2025届高考英语读后续写专题之遇险类 地震中的温暖与追求 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The video of a quake survivor searching for the army officer who saved his life 10 years ago has attracted much attention on China’s social media. “Ten years have passed. I have become a soldier like you. Can you see me? I’ve been looking for you all these years. Where are you?” the survivor, Qiang Tianlin(强天林), says in the video. Since the video went online a week ago, it has been viewed more than 12 million times and forwarded（转发）over 30, 000 times on Sina Weibo. Qiang was 14 and attending Guanzhuang Middle School when the 8. 0-magnitude earthquake struck Sichuan’s Wenchuan County on May 12, 2008. The quake claimed（索取） more than 80, 000 lives, and around 130, 000 military（军队） personnel took part in the search and rescue work. Worried about his family, Qiang left his school and headed home alone. Walking on a mountain track, aftershocks suddenly caused a landslide. A passing soldier grabbed（抓住） Qiang and used his own body to shield（保护） the teenager from the falling rocks. “Were it not that soldier, I might have died. I saw falling rocks hitting his back and his hands were bleeding, ” Qiang recalled（回忆）. The soldier took him to a temporary shelter nearby and fetched Qiang’s family the next day. In the following months, he came to the shelter several times, setting up tents and delivering（派送） supplies（物资） to people. “I regret that I didn’t ask for his name. All I know is that he was 1. 7 meters tall and others called him Battalion Commander, ” Qiang said. 注意： 1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右； 2. 续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好； Paragraph 1 The events of May 12 totally changed Qiang’s life. Previously（以前的）, his academic performance(学习成绩) was poor, but the officer _______________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2 The officer responded（回复）after viewing（观看） the video on Sina Weibo. And they had a chance to chat on the WeChat（微信）. ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文章大意 2008 年 5 月 12 日四川汶川发生 8.0 级地震，强天林当时 14 岁，在回家途中遭遇山体滑坡，一位路过的身高约 1.7 米、被称为营长的士兵用身体保护了他，并将他带到临时避难所，还帮他找到了家人，之后多次来送物资。10 年后，强天林已成为一名士兵，他发布视频寻找当年救他的军官，该视频在社交媒体上引起广泛关注。 二、伏笔及续写回应 （一）伏笔 1. 军官的保护行为：为强天林挡住落石，手部流血，这一细节为后续强天林的转变埋下情感基础，可在续写中体现强天林对这份恩情的铭记以及其对他人生态度的影响。 2. 军官多次送物资：展现军官的持续关怀，可在续写中成为强天林成长过程中的温暖回忆和激励因素。 3. 强天林不知军官名字：推动故事发展，使得寻找军官这一情节成为可能和必要，在续写中可围绕寻找过程及找到后的情感交流展开。 （二）续写回应 1. 第一段：可描述军官的行为如何改变强天林的生活，如从学习成绩差到努力学习，最终成为士兵，回应军官的榜样力量对他的积极影响。 2. 第二段：写军官看到视频后的回应以及他们的交流，可展现两人之间的情感连接，如军官对强天林成长的欣慰等。 三、续写要点 （一）第一段 1. 描述强天林生活的变化，重点突出在学习和人生目标方面的转变，强调军官对他的激励作用。 2. 可以提及他在努力过程中遇到的困难以及如何克服，进一步丰富情节。 （二）第二段 1. 军官回应的内容和方式，比如表达对强天林的赞赏、回忆当年的情景等。 2. 两人交流中的情感互动，如感动、欣慰等，以及对未来的展望或期许。 四、故事线 地震发生 - 军官救强天林 - 强天林成长 - 发布视频寻找军官 - 军官回应 - 情感交流与展望未来 五、感情线 从军官的救命之恩引发强天林的感恩之情，到他努力成长过程中的坚定信念，再到找到军官后的感动与欣慰，情感逐渐升华。 六、主旨升华句 1. The act of kindness in the face of disaster sowed the seeds of hope and transformation in a young heart.（在灾难面前的善举在一颗年轻的心中播下了希望和转变的种子。） 2. Through the years, the memory of that selfless sacrifice became the driving force behind one's pursuit of a better self.（多年来，那份无私牺牲的记忆成为了一个人追求更好自我的动力。） 3. The bond formed in the chaos of the earthquake endured, bridging the gap of time and bringing two lives back together in a moment of emotional reunion.（在地震混乱中形成的纽带经久不衰，跨越了时间的鸿沟，在情感重聚的时刻将两个生命再次联系在一起。） 4. The search was not just for a person, but for the embodiment of courage and kindness that had shaped a life and inspired a journey of growth.（这次寻找不仅仅是为了一个人，更是为了寻找勇气和善良的化身，它塑造了一个生命并激发了成长之旅。） 5. In the aftermath of disaster, a simple act of heroism had the power to ignite a flame of determination that would burn brightly through the years, leading to a beautiful encounter of gratitude and fulfillment.（在灾难的余波中，一个简单的英雄行为有能力点燃一团决心的火焰，多年来熊熊燃烧，导致了一次感恩和满足的美好相遇。） 七、写作范文 范文一 第一段 The events of May 12 totally changed Qiang’s life. Previously, his academic performance was poor, but the officer's heroic act became a turning point. Every time he thought of the soldier risking his life to save him, a surge of determination filled him. He started to focus on his studies, spending long hours poring over books. When he faced difficulties and wanted to give up, the image of the bleeding hands of the officer would flash in his mind, motivating him to persevere. Eventually, his hard work paid off, and he managed to get good grades. Inspired by the officer, he also joined the school's volunteer team, helping others just like the officer had done for him. He was determined to become a soldier to continue spreading love and hope. 第二段 The officer responded after viewing the video on Sina Weibo. And they had a chance to chat on the WeChat. The officer was deeply touched by Qiang's efforts and transformation. He told Qiang that he was just doing his duty back then and never expected such a profound impact. He recalled the moment he saved Qiang vividly and was glad to see that the young boy had grown into a responsible and brave man. They talked about their lives over the years, and the officer encouraged Qiang to keep up the good work in the military. They promised to meet in person someday, and both were looking forward to that moment with anticipation and joy, knowing that their connection formed during the disaster had endured and would continue to inspire them in the future. 范文二 第一段 The events of May 12 totally changed Qiang’s life. Previously, his academic performance was poor, but the officer's selfless shield inspired a new path for him. He made a vow to himself that he would not waste the second chance at life given by the officer. He began to study with extraordinary diligence, seeking help from teachers and classmates whenever he encountered problems. The memory of the officer's kindness became his source of strength during tough times. In addition to improving his academic performance, he also actively participated in physical training, aiming to build a strong body like the officer. His dream of becoming a soldier grew stronger day by day, and he finally achieved it through unremitting efforts. 第二段 The officer responded after viewing the video on Sina Weibo. And they had a chance to chat on the WeChat. The officer expressed his pride in Qiang's achievements. He shared some of his own experiences in the military and advised Qiang to always remember the responsibility on his shoulders. They reminisced about the days after the earthquake, and the officer was amazed at how much Qiang had remembered about their brief encounters. Their conversation was filled with warmth and emotion. The officer hoped that Qiang would continue to strive for excellence and make contributions to the country and the people. This encounter not only rekindled their old connection but also strengthened their belief in the power of kindness and the responsibility to pass it on. As they ended the chat, they both felt a sense of fulfillment and looked forward to a new chapter in their relationship. 参考答案 Paragraph 1 The events of May 12 totally changed Qiang’s life. Previously, his academic performance was poor, but the officer gave him numerous notebooks as gifts before he disappeared. “He told me to study hard and walk out of the mountains to see the outside world. ”Qiang kept his hero’s words in mind. He worked very hard and determined to be a soldier like his hero. Finally, he enrolled at National University of Defense Technology in 2012, joined the army and is now a member of the Chinese International Search and Rescue Team. Paragraph 2 The officer responded after viewing the video on Sina Weibo. And they had a chance to chat on the WeChat（微信）. “Thank you very much for saving me 10 years ago. Were it not you, I might have died. ” Qiang said. Smiling, the officer responded “It’s my duty to save you. I’m so happy that you are a soldier like me. It’s your turn to save others now.” Qiang nodded and promised that he will bring love and hope to people in need. Later, they kept in touch with each other now and then. The officer has a great effect on Qiang’s life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$