读后续写遇险类 森林迷途与求生 讲义-2024届湖南省衡阳县高三第一次模拟考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 Last year, during the summer break, my friends and I decided to go for a walk in the forest. The forest had paths, and we decided that we would hike along the paths and meet at a central point to have a drink later. The whole team had several groups and we had planned on meeting with the rest of the team after three hours. I had a lighter,a partially charged phone, and a bottle of water. We continued on our way towards the deeper part of the forest until we were far from any recognizable trail. After two hours, we were in the deepest part of the forest, and we could not trace our other friends. All of a sudden,a bear came rushing along our path, and we all run in different directions. After running for about five minutes,I stood alone in a bush. I had no clue about my surroundings as I had never been.there before.I shouted at my friends’ names loudly, but all was in vain:there was no reply, and the whole place was silent. I was confused and felt like crying as I realized I was alone with nothing to protect myself.With a lot of fear,I tried to trace the part where I had come from, but all was useless:l was lost. As I walked along the path trying to locate my friends, I realized that I was tired, and nothing was looking familiar. I was out of food, water, and barely had any battery in my phone. I decided to walk through the bushes as the trees had grown so close together. I squeezed myself between the little trees. After some thirty minutes, it started raining heavily. Though I had heavy clothing,I was rained on until I was soaked up.I started freezing and praying to the God for protection and direction out of the forest. 注意; 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好; With darkness approaching,I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ While sitting down and warming myself around the fire,I heard some distant noise.- ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文章大意 去年暑假，“我” 和朋友们去森林散步，计划分组行动后在中心点会合。“我” 带着一些基本物品深入森林，两小时后与朋友走散，遇到熊后各自逃跑。“我” 身处陌生环境，呼喊无果后迷路，食物和水耗尽，手机电量不足，还遭遇大雨，处境艰难。 二、伏笔及续写回应 （一）伏笔 1. 携带物品：“我” 有打火机、部分充电的手机和一瓶水，为后续可能的生火、求救等情节提供了基础，续写中可利用这些物品展开求生行动。 2. 与朋友走散且环境陌生：增加了故事的紧张感和孤独感，续写可围绕 “我” 如何寻找朋友或设法让朋友找到自己展开。 3. 下雨：使 “我” 的处境更加恶劣，可在续写中体现 “我” 如何应对恶劣天气以及这对 “我” 心理和身体的影响。 （二）续写回应 1. 第一段：可写 “我” 利用现有物品尝试向同事发出信号的方法，如生火、用手机灯光等，以及在此过程中的心理活动和期待。 2. 第二段：写听到远处噪音后的反应，可能是朋友的声音或者其他未知情况，“我” 如何进一步采取行动以及最终可能的结果，如是否成功与朋友会合等。 三、续写要点 （一）第一段 1. 描述 “我” 尝试制作信号的具体方式和过程，如火堆的搭建、手机的使用等。 2. “我” 的心理状态，如希望与绝望交织、对朋友出现的期待等。 3. 周围环境的变化对 “我” 行动的影响，比如风雨是否影响生火等。 （二）第二段 1. 听到噪音时 “我” 的第一反应和后续行动，如大声呼喊回应、寻找声音来源等。 2. 对噪音来源的猜测和内心的担忧或喜悦。 3. 故事的结局走向，是否成功与朋友会合或发现其他情况。 四、故事线 进入森林 - 与朋友走散 - 迷路遇雨 - 尝试发信号 - 听到噪音 - 可能的结果（找到朋友或其他情况） 五、感情线 从最初的兴奋和好奇，到遇到危险后的恐惧和孤独，再到尝试求生时的希望与绝望交织，最后到听到噪音时的紧张和期待。 六、主旨升华句 1. In the face of the unknown forest and the trials of being lost, courage and resourcefulness become the beacons that guide us through the darkness of despair.（面对未知的森林和迷路的考验，勇气和机智成为引导我们穿过绝望黑暗的灯塔。） 2. When lost in the wild, every effort to survive and connect is a testament to the human spirit's resilience and the power of hope that keeps us going.（当在野外迷路时，每一次求生和联系的努力都是人类精神韧性和支撑我们前进的希望力量的证明。） 3. Amidst the solitude of the forest and the perils of being lost, the determination to find a way out and the longing for connection fuel the journey of survival and self-discovery.（在森林的孤独和迷路的危险中，找到出路的决心和对联系的渴望推动着生存和自我发现的旅程。） 4. Lost in the forest, we learn that even in the most desperate situations, our inner strength and the will to reach out can lead us to the light of safety and the warmth of companionship.（在森林中迷路时，我们了解到即使在最绝望的情况下，我们的内在力量和寻求联系的意愿也能带领我们走向安全的光明和同伴的温暖。） 5. In the heart of the forest's mystery and the turmoil of being lost, the struggle to signal for help and the hope of hearing a response are the threads that weave the story of survival and the discovery of our own capabilities.（在森林神秘的中心和迷路的混乱中，发出求救信号的努力和听到回应的希望是编织生存故事和发现我们自身能力的线索。） 七、写作范文 范文一 第一段 With darkness approaching, I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues. I used the lighter to start a fire, hoping the smoke would catch their attention. The wet branches made it difficult, but I persisted, carefully blowing on the small flames. I also took out my phone and set it to flash the brightest light I could, waving it around in the air periodically. As I worked, I kept praying that my friends would see or sense my signals. The darkness was closing in, and the fear of spending the night alone in the forest was overwhelming, but I forced myself to stay calm and focused on my attempts to make contact. 第二段 While sitting down and warming myself around the fire, I heard some distant noise. My heart leapt with hope. I immediately stood up and shouted as loudly as I could, "I'm here! I'm over here!" I listened intently, trying to determine the direction of the sound. It seemed to be getting closer. I started running towards it, still shouting, my voice hoarse from the effort. As I got closer, I recognized the voices of my friends. Finally, we reunited, exhausted but relieved. We hugged each other tightly, grateful to be back together. This experience taught me the importance of staying calm and resourceful in difficult situations and the value of the bond with my friends. 范文二 第一段 With darkness approaching, I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues. I gathered some dry leaves and small branches to build a bigger fire, hoping the bright flames would be visible from a distance. I kept the lighter close, carefully nurturing the fire. I also used my water bottle to reflect the light of the fire, creating a flashing effect. As the darkness deepened, my anxiety grew, but I refused to give up. I kept thinking about my friends and how they must be looking for me too. I stared into the forest, willing someone to see my signals and come to my rescue. 第二段 While sitting down and warming myself around the fire, I heard some distant noise. I froze for a moment, then quickly got up, my heart pounding. I listened carefully, and it sounded like voices. I shouted back with all my strength, "I'm here! Help!" I waited, holding my breath. The noise grew louder, and soon I could see the flashlight beams of my friends through the trees. I was overcome with relief and joy. When they finally reached me, we were all emotional. We realized how important it was to stick together and be more careful in the future. This adventure made us stronger and more aware of the risks and rewards of exploring the unknown. 【答案】With darkness approaching,I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues.After many vain trials, it occurred to me that I had a lighter with me. I was wild with joy and decided to build a signal fire by collecting leaves and lighting them up for my friends to see the fire.Although it had been rained on,I was finally successful to light it. Everything in silence, only the howling of the winds and the cracking of twigs kept me company. I couldn’t help wondering what would have gone wrong because I had never had such kind of experience.     While sitting down and warming myself around the fire,I heard some distant noise. As the sounds got closer, I realized that those were my friends. I jumped with a lot of joy as tears filled my eyes because I knew I was safe. They shouted my name, and I replied very loudly knowing in my mind that I was saved. It showed me the importance of the use of the markings and of course the quality-calmness while adventuring in the forest. I also thought to myself that my being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all my life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$