69 内蒙古赤峰-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

69 内蒙古赤峰 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让同学们通过描述学习包粽子的经历，考查大家对英语语言的运用能力，以及对端午节传统文化的了解和表达。 内容把握：题目要求包含表格中的所有信息，比如原料、工具、步骤和感受。答案中都有清晰准确的表述，像“rice, beans, dates”“leaf, string, pot”等原料和工具，还有“wash... keep... in the water for hours”“make a cone shape with...”“put... into the cone”“tie...”“boil... over low heat”等具体步骤，最后还提到了“felt very proud of myself”的感受，内容完整充实。 能力考查：考查了同学们的英语写作能力，包括词汇的运用、句子的组织、逻辑的连贯等。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，让同学们能够用英语描述一个活动的过程和自己的感受，提高语言综合运用能力。 解题思路： 1. 开头点明主题，即在端午节学习包粽子。 2. 中间详细描述原料、工具、步骤，按照先准备、再操作的顺序，逻辑清晰。 3. 结尾表达自己的感受，使文章有头有尾，完整连贯。 （2024·内蒙古赤峰·中考真题）假设你是李华，今年端午节期间，你学习了包粽子（zongzi）。请结合以下表格内容提示，给你的朋友Peter写一封英文电子邮件，分享你学习包粽子的经历。 How I learned … How I made Ingredients & Tools ●rice, beans, dates (枣)… ●leaf (leaves), string (细绳), pot Steps wash... keep…in the water for hours make a cone shape (圆锥体) with… put…into the cone tie… boil…over low heat… How I felt … 要求： 1. 必须包含表格中所有提示信息，可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 2. 词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Peter, How are you? I’d like to share an interesting experience with you. During the Dragon Boat Festival this year, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Peter, How are you? I’d like to share an interesting experience with you. During the Dragon Boat Festival this year, I learned how to make zongzi. To make zongzi, we needed to have rice, beans, dates, some leaves, some strings and a pot. How did we make zongzi? First, we washed the rice. Then, we kept it in the water for hours. Next, we made a cone shape with the leaves. After that, we put the rice, beans and dates into the cone. And then, we tied zongzi with strings. Finally, we boiled zongzi over low heat in a pot. Very soon, we enjoyed the delicious zongzi. It was really easy and interesting to make zongzi, so you can try to make zongzi by yourself. And don’t forget to share your experience with me. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】烹饪、个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：邮件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接信件开头，引出话题； 第二步，根据要点逐步介绍包粽子的过程，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，抒发学习包粽子的感受并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①put sth into把某物放进 ②tie sth with sth用某物绑某物 [高分句型] ①It was really easy and interesting to make zongzi, so you can try to make zongzi by yourself.（so连接两个并列分句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在考查学生的英语写作能力，包括语言表达、逻辑思维和文化理解。通过让学生给笔友推荐夏令营，引导学生对不同的活动进行描述和比较，同时培养跨文化交流的意识。 内容把握：在内容上，要求学生清晰地介绍所选夏令营的活动，并给出合理的推荐理由，还要发出邀请，这需要学生对活动有准确的理解和恰当的描述。 能力考查：考查了学生的语言组织能力、信息筛选和整合能力，以及运用所学英语知识进行书面表达的能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用、文化意识和思维品质的培养要求，鼓励学生用英语表达自己的想法和观点，增进对不同文化的了解。 解题思路：首先要仔细阅读题目要求，明确写作对象和任务。然后选择一个夏令营，详细描述其活动，比如提到“read classic novels（阅读经典小说）”和“learn about Chinese poems given by famous poets（由著名诗人讲授中国诗歌）”，突出活动的吸引力和特色，作为推荐理由。最后用简洁明了的语言邀请笔友参加，注意语言的礼貌和恰当性。同时，要注意控制词数，保证行文连贯、逻辑清晰。 （2023·内蒙古赤峰·中考真题）假如你是李华，你校英文校刊上发布了一则暑期夏令营活动信息，请你给爱尔兰笔友Karry写一封信，从以下三个夏令营中选择一个向他推荐，并邀请他参加。 要点如下： 1.介绍你选择的夏令营活动内容，并说明推荐理由； 2.邀请Karry参加。 Summer Camps 注意： 1.词数为80词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear Karry, How are you doing? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Karry, How are you doing? Summer holiday is coming and there are three summer camps for us to choose. I chose Clothes Design Camp. Let me introduce something to you. Clothes Design Camp will last five days from July 19th to 23rd. We will watch fashion shows. We will have classes given by famous designers. I will design a dress for my mother. I think it will be a special surprise for my mother. I am sure she will like it. I sincerely recommend you join this camp. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，向对方介绍自己要参加的夏令营活动； 第二步，具体介绍要做什么活动； 第三步，邀请对方参加。 [亮点词汇] ①introduce sth to sb向某人介绍某事 ②a special surprise特别的惊喜 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] I think it will be a special surprise for my mother.（省略that的宾语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道作文题旨在让学生关注中国的发展成就，增强民族自豪感和爱国情怀，同时考查学生用英语描述和表达观点的能力。 内容把握： 要求学生选择一个具体的中国发展成就事件，如成功举办两届奥运会，进行详细叙述，并且要表达出自己的感受。这样能确保学生有具体的内容可写，同时也能展现他们对事件的理解和情感体验。 能力考查： • 考查学生的语言运用能力，包括词汇、语法和句型的正确使用。 • 要求学生具备组织篇章结构的能力，使短文条理清晰、逻辑连贯。 • 还考查学生对信息的筛选和整合能力，能从众多成就中选取一个重点阐述。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，鼓励学生用英语表达对社会现象和国家发展的观察与思考。 解题思路： 首先，认真审题，明确题目要求和主题。然后，选定一个自己熟悉且能充分阐述的成就事件，比如这里选择的两届奥运会。在叙述事件时，要清晰地描述其重要性和影响。最后，真诚地表达自己的感受，让短文有情感深度。 （2022·内蒙古赤峰·中考真题）近年来中国发生了翻天覆地的变化，取得了很多世界瞩目的成就，例如航空航天技术的一步步突破、杂交水稻的成功培育、两届奥运会的成功举办…… 某英文网站正在开展以“厉害了，我的国！” 为主题的征文活动。请你以“China makes me feel surprised”为题目，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文投稿。 要求： 1. 选择中国发展中一个让你感到惊讶的事件进行简单叙述，并写出你的感受； 2. 书写规范，要点齐全，条理清晰，可合理发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名，否则不予赋分。 参考词汇：aerospace industry 航空航天工业；spaceship 宇宙飞船；develop hybrid rice 培育杂交水稻；Beijing 2008 Olympics 北京2008奥运会；Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics 北京2022冬奥会 China makes me feel surprised ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 China makes me feel surprised In recent years, great changes have taken place in China and many achievements have attracted the attention of the world. For example, two Olympic Games were held successfully. It really surprised me. China successfully hosted the 2008 Summer Olympic Games and once again introduced China to the world. China has developed rapidly since then. The Winter Olympic Games were successfully held this year. And many Chinese athletes won gold medals. As a Chinese, I am very proud. Also I feel excited for the strength of the motherland. 【知识点】国际赛事、城市、叙事忆旧 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“China makes me feel surprised”为题目，选择中国发展中一个让你感到惊讶的事件进行简单叙述，并写出你的感受。 2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时选择一个中国取得的成就进行简单叙述，并写出你的感受。注意语句通顺，无单词语法错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道作文题的命题意图在于让同学们回忆自己的户外活动经历，锻炼大家的语言表达和叙事能力，同时引导同学们关注生活、培养环保意识和社会责任感。 内容把握： 作文内容应紧扣“最有意义的一次户外活动”这一主题，像例文中选择了植树节植树的活动，详细描述了活动的过程，包括集合时间、携带工具、共同前往和辛苦劳作等，还提到了活动后的心情和感悟，内容丰富且完整。 能力考查： 考查同学们的观察能力、组织语言的能力、逻辑思维能力以及对词汇和语法的运用能力。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对学生写作能力的要求，如语言表达准确、条理清晰、要点齐全等。 解题思路： 首先，要明确题目要求，选择一个印象深刻且有意义的户外活动。然后，按照一定的顺序描述活动过程，比如时间、地点、人物、经过等。接着，分享自己在活动中的收获和感悟，要表达真实的情感。在写作过程中，注意运用参考词汇，使文章更丰富，同时注意语法和拼写的正确性。 （2021·内蒙古赤峰·中考真题）在忙碌的学习之余, 你也一定有许多难忘的户外时光。你加过哪些有趣的户外活动呢（比如爬山、植树、野餐……），请描述你参加过的最有意义的一次户外活动, 并谈谈你的收获及感悟。题目自拟。 要求： 1. 书写规范, 词数60﹣100； 2. 要点齐全, 条理清晰, 可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名, 否则不予赋分； 4. 请在答题卡指定位置作答, 否则不予赋分。 参考词汇；climbing mountains；planting trees；having a picnic；hiking；camping；volunteer；community；meaningful；unforgettable. . . ______________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： An Unforgettable Activity After busy study, we always have a lot of unforgettable outdoor activities. My unforgettable activity is that we go to the mountains to plant trees on Tree Planting Day this spring. On the morning of March 12, all the students in our class met at the school gate at 7 o’clock. Some students carried shovels, some carried buckets, others carried trees, and we walked to the mountains together. After the whole morning’s hard work, all the trees have been planted. We were happy to be back at school. We are tired, but we are happy. Because we know that the more trees we plant, the better the environment. As President Xi said, “green water and green mountains are golden mountains and silver mountains.” I think we should do more meaningful things for the environment in the future. 【知识点】个人经历、叙事忆旧、文体活动、环境保护 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语，写出自己难忘的一次户外活动，要写一件具体的事情，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要结合给出的提示词，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，要做到条理清晰，逻辑合理，无单词拼写和语法错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道作文题旨在引导学生关注家庭劳动，培养他们的责任感和动手能力，同时让学生通过描述家务劳动经历来提高英语表达能力。 内容把握： 答案内容丰富且全面。开头列举了经常做的多种家务，中间详细描述了一次印象深刻的做饭经历，包括起因、过程和结果，结尾表达了对分担家务的感悟。 能力考查： 考查了学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力和对英语词汇、句型的运用能力。 课标要求： 符合课标的要求，鼓励学生用英语表达真实的生活经历和感受，培养综合语言运用能力。 解题思路： 首先，明确题目要求，确定要写的内容包括经常做的家务和一次具体的家务劳动经历及感悟。然后，在描述家务劳动时，注意使用恰当的时态和词汇，清晰地叙述过程。最后，在结尾部分总结升华，表达对家务劳动的看法和自身的成长。 （2020·内蒙古赤峰·中考真题）我们在追逐青春梦想的同时，不能忽视"劳动最光荣"的优良传统。专家指出，经常做家务不仅能锻炼我们的动手能力，还能增强我们的责任感。想要做最好的自己，就从做家务开始吧!请以“To be a helper of my family”为题目写一篇英语短文。 要点： 1．你经常做哪些家务? 2．描述一次你印象最深刻的家务劳动过程，并写出劳动后的感悟。 要求： 1．书写规范，词数60 ﹣ 100； 2．要点齐全，条理清晰，可适当发挥； 3．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名，否则不予赋分； 4．请在答题卡指定位置作答，否则不予赋分。 参考词汇：make the bed，wash the dishes，do some washing/leaning/cooking，look after，diligent(勤劳的)，hard﹣working，responsible，be satisfied with，confident… To be a helper of my family ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： To be a helper of my family I often do housework at home, such as making the bed, washing the dishes, do some washing, looking after my younger sister and so on. Last Friday, the evening fell, but my parents didn't come back home yet. I stopped doing my homework and decided to make a meal for my family instead of just waiting. It was my first cooking. I surfed on the Internet to learn how to do home style dishes. With the step-by-step directions, I managed to make my first dish. Then I tried to cook another．When my parents came back home, they couldn't believe their eyes to see the dishes made by me. My parents were very satisfied with me. I think it is responsible for every family member to share housework. We should be hard-working. After that, I become more confident. 【知识点】家庭生活、叙事忆旧 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。写作时分为三部分，第一部分经常做哪些家务；第二部分分享一次做家务的经历；第三部分自己的感悟。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来叙述；时态上在叙述经历时用一般过去时，点题部分和总结部分用一般现在时；描述经历时，起因、过程和结果要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。 最新模拟 1．（2024·内蒙古赤峰·三模）生命只有一次，安全无小事，请你根据以下要点提示，以“How to keep safe”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要点提示： 1. 校园安全：和同学友好相处，遇到麻烦向老师求助。 2. 食品安全：吃健康食物，拒绝垃圾食品等。 3. 至少补充一条其他安全注意事项。 要求： 1. 写作内容包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 2.文中不要出现与考生相关的真实信息。 3.词数80左右。 How to keep safe ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·内蒙古赤峰·二模）我们的初中生活即将画上句号。三载青春，既见证了同窗好友的共同奋斗，也书写了可爱校园的多彩生活。请你用英语写一篇作文，谈谈你对友谊的看法以及你和同学之间发生的让你印象深刻的一次经历。 写作要点： 1.你是如何看待同学间友谊的？ 2.你与同学们之间发生了什么样的故事？ 写作要求： 1.80词左右； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 3.请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。 参考词汇： graduate 毕业；precious 珍贵的；unforgettable 难忘的。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·内蒙古赤峰·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom准备来华做交流生。他在学习汉语的过程中觉得汉语特别难懂难学，因此向你写信求助。请你根据以下提示和要求，给他写一封邮件给出你的建议。 提示：Look up the new words; Listen to Chinese radio; Talk with classmates in Chinese… 注意：1. 邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2. 邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；3. 书写规范，词数60—100；（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, Welcome to China and start your Chinese-learning journey! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Take it easy, and I do believe everything will get better and better. Yours, Li Hua 4．（2024·内蒙古赤峰·二模）今天青少年辅导员Amy接到了一封来自Sandy的信。Sandy是转校生，一时无法适应新的学校环境，很烦恼。假如你是Amy，请根据Sandy的来信，写一封回信，帮助Sandy解决问题。 Dear Amy, You know I am new here. I find it hard for me to make friends with my classmates. I don’t have any close friends. I feel lonely from time to time. I also have trouble with my study. I work hard every day but still get low marks in the exam. This made me feel bad. I really want to be a top student, but I just don’t know how. What should I do? Would you please give me some advice? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Sandy 注意： 1.信的内容自拟，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，符合情境； 2.词数80个左右。 Dear Sandy, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Amy 5．（2024·内蒙古赤峰·一模）节约是美德；节约是环保。学校团委正在开展“小节约，大贡献(Small savings and big contributions) ”征文活动，请你写一篇投稿，分享你生活中的节约措施，如节约粮食、节约能源等，并发表你对此类行为的看法。 要求： 1.需写出适当的开头和结尾；至少包括四个方面的措施。 2.要点齐全，语言流畅，书写规范，可适当增加细节。 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等。 4. 词数 80—100 左右。 Saving from ourselves ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·内蒙古赤峰·一模）假如你是李华，你们学校英语社团正在开展以“我运动我健康”为主题的线上交流活动。请你写一篇短文，谈谈你最喜欢的体育运动，并结合自身运动经历给其他同学提出一些关于运动健身的建议。 提示词语：playing basketball, relax, healthy, be good for 提示问题：●What sports do you like best? ●Why do you like these sports? ●What advice can you give your classmates about doing sports? Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. I’d like to share my favorite sports with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 69 内蒙古赤峰 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让同学们通过描述学习包粽子的经历，考查大家对英语语言的运用能力，以及对端午节传统文化的了解和表达。 内容把握：题目要求包含表格中的所有信息，比如原料、工具、步骤和感受。答案中都有清晰准确的表述，像“rice, beans, dates”“leaf, string, pot”等原料和工具，还有“wash... keep... in the water for hours”“make a cone shape with...”“put... into the cone”“tie...”“boil... over low heat”等具体步骤，最后还提到了“felt very proud of myself”的感受，内容完整充实。 能力考查：考查了同学们的英语写作能力，包括词汇的运用、句子的组织、逻辑的连贯等。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，让同学们能够用英语描述一个活动的过程和自己的感受，提高语言综合运用能力。 解题思路： 1. 开头点明主题，即在端午节学习包粽子。 2. 中间详细描述原料、工具、步骤，按照先准备、再操作的顺序，逻辑清晰。 3. 结尾表达自己的感受，使文章有头有尾，完整连贯。 （2024·内蒙古赤峰·中考真题）假设你是李华，今年端午节期间，你学习了包粽子（zongzi）。请结合以下表格内容提示，给你的朋友Peter写一封英文电子邮件，分享你学习包粽子的经历。 How I learned … How I made Ingredients & Tools ●rice, beans, dates (枣)… ●leaf (leaves), string (细绳), pot Steps wash... keep…in the water for hours make a cone shape (圆锥体) with… put…into the cone tie… boil…over low heat… How I felt … 要求： 1. 必须包含表格中所有提示信息，可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 2. 词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Peter, How are you? I’d like to share an interesting experience with you. During the Dragon Boat Festival this year, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Peter, How are you? I’d like to share an interesting experience with you. During the Dragon Boat Festival this year, I learned how to make zongzi. To make zongzi, we needed to have rice, beans, dates, some leaves, some strings and a pot. How did we make zongzi? First, we washed the rice. Then, we kept it in the water for hours. Next, we made a cone shape with the leaves. After that, we put the rice, beans and dates into the cone. And then, we tied zongzi with strings. Finally, we boiled zongzi over low heat in a pot. Very soon, we enjoyed the delicious zongzi. It was really easy and interesting to make zongzi, so you can try to make zongzi by yourself. And don’t forget to share your experience with me. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】烹饪、个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：邮件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接信件开头，引出话题； 第二步，根据要点逐步介绍包粽子的过程，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，抒发学习包粽子的感受并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①put sth into把某物放进 ②tie sth with sth用某物绑某物 [高分句型] ①It was really easy and interesting to make zongzi, so you can try to make zongzi by yourself.（so连接两个并列分句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在考查学生的英语写作能力，包括语言表达、逻辑思维和文化理解。通过让学生给笔友推荐夏令营，引导学生对不同的活动进行描述和比较，同时培养跨文化交流的意识。 内容把握：在内容上，要求学生清晰地介绍所选夏令营的活动，并给出合理的推荐理由，还要发出邀请，这需要学生对活动有准确的理解和恰当的描述。 能力考查：考查了学生的语言组织能力、信息筛选和整合能力，以及运用所学英语知识进行书面表达的能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用、文化意识和思维品质的培养要求，鼓励学生用英语表达自己的想法和观点，增进对不同文化的了解。 解题思路：首先要仔细阅读题目要求，明确写作对象和任务。然后选择一个夏令营，详细描述其活动，比如提到“read classic novels（阅读经典小说）”和“learn about Chinese poems given by famous poets（由著名诗人讲授中国诗歌）”，突出活动的吸引力和特色，作为推荐理由。最后用简洁明了的语言邀请笔友参加，注意语言的礼貌和恰当性。同时，要注意控制词数，保证行文连贯、逻辑清晰。 （2023·内蒙古赤峰·中考真题）假如你是李华，你校英文校刊上发布了一则暑期夏令营活动信息，请你给爱尔兰笔友Karry写一封信，从以下三个夏令营中选择一个向他推荐，并邀请他参加。 要点如下： 1.介绍你选择的夏令营活动内容，并说明推荐理由； 2.邀请Karry参加。 Summer Camps 注意： 1.词数为80词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear Karry, How are you doing? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Karry, How are you doing? Summer holiday is coming and there are three summer camps for us to choose. I chose Clothes Design Camp. Let me introduce something to you. Clothes Design Camp will last five days from July 19th to 23rd. We will watch fashion shows. We will have classes given by famous designers. I will design a dress for my mother. I think it will be a special surprise for my mother. I am sure she will like it. I sincerely recommend you join this camp. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，向对方介绍自己要参加的夏令营活动； 第二步，具体介绍要做什么活动； 第三步，邀请对方参加。 [亮点词汇] ①introduce sth to sb向某人介绍某事 ②a special surprise特别的惊喜 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] I think it will be a special surprise for my mother.（省略that的宾语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道作文题旨在让学生关注中国的发展成就，增强民族自豪感和爱国情怀，同时考查学生用英语描述和表达观点的能力。 内容把握： 要求学生选择一个具体的中国发展成就事件，如成功举办两届奥运会，进行详细叙述，并且要表达出自己的感受。这样能确保学生有具体的内容可写，同时也能展现他们对事件的理解和情感体验。 能力考查： • 考查学生的语言运用能力，包括词汇、语法和句型的正确使用。 • 要求学生具备组织篇章结构的能力，使短文条理清晰、逻辑连贯。 • 还考查学生对信息的筛选和整合能力，能从众多成就中选取一个重点阐述。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，鼓励学生用英语表达对社会现象和国家发展的观察与思考。 解题思路： 首先，认真审题，明确题目要求和主题。然后，选定一个自己熟悉且能充分阐述的成就事件，比如这里选择的两届奥运会。在叙述事件时，要清晰地描述其重要性和影响。最后，真诚地表达自己的感受，让短文有情感深度。 （2022·内蒙古赤峰·中考真题）近年来中国发生了翻天覆地的变化，取得了很多世界瞩目的成就，例如航空航天技术的一步步突破、杂交水稻的成功培育、两届奥运会的成功举办…… 某英文网站正在开展以“厉害了，我的国！” 为主题的征文活动。请你以“China makes me feel surprised”为题目，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文投稿。 要求： 1. 选择中国发展中一个让你感到惊讶的事件进行简单叙述，并写出你的感受； 2. 书写规范，要点齐全，条理清晰，可合理发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名，否则不予赋分。 参考词汇：aerospace industry 航空航天工业；spaceship 宇宙飞船；develop hybrid rice 培育杂交水稻；Beijing 2008 Olympics 北京2008奥运会；Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics 北京2022冬奥会 China makes me feel surprised ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 China makes me feel surprised In recent years, great changes have taken place in China and many achievements have attracted the attention of the world. For example, two Olympic Games were held successfully. It really surprised me. China successfully hosted the 2008 Summer Olympic Games and once again introduced China to the world. China has developed rapidly since then. The Winter Olympic Games were successfully held this year. And many Chinese athletes won gold medals. As a Chinese, I am very proud. Also I feel excited for the strength of the motherland. 【知识点】国际赛事、城市、叙事忆旧 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“China makes me feel surprised”为题目，选择中国发展中一个让你感到惊讶的事件进行简单叙述，并写出你的感受。 2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时选择一个中国取得的成就进行简单叙述，并写出你的感受。注意语句通顺，无单词语法错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道作文题的命题意图在于让同学们回忆自己的户外活动经历，锻炼大家的语言表达和叙事能力，同时引导同学们关注生活、培养环保意识和社会责任感。 内容把握： 作文内容应紧扣“最有意义的一次户外活动”这一主题，像例文中选择了植树节植树的活动，详细描述了活动的过程，包括集合时间、携带工具、共同前往和辛苦劳作等，还提到了活动后的心情和感悟，内容丰富且完整。 能力考查： 考查同学们的观察能力、组织语言的能力、逻辑思维能力以及对词汇和语法的运用能力。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对学生写作能力的要求，如语言表达准确、条理清晰、要点齐全等。 解题思路： 首先，要明确题目要求，选择一个印象深刻且有意义的户外活动。然后，按照一定的顺序描述活动过程，比如时间、地点、人物、经过等。接着，分享自己在活动中的收获和感悟，要表达真实的情感。在写作过程中，注意运用参考词汇，使文章更丰富，同时注意语法和拼写的正确性。 （2021·内蒙古赤峰·中考真题）在忙碌的学习之余, 你也一定有许多难忘的户外时光。你加过哪些有趣的户外活动呢（比如爬山、植树、野餐……），请描述你参加过的最有意义的一次户外活动, 并谈谈你的收获及感悟。题目自拟。 要求： 1. 书写规范, 词数60﹣100； 2. 要点齐全, 条理清晰, 可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名, 否则不予赋分； 4. 请在答题卡指定位置作答, 否则不予赋分。 参考词汇；climbing mountains；planting trees；having a picnic；hiking；camping；volunteer；community；meaningful；unforgettable. . . ______________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： An Unforgettable Activity After busy study, we always have a lot of unforgettable outdoor activities. My unforgettable activity is that we go to the mountains to plant trees on Tree Planting Day this spring. On the morning of March 12, all the students in our class met at the school gate at 7 o’clock. Some students carried shovels, some carried buckets, others carried trees, and we walked to the mountains together. After the whole morning’s hard work, all the trees have been planted. We were happy to be back at school. We are tired, but we are happy. Because we know that the more trees we plant, the better the environment. As President Xi said, “green water and green mountains are golden mountains and silver mountains.” I think we should do more meaningful things for the environment in the future. 【知识点】个人经历、叙事忆旧、文体活动、环境保护 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语，写出自己难忘的一次户外活动，要写一件具体的事情，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要结合给出的提示词，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，要做到条理清晰，逻辑合理，无单词拼写和语法错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道作文题旨在引导学生关注家庭劳动，培养他们的责任感和动手能力，同时让学生通过描述家务劳动经历来提高英语表达能力。 内容把握： 答案内容丰富且全面。开头列举了经常做的多种家务，中间详细描述了一次印象深刻的做饭经历，包括起因、过程和结果，结尾表达了对分担家务的感悟。 能力考查： 考查了学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力和对英语词汇、句型的运用能力。 课标要求： 符合课标的要求，鼓励学生用英语表达真实的生活经历和感受，培养综合语言运用能力。 解题思路： 首先，明确题目要求，确定要写的内容包括经常做的家务和一次具体的家务劳动经历及感悟。然后，在描述家务劳动时，注意使用恰当的时态和词汇，清晰地叙述过程。最后，在结尾部分总结升华，表达对家务劳动的看法和自身的成长。 （2020·内蒙古赤峰·中考真题）我们在追逐青春梦想的同时，不能忽视"劳动最光荣"的优良传统。专家指出，经常做家务不仅能锻炼我们的动手能力，还能增强我们的责任感。想要做最好的自己，就从做家务开始吧!请以“To be a helper of my family”为题目写一篇英语短文。 要点： 1．你经常做哪些家务? 2．描述一次你印象最深刻的家务劳动过程，并写出劳动后的感悟。 要求： 1．书写规范，词数60 ﹣ 100； 2．要点齐全，条理清晰，可适当发挥； 3．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名，否则不予赋分； 4．请在答题卡指定位置作答，否则不予赋分。 参考词汇：make the bed，wash the dishes，do some washing/leaning/cooking，look after，diligent(勤劳的)，hard﹣working，responsible，be satisfied with，confident… To be a helper of my family ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： To be a helper of my family I often do housework at home, such as making the bed, washing the dishes, do some washing, looking after my younger sister and so on. Last Friday, the evening fell, but my parents didn't come back home yet. I stopped doing my homework and decided to make a meal for my family instead of just waiting. It was my first cooking. I surfed on the Internet to learn how to do home style dishes. With the step-by-step directions, I managed to make my first dish. Then I tried to cook another．When my parents came back home, they couldn't believe their eyes to see the dishes made by me. My parents were very satisfied with me. I think it is responsible for every family member to share housework. We should be hard-working. After that, I become more confident. 【知识点】家庭生活、叙事忆旧 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。写作时分为三部分，第一部分经常做哪些家务；第二部分分享一次做家务的经历；第三部分自己的感悟。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来叙述；时态上在叙述经历时用一般过去时，点题部分和总结部分用一般现在时；描述经历时，起因、过程和结果要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。 最新模拟 1．（2024·内蒙古赤峰·三模）生命只有一次，安全无小事，请你根据以下要点提示，以“How to keep safe”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要点提示： 1. 校园安全：和同学友好相处，遇到麻烦向老师求助。 2. 食品安全：吃健康食物，拒绝垃圾食品等。 3. 至少补充一条其他安全注意事项。 要求： 1. 写作内容包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 2.文中不要出现与考生相关的真实信息。 3.词数80左右。 How to keep safe ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·内蒙古赤峰·二模）我们的初中生活即将画上句号。三载青春，既见证了同窗好友的共同奋斗，也书写了可爱校园的多彩生活。请你用英语写一篇作文，谈谈你对友谊的看法以及你和同学之间发生的让你印象深刻的一次经历。 写作要点： 1.你是如何看待同学间友谊的？ 2.你与同学们之间发生了什么样的故事？ 写作要求： 1.80词左右； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 3.请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。 参考词汇： graduate 毕业；precious 珍贵的；unforgettable 难忘的。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·内蒙古赤峰·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom准备来华做交流生。他在学习汉语的过程中觉得汉语特别难懂难学，因此向你写信求助。请你根据以下提示和要求，给他写一封邮件给出你的建议。 提示：Look up the new words; Listen to Chinese radio; Talk with classmates in Chinese… 注意：1. 邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2. 邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；3. 书写规范，词数60—100；（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, Welcome to China and start your Chinese-learning journey! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Take it easy, and I do believe everything will get better and better. Yours, Li Hua 4．（2024·内蒙古赤峰·二模）今天青少年辅导员Amy接到了一封来自Sandy的信。Sandy是转校生，一时无法适应新的学校环境，很烦恼。假如你是Amy，请根据Sandy的来信，写一封回信，帮助Sandy解决问题。 Dear Amy, You know I am new here. I find it hard for me to make friends with my classmates. I don’t have any close friends. I feel lonely from time to time. I also have trouble with my study. I work hard every day but still get low marks in the exam. This made me feel bad. I really want to be a top student, but I just don’t know how. What should I do? Would you please give me some advice? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Sandy 注意： 1.信的内容自拟，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，符合情境； 2.词数80个左右。 Dear Sandy, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Amy 5．（2024·内蒙古赤峰·一模）节约是美德；节约是环保。学校团委正在开展“小节约，大贡献(Small savings and big contributions) ”征文活动，请你写一篇投稿，分享你生活中的节约措施，如节约粮食、节约能源等，并发表你对此类行为的看法。 要求： 1.需写出适当的开头和结尾；至少包括四个方面的措施。 2.要点齐全，语言流畅，书写规范，可适当增加细节。 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等。 4. 词数 80—100 左右。 Saving from ourselves ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·内蒙古赤峰·一模）假如你是李华，你们学校英语社团正在开展以“我运动我健康”为主题的线上交流活动。请你写一篇短文，谈谈你最喜欢的体育运动，并结合自身运动经历给其他同学提出一些关于运动健身的建议。 提示词语：playing basketball, relax, healthy, be good for 提示问题：●What sports do you like best? ●Why do you like these sports? ●What advice can you give your classmates about doing sports? Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. I’d like to share my favorite sports with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】 How to keep safe Life is only once, so safety is important for us teenagers. But how can we keep safe? Here are some suggestions. First of all, it is necessary to get on well with our classmates at school. If we really have trouble in communicating with them, we can ask our teachers for help. Besides, we’d better buy and eat food carefully. It is junk food that does harm to our health. Healthy food such as vegetables and fruit are our first choices. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, what we should pay attention to is to obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. In a word, safety must come first! 【知识点】意见/建议、自我保护 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意需要至少补充一条其他安全注意事项。 [写作步骤] 第一步，通过表达“生命只有一次，所以安全对我们青少年很重要”来引出主题； 第二步，具体从“校园安全、食品安全及交通安全”等方面介绍如何保持安全； 第三步，书写结语，进行总结。 [亮点词汇] ①get on well with和……相处得好 ②ask sb for help向某人寻求帮助 ③obey the traffic rules遵守交通规则 ④in a word总之 [高分句型] ①If we really have trouble in communicating with them, we can ask our teachers for help. (if引导条件状语从句) ②what we should pay attention to is to obey the traffic rules when we go out. (when引导时间状语从句) 2．One possible version: Looking back on the old days of my junior school, I can see plenty of wonderful moments shared with my teachers and classmates. Among those, an experience of group study is the most unforgettable. One day when I was in the eighth grade, my English teacher asked the class to make an English presentation about robots. In order to make a successful one, we divided the tasks into four parts and each of us was responsible for one part. Even though we had different jobs to do, we helped each other a lot by offering valuable information and possible methods. We all had a strong sense of satisfaction and achievement when working in a group and cooperating with each other. Without doubt, our presentation the next day was the best of all. Our friendship has deepened since that day. In my opinion, friendship not only means to care or understand, but also to support and encourage each other. Such a kind of precious friendship will always in my mind. 【知识点】学校人员、叙事忆旧、友谊 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先回顾初中时期的美好时光，再引出主题——和同学的难忘回忆； 第二步，讲述和同学们之间发生的故事； 第三步，总结全文，讲述自己对友谊的理解。 [亮点词汇] ①look back on 回顾 ②in order to 为了 ③divide…into… 把……分成…… ④be responsible for 对……负责 ⑤a strong sense of satisfaction and achievement 强烈的满足感和成就感 ⑥not only…but also…不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①One day when I was in the eighth grade, my English teacher asked the class to make an English presentation about robots.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②Even though we had different jobs to do, we helped each other a lot by offering valuable information and possible methods.（even though引导的让步状语从句） 3．【满分优秀范文】： Dear Tom, Welcome to China and start your Chinese-learning journey! I’m sorry to hear that you difficulty in studying Chinese. In fact, Chinese is quite different from English. Chinese writing is more interesting than English writing. Don’t worry about your problem and I will give you some advice to help you. Firstly, you need to prepare a Chinese-English dictionary so that you can look up the new words while learning. Secondly, listening to Chinese radio is a great way to improve your listening. If you talk with your classmates in Chinese, you will made great progress gradually. Practice makes perfect.    Take it easy, and I do believe everything will get better and better. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】意见/建议、学习策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中给出的要点，写电子邮件给Tom一些学习汉语的建议。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇引出话题； 第二步，描述汉语与英语的差别以及学习汉语的建议； 第三步，鼓励对方。 [亮点词汇] ①have difficulty in doing sth. 做某事有困难 ②in fact 事实上 ③be different from 不同于 ④worry about 担心 ⑤make great progress 取得巨大进步 ⑥take it easy 放轻松 [高分句型] ①I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in studying Chinese.（that引导宾语从句） ②Don’t worry about your problem, and I’ll give you some advice to help you.（祈使句的否定形式） ③Firstly, you need to prepare a Chinese-English dictionary so that you can look up the new words while learning.（so that引导目的状语从句） ④Secondly, listening to Chinese radio is a great way to improve your listening.（动名词作主语） 4．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Sandy, I am sorry to hear that you have difficulty in adapting to the new environment. Don’t worry. I am writing to share some some advice with you. First of all, why not take part in a club where you will meet more students who have the same hobby with you so that you will make friends easily In addition, as for your study, I suggest you that you turn to your teachers for help, who must be willing to help you. Last but not least, it is reading books widely that I think is the best way to keep yourself peaceful and calm. Maybe when you are not nervous, you will find it easy to solve all problems. I hope that the advice is useful and you will be better and better. Best wishes, Amy 【知识点】意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态一般现在时为主； ③提示：注意针对信中提到的问题给出建议，语句通顺；注意不要存在语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达在听到对方问题后的态度； 第二步，给出具体的建议； 第三步，结束语，希望建议有帮助。 [亮点词汇] ①have difficulty in做某事有困难 ②so that为了 ③In addition除此之外 [高分句型] ①Maybe when you are not nervous, you will find it easy to solve all problems.（时间状语从句） ②I hope that the advice is useful and you will be better and better.（宾语从句） 5． 【满分优秀范文】： Saving from ourselves   Everyone can make small changes in lifestyle and make a difference to waste. First, don’t waste things. We’d better go to school on foot or ride a bike instead of taking a car. Turn off the lights as soon as we leave the classroom. Remember to turn off the tap at once after washing our hands. When we go out to eat in a restaurant, ask for smaller dishes and take the leftover home. Before we buy something new, think whether it is necessary. Next, use things for as long as possible. When we buy things, make sure that they can last a long time. Don’t use a paper cup or a paper bag. It’s better to use a china cup and a lunch box because you can use them again. Finally, collect something that can be recycled in your classroom or in your neighborhood and sell them. We should also buy things made from recycled materials. In a word, I think, one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it will make a difference. 【知识点】环境保护 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点名主题——小节约，大贡献； 第二步，分享你在生活中的节约措施，如节约粮食、节约能源等； 第三步，书写结语，倡导节约。 [亮点词汇] ①had better do sth. 最好做某事 ②on foot步行 ③ride a bike骑自行车 ④instead of代替 ⑤turn off关闭 [高分句型] ①Turn off the lights as soon as we leave the classroom.(as soon as引导时间状语从句) ②When we go out to eat in a restaurant, ask for smaller dishes and take the leftover home.(when引导时间状语从句) 6．【满分优秀范文】     Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. I’d like to share my favorite sports with you.     I like basketball best. At the age of 10, when watching the games Yao Ming played in NBA, I started to be fond of the game. I like not only watching basketball games with my friends in my spare time, but also playing basketball.     During the period of playing basketball, I have benefited a lot from the sport. Firstly, it can help me to keep healthy and relax. Secondly, I can make a lot of friends through playing basketball. And it makes me understand that there is no “I” in the team. Running is also good for my health. Every player should cooperate with others in the team. So, I insist on playing it with my friends and classmates every day. But I advise everyone to do a warm-up activity before exercising. At the same time, we need to wear comfortable clothes and shoes.     Let’s play sports together and enjoy healthy lives. 【知识点】健康与运动、爱好 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要是一般现在时； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写给同学的建议，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你最喜欢的运动； 第二步，说明喜欢这项运动的原因和给同学的建议； 第三步，呼吁大家一起运动，享受健康的生活。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also...不仅……而且…… ②benefit使受益 ③insist on坚持 ④cooperate合作 ⑤comfortable舒适的 [高分句型] ①At the age of 10, when watching the games Yao Ming played in NBA, I started to be fond of the game. （省略that/which的定语从句） ②And it makes me understand that there is no “I” in the team.（that引导的宾语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$