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专题05 书面表达(应用文写作14篇+读后续写6篇) [模考好题20篇](必修一) 应用文写作 Passage 1 (24-25高一上·江苏南通·阶段练习)假设你是校学生会主席李华。为了提升学生的读写能力和促进学生的交往，你打算建立一个阅读俱乐部。让学生每周读一篇短篇小说，写一篇读后感。每周六下午3：00-5：00，同学们聚集在一起，互相学习。你打算借助海报、校报或网站宣传一下你的计划。现请你给校长写一份关于建立阅读俱乐部的提案，希望得到学校的批准和支持。 注意： 1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 2. 100字左右。 Proposal for a reading club Dear Principal, Hope this letter finds you well! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua Student Council President Passage 2 (24-25高一上·江西南昌·阶段练习)假定你是李华，是学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。你校高一新生Jack刚刚入学，发现高中科目很多，同时学生社团同时也在招募成员，许多新同学表示无法兼顾课外活动和学习，请用英文给该同学写一封建议信。 1. 表示理解并给予安慰。 2. 提出建议并说明理由。(至少两条建议) 3. 表示祝愿 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右;        2. 书写保持整洁 参考词汇：extra-curricular activities 课外活动   balance 平衡 Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours , Li Hua Passage 3 (23-24高一上·四川乐山·期中)假如你是李华，你的好朋友Linda刚刚上高一，在英语学习方面有困难，向你请教如何才能把英语学好。请根据以下内容用英语给她回复邮件。 内容要点： 1. 阐明写信目的； 2. 提出建议及理由。(主要包括每天早上大声朗读单词；尽可能多得熟记单词、短语和句型；阅读各种英语书籍等……) 3. 表达祝愿。 注意：1、可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；   2、词数80左右； 3. 参考词汇：phrase 短语， sentence patterns 句型 Dear Linda, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 4 (23-24高一上·新疆喀什·期中)假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信，信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的关于英语学习方法的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯； 3. 开头已为你写出。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 5 (24-25高一上·江苏苏州·阶段练习)假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Gary最近因为沉迷社交媒体(social media)而与父母发生了争执。请你给他写一封信，帮助他与父母和好。要点包括： 1. 对发生争吵表示遗憾； 2. 提出建议并说明理由： 3. 希望建议有用并期盼回信。 注意： ①词数：80左右； ②可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Gary, Knowing that you’ve argued recently with your parents on using social media, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 6 (23-24高一上·山东济南·期末)假定你是李华，最近收到来自澳大利亚朋友 Eric 的一条信息，内容如下， My parents won’t listen when I tell them things. It makes me really upset. I guess it’s because they’re adults and can’t understand me. Do you have any suggestions? 请你写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 表示安慰； 2. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Eric, Glad to hear from you ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely Li Hua Passage 7 (24-25高一上·湖南衡阳·期中)假如Tom是你的英国笔友，最近他很郁闷，因为他和父母之间有一些分歧。请根据以下内容用英语写一封信。 Tom的烦恼 物理比较难，学习压力大；父母不理解，除了学习，父母什么都不让他做；他现在对学习不感兴趣 你的建议 1.向老师寻求帮助；2.与父母进行沟通；3.调整心态，端正态度 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________-__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 8 (24-25高一上·重庆·阶段练习)假定你是李华, 你班上来自英国的交换生Eric在学习、生活中遇到了一些困难：不适应中文上课和中餐、文化冲突 (culture shock) 等。请你写一封电子邮件给他一些建议。内容包括: 1. 理解心情 2. 给出具体建议 3. …… 注意: 写作词数100个左右 Dear Eric, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 9 (24-25高一上·湖南衡阳·开学考试)假如你是李华，你的朋友Peter来中国旅游，回国前他想给家人买一件代表中国文化的礼物。他通过邮件询问你的意见，请你用英文回复。 提示 (1)你建议他买什么; (2)介绍这个礼物; (3)给出你推荐的理由。 要求： (1)内容包含以上信息，80词左右(开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数); (2)语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范; (3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Peter, Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua Passage 10 (23-24高一上·福建南平·期中)假定你是李华，你有一个好朋友Mike，你们曾经无话不谈，有许多共同的爱好。可是他搬家后你俩的联系变少了。最近他母亲告诉你，他开始沉迷于网络游戏，不认真学习。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，从朋友的角度对他进行劝告。内容包括： 1. 充分利用时间学习； 2. 养成良好的生活习惯。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，但是不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, We haven’t seen each other for a long time. How is it going? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 11 (23-24高一上·贵州毕节·期末)假定你是高中学生李华，你的美国朋友Bob因为喜欢吃垃圾食品而不喜欢锻炼，导致体重超重，最近他因此很苦恼，请你写封信，给他一些建议。内容包括： 1.均衡饮食，多吃新鲜蔬菜和水果； 2.锻炼身体，合理锻炼有助于身体健康； 3.保证充足的睡眠，不要熬夜，保持积极的心态。 参考词汇：junk food垃圾食品  take exercise锻炼  weight体重  anxious苦恼的  advice建议 balanced diet均衡饮食  vegetables and fruits蔬菜和水果  ensure enough sleep保证充足的睡眠  stay up熬夜  positive积极的   注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； Dear Bob, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 12 (23-24高一上·湖南娄底·期末)据调查，近年来，越来越多的中学生近视，如何保护眼睛和预防近视已经成了一个社会广泛关注的问题。请你根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿： 1.近视的原因； 2.如何保护视力； 3.呼吁大家保护视力； 注意：1. 开头已为你写好，不计入字数。 2. 字数不少于80 字。 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, it’s my honor to be here to talk about short-sightedness. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage13 (23-24高一上·湖南长沙·期末)假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 James给你写信，说自己最近免疫力下降，常常感冒生病，而且他考试周也即将到来，忙碌的节奏让他已经许久没有锻炼身体了。请你写一封回信给 James，内容包括： 1. 对他最近的感受表示理解。 2.和他说说体育锻炼的重要性。 3.给出加强日常锻炼的建议。 Dear James, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 14 (22-23高一上·甘肃临夏·期中)王明现在是高一学生。进入高中以来，他常常感到身体不舒服，易疲倦，为此他很苦恼。作为朋友的你针对其现象提了几点建议：每天早点睡觉；不要学习得太晚；多做运动；多吃健康的食物。你可以参考以下的提示词，给王明写一封信。 提示词：go to bed early；exercise more；study too late 注意： (1)请写一篇100词左右的短文，收信人和写信人的名字已给出，不计入词数； (2)信中不能出现真实的学校、班级和姓名； (3)句子及语法结构准确、连贯，书写规范。 Dear Wang Ming, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 读后续写 Passage 1 (24-25高一上·山东·阶段练习)The kids in Ms. Ryder’s art group all gathered round. “Our school’s welcome sign looks old and faded,” Ms Ryder pointed up at the old wall painting. “It’s our turn to do something new and bright. Let’s collect some ideas.” The children started to think. “Let’s just make a new welcome sign in bright colors,” Ella beamed. Ms Ryder smiled, “Nice idea, but I was thinking that we could paint a big picture about all our children, something a bit more special.” “A giant heart with all our names on it, ”Sara said. “Sports,” Tiger joined in. “We do lots of sports; let’s have a big picture with all kinds of sports.” “The Earth, with people all over it.” Mattie was thoughtful. But then Eliza joined in, “It’s a puzzle. How can we all join in and paint a picture. We’ve all got different ideas.” Ms. Ryder smiled. “That’s it! We all have different ideas, but we all fit in together and want to paint a big picture. Let’s paint a big puzzle in the brightest colors!” The next day, they set to work. They were ready to paint the giant jigsaw(拼图) puzzle. The puzzle was very big with lots of pieces, all the pieces fitted together, but there was space all around. “For our names?”Carlos asked. “What a good idea, Carlos, for all our names, and for all the children in our school.” Ms. Ryder was having fun. Eliza smiled,“We all want our different kids in our puzzle. Red, blue and green; that’s not enough.” Ms. Ryder agreed and the children learned to mix as many colors as the numbers of the kids at school. Red, blue, green, yellow, orange, pink, purple, brown. They learnt new colors, too-Apple Green, Sapphire Blue, Canary Yellow, Crimson Red. The children wanted as many colors as possible in their new picture. The amazing puzzle picture was finished except adding the names of the children and needed a few days to dry out. 注意：  1. 续写词数不少于80词； 2. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then came the big day when Ms. Ryder announced it was time to write down names for everyone. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 (24-25高一上·辽宁·阶段练习)When I was in junior high school, math was my greatest challenge. No matter how hard I tried, I always seemed to fall short. My test scores were often disappointing, and I felt my teenage life was full of confusion and frustration(挫败). However, everything changed, thanks to the great support of my teacher, Mr Green, and my classmates. One day, after another poor test result, I stayed behind after class, feeling defeated. Mr Green noticed my sadness and came to me with a smile. “Don’t worry, Jack,” he said softly. “Everyone may find something difficult. The important thing is not to give up. Let’s work on this together.” Mr Green started explaining each concept(概念) more patiently, breaking it down into simpler parts. He used real-life examples to make ideas easy to understand. Every time after class, he would come to my seat and ask me if I understood the lesson. His devotion and encouragement helped me a lot, and slowly, I began to see improvement. My classmates also played a role in my progress. My best friend, Mike, was good at math. He offered to study with me during breaks. We would sit in the library, going over problems. He told me to face my mistakes bravely, and his positive attitude influenced me. I would never forget the week before our final exams. I was struggling with a math problem. Despite Mr Green’s and Mike’s help, I couldn’t solve it. One afternoon, Mike suggested we turn it into a game. He created a set of flashcards(抽认卡) with different solutions. We took turns drawing cards and solving the problem as quickly as possible. Most importantly, we found joy in it. Of course, I made great progress in math. The day of the final exam arrived. I took a deep breath and remembered all the hard work and support I had received. When the result was announced, I could hardly believe my eyes: I had scored the highest mark in my class in math. Later, we formed a group and invited more students to learn math together. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 We studied hard towards the senior high school entrance examination. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As I walked into my senior high school on the first day, I met Mike. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 (24-25高一上·湖北·开学考试)I was standing with Dad in Grandpa’s yard, and this was our last visit here, because Grandpa was moving in with us. We would have one week to get his house cleared out. We stepped into the house, overwhelmed with the huge piles of papers on the table. I volunteered that I could take the old heavy shredder(碎纸机) from our house to deal with them. I could take it apart and put it back together. “What? No!” Dad snapped(厉声说). Then he sighed, and I knew the exact three words he was going to say next. “Michael, be realistic.” Then he lectured about how unrealistic my idea was as his eyes traveled wearily(疲倦地) over the papers piled on the table. I shrugged(耸肩),walked over and poked through the piles. “Hey, what’s this?” I pulled out an old photograph of my dad as a kid. He was standing under the apple tree in the yard, spraying(喷) water from a water pipe at whoever was holding the camera, with a big, playful smile on his face. He looked like a different person. I glanced over at him. He was examining an old income tax statement with a frown(皱眉). I wondered if something strange had happened to him. Like maybe the carefree boy in the picture and some bookish boy down the street had decided to switch lives or something. If only there were a time capsule or a memory box that held more of Dad’s boyhood stuff. Okay, no. That was not realistic. “Michael,” Dad said. “Why don’t you start cleaning out the shed(棚屋)?”I happily agreed. But when I went in, I was shocked. How was I supposed to “clean it out”? It was filled with junk, a broken lawnmower here and a million cans of old paint there. Suddenly I noticed a little triangle of plastic sticking out from the bottom of the paint cans. Curious, I pulled it out carefully. It was a sandwich bag with a piece of folded paper inside. Maybe it was a treasure map, or the answer to some long-unsolved murder. I chuckled(轻声地笑)over my own unrealistic fancies. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150词左右; 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Para 1: It turned out to be a letter addressed to future people from my dad as a kid. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para 2: Amazed by the letter, I raced to Dad in the house. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 4 (24-25高一上·河南·阶段练习)The first time I attended my son’s parent-teacher meeting was in third grade. I was rushing from the seafood market, and my clothes were dirty because of fish and other sea food. Even though I took a taxi, I still arrived late. I was laughed at by some parents and kids for my poor look. I met some uncomfortable looks, and with a sense of sadness and pity, I walked to his seat. My son, on the other hand, cleaned the sweat(汗水) from my forehead and handed me his little water bottle, saying, “Mummy, have some water!” In a flash, his thoughtfulness impressed so many people. After the parent-teacher meeting, my son’s teacher asked me to stay back a while longer, but he explained why I had to leave early. “My mother has to go home to cook for my grandparents, so can she leave first? I’ll tell her everything you have to say when I come home, and I promise I won’t miss a word!” The teacher said, “There are more than 40 children in the class, and your son Han Liu is heartbreaking to me; he is so understanding and helpful. Can a child like this not be successful in the future? You must be a great example in your family.” I shook the teacher’s hand and held it as I explained. “Han Liu’s father was hit in a car accident, and both of his grandparents are on the bed all year round, so I can’t take care of Han Liu at all. Since he could walk, he has been caring for his grandpa, grandma and father.” The teacher was so amazed. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 On the way home, I couldn’t stop crying thinking of all the little moments of my son’s life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was waiting downstairs for my son to come home from school with a clean look. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 5 (24-25高一上·河南许昌·阶段练习)Ari lived on a big island called Iceland. His home was a small fishing village by the sea. Spending a lot of time alone in his little house, Ari often looked at the faraway view and wondered what was out there. One day, Ari thought, "I want to find a true friend far away from here." So, he decided to write a letter, hoping to find a friend who understood his feelings. Ari wrote about the volcanoes(火山) and glaciers(冰川) on his snowy island. He described the beautiful Northern Lights that painted the sky with colors like green, blue and pink at night. For many days, Ari wrote about his thoughts and feelings. Then, he put the letter in a bottle and closed it really well. When the water was high, Ari threw the bottle into the sea and wished on a bright star that someone would find his letter. A year passed, and many cold nights went by after Ari threw his message into the sea. One day, he got a letter in the mail. He didn't know who it was from, but he was very happy and quickly opened the envelope (信封). The letter said: Dear Ari, I found your letter in a bottle that washed up on my beach. I live on an island called Sardinia. My island is warm and has mountains, white beaches, and green waters, though sometimes there are storms. I also want a true friend. I hope we can write to each other and learn more about our lives. Your new friend, Marco For three years, Ari and Marco wrote letters to each other. They talked about their cultures, traditions, and favorite foods. They shared secrets about their villages and wrote about their festivals and music. Marco's letters made Ari feel less lonely. Ari knew he had found his best friend. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Without telling Marco, Ari decided to go with his father on a business trip to Sardinia, where he would meet Marco in person. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ However, two years later, Ari didn't receive Marco's letters for about two months, which reminded Ari of the storms Marco once mentioned. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 6 (23-24高一上·安徽阜阳·期末)It is a challenging journey to change their lives for the best and get the healthiest they knew how to. Lexi and Danny lived their lives like most other young couples who fell in love with each other and then made the decision to spend the rest of their lives together. The couple spent a lot of time watching TV and going to different restaurants, and as you would imagine, the endless junk foods were their “go-to” choice. Though they would manage to lose some weight during the time, but before long, they would gain it back. Lexi weighed a 485 pounds at the age of 25, a weight that was quite unbelievable to imagine. Danny, on the other hand, was also overweight himself even though he was 200 pounds less than Lexi. However, the sad part of everything was that they were both gaining more weight on what they already had with each passing day. Some of their daily activities, no matter how simple, became a real problem for the couple. They couldn’t go for walks or bicycle rides no matter how easy they were. However, in 2016 just after a year after the marriage, they decided to make a positive change in their life. The couple decided to take on a challenge that would change their lives forever and for good! So many people make promises to themselves and others that they don’t really carry out but the couple were not about to do like the others. Theirs were destined (注定的) to come to reality. They made a detailed plan to go on a diet and take exercise on a daily basis. At first, they thought the whole process would have been a piece of cake. As they pressed on, each passing day showed them that this challenge would not be a walk in the park. They got a gym membership to help out. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The weight-losing lessons offered at the gym were not easy, a real challenge for them. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Just after a month, they both felt so much better, and they were pleased with the way they looked. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题05 书面表达(应用文写作14篇+读后续写6篇) [模考好题20篇](必修一) 应用文写作 Passage 1 (24-25高一上·江苏南通·阶段练习)假设你是校学生会主席李华。为了提升学生的读写能力和促进学生的交往，你打算建立一个阅读俱乐部。让学生每周读一篇短篇小说，写一篇读后感。每周六下午3：00-5：00，同学们聚集在一起，互相学习。你打算借助海报、校报或网站宣传一下你的计划。现请你给校长写一份关于建立阅读俱乐部的提案，希望得到学校的批准和支持。 注意： 1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 2. 100字左右。 Proposal for a reading club Dear Principal, Hope this letter finds you well! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua Student Council President 【答案】 Dear Principal, Hope this letter finds you well! I propose starting a Reading Club to improve students’ reading and writing skills as well as to encourage social interaction. The club would meet every Saturday from 3:00 to 5:00 PM, where students can read a short story and share their thoughts. To spread awareness and generate excitement, we plan to utilize various platforms such as posters, the school newspaper, and our school website. Additionally, we envision inviting guest speakers and organizing book swaps to enrich our activities and keep the club vibrant. I am confident that this initiative will contribute positively to our school’s academic culture and personal development of our students. I would appreciate your approval and support for this proposal. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely, Li Hua Student Council President 【语篇导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。请考生给校长写一份关于建立阅读俱乐部的提案，希望得到学校的批准和支持。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：propose → suggest 计划：plan → intend to 利用：utilize → make use of 此外：additionally → in addition 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： I propose starting a Reading Club to improve students’ reading and writing skills as well as to encourage social interaction. 拓展句： I propose that our schoolshould start a Reading Club to improve students’ reading and writing skills as well as to encourage social interaction. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】The club would meet every Saturday from 3:00 to 5:00 PM, where students can read a short story and share their thoughts. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】I am confident that this initiative will contribute positively to our school’s academic culture and personal development of our students. (运用了that引导宾语从句) Passage 2 (24-25高一上·江西南昌·阶段练习)假定你是李华，是学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。你校高一新生Jack刚刚入学，发现高中科目很多，同时学生社团同时也在招募成员，许多新同学表示无法兼顾课外活动和学习，请用英文给该同学写一封建议信。 1. 表示理解并给予安慰。 2. 提出建议并说明理由。(至少两条建议) 3. 表示祝愿 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右;        2. 书写保持整洁 参考词汇：extra-curricular activities 课外活动   balance 平衡 Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours , Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Jack, I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life, where you think you cannot balance extra-curricular activities and study. Actually, many freshmen are confused about high school life, so don’t worry about it too much. I’m writing to offer you some useful advice. First, I recommend that you sign up for extra-curricular activities which can be beneficial to your study and make more new friends. In this way you will feel less lonely and your school life will become more colorful and interesting. Second, you should make a good schedule and focus on your studies, making you feel relaxed in your school life. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you and you will have a good time every day. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份信给刚刚升入高一的新生Jack，就他进入高中后发现的问题进行安慰并提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 伤心的：sorry → sad 有困难做某事：have trouble doing sth. → have difficulty doing sth. 建议：advice→ suggestion/tip 专心：focus on → concentrate on 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句： 原句：I’m writing to offer you some useful advice. 拓展句：I’m writing to offer you some useful advice, which is listed as follows. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life, where you think you cannot balance extracurricular activities and study. (运用了that引导宾语从句以及where引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Second, you should make a good schedule and focus on your studies, making you feel relaxed in your school life.(运用了现在分词短语作状语) Passage 3 (23-24高一上·四川乐山·期中)假如你是李华，你的好朋友Linda刚刚上高一，在英语学习方面有困难，向你请教如何才能把英语学好。请根据以下内容用英语给她回复邮件。 内容要点： 1. 阐明写信目的； 2. 提出建议及理由。(主要包括每天早上大声朗读单词；尽可能多得熟记单词、短语和句型；阅读各种英语书籍等……) 3. 表达祝愿。 注意：1、可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；   2、词数80左右； 3. 参考词汇：phrase 短语， sentence patterns 句型 Dear Linda, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Linda, How’s it going? I’m glad to hear from and sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning English, so I’m writing to give you some useful advice on it. First of all, I suggest you read the English words, sentences and short articles aloud every morning. Meanwhile, try to memorize words and sentences as much as possible, which helps enlarge your vocabulary, Besides, it is suggested that you read a variety of English books after school, which is good for your writing. Last but not least, you should use English more often, such as trying communicating in English with classmates. As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” If you hold on to your dream and consider my suggestions, I’m sure you will be successful in your English learning some day. I’m looking forward to receiving your good news next time. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇导读】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给遇到英语学习困难的好朋友Linda提供有效的学习建议。 【详解】词汇积累 高兴的：glad → delighted 建议：advice → recommendation 大声地：aloud → loudly 阅读：read → peruse 句式拓展 同义句改写 原句：Last but not least, you should use English more often, such as trying communicating in English with classmates. 拓展句：Lastly, you should endeavor to use English frequently, for instance, attempting to communicate in English with your classmates. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】I’m looking forward to receiving your good news next time.(使用动名词作宾语) 【高分句型2】Meanwhile, try to memorize words and sentences as much as possible, which helps enlarge your vocabulary.(使用了关系代词which引导的非限制定语从句) Passage 4 (23-24高一上·新疆喀什·期中)假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信，信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的关于英语学习方法的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯； 3. 开头已为你写出。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Li Hua, I’m sorry to hear that you have met some challenges in learning English. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. My suggestions are as follows. Firstly, you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class. Secondly, the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it. Thirdly, you can speak English with your classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening and speaking abilities. What’s more, the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class. I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. Yours, Editor Jim 【语篇导读】本文是应用文。假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信，信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难, 这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的关于英语学习方法的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。 【详解】1.词汇积累 遇到：meet → encounter 建议：suggestions → tips 此外：What’s more → Moreover 有用的：helpful → of help 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Secondly, the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it. 拓展句：Secondly, what is the best way to learn English is that you need to read it well and know the meanings of it. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you have met some challenges in learning English. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】Thirdly, you can speak English with your classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening and speaking abilities. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 5 (24-25高一上·江苏苏州·阶段练习)假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Gary最近因为沉迷社交媒体(social media)而与父母发生了争执。请你给他写一封信，帮助他与父母和好。要点包括： 1. 对发生争吵表示遗憾； 2. 提出建议并说明理由： 3. 希望建议有用并期盼回信。 注意： ①词数：80左右； ②可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Gary, Knowing that you’ve argued recently with your parents on using social media, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Gary, Knowing that you’ve argued recently with your parents on using social media, I feel quite sorry. Social media, while entertaining and informative, can lead to excessive use, impacting your health and communication with your family. I suggest setting specific times for its use to balance your daily activities. Discuss with your parents to find a schedule that works for both sides. I hope my advice helps and look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外国朋友Gary最近因为沉迷社交媒体而与父母发生了争执的事情按照要求给他写一封信，帮助他与父母和好。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 非常：quite → extremely 过度：excessive → too much 影响：impact → influence 建议：suggest → recommend 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Social media, while entertaining and informative, can lead to excessive use, impacting your health and communication with your family. 复合句：Although social media is entertaining and informative, it can lead to excessive use, which impacts your health and communication with your family. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Social media, while entertaining and informative, can lead to excessive use, impacting your health and communication with your family.(运用了状语从句中的省略以及现在分词短语作状语) 【高分句型2】I hope my advice helps and look forward to hearing from you soon.(运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句以及动名词短语作宾语) Passage 6 (23-24高一上·山东济南·期末)假定你是李华，最近收到来自澳大利亚朋友 Eric 的一条信息，内容如下， My parents won’t listen when I tell them things. It makes me really upset. I guess it’s because they’re adults and can’t understand me. Do you have any suggestions? 请你写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 表示安慰； 2. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Eric, Glad to hear from you ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Eric, Glad to hear from you. I understand that quit well that you are upset. I recommend that you talk to your parents about your anxiety. It is better to be straightforward and honest than to repress your feelings and keep them inside. Most parents don’t listen to what their kids have got to say about matters because they fail to see that their child is growing up and is becoming more mature. Probably the best way to tackle this is to keep calm. No matter how angry they are, they are still your parents and you should be polite to them. I hope these advice can help you. Yours sincerely Li Hua 【语篇导读】本文是应用文。要求考生给其父母无法理解他的Eric写封回信安慰他，并给他提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 生气的：upset → annoyed 解决：tackle → address 建议：advice → suggestions 帮助某人：help sb. → be helpful to sb. 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：It is better to be straightforward and honest than to repress your feelings and keep them inside. 拓展句：It is better to be straightforward and honest than to repress your feelings and keep them inside, which is very important. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】I recommend that you talk to your parents about your anxiety.(运用了that引导的虚拟语气和虚拟语气) 【高分句型2】Most parents don’t listen to what their kids have got to say about matters because they fail to see that their child is growing up and is becoming more mature. (运用了what引导的宾语从句和because引导的状语从句) Passage 7 (24-25高一上·湖南衡阳·期中)假如Tom是你的英国笔友，最近他很郁闷，因为他和父母之间有一些分歧。请根据以下内容用英语写一封信。 Tom的烦恼 物理比较难，学习压力大；父母不理解，除了学习，父母什么都不让他做；他现在对学习不感兴趣 你的建议 1.向老师寻求帮助；2.与父母进行沟通；3.调整心态，端正态度 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________-__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Tom, I am sorry to hear that you are feeling upset these days. It’s very normal for teenagers to have some disagreement with their parents. So, don’t worry too much about that. I’m writing to give you some suggestions. To start with, you’d better turn to teachers for help if physics is too difficult and you are under great stress. Besides, you should communicate with your parents to win their understanding. Last but not least, you are supposed to make an emotional adjustment to make sure you have a right attitude towards study. I hope my advice is of great help to you. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友写一封建议信，帮助他解决与父母间存在的一些问题。 【详解】1.词汇积累 与……有分歧：have some disagreement with → have discrepancies with→ disagree with 获得：win → gain →acquire →obtain 困难的：difficult→ hard → tough →challenging 首先：to start with →firstly → in the first place 此外：Besides → Also → Moreover → Furthermore → What’s more 最后：Last but not least → lastly →finally 调整心情：make an emotional adjustment →adjust yourself emotionally 应该：should →are supposed to →had better 有帮助：of great help → very helpful 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Last but not least, you are supposed to make an emotional adjustment to make sure you have a right attitude towards study. 拓展句：Last but not least, you are supposed to make an emotional adjustment so that you can make sure you have a right attitude towards study. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】It’s very normal for teenagers to have some disagreement with their parents.(运用了It is +adj+(for sb) to do sth的句式) 【高分句型2】you’d better turn to teachers for help if physics is too difficult and you are under great stress.(运用了条件状语从句) 【高分句型3】Last but not least, you are supposed to make an emotional adjustment to make sure you have a right attitude towards study.(运用了宾语从句) Passage 8 (24-25高一上·重庆·阶段练习)假定你是李华, 你班上来自英国的交换生Eric在学习、生活中遇到了一些困难：不适应中文上课和中餐、文化冲突 (culture shock) 等。请你写一封电子邮件给他一些建议。内容包括: 1. 理解心情 2. 给出具体建议 3. …… 注意: 写作词数100个左右 Dear Eric, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Eric, I’m sorry to hear that you have encountered some difficulties in adapting yourself to Chinese classes, Chinese food and culture shock, which makes you feel distressed. Please don’t worry. Here are some useful tips for you. Firstly, traveling around the city and getting to know people here can help you get used to the new environment soon. Secondly, you can learn some basics and communicate them with your classmates, thus helping you feel relaxed in class in a short period of time. In addition, it makes sense to taste various local foods. Only in this way not only will you adjust youself to the local food quickly, but you can also have the chance to appreciate the profound Chinese food culture. I Hope my suggestions will be of great benefit to you. If you have any trouble, please don’ t hesitate to let me know. I’ll always be here for you. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给在学习、生活中遇到了一些困难的英国交换生Eric写一封电子邮件，给他提一些建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 遇到：encounter → meet with 苦恼的：distressed → upset 习惯于：get used to → get accustomed to 除此之外：in addition → what’s more 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Firstly, traveling around the city and getting to know people here can help you get used to the new environment soon. 拓展句：Firstly, it is a good idea to travel around the city and get to know people here, which can help you get used to the new environment soon. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Secondly, you can learn some basics and communicate them with your classmates, thus helping you feel relaxed in class in a short period of time. (运用了现在分词短语作结果状语) 【高分句型2】Only in this way not only will you adjust youself to the local food quickly, but you can also have the chance to appreciate the profound Chinese food culture.(运用了部分倒装) Passage 9 (24-25高一上·湖南衡阳·开学考试)假如你是李华，你的朋友Peter来中国旅游，回国前他想给家人买一件代表中国文化的礼物。他通过邮件询问你的意见，请你用英文回复。 提示 (1)你建议他买什么; (2)介绍这个礼物; (3)给出你推荐的理由。 要求： (1)内容包含以上信息，80词左右(开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数); (2)语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范; (3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Peter, Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter, Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift that stands for Chinese culture. I highly recommend you to buy a traditional Chinese silk scarf as a souvenir for your family. Silk, being one of the most renowned symbols of China, has a long and rich history. This scarf is not only exquisite in craftsmanship but also carries profound cultural meanings. The intricate patterns, often depicting landscapes, flowers, showcase the artistic talents of our ancestors. They are not only practical but also serve as a perfect medium to share your travel experiences with your loved ones. I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【语篇导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的朋友Peter来中国旅游，回国前他想给家人买一件代表中国文化的礼物。他通过邮件询问你的意见，要求考生写一封邮件用英文进行回复。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：recommend→advise 知名的：renowned → well-known 精致的：exquisite→delicate 表明：showcase→ show/indicate 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： I highly recommend you to buy a traditional Chinese silk scarf as a souvenir for your family. 拓展句： I highly recommend that you buy a traditional Chinese silk scarf as a souvenir for your family. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Silk, being one of the most renowned symbols of China, has a long and rich history.(运用了现在分词作状语) 【高分句型2】The intricate patterns, often depicting landscapes, flowers, showcase the artistic talents of our ancestors. (运用了现在分词作状语的结构) Passage 10 (23-24高一上·福建南平·期中)假定你是李华，你有一个好朋友Mike，你们曾经无话不谈，有许多共同的爱好。可是他搬家后你俩的联系变少了。最近他母亲告诉你，他开始沉迷于网络游戏，不认真学习。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，从朋友的角度对他进行劝告。内容包括： 1. 充分利用时间学习； 2. 养成良好的生活习惯。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，但是不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, We haven’t seen each other for a long time. How is it going? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mike, We haven’t seen each other for a long time. How is it going? I’ve heard you have a problem now. It is said that you’ve been lost in network games and don’t study hard any longer. As your best friend, I’d like to say something here. As a student, the most important is our study. We should spend our most time on it.   Computer games are of course interesting, but they are used only for relaxation after a long time of study. Playing games should never be what your life is all about. Besides,You should form a good life habit and balance your time between studying and playing games. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生好朋友Mike写一封电子邮件，针对他沉迷于网络游戏，不认真学习的情况从朋友的角度对他进行劝告。 【详解】1.词汇积累 沉迷于：be lost in → be addicted to 有趣的：interesting → funny 重要的：important → significant 对……造成伤害：do harm to → be harmful to 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：As a student, the most important is our study. 拓展句：As a student, what’s the most important is our study. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】It is said that you’ve been lost in network games and don’t study hard any longer.(使用了that引导的真正主语从句) 【高分句型2】Playing games should never be what your life is all about. (使用了动名词充当主语以及what引导的表语从句) Passage 11 (23-24高一上·贵州毕节·期末)假定你是高中学生李华，你的美国朋友Bob因为喜欢吃垃圾食品而不喜欢锻炼，导致体重超重，最近他因此很苦恼，请你写封信，给他一些建议。内容包括： 1.均衡饮食，多吃新鲜蔬菜和水果； 2.锻炼身体，合理锻炼有助于身体健康； 3.保证充足的睡眠，不要熬夜，保持积极的心态。 参考词汇：junk food垃圾食品  take exercise锻炼  weight体重  anxious苦恼的  advice建议 balanced diet均衡饮食  vegetables and fruits蔬菜和水果  ensure enough sleep保证充足的睡眠  stay up熬夜  positive积极的   注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； Dear Bob, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Bob, How nice to hear from you! Learning that you are overweight because you like eating junk food rather than exercising, I would like to give you some advice. As you know, we teenagers grow very fast, so we need plenty of nutritious foods, especially fresh vegetables and fruit. You'd better not eat much sweet food. Besides, you should take physical exercise regularly instead of studying in the classroom all the time. What’s more, having enough sleep is of great importance. So I advise you to have eight hours of sleep every day and not to stay up too late. Maintain a positive mindset. Only in this way can you keep fit and become stronger and more energetic. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Bob写封信，给他一些保持健康的建议。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 充满活力：energetic → vigorous 建议：advice → suggestion 此外：what’s more/ besides → in addition 重要：be of great importance → important 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I would like to give you some advice. 拓展句：I would like to give you some advice, which can be helpful. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]Learning that you are overweight because you like eating junk food rather than exercising, I would like to give you some advice..(运用现在分词作状语) [高分句型2]Only in this way can you keep fit and become stronger and more energetic. (运用了部分倒装句) Passage 12 (23-24高一上·湖南娄底·期末)据调查，近年来，越来越多的中学生近视，如何保护眼睛和预防近视已经成了一个社会广泛关注的问题。请你根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿： 1.近视的原因； 2.如何保护视力； 3.呼吁大家保护视力； 注意：1. 开头已为你写好，不计入字数。 2. 字数不少于80 字。 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, it’s my honor to be here to talk about short-sightedness. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, it’s my honor to be here to talk about short-sightedness. As we all know, an increasing number of students are short-sighted, which has become a nationwide concern. There are many factors contributing to your short-sightedness, like reading in a poor-lighted environment, spending too much time on your screen. Then, how to protect your eyes? First, I suggest you should have an eye test every year. If you are already short-sighted, wearing glasses is the safest way to protect your eyes from further injuries. Besides, you’d better eat more eggs, carrots and dark-green leafy vegetables, which are good for our eyes. What’s more, get enough sleep to ensure your eyes can get a good rest. Don’t focus on your computer screen for a long time. Take frequent breaks to give your eyes a rest. I hope that all of you can swing into action to protect your eyes. Love your eyes, love yourself! 【语篇导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇演讲稿，说明中学生近视问题。 【详解】1.词汇积累 问题：concern → issue 因素：factor → element 集中：focus on → concentrate on 此外：besides → in addition 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Besides, you’d better eat more eggs, carrots and dark-green leafy vegetables, which are good for our eyes. 拓展句：Besides, it is better for you to eat more eggs, carrots and dark-green leafy vegetables, which are good for our eyes. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]As we all know, an increasing number of students are short-sighted, which has become a nationwide concern. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]I hope that all of you can swing into action to protect your eyes. (运用了that引导宾语从句) Passage13 (23-24高一上·湖南长沙·期末)假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 James给你写信，说自己最近免疫力下降，常常感冒生病，而且他考试周也即将到来，忙碌的节奏让他已经许久没有锻炼身体了。请你写一封回信给 James，内容包括： 1. 对他最近的感受表示理解。 2.和他说说体育锻炼的重要性。 3.给出加强日常锻炼的建议。 Dear James, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear James, I’m sorry to hear that you’ve been feeling under the weather recently and that your immune system has been weakened. It’s understandable that with the upcoming exam week, you might have been too busy to exercise. However, I would like to remind you of the importance of regular physical activity. Exercise can not only improve our physical health, but also have a positive impact on our mental well-being.   To incorporate more exercise into your daily routine, I suggest starting small. Even just 10-15 minutes of exercise a day can make a big difference. I hope these suggestions are helpful to you. Remember, taking care of your physical and mental health is crucial for your overall well-being. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的回信。要求考生向英国朋友 James写信，对其感受表示理解，和他说说体育锻炼的重要性，并给出加强锻炼的建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 重要性：importance → significance 提高：improve → enhance 对……有影响：have an impact on → have an influence on 建议：suggest → advise 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To incorporate more exercise into your daily routine, I suggest starting small. 拓展句：If you want to incorporate more exercise into your daily routine, I suggest starting small. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you’ve been feeling under the weather recently and that your immune system has been weakened.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】I hope these suggestions are helpful to you.(运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句) Passage 14 (22-23高一上·甘肃临夏·期中)王明现在是高一学生。进入高中以来，他常常感到身体不舒服，易疲倦，为此他很苦恼。作为朋友的你针对其现象提了几点建议：每天早点睡觉；不要学习得太晚；多做运动；多吃健康的食物。你可以参考以下的提示词，给王明写一封信。 提示词：go to bed early；exercise more；study too late 注意： (1)请写一篇100词左右的短文，收信人和写信人的名字已给出，不计入词数； (2)信中不能出现真实的学校、班级和姓名； (3)句子及语法结构准确、连贯，书写规范。 Dear Wang Ming, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Wang Ming, I’m sorry to hear that you haven’t been feeling well lately. As your friend, I care about you very much. People need to adjust their state to adapt to the changing environment. So I have a few suggestions for you. First of all, go to bed early every day and don’t study too late. As a student, you need 6-8 hours of sleep every day to ensure that you are energetic the next day, and abundant energy in turn promotes learning efficiency. Secondly, you can do more exercise. Exercise can strengthen your body and delight your mind. In this way, you won’t get tired easily after a day’s school life. Finally, it is also good to eat more healthy foods, including green vegetables, fresh fruits, and protein foods such as meat, eggs and milk. I hope my advice is helpful to you. Look forward to receiving your good news soon. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友写封建议信。针对于朋友最近的苦恼，提出建议：每天早点睡觉；不要学习得太晚；多做运动；多吃健康的食物。 【详解】1.词汇积累 关心：care about→ be concerned about 适应：adapt to → acclimatize oneself to/ be accustomed to 建议：suggestion → advice/proposal 保证：ensure → make sure 有用的：helpful→useful/beneficial/valuable 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Secondly, you can do more exercise. Exercise can strengthen your body and delight your mind. 拓展句：Secondly, you can do more exercise, which can strengthen your body and delight your mind. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】As a student, you need 6-8 hours of sleep every day to ensure that you are energetic the next day, and abundant energy in turn promotes learning efficiency.(运用了that引导宾语从句) 【高分句型2】Finally, it is also good to eat more healthy foods, including green vegetables, fresh fruits, and protein foods such as meat, eggs and milk.(运用了it作形式主语，动词不定式做真正宾语) 读后续写 Passage 1 (24-25高一上·山东·阶段练习)The kids in Ms. Ryder’s art group all gathered round. “Our school’s welcome sign looks old and faded,” Ms Ryder pointed up at the old wall painting. “It’s our turn to do something new and bright. Let’s collect some ideas.” The children started to think. “Let’s just make a new welcome sign in bright colors,” Ella beamed. Ms Ryder smiled, “Nice idea, but I was thinking that we could paint a big picture about all our children, something a bit more special.” “A giant heart with all our names on it, ”Sara said. “Sports,” Tiger joined in. “We do lots of sports; let’s have a big picture with all kinds of sports.” “The Earth, with people all over it.” Mattie was thoughtful. But then Eliza joined in, “It’s a puzzle. How can we all join in and paint a picture. We’ve all got different ideas.” Ms. Ryder smiled. “That’s it! We all have different ideas, but we all fit in together and want to paint a big picture. Let’s paint a big puzzle in the brightest colors!” The next day, they set to work. They were ready to paint the giant jigsaw(拼图) puzzle. The puzzle was very big with lots of pieces, all the pieces fitted together, but there was space all around. “For our names?”Carlos asked. “What a good idea, Carlos, for all our names, and for all the children in our school.” Ms. Ryder was having fun. Eliza smiled,“We all want our different kids in our puzzle. Red, blue and green; that’s not enough.” Ms. Ryder agreed and the children learned to mix as many colors as the numbers of the kids at school. Red, blue, green, yellow, orange, pink, purple, brown. They learnt new colors, too-Apple Green, Sapphire Blue, Canary Yellow, Crimson Red. The children wanted as many colors as possible in their new picture. The amazing puzzle picture was finished except adding the names of the children and needed a few days to dry out. 注意：  1. 续写词数不少于80词； 2. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then came the big day when Ms. Ryder announced it was time to write down names for everyone. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Then came the big day when Ms. Ryder announced it was time to write down names for everyone. The children were so excited. They carefully wrote their names in beautiful colors. Some chose their favorite colors, while others used a combination of several. As they filled the spaces with their names, the puzzle became even more alive and unique. When it was all done, they stood back and admired their masterpiece. The big puzzle with all their names and the bright colors represented the unity and diversity of their class. Ms. Ryder was proud of their teamwork and creativity. It was not just a painting, but a symbol of their togetherness and friendship. 【语篇导读】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Ryder老师带领她的艺术小组的学生们共同创作一幅大型拼图画的过程，展现了孩子们的团队合作精神和创造力。 【详解】1.段落续写： 由本段首句内容“然后是重要的一天，Ryder老师宣布是时候为每个人写下名字了。”可知，本段可描写孩子们小心翼翼地写下了自己的名字，创作出了一幅独特的作品。 2.续写线索：老师要求写下自己的名字——孩子们非常兴奋——选择自己喜欢的颜色——写下自己的名字——发现自己创作了一幅杰作——非常自豪 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①欣赏：admire/appreciate ②象征：represent/symbolize/stand for ③挑选：choose/select 情绪类 ①兴奋的：excited/thrilled ②对……感到自豪：be proud of/take pride in 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Some chose their favorite colors, while others used a combination of several.(运用了while引导的状语从句) 【高分句型2】As they filled the spaces with their names, the puzzle became even more alive and unique.(运用了as引导的状语从句) Passage 2 (24-25高一上·辽宁·阶段练习)When I was in junior high school, math was my greatest challenge. No matter how hard I tried, I always seemed to fall short. My test scores were often disappointing, and I felt my teenage life was full of confusion and frustration(挫败). However, everything changed, thanks to the great support of my teacher, Mr Green, and my classmates. One day, after another poor test result, I stayed behind after class, feeling defeated. Mr Green noticed my sadness and came to me with a smile. “Don’t worry, Jack,” he said softly. “Everyone may find something difficult. The important thing is not to give up. Let’s work on this together.” Mr Green started explaining each concept(概念) more patiently, breaking it down into simpler parts. He used real-life examples to make ideas easy to understand. Every time after class, he would come to my seat and ask me if I understood the lesson. His devotion and encouragement helped me a lot, and slowly, I began to see improvement. My classmates also played a role in my progress. My best friend, Mike, was good at math. He offered to study with me during breaks. We would sit in the library, going over problems. He told me to face my mistakes bravely, and his positive attitude influenced me. I would never forget the week before our final exams. I was struggling with a math problem. Despite Mr Green’s and Mike’s help, I couldn’t solve it. One afternoon, Mike suggested we turn it into a game. He created a set of flashcards(抽认卡) with different solutions. We took turns drawing cards and solving the problem as quickly as possible. Most importantly, we found joy in it. Of course, I made great progress in math. The day of the final exam arrived. I took a deep breath and remembered all the hard work and support I had received. When the result was announced, I could hardly believe my eyes: I had scored the highest mark in my class in math. Later, we formed a group and invited more students to learn math together. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 We studied hard towards the senior high school entrance examination. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As I walked into my senior high school on the first day, I met Mike. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: We studied hard towards the senior high school entrance examination. We held some activities, where we exchanged tips for learning math, and we deepened our friendship as well. Finally, most of us did well in math in the senior high school entrance examination. The experiences and friendships I gained during that time were invaluable, shaping my confidence and enthusiasm for learning. I was admitted to a good senior high school as expected, and I couldn’t wait to welcome the new campus life. As I walked into my senior high school on the first day, I met Mike. Our eyes widened in surprise. Almost at the same time, we said, “Hi, we are schoolmates again.” We were proud and determined. We would continue to work together in the same school, ready to face new challenges and achieve greater heights. My experience in junior high school had taught me an invaluable lesson: Perseverance and support could turn even challenges into opportunities for growth. Senior high school was my new start, and I was ready to make the most of it. 【语篇导读】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在初中时的数学成绩不好，在Mr. Green和同学们的帮助下作者的成绩取得了很大进步，甚至期末考试中数学取得全班第一的成绩的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我们为了中考努力学习。”可知，第一段可描写作者与同学们为中考做了些什么工作，以及努力的结果是什么。 ②由第二段首句内容“当我走进高中的第一天，我遇到了Mike。”可知，第二段可描写作者与Mike在高中相遇的反应以及计划如何迎接高中的挑战和学习的感悟。 2.续写线索：为中考努力——取得进步——考上高中——与同学相遇——决定迎接高中挑战——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①获得：gain/obtain/get ②继续：continued/go on ③面临：face/be faced with 情绪类 ①惊讶：in surprise/in astonishment/in amazement 【点睛】 [高分句型1]We held some activities, where we exchanged tips for learning math, and we deepened our friendship as well.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]The experiences and friendships I gained during that time were invaluable, shaping my confidence and enthusiasm for learning.(运用了省略关系代词的定语从句以及现在分词短语作状语) [高分句型3]We would continue to work together in the same school, ready to face new challenges and achieve greater heights.(运用了形容词短语作状语) Passage 3 (24-25高一上·湖北·开学考试)I was standing with Dad in Grandpa’s yard, and this was our last visit here, because Grandpa was moving in with us. We would have one week to get his house cleared out. We stepped into the house, overwhelmed with the huge piles of papers on the table. I volunteered that I could take the old heavy shredder(碎纸机) from our house to deal with them. I could take it apart and put it back together. “What? No!” Dad snapped(厉声说). Then he sighed, and I knew the exact three words he was going to say next. “Michael, be realistic.” Then he lectured about how unrealistic my idea was as his eyes traveled wearily(疲倦地) over the papers piled on the table. I shrugged(耸肩),walked over and poked through the piles. “Hey, what’s this?” I pulled out an old photograph of my dad as a kid. He was standing under the apple tree in the yard, spraying(喷) water from a water pipe at whoever was holding the camera, with a big, playful smile on his face. He looked like a different person. I glanced over at him. He was examining an old income tax statement with a frown(皱眉). I wondered if something strange had happened to him. Like maybe the carefree boy in the picture and some bookish boy down the street had decided to switch lives or something. If only there were a time capsule or a memory box that held more of Dad’s boyhood stuff. Okay, no. That was not realistic. “Michael,” Dad said. “Why don’t you start cleaning out the shed(棚屋)?”I happily agreed. But when I went in, I was shocked. How was I supposed to “clean it out”? It was filled with junk, a broken lawnmower here and a million cans of old paint there. Suddenly I noticed a little triangle of plastic sticking out from the bottom of the paint cans. Curious, I pulled it out carefully. It was a sandwich bag with a piece of folded paper inside. Maybe it was a treasure map, or the answer to some long-unsolved murder. I chuckled(轻声地笑)over my own unrealistic fancies. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150词左右; 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Para 1: It turned out to be a letter addressed to future people from my dad as a kid. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para 2: Amazed by the letter, I raced to Dad in the house. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A possible sample 1 Paragraph 1: It turned out to be a letter addressed to future people from my dad as a kid. As I unfolded the fragile paper, I saw the messy handwriting of a child. The letter began, “To whoever finds this, I hope you love this place as much as I do. My name is Tom, and this is my grandpa’s house. I love playing under the apple tree and building forts in the shed. If you’re reading this, I hope you’re having fun too. I bet you never knew how fast you could run in this yard!” I smiled, imagining my dad as a young boy, carefree and full of energy, scribbling down these words in a moment of joy. The letter ended with, “Take care of this house. It’s full of secrets and memories. And remember to keep smiling, just like I did.” Paragraph 2: Amazed by the letter, I raced to Dad in the house. Holding the yellowed paper carefully, I burst into the room where Dad was still sorting through piles of documents. “Dad, you have to see this!” I exclaimed, handing him the letter. He looked at me with a mix of curiosity and surprise, then unfolded the note. As he read it, I watched his expression change. The frown on his face softened, and a faint smile appeared. For a moment, he seemed to be transported back to his childhood, reconnecting with the boy he once was. “I can’t believe I wrote this,” he murmured, more to himself than to me. Then, with a new lightness in his voice, he said, “You know, Michael, maybe we should take a break and go sit under that apple tree.” And just like that, the distant, serious man I knew felt a little closer, a little more like the boy in the photograph. A possible sample 2 Paragraph 1: It turned out to be a letter addressed to future people from my dad as a kid. Dad told the future people that they had no flying cars nor household robots, so they had to do everything themselves. I grinned as I scanned through the funny letter. My jaw almost dropped when he said he dreamed of a vacation on Mars. That was not realistic at all, boy, I laughed to myself, eyes still fixed on the letter. “I made you a time capsule. Tell your robot to dig under the apple tree in the yard.” He told the future people at the end of the letter. Paragraph 2: Amazed by the letter, I raced to Dad in the house. The poor man was still occupied with sorting out Grandpa’s papers. I dropped the letter on the table and joked, “Why don’t you just have your robot go through the papers? And how could people vacation on Mars? That was unrealistic. I mean...” I was laughing so hard that I could barely talk. Dad looked utterly bewildered (困惑不解的).Then he read the letter, shook his head in disbelief and finally burst out laughing. “Come on, let’s dig out the time capsule under the tree.” He strode (大步走) out to the yard. Suddenly I saw it! The boy with the water pipe. A possible sample 3 Paragraph 1: It turned out to be a letter addressed to future people from my dad as a kid. The handwriting was shaky, with misspelled words here and there, but the message was clear. “Dear Future Me,” it began, “I hope you still like climbing trees and playing in the rain. I bet you’re still having fun with your friends and building cool stuff. Maybe you even have a spaceship by now! Don’t ever stop dreaming big, okay? The world is full of adventures waiting for you.” As I read the letter, I could almost hear my dad’s younger voice, full of hope and excitement for the future. It was a far cry from the serious, practical man who stood frowning over the tax forms in the other room. I couldn’t help but smile at the thought of Dad as a kid, filled with so much wonder and imagination. Paragraph 2: Amazed by the letter, I raced to Dad in the house. “Dad, you have to see this!” I called out excitedly. He looked up from the pile of papers, a bit annoyed at first, but when he saw what I was holding, his expression softened. He took the letter from me, and as he read it, a slow smile spread across his face. “I can’t believe I wrote this,” he murmured, almost to himself. For a moment, he seemed lost in thought, his mind clearly drifting back to his childhood. Then he looked at me, his eyes filled with a warmth I hadn’t seen in a long time. “You know, Michael,” he said, “maybe we should keep that old shredder after all. It might just come in handy for more than paperwork.” We both laughed, and in that moment, I felt closer to him than I had in years. 【语篇导读】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者无意中发现了父亲小时候写给未来的信，心中表达了父亲儿时的梦想、希望和对未来的期待，父亲在看到这封信后陷入了沉思。 【详解】(范文1) 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“原来这是一封写给未来的人的信，是我父亲小时候写的”可知，第一段可描述父亲小时候写给未来的信，内容中透露了他儿时的梦想、希望和对未来的期待。 ②由第二段首句内容“我被这封信吓了一跳，跑到屋里的爸爸跟前”可知，第二段可描写父亲看到信的反应以及和作者的沟通。 2.续写线索：发现信——阅读信的内容——信拿给父亲——父亲吃惊——父亲微笑——父亲沉思 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①开始：begin/start ②玩得高兴：have fun/enjoy oneself ③打开：unfold/open 情绪类 ①无忧无虑：carefree/light-hearted ②惊喜，惊讶：surprise/astonishment 【点睛】 [高分句型1]If you’re reading this, I hope you’re having fun too.(运用了if引导条件状语从句和省略that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]As I unfolded the fragile paper, I saw the messy handwriting of a child.(运用了as引导时间状语从句) Passage 4 (24-25高一上·河南·阶段练习)The first time I attended my son’s parent-teacher meeting was in third grade. I was rushing from the seafood market, and my clothes were dirty because of fish and other sea food. Even though I took a taxi, I still arrived late. I was laughed at by some parents and kids for my poor look. I met some uncomfortable looks, and with a sense of sadness and pity, I walked to his seat. My son, on the other hand, cleaned the sweat(汗水) from my forehead and handed me his little water bottle, saying, “Mummy, have some water!” In a flash, his thoughtfulness impressed so many people. After the parent-teacher meeting, my son’s teacher asked me to stay back a while longer, but he explained why I had to leave early. “My mother has to go home to cook for my grandparents, so can she leave first? I’ll tell her everything you have to say when I come home, and I promise I won’t miss a word!” The teacher said, “There are more than 40 children in the class, and your son Han Liu is heartbreaking to me; he is so understanding and helpful. Can a child like this not be successful in the future? You must be a great example in your family.” I shook the teacher’s hand and held it as I explained. “Han Liu’s father was hit in a car accident, and both of his grandparents are on the bed all year round, so I can’t take care of Han Liu at all. Since he could walk, he has been caring for his grandpa, grandma and father.” The teacher was so amazed. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 On the way home, I couldn’t stop crying thinking of all the little moments of my son’s life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was waiting downstairs for my son to come home from school with a clean look. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 On the way home, I couldn’t stop crying thinking of all the little moments of my son’s life. Life was really hard for me. There was little time for me to think and relax. But the little boy grew little by little, And he really tried his best to help me, Those warm moments of the little boy cleaning our house and so on crossed in my mind. Suddenly all my complaints about life and pity for myself disappeared. I realized life had presented me with so many misfortunes, but it also gave me my dear son. I was waiting downstairs for my son to come home from school with a clean look. When he saw me, his mouth opened into an O-shape and said, “Mum, are you going on a date?” I answered, “I’m not going on a date! No matter how dirty and tiring my work may be, I still have to present myself nicely and not lose the respect of others for you. So how does your mum look since I’ve cleaned up?” He immediately jumped up and said, “Wonderful! When I grow up, I will find a wife like my mum.” At that moment. I wanted to hug him. Although he was small and very thin, he was already a handsome young man in my heart. 【语篇导读】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述作者去参加儿子的家长会，尽管因为自己长相不佳，衣服很脏，与周围的氛围格格不入，但作者的孩子尽量维护自己，处处体现出关心，这让老师和作者都十分感动。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由续写第一段首句“在回家的路上，想到儿子生命中的所有像这样的小时刻，我忍不住哭了。”可以预测续写第一段主要内容：尽管作者生活不幸，但因为有这样体贴的儿子而感到幸福。 ②由第二段首句“我在楼下等着儿子放学回家，一脸干净。”可以预测续写第二段主要内容：作者做出改变，以干净的外表展示给儿子。 2.续写线索：作者回忆儿子暖心的时刻——不再抱怨生活——感谢拥有这样的儿子——做出改变，穿着干净——向儿子解释改变的原因——与儿子拥抱 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①.努力： try one’s best/make great efforts/spare no effort ②.帮助：help /do sb a favor/assist ③.看见：spot/see 情绪类 ①.同情：pity/sympathy ②.使人疲劳的：tiring/exhausting   【点睛】 [高分句型1]I realized life had presented me with so many misfortunes, but it also gave me my dear son. (运用了省略that的宾语从句) [高分句型2]No matter how dirty and tiring my work may be, I still have to present myself nicely and not lose the respect of others for you. (运用了no matter how引导的让步状语从句) [高分句型3]When I grow up, I will find a wife like my mum.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句) Passage 5 (24-25高一上·河南许昌·阶段练习)Ari lived on a big island called Iceland. His home was a small fishing village by the sea. Spending a lot of time alone in his little house, Ari often looked at the faraway view and wondered what was out there. One day, Ari thought, "I want to find a true friend far away from here." So, he decided to write a letter, hoping to find a friend who understood his feelings. Ari wrote about the volcanoes(火山) and glaciers(冰川) on his snowy island. He described the beautiful Northern Lights that painted the sky with colors like green, blue and pink at night. For many days, Ari wrote about his thoughts and feelings. Then, he put the letter in a bottle and closed it really well. When the water was high, Ari threw the bottle into the sea and wished on a bright star that someone would find his letter. A year passed, and many cold nights went by after Ari threw his message into the sea. One day, he got a letter in the mail. He didn't know who it was from, but he was very happy and quickly opened the envelope (信封). The letter said: Dear Ari, I found your letter in a bottle that washed up on my beach. I live on an island called Sardinia. My island is warm and has mountains, white beaches, and green waters, though sometimes there are storms. I also want a true friend. I hope we can write to each other and learn more about our lives. Your new friend, Marco For three years, Ari and Marco wrote letters to each other. They talked about their cultures, traditions, and favorite foods. They shared secrets about their villages and wrote about their festivals and music. Marco's letters made Ari feel less lonely. Ari knew he had found his best friend. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Without telling Marco, Ari decided to go with his father on a business trip to Sardinia, where he would meet Marco in person. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ However, two years later, Ari didn't receive Marco's letters for about two months, which reminded Ari of the storms Marco once mentioned. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Without telling Marco, Ari decided to go with his father on a business trip to Sardinia, where he would meet Marco in person. He determined to win his father’s support. He sat down with his father one evening. With a trembling heart, Ari unfolded his plans, speaking of his dreams and the friendship that had blossomed across the sea. He showed his father the letters from Marco. The words filled with warmth and understanding. Ari’s father, moved by his passion and the genuine connection he had made. But he still disagreed. Because he thought he was too young. However, two years later, Ari didn't receive Marco's letters for about two months, which reminded Ari of the storms Marco once mentioned. So he decided to set out by ship to meet his best friend in person. The sea was vast and the journey was long, but his heart was filled with excitement. Upon his arrival, he found the island even more beautiful. The moment they met, it was as if no distance had ever separated them and their friendship. They embraced each other, tears welling up in their eyes. Fortunately, Marco is safe. 【语篇导读】本文讲述了阿里住在一个叫冰岛的大岛上，他经常感到孤独，他写信放在瓶子里，然后抛入海中，希望有人看到他的信，与他成为朋友。一段时间后，一个名叫马可的人给他寄来了回信，他们通过信交流，成为了好友。随着时间的流逝，阿里想亲自去看马可。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“阿里没有告诉马可，他决定和父亲一起去撒丁岛出差，在那里他将亲自见到马可。”可知，第一段可描阿里如何劝说父亲带自己去撒丁岛。 ②由第二段首句内容“然而，两年后，阿里大约两个月没有收到马可的信，这让阿里想起了马可曾经提到的风暴。”可知，第二段可描写阿里的感受及做法。 2.续写线索：父子交谈——希望去见马克——父亲拒绝——亲自去小岛——旅行过程——成功到达——两人见面 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①坐下：sit down/take a seat ②展开：unfold/disclose ③展示：show/present 情绪类 ①颤抖的：trembling/shaking ②兴奋：excitement/thrill 【点睛】 [高分句型1]With a trembling heart, Ari unfolded his plans, speaking of his dreams and the friendship that had blossomed across the sea.(由that引导的限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]The moment they met, it was as if no distance had ever separated them and their friendship.(由The moment引导的时间从句和as if引导的方式状语从句) Passage 6 (23-24高一上·安徽阜阳·期末)It is a challenging journey to change their lives for the best and get the healthiest they knew how to. Lexi and Danny lived their lives like most other young couples who fell in love with each other and then made the decision to spend the rest of their lives together. The couple spent a lot of time watching TV and going to different restaurants, and as you would imagine, the endless junk foods were their “go-to” choice. Though they would manage to lose some weight during the time, but before long, they would gain it back. Lexi weighed a 485 pounds at the age of 25, a weight that was quite unbelievable to imagine. Danny, on the other hand, was also overweight himself even though he was 200 pounds less than Lexi. However, the sad part of everything was that they were both gaining more weight on what they already had with each passing day. Some of their daily activities, no matter how simple, became a real problem for the couple. They couldn’t go for walks or bicycle rides no matter how easy they were. However, in 2016 just after a year after the marriage, they decided to make a positive change in their life. The couple decided to take on a challenge that would change their lives forever and for good! So many people make promises to themselves and others that they don’t really carry out but the couple were not about to do like the others. Theirs were destined (注定的) to come to reality. They made a detailed plan to go on a diet and take exercise on a daily basis. At first, they thought the whole process would have been a piece of cake. As they pressed on, each passing day showed them that this challenge would not be a walk in the park. They got a gym membership to help out. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The weight-losing lessons offered at the gym were not easy, a real challenge for them. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Just after a month, they both felt so much better, and they were pleased with the way they looked. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Paragraph 1: The weight-losing lessons offered at the gym were not easy, a real challenge for them. At first, no matter what efforts they made, they couldn’t keep at the pace of the other people in the class, because of their huge weight. Especially for Lexi, she was unable to get through with the lessons. However, the encouragement and support from their friends and family led them to keep up. They worked as a team, supporting each other, so none of them would fail. They kept up on the journey to lose weight. Paragraph 2: Just after a month, they both felt so much better, and they were pleased with the way they looked. Of course, this new feeling gave them a lot of confidence to keep pushing to achieve the final goal they were working for. Before long, their efforts began to pay off. Lexi was dropping about 20 pounds and Danny 11 pounds per month. Now the couple both have a good shape and enjoy a happy life. To keep up the gain, they are still taking exercise every day, however busy they are. Importantly, they keep off junk foods. 【语篇导读】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Lexi和Danny是一对年轻的夫妇，由于他们不健康的生活和饮食习惯，他们变得超重了。然而在结婚一年后，他们决定在生活中做出积极的改变，于是他们制订了详细的计划。一开始他们以为减肥是小菜一碟，但随着时间的推移，他们发现并不简单，后来他们去了健身房。健身房的课程很有挑战，但在亲朋好友和彼此的支持下，他们坚持了下来。一个月后他们发现自己有了积极的变化，也增加了信心，他们继续在减肥的道路上前进。现在他们有了好身材和幸福的生活，也养成了健康的生活和饮食习惯。 【详解】1. 续写线索： ①由续写第一段首句“健身房提供的减肥课程并不容易，对他们来说是一个真正的挑战。”可知，第一段可以描写他们在健身房锻炼时面临的困难，以及他们如何坚持下来。 ②由续写第二段首句“一个月后，他们俩都感觉好多了，他们对自己的体型很满意。”可知，第二段可以描写这种感受让他们俩增加了信心，并继续在减肥道路上前进，他们一点点地发生变化，后来有了好身材和幸福的生活，也养成了健康的生活和饮食习惯。 2. 段落续写：减肥课程很有挑战——他们跟不上其他人的节奏——亲朋好友和彼此的鼓励让他们继续下去——一个月后他们身材有了积极变化——增加了信心并决定继续下去——努力获得回报——有了好身材和幸福的生活，也养成了健康的生活和饮食习惯 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①跟上……的步伐：keep at the pace of/keep pace with/catch up with ②完成：get through with/complete/finish ③奏效：pay off/work 情绪类 ①对……满意：be pleased with/be satisfied with/be content with ②给予信心：give sb. confidence/give sb. faith ③快乐的：happy/delighted 【点睛】 【高分句型1】At first, no matter what efforts they made, they couldn’t keep at the pace of the other people in the class, because of their huge weight.(使用了no matter what引导让步状语从句) 【高分句型2】Of course, this new feeling gave them a lot of confidence to keep pushing to achieve the final goal they were working for.(使用了不定式作后置定语和目的状语、省略关系词的定语从句) ( 32 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$