2025届高考英语读后续写专题之助人类--传递鼓励的力量 讲义

作文续写(满分25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 Last Saturday, David was taking a walk in the park near his home when he noticed a woman with a boy of about eight years old. When David passed them, he heard the woman yell,“How stupid you are!You're good at nothing.”David stopped and looked at the little boy. The boy said nothing. He just stood there, looking upset. David was reminded of his English teacher Mrs Brown in middle school. After he entered middle school, David lacked self- confidence  because he was often made fun of by others. He was often told that he was good at nothing, which David believed. But one day it all changed. One day, in an English writing class, Mrs Brown asked them to read a novel. They were asked to write a new chapter of the novel after they finished reading the book.A few days later, David handed in his story. He didn't give it much thought. But the next day to his surprise, the comment“well done”from Mrs Brown came into view the moment he turned to the page where the story was written. When David read that, he almost burst into tears. He never expected to be praised one day. He suddenly gained some self- confidence . That day after he returned home, he wrote a short story and gave it to Mrs Brown the next morning. And again he was praised. David became very  interested  in writing. He often wrote short stories and asked Mrs Brown to read them and correct them for him. Mrs Brown always corrected them for him. Mrs Brown always corrected the mistakes he had made and gave him good advice to improve them. One year later, David joined the school newspaper and became an editor of it. He was no longer that boy who lacked self- confidence . He gained his  confidence  and was hopeful about his future. He succeeded in entering college and kept writing. Several years after  graduating  from college, he had his first book published. With some more books coming out, he became famous as a writer in his country. And he owed his success to Mrs Brown's  encouragement . Without her  encouragement , his life might be very different now. Paragraph 1: Inspired by his own life story, David decided to do something for that boy. Paragraph 2: The mother was ashamed when she heard that. 一、文章大意 David 在公园散步时看到一位母亲斥责一个小男孩说他很笨且什么都做不好，这让 David 想起了自己中学时因被他人嘲笑而缺乏自信，直到英语老师 Mrs Brown 不断鼓励他，他才逐渐对写作产生兴趣，最终成为一名成功的作家。他深知鼓励的重要性，决定为这个小男孩做些什么。 二、伏笔及续写回应 （一）伏笔 1. David 的经历：David 曾经因被说什么都不行而缺乏自信，后因 Mrs Brown 的鼓励改变，为他帮助小男孩提供了动机和方法。 1. 续写回应：David 会以自己的经历为参照，用类似 Mrs Brown 鼓励他的方式去鼓励小男孩，让小男孩重拾信心。 2. 母亲的斥责：母亲对小男孩的负面评价可能会对小男孩的心理产生不良影响，为故事的发展制造了矛盾点。 2. 续写回应：David 会与母亲沟通，让母亲认识到自己的错误，从而改变对小男孩的教育方式，同时也为小男孩创造一个更积极的成长环境。 三、续写要点 （一）第一段 1. David 与小男孩和母亲的互动，可能包括询问情况、分享自己的经历以鼓励小男孩等。 2. 小男孩的反应，如情绪上是否有变化等。 （二）第二段 1. 母亲听到 David 的话后的反应，如感到羞愧、反思等。 2. 母亲和小男孩后续可能的改变，以及 David 看到这一幕的感受和思考。 四、故事线 David 看到小男孩被母亲斥责后，想起自己的过往，决定帮助小男孩。他与小男孩和母亲交流，分享自己的经历并鼓励小男孩。母亲听后感到羞愧，认识到自己的错误。小男孩可能因此受到鼓舞，而 David 也因能传递鼓励的力量而感到欣慰，故事强调了鼓励对一个人成长的重要性。 五、感情线 David 从最初对小男孩处境的同情，到积极采取行动帮助他，充满了关爱和责任感。小男孩从沮丧变得可能充满希望，母亲从无知的斥责到羞愧和反思。整个故事展现了从负面情绪到积极转变的情感历程。 六、主旨升华句 1. Encouragement is like a ray of light that can penetrate the darkness of self-doubt and illuminate the path to confidence.（鼓励就像一束光，能够穿透自我怀疑的黑暗，照亮通往自信的道路。） 2. A simple word of encouragement can have a profound impact on a person's life, shaping their future and restoring their faith in themselves.（一句简单的鼓励之词能对一个人的生活产生深远的影响，塑造他们的未来，恢复他们对自己的信心。） 3. The power of encouragement lies in its ability to awaken the hidden potential within us and lead us to discover our own strengths.（鼓励的力量在于它能唤醒我们内心隐藏的潜力，让我们发现自己的优势。） 4. By passing on encouragement, we create a chain reaction of positive energy that can transform lives and build a more supportive world.（通过传递鼓励，我们创造了一种积极能量的连锁反应，能够改变生活，构建一个更支持性的世界。） 5. Encouragement is the key that unlocks the door to self-belief and allows us to soar to new heights, just as it did for David and now for the little boy.（鼓励是打开自我信念之门的钥匙，让我们能够飞向新的高度，就像它对 David 所做的那样，现在也为这个小男孩开启了这扇门。） 七、写作范文 范文一 Inspired by his own life story, David decided to do something for that boy. He walked up to the woman and the boy gently. He introduced himself and told them about his own similar experience in middle school. He then turned to the boy and said with a smile, "You are not stupid at all. Everyone has their own talents and it just takes time to discover them. I used to be like you, but with a little encouragement, I found my passion and became better." The boy looked up at him, a glimmer of hope in his eyes. David encouraged the boy to try new things and not be afraid of making mistakes. The mother was ashamed when she heard that. She realized that she had been too harsh on her son. She thanked David for his words and promised to change her way of educating. She hugged her son and told him that she believed in him. From that day on, the boy started to show more interest in learning and trying new things. David was happy to see the change. He knew that a small act of kindness and a few words of encouragement could make a big difference in a person's life. 范文二 Inspired by his own life story, David decided to do something for that boy. He knelt down in front of the boy and said sincerely, "Hey, little guy. Don't listen to what your mom said. I was once told the same thing, but look at me now. I became a writer because someone believed in me and encouraged me. You can do great things too." He then gave the boy a pen and a notebook and told him to write down his thoughts and dreams. The boy took them hesitantly but with a hint of curiosity. David also talked to the mother and told her the importance of positive words and encouragement. The mother was ashamed when she heard that. She admitted that she had been under stress and took it out on her son. She apologized to the boy and promised to be more patient and supportive. Over the next few weeks, David would sometimes meet the boy in the park and they would talk about the boy's writings. The boy became more confident and 开朗. David felt a sense of fulfillment. He understood that by sharing his story and passing on the encouragement, he was giving the boy a chance to have a better future, just as Mrs Brown had done for him. 参考答案 1.Inspired by his own life story, David decided to do something for that boy. He went to the woman, who  immediately   recognised  him because she had read his books and seen his pictures. David started to chat with her. He told her that what she said to her boy was not  appropriate . Then he told her about the  encouragement  he once got from Mrs Brown. In the end, he said,“I couldn't have become a writer if I had believed I was good at nothing.” 2.The mother was ashamed when she heard that. She realised that she shouldn't have called her son stupid, which would make him lose  confidence  in himself. So she said,“Thank you for your advice.I'll never say such things to him again. Instead,I'll find out what he's good at and encourage him.”The woman then left with the boy. Looking at the back of the boy, David felt relieved, hoping his action could make some  difference  to the boy. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$