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Hank was a two-year-old cat. Hank’s big adventure started last November 6. Delores Bushong, his 75-year-old owner, had just returned from a market when she realized Hank didn’t come in for his snacks. She called his name in the streets around her home. Then she heard something. She looked up and spotted Hank on a branch near the top of a neighbor’s tree.
Bushong believed Hank came out through a fence’s cracks (缝隙) and then became scared by some dogs. The more scared he got, the higher he climbed. “Cats have an amazing ability to climb up trees, but actually they aren’t good at climbing down,” said Dan D’Eramo, director of the Humane Rescue Alliance (HRA).
Bushong, worried about Hank, asked the HRA to help her. HRA called the fire department, but the tree’s branches weren’t stable enough to support a climb. And the position of the tree made a firetruck ladder useless. Then Bushong called a construction company to rent scaffolding (脚手架) but was told she should book the equipment 10 days in advance. Bushong was upset. “It is frustrating to realize something you love is in trouble but you personally can’t do anything about it,” she said.
To her delight, the neighbors came to help. Ed Baptiste, whose tree Hank had climbed, let Bushong sit in his backyard and called to Hank. One neighbor called a local business, EJ’s Pest Control, which had a tall ladder. Unfortunately, the 42-foot ladder proved too short. Another neighbor donated a can of fish, hoping it might attract the hungry cat to come down. Nearby dog owners took their pets away on walks instead of letting them out in their yards to avoid further frightening Hank.
By the fifth day, nothing had worked. That’s when Robert, a veterinary (兽医) assistant at HRA, came up with an idea. He asked Bushong to fill a special bag with some of Hank’s favorite things: cat food and a soft blanket. They called it Hank’s party pack. Robert wanted to save Hank with it.
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Then Robert tied the pack to a long bamboo pole.
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Bushong told the kind acts to a local newspaper office.
浅层信息理解
When:
Where:
Who:
What:
Why:
Last November 6--11
Under a neighbor’s tree
Hank, Bushong, the HRA,the neighbors ,
Robert
People tried evey means to help Hank climb down the tree
They wanted to save Hank(the cat)
深层信息理解
To her delight, the neighbors came to help. Ed Baptiste, whose tree Hank had climbed, let Bushong sit in his backyard and called to Hank. One neighbor called a local business, EJ's Pest Control, which had a tall ladder. Unfortunately, the 42-foot ladder proved too short. Another neighbor donated a can of fish, hoping it might attract the hungry cat to come down. Nearby dog owners took their pets away on walks instead of letting them out in their yards to avoid further frightening Hank.
By the fifth day, nothing had worked. That's when Robert, a veterinary (兽医)assistant at HRA, came up with an idea. He asked Bushong to fill a special bag with some of Hank's favorite things: cat food and a soft blanket. They called it Hank's party pack. Robert wanted to save Hank with it.
showing the neighors’ and Robert’s kindness
Read for conflict
Bushong’s cat couldn’t clime down the tree. Her neighbors tried every means to help her rescue her cat.
Read for the theme
People tried evey means to help Hank climb down the tree
Solution
Kindness
Help each other among neighbors.
Build a harmonious community
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What information can you get from this sentence?
Bushong told the kind acts to a local newspaper office.
With the help of the neighbors, Hank was saved
successfully.
Bushong wanted to spread the kindness and show her
gratitude.
四句定框架
Paragraph 1: Then Robert tied the pack to a bamboo pole.
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Paragraph 2: Bushong told the kind acts to a local newspaper office.
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按照“主位推进”确定段落主角
按照“主位推进”确定段落主角并升华主题
(过渡句)上下情节的衔接
(结尾句)正能量且与主题保持一致
Hank was helped to get down.
She told the newspaper office about the people’s kind acts to help her with her cat.
She realized people should live in a world where people would do whatever they could to help each other ......
He took the 42-foot ladder under the tree.
Paragraph 1: Then Robert tied the pack to a bamboo pole.
Paragraph 2: Bushong told the kind acts to a local newspaper office.
What action did Robert take then ?
What did the cat do then ?
Did Robert save the cat ?
What did Bushong and the neighbors feel?
What did Bushong tell the newspaper office?
What did the local newspaper office respond to this event
What was the ending of the story?
One possible version:
Then Robert tied the pack to a bamboo pole. He took the 42-foot ladder under the tree. He climbed up the ladder and positioned the pack just beneath Hank. To his great delight, Hank jumped in after a while, and he lowered him slowly. Once Hank was helped to get down, Bushong hugged him tightly, patting him constantly. Bushong expressed her appreciation to the people there.
Bushong told the kind acts to a local newspaper office. Hank’s adventure taught his grateful owner a lesson about kindness. She told the newspaper office that she couldn’t believe that there were so many people going out of their way to help her with her cat. It made her realize that we should live in a world where people would do whatever they could to help each other and that we should give others hope.
好词积累:
It is frustrating to realize something you love is in trouble but you personally can't do anything about it.
To her delight, the neighbors came to help.
By the fifth day, nothing had worked. That's when Robert, a veterinary (兽医)assistant at HRA, came up with an idea.
They called it Hank's party pack.
frustrating adj. 令人沮丧的
to one’s delight 令人开心的是
come to help 过来帮忙
work v. 奏效
come up with an idea 想出一个办法
“大礼包”
Bushong told the kind acts to a local newspaper office.
Bushong expressed her appreciation to the people there.
It made her realize that we should live in a world where people would do whatever they could to help each other and that we should give others hope.
善举
对...表达了她的感激之情
这让她意识到,我们应该生活在一个人们会尽其所能互相帮助的世界,我们应该给别人希望。
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