高考应用文写作思路及实例讲解 讲义-2025届高三英语上学期二轮复习专项

应用文写作 假定你是李华，正在英国学习。你所居住的公寓附近的公共健身设施年久失修，请你给相关部门写一封信投诉。内容包括： 1. 健身设施的状况； 2. 可能带来的危险； 3. 提出解决方案。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 Dear Sir or Madam, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 审题分析 本题要求就公寓附近年久失修的公共健身设施给相关部门写一封投诉信。文章可分为三段： 首段点明写信目的； 主体段陈述健身设施状况和潜在危险； 尾段提出解决方案。 参考范文 Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing to complain about the poor condition of the public fitness facilities outside my apartment.  Some of the swings are damaged. Moreover, most of the parts which should attach the slide to the rest of the unit are missing. The facilities have been in such poor condition that it’s a great danger to the people who use them. Worse still, children may fall from the swings and the slide can fall apart at any moment. Would you please have them repaired or removed? I’d be willing to help with any labor that may be involved. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 亮点词汇 1. swing n. 秋千 2. slide n. 滑梯 3. in poor condition 状况不好 4. fall apart 破碎；破裂 高级句型 1. Moreover, most of the parts which should attach the slide to the rest of the unit are missing.（which引导定语从句） 此外，将滑梯与设备其他部分连接起来的大部分部件都不见了。 2. The facilities have been in such poor condition that it’s a great danger to the people who use them.（such...that...引导结果状语从句；who引导定语从句） 这些设施的状况非常糟糕，对使用这些设施的人造成了极大的危险。 读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 With the late afternoon sun setting on his farm, Steve finished feeding his horses and decided to go home. His two sons, Danny, 8, and Claus, 6, followed behind. On the way to the house, the two boys ran ahead of their father, who stopped to close the gate. Danny paused at an old well. Unknown to him, the plank covering the well had grown easily broken over time. When Danny stepped on it, it collapsed. Steve had just finished locking the gate when he turned around and saw only his younger son. “Where’s Danny?” he shouted. “He fell in the hole!” Claus cried. Steve quickly realized what had happened. Danny could barely swim! He ran to the well and heard Danny screaming down below. Desperate, he jumped in. Steve hit the freezing water at the bottom of the well. He lifted his head out of the water and grabbed Danny, trying to stay afloat in water that was too deep for either of them to stand. Knowing they could only float for a short time in the freezing water, Steve pulled his son up onto his chest and tried all means to stand upright with two legs against the narrow well walls for support. His body was still partly submerged (淹没). “Dad, you can pull us out now,” Danny said. If only it were that easy. There was no way he could climb out. Looking up to see Claus looking down at them from the top of the well, Steve shouted, “Claus, you’re going to have to be a big boy and save us. Go out to the road and get someone to help. OK?” “OK, Daddy,” Claus yelled and ran to the road. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 About 15 minutes later, Edmond and Sam, their neighbors, were driving by Steve’s farm when they noticed Claus alone by the side of the road, waving._________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Forty minutes after he’d jumped into the well to save his son, Steve came out, cold and wet. _____________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 文本解读 本文讲述了主人公Steve在农场喂完马后，和两个儿子（Danny和Claus）一起回家。Steve停下来关门时，Danny踩在了老化的井盖上，掉进了井里。他几乎不会游泳，Steve跳入井里救他，但因为水太深，两人都站不住，无法逃出。 思路点拨 ①由续文第一段首句“大约15分钟后，他们的邻居Edmond和Sam开车路过Steve的农场时，发现Claus独自在路边挥手求助。”可知，接下来可以通过一系列动作描写描述Edmond和Sam对Steve和Danny进行救援的过程。 ②由续文第二段首句“在跳井救援孩子的四十多分钟后，Steve湿漉漉地从井里出来了，浑身发冷。”可知，接下里可结合情感描写和神态描写描述Steve获救后对邻居的感激和与儿子的交流。 参考范文 About 15 minutes later, Edmond and Sam, their neighbors, were driving by Steve’s farm when they noticed Claus alone by the side of the road, waving. Hearing the accident from Claus, they picked him up and raced to Steve’s farm. Upon arrival, Edmon quickly jumped off the truck and grabbed a long thick rope. Then he and Sam rushed to the well. “Steve,” Edmon shouted, “We’re going to send a rope down to you.” “OK, I’ll send Danny up first,” Steve shouted back, freezing down there. The boy was pulled out first, with the rope tied around him. Forty minutes after he’d jumped into the well to save his son, Steve came out, cold and wet. Just as his neighbors reached out to grab him, he collapsed to the ground. Struggling to his feet, Steve hugged his neighbors tightly, whispering “You saved our lives! Thank you!” For him, words could not express his gratitude for their timely rescue, and they would forever be his good neighbors. “Daddy!” Danny and Claus cried, rushing to Steve. Steve held them tightly in his arms, cherishing them as never before, tears welling up in his eyes. 亮点词汇 1. upon arrival 一到达；到到达时 2. collapse vi. 倒下（熟词生义）；倒塌 3. struggle to one’s feet 挣扎着站起来 4. gratitude n. 感激之情；感谢 高级句型 1. Hearing the accident from Claus, they picked him up and raced to Steve’s farm.（动词-ing形式短语作状语） 他们从Claus那里听说了这起意外，便接上他开车疾驰到Steve的农场。 2. The boy was pulled out first, with the rope tied around him.（with复合结构作状语） 男孩先被拉出来，身上绑着绳子。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$