定·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about one of your family members’, your friends’ or your teachers’ daily life on the topic “A day in the life of _______” ( 根据下列问题的提示，以“______ 生活中的一天”为题，写一篇关于某人的日常生活的作文，如：你的一个家庭成员或是你的一个朋友等。要求意思明确，内容连贯，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)    注意：文中不得出现真实人名或校名等信息 Suggested questions: What does he or she do in his or her daily life? What do you think of him or her according to（根据）his or her daily life? What can you learn from him or her?/Do you have any suggestions for him or her? A day in the life of _________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．（22-23八年级上·上海黄浦·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My weekends” for your school Official Account.（自“双减”政策实施以来，学生的课余生活发生了很大的变化。请以“我的周末”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，参与学校的公众号征文活动） （注意：短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） 13．（21-22八年级上·上海黄浦·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A special gift to...”  以“一份给……的特殊礼物”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文,标点符号不占格。必须把题目补充完整。. 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。. Use the following points as a reference. 以下问题仅供参考. •What is your special gift? •Who will you give it to? •Why do you want to give him/her the gift? 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名 、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（21-22八年级上·上海虹口·期中）Sports are believed to be important to people. Do you often do sports or watch sports games? Please talk about the sport that you like within 120 words. The clues are for your reference. 1. What sport do you like to do/to watch? 2. How did you get to know the sport? 3.  How often do you practice it? Any impressive experience?/What are the impressive games like? Your favorite team? 4. What does the sport bring you? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．（21-22八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “_______ healthy life” 通过描写自己或者自己的一个同学（朋友）、一个家人的某一天生活，谈谈健康的生活方式，写一篇不少于60字的短文。要求： 补全作文题目。不得出现任何人名，否则不予评分。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 期中复习之书面表达15篇 (上海期中真题) 1．（23-24八年级上·上海青浦·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “My proudest moment” (以“我最自豪的瞬间”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My proudest moment Last month, I won the school’s English speech contest. I think it was my proudest moment of my junior high. To prepare for the contest, I chose a topic I was interested in: the importance of learning English. I spent hours organizing my ideas. I also practiced my pronunciation to make sure I could speak clearly and confidently. On the big day, I felt nervous. When it was my turn to speak, I took a deep breath and began. As I spoke, I noticed the audience nodding and smiling, which encouraged me to keep going. Finally, my hard work paid off and I felt excited when I got the first prize. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己认为最骄傲的时刻； 第二步，描述自己具体的努力过程； 第三步，最后表达当时的心情。 [亮点词汇] ①take a deep breath深呼吸 ②pay off取得回报 ③the first prize 一等奖 [高分句型] ①I also practiced my pronunciation to make sure I could speak clearly and confidently.（宾语从句） ②When it was my turn to speak, I took a deep breath and began. (when引导的时间状语从句) 2．（23-24八年级上·上海宝山·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格） 假设你是Anna，给你的笔友Mandy写一封信，告诉她：你一次不同寻常的经历或最近的困惑。 （注意：1. 信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。         2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。） Use the following points as reference. (以下问题仅供参考） 1. What happened? 2. Why did you think it was unusual/trouble? 3. How did you feel that day? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Mandy,     How are you doing? On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down on the school playground and hurt my leg. I had to stay in hospital for a month. I felt upset and was worried about my study. Luckily, my classmate Li Hua came to see me in hospital as soon as she heard I was injured. She decided to help me with my study. From then on, she came to teach me every weekend. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind other classmates with Li Hua’s help. I thanked her a lot. Now I know that true friends will always be friends. When friends are in trouble, we should help them. Yours, Anna 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是书信； ②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“一个下雨天，我在学校操场上突然摔倒，伤了腿”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——发生的事、为什么这件事不同寻常、感受等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“当朋友有困难时，我们应该帮助他们。”的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①fell down摔倒 ②as soon as一……就…… ③fall behind落后 [高分句型] ①Luckily, my classmate Li Hua came to see me in hospital as soon as she heard I was injured. (as soon as引导的时间状语从句） ②When friends are in trouble, we should help them. (When引导的时间状语从句) 3．（23-24八年级上·上海静安·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “When I have trouble with my best friend” 【以“我与好朋友闹矛盾后”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格】 提示：生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢？请就此话题谈谈你的做法以及这样做的理由，可结合自身经历进行阐述。 (注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Friends in life also have some minor conflicts for various reasons. So it’s normal for good friends to quarrel. How do you deal with problems like this when you’re having trouble with your friends? I quarreled with my good friend last week. We had a cold war at first. After several days. We had a long talk and we both recognized our mistakes and apologized to each other. Now I can share with you how to deal with these problems. First, you should have a good talk and find out why you quarreled with each other. Second, Find out what’s wrong with you and say sorry to her or him. Third, try to do something meaningful for your best friend. I think you will be good friends again. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，要写出自己的意见。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体引出“生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述你与朋友间产生的矛盾； 第三步，谈谈你的做法。 [亮点词汇] ①have trouble with有困难、有矛盾 ②quarrel with sb与某人争吵 ③apologized to sb向某人道歉 [高分句型] ①How do you deal with problems like this when you’re having trouble with your friends? (when引导的时间状语从句) ②I think you will be good friends again. (宾语从句) 4．（23-24八年级上·上海杨浦·期中）According to the subject, write an e-mail to your teacher to explain a problem or trouble you have (60-100 words)，请根据邮件的主题(subject)， 写一篇60-100个词的邮件给你的老师Kim Hart，标点符号不占格。 From: Mary Lee To: Professor Kim Hart Subject: Absence from school for two weeks Dear Kim Hart, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Regards, Mary 【答案】范文： From: Mary Lee To: Professor Kim Hart Subject: Absence from school for two weeks Dear Kim Hart, I’m sorry to tell you that I will be absent from school for two weeks. My parents are out of town on business now. They won’t be back for a while. My grandmother is ill in hospital and needs someone to look after her. So I have to take two weeks off to look after my grandma. I will take the initiative to learn in the hospital. If I have a problem I don’t understand, I will ask you or my classmates for help in time. I ask for your approval. Regards, Mary 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是邮件； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很遗憾地告诉您，我将缺课两周。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——向老师解释遇到的问题要阐述清楚。 第三步：书写结语。陈述“我请求您的批准。”的想法。 [亮点词汇] ①on business出差 ②look after照顾 ③be absent from缺席 [高分句型] ①If I have a problem I don’t understand, I will ask you or my classmates for help in time. (If引导的条件状语从句） ②I’m sorry to tell you that I will absent from school for two weeks. (宾语从句) 5．（23-24八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）请以“That Day, I solved a Trouble”（《那天，我解决了一个麻烦》）为题，写一篇不少于 60 词的短文，标点符号不计入词数。 The following questions are for your reference: *What trouble did you meet with? * How did you solve the trouble? *What did you learn from this experience? 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： That day, I solved a trouble Since I became a Grade 9 student, I have had a colourful school life. However, I still meet with some troubles. One day, it was my grandma’s eightieth birthday. It was really a meaningful day for my family. Since my parents were occupied with the decoration of the house, they asked me to order a cake. However, I was so careless that I left the matter behind my mind when my friends invited me to play basketball that day. I felt sorry for that, but I didn’t lose myself in self-blame. I made a handmade cake with cookies and colourful candies. Grandma was very happy when she saw the special cake. When terrible things happen, what we should do is not to find fault with others, but to use our intelligent brain to solve them. In our daily life, there are occasions when we are faced with something unpleasant. And self-blame, which is always the first choice of some people, is really of little use in solving the problems. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给的问题提示，讲述你解决一个麻烦的经历，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，交代事情发生的时间，地点和经过，以及是如何解决的； 第二步，讲述自己从这次经历中获得了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①be occupied with sth忙于做某事 ②leave...behind把……遗留在 ③play basketball打篮球 ④not...but不是……而是…… [高分句型] ①Since I became a Grade 9 student, I have had a colourful school life.  (since引导的时间状语从句) ②I was so careless that I left the matter behind my mind when my friends invited me to play basketball that day.(so...that引导的结果状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句) ③And self-blame, which is always the first choice of some people, is really of little use in solving the problems.(定语从句) 6．（23-24八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据所给情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文） 我校正在征集模范学生，下图是其中的四条标准，你最认同哪一条？为什么？请结合自身经历或见闻说明 注意：1. 文中不得出现个人信息，否则不予评分 2. 照抄语篇不得分 3. 请选择一条填在横线上 Be _______________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Be honest      I think being honest is the most important for a model student. As we know, honesty is one of people’s good qualities. Everyone needs honesty and I hope everyone is honest. Last Friday, my best friend Li Ming wanted to copy my homework because he played computer games until midnight and had no time to do his homework. But I thought it was not good, so I told him not to copy my homework and I would help him next time. Finally he understood me and agreed with me.     Honesty is quite an important quality to a person. So I think as a model student, he must be honest. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏方框中“提示信息”的四个方面选一个模范学生的标准进行阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我认为诚实是模范学生最重要的一个品质”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示问题的三个方面——哪一条标准、原因、自身经历或见闻均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“作为一个模范学生，他必须诚实”的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①the most important最重要的 ②good qualities好品质 ③copy my homework抄我的作业 [高分句型] ① Last Friday, my best friend Li Ming wanted to copy my homework because he played computer games until midnight and had no time to do his homework.(because引导的原因状语从句） ② I think being honest is the most important for a model student. (宾语从句) 7．（22-23八年级上·上海徐汇·阶段练习）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My daily life” (以“我的日常生活”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) Suggested questions: What do you do in your daily life? What do you think of your daily life? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文      I am a student. I get up at six o’clock. I read English for half an hour. At seven ten I have breakfast. After that, I walk to school because it is not far from my home to school. I have five lessons in the morning. I do morning exercises with my classmates after the second lesson. At 11:30, I go home for lunch. In the afternoon, I have three lessons. After class, we often do sports on the playground. After supper, I read newspapers or go out for a walk, then I do my homework for one and a half hours. At half past ten, I go to bed.      What a busy day I have every day! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文的时态为一般现在时； ③提示：本文以时间为顺序，注意衔接自然。 [写作步骤] 第一步，详细的以时间顺序介绍日常生活； 第二步，结束语，对自己的日常生活的评价； [亮点词汇] at half past ten在10点半 [高分句型] What a busy day I have every day!（感叹句） 8．（22-23八年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A busy Day at School”.（以”学校里忙碌的一天”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 Use the following points as a guide.（短文须包含下列要点） 1. What do you do at school every day? 2. Why do you think it is a busy day? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I am a middle school student. I am very busy every day. Let me tell you about my busy day at school. I often go to school at 6:30, and get to school at 6:45. We often begin our classes at 7:00. We have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. After class we often have sports on the playground. Sometimes, I do some cleaning at 5:00 in the classroom in the afternoon. I often go home at 5:55 after school. After supper, I must go to school. At school, I have to finish so much homework that I get home at 8:30 in the evening. I am very tired, but I must go over my lessons. It is really a busy day for me because I put my heart and soul into study. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中你认为这是忙碌的一天的原因，注意要点要齐全。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题。表明自己每天都很忙碌； 第二步，具体介绍自己白天做的事情； 第三步，介绍自己晚饭后要做的事情，并阐明这是忙碌的一天的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①have sports进行体育锻炼 ②do cleaning做清洁，打扫卫生 ③so...that...太……以致于…… ④go over复习 [高分句型] ①At school, I have to finish so much homework that I get home at 8:30 in the evening.（that引导的结果状语从句） ②It is really a busy day for me because I put my heart and soul into study.（because引导的原因状语从句） 9．（22-23八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about “An unforgettable experience”(以“一次难忘的经历”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文). Suggested points: 1. When and where did the story happen? 2. What happened and how did you deal with it? 3. What have you learned from it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     Last summer I had an unforgettable experience that I climbed Mount Huang with my dad. I felt excited because it was the first time for me to climb a mountain.     At first, I hiked so quicky that my dad couldn’t follow me up. But after a while, I was too tired to go on. I wanted to give up because it seemed impossible for me to reach the top of the mountain. Just then, my dad said, “No pain, no gain. You should not give up, or you’ll never succeed.” He encouraged me a lot. I stood up and rush towards my goal. Finally, I made it! I was really amazed!     The unforgettable experience taught me a lesson that I would never succeed if I give up easily. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的难忘经历是去了哪里，引出下文的介绍； 第二步，讲述自己的难忘经历； 第三步，介绍从这次经历收获了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①too…to 太……而不能…… ②give up 放弃 [高分句型] ① Last summer I had an unforgettable experience that I climbed Mount Huang with my dad（that引导定语从句） ②I felt excited because it was the first time for me to climb a mountain.（because引导原因状语从句） 10．（22-23八年级上·上海普陀·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “The hero in my heart” (以“我心中的英雄”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 提示：每个人在成长的过程中总会遇见一些对你产生深远影响的人，他/她是“你心中的英雄”。请你用一件具体事例来讲述你心中的英雄激励你的故事。 （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Hero in My Heart Yuan Longping is a hero in my heart. He was born in 1930 and died at the age of 91. Mr. Yuan spent nearly 60 years doing research on better rice in order to make people in the world have enough food. And he was successful! He was honored as Father of Hybrid Rice. I think Mr. Yuan was a great man. He was so selfless and hard-working that I respect him very much. I will never forget him. As a student, I have decided not to waste any food from now on. Also, I’ll study harder than before so that I can master more knowledge and skills. When I grow up, I’ll work hard for our country like him. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：本文话题已给出，介绍心目中的英雄，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题引出自己心目中的英雄； 第二步，详细介绍其基本情况并介绍他都做了什么事； 第三步，写你为什么崇拜他； 第四步，写你从他身上学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①at the age of在……岁 ②in order to为了 ③be honored as被授予 ④study harder更努力地学习 [高分句型] ①I think Mr.Yuan was a great man.（宾语从句） ②He was so selfless and hard-working that I respect him very much.（so...that引导的结果状语从句） ③I’ll study harder than before so that I can master more knowledge and skills. （so that引导的目的状语从句） 11．（22-23八年级上·上海嘉定·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about one of your family members’, your friends’ or your teachers’ daily life on the topic “A day in the life of _______” ( 根据下列问题的提示，以“______ 生活中的一天”为题，写一篇关于某人的日常生活的作文，如：你的一个家庭成员或是你的一个朋友等。要求意思明确，内容连贯，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)    注意：文中不得出现真实人名或校名等信息 Suggested questions: What does he or she do in his or her daily life? What do you think of him or her according to（根据）his or her daily life? What can you learn from him or her?/Do you have any suggestions for him or her? A day in the life of _________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A day in the life of my good friend Mary is my good friend. She usually gets up at 6 o’clock. At 6:30 she eats breakfast. Then she goes to school by bus at 7:00 a.m. She has classes from 8:00 a.m. to 3:00 p.m. In the afternoon, she plays basketball with her friends at 3:30. She goes home at 4:30. And she does her homework at 5:15 p.m. At 6: 30, she eats dinner with her family. She usually goes to bed at 9:30 p.m. I think she is a hardworking and active girl. I realized that I should make full use of my time. I think she should do more after-school activities. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：先补充完整题目，再根据所给的问题提示介绍某人生活的一天，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出要介绍的人物，按照时间的先后顺序介绍他/她一天的生活安排； 第二步，对他/她的生活做出评价，并谈谈自己从中学到了什么，有什么建议； [亮点词汇] ①from...to...从……到…… ②play basketball打篮球 ③do her homework做作业 [高分句型] I realized that I should make full use of my time.（宾语从句） 12．（22-23八年级上·上海黄浦·期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My weekends” for your school Official Account.（自“双减”政策实施以来，学生的课余生活发生了很大的变化。请以“我的周末”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，参与学校的公众号征文活动） （注意：短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） 【答案】例文 My weekends It’s really wonderful news that the policy of “double−lightening the burden” has been carried out. My school life has changed a lot. My weekend life becomes colorful. I used to have a lot of homework on weekends. I don’t have time to do what I want to do. Now the study pressure is reduced and the homework is reduced. I sleep more and exercise more. I have more time to do what I like. I can read books to learn more knowledge. I can also go on a trip. More importantly, I have more time to stay with my parents and live a happier life. These changes have given me more time to develop their hobbies. I have more time to take part in outdoor activities on weekends. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为一般现在时； ③提示：以“我的周末”为题，结合“双减”政策以来，学生的课余生活发生的变化进行写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出重点要介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍“双减”后的周末生活； 第三步，书写结语，表达“双减”带来的好处。 [亮点词汇] ①a lot许多 ②a lot of许多 ③on weekends在周末 ④go on a trip去旅行 ⑤take part in参加 [高分句型] ①More importantly, I have more time to stay with my parents and live a happier life.（不定式作目的状语） 13．（21-22八年级上·上海黄浦·期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A special gift to...”  以“一份给……的特殊礼物”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文,标点符号不占格。必须把题目补充完整。. 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。. Use the following points as a reference. 以下问题仅供参考. •What is your special gift? •Who will you give it to? •Why do you want to give him/her the gift? 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名 、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A special gift to my good friend I have never forgotten a gift which gave it to my good friend, Lucy. I gave it on Lucy’s tenth birthday as a birthday gift. It was a beautiful cake made by myself. It’s hard to imagine that I can make a cake by myself in the kitchen. This is the first time for me to finish something not easy by myself. So I think this birthday cake is a very special gift. Lucy is my best friend. She often helps me.With her help, I have made great progress in my English. She always encourages me to challenge difficulties. I gave her this special gift, not only to thank her for her help, but also to show that I dare to challenge difficulties. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：描写过去发生的事情用一般过去时，描写送给她这个礼物的原因可以使用一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，包括礼物是什么、要给谁以及原因。切记不要遗漏要点，可以增加一些情节使行文连贯。可以使用一些亮点词句来增加得分点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明礼物是送给谁的； 第二步，具体阐述这个礼物，包括这个礼物的来源以及为什么它是一个特别的礼物； 第三步，阐述为什么要送给她这个礼物。 [亮点词汇] ①by oneself某人自己 ②with her help在她的帮助下 ③make great progress取得重大进步 ④encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事 ⑤not only…but also…不但……而且…… ⑥dare to敢做某事 [高分句型] ①I have never forgotten a gift which gave it to my good friend, Lucy.（关系代词which引导的定语从句） ②It was a beautiful cake made by myself.（动词过去分词作后置定语） 14．（21-22八年级上·上海虹口·期中）Sports are believed to be important to people. Do you often do sports or watch sports games? Please talk about the sport that you like within 120 words. The clues are for your reference. 1. What sport do you like to do/to watch? 2. How did you get to know the sport? 3.  How often do you practice it? Any impressive experience?/What are the impressive games like? Your favorite team? 4. What does the sport bring you? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My favorite sport is playing basketball. When I was a child, I often watched Yao Ming play basketball on TV. I just wanted to be a basketball player like him. When I was in junior high school, I practiced basketball after school every day. In the eighth grade of junior middle school, I participated in the competition on behalf of the school and won the first prize. I was very happy. The students were proud of me. My favorite team is Bayi. This sport makes me happy and healthy. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求介绍你最喜欢的运动。根据文中所给提示，介绍你最喜欢的运动是什么，你是如何了解这项运动的，你是如何训练的，及经历和感受，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。 2. 写作指导：本文使用一般现在时态和一般过去时态，人称用第一人称。写作时，注意表达观点时的常用句式，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。 15．（21-22八年级上·上海徐汇·期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “_______ healthy life” 通过描写自己或者自己的一个同学（朋友）、一个家人的某一天生活，谈谈健康的生活方式，写一篇不少于60字的短文。要求： 补全作文题目。不得出现任何人名，否则不予评分。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My grandfather’s healthy life Although my grandfather is over 70 years old, he is very healthy. He has a healthy life. He gets up at 6 every morning and has breakfast at 6:30. He usually has an egg, a glass of milk and some bread for breakfast. Then he goes to the park to exercise. He likes playing Tai Chi. He usually plays Tai Chi in the park for an hour. Then he talks with his friends and takes a walk. He comes home at about 9 o’clock. My grandfather usually eats some rice, meat and vegetables at noon. He likes to eat fish and tomatoes. He thinks they are healthy for him. He sometimes waters the flowers in the afternoon. At about 6 p.m., he has dinner, and then he watches TV for an hour. At about 9 p.m., he goes to bed. He never stays up late. He has a healthy life. 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出爷爷的健康的生活方式的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$