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专题05 书面表达(应用文写作10篇+读后续写10篇)
[模考好题20篇](选择必修二)
应用文写作
Passage 1
(23-24高二下·浙江·期中)假设你是李华,你的爱尔兰好友Jim发来邮件说爱尔兰人微信群里多数人用真人照片做微信头像(profile photo/picture),觉得这样更能让别人信任自己,他想知道为什么多数中国人不用本人照片当头像。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1) 分析可能的原因;
(2) 给出你的观点;
(3) 期待回信。
注意:1. 写作词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Passage 2
(23-24高二下·广东揭阳·阶段练习)假定你是李华,请给你校交换生James写一封信,告知他潮汕地区正向外国友人开展题为“Chaoshan in My Eyes”的短视频征集活动以宣传推介潮汕文化遗产,内容包括:
1. 活动介绍;2. 视频要求;3. 鼓励参加。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;2. 请按如下格式在题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear James,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 3
(24-25高二上·江苏南通·开学考试)今年巴黎奥运会上各国运动员展现出了很多精神品质。假如你是李华,你将在班级进行的英语主题班会上介绍你最欣赏的运动员精神,内容要点如下:
1. 简单阐述该精神品质;
2. 它对你的学习生活的影响。
要求:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Friends,
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Thank you for your listening!
Passage 4
(24-25高二上·山东日照·开学考试)2024年巴黎奥运会上中国体育健儿成绩做人,青年学子备受鼓舞。为此,你校将举行主题为“学奥运,圆梦想”的英语演讲比赛,请你写一篇演讲稿参赛。内容包括:
(1)你对奥运精神的理解;
(2)你实现梦想的决心。
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Good morning, dear teachers and fellow students!
Today, I am extremely excited to stand here and deliver a speech.
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Thank you all!
Passage 5
(23-24高二上·广东深圳·期末)请你以“My View on Sportsmanship”为题写一篇英文发言稿,内容包括:
1.你对体育精神的理解;
2.运动员的事迹举例;
3.对你的影响和启示。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
My View on Sportsmanship
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Passage 6
假定你是李华,得知外教Jack最近经常头痛,吃药后效果不佳。请你给他写一封电子邮件,推荐他尝试中医治疗。内容包括:
1.中医的优点;
2.期待他早日康复。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to know you are being troubled by headaches and cannot recover after taking the medicine.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 7
(23-24高二上·江苏盐城·期末)假如你是第九中学的李华,你的美国笔友Demon来信说最近对中医很感兴趣,甚至想尝试一下中国的针灸。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.针灸的简介;
2.你对针灸未来发展的信心。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Demon,
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Passage 8
假定你是李华,近期你收到英国朋友Jack的微信,谈及全球疫情严重流行时传统中药良好的医治作用,他希望了解更多的中药的优点,请你给他回信,内容包括:
1. 完全来自大自然,副作用小;
2. 对人的身体进行全面治疗;
3. 能够作为治疗癌症等疾病的药物。参考词汇:传统中药 Traditional Chinese Medicine
Dear Jack,
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Passage 9
(24-25高二上·江苏南通·阶段练习)你校英文报正在开展以“My favorite type of mass media to get news”为主题的征稿活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 介绍你最喜欢的大众传媒;
2. 简述原因。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
My favorite type of mass media to get news
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Passage 10
(24-25高二上·广西南宁·阶段练习)假定你是某国际学校的学生会成员,下周你校将举办校园科技创新大赛。请你用英语写一则通知,鼓励大家踊跃参加,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动内容;
3.参赛方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:学生会 (The Students’Union)
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读后续写
Passage 1
(23-24高二下·内蒙古兴安盟·期中)
In 2018, 17-year-old Hemesh spent a life-changing summer with his grandmother Anne, who had been diagnosed with Alzheimer’s disease. Witnessing the impact of the disease firsthand, Hemesh was awakened to the seriousness of the situation.
One night, Hemesh walked into the kitchen only to discover that his grandmother had left the gas stove (炉) on after making tea. Shocked by the dangerous consequences Alzheimer’s disease could bring about, he couldn’t help but wonder what might have happened if he hadn’t been there.
Hemesh’s worries increased as he observed his grandmother’s behavior. She would wake up in the early hours of the morning, believing she was on a train, and wander outside aimlessly. This wandering tendency could potentially lead her to get lost or put herself in risky situations.
Determined to make a difference, Hemesh engaged himself in extensive research about Alzheimer’s disease and its symptomatic (症状的) progression. Through his studies, he discovered that wandering was a common problem among dementia patients, especially those with Alzheimer’s disease.
Inspired by his newfound knowledge and fueled by his desire to help, Hemesh told his family, “I can’t just stand by and watch this happen. I need to do something to keep Grandma safe. I think I have an idea that might help not just her, but others in similar situations.”
With firm determination, he developed an inventive answer to the wandering dilemma, a device he called the Guardian Companion. It was a wearable device, similar to a smartwatch, specifically designed for Alzheimer’s patients. It integrated advanced GPS technology and a panic button to assist those who tended to wander, ensuring their safety and well-being. After the device got its official approval, Hemesh happily went to try it on for his grandmother.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As Anne put on the Guardian Companion, Hemesh explained how it worked.
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In the next few weeks, the device made a difference to Anne and her family.
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Passage 2
(23-24高二上·河南洛阳·期末)
Henry finished rolling copies of The Gazette, filled his bag and took off to deliver the news.
It was 8:15 a.m. when he delivered the last newspaper. He had put the paper where Mr.Grady could get it without struggling to the sidewalk. Across the street, Henry’s delivery had landed perfectly too. Mrs. Burke, with twin babies, probably liked having her paper within easy reach.
Henry parked his bike near the office building and bounded up to the editor-in-chiefs door. Mr. Trotta said, “We’re closing shop, Henry. Advertising is down. Television is how people get their news today.”
“Um, no,” said Henry. “I’ve met so many people on my route. It’s sad. People won’t get their neighborhood news anymore.”
Mr. Trotta nodded and sighed. “We held out as long as we could," he said. “You were terrific, Henry — always dependable.”
A week after his last deliveries, Henry wondered if his customers missed The Gazette as much as he did. He thought of a way to find out. He started out on his old route with a notebook. First stop: Mr. Jonas, 17 Oak. Mr. Jonas said that he liked reading the week’s happenings and he had a pile of comics from old copies of The Gazette. He wondered if anyone would want them. Henry made a note in his notebook.
Mrs. Burke said she needed a babysitter. She was going to put an ad in The Gazette, but…
As Henry made more notes, an idea started forming in his head. Maybe he could create a newsy page for the neighbors. But how would he print it? He went to the library and explained everything to Miss Ginger, the librarian. “Follow me,” she said. Seconds later, in front of a machine, Miss Ginger turned a handle and a purple-printed sheet rolled out. “ Will mimeographed (油印的) copies work?” she asked.
“Perfect.”
Henry had a plan.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Customers cheered Henry’s idea.
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Henry typed the news, mimeographed purple copies, and delivered the first Tree Streets News on Saturday.
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Passage 3
(23-24高二上·山东济南·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jim stared at the ground and sighed in disappointment. Players from the opposing team raced past Jim, celebrating their shocking victory. They’d scored the game-winning goal just seconds before the end of the game.
“Just one word to describe a loss like that,” Jim mumbled to his teammate Devin.
“Terrible!” Devin sighed. “It was a tough one.” He trotted (小步快跑) toward the middle of the field to shake hands with the winning team. Jim walked slowly behind Devin. He unhappily slapped hands with the winners, and then stopped to shut his eyes as the autumn air cooled his sweaty face.
“Terrible,” he repeated to himself as he sat on the bench and pulled his jacket on. “Let’s get some hot chocolate and watch the next game,” Devin said. There were eight teams in the YMCA league, so games would go on all morning. “Sorry. I’m heading home,” Jim said, “I’ve had enough soccer for today.”
As he reached the gate, Jim glanced back to see the next two teams take the field. They were jumping and shouting, excited to play. “That was us a little while ago, before we were discouraged.” Jim thought.
So why we lost the game at last? Jim asked himself. How did such a well-played game end up with such a terrible result? It was still clear in his head: Jim had the ball deep on the Jets’ side of the field, looking for Devin or another teammate to pass to. His team had outplayed the Jets for most of the game, but failed within the last seconds.
Jim let out a deep breath. The morning was growing warmer. Perfect for soccer. Jim looked back toward the field. He couldn’t see it, but he could hear the excited voices as the game continued.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
With a car’s horn beeping, Jim’s friends Tara and Bryan jumped out of the car.
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There came the turn for Tara and Bryan’s team to play the game.
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Passage 4
(23-24高二上·山东烟台·期末)
David was a windsurfer, who was serious and hardworking. He dreamed of becoming a city champion of the annual Teenager Windsurfing Race. To achieve it, he barely missed a single game or practice whatever the weather. After months of intense training, the big day finally arrived!
The beach was crowded with the excited audience, including reporters and photographers. The speaker system was announcing the names of the windsurfers, calling them to get ready for the race. And there was David, in a line with other windsurfers, all of them moving nervously up and down on the waves behind an imaginary starting line. They were all fighting for the best position to start and were tense as a result, ignoring the vast sea they were on.
The moment the starter’s signal sounded, David was off, so natural and quick. He pulled hard at his sail to race just ahead of the group. As he picked up speed, gliding (滑行) over the waves, he felt the familiar joy and freedom that windsurfing always gave him. What he loved was simply being out at sea. He could hardly stop himself from shouting out in excitement, rushing to the finishing line for the first.
“Go! David!” The wind carried over a familiar voice. He looked around and spotted his elder sister Jessica on her speedboat upwind of him cheering for him. She waved at David and he nodded his head in acknowledgement, even though he knew she was too far away to see him. Just as he turned away, however, out of the comer of his eye, he saw smoke behind the speedboat, on the shore. Knowing that the smoke could tell him the direction the wind was blowing, he decided to study it for a moment out of habit. Just as he was getting a better sense of how to use the wind to his advantage, he saw it.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Not just the smoke but a big fire!
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The other windsurfers were far ahead of him at that time.
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Passage 5
The birth of the little girl, Melody, cast a shadow over her family. The words the doctor said to Dana and Jeff completely shook them, “Your daughter was born with a cleft lip (唇裂).” It was impossible for the couple to hide their sadness. They couldn’t believe it was true until they saw their daughter in person. Seeing her cleft made Dana and Jeff heartbroken more than anything. It broke their heart to imagine the kind of life Melody would lead in the future.
Fortunately, Dana and Jeff saw a ray of hope when the doctor told the couple that their daughter’s condition was treatable with a cleft lip surgery (外科手术). Rather than feeling stressful like the first few days, they promised themselves they never wanted their daughter to suffer from that. They would spare no effort to support Melody.
Nothing is precious than their little angel, and Dana as well as Jeff was ready to do anything for Melody. After bringing Melody home, they immediately began looking for clef surgery options. However, no matter where they turned, getting Melody the surgery she needed was expensive, and the various treatments and medications she needed in the following would also be much more costly than the young family could afford.
Then came the thrilling moment when Jeff browsed through a medical forum one evening, he stumbled upon (意外发现) a post about a nonprofit organization that specialized in cleft lip surgeries for children. The organization, named Smileatfuture, is dedicated to providing free surgeries to families who could not ford the procedure. The couple had seen a lot of photos and read a lot of stories about children who had cleft surgeries sponsored by Smileatfuture, and the results were incredible. The idea that Melody could grow up with hardly a scar (伤疤) where her cleft was lit a fire under the couple. Without any hesitation, Dana and her husband reached out to Smileatfuture and handed in an application for medical aid.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Everything went more smoothly than Dana and Jeff had expected.
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The big day for Melody’s surgery finally came.
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Passage 6
Since the late 1990s, Dr Daniel Tanita has been engaged in volunteer dental work for children in his hometown, a remote small country. His devotion and effort have not gone unnoticed.
When Tanita first started his volunteer work, he found himself in less-than-ideal conditions. The lack of proper dental facilities meant that he had to conduct dental checkups in a cramped(狭窄的) closet. With only one small chair and no windows, it was far from an ideal environment for providing dental care. The absence of windows resulted in the absence of natural light, creating a dim atmosphere within the small space. The lack of fresh air circulation made the environment stuffy(闷热的) and hot. Despite these limitations, Tanita persisted his volunteer work.
Over the years, Tanita’s passion for making a difference in the lives of children in need grew stronger and stronger. He witnessed firsthand the impact that early dental work and education could have on improving the overall well-being of these children. This realization fueled his determination to create a better environment for providing dental care.
The idea of building a permanent dental clinic in a local elementary school took shape in Tanita’s mind. He recognized the importance of having a dedicated(专用的) space where children could receive the dental care they were desperately in need of. With the support of a few other volunteers who shared his vision, Tanita became the driving force behind the clinic’s construction.
The project was not without its challenges. Securing funding, finding a suitable place within the school, and dealing with various related considerations required a great deal of effort and perseverance. However, Tanita’s firm devotion and passion for making a positive impact on the lives of these children motivated him to overcome all these issues.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally, the permanent dental clinic became a reality.
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Since then, children at the new clinic have been enjoying a better experience.
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Passage 7
The doctors sent my mother home to die. As a fifteen-year survivor of breast cancer, she had suffered two heart attacks when advanced cancer was found in her lung. The doctor told me sadly, "She has a few days, maybe a week. Her heart is weak and unstable. "Mom had struggled to raise three daughters while holding a full-time job, yet worked hard to maintain a warm home for her family. My plan for Mom’s final days was simple: she would live with love, and die with grace.
I took mother to my home, small but comfortable, which was a heaven to four cats and a dog. The animals had the run of my house. We equipped the bedroom with an electric hospital bed and an oxygen machine, which frightened the cats. I’d moved their furniture and the cats were annoyed. The dog, on the other hand, an immature dog with bad habits, was excited by all the changes in the house. He jumped up, barking. He is Otto who was not afraid of the hospital bed, the oxygen machine or the medical smells. Nor was he afraid of the weak woman who had scolded him. Otto jumped onto the foot of Mom's hospital bed, and stayed. With the exception of eating and using the litter box, Otto never left Mom's room.
Days passed and Mom started to rally. “Not unusual,” I was told, “a rally is often a sign of imminent death(回光返照)” I was heart-broken. But Otto would not give her up so easily. He used her improved condition to reposition himself from the foot of her bed to her side. Her thin fingers found his soft coat. He leaned into her body, as if holding tight the strings of her will to live. Though weak, she petted the dog and would not allowed me to take him. Days turned into weeks and Mom continued to fight.
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Once, after the nurses had gone for the day, I heard the sound of Mom’s voice coming from her room. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Three years later, Mom together with Otto is still here, medicines and nurses long gone. __ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 8
A woman who had a stroke (中风) while on a Face Time video call with her sister, said the technology saved her life. Esmee Russell, head of the Stroke Association, said, “A stroke can happen to anyone, at any age, at any time. That’s why it’s so important that people know how to act fast: it could save a life.” Strokes happen when the blood supply to part of the brain is cut off by a clot (凝块), or damaged by bleeding that causes brain cells in the affected area to die.
Opokua Kwapong, who lives alone in New York, was on a call with her sister, Adumea Sapong, in Manchester, when Mrs Sapong noticed that her elder sister “didn’t look right”. And she also noticed her sister’s voice was slurred (口齿不清). Ms Kwapong said she had not realised how serious the situation was.
The 58-year-old Kwapong had woken from an afternoon sleep when Mrs Sapong called her on Face Time. Ms Kwapong said “My sister looked at me and said she could see that my face didn’t look right. She also said that I was slurring my words, but I thought she was making a fuss (大惊小怪) and I didn’t believe her.”
Mrs Sapong said When I called Kwapong, she said that she'd not been feeling well and had been feeling tired and was also having some difficulty walking. I said, ‘Perhaps you need to take some medicine.’ She tried to pick up a glass of water and wasn’t able to. Then I noticed on the Face Time video call that her face was drooping. I told her she needed to hang up and immediately see a doctor. She thought I was making a fuss so I then called one of my other sisters, who is a doctor, and she could hear her speaking and could also tell that her speech was slurred. We both told her to call for help at once.”
注意:1. 所叙写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Ms Kuapong hung up the call and then dialed the emergency services.
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Ms Kwapong said: “There is no doubt that the internet and technology saved my life.
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Passage 9
One year ago, when we were in the fifth grade, a new classmate named Jack joined us. He was often late for class and had a strange smell on him, which made the girls not want to be “neighbours” with him, let alone sit next to him. It is said that once, a naughty boy curiously opened his backpack and many crushed soda cans and empty drink bottles that we usually throw into the trash fell out. Therefore, the boys in our class mocked (嘲笑) him as the “trash king”.
Later, during a class meeting, our teacher, Ms. Zhang, told us about his story of using garbage to make inventions. It turns out that Jack is not an ordinary elementary school student, but a “garbage-inspired inventor” who has won the city invention award. According to Ms. Zhang, most of his inventions were picked up from garbage dumps (堆). During that class meeting, Jack showed us his invention of a“domestic wastewater separation system”.
Afterwards, some of us became deeply interested in these small inventions and started to admire Jack’s way of “picking up trash”. We even joined him in picking up trash on weekends and during holidays. From then on, we no longer called him the “trash king“. Instead, we formed a group of five boys and actively searched for usable materials in various garbage dumps around the city. Under Jack’s guidance, we learned that there are many uses for seemingly useless trash. Once, we stayed at school to process the collected materials. Jack mentioned that he was facing a problem with his latest invention—a small cart for buying vegetables that needed to be lightweight. All other materials were solved except for the wheels. How could we find a suitable material for the wheels? We racked our brains (绞尽脑汁) and came up with different ideas, such as using soda cans or taking off the wheels from suitcases. However, Jack reminded us that our group should focus on making inventions from waste rather than causing damage to create them. We were all deep in thought.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I got home and drank a bottle of water, I suddenly had an idea.
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Jack indeed adopted my suggestion and fixed a row of bottle caps as wheels on his vegetable cart.
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Passage 10
(2023-202学年高二上·陕西宝鸡·期中)
SHOULD WE FIGHT NEW TECHNOLOGY?
This morning, I saw the shocking headline: “Passenger Dies When Car Crashes in Driverless Mode”. In the article, various people said that the public should oppose the idea of developing driverless cars. They said that some advances in technology were unnecessary and could even be dangerous. Hence, we should cease accepting technology just because it is new. The newspaper reported that the car company had already apologized for the accident, but the families of the deceased said it was not enough. Nevertheless, the company still claimed that most people would be travelling in driverless cars one day soon.
On the one hand, there are many different groups of people around the world who live happily in the absence of new technology. Probably the most well-known are the Amish, a group of Christians living in rural America. They do not own or drive cars, watch TV, or use the Internet. They have lived mainly as farmers since the 18th century and they will probably be living the same way in the distant future. They advocate a simple life with an emphasis on hard work, family, and community. They think that is better than caring about luxuries or following the lives of the rich and famous. It could even be argued that the Amish’s quality of life is better since they live in and appreciate the natural environment rather than living in large, polluted cities.
注意:
1. 续写段落不少于150个词;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
参考词汇: the Internet keep in touch social media health monitor
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On the other hand, new technology has provided people everywhere with many benefits over the years. For example,
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Personally, I have benefited quite a lot from technological advances.
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专题05 书面表达(应用文写作10篇+读后续写10篇)
[模考好题20篇](选择必修二)
应用文写作
Passage 1
(23-24高二下·浙江·期中)假设你是李华,你的爱尔兰好友Jim发来邮件说爱尔兰人微信群里多数人用真人照片做微信头像(profile photo/picture),觉得这样更能让别人信任自己,他想知道为什么多数中国人不用本人照片当头像。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1) 分析可能的原因;
(2) 给出你的观点;
(3) 期待回信。
注意:1. 写作词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jim,
I am more than happy to hear from you and answer your question why Chinese people rarely show their faces on We-chat’s profile picture.
There are some reasons for the phenomenon. Some people don’t want to meet with ill comments on their appearances, some think of the profile picture as a chance to make a statement, which shows their personality, and others just want to protect their privacy because no one knows what strangers will do with that. I think avoiding our own photos makes the internet world funnier and more entertaining.
Looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的爱尔兰好友Jim发来邮件说爱尔兰人微信群里多数人用真人照片做微信头像,觉得这样更能让别人信任自己,他想知道为什么多数中国人不用本人照片当头像,要求考生用英文给他回复,分析可能的原因并给出你的观点。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的:happy→delighted
展示:show→display
机会:chance→opportunity
认为:think→consider
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I think avoiding our own photos makes the internet world funnier and more entertaining.
拓展句:As far as I am concerned, avoiding our own photos makes the internet world funnier and more entertaining.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am more than happy to hear from you and answer your question why Chinese people rarely show their faces on We-chat’s profile picture.(why引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】Some people don’t want to meet with ill comments on their appearances, some think of the profile picture as a chance to make a statement, which shows their personality, and others just want to protect their privacy because no one knows what strangers will do with that.(which引导的非限制性定语从句、because引导原因状语从句以及what引导宾语从句)
Passage 2
(23-24高二下·广东揭阳·阶段练习)假定你是李华,请给你校交换生James写一封信,告知他潮汕地区正向外国友人开展题为“Chaoshan in My Eyes”的短视频征集活动以宣传推介潮汕文化遗产,内容包括:
1. 活动介绍;2. 视频要求;3. 鼓励参加。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;2. 请按如下格式在题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear James,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear James,
I am writing to inform you about an exciting event in the Chaoshan region. The local government is organizing a short video contest titled “Chaoshan in My Eyes” among international friends, aimed at promoting the rich cultural heritage of Chaoshan.
The contest invites participants to create and submit a short video that showcases their unique perspective on Chaoshan’s culture. The video should be no longer than 5 minutes and must highlight aspects of Chaoshan’s traditions, cuisine, arts, or any other cultural elements that you find intriguing.
I strongly encourage you to participate in this contest. It’s a wonderful opportunity to share your experiences and insights about Chaoshan with a wider audience.
Looking forward to seeing your creative work!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给校交换生James写一封信,告知他题为“Chaoshan in My Eyes”的短视频征集活动的信息,介绍视频要求,并鼓励他参加该活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
令人激动的:exciting→thrilling
展示:showcase→show, display
突出:highlight→spotlight
参与:participate in→take part in
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:I strongly encourage you to participate in this contest. It’s a wonderful opportunity to share your experiences and insights about Chaoshan with a wider audience.
拓展句:I strongly encourage you to participate in this contest because it’s a wonderful opportunity to share your experiences and insights about Chaoshan with a wider audience.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The local government is organizing a short video contest titled “Chaoshan in My Eyes” among international friends, aimrd at promoting the rich cultural heritage of Chaoshan. (运用了过去分词短语titled…作后置定语、现在分词短语aiming at…作状语)
[高分句型2] The contest invites participants to create and submit a short video that showcases their unique perspective on Chaoshan’s culture. (运用了that引导限制性定语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25高二上·江苏南通·开学考试)今年巴黎奥运会上各国运动员展现出了很多精神品质。假如你是李华,你将在班级进行的英语主题班会上介绍你最欣赏的运动员精神,内容要点如下:
1. 简单阐述该精神品质;
2. 它对你的学习生活的影响。
要求:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Friends,
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Thank you for your listening!
【答案】Dear Friends,
The spirit I admire most in athletes is perseverance. Perseverance means never giving up, no matter how tough the situation is. This quality is essential for success in both sports and life. In my studies, I often face challenges and setbacks. However, by adopting the spirit of perseverance, I have learned to stay focused and keep working hard, even when things get difficult. This has helped me improve my grades and achieve my goals. I believe that with perseverance, we can overcome any obstacle and reach our full potential.
Thank you for your listening!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生在英语主题班会上介绍最欣赏的运动员精神,并阐述其对自己学习生活的影响。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
坚持不懈:perseverance→persistence
放弃:give up→quit
必要的:essential→necessary
帮助某人:help sb.→give sb. a hand
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This quality is essential for success in sports and life.
拓展句:This quality is essential for success in both sports and life, as it helps individuals overcome obstacles and achieve their goals.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Perseverance means never giving up, no matter how tough the situation is.(运用了no matter how引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe that with perseverance, we can overcome any obstacle and reach our full potential.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 4
(24-25高二上·山东日照·开学考试)2024年巴黎奥运会上中国体育健儿成绩做人,青年学子备受鼓舞。为此,你校将举行主题为“学奥运,圆梦想”的英语演讲比赛,请你写一篇演讲稿参赛。内容包括:
(1)你对奥运精神的理解;
(2)你实现梦想的决心。
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Good morning, dear teachers and fellow students!
Today, I am extremely excited to stand here and deliver a speech.
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Thank you all!
【答案】Good morning, dear teachers and fellow students!
Today, I am extremely excited to stand here and deliver a speech.
The Olympic spirit embodies the essence of perseverance, unity, and the relentless pursuit of excellence. It’s the flame that burns in the hearts of athletes, driving them to push beyond their limits and achieve what was once thought impossible.
As a young student, I am determined to embrace this Olympic mindset in my journey towards realizing my dreams. I will work hard, set ambitious targets, and never give up. I will learn to cooperate with others, because only in that way can we accomplish more than we do alone.
Thank you all!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇演讲稿,阐述你对奥运精神的理解以及你实现梦想的决心。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
本质:essence→nature
驱使:drive→motivate
实现:achieve→realize
决定做:be determined to do→decide to do
与……合作:cooperate with→work together with
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:As a young student, I am determined to embrace this Olympic mindset in my journey towards realizing my dreams.
拓展句:As a young student, what I am determined to do is (to) embrace this Olympic mindset in my journey towards realizing my dreams.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s the flame that burns in the hearts of athletes, driving them to push beyond their limits and achieve what was once thought impossible.(使用了that引导定语从句、现在分词短语作状语、不定式短语作宾补、what引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I will learn to cooperate with others, because only in that way can we accomplish more than we do alone. (使用了不定式短语作宾语、because引导原因状语从句、“only+介词短语”引出的倒装结构、比较状语从句)
Passage 5
(23-24高二上·广东深圳·期末)请你以“My View on Sportsmanship”为题写一篇英文发言稿,内容包括:
1.你对体育精神的理解;
2.运动员的事迹举例;
3.对你的影响和启示。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
My View on Sportsmanship
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【答案】
My View on Sportsmanship
Hello everyone,
I’d like to talk about sportsmanship today. To me, it means playing fair, respecting others, and being graceful whether you win or lose.
Let’s look at an example: Serena Williams. She shows amazing sportsmanship on and off the tennis court. Even when things don’t go her way, she stays respectful and humble.
Athletes like Serena teach us that winning isn’t everything; it’s how you behave along the way that matters. They inspire us to always do our best while staying true to our values.
Thank you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“My View on Sportsmanship”为题写一篇英文发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
谈论:talk about → discuss
意味着:mean → signify
尊敬:respect → esteem
谦逊的:humble → modest
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:She shows amazing sportsmanship on and off the tennis court.
拓展句:She shows amazing sportsmanship whether she is on or off the tennis court.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Even when things don’t go her way, she stays respectful and humble.(运用了从属连词when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Athletes like Serena teach us that winning isn’t everything (运用了连词that引导宾语从句)
Passage 6
假定你是李华,得知外教Jack最近经常头痛,吃药后效果不佳。请你给他写一封电子邮件,推荐他尝试中医治疗。内容包括:
1.中医的优点;
2.期待他早日康复。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to know you are being troubled by headaches and cannot recover after taking the medicine.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I am sorry to know you are being troubled by headaches and cannot recover after taking the medicine. Therefore, I am writing to recommend you to have a try on traditional Chinese medicine.
Compared with Western medicine, traditional Chinese medicine possesses many advantages. For example, doctors of traditional Chinese medicine tend to offer patients a particular prescription based on their personal conditions to create a more effective treatment. Additionally, traditional Chinese medicine also relieves the patients of their suffering by acupuncture, which has minor side effects on them.
As a result, I strongly advise you to try it, hoping that you will be free of the headache and that your health will pick up so that all of us can enjoy your inspiring lessons soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Jack写一封电子邮件,推荐他尝试中医治疗。
【详解】1.词汇积累
例如:for example→for instance
建议:advise→suggest
此外:additionally→in addition
提供:offer→provide
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:For example, doctors of traditional Chinese medicine tend to offer patients a particular prescription based on their personal conditions to create a more effective treatment.
拓展句:For example, doctors of traditional Chinese medicine tend to offer patients a particular prescription, which is based on their personal conditions to create a more effective treatment.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Compared with Western medicine, traditional Chinese medicine possesses many advantages. (运用了过去分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Additionally, traditional Chinese medicine also relieves the patients of their suffering by acupuncture, which has minor side effects on them. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
Passage 7
(23-24高二上·江苏盐城·期末)假如你是第九中学的李华,你的美国笔友Demon来信说最近对中医很感兴趣,甚至想尝试一下中国的针灸。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.针灸的简介;
2.你对针灸未来发展的信心。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Demon,
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【答案】Dear Demon,
Hearing traditional Chinese medicine, especially acupuncture, has engaged your interest, I am writing to introduce it briefly.
Dating from the Stone Age, acupuncture, one of the most famous Chinese medical treatments in which thin needles are pressed into the body, has been used to treat various health problems. Not only can it treat physical problems but also it can help people with mental problems and drug addiction.
To conclude, having gained increasing worldwide recognition, acupuncture will definitely have a promising future. And you can feel free to try it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本书面表达属于应用文。美国笔友Demon来信说最近对中医很感兴趣,甚至想尝试一下中国的针灸。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.针灸的简介;2.你对针灸未来发展的信心。
【详解】1.词汇积累
尤其:especially→particularly
起源于:date from→originate from
帮助:help→assist
总而言之:to conclude→in conclusion/to sum up
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:To conclude, having gained increasing worldwide recognition, acupuncture will definitely have a promising future.
拓展句:In summary, as acupuncture continues to acquire recognition on a global scale, it will definitely have a bright future.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Dating from the Stone Age, acupuncture, one of the most famous Chinese medical treatments in which thin needles are pressed into the body, has been used to treat various health problems.(运用了in which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】To conclude, having gained increasing worldwide recognition, acupuncture will definitely have a promising future. (运用了现在分词完成式作状语)
Passage 8
假定你是李华,近期你收到英国朋友Jack的微信,谈及全球疫情严重流行时传统中药良好的医治作用,他希望了解更多的中药的优点,请你给他回信,内容包括:
1. 完全来自大自然,副作用小;
2. 对人的身体进行全面治疗;
3. 能够作为治疗癌症等疾病的药物。参考词汇:传统中药 Traditional Chinese Medicine
Dear Jack,
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【答案】Dear Jack,
How is everything going? As is mentioned in your WeChat, Traditional Chinese Medicine has shown great power in 2020 epidemic prevention. Now I’d like to tell you some advantages of it as follows:
To begin with, Chinese herbs come from materials that are purely natural, which have small side effects. In addition, Traditional Chinese Medicine can work on the whole bodies of people. Last but not least, with further studies, scientists have found that Chinese herbs are useful in treating some illnesses, such as cancer.
As a Chinese, I believe that Traditional Chinese Medicine can help to create a healthier world. Do take care!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jack写封信,根据提示的内容向他介绍中药的优点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
完全地:purely →completely
此外:in addition → what’s more
有用的:useful →of use
疾病:illness →sickness
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:As a Chinese, I believe that Traditional Chinese Medicine can help to create a healthier world.
拓展句:As a Chinese, I hold the belief that Traditional Chinese Medicine can help to create a healthier world.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As is mentioned in your WeChat, Traditional Chinese Medicine has shown great power in 2020 epidemic prevention.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】To begin with, Chinese herbs come from materials that are purely natural, which have small side effects.(运用了that引导的定语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 9
(24-25高二上·江苏南通·阶段练习)你校英文报正在开展以“My favorite type of mass media to get news”为主题的征稿活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 介绍你最喜欢的大众传媒;
2. 简述原因。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
My favorite type of mass media to get news
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【答案】
My favorite type of mass media to get news
My favorite type of mass media to get news is Baidu, a leading Chinese search engine and comprehensive information platform. Unlike other social media, Baidu provides me with a one-stop solution for news gathering.
I prefer Baidu because of its extensive coverage and reliability. It has a wide range of news from reputable sources, allowing me to access a wide range of information quickly. Moreover, Baidu’s advanced search capabilities enable me to tailor my news feed to my specific interests, ensuring that I stay updated on topics that matter to me.
In this way, Baidu has become a key tool for me to stay informed in today’s fast-paced world.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生参与学校英文报开展的征稿活动,写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的获取新闻的大众传媒,并说明具体原因。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
各种各样的:a wide range of→a variety of, different kinds of
获取:access→have access to
确保:ensure→guarantee
快节奏的:fast-paced→rapid-paced
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My favorite type of mass media to get news is Baidu, a leading Chinese search engine and comprehensive information platform.
拓展句:My favorite type of mass media to get news is Baidu, which is a leading Chinese search engine and comprehensive information platform.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It has a wide range of news from reputable sources, allowing me to access a wide range of information quickly. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
[高分句型2] Moreover, Baidu’s advanced search capabilities enable me to tailor my news feed to my specific interests, ensuring that I stay updated on topics that matter to me. (运用了现在分词作状语、第一个that引导宾语从句、第二个that引导限制性定语从句)
Passage 10
(24-25高二上·广西南宁·阶段练习)假定你是某国际学校的学生会成员,下周你校将举办校园科技创新大赛。请你用英语写一则通知,鼓励大家踊跃参加,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动内容;
3.参赛方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:学生会 (The Students’Union)
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【答案】Dear fellow students,
The Students’ Union is excited to announce that our school will be hosting the annual Campus Science and Technology Innovation Competition next week. This event aims to encourage creativity, innovation, and practical problem-solving skills among our student body.
The competition will feature various activities, including individual and team projects, poster presentations, and interactive exhibits. Participants will have the opportunity to showcase their ideas, research, and inventions to a panel of judges and fellow students.
We encourage everyone to join us in this exciting event and demonstrate your creativity and passion for science and technology. We look forward to your active participation!
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就下周将举办的校园科技创新大赛写一则通知,鼓励大家踊跃参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:host→hold
活动/项目:event → project
机会:opportunity→chance
令人激动的:exciting→ exhilarating
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We look forward to your active participation!
拓展句:We look forward to your active participation, which will be our great honor.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The Students’ Union is excited to announce that our school will be hosting the annual Campus Science and Technology Innovation Competition next week.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Participants will have the opportunity to showcase their ideas, research, and inventions to a panel of judges and fellow students.(运用了不定式作后置定语)
读后续写
Passage 1
(23-24高二下·内蒙古兴安盟·期中)
In 2018, 17-year-old Hemesh spent a life-changing summer with his grandmother Anne, who had been diagnosed with Alzheimer’s disease. Witnessing the impact of the disease firsthand, Hemesh was awakened to the seriousness of the situation.
One night, Hemesh walked into the kitchen only to discover that his grandmother had left the gas stove (炉) on after making tea. Shocked by the dangerous consequences Alzheimer’s disease could bring about, he couldn’t help but wonder what might have happened if he hadn’t been there.
Hemesh’s worries increased as he observed his grandmother’s behavior. She would wake up in the early hours of the morning, believing she was on a train, and wander outside aimlessly. This wandering tendency could potentially lead her to get lost or put herself in risky situations.
Determined to make a difference, Hemesh engaged himself in extensive research about Alzheimer’s disease and its symptomatic (症状的) progression. Through his studies, he discovered that wandering was a common problem among dementia patients, especially those with Alzheimer’s disease.
Inspired by his newfound knowledge and fueled by his desire to help, Hemesh told his family, “I can’t just stand by and watch this happen. I need to do something to keep Grandma safe. I think I have an idea that might help not just her, but others in similar situations.”
With firm determination, he developed an inventive answer to the wandering dilemma, a device he called the Guardian Companion. It was a wearable device, similar to a smartwatch, specifically designed for Alzheimer’s patients. It integrated advanced GPS technology and a panic button to assist those who tended to wander, ensuring their safety and well-being. After the device got its official approval, Hemesh happily went to try it on for his grandmother.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As Anne put on the Guardian Companion, Hemesh explained how it worked.
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In the next few weeks, the device made a difference to Anne and her family.
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【答案】
As Anne put on the Guardian Companion, Hemesh explained how it worked. He reassured her that it would help keep her safe. With a mixture of curiosity and skepticism, Anne agreed to give it a try. The device fit comfortably on her wrist. Hemesh walked his grandmother through the features, showing her how to use the panic button. Anne’s eyes lit up with a glimmer of hope, and for the first time since her diagnosis, she felt a sense of regained independence.
In the next few weeks, the device made a difference to Anne and her family. Not only did it provide a sense of security for Anne, but it also relieved the constant worry for her loved ones. The device brought peace of mind to the entire family, knowing that Anne was protected even when they couldn’t be by her side. Hemesh’s creation had truly transformed dementia care, and he found himself on a new mission to make the device accessible to as many people as possible, ensuring that no one had to face the challenges of Alzheimer’s disease alone.
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了2018年,17岁的Hemesh和被诊断患有阿尔茨海默病的祖母Anne度过了一个改变人生的夏天。Hemesh亲眼目睹了这种疾病对祖母的影响的严重性,主要表现为“闲荡”。出于对于祖母安全的考虑,凭着坚定的决心,他发明了一种可穿戴装置,类似于智能手表,专门为患有阿尔茨海默病患者设计。通过该装置的使用,祖母不仅在人身安全方面得到了保障,也在精神上有了自由保证。不仅如此,Hemesh希望可以对该装置进行跟进和改善,以适用于更多的患有阿尔茨海默病的人。
【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“As Anne put on the Guardian Companion, Hemesh explained how it worked. (当Anne戴上“守护伴侣”时,Hemesh解释了它是如何工作的。)”可知,第一段可描写Hemesh对这个装置的具体解释和演示使用方法。②由第二段首句内容“In the next few weeks, the device made a difference to Anne and her family. (在接下来的几个星期里,这个装置对Anne和她的家人产生了影响。)”可知,第二段可描写这个装置对于Anne和家人的具体影响,以及Hemesh的打算。
2.续写线索:劝服Anne戴上“守护伴侣”——解释功能——点燃希望——“守护伴侣”给Anne和家人带来的积极影响——Hemesh的打算
3.词汇激活
行为类①演示/展示:show/display/reveal/present②提供:provide/offer/give③带来/导致:bring/produce/cause④知道/了解:know/learn about/be aware of/make sure
情绪类
①希望/信心:with a glimmer of hope/wishfully/hopefully②担心/焦虑:constant worry/anxiety
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Not only did it provide a sense of security for Anne, but it also relieved the constant worry for her loved ones.(使用了“Not only…”置于句首的部分倒装句式)
[高分句型2]. The device brought peace of mind to the entire family, knowing that Anne was protected even when they couldn’t be by her side.(“knowing that Anne was protected even when they couldn’t be by her side”为现在分词作状语,且that引导从句,作动词“knowing”的宾语从句)
[高分句型3]. Hemesh’s creation had truly transformed dementia care, and he found himself on a new mission to make the device accessible to as many people as possible, ensuring that no one had to face the challenges of Alzheimer’s disease alone.(由and连接前后两个并列句;“ensuring that no one had to face the challenges of Alzheimer’s disease alone”为现在分词作状语,且that引导从句作动词“ensuring”的宾语从句)
Passage 2
(23-24高二上·河南洛阳·期末)
Henry finished rolling copies of The Gazette, filled his bag and took off to deliver the news.
It was 8:15 a.m. when he delivered the last newspaper. He had put the paper where Mr.Grady could get it without struggling to the sidewalk. Across the street, Henry’s delivery had landed perfectly too. Mrs. Burke, with twin babies, probably liked having her paper within easy reach.
Henry parked his bike near the office building and bounded up to the editor-in-chiefs door. Mr. Trotta said, “We’re closing shop, Henry. Advertising is down. Television is how people get their news today.”
“Um, no,” said Henry. “I’ve met so many people on my route. It’s sad. People won’t get their neighborhood news anymore.”
Mr. Trotta nodded and sighed. “We held out as long as we could," he said. “You were terrific, Henry — always dependable.”
A week after his last deliveries, Henry wondered if his customers missed The Gazette as much as he did. He thought of a way to find out. He started out on his old route with a notebook. First stop: Mr. Jonas, 17 Oak. Mr. Jonas said that he liked reading the week’s happenings and he had a pile of comics from old copies of The Gazette. He wondered if anyone would want them. Henry made a note in his notebook.
Mrs. Burke said she needed a babysitter. She was going to put an ad in The Gazette, but…
As Henry made more notes, an idea started forming in his head. Maybe he could create a newsy page for the neighbors. But how would he print it? He went to the library and explained everything to Miss Ginger, the librarian. “Follow me,” she said. Seconds later, in front of a machine, Miss Ginger turned a handle and a purple-printed sheet rolled out. “ Will mimeographed (油印的) copies work?” she asked.
“Perfect.”
Henry had a plan.
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Customers cheered Henry’s idea.
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Henry typed the news, mimeographed purple copies, and delivered the first Tree Streets News on Saturday.
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【答案】
Customers cheered Henry’s idea. Besides Mrs. Burke who longed for a babysitter and Mr. Simon who desired a large audience for his concert, Henry also collected six other neighbors appealing and needs, including Mr Grady who yearned for his children’s coming back for a short reunion. Information in hand, Henry knocked at Mr. Trotta’s door and pleaded for his support in publishing his first Oak Street News, who approved almost immediately. Soon, Henry’s tabloid was in circulation, which he cheerfully delivered from door to door as before.
Henry typed the news, mimeographed purple copies, and delivered the first Tree Streets News on Saturday. Neigh bons applauded the idea of sharing their needs in a communal newspaper, which really addressed their immediate concern in a practical and efficient way. As Mrs Burke successfully found an ideal babysitter, Mr Simon secured a large following for his concert and Mr Grady who happily reunited with his kids. Henry realized. from his deep heart, that The Gazette was far from gone in this TV era, but transformed into Oak Street News that connected, bonded and tied the Oak neighbors in a cory fabric.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了亨利是一个送报工,但是随着电视的流行,报纸公司快要关门了。这时亨利想到了创办第一份《橡树街新闻》报纸,来刊登邻居们的需求。不久,亨利的小报开始发行,他像以前一样兴高采烈地挨家挨户地送报纸。邻居们对在社区报纸上分享他们的需求的想法表示欢迎,这确实以一种实用而有效的方式解决了他们最关心的问题。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“顾客们为亨利的想法欢呼。”可知,第一段可描写亨利创办《橡树街新闻》报纸,来刊登邻居们的需求。
②由第二段首句内容“亨利把新闻打了出来,用油印机印了紫色的副本,并在星期六发表了第一份《树街新闻》。”可知,第二段可描写《橡树街新闻》报纸带来的良好影响。
2.续写线索:为想法欢呼——亨利收集信息——出版《橡树街新闻》报纸——送报纸——邻居的需求得到解决——邻居联系在一起
3.词汇激活
行为类①收集:collect/gather②渴望:yearn for/long for③支持:approve/be in favor of
情绪类①高兴地:cheerfully/gladly②高效的:efficient/effective
【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides Mrs. Burke who longed for a babysitter and Mr. Simon who desired a large audience for his concert, Henry also collected six other neighbors appealing and needs, including Mr Grady who yearned for his children’s coming back for a short reunion. (运用了who引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] As Mrs Burke successfully found an ideal babysitter, Mr Simon secured a large following for his concert and Mr Grady who happily reunited with his kids.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句和who引导的定语从句)
Passage 3
(23-24高二上·山东济南·期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jim stared at the ground and sighed in disappointment. Players from the opposing team raced past Jim, celebrating their shocking victory. They’d scored the game-winning goal just seconds before the end of the game.
“Just one word to describe a loss like that,” Jim mumbled to his teammate Devin.
“Terrible!” Devin sighed. “It was a tough one.” He trotted (小步快跑) toward the middle of the field to shake hands with the winning team. Jim walked slowly behind Devin. He unhappily slapped hands with the winners, and then stopped to shut his eyes as the autumn air cooled his sweaty face.
“Terrible,” he repeated to himself as he sat on the bench and pulled his jacket on. “Let’s get some hot chocolate and watch the next game,” Devin said. There were eight teams in the YMCA league, so games would go on all morning. “Sorry. I’m heading home,” Jim said, “I’ve had enough soccer for today.”
As he reached the gate, Jim glanced back to see the next two teams take the field. They were jumping and shouting, excited to play. “That was us a little while ago, before we were discouraged.” Jim thought.
So why we lost the game at last? Jim asked himself. How did such a well-played game end up with such a terrible result? It was still clear in his head: Jim had the ball deep on the Jets’ side of the field, looking for Devin or another teammate to pass to. His team had outplayed the Jets for most of the game, but failed within the last seconds.
Jim let out a deep breath. The morning was growing warmer. Perfect for soccer. Jim looked back toward the field. He couldn’t see it, but he could hear the excited voices as the game continued.
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With a car’s horn beeping, Jim’s friends Tara and Bryan jumped out of the car.
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There came the turn for Tara and Bryan’s team to play the game.
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【答案】
With a car’s horn beeping, Jim’s friends Tara and Bryan jumped out of the car. “How did you do?” Tara asked eagerly. “Terrible!” Jim replied in a down tone, still trying to figure out how the opposing team scored the game — winning goal just seconds before the end of the game. Bryan patted Jim’s shoulder asking, “Is winning the game the only reason why you play soccer and what really matters when playing a game?” Hearing this, Jim didn’t want to go home but decided to follow his friends and watch their game.
There came the turn for Tara and Bryan’s team to play the game. Jim watched with full attention as Tara’s team played fiercely against their opposing team. What impressed him most was that all the players in Tara’s team cooperated perfectly with unwavering resolve on their faces. Even when they were in a tie with the opponent, they stayed positive and confident. It dawned on Jim that success doesn’t always depend on the end result, but rather on how we face adversity and grow from it.
【导语】本文以事件为线索展开,讲述了Jim所在的足球队在比赛中不幸落败,他非常沮丧,觉得很失败。队友Devin邀请他留下来一起看下一场足球比赛,Jim心情低落,于是拒绝了。在离开球场的过程中,Jim一直在思考为什么会输掉比赛,回想当时球场上的情况。回头看球场的时候,他无法看到现在场上的情况,只能听到兴奋的声音。
【详解】1. 段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“汽车喇叭声一响,Jim的朋友Tara和Bryan从车里跳了出来”可知,第一段可描写两人和Jim交流之前比赛的情况,以及让Jim留下来继续看比赛。②由第二段首句内容“轮到Tara和Bryan的队伍上场了”可知,第二段可描写Jim看到的Tara和Bryan的队伍在比赛中的精彩表现,以及Jim领悟到的关于成功和失败的道理。
2. 续写线索:Tara和Bryan出现——三人交流比赛情况——Jim决定留下看比赛——Tara和Bryan的队伍上场——Jim看比赛——Jim领悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类①回复:reply/respond/answer②弄清楚:figure out/work out/find out③重要:matter/count/weigh④合作:cooperate/work jointly/collaborate⑤取决于:depend on/be determined by/be dependent on
情绪类①急切地:eagerly/anxiously②低落的:down/discouraged/downhearted
【点睛】[高分句型1] Is winning the game the only reason why you play soccer and what really matters when playing a game? (动名词短语winning…作主语、why引导限制性定语从句、what引导表语从句)
[高分句型2] What impressed him most was that all the players in Tara’s team cooperated perfectly with unwavering resolve on their faces. (what引导主语从句、that引导表语从句)
Passage 4
(23-24高二上·山东烟台·期末)
David was a windsurfer, who was serious and hardworking. He dreamed of becoming a city champion of the annual Teenager Windsurfing Race. To achieve it, he barely missed a single game or practice whatever the weather. After months of intense training, the big day finally arrived!
The beach was crowded with the excited audience, including reporters and photographers. The speaker system was announcing the names of the windsurfers, calling them to get ready for the race. And there was David, in a line with other windsurfers, all of them moving nervously up and down on the waves behind an imaginary starting line. They were all fighting for the best position to start and were tense as a result, ignoring the vast sea they were on.
The moment the starter’s signal sounded, David was off, so natural and quick. He pulled hard at his sail to race just ahead of the group. As he picked up speed, gliding (滑行) over the waves, he felt the familiar joy and freedom that windsurfing always gave him. What he loved was simply being out at sea. He could hardly stop himself from shouting out in excitement, rushing to the finishing line for the first.
“Go! David!” The wind carried over a familiar voice. He looked around and spotted his elder sister Jessica on her speedboat upwind of him cheering for him. She waved at David and he nodded his head in acknowledgement, even though he knew she was too far away to see him. Just as he turned away, however, out of the comer of his eye, he saw smoke behind the speedboat, on the shore. Knowing that the smoke could tell him the direction the wind was blowing, he decided to study it for a moment out of habit. Just as he was getting a better sense of how to use the wind to his advantage, he saw it.
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Not just the smoke but a big fire!
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The other windsurfers were far ahead of him at that time.
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Not just the smoke but a big fire! David couldn’t believe his eyes. It occurred to him that it was from a restaurant where he once did a part-time job and that all the staff might be among the audience. He looked back at the beach, where all of the audience were too attentive to the race to be conscious of the fire. It was then that he made a resolution to turn around, passing by the other windsurfers and racing towards the shore, rather than the finishing line.
The other windsurfers were far ahead of him at that time. Apparently, this promising teenager had withdrawn the Race. Many confused people who noticed his strange behavior also spotted the shocking smoke and fire on the shore. The teenager rushed towards the fire, followed by many adults, including the staff. More hands made light work. They put out the fire before it was too late, minimizing the losses. Due to his contribution, the organizing committee awarded David the sportsmanship Award. All the audience applauded him for his acceptance speech: “I don’t regret losing the chance of becoming a champion to help others.”
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了风帆冲浪运动员大卫参加城市青少年帆板比赛,比赛开始时他一路领先,途中听见姐姐杰西卡在他逆风处的快艇上为他加油时,大卫发现快艇后面的岸边某处着火了,尽管大卫原本有望成为这次比赛的冠军,他依旧转身向海岸而来,观众中也有人因他而发现了火情,他们共同成功灭火。他的行为感动了在场所有人。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“不仅是烟,还有大火!”可知,第一段可描写大卫看到岸边着火后的所想所为。
②由第二段首句内容“那时候,其他帆板运动员远远领先于他。”可知,第二段可描写大卫放弃了比赛,回到岸上,和其他人共同扑灭了大火。组委会因此授予他体育精神奖,在场所有人为大卫的言行感动。
2.续写线索:发现火灾——退出比赛——回到岸上——同观众一起灭火——得到众人的肯定
3.词汇激活 行为类①.下决心:make a resolution / resolve②.冲向:race towards… / rush towards… ③.注意到:notice / spot
情绪类
①.困惑的:confused / puzzled
②.惋惜:regret / feel pitiful for
【点睛】[高分句型1]. It occurred to him that it was from a restaurant where he once did a part-time job and that all the staff might be among the audience.(由连接词that引导的主语从句,where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. They put out the fire before it was too late, minimizing the losses. (由连接词before引导的时间状语从句,现在分词作状语)
Passage 5
The birth of the little girl, Melody, cast a shadow over her family. The words the doctor said to Dana and Jeff completely shook them, “Your daughter was born with a cleft lip (唇裂).” It was impossible for the couple to hide their sadness. They couldn’t believe it was true until they saw their daughter in person. Seeing her cleft made Dana and Jeff heartbroken more than anything. It broke their heart to imagine the kind of life Melody would lead in the future.
Fortunately, Dana and Jeff saw a ray of hope when the doctor told the couple that their daughter’s condition was treatable with a cleft lip surgery (外科手术). Rather than feeling stressful like the first few days, they promised themselves they never wanted their daughter to suffer from that. They would spare no effort to support Melody.
Nothing is precious than their little angel, and Dana as well as Jeff was ready to do anything for Melody. After bringing Melody home, they immediately began looking for clef surgery options. However, no matter where they turned, getting Melody the surgery she needed was expensive, and the various treatments and medications she needed in the following would also be much more costly than the young family could afford.
Then came the thrilling moment when Jeff browsed through a medical forum one evening, he stumbled upon (意外发现) a post about a nonprofit organization that specialized in cleft lip surgeries for children. The organization, named Smileatfuture, is dedicated to providing free surgeries to families who could not ford the procedure. The couple had seen a lot of photos and read a lot of stories about children who had cleft surgeries sponsored by Smileatfuture, and the results were incredible. The idea that Melody could grow up with hardly a scar (伤疤) where her cleft was lit a fire under the couple. Without any hesitation, Dana and her husband reached out to Smileatfuture and handed in an application for medical aid.
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Everything went more smoothly than Dana and Jeff had expected.
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The big day for Melody’s surgery finally came.
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Everything went more smoothly than Dana and Jeff had expected. Within one week, they were overjoyed to learn that their application had been approved and that Melody was qualified for the program. Then they made an instant appointment with Smileatfuture. The moment the couple walked into Smileatfuture, they were greeted with warm smiles and a sense of community. Smileatfuture’s team was incredibly supportive, guiding them on everything they needed to do to prepare Melody for her surgery. Knowing that their daughter’s future was in capable hands, they left with a newfound sense of optimism that day.
The big day for Melody’s surgery finally came. All the tests beforehand showed that Melody was in perfect condition for the surgery. The couple’s hearts were overflowing with a mix of anxiety and hope. After what seemed a century’s waiting, they finally had good news that the surgery was a success. Imagining that their girl was on track for a life of joy, loving to run around and play with other kids in the future, Dana and Jeff felt more than relieved and grateful. The couple owed all these to the kindness they received. They also made a promise to pay it forward by helping others in need.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了小女孩Melody出生时患有唇裂,给她的父母Dana和Jeff带来了巨大的心理压力和悲伤。然而,当医生告诉他们可以通过手术治疗时,他们看到了希望,并决心全力支持Melody。尽管手术费用昂贵,他们依然积极寻找解决方案。最终,Jeff偶然发现了一个名为Smileatfuture的非营利组织,该组织专门为儿童提供免费的唇裂手术。在看到该组织成功案例后,Dana和Jeff毫不犹豫地联系了Smileatfuture,提交了医疗援助申请。
【详解】1. 段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“一切都比Dana和Jeff预期的顺利”可知,第一段可描写Dana和Jeff两人的申请被批准,Melody可以参加该医疗项目,以及该组织为Melody提供各种支持,指导两人为手术做相关准备。②由第二段首句内容“Melody手术的大日子终于来了”可知,第二段可描写Dana和Jeff两人焦急地等待Melody的手术结果,Melody的手术最终成功了,以及两人感到欣慰和感激,决心传递自己接受到的善意,也帮助其他人。
2. 续写线索:一切都很顺利——申请获批——组织提供支持——手术日来临——手术成功——两人充满感激,决定传递善意
3. 词汇激活行为类①得知:know/learn②走进:walk into/step into③表明:show/indicate/demonstrate④想象:imagine/picture/visualize
情绪类①非常高兴的:overjoyed/pleased/happy②焦虑:anxiety/concern/worry③感激的:grateful/thankful
【点睛】[高分句型1] The moment the couple walked into Smileatfuture, they were greeted with warm smiles and a sense of community. (the moment引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Knowing that their daughter’s future was in capable hands, they left with a newfound sense of optimism that day. (现在分词作状语、that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型3] After what seemed a century’s waiting, they finally had good news that the surgery was a success. (what引导宾语从句、that引导同位语从句)
Passage 6
Since the late 1990s, Dr Daniel Tanita has been engaged in volunteer dental work for children in his hometown, a remote small country. His devotion and effort have not gone unnoticed.
When Tanita first started his volunteer work, he found himself in less-than-ideal conditions. The lack of proper dental facilities meant that he had to conduct dental checkups in a cramped(狭窄的) closet. With only one small chair and no windows, it was far from an ideal environment for providing dental care. The absence of windows resulted in the absence of natural light, creating a dim atmosphere within the small space. The lack of fresh air circulation made the environment stuffy(闷热的) and hot. Despite these limitations, Tanita persisted his volunteer work.
Over the years, Tanita’s passion for making a difference in the lives of children in need grew stronger and stronger. He witnessed firsthand the impact that early dental work and education could have on improving the overall well-being of these children. This realization fueled his determination to create a better environment for providing dental care.
The idea of building a permanent dental clinic in a local elementary school took shape in Tanita’s mind. He recognized the importance of having a dedicated(专用的) space where children could receive the dental care they were desperately in need of. With the support of a few other volunteers who shared his vision, Tanita became the driving force behind the clinic’s construction.
The project was not without its challenges. Securing funding, finding a suitable place within the school, and dealing with various related considerations required a great deal of effort and perseverance. However, Tanita’s firm devotion and passion for making a positive impact on the lives of these children motivated him to overcome all these issues.
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Finally, the permanent dental clinic became a reality.
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Since then, children at the new clinic have been enjoying a better experience.
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Finally, the permanent dental clinic became a reality. The new clinic is spotlessly clean, with a row of new dental equipment and dozens of neatly arranged chairs. The clinic has clean and transparent windows on all four walls. The scene that only existed in Tanita’s dreams has incredibly become a reality. Everything is so refreshing and satisfying to him, yet it also seems unbelievable. Determined and confident, he decided to do his best to serve the children good dental care.
Since then, children at the new clinic have been enjoying a better experience. Previously, whenever thinking of the cramped closet, they would feel resistant to have their teeth cared. Things have changed now. When it comes to seeing a dentist in the new clinic, though children are still a bit afraid, they are amazed by the brand new clinic when they enter the clinic. Gradually, more and more children are willing to receive dental care here. Their teeth have become whiter and brighter with Tanita’s help, and they laugh more, which makes them more confident and brilliant.
【导语】本文以牙科诊所为线索展开,讲述了Daniel Tanita医生一直在他的家乡——一个偏远的小国——从事儿童牙科志愿者工作,起初他的工作环境很差,没有像样的诊所,最终他坚定的奉献精神和工作热情激励着他克服困难,在志愿者的帮助下,他梦想成真,有了标准的诊所,能够更好地为当地儿童服务的故事。【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“最终,永久牙科诊所成为现实。”可知,第一段可描写诊所的环境和Tanita的态度。
②由第二段首句内容“从那时起,孩子们在新诊所享受了更好的体验。”可知,第二段可描孩子们在新诊所的体验和结果。
2.续写线索:梦想实现——满意——决心积极工作——孩子们乐意检查牙齿——牙齿健康——身心快乐
3.词汇激活
行为类1.决心:decide/determine2.帮助:help/ assist3.进入:enter/come into
情绪类1.令人满意的:satisfying/pleasing2.积极自信的:confident/positive
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Their teeth have become whiter and brighter with Tanita’s help, and they laugh more, which makes them more confident and brilliant. (由which引导的非限性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. When it comes to seeing a dentist in the new clinic, though children are still a bit afraid, they are amazed by the brand new clinic when they enter the clinic. (由连词when引导的时间状语从句和though引导的让步状语从句)
Passage 7
The doctors sent my mother home to die. As a fifteen-year survivor of breast cancer, she had suffered two heart attacks when advanced cancer was found in her lung. The doctor told me sadly, "She has a few days, maybe a week. Her heart is weak and unstable. "Mom had struggled to raise three daughters while holding a full-time job, yet worked hard to maintain a warm home for her family. My plan for Mom’s final days was simple: she would live with love, and die with grace.
I took mother to my home, small but comfortable, which was a heaven to four cats and a dog. The animals had the run of my house. We equipped the bedroom with an electric hospital bed and an oxygen machine, which frightened the cats. I’d moved their furniture and the cats were annoyed. The dog, on the other hand, an immature dog with bad habits, was excited by all the changes in the house. He jumped up, barking. He is Otto who was not afraid of the hospital bed, the oxygen machine or the medical smells. Nor was he afraid of the weak woman who had scolded him. Otto jumped onto the foot of Mom's hospital bed, and stayed. With the exception of eating and using the litter box, Otto never left Mom's room.
Days passed and Mom started to rally. “Not unusual,” I was told, “a rally is often a sign of imminent death(回光返照)” I was heart-broken. But Otto would not give her up so easily. He used her improved condition to reposition himself from the foot of her bed to her side. Her thin fingers found his soft coat. He leaned into her body, as if holding tight the strings of her will to live. Though weak, she petted the dog and would not allowed me to take him. Days turned into weeks and Mom continued to fight.
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Once, after the nurses had gone for the day, I heard the sound of Mom’s voice coming from her room. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】Paragraph 1: Once, after the nurses had gone for the day, I heard the sound of Mom’s voice coming from her room. I found her with the head of the bed raised, reading from the newspaper, with Otto in her arms, listening adoringly. I will forever cherish the memory of Otto’s touching her face. Eventually, using a walker, Mom began to take walks through the house, followed by Otto. Where she rested, Otto rested. Where she moved, Otto shadowed. Somehow, Otto knew that during those days he became her dog child, giving her life purpose.
Paragraph 2: Three years later, Mom together with Otto is still here, medicines and nurses long gone. When we saw the doctor a while ago, “I can’t believe it, Lula,” he said. “I can’t find your cancer and your heart is strong. When your daughter brought you to me, I thought you were a ship that had sailed.” Mom gives the credit to Otto, who continues to share his gift of love―a medicine more powerful than any drug a doctor could prescribe.
【分析】这是一篇续写。
【详解】1.第一段给出的首句是Jatin looked up and he saw the other boys rushing ahead.这一句是故事发展的转折点。可以从“我发现她抬起床头,读着报纸,怀里抱着奥托,崇拜地听着。”入手扩展开去,——无论从何角度拓展,需注意与续写第二段首句呼应,最后一句应该用“不知道为什么,奥托知道在那些日子里,他成了她的狗孩子,给了她生活的目标。”与第二段首句相呼应。
2.第二段所给首句Filled with pleasure, Jatin walked home in no time.这一句呼应前文,紧接着可以从“不久前我们去看医生时,他说:‘我真不敢相信,卢拉。’”入手续写。
【点睛】这是一篇续写。符合续写要求,段落之间衔接紧密,句子环环相扣,层次清晰。同时文中使用高级句子。I found her with the head of the bed raised, reading from the newspaper, with Otto in her arms, listening adoringly.句中现在分词作伴随状语;Eventually, using a walker, Mom began to take walks through the house, followed by Otto.过去分词作方式状语;Where she moved, Otto shadowed.句中where引导地点状语从句;When your daughter brought you to me, I thought you were a ship that had sailed.句中when引导时间状语从句。
Passage 8
A woman who had a stroke (中风) while on a Face Time video call with her sister, said the technology saved her life. Esmee Russell, head of the Stroke Association, said, “A stroke can happen to anyone, at any age, at any time. That’s why it’s so important that people know how to act fast: it could save a life.” Strokes happen when the blood supply to part of the brain is cut off by a clot (凝块), or damaged by bleeding that causes brain cells in the affected area to die.
Opokua Kwapong, who lives alone in New York, was on a call with her sister, Adumea Sapong, in Manchester, when Mrs Sapong noticed that her elder sister “didn’t look right”. And she also noticed her sister’s voice was slurred (口齿不清). Ms Kwapong said she had not realised how serious the situation was.
The 58-year-old Kwapong had woken from an afternoon sleep when Mrs Sapong called her on Face Time. Ms Kwapong said “My sister looked at me and said she could see that my face didn’t look right. She also said that I was slurring my words, but I thought she was making a fuss (大惊小怪) and I didn’t believe her.”
Mrs Sapong said When I called Kwapong, she said that she'd not been feeling well and had been feeling tired and was also having some difficulty walking. I said, ‘Perhaps you need to take some medicine.’ She tried to pick up a glass of water and wasn’t able to. Then I noticed on the Face Time video call that her face was drooping. I told her she needed to hang up and immediately see a doctor. She thought I was making a fuss so I then called one of my other sisters, who is a doctor, and she could hear her speaking and could also tell that her speech was slurred. We both told her to call for help at once.”
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2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
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Ms Kuapong hung up the call and then dialed the emergency services.
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Ms Kwapong said: “There is no doubt that the internet and technology saved my life.
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Ms Kwapong hung up the call and then dialed the emergency services. The ambulance rushed to her house and nurses sent her to hospital. In hospital, Ms Kwapong was diagnosed with stroke and should stay at hospital for at least one week, Her sister Adumea Sapong looked after her. Her doctor said she was lucky to receive treatment quickly or she could have had much trouble.
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Ms Kwapong said: “There is no doubt that the Internet and technology saved my life. If my sister had not noticed that something was not right, then things could have been so different. Not only did technology save my life,it now also allows me to live my life. I rely a lot on FaceTime as Dm not able to travel as much as I did previously. You hear a lot of negative stories about the Internet and technology, but I think this is an example of how technology can help us in daily life.”
【分析】这是一篇续写。
【详解】1.第一段给出的首句是Ms Kuapong hung up the call and then dialed the emergency services.这一句是故事发展的转折点。可以从“救护车冲向她的家,护士们把她送到了医院。”入手扩展开去,——无论从何角度拓展,需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。
2.第二段所给首句Ms Kwapong said: “There is no doubt that the internet and technology saved my life.这一句呼应前文,紧接着可以从“如果我妹妹没有注意到有些地方不对劲,那么事情就会大不一样了。”入手续写,这里运用了if引导的虚拟语气,显得句子结构非常新颖巧妙。
【点睛】这是一篇续写。文章的观点表述明确,段落衔接紧密,并在文章中使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。且文中使用高级词汇和句子。Ms Kwapong was diagnosed with stroke句中使用被动语态;Her doctor said she was lucky to receive treatment quickly or she could have had much trouble.句中使用宾语从句和情态动词的完成式could have done结构;If my sister had not noticed that something was not right, then things could have been so different.句中使用if引导的虚拟语气;Not only did technology save my life,it now also allows me to live my life.部分倒装用在句中。
Passage 9
One year ago, when we were in the fifth grade, a new classmate named Jack joined us. He was often late for class and had a strange smell on him, which made the girls not want to be “neighbours” with him, let alone sit next to him. It is said that once, a naughty boy curiously opened his backpack and many crushed soda cans and empty drink bottles that we usually throw into the trash fell out. Therefore, the boys in our class mocked (嘲笑) him as the “trash king”.
Later, during a class meeting, our teacher, Ms. Zhang, told us about his story of using garbage to make inventions. It turns out that Jack is not an ordinary elementary school student, but a “garbage-inspired inventor” who has won the city invention award. According to Ms. Zhang, most of his inventions were picked up from garbage dumps (堆). During that class meeting, Jack showed us his invention of a“domestic wastewater separation system”.
Afterwards, some of us became deeply interested in these small inventions and started to admire Jack’s way of “picking up trash”. We even joined him in picking up trash on weekends and during holidays. From then on, we no longer called him the “trash king“. Instead, we formed a group of five boys and actively searched for usable materials in various garbage dumps around the city. Under Jack’s guidance, we learned that there are many uses for seemingly useless trash. Once, we stayed at school to process the collected materials. Jack mentioned that he was facing a problem with his latest invention—a small cart for buying vegetables that needed to be lightweight. All other materials were solved except for the wheels. How could we find a suitable material for the wheels? We racked our brains (绞尽脑汁) and came up with different ideas, such as using soda cans or taking off the wheels from suitcases. However, Jack reminded us that our group should focus on making inventions from waste rather than causing damage to create them. We were all deep in thought.
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When I got home and drank a bottle of water, I suddenly had an idea.
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Jack indeed adopted my suggestion and fixed a row of bottle caps as wheels on his vegetable cart.
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【答案】 When I got home and drank a bottle of water, I suddenly had an idea. What if we could use bottle caps as wheels for Jack’s vegetable cart? It seemed like a simple solution, but it could work if we found enough bottle caps. Excited, I shared my idea with the group the next day. Jack’s eyes lit up with enthusiasm as he realized the potential of this suggestion. We immediately set out to collect as many bottle caps as we could find, scouring not only the garbage dumps but also asking friends and family to save them for us.
Jack indeed adopted my suggestion and fixed a row of bottle caps as wheels on his vegetable cart. It was a moment of triumph for all of us, seeing our collective efforts and creativity come to fruition. The cart rolled smoothly, and we celebrated our success with high-fives and laughter. This experience taught us the power of collaboration, innovation, and looking beyond the surface of things. Inspired by Jack’s ingenuity, our group continued to explore ways to repurpose waste, knowing that small actions could lead to big changes in our community and beyond.
【导语】本文以故事发展的顺序为线索展开,讲述了新同学杰克被同学嘲笑为“垃圾王”,但后来通过他的发明才华改变了同学们对他的看法,杰克提到他的最新发明遇到了一个问题,即如何让一辆用来买蔬菜的小推车的质量变轻,除了车轮外,其他材料都解决了。
【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“当我回到家,喝了一瓶水,我突然有了一个主意。”可知,第一段可描写“我想到了用瓶盖做车轮子的想法,杰克认为这个建议很不错,大家着手收集尽可能多的瓶盖”的相关细节。②由第二段首句内容“杰克确实采纳了我的建议,把一排瓶盖固定为他的蔬菜车上的轮子。”可知,第二段可描写“我们的努力取得了成功,开始庆祝成功,这段经历教会了我们合作和创新,感悟到小小的行动可能会给我们的生活带来巨大的变化。”的相关细节。
2.续写线索:用瓶盖做轮子——分享想法——得到杰克的支持——收集瓶盖——取得成功——庆祝成功——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类①发挥作用:work/function②开始做:set out to do/set about doing③鼓励:inspire/encourage
情绪类
①激动的:excited/thrilled
②露出喜色:light up/brighten up
【点睛】[高分句型1] Jack’s eyes lit up with enthusiasm as he realized the potential of this suggestion.(使用了as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Inspired by Jack’s ingenuity, our group continued to explore ways to repurpose waste, knowing that small actions could lead to big changes in our community and beyond. (使用了过去分词和现在分词作状语)
Passage 10
(2023-202学年高二上·陕西宝鸡·期中)
SHOULD WE FIGHT NEW TECHNOLOGY?
This morning, I saw the shocking headline: “Passenger Dies When Car Crashes in Driverless Mode”. In the article, various people said that the public should oppose the idea of developing driverless cars. They said that some advances in technology were unnecessary and could even be dangerous. Hence, we should cease accepting technology just because it is new. The newspaper reported that the car company had already apologized for the accident, but the families of the deceased said it was not enough. Nevertheless, the company still claimed that most people would be travelling in driverless cars one day soon.
On the one hand, there are many different groups of people around the world who live happily in the absence of new technology. Probably the most well-known are the Amish, a group of Christians living in rural America. They do not own or drive cars, watch TV, or use the Internet. They have lived mainly as farmers since the 18th century and they will probably be living the same way in the distant future. They advocate a simple life with an emphasis on hard work, family, and community. They think that is better than caring about luxuries or following the lives of the rich and famous. It could even be argued that the Amish’s quality of life is better since they live in and appreciate the natural environment rather than living in large, polluted cities.
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参考词汇: the Internet keep in touch social media health monitor
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On the other hand, new technology has provided people everywhere with many benefits over the years. For example,
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Personally, I have benefited quite a lot from technological advances.
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【答案】On the other hand, new technology has provided people everywhere with many benefits over the years. For example, the latest weather-tracking computer programs give people lots of warnings about potential natural disasters, which saves many lives. Moreover, the Internet has made it possible for friends and family to keep in touch easily even if they are on opposite sides of the world. It has also made finding opportunities in life much easier, as it allows people to make larger networks of friends through using social media.
Personally, I have benefited quite a lot from technological advances. I found my career as an AI designer through a social media network. My health monitor, which I wear all the time, has also helped me get into the best shape of my life. Of course, when new technology changes the way we live, it can be a scary prospect. Nevertheless, I will always look on the positive side of change and accept it rather than resist it.
【导语】本文以“我们应该抵制新技术吗”为线索展开,作者通过无人驾驶汽车发生车祸引起很多人对这项新技术持否定态度引出话题。一方面,有的人确实可以在没有新技术的情况下仍然生活得更好;另一方面新技术也给各地的人们带来了很多好处。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“另一方面,新技术多年来为世界各地的人们提供了许多好处。例如,”可知,第一段可描写新技术给世界各地带来好处的例子,比如最新的天气跟踪计算机程序给人们许多关于潜在自然灾害的警告。还有互联网,使人们联系子在一起。
②由第二段首句内容“就我个人而言,我从技术进步中获益匪浅。”可知,第二段可描写“我”对新技术的看法。
2.续写线索:新技术有很多好处——举例子说明——表达“我”对新技术的看法
3.词汇激活行为类
①保持联系:keep in touch/stay in touch/keep contact
②看待:look on/view
③抵制:resist/boycott
情绪类
1 吓人的:scary/frightening
【点睛】[高分句型1] For example, the latest weather-tracking computer programs give people lots of warnings about potential natural disasters, which saves many lives.(由关系词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] My health monitor, which I wear all the time, has also helped me get into the best shape of my life.(由关系词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] Of course, when new technology changes the way we live, it can be a scary prospect.(由when引导的时间状语从句)
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