45 宁夏-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

45 宁夏 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题主要是想通过让学生写一则运动会通知，考查学生对英语通知格式的掌握，以及对时间、地点、活动要求等信息的准确表达能力。 内容把握： - 题目清晰地给出了运动会的时间、地点和活动要求等关键信息，需要学生准确无误地将这些内容用英语表述出来。 - 同时，还要求学生能够合理补充至少两项活动要求，这考查了学生的创造力和对实际场景的理解。 能力考查： - 对学生的语言组织和表达能力有较高要求，要能运用恰当的词汇和句型来传达信息。 - 也考查了学生对英语时态、语法的正确运用，比如一般将来时的使用。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对学生在书面表达方面的要求，即能够根据给定的主题和要点，用英语写出连贯、表意明确的短文。 解题思路： - 首先，要明确通知的格式，包括标题、称呼、正文和落款。 - 然后，在正文中，按照题目给出的要点依次进行表述，注意语言的规范性和准确性。 - 对于补充的活动要求，要结合实际情况，合理且清晰地表达出来。 - 最后，检查语法错误和拼写错误，确保通知的质量。 （2024·宁夏·中考真题）下周三，你校将举办运动会。假如你是校学生会主席，请你代表学生会在校宣传栏英语专栏上用英语给全校学生写一则通知。 内容包括： 1. 时间：下周三上午八点开始，周五下午五点结束； 2. 地点：学校操场； 3. 活动要求： （1）准时到达操场； （2）穿运动鞋； （3）做一些志愿工作； ……（至少再补充两项活动要求） 写作要求： 1. 通知内容必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：volunteer work 志愿工作    Students’ Union 学生会 Notice Dear students, We are excited to tell you that our school will hold a sports meeting. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We hope all of you have fun. Students’ Union 【满分优秀范文】 NoticeDear students, We are excited to tell you that our school will hold a sports meeting. It will begin at 8:00 am next Wednesday and end at 5:00 pm next Friday. It will be held on our playground. The followings are what you should pay attention to. First, you must get to the playground on time. Don’t be late. Second, you should wear comfortable clothes and sports shoes. Third, you need to do some volunteer work, such as cleaning the playground, giving some water to the runners. Fourth, you mustn’t move around when the sports meeting begins. Last but not least, you can bring some snacks or drinks. We hope all of you have fun. Students’ Union 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一则通知；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，介绍运动会开始的时间和地点；   第二步，介绍运动会的注意事项。   [亮点词汇]   ①pay attention to注意   ②on time按时   ③such as例如   [高分句型]   ①It will be held on our playground.（一般将来时被动语态） ②Fourth, you mustn’t move around when the sports meeting begins.（when引导时间状语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让学生通过描述校园美食节的活动，锻炼用英语进行书面表达的能力，同时加深对中国饮食文化的理解和传承意识。 内容把握：题目明确给出了活动的时间、地点、具体活动以及写作要求，学生需要清晰准确地描述这些要点。 能力考查：考查学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力，以及对词汇、语法的运用能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生英语写作能力的培养要求，强调语言的准确性、流畅性和连贯性。 解题思路： 1. 开头先问候并引入主题。 2. 按照题目给定的顺序依次描述活动，如先点明时间和地点。 3. 详细描述各项活动，使用丰富的词汇和恰当的句式，比如“We could enjoy traditional Chinese food there.”“We also watched the process of cooking.”“What's more, we had the chance to cook by ourselves.” 4. 阐述自己的感受时，要体现对活动的积极评价和对中国饮食文化的认识，像“It was really interesting.”“Through this activity, I not only tasted delicious food but also learned more about Chinese food culture.” 5. 结尾表达对未来类似活动的期待。 （2023·宁夏·中考真题）中国饮食文化博大精深。假如你是李明，上周你校开展了以“品中华美食，传承中华文化”为主题的校园美食节活动。请你根据以下图示提示，用英语给你的英国笔友Mike写一封电子邮件，分享本次活动的过程和感受。 要求： 1. 电子邮件的内容必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3. 词数 80左右（电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：campus 校园 process 过程 Dear Mike, How is everything going?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Ming 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Mike, How is everything going? In order to promote Chinese food culture and enrich students’ campus life, our school held a food festival in the dining room last Friday. During the activity, the cooks from our school introduced traditional styles of cooking and cooked many famous dishes like stinky tofu and Gong Bao Chicken. Many students enjoyed traditional food and watched the process of cooking. They also cooked by themselves with the help of the cooks. All the students spoke highly of this activity which let them have a better understanding of China’s rich and profound food culture. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Ming 【知识点】文体活动、中华文化 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍活动的时间和地点； 第二步，具体阐述活动内容； 第三步，最后表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①in order to为了 ②with the help of在……帮助下 ③speak highly of高度赞扬 [高分句型] All the students spoke highly of this activity which let them have a better understanding of China’s rich and profound food culture.（which引导的定语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道作文题旨在让同学们规划自己的暑假生活，培养大家的计划能力和英语表达能力。 内容把握：题目要求包含给定的思维导图信息，如看望祖父母、读书、参加社会实践，还需补充至少两条计划。这样能考查同学们对生活的规划和细节描述能力。 能力考查：主要考查同学们的英语语言运用能力，包括词汇、语法、句子结构等方面，看能否清晰、准确地表达自己的想法。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，鼓励同学们在实际情境中运用所学知识。 解题思路： 1. 先明确题目要求，确保包含所有给定的关键信息。 2. 按照一定的逻辑顺序来组织文章，比如先写亲情方面的看望祖父母，再到学习方面的读书，接着是社会实践，最后补充其他计划。 3. 注意使用恰当的词汇和语法，使文章表达流畅、自然。比如描述想念祖父母可以用“miss...very much”，丰富知识用“enrich my knowledge”等。 4. 控制好字数，在 80 词左右，不要过多或过少。 （2022·宁夏·中考真题）暑假临近，你有什么计划吗？你校英语社团正在开展以“My Summer Vacation Plan”为主题的征文活动。请根据思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的暑假计划。 要求：1. 文中须包含思维导图中的所有信息； 2. 补充至少两条计划； 3. 合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。 注意：1. 词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 提示词语： take part in参加　　social practice activities社会实践活动 My Summer Vacation Plan The summer vacation is coming. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My Summer Vacation Plan The summer vacation is coming. There are so many things I plan to do. First, I’m going to read some meaningful books, because I believe books are our best friends. I love my grandparents. I’m going to visit them more often. Then I plan to take part in social practice activities. For example, I will go to a farm to pick apples. My favourite sport is playing basketball. I’m going to play basketball with my best friends on weekends. Finally, I want to go to a summer camp if possible. I’m really looking forward to the summer vacation. 【知识点】计划、假日活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：本文以“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息介绍自己的暑期计划，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入话题，表示自己暑期有很多事情要做； 第二步，根据思维导图中的提示信息详细介绍自己暑期要做的事情； 第三步，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①plan to do sth.计划做某事 ②take part in参加 ③look forward to doing sth.期待做某事 [高分句型] ①First, I’m going to read some meaningful books, because I believe books are our best friends. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②My favourite sport is playing basketball.(动名词作表语) 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让同学们通过描述一次拜访剪纸艺术家的经历，锻炼大家的英语写作能力和叙事能力，同时培养对传统文化的尊重和传承意识。 内容把握：题目要求清晰地描述活动安排，包括出发和返回时间、交通方式、学习剪纸的过程、与艺术家的互动等，还要谈谈活动感受。答案中很好地涵盖了这些要点，内容丰富且有条理。 能力考查：考查同学们运用英语词汇、语法进行准确表达的能力，比如时间的表述、动词的使用等。还考查了同学们组织篇章结构、合理安排叙事顺序的能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用、文化理解和情感表达的要求。 解题思路：首先，要明确题目中的关键信息，比如活动的时间、方式和具体内容。然后，按照一定的逻辑顺序，比如时间顺序，把这些信息用正确的英语表达出来。在描述感受时，要真实、简洁地表达自己的心情和收获。 （2021·宁夏·中考真题）假如你是李华,你准备给学校校报英语专栏投稿,记述上周六你和几位同学拜访一位七十岁剪纸艺术家的经历,并简单谈谈感受。 1.活动安排: ①早上9:00从学校出发,下午2:00返回; ②骑自行车前往她家; ③向她学习剪纸; ④教她使用电脑;陪她说话;其他活动(至少谈及两项)。 2.谈谈本次活动的感受。 注意: 1.词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数); 2.合理增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 参考词汇: paper cutting 剪纸 Last Saturday, I went to visit a 70-year-old paper cutting artist with some of my classmates. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： Last Saturday, I went to visit a 70-year-old paper cutting artist with some of my classmates. We left school at 9:00 in the morning. We went there by bike. Her home is a little far from school. It took us about an hour to get there. She welcomed us warmly. She taught us how to cut paper. She showed us some beautiful patterns. Some are about plants, some are about animals, and some are about Chinese characters. She told us some paper cutting skills, and we learnt very fast. But she couldn’t use the computer to look through some patterns. We taught her to use the computer and chat with her. At noon, she also cooked us a delicious lunch. We also helped her clean her garden. We were very happy. We came back at 2:00 in the afternoon. Although we were tired, we were happy. Because we learned a new skill. 【知识点】周末活动、叙事忆旧、个人经历 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和提示要点，写出自己和几个同学上周六拜访一位七十岁剪纸艺术家的经历，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想考查同学们用英语进行书面表达的能力，同时也检验大家对活动安排的描述以及对武术益处的理解和阐述。 内容把握：题目要求清晰地介绍活动的时间、地点、内容，并且要至少谈及武术对人身心的两点益处。这就需要同学们准确理解并传达这些关键信息。 能力考查：考查了同学们的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力，还有对词汇、语法的运用能力。比如，要能正确表达时间、地点，使用恰当的连接词使文章连贯。 课标要求：符合初中英语课程标准中对学生写作能力的要求，即能够用简单的语言描述事件、表达观点。 解题思路：首先，要认真阅读题目，明确题目中的各项要求。然后，在介绍活动安排时，注意时间、地点和内容的准确表述。对于武术的益处，可以从身体和心理两个方面思考，并用简单的句子进行说明。最后，检查语法错误和拼写错误，确保文章通顺、清晰。 （2020·宁夏·中考真题）假如你是李华，你所在的城市将要举行武术表演活动，你的英国明友David 写信咨询询问活动信息． 请你给他回信介绍本次活动并谈谈武术对人身心的益处，内容要点如下： 1．活动安排： 时间：7月31日（星期五）上午8点开始，12点结束； 地点：光明体育馆； 内容：欣赏武术表演． 2．谈谈武术对人身心的益处（至少谈及两点）． 注意： 1．词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯． 参考词汇： gymnastics 体育馆    kung fu武术 Dear David， I'm glad to receive your letter. You asked me about the kung fu performance in our city. Hope you can come! Yours truly, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear David, I'm glad to receive your letter. You asked me about the kung fu performance in our city. Now let me tell you some advice about it. It will start at 8 a.m. and finish at 12 a.m. July 31. That day is Friday. It will be held in the Guangming Gymnastics. This is a big gymnasium, which can hold thousands of people. You can enjoy the wonderful kung fu performances. Kung fu is one of the traditional Chinese cultures with a long history. Kung fu can make people relaxed because it is very fun to watch. It also can make our body strong. So kung fu is very popular among the old people. Hope you can come! Yours truly, Li Hua 【知识点】团队运动、中华文化 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据要点提示写一封回信介绍本次活动，并谈谈武术对人身心的益处。首先我们要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称来展开写作，以第一、第二人称为辅。时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时为主，在叙述武术表演活动要举行的时间、地点等时，要用一般将来时，描述一般事实和自己的感悟时用一般现在时；文章要紧扣题目要点，围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。 最新模拟 1．（2024·宁夏银川·三模）紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了，你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请根据下图中的提示，以“My Summer Vacation Plan”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的假期计划。 要求： 1.文中需包含图示中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3.词数80左右。（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） My Summer Vacation Plan The summer vacation is coming. Here are my plans for it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All in all, I’m looking forward to spending a happy summer vacation. 2．（2024·宁夏中卫·一模）为了弘扬传统文化，你校结合当地传统元素在4月25日前往宁夏博物馆开展了丰富多彩的研学旅行(study trip)。早晨八点在校门口集合，乘坐大巴车一起前往博物馆。假如你是李华，请根据思维导图中的提示要点并结合自身经历，写一篇80词的英语短文向你的笔友Alice介绍此次研学活动，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 要求： 1.文章须包含思维导图中的所有要点（包括研学中做了什么、学到了什么）； 2.针对每个要点合理增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.适当表达自己的看法及感受。 My School Study Trip On April 25th, our school organized a study trip to Ningxia Museum. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·宁夏吴忠·二模）学校英文报正在以“Amazing Ningxia”为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示，写一篇短文投稿。 要求： 1. 短文必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右（标题和开头都已经给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Word bank: transportation交通，convenient方便的 Amazing Ningxia Ningxia is a lovable and livable place. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·宁夏银川·三模）为庆祝2024年国庆节的到来，你校英语社团拟举办以“China in My Eyes”为题的征文活动，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下我们亲爱的祖国！ Our goals (目标)： 渴求知识；努力学习； 永不放弃；实现梦想。 要求： （1）短文须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； （2）语言表达准确，语义连贯、通顺； （3）文中不要出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； （4）词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 相关词汇（高铁：high-speed railway   新能源汽车：new energy cars） China in My Eyes Hello, everyone! I am from China and I like my country very much. Now I’d like to introduce my country to you!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·宁夏银川·一模）根据要点提示和要求，以“My middle school life”为题写一篇短文。 要点： 1. 每天早晨骑车上学，按时到校，参加体育锻炼； 2. 每天学习多门功课，在校时间大约为9个小时； 3. 同学们相互帮助，师生相处融洽； 4. 用一至两句话谈谈你对校园生活的看法。 要求： 1. 词数80左右。要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确； 2. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·宁夏银川·二模）阳春三月，“两会”如期召开，青少年的健康成长成为“两会”关注的热点。为了实现中华名族伟大复兴的中国梦，成为国家的栋梁之才，请根据下面的提示，以“How to be a good student in the new era (时代)”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何做一名新时代的好学生。 要求： 1.请至少补充两点。 2.内容必须包含所给要点提示，可以适当发挥使行文连贯。 3.词数80左右。 How to be a good student in the new era (时代) _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·宁夏吴忠·一模）初中这三年，你一直在为自己的目标而努力。而实现目标需要精细的计划、不懈的努力和他人的帮助。请结合自己的经历，根据思维导图的提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你实现自己目标的故事。 What is your goal? What’s your story aboutachieving your goal? (When,  where  and  how) I Have Achieved My Goal What’s your feeling? 要求： 1. 词数不少于90。 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 提示词：a good plan, work hard, others’ help I Have Achieved My Goal ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·宁夏银川·二模）学校近期举行了社会实践活动 (social practice)，你的外国笔友David想了解此次活动的情况，假如你是李明，请根据以下提示用英文给他写封信，分享你的活动经历及感受，词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear David, I’m glad to tell you something about my social practice. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Ming 9．（2024·宁夏银川·二模）近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象。为此，国家印发了《中共中央国务院关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。为此你表示赞同，请结合自身的体会，就如何培养劳动精神，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。 （备注：labor 劳动） 要求： 1. 短文必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3. 词数80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 A guideline on hard-working spirit education came out recently in order to help us to get a hard-working spirit. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·宁夏银川·二模）为进一步加强校园文化建设，上个月我校举办了以“书润校园，馨香致远”为主题的读书节系列活动。请根据以下思维导图，写一篇活动报道，介绍活动的具体情况及意义。 要求： 1.文中需包含要点提示的所有信息，并适当发挥； 2.句子及篇章结构准确、连贯、书写规范； 3.文章不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名； 4.词数：80词左右。(文章开头已给出，不计总入词数) Reading makes a full man. In order to make students have a lot of fun reading, our school ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 45 宁夏 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题主要是想通过让学生写一则运动会通知，考查学生对英语通知格式的掌握，以及对时间、地点、活动要求等信息的准确表达能力。 内容把握： - 题目清晰地给出了运动会的时间、地点和活动要求等关键信息，需要学生准确无误地将这些内容用英语表述出来。 - 同时，还要求学生能够合理补充至少两项活动要求，这考查了学生的创造力和对实际场景的理解。 能力考查： - 对学生的语言组织和表达能力有较高要求，要能运用恰当的词汇和句型来传达信息。 - 也考查了学生对英语时态、语法的正确运用，比如一般将来时的使用。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对学生在书面表达方面的要求，即能够根据给定的主题和要点，用英语写出连贯、表意明确的短文。 解题思路： - 首先，要明确通知的格式，包括标题、称呼、正文和落款。 - 然后，在正文中，按照题目给出的要点依次进行表述，注意语言的规范性和准确性。 - 对于补充的活动要求，要结合实际情况，合理且清晰地表达出来。 - 最后，检查语法错误和拼写错误，确保通知的质量。 （2024·宁夏·中考真题）下周三，你校将举办运动会。假如你是校学生会主席，请你代表学生会在校宣传栏英语专栏上用英语给全校学生写一则通知。 内容包括： 1. 时间：下周三上午八点开始，周五下午五点结束； 2. 地点：学校操场； 3. 活动要求： （1）准时到达操场； （2）穿运动鞋； （3）做一些志愿工作； ……（至少再补充两项活动要求） 写作要求： 1. 通知内容必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：volunteer work 志愿工作    Students’ Union 学生会 Notice Dear students, We are excited to tell you that our school will hold a sports meeting. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We hope all of you have fun. Students’ Union 【满分优秀范文】 NoticeDear students, We are excited to tell you that our school will hold a sports meeting. It will begin at 8:00 am next Wednesday and end at 5:00 pm next Friday. It will be held on our playground. The followings are what you should pay attention to. First, you must get to the playground on time. Don’t be late. Second, you should wear comfortable clothes and sports shoes. Third, you need to do some volunteer work, such as cleaning the playground, giving some water to the runners. Fourth, you mustn’t move around when the sports meeting begins. Last but not least, you can bring some snacks or drinks. We hope all of you have fun. Students’ Union 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一则通知；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，介绍运动会开始的时间和地点；   第二步，介绍运动会的注意事项。   [亮点词汇]   ①pay attention to注意   ②on time按时   ③such as例如   [高分句型]   ①It will be held on our playground.（一般将来时被动语态） ②Fourth, you mustn’t move around when the sports meeting begins.（when引导时间状语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让学生通过描述校园美食节的活动，锻炼用英语进行书面表达的能力，同时加深对中国饮食文化的理解和传承意识。 内容把握：题目明确给出了活动的时间、地点、具体活动以及写作要求，学生需要清晰准确地描述这些要点。 能力考查：考查学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力，以及对词汇、语法的运用能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生英语写作能力的培养要求，强调语言的准确性、流畅性和连贯性。 解题思路： 1. 开头先问候并引入主题。 2. 按照题目给定的顺序依次描述活动，如先点明时间和地点。 3. 详细描述各项活动，使用丰富的词汇和恰当的句式，比如“We could enjoy traditional Chinese food there.”“We also watched the process of cooking.”“What's more, we had the chance to cook by ourselves.” 4. 阐述自己的感受时，要体现对活动的积极评价和对中国饮食文化的认识，像“It was really interesting.”“Through this activity, I not only tasted delicious food but also learned more about Chinese food culture.” 5. 结尾表达对未来类似活动的期待。 （2023·宁夏·中考真题）中国饮食文化博大精深。假如你是李明，上周你校开展了以“品中华美食，传承中华文化”为主题的校园美食节活动。请你根据以下图示提示，用英语给你的英国笔友Mike写一封电子邮件，分享本次活动的过程和感受。 要求： 1. 电子邮件的内容必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3. 词数 80左右（电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：campus 校园 process 过程 Dear Mike, How is everything going?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Ming 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Mike, How is everything going? In order to promote Chinese food culture and enrich students’ campus life, our school held a food festival in the dining room last Friday. During the activity, the cooks from our school introduced traditional styles of cooking and cooked many famous dishes like stinky tofu and Gong Bao Chicken. Many students enjoyed traditional food and watched the process of cooking. They also cooked by themselves with the help of the cooks. All the students spoke highly of this activity which let them have a better understanding of China’s rich and profound food culture. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Ming 【知识点】文体活动、中华文化 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍活动的时间和地点； 第二步，具体阐述活动内容； 第三步，最后表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①in order to为了 ②with the help of在……帮助下 ③speak highly of高度赞扬 [高分句型] All the students spoke highly of this activity which let them have a better understanding of China’s rich and profound food culture.（which引导的定语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道作文题旨在让同学们规划自己的暑假生活，培养大家的计划能力和英语表达能力。 内容把握：题目要求包含给定的思维导图信息，如看望祖父母、读书、参加社会实践，还需补充至少两条计划。这样能考查同学们对生活的规划和细节描述能力。 能力考查：主要考查同学们的英语语言运用能力，包括词汇、语法、句子结构等方面，看能否清晰、准确地表达自己的想法。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，鼓励同学们在实际情境中运用所学知识。 解题思路： 1. 先明确题目要求，确保包含所有给定的关键信息。 2. 按照一定的逻辑顺序来组织文章，比如先写亲情方面的看望祖父母，再到学习方面的读书，接着是社会实践，最后补充其他计划。 3. 注意使用恰当的词汇和语法，使文章表达流畅、自然。比如描述想念祖父母可以用“miss...very much”，丰富知识用“enrich my knowledge”等。 4. 控制好字数，在 80 词左右，不要过多或过少。 （2022·宁夏·中考真题）暑假临近，你有什么计划吗？你校英语社团正在开展以“My Summer Vacation Plan”为主题的征文活动。请根据思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的暑假计划。 要求：1. 文中须包含思维导图中的所有信息； 2. 补充至少两条计划； 3. 合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。 注意：1. 词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 提示词语： take part in参加　　social practice activities社会实践活动 My Summer Vacation Plan The summer vacation is coming. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My Summer Vacation Plan The summer vacation is coming. There are so many things I plan to do. First, I’m going to read some meaningful books, because I believe books are our best friends. I love my grandparents. I’m going to visit them more often. Then I plan to take part in social practice activities. For example, I will go to a farm to pick apples. My favourite sport is playing basketball. I’m going to play basketball with my best friends on weekends. Finally, I want to go to a summer camp if possible. I’m really looking forward to the summer vacation. 【知识点】计划、假日活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：本文以“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息介绍自己的暑期计划，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入话题，表示自己暑期有很多事情要做； 第二步，根据思维导图中的提示信息详细介绍自己暑期要做的事情； 第三步，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①plan to do sth.计划做某事 ②take part in参加 ③look forward to doing sth.期待做某事 [高分句型] ①First, I’m going to read some meaningful books, because I believe books are our best friends. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②My favourite sport is playing basketball.(动名词作表语) 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让同学们通过描述一次拜访剪纸艺术家的经历，锻炼大家的英语写作能力和叙事能力，同时培养对传统文化的尊重和传承意识。 内容把握：题目要求清晰地描述活动安排，包括出发和返回时间、交通方式、学习剪纸的过程、与艺术家的互动等，还要谈谈活动感受。答案中很好地涵盖了这些要点，内容丰富且有条理。 能力考查：考查同学们运用英语词汇、语法进行准确表达的能力，比如时间的表述、动词的使用等。还考查了同学们组织篇章结构、合理安排叙事顺序的能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用、文化理解和情感表达的要求。 解题思路：首先，要明确题目中的关键信息，比如活动的时间、方式和具体内容。然后，按照一定的逻辑顺序，比如时间顺序，把这些信息用正确的英语表达出来。在描述感受时，要真实、简洁地表达自己的心情和收获。 （2021·宁夏·中考真题）假如你是李华,你准备给学校校报英语专栏投稿,记述上周六你和几位同学拜访一位七十岁剪纸艺术家的经历,并简单谈谈感受。 1.活动安排: ①早上9:00从学校出发,下午2:00返回; ②骑自行车前往她家; ③向她学习剪纸; ④教她使用电脑;陪她说话;其他活动(至少谈及两项)。 2.谈谈本次活动的感受。 注意: 1.词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数); 2.合理增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 参考词汇: paper cutting 剪纸 Last Saturday, I went to visit a 70-year-old paper cutting artist with some of my classmates. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： Last Saturday, I went to visit a 70-year-old paper cutting artist with some of my classmates. We left school at 9:00 in the morning. We went there by bike. Her home is a little far from school. It took us about an hour to get there. She welcomed us warmly. She taught us how to cut paper. She showed us some beautiful patterns. Some are about plants, some are about animals, and some are about Chinese characters. She told us some paper cutting skills, and we learnt very fast. But she couldn’t use the computer to look through some patterns. We taught her to use the computer and chat with her. At noon, she also cooked us a delicious lunch. We also helped her clean her garden. We were very happy. We came back at 2:00 in the afternoon. Although we were tired, we were happy. Because we learned a new skill. 【知识点】周末活动、叙事忆旧、个人经历 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和提示要点，写出自己和几个同学上周六拜访一位七十岁剪纸艺术家的经历，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想考查同学们用英语进行书面表达的能力，同时也检验大家对活动安排的描述以及对武术益处的理解和阐述。 内容把握：题目要求清晰地介绍活动的时间、地点、内容，并且要至少谈及武术对人身心的两点益处。这就需要同学们准确理解并传达这些关键信息。 能力考查：考查了同学们的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力，还有对词汇、语法的运用能力。比如，要能正确表达时间、地点，使用恰当的连接词使文章连贯。 课标要求：符合初中英语课程标准中对学生写作能力的要求，即能够用简单的语言描述事件、表达观点。 解题思路：首先，要认真阅读题目，明确题目中的各项要求。然后，在介绍活动安排时，注意时间、地点和内容的准确表述。对于武术的益处，可以从身体和心理两个方面思考，并用简单的句子进行说明。最后，检查语法错误和拼写错误，确保文章通顺、清晰。 （2020·宁夏·中考真题）假如你是李华，你所在的城市将要举行武术表演活动，你的英国明友David 写信咨询询问活动信息． 请你给他回信介绍本次活动并谈谈武术对人身心的益处，内容要点如下： 1．活动安排： 时间：7月31日（星期五）上午8点开始，12点结束； 地点：光明体育馆； 内容：欣赏武术表演． 2．谈谈武术对人身心的益处（至少谈及两点）． 注意： 1．词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯． 参考词汇： gymnastics 体育馆    kung fu武术 Dear David， I'm glad to receive your letter. You asked me about the kung fu performance in our city. Hope you can come! Yours truly, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear David, I'm glad to receive your letter. You asked me about the kung fu performance in our city. Now let me tell you some advice about it. It will start at 8 a.m. and finish at 12 a.m. July 31. That day is Friday. It will be held in the Guangming Gymnastics. This is a big gymnasium, which can hold thousands of people. You can enjoy the wonderful kung fu performances. Kung fu is one of the traditional Chinese cultures with a long history. Kung fu can make people relaxed because it is very fun to watch. It also can make our body strong. So kung fu is very popular among the old people. Hope you can come! Yours truly, Li Hua 【知识点】团队运动、中华文化 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据要点提示写一封回信介绍本次活动，并谈谈武术对人身心的益处。首先我们要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称来展开写作，以第一、第二人称为辅。时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时为主，在叙述武术表演活动要举行的时间、地点等时，要用一般将来时，描述一般事实和自己的感悟时用一般现在时；文章要紧扣题目要点，围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。 最新模拟 1．（2024·宁夏银川·三模）紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了，你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请根据下图中的提示，以“My Summer Vacation Plan”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的假期计划。 要求： 1.文中需包含图示中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3.词数80左右。（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） My Summer Vacation Plan The summer vacation is coming. Here are my plans for it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All in all, I’m looking forward to spending a happy summer vacation. 2．（2024·宁夏中卫·一模）为了弘扬传统文化，你校结合当地传统元素在4月25日前往宁夏博物馆开展了丰富多彩的研学旅行(study trip)。早晨八点在校门口集合，乘坐大巴车一起前往博物馆。假如你是李华，请根据思维导图中的提示要点并结合自身经历，写一篇80词的英语短文向你的笔友Alice介绍此次研学活动，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 要求： 1.文章须包含思维导图中的所有要点（包括研学中做了什么、学到了什么）； 2.针对每个要点合理增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.适当表达自己的看法及感受。 My School Study Trip On April 25th, our school organized a study trip to Ningxia Museum. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·宁夏吴忠·二模）学校英文报正在以“Amazing Ningxia”为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示，写一篇短文投稿。 要求： 1. 短文必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右（标题和开头都已经给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Word bank: transportation交通，convenient方便的 Amazing Ningxia Ningxia is a lovable and livable place. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·宁夏银川·三模）为庆祝2024年国庆节的到来，你校英语社团拟举办以“China in My Eyes”为题的征文活动，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下我们亲爱的祖国！ Our goals (目标)： 渴求知识；努力学习； 永不放弃；实现梦想。 要求： （1）短文须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； （2）语言表达准确，语义连贯、通顺； （3）文中不要出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； （4）词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 相关词汇（高铁：high-speed railway   新能源汽车：new energy cars） China in My Eyes Hello, everyone! I am from China and I like my country very much. Now I’d like to introduce my country to you!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·宁夏银川·一模）根据要点提示和要求，以“My middle school life”为题写一篇短文。 要点： 1. 每天早晨骑车上学，按时到校，参加体育锻炼； 2. 每天学习多门功课，在校时间大约为9个小时； 3. 同学们相互帮助，师生相处融洽； 4. 用一至两句话谈谈你对校园生活的看法。 要求： 1. 词数80左右。要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确； 2. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·宁夏银川·二模）阳春三月，“两会”如期召开，青少年的健康成长成为“两会”关注的热点。为了实现中华名族伟大复兴的中国梦，成为国家的栋梁之才，请根据下面的提示，以“How to be a good student in the new era (时代)”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何做一名新时代的好学生。 要求： 1.请至少补充两点。 2.内容必须包含所给要点提示，可以适当发挥使行文连贯。 3.词数80左右。 How to be a good student in the new era (时代) _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·宁夏吴忠·一模）初中这三年，你一直在为自己的目标而努力。而实现目标需要精细的计划、不懈的努力和他人的帮助。请结合自己的经历，根据思维导图的提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你实现自己目标的故事。 What is your goal? What’s your story aboutachieving your goal? (When,  where  and  how) I Have Achieved My Goal What’s your feeling? 要求： 1. 词数不少于90。 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 提示词：a good plan, work hard, others’ help I Have Achieved My Goal ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·宁夏银川·二模）学校近期举行了社会实践活动 (social practice)，你的外国笔友David想了解此次活动的情况，假如你是李明，请根据以下提示用英文给他写封信，分享你的活动经历及感受，词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear David, I’m glad to tell you something about my social practice. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Ming 9．（2024·宁夏银川·二模）近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象。为此，国家印发了《中共中央国务院关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。为此你表示赞同，请结合自身的体会，就如何培养劳动精神，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。 （备注：labor 劳动） 要求： 1. 短文必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3. 词数80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 A guideline on hard-working spirit education came out recently in order to help us to get a hard-working spirit. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·宁夏银川·二模）为进一步加强校园文化建设，上个月我校举办了以“书润校园，馨香致远”为主题的读书节系列活动。请根据以下思维导图，写一篇活动报道，介绍活动的具体情况及意义。 要求： 1.文中需包含要点提示的所有信息，并适当发挥； 2.句子及篇章结构准确、连贯、书写规范； 3.文章不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名； 4.词数：80词左右。(文章开头已给出，不计总入词数) Reading makes a full man. In order to make students have a lot of fun reading, our school ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】 My Summer Vacation Plan The summer vacation is coming. Here are my plans for it. First, it’s important to have healthy eating habits. I’ll eat more fruit and vegetables, and try to eat less junk food. At the same time, I’ll keep playing sports and getting enough sleep every day. Second, I plan to visit some places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and so on. It will help me learn about Chinese history and add a lot of fun to my vacation. Last, I am also going to do some volunteer work, such as visiting the old people’s home and cleaning up the city park. All in all, I’m looking forward to spending a happy summer vacation. 【知识点】假日活动、计划 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要是一般将来时和一般现在时； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来具体谈谈你的暑假计划； 第二步，从“健康、旅行、志愿者工作”等方面谈谈你的暑假计划； 第三步，说明期待度过一个愉快的暑假。 [亮点词汇] ①at the same time同时 ②places of interest名胜古迹 ③fun乐趣 [高分句型] ①First, it’s important to have healthy eating habits.（it作形式主语） 2．【满分优秀范文】： My School Study Trip On April 25th, our school organized a study trip to Ningxia Museum. I was happy that I learned a lot with my classmates. We arrived at the school gate at eight in the morning and went to the Ningxia Museum by bus together. The weather was fine and the sky was blue. Everyone was excited to learn about the long history of the city and enjoy the beauty of traditional arts. We also made and enjoyed babao tea. Its smell was so nice. In the afternoon, we read many ancient local stories and shared them in the story-telling competition, learning about the traditional values of our city. These activities have not only helped me have a better understanding of our city, but also left a lasting influence on my heart and mind. 【知识点】个人经历、叙事忆旧、文体活动、旅行 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍自己的研学旅行，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出学校组织研学旅行和自己的感受； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，根据自己的经历重点介绍此次研学活动； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①learn about the long history of the city了解城市的悠久历史 ②enjoy the beauty of traditional arts享受传统艺术的美 [高分句型] These activities have not only helped me have a better understanding of our city, but also left a lasting influence on my heart and mind. (not only… but also) 3．【满分优秀范文】： Amazing Ningxia Ningxia is a lovable and livable place. Let me tell you something about Ningxia. First, there are lots of places of interest, such as Liupan Mountain and Sand Lake. Liupan Mountain is picturesque and breathtakingly beautiful, where you can appreciate the beauty of nature. Second, the high-speed train is convenient and user-friendly, so you can go to Ningxia by high-speed train. Third, Ningxia cuisine consists of many kinds of delicious food that you can not miss anyway. If you like mutton, you must try the tasty and mouth-watering mutton in Ningxia. What’s more, the people in Ningxia are helpful and warm-hearted. You will feel at home here. Welcome to Ningxia. 【知识点】城市 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“简单介绍宁夏”来引出下文中对宁夏这座城市的介绍； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“景点、交通、美食和居民”四方面入手，重点介绍宁夏的风土人情； ③第三步，书写结语。欢迎大家来宁夏。 [亮点词汇] ①lots of 许多 ②places of interest 名胜古迹 ③such as 例如 ④consists of 由……组成 ⑤what’s more 此外 [高分句型] ①Liupan Mountain is picturesque and breathtakingly beautiful, where you can appreciate the beauty of nature.（where引导的定语从句） ②Second, the high-speed train is convenient and user-friendly, so you can go to Ningxia by high-speed train.（so连接的因果并列句） ③Third, Ningxia cuisine consists of many kinds of delicious food that you can not miss anyway.（that引导的定语从句） ④If you like mutton, you must try the tasty and mouth-watering mutton in Ningxia.（if引导的条件状语从句） 4．【满分优秀范文】 China in My Eyes Hello, everyone! I am from China and I like my country very much. Now I’d like to introduce my country to you! As the National Day celebrations draw near, I find myself reflecting on the beauty and depth of my native country, China. The essence of China, in my eyes, is a tapestry of rich history, vibrant culture, and unwavering spirit. In ancient times, Shen Nong invented tea. And China has many traditional festivals with a long history, such as the Dragon Boat Festival, the Spring Festival, and so on. In modern times, the wide application of high-speed rail and new energy cars has made people’s life more convenient. Wechat Pay allows us to shop without carrying cash. We should thirst for knowledge and study hard. At the same time, in order to realize our dreams, we should never give up. 【知识点】社会发展、中华文化 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，借用“我眼中的中国”来引出下文中对中国的介绍； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“传统文化、现代科技和我们的目标”三方面入手，重点介绍我眼中的中国； 第三步，书写结束语，号召大家努力学习，实现梦想。 [亮点词汇] ①draw near临近 ②reflecting on反思 ③essence本质 ④vibrant充满活力的 ⑤unwavering坚定不移的 ⑥the wide application of  ……的广泛应用 ⑦allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事 ⑧thirst for渴望 ⑨at the same time同时 [高分句型] As the National Day celebrations draw near, I find myself reflecting on the beauty and depth of my native country, China.（as引导的时间状语从句） 5．【满分优秀范文】： My middle school life I like my school life. I go to school by bike in the morning and get to school on time. Then I do morning exercises with my classmates. There are seven classes every day and we study for about nine hours at school. We have many kinds of subjects and learn a lot. We students often help each other and we get on well with our teachers. My middle school life is meaningful and colourful. I will never forget it. 【知识点】个人信息、学校人员、学习科目 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，确定所要谈论的话题 （学校生活 ）； 第二步，围绕话题展开详细的叙述（科目、与老师同学的相处等）； 第三步，阐明自己的观点和态度 （学校生活丰富多彩 ）。 [亮点词汇] ①on time按时 ②many kinds of许多种类的 ③get on well with与……相处融洽 [高分句型] There are seven classes every day and we study for about nine hours at school.（There be句型） 6．【满分优秀范文】 How to be a good student in the new era (时代) The 21st century is a time full of challenges and chances. It is important for us to know how to be good students in this new era. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students. First of all, as a student, we should develop good study habits, and we need to study hard. Second, we should take more physical exercise to keep our body and mind healthy. At the same time, we need to have good eating habits. Third, we should be polite and friendly to others. Besides, we need to be helpful and get along well with our classmates. Finally, we should also do housework often to learn basic life skills. As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students. 【知识点】方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍在这个新时代成为好学生的重要性； 第二步，具体阐述如何做； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ① first of all首先 ② need to do需要做 ③ at the same time同时 [高分句型] ①It is important for us to know how to be good students in this new era.（动词不定式作主语） ②As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students.（条件状语从句） 7．【满分优秀范文】 I Have Achieved My Goal As I entered Grade 9, I found I had difficulty in speaking English freely. Therefore, I set a goal to improve my oral English by taking the following measures. First, I kept on listening to tapes and reading aloud to improve my pronunciation. Second, I tried to read English books so that I could learn many native expressions. Although it was quite challenging, I managed to develop it into a habit. Thanks to my great effort, I am comfortable speaking English now. I have learned the great value of hard work through this process. I not only feel a sense of achievement but also find the pleasure in hard work as it helps me discover my potential. I believe the more hard-working I am, the much happier I will be. 【知识点】个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你设立的目标是什么； 第二步，介绍你实现目标的过程； 第三步，最后表达你对于实现目标的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①have difficulty in doing sth做某事有困难 ②manage to do sth设法做某事 ③thanks to多亏 [高分句型] ①Although it was quite challenging, I managed to develop it into a habit.（although引导让步状语从句） ②I believe the more hard-working I am, the much happier I will be.（the+比较级，the+比较级的结构运用） 8．【满分优秀范文】 Dear David, I’m glad to tell you something about my social practice. We went to Guangming Farm and stayed there from March 12th to 14th. During that time, I had great fun. I planted some trees and grew vegetables with the help of the farmers. I cooked some food with my classmates. It tasted pretty good. The most exciting thing was to play games in teams. At night, we sat around a campfire, singing and dancing. I’ve learnt a lot from the social practice. It not only develops my love for labor but also improves my labor skills. Besides, I think teamwork is very important. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Ming 【知识点】个人经历、劳动实践 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文。 ②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主。 ③提示：围绕“社会实践活动的经历及感受”，结合写作要点进行写作，并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，说明要介绍社会实践活动； 第二步，详细介绍社会实践活动的过程； 第三步，表达社会实践活动的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①with the help of sb在某人的帮助之下 ②have great fun玩得很开心 ③the most exciting thing最激动人心的事情 [高分句型] ①It not only develops my love for labor but also improves my labor skills. (“not only...but also...”结构) ②Besides, I think teamwork is very important. (宾语从句) 9．【满分优秀范文】 A guideline on hard-working spirit education came out recently in order to help us to get a hard-working spirit. As a middle school student, I welcome it warmly. Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich our real-world work experience. Also, we need to try to do some chores at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or cooking some dishes. Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience. In a word, the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up. 【知识点】方法/策略、青少年问题、教育 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，写作意图开头已给出，写作时可直接写如何培养劳动精神； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“上劳动课”、“参加课外活动”以及“做家务”等展开，适当补充，丰富细节； 第三步，书写结语，表达培养劳动精神的必要性。 [亮点词汇] ①in order to为了 ②help sb. to do sth.帮助某人做某事 ③take part in参加 ④out-of-class课外的 ⑤such as例如 ⑥enrich使……丰富 ⑦need to do sth.需要做某事 ⑧do some chores做家务 ⑨Above all最重要的是 ⑩In a word总之 [高分句型] In a word, the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up. (and连接的并列句) 10．【满分优秀范文】： Reading makes a full man. In order to make students have a lot of fun reading, our school held a reading festival on April 23rd in the school library. During the festival, we organized a book sharing activity where students could share their favorite books and exchange ideas with each other. We also performed text plays based on some famous works, which was very popular among students. Moreover, we created a good reading environment by setting up reading corners in the library so that students could read books comfortably. The reading festival had great significance for us. Firstly, it helped us develop a habit of reading and broaden our horizons. Secondly, through sharing and discussing different books, we learned more about literature and became more confident in expressing ourselves. Finally, the festival promoted a love for reading throughout the school community, creating a positive atmosphere for learning. In conclusion, the reading festival was a successful event that enriched our campus life and encouraged us to embrace the beauty of reading. 【知识点】阅读、文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇活动报道作文。 ②时态：全文使用了“一般过去时”，适合叙述过去发生的事件。 ③提示：写作基于提供的思维导图，要求覆盖活动时间、地点、参与者、活动内容及活动影响。文章应结构清晰，逻辑连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍活动背景及目的，即通过举办阅读节来激发学生的阅读兴趣； 第二步，详细描述活动内容，包括图书分享、文本剧表演和设立阅读角落等； 第三步，总结活动的意义，强调对学生习惯养成、知识拓宽、表达自信以及校园文化氛围的正面影响； 第四步，以积极评价作为结语，强调活动成功及其对校园生活的丰富作用。 [亮点词汇] ①reading makes a full man阅读使人充实。 ②book sharing activity图书分享活动 ③text plays剧本朗读/文本剧 ④reading corners阅读角 ⑤broaden our horizons拓宽我们的视野 [高分句型] ①During the festival, we organized a book sharing activity where students could share their favorite books and exchange ideas with each other. (where引导定语从句) ②We also performed text plays based on some famous works, which was very popular among students. (which引导定语从句) ③Moreover, we created a good reading environment by setting up reading corners in the library so that students could read books comfortably. 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