46 新疆-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

46 新疆 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道作文题旨在引导学生对自我进行全面的描述和思考，包括外貌、爱好、擅长的方面等，培养学生的自我认知和英语表达能力。 内容把握： • 要求学生清晰地描述自己的外貌特征，如“a girl of medium height and have short curly hair”。 • 阐述自己的爱好，像“reading books best in my free time, especially English books”，并说明未来的职业愿望“want to be an excellent English teacher”。 • 解释想成为英语老师的原因，如“am good at English and have many ways to learn English well”“am willing to help students to solve their problems in their English study”。 能力考查： • 考查学生的英语语言组织和表达能力，能否准确运用词汇和句型来描述自己。 • 检验学生对一般现在时等时态的掌握和运用。 • 考察学生逻辑思维能力，使文章内容连贯、有条理。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对学生语言运用能力、思维能力和文化意识的培养要求。 解题思路： • 首先，仔细阅读题目要求和提示，明确要描述的几个方面。 • 然后，根据自己的实际情况构思内容，注意语言的准确性和流畅性。 • 可以适当运用一些连接词和短语，如“in short”“the first reason... the second reason...”等，使文章更有逻辑性。 • 检查语法错误和拼写错误，确保文章质量。 （2024·新疆·中考真题）假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正以“Bring Out the Best in Yourself（展现最好的自己）”为主题，面向广大学生开展征文活动。请你以“Myself”为题目，结合以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 提示： （1）What do you look like? （2）What’s your hobby? （3）What are you good at? 要求： （1）参考所给提示，可适当发挥； （2）语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确、书写规范； （3）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； （4）词数80—120。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Myself I’m a middle school student. I am a girl of medium height and have short curly hair. I am an outgoing girl and I’m always ready to help others. My hobby is reading. I like reading books best in my free time, especially English books. I want to be an excellent English teacher when I grow up. The first reason is that I am good at English and have many ways to learn English well. The second reason is that I am willing to help students to solve their problems in their English study. I must study hard in the following days so that I can enter the ideal normal school. In short, I want to enjoy my hobbies and enjoy my life. 【知识点】个人信息、爱好 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的外貌； 第二步，介绍自己的爱好； 第三步，介绍自己擅长的方面。 [亮点词汇] ①of medium height中等身材 ②want to be想成为 ③be willing to do乐意做 ④in short简而言之 [高分句型] ①I want to be an excellent English teacher when I grow up.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②The first reason is that I am good at English and have many ways to learn English well.（that引导的表语从句） ③I must study hard in the following days so that I can enter the ideal normal school.（so that引导的目的状语从句 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道作文题旨在让同学们回顾自己成长中的第一次尝试，通过描述经历来锻炼大家的语言表达能力和叙事能力，同时引导大家思考成长和个人经历的意义。 内容把握：作文要求记录一次有意义的尝试，像文中作者讲述了自己在七年级时当志愿者照顾流浪狗的经历，包括具体的工作和为狗狗做的宣传，内容丰富且具体。 能力考查：考查同学们组织语言、描述细节、表达情感和观点的能力，还考验大家对过去时态的运用。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生写作能力的培养要求，如清晰表达思想、运用正确语法和词汇等。 解题思路：首先要明确自己的第一次尝试是什么，然后按照事情发展的顺序描述经历，包括起因、经过和结果，要多运用细节描写让内容更生动，最后总结自己的感受和从中得到的启示. （2023·新疆·中考真题）每个人的成长，都经历过很多次尝试，有成功、有失败、有欣喜、有泪水……请以“My First Try”为题，用英语写一篇短文，记录你成长中的第一次尝试。 要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3.词数80—120。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My First Try     When it comes to the topic of “My First Try”,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： My First Try When it comes to the topic of “My First Try”, I’ll never forget the meaningful experience I had in Grade 7. It was my first time to be a volunteer. As a member of Animal Helpers, I volunteered to be responsible for washing, feeding and playing with homeless dogs. At the same time, I took some photos of them and made posters online to call on more people to give a hand. Through my efforts, over eight dogs were lucky to find their new homes. When I saw them taken good care of and they brought the people much fun, I got such a strong feeling of pride. I realize that each life is important and the tiny things I do can make a difference. 【知识点】个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：要求“My First Try”为题，讲述自己成长中的第一次尝试，注意描述清楚细节，用词要准确，语句要通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，讲述自己第一的尝试是在什么时候； 第二步，具体介绍第一次尝试做的事情，以及自己的感受； 第三步，书写结语。阐述自己的领悟。 [亮点词汇] ①volunteer to do sth志愿做某事 ②be responsible for负责 ③call on号召 ④take good care of好好照顾 [高分句型] ①When I saw them taken good care of and they brought the people much fun. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②I realize that each life is important and the tiny things I do can make a difference. (宾语从句) 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让同学们回顾初中三年的经历，通过选择一件难忘的事情进行写作，锻炼大家的回忆、组织和表达能力，同时也考查大家对生活的观察和感悟。 内容把握：在这篇范文中，作者选取了和祖父母在农村的经历，包括到达的方式、在农场的各种活动以及学到的技能等，内容丰富且具体，让读者能够清晰地感受到这段时光的美好和难忘。 能力考查：这道题考查了同学们的语言运用能力，比如词汇的选择、句子的构造、语法的正确使用，还有逻辑思维能力，要把一件事情有条理地叙述清楚。 课标要求：符合初中英语课程标准中对于写作的要求，能够用简单的语言描述个人经历，表达情感和观点。 解题思路：首先要明确题目要求，选择一件自己真正觉得难忘的事情。然后在写作过程中，要把事情的时间、地点、经过和结果交代清楚，多运用一些细节描写让内容更生动。比如像这篇范文中，“I saw many cows and hens. I fed chickens and fished with my grandfather.”这样的细节就很能吸引人。同时，注意语言的准确性和连贯性。 （2022·新疆·中考真题）初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和生活，一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。 例如：1.一次难忘的旅行 2.一次难忘的比赛 3.一次难忘的志愿服务 …… 要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范； 2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名： 3.词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数。 Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories. Last summer vacation, I decided to learn to swim. At first, I was afraid of swimming in the water. I didn’t feel good in the water. But the coach said he would protect me. Then I started swimming, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. With the coach’s help, I knew how to move and swim with my hands and legs. A few days later, I could swim by myself. I was very excited and proud of myself. What I learn from this experience is that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it and try to do it bravely. 【知识点】叙事忆旧 【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要讲述一件令你最难忘的事情，可适当增加细节。 2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要讲述令你难忘的事情是什么；最后一段讲述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道作文题旨在引导学生思考如何在学习、生活和人际交往中提升自己，培养自我成长和进步的意识。 内容把握：要求学生从学习方法、生活习惯、交友沟通等多方面展开描述，内容要具体且符合学生的实际情况。比如提到遵守校规、认真听讲、帮父母做家务、与朋友分享互助等，涵盖了学生生活的重要方面。 能力考查：考查学生运用英语表达观点、描述计划和措施的能力，同时也检验学生对一般将来时的掌握和运用。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用能力和综合素养的培养要求，鼓励学生用英语表达个人想法和规划。 解题思路：首先，明确自己是学生的身份，以第一人称来写。然后，按照题目给定的几个方面依次阐述，每个方面都要有具体的做法和想法。比如在学习方面，强调认真听讲；生活中，帮忙做家务；交友时，学会分享和互助。注意语言表达要清晰、准确，符合语法规则，并且控制好词数在 80 至 120 词之间。 （2021·新疆·中考真题）三年将尽，未来已来，我们如何成为更好的自己？请以“To Be a Better Man”为题，写一篇英文短文，从学习方法、生活习惯、交友沟通等方面进行描述。 写作要求：1.参考所给提示，可适当发挥； 2.条理清晰，语句通顺； 3.文中不得出现姓名、学校名等个人真实信息； 4.短文词数在80至120词之间。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 To Be a Better Man Everyone wants to be better. In order to improve myself, I have made some plans. First of all, I will study harder. I am going to listen to the teachers carefully in class and finish the housework on time. When I meet difficulties, I will try my best to solve them. Second, I plan to pay attention to my health. I will eat more healthily and do more exercise. What’s more, it is important to keep a good mood and be happy every day. If I feel tired, I will listen to some music to relax myself. Third, I intend to try my best to get along well with the people around me. At school, I will help my friends in need. I will communicate with my parents more. Besides, I will keep smiling and be kind to everyone. In short, there is no success without effort. I think I can be more excellent if I keep trying. 【知识点】计划 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“To Be a Better Man”为题，从学习方法、生活习惯、交友沟通等方面进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为五段，第一段引出话题；第二、三、四段分别从学习方法、生活习惯、交友沟通三方面进行阐述；第五段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在引导同学们思考如何培养良好的习惯，并且通过英语写作来表达自己的观点和想法，培养大家的语言运用和逻辑思维能力。 内容把握： - 短文涵盖了多个方面的习惯培养建议，如锻炼、饮食、学习、关爱父母和个人卫生等，内容较为全面。 - 每个要点都有一定的阐述，如解释坚持锻炼能让人保持精力和健康。 能力考查： - 考查同学们的英语表达能力，包括词汇运用（如“keep exercising”“stay up late”等）、语法正确（句子结构完整，时态使用恰当）和逻辑连贯（通过Firstly, Secondly等连接词使文章条理清晰）。 - 也考查了同学们对不同话题的英语表述能力，如健康生活、学习、家庭等。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的要求，能够用英语描述日常生活中的话题和观点。 解题思路： - 首先，认真审题，明确题目要求是写关于如何培养良好习惯的短文。 - 然后，根据给出的要点，依次展开论述。比如在论述锻炼习惯时，提到要坚持锻炼、不熬夜、保证充足睡眠，并说明这样做的好处。 - 运用恰当的连接词和丰富的词汇、句型，使文章逻辑清晰、语言生动。 - 最后，检查语法错误和拼写错误，确保文章质量。 （2020·新疆·中考真题）良好的习惯让人受益终身。如何培养良好的习惯?请根据以下内容提示,以“How To Develop A Good Habit"为题,用英语写一篇短文,可以适当发挥。 要点: (1)坚持锻炼,不要熬夜,睡眠充足; (2)多吃水果蔬菜,少吃垃圾食品: (3)努力学习,广泛阅读: (4)体贴父母,多做家务; ...... 注意: (1)要点齐全,条理清晰,语句通顺,不需逐条翻译; (2)文中不得出现姓名、校名等真实信息: (3)短文不少于80 词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： How to develop a good habit It’s very important for us to develop good habits. As teenagers, what should we do? In my opinion, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes if they are necessary for us. It is a good habit to finish the schoolwork on time every day. In spare time, we had better read some books to get more knowledge. Also, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food. It’s necessary for us to take exercise for three or four times a week. What’s more, to get enough sleep, we should go to bed early and shouldn’t stay up late. Always remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean. Exercise is fun and relaxing. It’s healthy for the mind and body. Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily. Last but not least, when we have time, we should help our parents do some housework. We should be considerate of our parents because they work hard every day. Good habits will make our study twice the result with half the effort. Let’s form good habits together! 【知识点】意见/建议 【详解】1. 题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文，主要以“How to develop a good habit”为话题展开讨论，要根据题目中所给出的要点描写，把每一个要点写清楚写具体即可，要注意语言的表达要清楚。 2. 【满分优秀范文】点评：文章采取三段描写。第一段总体指出好习惯的重要性并提出该如何做；第二段分别从几个方面具体描写要养成好习惯；第三段总体概括好习惯会事半功倍。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达准确流畅，意思明确易懂。 3. 高分亮点： 短语：in my opinion；listen to；take notes；on time；had better do sth；take exercise；What’s more；last but not least。 句型：if引导的条件状语从句；It’s adj for sb to do sth；when引导的时间状语从句；动词原形开头的祈使句。 最新模拟 1．（2024·新疆克拉玛依·二模）近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象；请你结合自身的体会，以“How to Develop a Good Labor Habit”为题，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。内容包括： 1.在劳动课上，学习生活技能； 2.参加实践活动，如：植树、种菜等； 3.学做家务，如：整理房间、洗衣服等； 4.劳动的意义。 注意： 1.词数：100词左右；开头已经给出，不计入字数。 2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3. 参考词汇：劳动课a labor class How to Develop a Good Labor Habit In recent years, many teenagers don’t value the fruits of labor, and some even don’t want to do the chores or don’t know how to do them. So what should we do to develop a good labor habit? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·新疆阿克苏·三模）青少年正处于学习的黄金时期，只有不断学习，追求进步并不断创新，我们才能更好地成长。 请以“How to Be a Better Self”为题，从学习方法、生活习惯、人际交往等方面，谈谈为了塑造更好的自己，你有什么想法，打算如何去实现。 要求： 1. 书写规范、字迹清楚、语法正确、语句通顺； 2. 条理清晰、内容详实、表达准确、行文连贯； 3. 80~120词，文中不得出现姓名、校名等真实信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·新疆吐鲁番·三模）四大名著是我国古典文学的瑰宝，也是全国中小学生的必读书目。请你谈谈四大名著中你最喜欢的人物，描述一下人物的外貌、性格及主要事迹，并说说你为什么喜欢他（她）。 注意： 1.请根据提示词，将文章题目补充完整； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3.词数在80~100之间； 4.条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹工整。 提示词：《红楼梦》：The Story of the Stone；《三国演义》：Romance of the Three Kingdoms； 《水浒传》：Water Margins；《西游记》： Journey to the West。 My favorite character (s) in ________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·新疆乌鲁木齐·一模）自教育部等十七部门联合印发《全面加强和改进新时代学生心理健康工作专项行动计划（2023-2025）》后，越来越多的人开始关注青少年健康问题。作为青少年，我们该如何健康生活？请以“How Should We Teenagers Live a Healthy Life?”为题，根据下列提示用英语写一篇短文。 内容提示： 1. 身体健康 （physically healthy）： 坚持锻炼、合理饮食、保证睡眠 …… 2. 心理健康（mentally healthy）： 开心、自信（confident） 、积极 （positive） …… 要求： 1. 参考所给提示，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3. 词数：80-120，语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·新疆·三模）科学技术是第一生产力，创新是引领发展的第一动力。为了培养学生对科技的兴趣，学校上周三上午10点在学校操场举办了科技节。假如你是李华，请你根据下面的要点提示，用英语给你的笔友Tom写一封信，介绍一下本次科技节活动的开展情况。 要点： (1)学生参加了多功能机器人模型制作比赛。 (2)一些学生还进行了科学实验操作。 (3)谈谈本次活动的感受。 要求： (1)文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 (2)紧扣主题及提示，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 (3)词数80左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：科技节 Science and Technology Festival；机器人模型制作比赛 robot model-making competition；科学实验 scientific experiments Dear Tom, How is it going? I’m glad to hear from you. From your letter, I learned that you are interested in the Science and Technology Festival in our school. Now let me tell you something about it. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 6．（2024·新疆乌鲁木齐·三模）谚语“It’s good to learmn at another man’s feet. (前车之覆，后车之鉴) ”，意思是以往的失败， 应该拿来当作教训，也就是说我们要善于从错误中学习。请以此为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。 要点： 1.你对这条谚语的理解； 2. 能体现谚语含义的个人经历或体验，以及感悟。 要求：1.文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现人名、校名等真实信息； 3. 词数：80-100词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 It’s good to learn at another man’s feet Good moming, everyone! It’s my great honor to have a chance to make a speech here._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·新疆乌鲁木齐·三模）随着社会的进步和教育的发展，我们初中生不仅要学习知识，更要注重提升个人能力和培养良好品质。校园报以“How to be a better _______”为题，面向初中毕业生开展征文活动。 请你用student, friend, teenager, reader, learner…，将题目补全，希望同学们能结合自己的生活实际，分享自己的经历，帮助其他同学也成为一个更好的……期待大家的精彩作品！ 要求： 1.意思连贯、语法正确、书写规范； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3.词数80—120。 How to be a better _______ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·新疆喀什·二模）生活中总有一些我们敬佩的人，在我们迷茫的时候，照亮我们前方的路，指引我们前行。他/她可能是伟人，科学家，父母，老师，挚友，兄弟姐妹甚至是素不相识的人。某英文杂志向你所在的中学征稿，征文题目为Someone I Admire，请按要求投稿。 内容提示：1.你钦佩的人是谁；2.你钦佩他/她的理由；3.说明他/她的事迹是如何激励你的。 要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；2.文中不要出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3. 词数 80~110。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·新疆巴音郭楞·二模）为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召，你校开展了以“绿色城市，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Green City, the Healthy Life”为题，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点。 现状 ◆空气污染严重 ◆树木砍伐严重 …… 建议 ◆骑车出行，减少空气污染 ◆垃圾入箱，保持城市整洁 ◆多种树木，保护自然环境 …… 要求：1．文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文意思连贯，语句通顺； 2．词数80—120词之间；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 The Green City, the Healthy Life Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·新疆喀什·三模）假如你是李华，以下是你的朋友Linda在学校填写的关于日常生活习惯的问卷调查(questionnaire)，请给她写一封电子邮件，指出她的问题并提出合理化建议。 Questionnaire Q1: Do you have breakfast? A．Every day.         B．Often.       C． Sometimes.     D．Never. Q2: Why don’t you have breakfast? A．Not having the habit.           B．Getting up late. Q3: When do you go to bed at night? A．At about 9:30 p.m.  B．At about 10:30 p.m.     C． At about 01:30 a.m. Q4: How often do you exercise? A．A few times a year.  B．A few times a month.    C． A few times a week. 要求： 1. 分析问卷，找出Linda在饮食、睡眠、以及锻炼方面不健康的习惯，并给出相应的建议； 2. 文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名； 3. 词数80-120左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Linda, From the questionnaire, I think that you need to better your living habits._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 46 新疆 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道作文题旨在引导学生对自我进行全面的描述和思考，包括外貌、爱好、擅长的方面等，培养学生的自我认知和英语表达能力。 内容把握： • 要求学生清晰地描述自己的外貌特征，如“a girl of medium height and have short curly hair”。 • 阐述自己的爱好，像“reading books best in my free time, especially English books”，并说明未来的职业愿望“want to be an excellent English teacher”。 • 解释想成为英语老师的原因，如“am good at English and have many ways to learn English well”“am willing to help students to solve their problems in their English study”。 能力考查： • 考查学生的英语语言组织和表达能力，能否准确运用词汇和句型来描述自己。 • 检验学生对一般现在时等时态的掌握和运用。 • 考察学生逻辑思维能力，使文章内容连贯、有条理。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对学生语言运用能力、思维能力和文化意识的培养要求。 解题思路： • 首先，仔细阅读题目要求和提示，明确要描述的几个方面。 • 然后，根据自己的实际情况构思内容，注意语言的准确性和流畅性。 • 可以适当运用一些连接词和短语，如“in short”“the first reason... the second reason...”等，使文章更有逻辑性。 • 检查语法错误和拼写错误，确保文章质量。 （2024·新疆·中考真题）假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正以“Bring Out the Best in Yourself（展现最好的自己）”为主题，面向广大学生开展征文活动。请你以“Myself”为题目，结合以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 提示： （1）What do you look like? （2）What’s your hobby? （3）What are you good at? 要求： （1）参考所给提示，可适当发挥； （2）语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确、书写规范； （3）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； （4）词数80—120。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Myself I’m a middle school student. I am a girl of medium height and have short curly hair. I am an outgoing girl and I’m always ready to help others. My hobby is reading. I like reading books best in my free time, especially English books. I want to be an excellent English teacher when I grow up. The first reason is that I am good at English and have many ways to learn English well. The second reason is that I am willing to help students to solve their problems in their English study. I must study hard in the following days so that I can enter the ideal normal school. In short, I want to enjoy my hobbies and enjoy my life. 【知识点】个人信息、爱好 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的外貌； 第二步，介绍自己的爱好； 第三步，介绍自己擅长的方面。 [亮点词汇] ①of medium height中等身材 ②want to be想成为 ③be willing to do乐意做 ④in short简而言之 [高分句型] ①I want to be an excellent English teacher when I grow up.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②The first reason is that I am good at English and have many ways to learn English well.（that引导的表语从句） ③I must study hard in the following days so that I can enter the ideal normal school.（so that引导的目的状语从句 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道作文题旨在让同学们回顾自己成长中的第一次尝试，通过描述经历来锻炼大家的语言表达能力和叙事能力，同时引导大家思考成长和个人经历的意义。 内容把握：作文要求记录一次有意义的尝试，像文中作者讲述了自己在七年级时当志愿者照顾流浪狗的经历，包括具体的工作和为狗狗做的宣传，内容丰富且具体。 能力考查：考查同学们组织语言、描述细节、表达情感和观点的能力，还考验大家对过去时态的运用。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生写作能力的培养要求，如清晰表达思想、运用正确语法和词汇等。 解题思路：首先要明确自己的第一次尝试是什么，然后按照事情发展的顺序描述经历，包括起因、经过和结果，要多运用细节描写让内容更生动，最后总结自己的感受和从中得到的启示. （2023·新疆·中考真题）每个人的成长，都经历过很多次尝试，有成功、有失败、有欣喜、有泪水……请以“My First Try”为题，用英语写一篇短文，记录你成长中的第一次尝试。 要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3.词数80—120。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My First Try     When it comes to the topic of “My First Try”,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： My First Try When it comes to the topic of “My First Try”, I’ll never forget the meaningful experience I had in Grade 7. It was my first time to be a volunteer. As a member of Animal Helpers, I volunteered to be responsible for washing, feeding and playing with homeless dogs. At the same time, I took some photos of them and made posters online to call on more people to give a hand. Through my efforts, over eight dogs were lucky to find their new homes. When I saw them taken good care of and they brought the people much fun, I got such a strong feeling of pride. I realize that each life is important and the tiny things I do can make a difference. 【知识点】个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：要求“My First Try”为题，讲述自己成长中的第一次尝试，注意描述清楚细节，用词要准确，语句要通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，讲述自己第一的尝试是在什么时候； 第二步，具体介绍第一次尝试做的事情，以及自己的感受； 第三步，书写结语。阐述自己的领悟。 [亮点词汇] ①volunteer to do sth志愿做某事 ②be responsible for负责 ③call on号召 ④take good care of好好照顾 [高分句型] ①When I saw them taken good care of and they brought the people much fun. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②I realize that each life is important and the tiny things I do can make a difference. (宾语从句) 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让同学们回顾初中三年的经历，通过选择一件难忘的事情进行写作，锻炼大家的回忆、组织和表达能力，同时也考查大家对生活的观察和感悟。 内容把握：在这篇范文中，作者选取了和祖父母在农村的经历，包括到达的方式、在农场的各种活动以及学到的技能等，内容丰富且具体，让读者能够清晰地感受到这段时光的美好和难忘。 能力考查：这道题考查了同学们的语言运用能力，比如词汇的选择、句子的构造、语法的正确使用，还有逻辑思维能力，要把一件事情有条理地叙述清楚。 课标要求：符合初中英语课程标准中对于写作的要求，能够用简单的语言描述个人经历，表达情感和观点。 解题思路：首先要明确题目要求，选择一件自己真正觉得难忘的事情。然后在写作过程中，要把事情的时间、地点、经过和结果交代清楚，多运用一些细节描写让内容更生动。比如像这篇范文中，“I saw many cows and hens. I fed chickens and fished with my grandfather.”这样的细节就很能吸引人。同时，注意语言的准确性和连贯性。 （2022·新疆·中考真题）初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和生活，一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。 例如：1.一次难忘的旅行 2.一次难忘的比赛 3.一次难忘的志愿服务 …… 要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范； 2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名： 3.词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数。 Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories. Last summer vacation, I decided to learn to swim. At first, I was afraid of swimming in the water. I didn’t feel good in the water. But the coach said he would protect me. Then I started swimming, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. With the coach’s help, I knew how to move and swim with my hands and legs. A few days later, I could swim by myself. I was very excited and proud of myself. What I learn from this experience is that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it and try to do it bravely. 【知识点】叙事忆旧 【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要讲述一件令你最难忘的事情，可适当增加细节。 2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要讲述令你难忘的事情是什么；最后一段讲述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道作文题旨在引导学生思考如何在学习、生活和人际交往中提升自己，培养自我成长和进步的意识。 内容把握：要求学生从学习方法、生活习惯、交友沟通等多方面展开描述，内容要具体且符合学生的实际情况。比如提到遵守校规、认真听讲、帮父母做家务、与朋友分享互助等，涵盖了学生生活的重要方面。 能力考查：考查学生运用英语表达观点、描述计划和措施的能力，同时也检验学生对一般将来时的掌握和运用。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用能力和综合素养的培养要求，鼓励学生用英语表达个人想法和规划。 解题思路：首先，明确自己是学生的身份，以第一人称来写。然后，按照题目给定的几个方面依次阐述，每个方面都要有具体的做法和想法。比如在学习方面，强调认真听讲；生活中，帮忙做家务；交友时，学会分享和互助。注意语言表达要清晰、准确，符合语法规则，并且控制好词数在 80 至 120 词之间。 （2021·新疆·中考真题）三年将尽，未来已来，我们如何成为更好的自己？请以“To Be a Better Man”为题，写一篇英文短文，从学习方法、生活习惯、交友沟通等方面进行描述。 写作要求：1.参考所给提示，可适当发挥； 2.条理清晰，语句通顺； 3.文中不得出现姓名、学校名等个人真实信息； 4.短文词数在80至120词之间。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 To Be a Better Man Everyone wants to be better. In order to improve myself, I have made some plans. First of all, I will study harder. I am going to listen to the teachers carefully in class and finish the housework on time. When I meet difficulties, I will try my best to solve them. Second, I plan to pay attention to my health. I will eat more healthily and do more exercise. What’s more, it is important to keep a good mood and be happy every day. If I feel tired, I will listen to some music to relax myself. Third, I intend to try my best to get along well with the people around me. At school, I will help my friends in need. I will communicate with my parents more. Besides, I will keep smiling and be kind to everyone. In short, there is no success without effort. I think I can be more excellent if I keep trying. 【知识点】计划 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“To Be a Better Man”为题，从学习方法、生活习惯、交友沟通等方面进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为五段，第一段引出话题；第二、三、四段分别从学习方法、生活习惯、交友沟通三方面进行阐述；第五段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在引导同学们思考如何培养良好的习惯，并且通过英语写作来表达自己的观点和想法，培养大家的语言运用和逻辑思维能力。 内容把握： - 短文涵盖了多个方面的习惯培养建议，如锻炼、饮食、学习、关爱父母和个人卫生等，内容较为全面。 - 每个要点都有一定的阐述，如解释坚持锻炼能让人保持精力和健康。 能力考查： - 考查同学们的英语表达能力，包括词汇运用（如“keep exercising”“stay up late”等）、语法正确（句子结构完整，时态使用恰当）和逻辑连贯（通过Firstly, Secondly等连接词使文章条理清晰）。 - 也考查了同学们对不同话题的英语表述能力，如健康生活、学习、家庭等。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的要求，能够用英语描述日常生活中的话题和观点。 解题思路： - 首先，认真审题，明确题目要求是写关于如何培养良好习惯的短文。 - 然后，根据给出的要点，依次展开论述。比如在论述锻炼习惯时，提到要坚持锻炼、不熬夜、保证充足睡眠，并说明这样做的好处。 - 运用恰当的连接词和丰富的词汇、句型，使文章逻辑清晰、语言生动。 - 最后，检查语法错误和拼写错误，确保文章质量。 （2020·新疆·中考真题）良好的习惯让人受益终身。如何培养良好的习惯?请根据以下内容提示,以“How To Develop A Good Habit"为题,用英语写一篇短文,可以适当发挥。 要点: (1)坚持锻炼,不要熬夜,睡眠充足; (2)多吃水果蔬菜,少吃垃圾食品: (3)努力学习,广泛阅读: (4)体贴父母,多做家务; ...... 注意: (1)要点齐全,条理清晰,语句通顺,不需逐条翻译; (2)文中不得出现姓名、校名等真实信息: (3)短文不少于80 词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： How to develop a good habit It’s very important for us to develop good habits. As teenagers, what should we do? In my opinion, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes if they are necessary for us. It is a good habit to finish the schoolwork on time every day. In spare time, we had better read some books to get more knowledge. Also, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food. It’s necessary for us to take exercise for three or four times a week. What’s more, to get enough sleep, we should go to bed early and shouldn’t stay up late. Always remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean. Exercise is fun and relaxing. It’s healthy for the mind and body. Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily. Last but not least, when we have time, we should help our parents do some housework. We should be considerate of our parents because they work hard every day. Good habits will make our study twice the result with half the effort. Let’s form good habits together! 【知识点】意见/建议 【详解】1. 题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文，主要以“How to develop a good habit”为话题展开讨论，要根据题目中所给出的要点描写，把每一个要点写清楚写具体即可，要注意语言的表达要清楚。 2. 【满分优秀范文】点评：文章采取三段描写。第一段总体指出好习惯的重要性并提出该如何做；第二段分别从几个方面具体描写要养成好习惯；第三段总体概括好习惯会事半功倍。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达准确流畅，意思明确易懂。 3. 高分亮点： 短语：in my opinion；listen to；take notes；on time；had better do sth；take exercise；What’s more；last but not least。 句型：if引导的条件状语从句；It’s adj for sb to do sth；when引导的时间状语从句；动词原形开头的祈使句。 最新模拟 1．（2024·新疆克拉玛依·二模）近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象；请你结合自身的体会，以“How to Develop a Good Labor Habit”为题，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。内容包括： 1.在劳动课上，学习生活技能； 2.参加实践活动，如：植树、种菜等； 3.学做家务，如：整理房间、洗衣服等； 4.劳动的意义。 注意： 1.词数：100词左右；开头已经给出，不计入字数。 2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3. 参考词汇：劳动课a labor class How to Develop a Good Labor Habit In recent years, many teenagers don’t value the fruits of labor, and some even don’t want to do the chores or don’t know how to do them. So what should we do to develop a good labor habit? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·新疆阿克苏·三模）青少年正处于学习的黄金时期，只有不断学习，追求进步并不断创新，我们才能更好地成长。 请以“How to Be a Better Self”为题，从学习方法、生活习惯、人际交往等方面，谈谈为了塑造更好的自己，你有什么想法，打算如何去实现。 要求： 1. 书写规范、字迹清楚、语法正确、语句通顺； 2. 条理清晰、内容详实、表达准确、行文连贯； 3. 80~120词，文中不得出现姓名、校名等真实信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·新疆吐鲁番·三模）四大名著是我国古典文学的瑰宝，也是全国中小学生的必读书目。请你谈谈四大名著中你最喜欢的人物，描述一下人物的外貌、性格及主要事迹，并说说你为什么喜欢他（她）。 注意： 1.请根据提示词，将文章题目补充完整； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3.词数在80~100之间； 4.条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹工整。 提示词：《红楼梦》：The Story of the Stone；《三国演义》：Romance of the Three Kingdoms； 《水浒传》：Water Margins；《西游记》： Journey to the West。 My favorite character (s) in ________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·新疆乌鲁木齐·一模）自教育部等十七部门联合印发《全面加强和改进新时代学生心理健康工作专项行动计划（2023-2025）》后，越来越多的人开始关注青少年健康问题。作为青少年，我们该如何健康生活？请以“How Should We Teenagers Live a Healthy Life?”为题，根据下列提示用英语写一篇短文。 内容提示： 1. 身体健康 （physically healthy）： 坚持锻炼、合理饮食、保证睡眠 …… 2. 心理健康（mentally healthy）： 开心、自信（confident） 、积极 （positive） …… 要求： 1. 参考所给提示，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3. 词数：80-120，语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·新疆·三模）科学技术是第一生产力，创新是引领发展的第一动力。为了培养学生对科技的兴趣，学校上周三上午10点在学校操场举办了科技节。假如你是李华，请你根据下面的要点提示，用英语给你的笔友Tom写一封信，介绍一下本次科技节活动的开展情况。 要点： (1)学生参加了多功能机器人模型制作比赛。 (2)一些学生还进行了科学实验操作。 (3)谈谈本次活动的感受。 要求： (1)文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 (2)紧扣主题及提示，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 (3)词数80左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：科技节 Science and Technology Festival；机器人模型制作比赛 robot model-making competition；科学实验 scientific experiments Dear Tom, How is it going? I’m glad to hear from you. From your letter, I learned that you are interested in the Science and Technology Festival in our school. Now let me tell you something about it. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 6．（2024·新疆乌鲁木齐·三模）谚语“It’s good to learmn at another man’s feet. (前车之覆，后车之鉴) ”，意思是以往的失败， 应该拿来当作教训，也就是说我们要善于从错误中学习。请以此为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。 要点： 1.你对这条谚语的理解； 2. 能体现谚语含义的个人经历或体验，以及感悟。 要求：1.文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现人名、校名等真实信息； 3. 词数：80-100词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 It’s good to learn at another man’s feet Good moming, everyone! It’s my great honor to have a chance to make a speech here._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·新疆乌鲁木齐·三模）随着社会的进步和教育的发展，我们初中生不仅要学习知识，更要注重提升个人能力和培养良好品质。校园报以“How to be a better _______”为题，面向初中毕业生开展征文活动。 请你用student, friend, teenager, reader, learner…，将题目补全，希望同学们能结合自己的生活实际，分享自己的经历，帮助其他同学也成为一个更好的……期待大家的精彩作品！ 要求： 1.意思连贯、语法正确、书写规范； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3.词数80—120。 How to be a better _______ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·新疆喀什·二模）生活中总有一些我们敬佩的人，在我们迷茫的时候，照亮我们前方的路，指引我们前行。他/她可能是伟人，科学家，父母，老师，挚友，兄弟姐妹甚至是素不相识的人。某英文杂志向你所在的中学征稿，征文题目为Someone I Admire，请按要求投稿。 内容提示：1.你钦佩的人是谁；2.你钦佩他/她的理由；3.说明他/她的事迹是如何激励你的。 要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；2.文中不要出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3. 词数 80~110。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·新疆巴音郭楞·二模）为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召，你校开展了以“绿色城市，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Green City, the Healthy Life”为题，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点。 现状 ◆空气污染严重 ◆树木砍伐严重 …… 建议 ◆骑车出行，减少空气污染 ◆垃圾入箱，保持城市整洁 ◆多种树木，保护自然环境 …… 要求：1．文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文意思连贯，语句通顺； 2．词数80—120词之间；文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 The Green City, the Healthy Life Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·新疆喀什·三模）假如你是李华，以下是你的朋友Linda在学校填写的关于日常生活习惯的问卷调查(questionnaire)，请给她写一封电子邮件，指出她的问题并提出合理化建议。 Questionnaire Q1: Do you have breakfast? A．Every day.         B．Often.       C． Sometimes.     D．Never. Q2: Why don’t you have breakfast? A．Not having the habit.           B．Getting up late. Q3: When do you go to bed at night? A．At about 9:30 p.m.  B．At about 10:30 p.m.     C． At about 01:30 a.m. Q4: How often do you exercise? A．A few times a year.  B．A few times a month.    C． A few times a week. 要求： 1. 分析问卷，找出Linda在饮食、睡眠、以及锻炼方面不健康的习惯，并给出相应的建议； 2. 文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名； 3. 词数80-120左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Linda, From the questionnaire, I think that you need to better your living habits._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】 How to Develop a Good Labor Habit In recent years, many teenagers don’t value the fruits of labor, and some even don’t want to do the chores or don’t know how to do them. So what should we do to develop a good labor habit? Firstly, we can learn some basic life skills through labor classes at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich our real-world work experience. Also, we need try to do some chores at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or cooking some dishes. Above all, we could form good labor habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience. Let’s form good labor habits together! 【知识点】劳动实践、方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；   第二步，介绍培养好的劳动习惯的方法； 第三步，总结概括。   [亮点词汇]   ①take part in参加   ②try to do sth努力做某事   ③above all最重要的是 [高分句型]   ①Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich our real-world work experience.（动词不定式作目的状语）   ②Let’s form good labor habits together!（祈使句） 2．【满分优秀范文】 How to Be a Better Self As a teenager, I think I should work harder to make myself better. First of all, I should learn to be a wise learner to take in more useful knowledge. What’s more, it is important to lead a healthy style. I will eat more fruit and vegetables, and I will also take exercise every day and get enough sleep. Besides, it is necessary to keep a good relationship with family and friends. I’d like to have more communication with them so that there will be less argument among us. Last but not least, I’ll also do what I can to help shoulder the burden of life with my parents to make a peaceful family environment as well as develop my life skills. By doing these, I will make myself better and better. 【知识点】意见/建议、计划 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：根据提示信息，谈谈如何塑造更好的自己。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达青少年需要塑造更好的自己； 第二步，从学习方法、生活习惯、人际交往等方面谈谈青少年如何自我成长。 [亮点词汇] ①What’s more而且 ②Last but not least最后但同样重要的是 ③shoulder the burden挑起重担 [高分句型] ①I’d like to have more communication with them so that there will be less argument among us.（目的状语从句） ②I’ll also do what I can to help shoulder the burden of life with my parents to make a peaceful family environment as well as develop my life skills.（宾语从句；不定式表目的） 3．【满分优秀范文】 My favorite character in Journey to the West Do you like Sun Wukong? He is one of the most popular novel characters in Chinese history. Sun WuKong has yellow hair with a gold hoop and his golden eyes always shine. Sun WuKong is smart, lively and loyal. Both young children and adults love him so much. In my mind, he is a great hero in the Chinese novel Journey to the West. In the novel, Sun Wukong always tries his best to protect Tang Seng when they travel to the Western Paradise. There is one reason why I love him. Sun Wukong was born from a stone. He can change himself into a tree, a bird, or an animal. I think it is cool. 【知识点】文学名著 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍四大名著中你最喜欢的一个人物外貌、性格及主要事迹； 第二步，介绍喜欢的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①one of...……之一 ②tries one’s best to do尽全力去做某事 [高分句型] ①There is one reason why I love him.（定语从句） ②In the novel, Sun Wukong always tries his best to protect Tang Seng when they travel to the Western Paradise.（时间状语从句） 4．【满分优秀范文】 How Should We Teenagers Live a Healthy Life? Nowadays, more and more people have come to focus on teenagers’ health. The following are my opinions about how we teenagers live a healthy life. Firstly, we must keep healthy. We should have a balanced diet. This means eating different kinds of food and lots of fresh fruit and vegetables. We’d better play sports at least one hour every day. Exercise makes us stronger and helps us relax. We should get at least eight hours’ sleep at night, so that we can have enough energy to study. Secondly, we have to be mentally healthy. We must be confident and have good moods every day. Finally, be happy. Happiness is important for our health. If you are worried about something, try to solve it as soon as possible. To sum up, health is wealth. Keeping healthy is very important for us. I hope everybody can live a healthy life. 【知识点】健康饮食、健康与运动、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以“How Should We Teenagers Live a Healthy Life?”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出自己对青少年如何过健康生活的看法； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从身体健康和心理健康两个方面重点介绍； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①keep healthy保持健康 ②different kinds of不同种类的 ③be worried about担心 ④sum up总结 [高分句型] ①We should get at least eight hours’ sleep at night, so that we can have enough energy to study.（so that引导的目的状语从句） ②If you are worried about something, try to solve it as soon as possible.（if引导的条件状语从句） 5．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Tom, How is it going? I’m glad to hear from you. From your letter, I learned that you are interested in the Science and Technology Festival in our school. Now let me tell you something about it. The Science and Technology Festival was held on the playground last Wednesday. It began at 10 in the morning. At the festival, some students took part in the robot model-making competition. Many of their robots, which were the most wonderful part of the festival, drew people’s attention. These robots were in the shape of lovely animals, such as rabbits, monkeys and dogs. They did some simple tasks like cleaning the floor and throwing away rubbish. What’s more, some other students carried out scientific experiments. I was surprised and glad to feel the beauty of technology. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours truly, Li Hua 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍科技节活动的内容； 第二步，谈论自己的感受； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②draw one’s attention引起某人的注意 ③what’s more而且 ④look forward to盼望 [高分句型] ①Many of their robots, which were the most wonderful part of the festival, drew people’s attention.（which引导的定语从句） 6．【满分优秀范文】 It’s good to learn at another man’s feet Good morning, everyone! It’s my great honor to have a chance to make a speech here. There is a saying “It’s good to learn at another man’s feet.” which means we can always learn something from mistakes and failure. I deeply understand the saying for I have gained a lot from my own failure. When I was ten, my handwriting was so bad that I never got high grades in writing. So I made up my mind to practice it every day. I tried to write carefully and beautifully but failed at last. I thought I won’t write well from then on, until one day I learned from a famous calligrapher on TV. He said handwriting takes time. I realized that I should keep practicing. Now my handwriting is great. It doesn’t matter if you can’t do things well, because you’ll learn something valuable from it and do better next time. That’s all. Thanks for your listening. 【知识点】学习策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是演讲稿； ②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很荣幸有机会在这里发表演讲。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——能体现谚语含义的个人经历或体验以及感悟等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“谢谢你的聆听”的感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①make a speech做一次演讲 ②made up my mind下定决心 ③keep practicing保持练习 [高分句型] ① I realized that I should keep practicing. (宾语从句） ②There is a saying “It’s good to learn at another man’s feet.” which means we can always learn something from mistakes and failure. (定语从句) 7．【满分优秀范文】 How to be a better teenager A nation will prosper only when its young people thrive. So how can we be better teenagers? First of all, we should develop healthy living habits. We can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. What’s more, we should make a study plan and take actions to achieve it. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. And we had better be friendly to others. When others need help, we should try our best to help them. Finally, it is good to take up good hobbies and take part in volunteer activities, such as cleaning the city park. In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better. 【知识点】方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：本文主要是介绍如何成为一名更好的年轻人，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述怎样成为一个更好的青少年； 第三步，书写结语，表达“我们会变得越来越好”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①keep healthy保持健康 ②take up开始从事 ③take part in参加 [高分句型] ①The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. (the+比较级，the+比较级句式) ②In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better. (if引导的条件状语从句) 8．【满分优秀范文】： Someone I Admire Everyone has someone he admires most, who may be a scientist, a writer musician or a movie super star. But as for me, the most admirable person is my dearest mother. My mother is an ordinary woman. She is not very beautiful but very kind and enthusiastic. Although she doesn’t have high education, she is very capable and excellent in social contact and bargaining. She loves me and my brother, trying to give us the comfortable surroundings to study and live in. I learn to be an optimistic person with strong mind from my mother. She also teaches me that no pains, no gains. Only when you work hard, can your dream come true. These lessons have a great influence on my life. 【知识点】家人和亲人 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示中的三点内容，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题——我最敬佩的人。 ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“她是谁、钦佩她的理由和她的事迹是如何激励你的” 三方面入手，重点介绍我敬佩她的原因； ③第三步，书写结语。自己从她那里学到了什么道理。 [亮点词汇] ①as for 至于 ②no pains, no gains. 不劳无获。 ③come true 实现 ④have a great influence on sb. 对某人有深刻的影响 [高分句型] Although she doesn’t have high education, she is very capable and excellent in social contact and bargaining.（although引导让步状语从句） 9．【满分优秀范文】 The Green City, the Healthy Life Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. Now the air pollution on earth is very serious, and a lot of trees are being cut down. As a citizen, it’s our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment. In my opinion, I’ll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference. 【知识点】意见/建议、环境保护 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍环境现状； 第二步，说明我们从哪些方面建设绿色城市； 第三步，表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①reduce air pollution减少污染 ②keep our city clean保持城市干净 ③turn off the lights关灯 ④In my opinion在我看来 [高分句型] ①it’s our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life. (so that引导目的状语从句) ②Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. (when引导时间状语从句) 10．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Linda, From the questionnaire, I think that you need to better your living habits. Firstly, you get up late and have breakfast sometimes. It’s a very bad habit. In my opinion, it’s important to have breakfast every day. To make sure you have enough time for breakfast, you’d better get up early in the morning. Going to bed early can also help you get enough sleep and make you get up early in the morning. Secondly, it’s too late for you to go to bed at night. We should have at least eight hours’ sleep every day. Staying up late can make you sleepy the next day, so you should go to bed early. Thirdly, your exercise time is far from enough. You sit for long hours every day, so you should do more exercise to keep fit. I hope my advice can be helpful and I believe you’ll be much healthier after changing your bad habits. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】意见/建议、健康与运动、健康饮食 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括两个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，总体指出对方生活习惯不好，需要改善； 第二步，具体介绍不好的生活习惯以及给出合理的建议； 第三步，表达期待。 ［亮点词汇］ ① make sure 确信 ② be far from enough 远远不够 ［高分句型］ ① To make sure you have enough time for breakfast, you’d better get up early in the morning. (不定式作目的状语) ② In my opinion, it’s important to have breakfast every day. (it作形式主语) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$