with复合结构在读后续写中的运用 课件-2025届高三英语一轮复习

The peaceful landscape of the”Emeral Isle”and its many green countries is a true feast for the eys, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle. with cotton candy clouds dotted with the deeply blue sky. 读后续写句型“杀手锏”之 巧用with复合结构，助力读后续写 语言表达 by Amily What? How? Why? Teaching Aims 4 2 1 3 什么是with的复合结构？ with复合结构的构成 with复合结构的功能 with复合结构在读后续写中的运用 CONTENT 目录 7 PART 01. What 什么是with的复合结构？ with + 宾语 + 宾语补足语 Guess Who I AM ??? 8 What？ 1. With the College Entrance Examination ____________(approach), the students devote all their energy to study. approaching 2. With their eyes _______ (focus) on the blackboard, the students don’t care what’s going on outside the window. focused 3. With so many school assignments __________(finish), the students stays up late every day. to finish 1. With the College Entrance Examination approaching, the students devote all their energy to study. 2. With their eyes focused on the blackboard, the students don’t care what’s going on outside the window. 3. With so many school assignments to finish, the students stays up late ever day. What is it? 宾语 宾补 2 with复合结构的构成 with+宾语+名词做宾补 They set up a football team, with Tom their head. ____________________________, we needn't be afraid to get lost. 有本地人当向导，我们不必担心会迷路。 1 他们建立了一支足球队，汤姆当队长。 例： 练习： With a native our guide 12 with+宾语+介词短语做宾补 The teacher came in with a book in her hand. 2 老师手里拿着书走进来。 例： 练习：他眼含泪水走进教室。______________________________,he walked into the classroom. With tears in his eyes 13 with+宾语+形容词做宾补 With the windows open, the room was very cold. 窗户大开，屋内很冷。 3 例： 练习：不要嘴里塞满东西说话。 Don’t speak ____________________________. With your mouth full 14 with+宾语+副词做宾补 The square looks more beautiful with all the lights on. 4 所有的灯都亮时，广场显得更加美丽。 例： 练习：他穿着衣服躺在床上。 He was lying on the bed    _____ ________________________.  With his clothes on 15 with+宾语+to do做宾补 With so much work to do, I have no time for holiday. 5 还有很多工作要做，因此我没有时间度假（表原因） 例： 表示将做未做 练习：要洗所有这些衣服,我无法出去了。 I can't go out _________________________ With all the clothes to wash. 16 with+宾语+V-ing 做宾补 With summer coming, the weather bocomes very hot. 6 随着夏天的到来，天气变得很热。（表原因） 例： V-ing表示主动、进行 练习：在人群的欢呼声中,他们驱车来到皇官。            _______________________, they drove to the palace. With the crowd cheering 17 with+宾语+V-ed做宾补 With the work done, he felt greatly relieved. 7 工作完成了，他大大地松了一口气。（表时间） 例： 表示被动、完成 练习：我在房间坐了一会儿,眼睛盯着天花板。 Isat in  my room for a few minutes _________________________________. with my eyes focused on the ceiling 18 3 With复合结构的功能 Why？ A 做定语，修饰名词 The room with lights on is our classroom 开着灯的那个教室是我们的。 21 A 做状语，表示伴随状况 She left the office with tears in her eyes. 她眼里含着泪，离开了办公室。 He was covered with a national flag with his face exposed. 一面国旗盖在他身上，脸露在外面。 22 B 做状语，表示原因 With his key lost, he couldn”t get into the office. 由于钥匙丢了，他进不了办公室。 With the weather changed, we decided to put off the sports meet. 由于天气变化，我们决定推迟举行运动会 23 C 做状语，表示时间 The children began to watch TV with the homework done. 孩子们完成作业以后开始看电视。 The meeting was over with the problem settled. 问题解决以后，会议结束了。 24 D 做状语，表示条件 I’d like to see the new film with time permitting. 如果时间许可，我想看那部新电影。 We will have an outing tomorrow with weather fine. 如果明天天气好的话，我们要去郊游。 25 E 做状语，表示结果 She walked out in the rain, with her clothes all wet. 她冒雨出去，结果衣服都湿透了 The battle ended with the enemy defeated. 战斗结束了，敌人被打败了。 26 1.做状语，表时间, 伴随, 原因, 条件, 结果 +adj./adv./prep. 构成 意义 With 的复合结构 With+宾语+ 不定式 现在分词 过去分词 2.做定语，对名词进行修饰或者限定 Complete the following sentences 1. 他转向我，眼里充满了恐惧。(horror) He turned to me, _________________________. 2. 风吹过柳树，她匆匆忙忙地回家。(willow) She was hurrying home _____________________________. 3. 这个年轻人被带了进来，双手被绑在背后。(tie) The young man was brought in, _______________________ ________. with his eyes full of horror with the wind blowing the willows with his hands tied behind his back 28 4. 他静静地站着，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。 He stood silently, __________________________________. 5. 暴风雪袭击了该地区，一夜之间气温骤降。 _______________________________, temperatures took a dive overnight. 6. 浓雾笼罩着树木，我们彻底迷路了。(mist, blanket) ____________________________________, we got thoroughly lost. with tears streaming down his cheeks With a snowstorm hitting the area With the thick mist blanketing the trees Complete the following sentences 29 7. 在大火中失去了所有的物资，他感到非常恐慌。(supplies) ______________________________, he felt a sense of panic. 8. 他张开双臂拥抱我，眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。(diamond) He opened his arms to embrace me, ____________________ _____________. With all his supplies lost in the fire with his eyes shining like diamonds Complete the following sentences 30 9. 包扎好受伤的右腿之后，她待在原地，等待救援。(bandage up) ___________________________________, she stayed where she was and waited to be rescued. With her injured right leg bandaged up Complete the following sentences 31 1. (We arrived at the campsite.) With enough wood gathered from the forest floor, he started a campfire. 他从森林的地面上收集了足够多的木头，点燃了篝火。 2. (The guests were digging out their cars buried in the snow.) With most cars freed by noon, the guests set off down the driveway. 中午时分，大部分汽车都已被挖出来，客人们沿着车道出发了。 How can we apply it to our writing? 32 3. The wolf moved closer, with its tail wagging slightly. 那只狼轻轻地摇着尾巴，走近了一些。 4. I cycled off down the road with the wolf running behind me. 我沿着那条路骑行，那只狼在我后面跟着跑。 5. The fellow stood there, with his hands crossed behind his back. 那家伙背着手站在那里。 6. With a knife clenched in his teeth, he climbed up the tree to cut some coconuts. 他嘴里紧咬着一把刀，爬上树去割椰子。 Read and observe the sentences carefully 结论1： 结构：with+宾语+宾语补足语（v-ing/p.p.） 功能：可用于动作描写，说明动作发生的条件和伴随的状态等，有效连接前后内容 33 1. With the sky gradually turning dark, we got lost in the forest. 天逐渐变黑，我们在森林中迷路了。 2. With the air heavy and hot, rain can pour down at any moment. 空气湿重炎热，雨随时可能倾盆而下。 3. With the fierce wind whistling, a thick layer of ice formed on the ground. 狂风呼啸，地上结了一层厚厚的冰。 Read and observe the sentences carefully 34 4. Roaring wind flowed through my hair with faint sounds echoing far away. 呼啸的风吹过我的头发，远处回响着微弱的声音。 5. The sky was full of dark masses of clouds, with a few birds flying past now and then. 天空乌云密布，不时有几只鸟飞过。 6. With snowflakes dancing wildly in the strong wind, we started to walk towards some nearby houses. 雪花在强风中狂舞着，我们开始向附近的一些房子走去。 结论2： 结构：with+宾语+宾语补足语 功能：可用于环境描写,能够生动形象地营造画面，使表达更加深刻。 Read and observe the sentences carefully 35 1. With tears streaming down his cheeks, he replied, “I really tried.” 他泪流满面地回答说：“我真的尽力了。” 2. She stared at me with a smile spreading across her face. 她面带笑意地盯着我。 3. With her eyes sparkling, she struggled to her feet and shouted, “I’m here!” 她的眼睛闪闪发光，她挣扎着站起来喊道：“我在这里！” Read and observe the sentences carefully 36 4. With his heart beating wildly and his face flushing, he rushed to the room. 他心脏狂跳，脸涨得通红，向房间冲去。 5. With tears welling up in my eyes, I expressed my gratitude in a weak voice. 我热泪盈眶，用微弱的声音表达了感激。 6. On seeing Tom, Jane immediately hugged him, with her eyes full of pleasure. Jane一见到Tom，就立刻抱住了他，眼睛里充满了喜悦。 结论3： 结构：with+宾语+宾语补足语 功能：可用于神态描写,能够生动描写出人物神态，使人物形象更加生动。 Read and observe the sentences carefully 37 Conclusion “with复合结构”即“with + 宾语 + 宾语补足语”，用在读后续写中可以丰富和充实句子的内容。在动作描写中，“with复合结构”可以说明动作发生的条件和伴随的状态等，有效连接前后内容；而在环境描写中，“with复合结构”能够生动形象地营造画面，使表达更加深刻。在神态描写中，“with复合结构”能够生动描写出人物神态，使人物形象更加饱满。 常用结构：with+宾语+宾语补足语 38 How can we apply it to our writing? 39 How can we apply it to our writing? ① ______________________(有很多火柴要卖), she had to beg people to buy some. With lots of matches to sell It was Christmas Eve, a cold dark evening. A poor little girl was wandering in the street. How can we apply it to our writing? ②The match was burning. The girl magically saw a feast. _______________________________________________(合并句式) Cold and hungry, the girl curled up in the corner and struck a match. With the match burning, the girl magically saw a feast. How can we apply it to our writing? Then the match went out and the vision faded. The girl was disappointed. ③___________________________________________________ (the remaining matches; light; appear) With the remaining matches lighted, her granny appeared. How can we apply it to our writing? The girl, together with her granny, was flying away. ④_______________________________________________ _______________________________________________. In the dawn of morning, there lay the poor little girl, with her eyes closed peacefully. At about seven in the morning, the villagers made arrangements for a final search. (1) _____________________ ______________________________________ (狂风呼啸，他们走在一条陌生的小路上). Suddenly, a man shouted with wild excitement as he found marks on the ground. _________________________(顺着小路上的标记), they soon found the little boy in the dark corner of a cave，__________________________________(小小的身体不停颤抖着）.Seeing his father among the villagers, (2)_______________________________________________________________________ (男孩立刻抱住他的父亲，泪流满面). With the fierce wind whistling, they walked on an unfamiliar path the boy immediately hugged his father, with tears streaming down his cheeks with the marks on the path with his little body shaking uncontrallably Micro-plot writing 微情节故事创作 44 中秋节即将来临，“我们”一家去祖父母家过节，请以此为情境进行微情节故事创作，恰当运用with复合结构。 Micro-plot writing 微情节故事创作 45 ①                                          (随着中秋的到来),We set off for my grandparents' ② _________________________________(高兴地). As soon as we stepped into the house,my grandparents warmly greeted us ③___________________________________________ _______________________________(满脸洋溢着幸福和激动) . ④                                                  ________ (丰盛的食物已为我们提前准备好), such as duck soup, and bamboo shoots, they had been looking forward  to our arrival. ⑤                                                          _______  (天上挂着一轮圆月), we  enjoyed dinner,  chatting and admiring the moon,  constant  laughter  filling  the house. With the Mid-Autumn Festival approaching spreading across their faces With happiness and excitement with big smile on our faces With plenty of food prepared for us in advance With the full moon hanging high in the sky Let’s enjoy the continuation writing and make it an enjoyable journey! THANKS! 2. Hearing the bad news, little Miyue became upset ________________________. 听到坏消息，小芈月耷拉着肩膀，不高兴了。 1. Receiving a beautiful Barbie doll, Liu Chutian was surprised ________ _________________________ . 收到一个漂亮的芭比娃娃，刘楚恬睁着大眼睛，张着大嘴巴，感到十分吃惊。 with her shoulders down with her eyes and mouth wide open 3. She focused her attention on her hand _______________________________. 她专注地看着自己的手，怀里抱着一个可爱的鸟笼。 with a lovely bird cage in her arms 5. She was lost in thought ____________ ________________________________. 她陷入了沉思，光着脚静静地站在沙滩上。 with her bare feet standing on the beach silently 4._______________________________， she stood on the beach _____________. 专注地看着自己的手，她怀里抱着一个可爱的鸟笼，光脚站在沙滩上。 With her eyes focused on her hand with a lovely bird cage in her arms 6._________________________, Liu Chutian has to fill herself up. 还有好多工作要做，刘楚恬必须把自己喂得饱饱的。 With so much work to do $$