2025届高考英语读后续写个人成长类--舞台上的成长与蜕变 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I stared at myself in the mirror: blue tights, yellow vest, a fish tail trailing behind me, and large eyes sitting at op my head. I raised my eyebrows and sighed. “Mom, I don’t think this costume is right,” I said. “Maybe the makeup will add something,” Mom replied hopefully. Somehow Mom had convinced me to play the Fish Footman in Alice in Wonderland. I can’t say it’s been the time of my life. “What if I forget my lines?” I hesitated. “Oh Riley, is that what you’re afraid of? I know you’ve been rehearsing for two months, you were the first off-book in your scene, and I couldn’t be prouder of you.” Mom said, kneeling down and hugging me. The next day we pulled into the parking lot, and I stepped out of the car, wearing the questionable costume. I shrank inside myself, but Mom pulled me toward the makeup room. When the makeup was done, I looked at myself in the mirror. My jaw dropped. “Mom! I can’t go onstage like this!” I cried. “Why not?” “I’d be a laughing stock(笑柄)! ” “Riley, look around you! You’re not the only one in an odd costume.” “What if we just sneak out? No one will miss me.” I whispered. Mom’s lips disappeared into a thin line, and I knew I had gone too far. “Riley, I’m going to watch you go out on that stage tonight. And that’s the end of it.” Then mom disappeared into the audience. I sat there, alone and bored, as the play began and the curtain rose on. The two boys dressed as Two of Clubs(梅花2)near me chatted casually about this and that. Suddenly, they asked, “You’re awfully quiet. Is this your first show?” I tried to respond, but my voice caught in my throat and refused to escape. I coughed and nearly yelled, “YES!” The Ace of Diamonds(方块A)sitting nearby laughed. “The audience will certainly hear you if you talk that loud. But you might have to clear your throat first, she chuckled. I gave them a weak smile. “Don’t worry about us,” the Ace said. “We’re only teasing.” “Yeah,” the Two said. “When you’ve done as many shows as we have, projecting will be second nature to you.” 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: When my name was called, I stepped onto the stage uneasily. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Suddenly I was determined to make a lasting impression. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 “我” 看着自己扮演《爱丽丝梦游仙境》中鱼人仆人的奇特装扮而感到不满和担忧。妈妈鼓励 “我”，说 “我” 排练得很好。到了演出那天，“我” 穿着怪异的服装，化好妆后更觉难为情，甚至想偷偷溜走，妈妈则坚定地表示会看 “我” 上台表演。演出开始后，旁边扮演梅花 2 的两个男孩和方块 A 与 “我” 聊天，缓解了 “我” 的紧张。 伏笔及续写回应 · 伏笔：“我” 之前排练了两个月且第一个脱稿，为 “我” 在舞台上的表现打下基础；旁边演员对 “我” 的调侃和鼓励，让 “我” 情绪有所变化。 · 续写回应示例：在续写中，“我” 上台时可以凭借之前的排练功底顺利开场，然后在表演过程中逐渐受到他人鼓励的影响，变得更加自信和投入，比如动作更加流畅自然，台词表达更有感情等。 续写要点 · 第一段：描述 “我” 上台时的紧张状态，可能出现的身体反应和心理活动，以及如何开始表演，初步适应舞台。 · 第二段：讲述 “我” 突然决定要给观众留下深刻印象，采取的具体行动，如更加投入地表演，与其他演员更好地互动等，以及最终表演的效果和 “我” 的感受。 情感线 从对服装和表演的担忧、害怕，到上台时的紧张，再到受到鼓励后逐渐坚定和自信，最后可能获得成就感。 故事线 准备表演 - 对服装不满 - 临近演出紧张 - 与其他演员交流 - 上台表演 - 决定留下深刻印象 - 完成表演及感悟 主旨升华句（英文） 1. Courage is not the absence of fear, but the triumph over it in the face of challenges on the stage.（勇气不是没有恐惧，而是在舞台上面对挑战时战胜恐惧。） 2. Every step on the stage, no matter how hesitant at first, can lead to a confident performance with determination.（在舞台上的每一步，无论最初多么犹豫，只要有决心，都能走向自信的表演。） 3. Overcoming self-doubt and shining on the stage teaches us that we are capable of more than we think.（克服自我怀疑并在舞台上闪耀，让我们明白我们的能力远超自己的想象。） 4. In the spotlight of the stage, we find the strength to transform our fears into a memorable performance.（在舞台的聚光灯下，我们找到将恐惧转化为难忘表演的力量。） 5. The journey from stage fright to a remarkable show is a testament to the power of perseverance and belief in oneself.（从舞台恐惧到精彩表演的旅程，证明了坚持和相信自己的力量。） 写作示范一 Paragraph 1: When my name was called, I stepped onto the stage uneasily. My heart was pounding like a drum, and my hands felt clammy. The bright lights blinded me for a moment, and I could sense the eyes of the audience upon me. I took a deep breath and tried to remember my first line. My voice trembled as I spoke, and I could feel my legs shaking slightly. But as I continued, the familiar words and the rhythm of the scene started to come back to me. I managed to get through the initial part of the performance, still feeling nervous but gradually getting into the groove. Paragraph 2: Suddenly I was determined to make a lasting impression. I thought about all the hard work I had put in during rehearsals and the encouragement from the other actors. I straightened my back, projected my voice more clearly, and added more expression to my movements. I interacted with the other characters on stage with more confidence, making the scene come alive. As the performance went on, I could feel myself growing more and more into the role. By the end of my part, I received a smattering of applause, and I knew I had given it my best shot. I walked off the stage with a sense of accomplishment and a newfound confidence in my abilities. 写作示范二 Paragraph 1: When my name was called, I stepped onto the stage uneasily. The spotlight felt like a laser beam, burning into me. I could barely see beyond the first few rows of the audience. My mind went blank for a second, but then I forced myself to focus. I started speaking my lines, my voice quivering at first. I could hear my own heartbeat in my ears as I moved across the stage. The fish tail seemed to weigh me down, but I tried to ignore it and act as naturally as possible. Slowly, I found my rhythm, and the words started flowing more smoothly. Paragraph 2: Suddenly I was determined to make a lasting impression. I remembered Mom's words of pride and the friendly banter with the other actors. I put more energy into my performance, exaggerating my gestures and emphasizing my expressions. I made eye contact with the audience and delivered my lines with more conviction. The other actors on stage seemed to respond to my newfound enthusiasm, and we interacted more seamlessly. As the scene came to an end, the applause was louder than I expected. I realized that by facing my fears and giving it my all, I had turned a potentially embarrassing situation into a memorable performance. I left the stage with a big smile on my face, ready to face whatever came next with newfound courage. 官方答案： When my name was called,I stepped onto the stage uneasily.The bright lights blinded me for a moment,and I felt the weight of the audience's expectant gazes.Despite that,my muscle memory took over.We had rehearsed so many times that I was like a robot,reciting my lines in the most monotone(单调的)voice imaginable.A small partof my brain whispered that I had said these lines much better in rehearsal,but I pushed that voice away.I just wanted to get off  stageas fast as possible.Soon,the end of my scene was approaching,and I grew uncomfortably aware that the audience had indeed been very quiet during it.Had I done something wrong?Did they not like me? Suddenly I was determined I to make a lasting impression.I remembered the Two of Clubsand the Ace of Diamonds,their easy confidence.They,too,had started somewhere,likely just asnervous and uncertain as I was now.Then I straightened my spine,cleared my throat,and yelled with all the force I could muster.Obviously,the audience heard me.As the dialogue began,Ifound my voice,clear and strong,resonating through the theatre.I moved with purpose,embracing the absurdity of my costume andtransforming it into a character that was both comical and endearing.With each passing minute,my confidence grew,fueled by the audience response of laughter and applause,their enjoyment tangible proof that I had overcome my fears.As the final curtain fell,Mom found her way backstage,her eyes shining with pride."You were amazing,Riley,"she whispered.In that moment,I realized that stepping out of my comfort zone,despite the initial hesitation and fear,had led me to discover a strength within myself that I never knew existed 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$