读后续写公开课：高分技巧之无灵主语 课件 -2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

Emotion 读后续写之情绪描写 Micro-skill of story continuation writing 孙甜 2024.10 Step 1：Lead-in Describe the emotions of different people in this video. 换成孙悟空金平府 can someone tell me about the emotions? omneky king A:Bajie was nervous. (普通表达） A: Wukong was angry.(普通表达） B: A wave of nervousness washed over Bajie.（高级表达） B: A burst of anger choked Wukong.（高级表达） B: A sense of sadness swept over Shaseng.（高级表达） Step 1：Lead-in Find the differences between sentence A and sentence B. A: Shaseng was sad.（普通表达） More advanced 4 A burst of anger choked Wukong. A wave of nervousness washed over him. A sense of sadness swept over Shaseng. 无灵主语：“没有生命力”的东西做主语。 lifeless nouns 有灵动词：把没有生命力的东西赋予有生命力的动作(拟人化) Advanced Expression “某人感到...” 或 “（一阵/一种...）情绪向某人...” 表达公式：( )+情绪类名词+有灵动词+其他 a burst/wave/sense of 5 emotions Brainstorm---How many emotions do you know? What are they? angry regretful sad nervous happy surprised 情绪 形容词 名词 伤心 sad sadness 生气 angry anger 紧张 nervous nervousness 后悔 regretful regret 快乐 happy happiness 惊讶 surprised/shocked surprise/shock 焦虑 anxious anxiety 激动 excited excitement 满意 satisfied satisfaction 害怕 fearful fear 担忧 worried/concerned worry/concern 自豪 proud pride 如释重负 relieved relief More emotional nouns 1 sadness anger nervousness regret surprise/shock happiness anxiety excitement satisfaction fear worry/concern pride relief Let’s check the answer. 袭来： 掠过： 窒息；说不出话： 有灵 动词 抓住： 涌出: Vocabulary Building choke well up (in) flash seize; take hold of; come over sweep over/flood over/wash over choked welled up (in) flashed swept over/flooded over/washed over seized;took hold of;came over 1. _______________flooded over him. Anxiety 2. _________________ choked my words. Anger 3. ________________ seized me.  Satisfaction 他焦虑万分，肝肠寸断 我气的说不出话。 我对此很满意。 Practice1 5. _______________________ flooded over the whole classroom. Fear 4. ___________________________ choked my words. Surprise 我惊讶得说不出话来。 恐惧笼罩着这个教室。 6. __________________ and ____________had choked Xu Qin’s words. She held Song Yn firmly, a strong sense of _____________ of losing him overwhelmed her. Nervousness fear fear 又紧张又害怕，许沁一句话也说不出来，只是紧紧地抱住宋焰，心头笼罩着可能会失去他的恐惧。 Practice 2 根据汉语提示用有灵动词填空(答案不唯一） 1.他眼里涌出了喜悦的泪水。 Tears of joy _____________in his eyes. 2.她感到一阵惊慌，但强迫自己镇静地离开了房间。 A wave/burst/sense of panic _________________________________ her, but she forced herself to leave the room calmly. 3.她站在门口，绝望得说不出话来。 She stood by the door, and despair___________ her words. welled up seized/took hold of /swept over choked Practice 2 根据汉语提示用有灵动词填空(答案不唯一） 4.她慢慢走出屋子，内疚和担忧一阵阵袭来。 She slowly walked out of the room and a sense of guilt and worry ________________________ her. 5.她感到焦虑不安. A wave of anxiety _____________________________ her. 6.意识到小男孩说了谎时，她脸上掠过失望的神情。 When she realised the little boy had lied, disappointment _________ her face. flooded over /swept over flooded over /swept over flashed Example 1: You will be proud when you find out our school's development shown in the short film.（18年全国卷II） Pride will take hold of you when you find out our school's development shown in the short film.（18年全国卷II） Practice 3 使用无灵主语句改写句子。 Example 2: We were hopeful and delighted when we headed for the river.（2018年浙江卷） A mixed feeling of hope and delight flooded over us when we headed for the river.（2018年浙江卷） 1. You will surely be shocked after your learning of Tang Poetry.（17年全国卷I） 2.He was relieved when he got into the car. (2017年浙江卷） 3.When darkness ruled everything, she regretted a lot. (2016年浙江卷） Shock will surely come over you after your learning of Tang Poetry.（17年全国卷I） A sense of relief seized him when he got into the car. (2017年浙江卷） When darkness ruled everything, a wave of regret washed over her. (2016年浙江卷） Practice 3 使用无灵主语句改写句子。 Practice 4 使用无灵主语句改写段落。 根据今天所学，修改以下段落。要求用上至少2句无灵主语句。【2021年全国卷I续写 A Mother's Day Surprise 】一对双胞胎在母亲节为妈妈送惊喜，准备为母亲做一份早餐，虽然一开始不顺利，却在爸爸的帮助下完成了制作。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Spotting the mess, Dad was a little worried. Before he could question the kids, Jenna threw herself at him, feeling sad. “Dad, we failed to prepare the gift for Mom!” Dad felt surprised and concerned, and the sense of responsibility drove him to help. “Let's do it together.” Suddenly, the twins smiled. The next moment witnessed their efforts to make breakfast and they finally made it. They were happy and satisfied when they headed for the upstairs. Use inanimate subject to describe the emotions in this video. No pains,no gains. As long as you work hard, you will make it! 1. Revise the usage of Inanimate Subject Sentences . 2. Finish the continuation writing and use at least 2 inanimate sentences . Homework： Thank you! 20 Lavf58.20.100 $$