48 西藏-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

48 西藏 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道作文题旨在让同学们通过描述自己心中最美的老师，锻炼大家的英语表达能力，同时引导大家关注身边老师的优秀品质，培养感恩和尊重老师的情感。 内容把握：作文要求同学们清晰地描述老师的外貌、性格特点、工作态度和方法，以及自己欣赏老师的原因，内容要具体、丰富，展现出对老师的全面认识。 能力考查：考查同学们运用英语词汇、句型准确表达想法的能力，以及组织篇章结构、使文章逻辑连贯的能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对语言运用、情感表达和文化意识的培养要求，让同学们在写作中提高语言综合运用能力。 解题思路：首先，确定心中最美的老师是谁，然后从外貌、性格、工作等方面展开描述，注意使用恰当的词汇和句型，比如 “the most beautiful teacher in my heart is...” 来引出老师，“be patient with”“be dedicated to”“sense of responsibility”等短语来丰富表达。最后，按照一定的逻辑顺序，如先介绍老师的基本情况，再描述工作态度和方法，最后说明欣赏的原因，使文章层次分明。 （2024·西藏·中考真题）教师是学生的良师益友，是人类灵魂的工程师。在第四十个教师节即将到来之际，我校举办“最美教师”征文活动，请参考所给图示。以“The Most Beautiful Teacher in My Heart”为题写一篇英语短文。 写作要求： 1．词数不少于70词，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数： 2．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3．参考图示完成写作，可适当发挥： 4．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。 The Most Beautiful Teacher in My Heart There are many excellent teachers in our school. I think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 The Most Beautiful Teacher in My Heart There are many excellent teachers in our school. I think the most beautiful teacher in my heart is Ms. Li.     She is a tall and elegant woman with long black hair and bright eyes. Ms. Li is always kind and patient with her students. Ms. Li is very dedicated to her work. She prepares her lessons carefully and uses various methods to make her classes interesting. Her teaching style is both inspiring and effective. I admire Ms. Li not only for her teaching skills but also for her positive attitude and strong sense of responsibility. She treats every student with respect and fairness. Her passion for teaching and her genuine care for her students make her the most beautiful teacher in my heart. 【知识点】学校人员 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你心中的最美教师是谁； 第二步，介绍这个老师的工作态度和方法； 第三步，介绍你这样认为的原因。 [亮点词汇] ① be patient with对……有耐心 ② be dedicated to致力于 ③ sense of responsibility责任感 [高分句型] I think the most beautiful teacher in my heart is Ms. Li.（宾语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道作文题旨在引导青少年关注阅读，培养他们的阅读习惯，并考查他们用英语表达对阅读的看法和体验的能力。 内容把握： 题目要求围绕“Enjoy Reading”展开，涵盖了阅读的种类、最喜欢的类型、原因、时间、地点和方式等方面，内容全面，能让学生充分阐述自己的阅读经历和感受。 能力考查： • 考查学生的语言组织和表达能力，看能否清晰、准确地用英语描述相关内容。 • 对词汇和语法的运用能力，比如各种阅读材料的词汇、描述原因和时间等的句式。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对学生英语写作能力的培养要求，包括语言知识的运用、逻辑思维的展现以及文化意识的体现。 解题思路： • 先明确文章结构，采用总分总的形式，开头点明主题，中间详细阐述各要点，结尾总结升华。 • 写作时，根据题目提示，丰富各类要点的内容。比如在描述喜欢的原因时，要具体说明为什么感兴趣以及如何获取知识、开阔眼界。 • 注意语言的规范性和连贯性，运用恰当的连接词使文章逻辑清晰。 • 还要注意字数要求，不少于 70 词。 （2023·西藏·中考真题）在全民阅读的浪潮中，阅读已成为我们生活中的一部分，青少年应该养成阅读习惯，以“Enjoy Reading”为题写一篇英语短文。 Enjoy reading What? Kinds （种类） story books, newspapers... Favorite （最喜欢的） My favorite is... Why? Reasons （原因） be interested in get knowledge and open eyes How? Time （时间）: on weekends, in free time Places （地点）: at school, in the library Ways （方式）: on the Internet, on paper 写作要求: 1）词数不少于70词，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2）语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确； 3）写作要点齐全，可适当发挥； 4）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。 Enjoy Reading Reading has become one of the most important parts in my daily life. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： Enjoy Reading Reading has become one of the most important parts in my daily life. I like story books and newspapers. My favorite book is Journey to the West. Because I am interested in watching Sun Wukong beating bad people. Whenever I see Sun Wukong win, I am very excited. Besides, reading is also a good way to make me get knowledge and open my eyes. I usually read on weekends or in my free time. Sometimes I read in the library. I like to read on the Internet because there are a lot of books there. I am used to writing some good sentences on paper. 【知识点】阅读 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己喜欢什么种类的书以及自己最喜欢的书； 第二步，介绍自己喜欢读书的原因； 第三步，介绍自己读书的时间、地点和方式。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②a good way to do做某事的好方法 ③be used to doing习惯做某事 [高分句型] ①Whenever I see Sun Wukong win, I am very excited. (whenever引导让步状语从句) ②I like to read on the Internet because there are a lot of books there. (because引导原因状语从句) 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道作文题旨在让青少年意识到保护视力的重要性，并引导他们掌握保护视力的方法和养成良好的用眼习惯。 内容把握：作文内容涵盖了保护视力的重要性、方法和建议，要点齐全。重要性方面，通过举例说明了好视力对生活的积极影响；方法上提到了保持良好作息和合理饮食；建议部分包含了减少手机使用、坚持做眼保健操等，还补充了不在昏暗灯光下用眼，内容丰富且符合实际。 能力考查：考查了学生的英语表达能力、逻辑思维能力和对生活常识的运用能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用、知识综合和实践能力的培养要求。 解题思路： 1. 开头紧扣题目，阐述保护视力的重要性，为下文做铺垫。 2. 中间分别从方法和建议两个方面详细展开，条理清晰。 3. 结尾总结并呼吁，使文章结构完整，有较强的说服力。 （2022·西藏·中考真题）眼睛是心灵的窗户，保护视力对青少年来说尤为重要。请以“How to Protect Our Eyes”为题写一篇英语短文，号召大家爱眼、护眼。 写作要点： 1.保护视力的重要性。如：好的视力可以使生活更加便利…… 2.保护视力的方法。如：早睡早起，睡眠充足，多吃水果蔬菜…… 3.保护视力的建议。如：少用手机，坚持每天做眼保健操…… 写作要求： 1.词数不少于 70 词，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3.写作要点齐全，可适当发挥； 4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。 How to Protect Our Eyes As we all know, the eye is the window to the soul. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 How to Protect Our Eyes As we all know, the eye is the window to the soul. They are very important to us. Good eyesight can make life easier. But do you know how to protect your eyes? First, you should go to bed early and get up early to keep enough sleep. In addition, you should eat more fruits and vegetables. Second, you should use cell phone less and do eye exercises every day. Third, you should take part in some after-school activities to exercise. Let’s protect our eyes by following the ways above. 【知识点】身体部位、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给信息提示，写一篇作文号召大家爱眼、护眼。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍保护视力的重要性； 第二步，具体阐述保护视力的方法和建议。 [亮点词汇] ①be important to对……重要 ②in addition此外 ③take part参加 [高分句型] First, you should go to bed early and get up early to keep enough sleep.（and连接两个并列结构） 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在引导同学们思考如何合理规划周末生活，培养大家的时间管理和自我提升意识，同时考查大家用英语表达观点和想法的能力。 内容把握：题目要求涵盖帮助父母做家务、锻炼身体、发展特长或提升自己、适当放松自己这四个方面。范文不仅满足了这些要点，还补充了参加志愿活动这一内容，使周末生活的规划更加丰富和全面。 能力考查：考查了同学们的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、句子结构、逻辑连贯等方面。同时，也考验大家能否根据给定的要点进行适当拓展和发挥。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对语言运用和表达能力的培养要求，鼓励同学们用英语描述日常生活，表达个人观点和计划。 解题思路： 1. 首先，明确题目要求的四个要点，在写作过程中确保每个要点都有涉及。 2. 对于每个要点，可以适当举例或者详细描述，比如在提到帮助父母做家务时，可以具体说洗碗、扫地等。 3. 注意使用恰当的连接词，使文章逻辑清晰，比如“first of all”“secondly”“thirdly”“last but not least”等。 4. 语言表达要准确、流畅，尽量避免语法错误。可以多运用学过的短语和句型，让文章更生动。 （2021·西藏·中考真题）周末是我们生活中重要的一部分，如何使周末生活丰富多彩，更有意义。请以 “How to Spend a Meaningful Weekend”为题，写一篇英语短文。 写作要点： 1.帮助父母做家务，如：洗碗、扫地等； 2.锻炼身体，如：跑步球类运动等； 3.发展特长或提升自己，如：阅读、绘画等； 4.适当放松自己，如：听音乐、看电影等。 How to Spend a Meaningful Weekend Life on weekends is an important part of our daily life. How to spend a meaningful weekend? Here are some suggestions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： How to Spend a Meaningful Weekend Life on weekends is an important part of our daily life. How to spend a meaningful weekend? Here are some suggestions. First, we can help our parents do housework, such as washing dishes and sweeping the floor. On the weekend, doing housework can also let us experience the hard work. Second, we can exercise. For example, we can play ball games with our friends. Also, it’s a good way to relax ourselves by running and swimming. Third, we can improve ourselves by painting or reading. Finally, do the things you like, such as listening to music or watching an enjoyable movie. Hope these suggestions can help you. 【知识点】周末活动 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。以“How to Spend a Meaningful Weekend”为题给出如何度过一个有意义的周末。 2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称来进行写作。时态采用一般现在时。在文中可以用到表建议的can，should等情态动词。在提出建议时，可以用到表顺序的first，second，finally等词。写作时的建议应紧扣题目给出的建议。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让同学们规划自己的暑假，培养大家的计划和组织能力，同时考查大家用英语表达想法和计划的能力。 内容把握： - 这篇作文内容很全面，分别从学习、活动和愿望三个方面进行了规划。 - 学习计划是学习新语言，能和外国人交流，很有想法。 - 活动计划是多做户外活动保持健康、充实生活，很积极向上。 - 愿望是帮助贫困地区的人，体现了爱心和社会责任感。 能力考查： - 考查了同学们的语言组织能力，看能否清晰有条理地表达自己的计划。 - 也考查了词汇和语法的运用能力，比如“be helpful for”“keep healthy”等的使用。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，能够用英语描述个人的计划和愿望，并且语言表达基本准确、流畅。 解题思路： - 先明确题目要求，从三个方面来写。 - 思考自己在暑假里真实想做的事情，比如学习什么、参加什么活动、有什么愿望。 - 用简单准确的英语把这些想法表达出来，注意语法和词汇的正确使用。 （2020·西藏·中考真题）暑假即将到来，请你以“A Plan for Summer Holiday”为题写一篇英语短文。 写作要点： ①学习计划 ②活动计划； ③你的愿望。 写作要求： ①词数：80词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； ②语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； ③写作要点齐全，可适当发挥； ④文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 A Plan for Summer holiday The summer holiday is coming. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 A Plan for Summer holiday The summer holiday is coming. I have made a plan for it. I’d like to introduce my plan to you from three parts. First, it is about my study plan. I would like to study a new language. I think it is helpful for me to communicate with foreigners. Second, it is about my activity plan. I am going to do more outdoor activities to keep healthy and fulfill my life. Third, it is about my wish. I hope to help children or old people in poor areas. So I am going to join in a club or an organization to raise money or do something for them. What about yours? 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文。要求根据题目叙述自己的暑期计划。 2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，在写作时第一段引出主题；第二段分三个方面详述自己的计划；第三段询问他人的计划。写作时注意语句通顺、语法正确、语意完整。 最新模拟 1．（2024·西藏日喀则·二模）为了促进中小学生健康成长，教育部印发了《中小学生减负措施》，减负之后，同学们有了更多的业余时间。请以“How to make our spare time more meaningful?” 为题，写一篇英语小短文。 提示： 1、帮助父母做家务； 2、多读书增长知识； 3、多运动促进健康； 4、…… 要求： 1、短文应包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； 2、短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息； 3、词数80左右。 How to make our spare time more meaningful? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·西藏日喀则·一模）世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的。初中的学习经历一定让你积累了许经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。要求: 1.词数：80~100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 2.参考词汇（the tape, songs, watch English movies, as much as possible, English club, newspapers and magazines, memorize sentence patterns, keep English diaries） 字迹工整,语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 How to Learn English Well English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·西藏日喀则·一模）假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇以“Refusing food waste”为主题英语征文，谈谈为什么要节约食物，你平时是怎么做的，你从中学到了什么？ 提示词语：food waste, cut down, leftover (剩饭), cherish (珍惜) 写作要求：①字数：80词左右；②书写规范、语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确；③写作要点齐全，可适当发挥；④文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·西藏日喀则·一模）在即将毕业之际，你所在班级打算召开以“感恩”为主题的班会。你被推荐在这次主题班会上发言。请你根据下面表格中的要点，写一篇发言稿。 Whom to thank What to say Parents 教会我生活，关爱我健康长大 Teacher 教给我很多东西，教我如何做人 Classmates 陪伴我成长，帮助我克服困难 写作要求： ①词数：80词左右，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数； ②语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； ③写作要点齐全，可适当发挥； ④文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。 I’m glad to be here to speak in front of you. Here I’d like to thank every one of you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·西藏日喀则·一模）我们每个人都有自己的梦想和喜欢的职业，为了实现自己的梦想，我们都在努力学习、工作、拼搏、奋斗，请以“I want to be a/an...”为题，写一篇英语小短文，谈谈自己的梦想，说说为什么要选择这个职业以及如何做才能实现自己的梦想。 要求： 1. 词数：80词左右； 2. 书写规范、语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确； 3. 所有提示全部用上，并作适当发挥。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·西藏日喀则·一模）6月5日（June 5）是世界环境保护日，我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重。环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习、生活等，而我们的工作、生活、生产等又使环境污染越来越严重……如何保护我们的环境？请以“How to protect our environment?”为题写一篇短文。 提示：存在问题： 1. 水污染越来越严重； 2. 砍伐森林严重； 3. 大气污染严重； 4. 白色垃圾等。 写作要求：①词数：80词左右； ②语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； ③写作要点齐全，可适当发挥； ④文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·西藏日喀则·一模）你校英语俱乐部即将举办一次主题为“My favorite Chinese festival”的征文活动。假如你最喜欢的节日是中秋，请你写一篇80词左右英语短文参加此次活动。 提示词及要点： 1. one of the most important…; Chinese traditional festival 2. get together; have a big deal 3. admire the full moon; delicious mooncakes; enjoy the bright full moon 4. carry people’s wishes to the families they love. 要求： 1. 内容完整，书写清楚，字迹工整，表达顺畅。 2. 尽可能用到提示词及要点，可适当发挥。 My favorite Chinese festival Lunar August 15th of a year is the Mid-Autumn Festival. ___________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·西藏昌都·一模）三年的初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，一定会思绪万千。三年来，你在学习，生活等方面取得了优异的成绩，这些成绩的背后有老师的辛勤教诲、家长的次次鼓励，还有……现在想来你很感谢他们。请以“Thank you, my…”为题写一篇英语短文。 要求： 1.短文内容应包括人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处等； 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； 3.词数80词左右。 Thank you, my_________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·西藏·二模）“双减 ”政策实施以来，同学们有更多的课余时间来做自己喜欢做的事，让生活更充实,  让自己更快乐。同学们，请根据以下图示，以“How to Be a Happy Student ”为题写一篇英语短文。 写作要求： 1.词数不少于70 词，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3.写作要点齐全，可适当发挥； 4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。 How to Be a Happy Student Do you know how to be a happy student? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·西藏拉萨·一模）某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展主题为“ How to Keep a Good Relationship with Parents” 的征文活动。请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。 要点： 1. 父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题； 2. 你与父母保持良好关系的做法； 3. 表达对父母的理解 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 48 西藏 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道作文题旨在让同学们通过描述自己心中最美的老师，锻炼大家的英语表达能力，同时引导大家关注身边老师的优秀品质，培养感恩和尊重老师的情感。 内容把握：作文要求同学们清晰地描述老师的外貌、性格特点、工作态度和方法，以及自己欣赏老师的原因，内容要具体、丰富，展现出对老师的全面认识。 能力考查：考查同学们运用英语词汇、句型准确表达想法的能力，以及组织篇章结构、使文章逻辑连贯的能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对语言运用、情感表达和文化意识的培养要求，让同学们在写作中提高语言综合运用能力。 解题思路：首先，确定心中最美的老师是谁，然后从外貌、性格、工作等方面展开描述，注意使用恰当的词汇和句型，比如 “the most beautiful teacher in my heart is...” 来引出老师，“be patient with”“be dedicated to”“sense of responsibility”等短语来丰富表达。最后，按照一定的逻辑顺序，如先介绍老师的基本情况，再描述工作态度和方法，最后说明欣赏的原因，使文章层次分明。 （2024·西藏·中考真题）教师是学生的良师益友，是人类灵魂的工程师。在第四十个教师节即将到来之际，我校举办“最美教师”征文活动，请参考所给图示。以“The Most Beautiful Teacher in My Heart”为题写一篇英语短文。 写作要求： 1．词数不少于70词，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数： 2．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3．参考图示完成写作，可适当发挥： 4．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。 The Most Beautiful Teacher in My Heart There are many excellent teachers in our school. I think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 The Most Beautiful Teacher in My Heart There are many excellent teachers in our school. I think the most beautiful teacher in my heart is Ms. Li.     She is a tall and elegant woman with long black hair and bright eyes. Ms. Li is always kind and patient with her students. Ms. Li is very dedicated to her work. She prepares her lessons carefully and uses various methods to make her classes interesting. Her teaching style is both inspiring and effective. I admire Ms. Li not only for her teaching skills but also for her positive attitude and strong sense of responsibility. She treats every student with respect and fairness. Her passion for teaching and her genuine care for her students make her the most beautiful teacher in my heart. 【知识点】学校人员 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你心中的最美教师是谁； 第二步，介绍这个老师的工作态度和方法； 第三步，介绍你这样认为的原因。 [亮点词汇] ① be patient with对……有耐心 ② be dedicated to致力于 ③ sense of responsibility责任感 [高分句型] I think the most beautiful teacher in my heart is Ms. Li.（宾语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道作文题旨在引导青少年关注阅读，培养他们的阅读习惯，并考查他们用英语表达对阅读的看法和体验的能力。 内容把握： 题目要求围绕“Enjoy Reading”展开，涵盖了阅读的种类、最喜欢的类型、原因、时间、地点和方式等方面，内容全面，能让学生充分阐述自己的阅读经历和感受。 能力考查： • 考查学生的语言组织和表达能力，看能否清晰、准确地用英语描述相关内容。 • 对词汇和语法的运用能力，比如各种阅读材料的词汇、描述原因和时间等的句式。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对学生英语写作能力的培养要求，包括语言知识的运用、逻辑思维的展现以及文化意识的体现。 解题思路： • 先明确文章结构，采用总分总的形式，开头点明主题，中间详细阐述各要点，结尾总结升华。 • 写作时，根据题目提示，丰富各类要点的内容。比如在描述喜欢的原因时，要具体说明为什么感兴趣以及如何获取知识、开阔眼界。 • 注意语言的规范性和连贯性，运用恰当的连接词使文章逻辑清晰。 • 还要注意字数要求，不少于 70 词。 （2023·西藏·中考真题）在全民阅读的浪潮中，阅读已成为我们生活中的一部分，青少年应该养成阅读习惯，以“Enjoy Reading”为题写一篇英语短文。 Enjoy reading What? Kinds （种类） story books, newspapers... Favorite （最喜欢的） My favorite is... Why? Reasons （原因） be interested in get knowledge and open eyes How? Time （时间）: on weekends, in free time Places （地点）: at school, in the library Ways （方式）: on the Internet, on paper 写作要求: 1）词数不少于70词，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2）语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确； 3）写作要点齐全，可适当发挥； 4）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。 Enjoy Reading Reading has become one of the most important parts in my daily life. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： Enjoy Reading Reading has become one of the most important parts in my daily life. I like story books and newspapers. My favorite book is Journey to the West. Because I am interested in watching Sun Wukong beating bad people. Whenever I see Sun Wukong win, I am very excited. Besides, reading is also a good way to make me get knowledge and open my eyes. I usually read on weekends or in my free time. Sometimes I read in the library. I like to read on the Internet because there are a lot of books there. I am used to writing some good sentences on paper. 【知识点】阅读 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己喜欢什么种类的书以及自己最喜欢的书； 第二步，介绍自己喜欢读书的原因； 第三步，介绍自己读书的时间、地点和方式。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②a good way to do做某事的好方法 ③be used to doing习惯做某事 [高分句型] ①Whenever I see Sun Wukong win, I am very excited. (whenever引导让步状语从句) ②I like to read on the Internet because there are a lot of books there. (because引导原因状语从句) 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道作文题旨在让青少年意识到保护视力的重要性，并引导他们掌握保护视力的方法和养成良好的用眼习惯。 内容把握：作文内容涵盖了保护视力的重要性、方法和建议，要点齐全。重要性方面，通过举例说明了好视力对生活的积极影响；方法上提到了保持良好作息和合理饮食；建议部分包含了减少手机使用、坚持做眼保健操等，还补充了不在昏暗灯光下用眼，内容丰富且符合实际。 能力考查：考查了学生的英语表达能力、逻辑思维能力和对生活常识的运用能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用、知识综合和实践能力的培养要求。 解题思路： 1. 开头紧扣题目，阐述保护视力的重要性，为下文做铺垫。 2. 中间分别从方法和建议两个方面详细展开，条理清晰。 3. 结尾总结并呼吁，使文章结构完整，有较强的说服力。 （2022·西藏·中考真题）眼睛是心灵的窗户，保护视力对青少年来说尤为重要。请以“How to Protect Our Eyes”为题写一篇英语短文，号召大家爱眼、护眼。 写作要点： 1.保护视力的重要性。如：好的视力可以使生活更加便利…… 2.保护视力的方法。如：早睡早起，睡眠充足，多吃水果蔬菜…… 3.保护视力的建议。如：少用手机，坚持每天做眼保健操…… 写作要求： 1.词数不少于 70 词，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3.写作要点齐全，可适当发挥； 4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。 How to Protect Our Eyes As we all know, the eye is the window to the soul. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 How to Protect Our Eyes As we all know, the eye is the window to the soul. They are very important to us. Good eyesight can make life easier. But do you know how to protect your eyes? First, you should go to bed early and get up early to keep enough sleep. In addition, you should eat more fruits and vegetables. Second, you should use cell phone less and do eye exercises every day. Third, you should take part in some after-school activities to exercise. Let’s protect our eyes by following the ways above. 【知识点】身体部位、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给信息提示，写一篇作文号召大家爱眼、护眼。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍保护视力的重要性； 第二步，具体阐述保护视力的方法和建议。 [亮点词汇] ①be important to对……重要 ②in addition此外 ③take part参加 [高分句型] First, you should go to bed early and get up early to keep enough sleep.（and连接两个并列结构） 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在引导同学们思考如何合理规划周末生活，培养大家的时间管理和自我提升意识，同时考查大家用英语表达观点和想法的能力。 内容把握：题目要求涵盖帮助父母做家务、锻炼身体、发展特长或提升自己、适当放松自己这四个方面。范文不仅满足了这些要点，还补充了参加志愿活动这一内容，使周末生活的规划更加丰富和全面。 能力考查：考查了同学们的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、句子结构、逻辑连贯等方面。同时，也考验大家能否根据给定的要点进行适当拓展和发挥。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对语言运用和表达能力的培养要求，鼓励同学们用英语描述日常生活，表达个人观点和计划。 解题思路： 1. 首先，明确题目要求的四个要点，在写作过程中确保每个要点都有涉及。 2. 对于每个要点，可以适当举例或者详细描述，比如在提到帮助父母做家务时，可以具体说洗碗、扫地等。 3. 注意使用恰当的连接词，使文章逻辑清晰，比如“first of all”“secondly”“thirdly”“last but not least”等。 4. 语言表达要准确、流畅，尽量避免语法错误。可以多运用学过的短语和句型，让文章更生动。 （2021·西藏·中考真题）周末是我们生活中重要的一部分，如何使周末生活丰富多彩，更有意义。请以 “How to Spend a Meaningful Weekend”为题，写一篇英语短文。 写作要点： 1.帮助父母做家务，如：洗碗、扫地等； 2.锻炼身体，如：跑步球类运动等； 3.发展特长或提升自己，如：阅读、绘画等； 4.适当放松自己，如：听音乐、看电影等。 How to Spend a Meaningful Weekend Life on weekends is an important part of our daily life. How to spend a meaningful weekend? Here are some suggestions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文： How to Spend a Meaningful Weekend Life on weekends is an important part of our daily life. How to spend a meaningful weekend? Here are some suggestions. First, we can help our parents do housework, such as washing dishes and sweeping the floor. On the weekend, doing housework can also let us experience the hard work. Second, we can exercise. For example, we can play ball games with our friends. Also, it’s a good way to relax ourselves by running and swimming. Third, we can improve ourselves by painting or reading. Finally, do the things you like, such as listening to music or watching an enjoyable movie. Hope these suggestions can help you. 【知识点】周末活动 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。以“How to Spend a Meaningful Weekend”为题给出如何度过一个有意义的周末。 2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称来进行写作。时态采用一般现在时。在文中可以用到表建议的can，should等情态动词。在提出建议时，可以用到表顺序的first，second，finally等词。写作时的建议应紧扣题目给出的建议。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让同学们规划自己的暑假，培养大家的计划和组织能力，同时考查大家用英语表达想法和计划的能力。 内容把握： - 这篇作文内容很全面，分别从学习、活动和愿望三个方面进行了规划。 - 学习计划是学习新语言，能和外国人交流，很有想法。 - 活动计划是多做户外活动保持健康、充实生活，很积极向上。 - 愿望是帮助贫困地区的人，体现了爱心和社会责任感。 能力考查： - 考查了同学们的语言组织能力，看能否清晰有条理地表达自己的计划。 - 也考查了词汇和语法的运用能力，比如“be helpful for”“keep healthy”等的使用。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，能够用英语描述个人的计划和愿望，并且语言表达基本准确、流畅。 解题思路： - 先明确题目要求，从三个方面来写。 - 思考自己在暑假里真实想做的事情，比如学习什么、参加什么活动、有什么愿望。 - 用简单准确的英语把这些想法表达出来，注意语法和词汇的正确使用。 （2020·西藏·中考真题）暑假即将到来，请你以“A Plan for Summer Holiday”为题写一篇英语短文。 写作要点： ①学习计划 ②活动计划； ③你的愿望。 写作要求： ①词数：80词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； ②语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； ③写作要点齐全，可适当发挥； ④文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 A Plan for Summer holiday The summer holiday is coming. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 A Plan for Summer holiday The summer holiday is coming. I have made a plan for it. I’d like to introduce my plan to you from three parts. First, it is about my study plan. I would like to study a new language. I think it is helpful for me to communicate with foreigners. Second, it is about my activity plan. I am going to do more outdoor activities to keep healthy and fulfill my life. Third, it is about my wish. I hope to help children or old people in poor areas. So I am going to join in a club or an organization to raise money or do something for them. What about yours? 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文。要求根据题目叙述自己的暑期计划。 2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，在写作时第一段引出主题；第二段分三个方面详述自己的计划；第三段询问他人的计划。写作时注意语句通顺、语法正确、语意完整。 最新模拟 1．（2024·西藏日喀则·二模）为了促进中小学生健康成长，教育部印发了《中小学生减负措施》，减负之后，同学们有了更多的业余时间。请以“How to make our spare time more meaningful?” 为题，写一篇英语小短文。 提示： 1、帮助父母做家务； 2、多读书增长知识； 3、多运动促进健康； 4、…… 要求： 1、短文应包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； 2、短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息； 3、词数80左右。 How to make our spare time more meaningful? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·西藏日喀则·一模）世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的。初中的学习经历一定让你积累了许经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。要求: 1.词数：80~100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 2.参考词汇（the tape, songs, watch English movies, as much as possible, English club, newspapers and magazines, memorize sentence patterns, keep English diaries） 字迹工整,语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 How to Learn English Well English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·西藏日喀则·一模）假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇以“Refusing food waste”为主题英语征文，谈谈为什么要节约食物，你平时是怎么做的，你从中学到了什么？ 提示词语：food waste, cut down, leftover (剩饭), cherish (珍惜) 写作要求：①字数：80词左右；②书写规范、语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确；③写作要点齐全，可适当发挥；④文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·西藏日喀则·一模）在即将毕业之际，你所在班级打算召开以“感恩”为主题的班会。你被推荐在这次主题班会上发言。请你根据下面表格中的要点，写一篇发言稿。 Whom to thank What to say Parents 教会我生活，关爱我健康长大 Teacher 教给我很多东西，教我如何做人 Classmates 陪伴我成长，帮助我克服困难 写作要求： ①词数：80词左右，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数； ②语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； ③写作要点齐全，可适当发挥； ④文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。 I’m glad to be here to speak in front of you. Here I’d like to thank every one of you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·西藏日喀则·一模）我们每个人都有自己的梦想和喜欢的职业，为了实现自己的梦想，我们都在努力学习、工作、拼搏、奋斗，请以“I want to be a/an...”为题，写一篇英语小短文，谈谈自己的梦想，说说为什么要选择这个职业以及如何做才能实现自己的梦想。 要求： 1. 词数：80词左右； 2. 书写规范、语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确； 3. 所有提示全部用上，并作适当发挥。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·西藏日喀则·一模）6月5日（June 5）是世界环境保护日，我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重。环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习、生活等，而我们的工作、生活、生产等又使环境污染越来越严重……如何保护我们的环境？请以“How to protect our environment?”为题写一篇短文。 提示：存在问题： 1. 水污染越来越严重； 2. 砍伐森林严重； 3. 大气污染严重； 4. 白色垃圾等。 写作要求：①词数：80词左右； ②语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； ③写作要点齐全，可适当发挥； ④文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·西藏日喀则·一模）你校英语俱乐部即将举办一次主题为“My favorite Chinese festival”的征文活动。假如你最喜欢的节日是中秋，请你写一篇80词左右英语短文参加此次活动。 提示词及要点： 1. one of the most important…; Chinese traditional festival 2. get together; have a big deal 3. admire the full moon; delicious mooncakes; enjoy the bright full moon 4. carry people’s wishes to the families they love. 要求： 1. 内容完整，书写清楚，字迹工整，表达顺畅。 2. 尽可能用到提示词及要点，可适当发挥。 My favorite Chinese festival Lunar August 15th of a year is the Mid-Autumn Festival. ___________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·西藏昌都·一模）三年的初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，一定会思绪万千。三年来，你在学习，生活等方面取得了优异的成绩，这些成绩的背后有老师的辛勤教诲、家长的次次鼓励，还有……现在想来你很感谢他们。请以“Thank you, my…”为题写一篇英语短文。 要求： 1.短文内容应包括人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处等； 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； 3.词数80词左右。 Thank you, my_________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·西藏·二模）“双减 ”政策实施以来，同学们有更多的课余时间来做自己喜欢做的事，让生活更充实,  让自己更快乐。同学们，请根据以下图示，以“How to Be a Happy Student ”为题写一篇英语短文。 写作要求： 1.词数不少于70 词，短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3.写作要点齐全，可适当发挥； 4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。 How to Be a Happy Student Do you know how to be a happy student? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·西藏拉萨·一模）某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展主题为“ How to Keep a Good Relationship with Parents” 的征文活动。请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。 要点： 1. 父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题； 2. 你与父母保持良好关系的做法； 3. 表达对父母的理解 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】： How to make our spare time more meaningful? Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful? First, it’s good to help our parents do some housework to show our love to them. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves. In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What’s more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need. 【知识点】劳动实践、意见/建议、健康与运动、阅读 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示介绍如何让我们的空闲时间更加有意义，可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题——如何让我们的空闲时间更加有意义； 第二步，按照写作提示介绍应如何利用我们的空闲时间； 第三步，介绍自己的一些建议。 [亮点词汇] ①do some housework 做家务 ②in my opinion 在我看来 ③take an active part in 积极参加 [高分句型] ①First, it’s good to help our parents do some housework to show our love to them. (动词不定式作目的状语) ②Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves. (动词不定式作主语) 2．【满分优秀范文】 How to Learn English Well    English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.     First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We’d better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries. In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well. 【知识点】学习策略 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你学习英语的建议； 第二步，总结观点。 [亮点词汇] ①be afraid of害怕 ②had better最好 ③at last最后 [高分句型] ①The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. (The+比较级，the+比较级) ②In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well. (as long as引导的条件状语从句) 3．【满分优秀范文】 Refusing Food Waste Food waste is a serious issue that has been gaining attention in recent years. We all should develop the good habit of saving food. As people’s living standards improve, the food on our tables becomes increasingly abundant, but this also brings about the problem of food waste. At the same time, food waste will make those who are still struggling for their next meal even more difficult. We are supposed to take part in the Initiative of “Empty Plate”. If we cook at home, we can cook one less dish per meal. If we eat out, we can order one or two less dishes and try not to leave any leftovers. This will not only reduce food waste, but also cut down our expenses. In a word, refusing food waste is everyone’s responsibility. Saving food is not only good for those people that have no food, but also good for our environment. Let’s act together! 【知识点】节约与浪费 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以“Refusing food waste”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出写作主题； 第二步，具体介绍为什么要节约食物以及具体的做法； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①develop the good habit of 养成……的好习惯 ②At the same time 同时 ③take part in 参加 ④In a word 总之 [高分句型] ①At the same time, food waste will make those who are still struggling for their next meal even more difficult. （定语从句） ②If we eat out, we can order one or two less dishes and try not to leave any leftovers. （条件状语从句） 4．【满分优秀范文】 I’m glad to be here to speak in front of you. Here I’d like to thank every one of you. Firstly, I want to thank my dear parents. Thank you for teaching me everything about life. You’re always trying to care for me to make me grow up healthily. Secondly, I’d like to thank my great teachers. Thank you for teaching me a lot. You also teach me how to be a great person. Finally, I’m going to thank my friendly classmates. Thank you for growing me up. As long as I have trouble, you always help me to get over it. I sincerely wish all of you a bright future! 【知识点】叙事忆旧、情感 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，分别感恩父母、老师以及同学，介绍对自己的照顾； 第二步，书写结尾，表达自己的祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①care for关心 ②grow up长大 [高分句型] ①As long as I have trouble, you always help me to get over it.（条件状语从句） ②You also teach me how to be a great person.（宾语从句） 5．【满分优秀范文】 I want to be a teacher Different people have different ideas about their dreams. For me, I want to be a teacher. Now let me tell you why I want to be a teacher. First, I like children very much. Children always bring me lots of pleasure. Staying with them makes me more active and livelier. Second, a teacher is kind and polite. A teacher is respected by everyone. Third, a teacher knows a lot. It seems a teacher knows everything. So I will work hard at every subject. I’ll learn from my teachers. I’ll not only study well, but also be a kind and polite student. I’m sure my dream can come true. 【知识点】愿望、工作与职业 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：谈谈自己梦想的职业，并说明理由以及将如何做来实现它；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己想从事的职业； 第二步，谈谈原因，并说明如何做； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①lots of 许多 ②learn from 向……学习 ③come true 实现 [高分句型] ①Staying with them makes me more active and livelier.（动名词作主语） ②I’ll not only study well, but also be a kind and polite student.（not only ... but also 不仅……而且……） 6． 【满分优秀范文】 How to protect our environment? As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. Water pollution is becoming worse and worse and people are cutting down trees every day. In some places, we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Plastic products seriously pollute the environment. What’s worse, the air pollution is more and more serious. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do to protect our environment? We should protect water resources and forests. What’s more, we can go to school on foot or by bike. We can use shopping baskets instead of plastic bags when we go shopping as well. Besides, we can use both sides of the paper when we write. In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better. We only have one earth. I hope everyone will protect our environment well. Thanks! 【知识点】环境保护、环境污染 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“如何保护环境”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述环境问题及保护措施； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①worse and worse越来越差 ②in a word总之 ③pay attention to注意 [高分句型] ①We can use shopping baskets instead of plastic bags when we go shopping as well.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②I hope everyone will protect our environment well. （宾语从句） 7．【满分优秀范文】 My Favorite Chinese Festival Lunar August 15th of a year is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is one of the most important Chinese traditional festivals. It’s the time that families and friends get together. On that evening, the moon looks brighter and rounder. Many families sit around a table and eat mooncakes. They also admire the moon outside their houses. Some old people would like to tell the children a story about Chang’e. At that time everyone is really happy and excited. I love all of my families. I love Mid-Autumn Festival best of all. Mid-Autumn Festival carries people’s wishes to the families they love. What a great festival! 【知识点】传统节日、中华文化 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏已给出的要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。指出最喜欢的节日为中秋节。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。大致介绍中秋节的相关信息，指出最喜欢中秋节的原因。 第三步，书写结语，总结中秋节的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①look brighter and rounder看起来更亮更圆 ②tell the children a story about Chang’e告诉孩子们嫦娥的故事 ③at that time在那时 [高分句型] ①Some old people would like to tell the children a story about Chang’e.(双宾语结构) ②What a great festival!(what引导的感叹句) 8．【满分优秀范文】 Thank you, my English teacher I should say “thank you” to my English teacher. He’s a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. He’s humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He’s kind but is strict with us. He won’t allow us to pretend to know what we don’t know. He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding. My English has greatly improved with his help. I think he is the best in my mind. I will remember him forever. 【知识点】情感 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明感谢的对象； 第二步，细节介绍对方的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处。 [亮点词汇] ①be strict with对……严格 ②allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事 [高分句型] He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding.（宾语从句） 9．【满分优秀范文】 How to Be a Happy Student Do you know how to be a happy student? As a student, I believe that the key to happiness lies in finding balance and positivity. Here are some ways that I have found to be particularly helpful in my journey towards a happy student life. Firstly, we should have a healthy diet. Secondly, we need to have enough sleep so that we can study more effectively. Besides, we should have some good hobbies, such as reading and doing sports. Finally, we should be active and friendly. I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life. 【知识点】方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明快乐的关键并引出下文； 第二步，具体阐述如何做一个快乐的学生； 第三步，最后书写小结。 [亮点词汇] ① the key to……的关键 ② need to do需要做 ③ such as比如 [高分句型] ①As a student, I believe that the key to happiness lies in finding balance and positivity. （宾语从句） ②I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life.（条件状语从句） 10．【满分优秀范文】： In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t understand me.     In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends, and I always tell them my trouble. I also help them do some housework. Also, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and they give me too much pressure, I know they really love me and want me to have a bright future.     【知识点】家庭关系、青少年问题、方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明自己的问题； 第二步，具体阐述你与父母保持良好关系的做法； 第三步，最后表达对父母的理解。 [亮点词汇] ①in my opinion 在我看来 ②allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事 ③too much太多 [高分句型] ①I think my parents don’t understand me.（宾语从句） ②Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and they give me too much pressure, I know they really love me and want me to have a bright future.（让步状语从句，宾语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$