内容正文:
高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解
一、邀请信:观看中国功夫展演活动
(四川师大附中2024-2025学年度第一学期10月月考试题)
假设你是李华,你的美国网友Tom对中国功夫感兴趣。最近,你校的中国功夫俱乐部要举行一次功夫展演活动,请你向他介绍这次活动的具体情况并发出邀请。内容包括:1.活动举行的时间和地点;2.活动的内容;3.发出邀请。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:Chinese Martial Art 中国功夫
Dear Tom,
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段介绍即将举办的中国功夫展演活动;第二段写活动举行的时间、地点(要点1)和活动内容(要点2);第三段发出邀请(要点3)。
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well! Learning that you take a great interest in Chinese Martial Art, I’d like to introduce an upcoming breathtaking Chinese Kung Fu performance organized by our school's Chinese Kung Fu Club.
Scheduled for 2:00 p.m. on the 20th of this month in our school gymnasium, the event will feature a variety of traditional martial arts demonstrations, including Tai Chi, Shaolin Kung Fu, and Wing Chun, among others. Additionally, there will be impressive performances showcasing martial arts equipment and sparring exercises that will make it accessible for the audience to appreciate the elegance and profoundness of Chinese Kung Fu.
I sincerely invite you to attend the performance show, which will definitely deepen your understanding and appreciation of Chinese Kung Fu. I can’t wait to see your presence at the event! (135 words)
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【中文翻译】
亲爱的汤姆:
见信好!很高兴你对中国功夫抱有如此浓厚的兴趣。我特此向你介绍我们学校中国功夫俱乐部即将举行的一次精彩纷呈的功夫展演活动。
此次活动定于本月20日下午两点,在我们学校的体育馆举行。活动内容包括各种传统武术套路的展示,如太极拳、少林拳、咏春拳等,此外,还将有精彩的武术器械表演和对练,让观众充分领略中国功夫的魅力与韵味。
我诚挚地邀请你前来观看这次功夫展演,相信这定能让你对中国功夫有更深入的了解和喜爱。期待在活动中与你相见!
祝好!
李华
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为邀请信;
(2)因两人是网友关系,故李华身份不必交代;
(3)因文体主体部分为介绍即将举办的中国功夫展演并发出邀请,故本文总体时态定调为一般将来时和一般现在时。
02
本文亮点
(1)I hope this email finds you well运用无灵主语结构;
(2)take a great interest in对...很感兴趣;
(3)breathtaking令人惊叹的;
(4)Scheduled for分词短语作状语,意为“计划安排在...”;
(5)feature a variety of以各种各样的...为特色;
(6)among others等等;
(7)additionally此外;
(8)showcase=show展示;
(9)make it accessible for the audience to使得观众能够领略...;
(10)definitely的确,一定;
(11)can't wait to do sth迫不及待地做某事。
二、申请信:茶文化交流活动志愿者
(合肥市2024年高三第一次教学质量检测)
假定你是李华,你从网上得知联合国教科文组织(UNESCO)将在你家乡举办“一带一路”(the Belt and Road Initiative)茶文化交流活动。请你写一封英文信申请做志愿者。内容包括:1.写信目的;2.对活动的认识;3.个人优势。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段交代写作目的——申请成为志愿者(要点1);第二段写活动的认识(要点2)及个人优势(要点3);第三段期待回复。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a high school student. With great enthusiasm, I would like to apply for the position of a volunteer for the upcoming UNESCO 'Belt and Road' tea culture exchange event in my hometown.
The event, I believe, will not only be a cultural feast for tea lovers, but also bridge the cultural gap between countries. Through these activities, we can showcase the profound heritage of Chinese tea culture while enhancing foreign friends' appreciation and affection for Chinese traditions. Influenced by my family from an early age, I am proficient in Chinese tea culture. Additionally, I have strong English communication skills along with excellent organizational capabilities and interpersonal abilities, which makes it easier for me to serve as a volunteer.
I would be appreciate it if you could consider my application. Looking forward to your favorable reply. (140 words)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【中文翻译】
亲爱的先生/女士:
我是中学生李华。得知联合国教科文组织将在我的家乡举办“一带一路”茶文化交流活动,我怀着极大的热情特此申请成为此次活动的志愿者。
我认为此次活动不仅是一次茶文化的盛宴,更是促进国际间文化交流与理解的桥梁。通过活动,可以展示中国茶文化的深厚底蕴,增进外国友人对中华文化的认识与喜爱。我自幼受家人熏陶,对茶文化有着深入了解。同时我还具备良好的英语沟通交流能力和较强的组织协调能力。
如果您能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。期待您的回复!
李华
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为申请信;
(2)因文体是申请信,故李华身份要交代;
(3)因文体主体部分写自己对茶文化交流活动的认识并阐明自己的优势,故本文总体时态定调为一般将来时和一般现在时;
(4)因词数要求为80词左右,范文总词数为140词,可以将“Through these activities, we can showcase the profound heritage of Chinese tea culture while enhancing foreign friends' appreciation and affection for Chinese traditions.”(23词)删除,剩余总词数为117词。
02
本文亮点
(1) With great enthusiasm以极大的热情;
(2)a cultural feast for tea lovers对茶文化爱好者而言是一次文化盛宴;
(3)bridge the cultural gap跨越...的文化鸿沟;
(4)showcase the profound heritage of展示...的深厚底蕴;
(5)am proficient in精通;
(6)along with以及,还有;
(7)which makes it easier for me to ...定语从句结构中it作形式宾语,真正的宾语是后面的不定式;
(8)serve as作为;
(9)I would be appreciate it if you could如果...我将不胜感激;
(10)favorable reply希望得到对方肯定答复时的表达。
三、倡议书:创建美丽校园
(天台中学2024学年第一学期10月份周测)
假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华,你校正在开展“创建美丽校园”的活动。请你用英语给全校学生写一篇倡议书,要点包括:1.创建美丽校园的重要性;2.校园内存在的不文明现象;3.改进措施。
要求:1.词数80词左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段写创建美丽校园的重要性(要点1);第二段写校园内存在的不文明现象(要点2)及改进措施(要点3);第三段再次发出倡议。
【参考范文】
Establishing a Beautiful Campus Initiative
Dear fellow Students,
Our campus, as we all know, serves as a vital place for both our academic pursuits and daily lives. A beautiful campus not only enhances our learning experience but also nurtures our environmental awareness and civil quality.
Nevertheless, there still exsist instances of uncivilised behavior on campus, such as littering, unauthorized graffiti, excessive noise, among others. These conducts ruin the beauty of our campus and negatively impact our studies as well as the quality of life. To address this issue, it’s high time for us to beautify our campus environment by saying no to littering. Taking proper care of public property is also a must. Additionally, keep quiet in pulic to guarantee an atmosphere facilitating study.
Every individual’s efforts really matter. Together, let us strive to establish a more beautiful and harmonious campus! (133 words)
The Student Union
【中文翻译】
创建美丽校园倡议书
亲爱的同学们:
我们的校园是我们学习、生活的重要场所。一个优美的校园环境不仅能提升我们的学习心情,还能培养我们的环保意识和文明素养。
然而,校园内仍存在一些不文明现象,如乱扔垃圾、随意涂画、大声喧哗等。这些行为不仅破坏了校园的美景,也影响了我们的学习和生活质量。为了改善这一状况,我们倡议:大家应自觉维护校园环境,不随地乱扔垃圾;爱护公共财物,不随意涂画;在公共场所保持安静,不大声喧哗。
让我们携手共建一个更加美丽、和谐的校园吧!
学生会
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为倡议书;
(2)因文体是倡议书,故李华身份不必交代;
(3)因文体主体部分写创建美丽校园的重要性、校园内的不文明现象及改进措施,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
02
本文亮点
(1) serve as作为;
(2)academic pursuit学习;
(3)nevertheless=however然而;
(4)among others等等;
(5)address this issue解决问题;
(6)is also a must也是必须的,must为动词活用作名词;
(7)additionally此外;
(8)Every individual's efforts really matter每个人的努力都很重要;
(9)strive to do sth努力做某事。
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