读后续写 公园里善意的传递 讲义-河北省邯郸市2023-2024学年高一下学期期中英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a busy day for 20-year-old Justin. His hot dog stand in the park was crowded with many customers. He was poor so he couldn’t afford to rent a cafe to sell hot dogs. Suddenly, an old woman got to his counter and asked how much a hot dog was. “They range from $3 to $7,” he replied. “But that’s a touch expensive. I was just curious how much they cost. I don’t want any,” she said before walking away. Justin noticed she sat alone on a bench across from his stand. She kept looking in his direction, and he realized she wanted a hot dog but couldn’t afford one. He felt bad for her, so he quickly baked one and brought it to her. “I forgot to tell you that you’re my 50th customer of the day, so you get a free hot dog!” he said. “Oh, is that so?” the old lady asked. “Thank you. I’m Emily, by the way.” She tasted it immediately and was shocked how delicious it was. “It’s different from regular hot dogs,” she said, taking another bite. Justin said, “I love cooking, so I keep trying different things with my food. I have customers waiting for me. Have a wonderful day,” he hurried away. The next day, when Emily returned, Justin treated her to a hot dog again. Emily refused because she didn’t have money, but he insisted (坚持). “Your feedback matters to me so I can improve my sauces (酱) and my business!” he said. “Oh, you’re such a sweet boy,” Emily smiled through tears. “Thank you.” Deep down, Emily knew Justin was feeding her because she couldn’t afford the hot dog. She told him it wasn’t needed. But he kept feeding her every day. One day, when Emily went to the park again, she said, “I kept a count of the hot dogs you bought me, and you’ve already spent $ 100 on me. So now it’s my turn to help you, boy. Come with me.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Emily led Justin to an old building that looked like a deserted cafe. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Emily decided to give Justin the place to start his cafe free of rent. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文章大意 20 岁的贾斯汀在公园经营热狗摊，生活贫困。一位老妇人艾米丽询问热狗价格后因觉得贵而离开，贾斯汀看出她想吃但买不起，便以她是第 50 位顾客为由免费送她一个。此后每天贾斯汀都坚持请艾米丽吃热狗，称需要她的反馈来改进酱料和生意。一天，艾米丽说贾斯汀已为她花费 100 美元，要带他去一个地方。 二、伏笔及续写回应 （一）伏笔 1. 贾斯汀对烹饪的热爱和创新：文中提到贾斯汀热爱烹饪且会在食物上尝试不同做法，这为他后续可能在新的场所发挥厨艺特长埋下伏笔。在续写中可以体现他如何利用这个机会进一步展现自己的烹饪才华。 2. 艾米丽的感激与内心的想法：艾米丽深知贾斯汀是因为她买不起热狗而一直投喂她，她心怀感激且觉得应该回报。这为她后续带贾斯汀去某个地方并帮助他做铺垫，在续写中要体现她回报的方式和贾斯汀的反应。 3. 废弃咖啡馆的出现：艾米丽带贾斯汀来到一个像废弃咖啡馆的老建筑，暗示这里可能会有新的故事发展，也许会成为贾斯汀事业的转折点。 （二）续写回应 1. 第一段：描述贾斯汀跟随艾米丽来到废弃咖啡馆后的反应和发现，可能包括对咖啡馆环境的观察、对艾米丽意图的猜测等，为下文艾米丽的决定做铺垫。 2. 第二段：承接上文，讲述艾米丽决定将这个地方免费租给贾斯汀开咖啡馆，以及贾斯汀的惊喜和感激之情，展现他们之间善良的传递和美好的结局，同时也可以描述贾斯汀对未来的规划和期待。 三、续写要点 （一）第一段 1. 贾斯汀对废弃咖啡馆外观和内部环境的初步印象描写，如破旧程度、空间大小等。 2. 他内心的疑惑和猜测，思考艾米丽带他来这里的目的。 3. 可以适当加入一些细节，比如咖啡馆内残留的一些物品或痕迹，引发贾斯汀的联想。 （二）第二段 1. 艾米丽表明要免费给贾斯汀这个地方开咖啡馆的决定和她的理由阐述。 2. 贾斯汀的惊喜、激动和感激的表现，包括语言、表情和动作等。 3. 对贾斯汀未来在咖啡馆经营的简单展望，如他的计划、梦想以及对艾米丽的感谢承诺等。 四、故事线 故事以贾斯汀在公园卖热狗为起点，遇到艾米丽后展开善良的互动，贾斯汀每天免费给艾米丽热狗，艾米丽心怀感激。接着艾米丽带贾斯汀到废弃咖啡馆，最终决定免费给他用于开咖啡馆，故事线围绕着善良的给予与回报，以及贾斯汀事业可能的转机展开。 五、情感线 从贾斯汀对艾米丽的同情和善意，到艾米丽的感激，再到最后艾米丽决定帮助贾斯汀时双方的感动与喜悦，情感线随着故事发展逐渐升温，体现了人与人之间温暖的情感交流和善良的力量。 六、主旨升华句（5 句英文） 1. Kindness begets kindness, and a small act of love can lead to a beautiful cycle of giving and receiving. （善有善报，一个小小的爱的举动可以引发给予和接受的美好循环。） 2. When we reach out to help others with a pure heart, we often find unexpected blessings in return. （当我们用一颗纯净的心去帮助别人时，我们常常会得到意想不到的回报。） 3. The power of compassion can transform lives and create opportunities where there seemed to be none. （同情的力量可以改变生活，在看似没有机会的地方创造机会。） 4. In a world full of hustle and bustle, the simple act of sharing and caring can make a huge difference. （在一个忙碌的世界里，分享和关心的简单行为可以产生巨大的影响。） 5. True wealth lies not in material possessions but in the kindness we show and the relationships we build. （真正的财富不在于物质财富，而在于我们所表现出的善良和我们所建立的关系。） 七、写作示范 （一） Emily led Justin to an old building that looked like a deserted cafe. Justin's eyes widened as he took in the dilapidated exterior. The paint was peeling off the walls, and the windows were dusty. As they entered, he saw the old furniture scattered around and a counter that seemed to have seen better days. "What is this place, Emily?" he asked, his voice filled with curiosity. Emily smiled mysteriously and said, "Just wait and see, boy." Justin walked around, imagining what it could be with a little bit of work. He felt a tinge of excitement mixed with uncertainty. Emily decided to give Justin the place to start his cafe free of rent. Justin was stunned. He couldn't believe his ears. "Emily, are you sure? This is too much," he said, his eyes shining with gratitude. Emily nodded firmly. "You've been so kind to me. This is my way of helping you. I believe in your talent and your kindness. Make this place a success." Justin hugged Emily tightly, tears welling up in his eyes. He vowed to make the best of this opportunity. He started planning immediately, thinking about the new menu, the decoration, and how he would make this cafe a warm and inviting place. He knew that this was a chance of a lifetime, and he was determined to make it count, not just for himself but also to repay Emily's kindness. （二） Emily led Justin to an old building that looked like a deserted cafe. The door creaked as they pushed it open. Inside, the smell of old wood and a hint of something long forgotten filled the air. Justin gazed around in amazement at the worn-out tables and chairs, and the faded posters on the walls. "Emily, why have you brought me here?" he asked, his heart pounding with anticipation. Emily walked over to a window and wiped away the dust. "This place has potential, Justin. I think you can see it too," she said with a twinkle in her eye. Justin nodded slowly, starting to understand her intention. Emily decided to give Justin the place to start his cafe free of rent. Justin was speechless for a moment, then a huge smile spread across his face. "Emily, I don't know how to thank you. This is a dream come true," he said, his voice cracking with emotion. He immediately began visualizing how he would transform the space. He thought of the delicious aromas of his special hot dogs filling the room, and the happy customers chatting and enjoying their meals. He promised Emily that he would work hard and make the cafe a place she would be proud of. As he left that day, his steps were lighter, and his heart was full of hope and gratitude. He knew that this was the beginning of a new chapter, and he was ready to embrace it with all his heart, thanks to Emily's generous gift of kindness. 参考答案 Emily led Justin to an old building that looked like a deserted cafe. “What is this place for?” Justin asked, confused. “It’s now yours, Justin. This is your café,” she said, and Justin looked at her, puzzled. “My café? What do you mean?” he asked. Emily explained that her husband owned this cafe. When he died 9 years ago, she couldn’t run it herself and there was nobody to look after the business, and eventually it closed down. She had thought her son would carry on the business, but he had other plans. Emily decided to give Justin the place to start his café free of rent. She said she could do in exchange for him feeding her. She had been living off her husband’s savings, which wasn’t much. Because of Justin, she was able to have a delicious lunch almost every day. She would have loved to see a hardworking person running it. When Emily kept pressing, Justin couldn’t say no. Eventually, word spread about the café, and a lot of loyal customers who used to love the joint started appearing every day. Justin made enough money to buy a house. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$