读后续写 从竞争到尊重：音乐之旅的启示 讲义-山东省泰安市2023-2024学年高三上学期期中考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Leah had been trying for Auditions (试演) for All-State Band. Then, the day before the audition, she met into Rachel Jacobs. “So, Leah, I hear you are auditioning for All-State. Do you really want to embarrass yourself?” Rachel said snottily (自负的). Rachel and Leah had been fighting for first chair in the school band ever since Leah had gotten it. “Rachel, I’m still first chair,” Leah replied. That afternoon, Mr. Johnson, the school band director, stood up to make an announcement. “Kids,” he said, “today Rachel Jacobs would like to challenge Leah Foster for first chair.” Leah wasn’t worried; Rachel had challenged her four times and nothing had come of it. However, Leah hit the note wrong, and her sound was not good at all. Rachel, on the other hand, played perfectly. Leah was shameful. It was one of the band pieces she should have known. Rachel was given first chair, and Leah left the band room with tears. She went through the rest of her classes in a haze. “We’re leaving for the audition in one hour!” said Mr. Foster the next morning. “I don’t feel well. Maybe next year,” said Leah. Then she burst into tears and ran from the room. Her mom followed her into her bedroom and sat on the foot of her bed. “Oh, Leah. First of all, I’ve heard you play your song, and you’re not going to shame yourself. Bravery isn’t about not being scared—it means doing something despite the fact that you’re afraid. And if you go out there and do your best, we’ll be proud of you, no matter what the outcome.” Leah’s mom smiled. “So what do you say? Do we have an audition to go to?” “Yeah, I guess,” Leah replied. “Good girl! Get dressed now. We still have half an hour.” Leah sat outside the audition room nervously grasping her flute (笛子). Finally, they called her name. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Leah stepped onto the audition stage. ____________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: “Congratulations! You deserve it,” Rachel said, sticking out her hands. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文章大意 Leah 一直在为 All-State 乐队试演做准备，但在试演前一天，Rachel 向她发起挑战争夺学校乐队第一把交椅，Leah 发挥失常输掉了第一把交椅，她非常沮丧。第二天要去正式试演时，Leah 起初想逃避，在妈妈的鼓励下，她决定参加。Leah 紧张地坐在试演房间外等待叫号。 二、伏笔及续写回应 · 伏笔 1：Leah 之前一直是第一把交椅，且 Rachel 多次挑战都未成功，这次 Leah 意外失利，为她在正式试演时的心理状态和表现埋下伏笔，她可能会更加紧张和渴望证明自己。 · 续写回应：在试演舞台上，Leah 会努力克服紧张情绪，发挥出自己的水平，回应她对自己实力的信心以及想要重新证明自己的决心。 · 伏笔 2：妈妈对 Leah 的鼓励，提到勇敢是尽管害怕仍去做某事，以及无论结果如何都会为她骄傲，这为 Leah 参加试演并可能取得好成绩做了铺垫，体现了家人支持的力量。 2. 续写回应：Leah 在试演中的表现会受到妈妈鼓励的影响，她可能会更加勇敢和自信，成功后也会更加理解妈妈话语的意义，回应了妈妈的鼓励和信任。 · 伏笔 3：Leah 和 Rachel 之间一直存在竞争关系，尤其是在第一把交椅的争夺上，这为两人在试演后的互动和关系变化埋下伏笔。 3. 续写回应：Rachel 在 Leah 取得成绩后的反应和举动会展现两人关系的转变，可能是从竞争到相互认可或尊重，回应了之前的竞争状态以及在音乐追求中的共同经历。 三、续写要点 第一段： 1. 描述 Leah 上台后的紧张表现，如心跳加速、手发抖等。 2. 讲述她如何克服紧张，想起妈妈的话，调整状态开始演奏。 3. 提及她演奏时的专注和投入，以及演奏结束后的期待和不安。 第二段： 1. 阐述 Rachel 向 Leah 表示祝贺的情景和话语，以及 Leah 的惊讶反应。 2. 讲述两人之间的交流，可能包括对彼此的认可、对竞争的看法等。 3. 说明 Leah 的感悟，如关于竞争、友谊和成长的认识，升华主题。 四、情感线 从失败后的沮丧和对试演的恐惧，到受到妈妈鼓励后的决心，再到试演时的紧张与专注，最后到听到祝贺后的惊讶和对人际关系的新感悟，情感经历了起伏和转变。 五、故事线 Leah 输掉学校第一把交椅→想逃避试演→妈妈鼓励决定参加→试演舞台上的表现→得知结果 Rachel 祝贺→Leah 的感悟和成长 六、主旨升华句 1. Competition is not just about winning or losing, but about growing and learning from each other, and true success lies in the courage to face challenges and the grace to accept the outcome.（竞争不仅仅是关于输赢，而是关于相互成长和学习，真正的成功在于面对挑战的勇气和接受结果的风度。） 2. In the journey of pursuing our dreams, setbacks are just stepping stones to greater achievements, and with the support of loved ones and the strength within ourselves, we can overcome any obstacle.（在追求梦想的旅程中，挫折只是通向更大成就的垫脚石，有了亲人的支持和自己内心的力量，我们可以克服任何障碍。） 3. Bravery is not the absence of fear, but the determination to move forward despite it. Through competition, we not only discover our potential but also build bridges of understanding and respect with others.（勇敢不是没有恐惧，而是尽管有恐惧仍决心前进。通过竞争，我们不仅发现自己的潜力，还与他人建立理解和尊重的桥梁。） 4. Every challenge is an opportunity for growth, and when we face it with courage and perseverance, we can transform defeats into victories and rivals into friends.（每一个挑战都是成长的机会，当我们以勇气和毅力面对它时，我们可以将失败转化为胜利，将对手转化为朋友。） 5. In the world of music and competition, true success is not measured by trophies alone, but by the lessons learned, the relationships built, and the growth of the soul.（在音乐和竞争的世界里，真正的成功不仅仅由奖杯来衡量，还包括所学的教训、建立的关系和灵魂的成长。） 七、写作示范 写作示范一 Leah stepped onto the audition stage. Her heart was pounding so hard that she thought it might jump out of her chest. Her hands trembled as she held the flute, and she could feel the sweat on her palms. She took a deep breath and tried to calm herself, thinking of what her mom had said. She closed her eyes for a moment, then opened them with newfound determination. She started to play, at first a little shaky, but as she got into the rhythm, she became more and more focused. The beautiful melody filled the room, and she poured all her emotions and skills into the performance. When she finished, there was a moment of silence, and then a smattering of applause. She walked off the stage, not sure if she had done well enough, but feeling a sense of relief that she had given it her best shot. “Congratulations! You deserve it,” Rachel said, sticking out her hands. Leah was stunned. She had expected Rachel to be jealous or at least indifferent. She hesitantly took Rachel's hand. “Thank you,” she said. Rachel smiled. “You really did great out there. I guess we both have a lot to learn from each other. This competition has made me realize that it's not just about being the first chair, but about growing as musicians.” Leah nodded in agreement. She realized that through this experience, she had not only improved her skills but also learned about the importance of sportsmanship. She was grateful for the opportunity and looked forward to more challenges in the future, knowing that with hard work and a positive attitude, she could achieve anything. And she also understood that true friendship and respect could be born out of competition, making the journey of music even more meaningful. 写作示范二 Leah stepped onto the audition stage. The bright lights shone down on her, making her feel a bit dizzy. She could see the judges sitting in front of her, their expressions serious and expectant. She took a deep breath to steady herself and reminded herself of her mom's words. She began to play, and at first, her notes were a bit hesitant. But then, as she got into the flow, she forgot about her nervousness and let the music take over. She played with passion and precision, pouring her heart into every note. The sound of the flute filled the room, and she felt as if she was in a world of her own, just her and the music. When she finished playing, she held her breath, waiting for the judges' reaction. There was a brief pause, and then some nodding and murmurs of approval. She walked off the stage with a mixture of relief and excitement. “Congratulations! You deserve it,” Rachel said, sticking out her hands. Leah was surprised but also pleasantly so. She looked at Rachel and saw a genuine smile on her face. “Thank you, Rachel,” she said, shaking her hand. “I didn't expect this from you.” Rachel shrugged. “Well, we've been competing for so long, but I can see that you really worked hard for this. I respect that. Maybe we can be more than just rivals.” Leah smiled back. This moment made her realize that competition doesn't always have to be cutthroat. It can also lead to mutual respect and growth. She was proud of herself for overcoming her fears and for doing well in the audition. And she was grateful to Rachel for her unexpected kindness. This experience taught her that in the pursuit of her dreams, she could find friends and supporters in the most unexpected places. It was a valuable lesson that would stay with her as she continued on her musical journey, making her more determined than ever to reach for the stars and embrace all the opportunities that came her way. 参考答案 Paragraph 1: Leah stepped onto the audition stage. Her first note was clear and loud, and as soon as she hit it, all her worries faded. She thought of her mom ’s encouragement and played perfectly throughout her performance. After everyone had auditioned, the judges called the musicians back into the room to announce who would be invited to join the All-State Band. It was Leah that had made it in. When she got off the stage, tears of excitement came to her eyes. Then, Rachel walked over to Leah. Paragraph 2: “Congratulations! You deserve it,” Rachel said, sticking out her hand. “Um, thanks. Thanks a lot! ”Leah said, slowly shaking Rachel’s hand. Many students began to applaud. “You’re a really great musician and I apologize for what I said. ”said Rachel sincerely. “You are also excellent, and I’m glad to be your friend now. ”Leah breathed in the sweet autumn air and admired the beautiful colors that the leaves were turning. She knew that not only she had gotten a post in the All-State Band, but also she had won the true friendship. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$