读后续写：遇险类（夫妻雨中遇险）课件-2025届高三英语一轮复习

读后续写 It was a rainy November morning. Overcome with anger , I knew if I didn't leave the house soon I would lose my temper with my husband, Joe. As the rain came down in sheets, Joe offered to take me to work. I struggled into my jacket, seized my bag and teaching plans and ignored him. He insisted and reached for his boots. I looked at the piles of newspapers and the dirty dishes still on the table. ＂ Don’t you have enough to do? I can take care of myself ＂ . I stormed out，not even kissing him good-bye. Joe shouted after me not to take the shortcut(捷径). Joe and I had been eagerly looking forward to our retirement when a heart attack that past spring forced him to leave his job earlier than we had planned. As the medical bills mounted , we  realized I would have to continue working full-time while Joe stayed home and took over the housework.  The new arrangement was a disaster. Exhausted after a day of full work, all I wanted was a hot home cooked meal and a good night's sleep. However, what greeted me at the table was a microwave package. Sometimes he would serve oatmeal(燕麦)for several nights in a row. One night when I dragged myself to bed, I was terrified to discover Joe had turned our white sheets blue. He told me he had found out how to save on water, soap and electricity. He patted his blue trousers and announced proudly washing everything together was just the secret. Ten minutes later, ignoring Joes warning I turned off the main route (道路).I thought it hadn’t trained enough to flood the road, but as I rounded the corner, water rushed across my path. After a few feet, the car got stuck. I opened the door and water poured in. I hurriedly closed the door. I couldn’t risk walking in this .Almost 20 minutes passed. The car began to shake. I got frightened to death when I heard three long honks (喇叭声). 注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语 文本分析 I and Joe Who 5w what when where why in trouble on the road a rainy November morning. because of anger, I stormed out and took the shortcut . 故事情节剖析 What do you know about Joe and I? Stay at home work full -time take over the housework a heart attack The arrangement is a disaster . exhausted seeing piles of newspapers and dirty dishes be not good at doing housework I Joe I have to leave the house or I would lose my temper . overcome with anger stormed out and took the shortcut .......... ？？？ how 把握文章走向 Paragraph 1: Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. ______________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: I screamed that I couldn’t make it. ______________________________________________________________________________________ whose truck what happened how to help out why what happened how What is the ending? positive How ??? Joe struggled  shouted shortcut realized meal  patted rushed   frightened  housework remember 创设情节 美化字词，连词成句，连句成段，巧用过渡词_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ StudentA StudentB 情节描述 who what how why 曲折 ？？？ true love What is the ending ? Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. 情节描述 whose truck what happened how to help out _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I screamed that I couldn’t make it. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ how? what? 情节描述 参考范文： Paragraph 1: Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. It was Joe! I couldn’t help bursting into tears. Joe shouted to me not to be frightened. Then he threw a thick rope so that I could hang on to it and walk straight toward him. I opened the door, grabbed it and inched out. However, a sudden fall left me in the rushing water. I struggled to my feet, only to find a branch blocking the way right in front of me.  Paragraph 2: I screamed that I couldn’t make it. Joe, however, remained calm! He urged me to take one step at a time and assured me I could make it. I moved forward slowly and cautiously before I fell into his arms. Sobbing against his chest, I apologized that I shouldn’t have taken the shortcut. Joe patted me saying his primary concern was my safety. Only then did I realize Joe actually understood how to take care of me despite his trouble with the housework. What about your version? $$