43 海南-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

43 海南 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想考查学生用英语表达自己的未来职业规划、实现梦想的途径以及工作地点选择的能力，同时也考查学生对相关话题的语言组织和运用能力。 内容把握： - 理想工作部分，要清晰明确地表达自己的选择，并给出合理且有深度的原因。 - 实现梦想的方法需要具体、可行，展现出积极向上的态度和努力的方向。 - 工作地点的选择要结合个人情感和家乡发展等因素，给出令人信服的理由。 能力考查： - 考查学生的英语书面表达能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、句子结构等。 - 考查逻辑思维能力，使回答有条理、有层次。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，能够运用所学知识进行有效的交流和表达。 解题思路： - 认真阅读题目要求和所给的问题，明确每个问题的要点。 - 针对理想工作，先确定职业，再从兴趣、个人发展、榜样等方面阐述原因。 - 对于实现梦想的方法，要具体可行，如努力学习、投入精力、坚持不放弃等。 - 关于工作地点，结合家乡情感和发展需求进行说明。 - 注意语言表达的准确性和流畅性，避免语法错误。 （2024·海南·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom给你写了一封电子邮件。请根据邮件内容进行回复。 Tom tom@thinkmail.com Dear Li Hua, Hope everything goes well. I’m writing to ask you for help. My teacher asks me to do a survey and write a report about how teenagers will choose their jobs in the future. Here are the questions: 1. What is your dream job in the future, a teacher, a doctor, an engineer or…? Why? 2. What will you do to make your dream come true? 3. Where are you going to work, in Hainan or other places? Why? Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Tom 注意： 1. 要点齐全，适当拓展； 2. 行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 4. 100词左右（文章开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, I’m so glad to receive your e-mail. Here are my answers to your questions. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my reply will be helpful. Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Tom, I’m so glad to receive your e-mail. Here are my answers to your questions. It is my dream job to be a great scientist. I decide to choose to be a scientist for not only my endless interest on science but also the development of our country. Yuan Longping who has made a big difference to solve the food safety problem is a fantastic inspiration to me. I want to be a scientist like him to make our country stronger and stronger. In order to make my dream come true, I’ll make up my mind to study hard. I’ll put more effort on science learning and never give up. I’m going to do lots of experiments and read news. I’ll keep my love for science no matter what difficulties I’ll face. As for my working place, I’m going to work in Hainan, because Hainan is my hometown where I grow up. I make a decision to devote myself to its development. I love my hometown and I’m willing to stay here. I hope my reply will be helpful. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】愿望 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，介绍自己的理想工作及原因； 第三步，介绍实现梦想的方法； 第四步，介绍未来的工作地点及原因并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①not only…but also不仅……而且 ②made a big difference产生了很大的影响 ③come true成真 ④make up one’s mind下定决心 ⑤devote oneself to全身心投入 [高分句型] Yuan Longping who has made a big difference to solve the food safety problem is a fantastic inspiration to me.(who引导定语从句) 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在引导青少年关注生活技能的重要性，培养他们的思考和表达能力，让他们认识到不断学习新技能对创造美好生活的积极作用。 内容把握：题目要求学生结合自身需求，明确想要学习的生活技能，并阐述原因和学习方法。需要涵盖这三个方面，内容要具体、合理且逻辑清晰。 能力考查：考查学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力以及对生活的观察和思考能力。 课标要求：符合英语课程标准中对学生语言运用、思维发展和文化意识培养的要求，鼓励学生用英语表达自己的想法和观点。 解题思路：首先，要认真阅读题目和提示，明确写作要点。然后，根据自身实际情况选择一个具体的生活技能，比如烹饪。接着，从多个角度阐述学习这个技能的原因，如对日常生活的帮助、个人兴趣等。最后，详细说明学习这个技能的具体方法，如向家人请教、利用网络资源等。在写作过程中，要注意语言表达准确、流畅，语法正确。 （2022·海南·中考真题）为创造美好的生活，青少年在成长的过程中应不断学习新的生活技能（如烹饪、种植、救护方法……)。请结合下列提示和自身的需求，以“Little Life Skills Are a Big Help”为题写一篇短文，在英语课堂上分享。 提示： 1. What life skill do you want to learn? 2. Why do you want to learn this skill? 3. How do you learn this skill? 要求：1.内容须涵盖所有要点； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名； 4. 80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Little Life Skills Are a Big Help Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new skills... ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Little Life Skills Are a Big Help Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new skills. As for me, I would like to choose cooking, which is a basic skill in our daily life. It’s wonderful to create my own dishes. Besides, learning to look after my family is also my wish. In order to develop my cooking skill, I will first ask my mother for help. I think the dishes she cooks are the most delicious in the world. And it’s also a good idea to learn from the cooking videos online. Little life skills are a big help. Let’s take action now. 【知识点】计划、家庭生活 【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“Little Life Skills Are a Big Help”为题，并结合题干中的三个问题，描述自己想要学习的生活技能，可适当增加细节。 2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段介绍自己想要学习什么样的生活技能以及为什么要学习这项技能；第二段描述如何学习这个技能；最后一段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是为了考查学生的英语综合运用能力，包括语言表达、知识储备、人际交往能力以及对时间的安排等方面。通过让学生写自荐信，来检验他们能否清晰地展示自己的优势和与志愿者工作的匹配度。 内容把握：自荐信内容完整，涵盖了英语水平、国画知识、人际交往、时间安排等关键要点，全面且有条理地展示了自己作为志愿者的优势。 能力考查：考查了学生的英语写作能力，要求语法正确、行文连贯、逻辑清晰。同时，也考查了学生对自身能力的认知和总结能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用、文化理解和跨文化交际能力的培养要求。 解题思路：首先，明确表明自己想成为志愿者的意愿。然后，分别从英语能力、国画知识、人际交往和时间安排等方面详细阐述自己的优势，每个方面都有具体的说明和支撑。最后，以期待回复结尾，礼貌且完整。 （2021·海南·中考真题）为迎接英国某中学文化交流团到海南博物馆参加即将举办的中国国画展，博物馆在海南某英文报上发布了一则志愿者招聘广告。假定你是红星中学的李华，想成为其中一员，请根据广告内容和要求写一封自荐信。 要求： 1.要点齐全，适当发挥； 2.行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名； 4.80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua. a student from Hong Xing Middle School.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 参考范文 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua, a student from Hong Xing Middle School. I want to be a member of the volunteers. First of all, I’ve been learning English for 8 years. I speak fluent English so I have no difficulty in expressing myself clearly in English. Besides, I started to learn painting at the age of 4, and I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings. I will be able to tell students from England about Chinese paintings and culture. Finally, I’m outgoing and good with people. And I’ll be totally free in August. I’m sure I am the right person you are looking for. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】特长、中华文化、合作与交流 【详解】1.题干解读：本题为书信作文，要注意书信标准格式。题目已给出要点提示，学生应按照要点进行写作，不要遗漏要点。 2.写作指导：写作时应用第一人称，时态根据所述内容正确使用现在时、过去时或将来时。文章应包含全部要点，并可进行适当发挥，不要出现单词拼写、语法时态使用错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在引导学生思考如何合理规划周末生活，培养学生的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力，同时让学生关注家庭、兴趣爱好、社会公益以及自身健康等方面。 内容把握：答案内容全面且有条理，涵盖了家庭团聚、发展兴趣爱好、参与志愿活动和进行锻炼等方面，符合题目中关于让周末更有意义的主题。 能力考查：考查了学生的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、句子结构以及逻辑连贯等方面的能力。 课标要求：与课程标准中培养学生综合语言运用能力的要求相符，让学生能够用英语表达自己的想法和观点。 解题思路：首先，要仔细理解题目要求和思维导图中的提示信息。然后，按照一定的逻辑顺序，如使用“First of all”“Secondly”“Thirdly”“Last but not least”等连接词，将各个要点清晰地表达出来。在表达过程中，注意运用恰当的词汇和语法结构，使文章通顺、连贯。 （2020·海南·中考真题）周末是我们生活中重要的一部分，合理利用周末时间对青少年至关重要。某校英语杂志社就“如何让周末生活更有意义”开展征文活动。请你根据下面的思维导图，以“How to Make Our weekends more meaningful”为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 要求： 1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范。 2.所有提示须全部用上，并作适当发挥。 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。 4.80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 How to make Our Weekends More Meaningful Life on weekends is an important part of our daily life. How can we make our weekends more meaningful? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In short, let’s make good use of our weekends! How to Make Our Weekends More Meaningful Life on weekends is an important part of our daily life. How can we make our weekends more meaningful? Here are some of my suggestions. First of all, the weekend is a great time for family to get together. It's good to help our parents do some housework. That can help us understand each other better and show our love for them. Secondly, we should spend time developing our interests and hobbies at the weekend. For example, I would like to choose some books to read and communicate with others after reading Thirdly, we can take part in volunteering activities, like visiting the old people's home or doing some cleaning in public places. Last but not least, to make ourselves healthier, taking exercise is a good choice. In short, let's make good use of our weekends 【知识点】方法/策略、周末活动 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要按说明文格式写。在写作时介绍周末的生活是我们日常生活的重要部分；第二段介绍我们如何让周末生活更有意义；最后一段总结要充分利用周末。 2.【满分优秀范文】点评：【满分优秀范文】采用三段式；用第一、三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，在介绍让周末生活更有意义的建议时，叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 3.高分亮点： 短语：first of all；spend time doing sth；for example；would like to；communicate with；take part in；make good use of。 句型：Here be句型；It's+形容词+to do sth。 最新模拟 1．（2024·海南海口·一模）劳动创造美好生活，劳动实践从我做起。作为一名中学生，你是如何做的？请你根据下表要点，以“Labor is Glorious(劳动光荣)” 为题，向校报 “英语园地” 栏目投稿。 What you do In school, ... At home, ... In the community (社区), ... What you learn Learn some basic life skills; ... How you feel ... 要求： 1. 词数100左右(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯： 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Labor is Glorious    It is well known that labor is glorious. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·海南海口·三模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来中国旅游，回国前他想为家人买一件具有中国传统特色的礼物带回家，特向你求助。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括： 1.建议买什么礼物； 2.介绍这个礼物： 3.推荐该礼物的理由。 注意：1.适当增加细节，使之语句通顺，意义连贯； 2.语法正确，书写规范，不得出现真实个人信息； 3.100词左右。（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Peter, Nice to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·海南省直辖县级单位·二模）研学让我们得以开阔视野，学习新知，发展能力。假如你是李华，你校的外教Mr. Smith正在筹办三个暑假研学项目。请你根据以下表格信息，给Mr. Smith写一封信，谈谈你最想参加的一个项目及原因，并对该项目的活动提出至少两点可行性建议且说明理由。 Projects Activities Reasons A Volunteer Week   ●visit the Old People’s Home ●…   ●care for the old ●… A Sport Week   ●play basketball ●…   ●keep healthy ●… A Tour Week   ●go to the countryside   ●… ●be close to the nature ●… 要求： 1.短文应包括所给提示要点，可以适当发挥，使文章连贯； 2.词数100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Smith, I am Li Hua from Class 2, Grade 9. I was excited when I got the news about the projects during the summer holiday. And I would like to ... ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4．（2024·海南省直辖县级单位·二模）“You Ask, We Answer”是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发布了一个关于作业的帖子。假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的经历，用英语跟帖。 You Ask, We Answer     This term we don’t have much homework. But I find that I still spend too much time on it and I stay up almost every day. It makes me really tired. Do you spend a lot of time on your homework? Does anyone have some good ways to help me? Looking forward to your replies. Miyoko, Japan 要点： 1.回复Miyoko提出的问题； 2.给她一些高效完成作业的建议； 3.告诉她良好睡眠的重要性。 注意： 1.要点齐全，适当拓展； 2.行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名； 4.100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Hi, Miyoko. I’m sorry to hear that you’re upset about your homework. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·海南海口·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob想在暑假期间到海南旅游，因此来信向你咨询，请你回复一封邮件，内容包括： 1.简要介绍海南； 2.推荐两个岛内游玩地点； 3.说明推荐的理由。 要求：1.内容应包括所有的要点提示，可做适当拓展； 2.语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯，书写规范，不得出现真实个人信息； 3.100词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Bob, I can’t wait to see you in Hainan. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·海南海口·二模）假定你是李华。你校英语俱乐部准备创办一份中学生英文电子杂志 English Weekly，现面向全校师生就栏目 (column) 设置征询建议。请你从下面备选的三个栏目主题中选取两个，或选其一加一个个人喜欢的主题，给杂志编辑 Mr. Smith 写封信进行推荐。信件内容包括： 1. 表达你对创办杂志的看法； 2. 建议两个栏目并说明理由。 注意： 1. 内容需涵盖要点提示，可做适当发挥； 2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯，条理清晰，书写规范，不得出现真实个人信息； 3. 100 词左右 (文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Mr. Smith, I am so excited to learn that our school is going to start an E-magazine English Weekly._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 7．（2024·海南海口·三模）为了响应国家劳动教育的号召，提高学生劳动的积极性，你校打算开展主题为“我爱做家务”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿参加此次比赛。 提示： 1. Why do you love doing chores? 2. What was your experience of doing chores? 3. How did you feel? 要求： 1. 演讲稿内容须涵盖所有要点； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名： 4. 100 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数） I love doing chores Hello, everyone! I enjoy doing chores. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·海南省直辖县级单位·二模）劳动是人类生存的根本，劳动可以创造财富，实现自我价值。请你根据下面问题提示和结合自身实际情况，用英语写一篇发言稿，分享你的劳动经历、感想和所得，并号召大家一起参与劳动。 提示问句： 1．What do you usually do? (in school/at home/...) 2．How do you feel about these activities? 3．What can you learn from these labor activities? 注意： 1．要点齐全，适当拓展。 2．行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范。 3．文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名。 4．100 词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：meaningful; volunteer work; independent, Dear classmates, It’s my honor to share my experiences in labor activities with everyone._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·海南省直辖县级单位·二模）假如你叫李华，三年的初中学习生活即将结束，在你的学习生涯中，一定有不少帮助过你的老师、朋友和同学。值此毕业之际，请以“Thank you, ________”为题，用英语写一篇短文向学校校刊英文栏目投稿。 内容包括： 1. Who do you want to thank the most? 2. Describe his or her appearance or personality; 3. Describe an event he or she helped you; 4. What do you want to say the most to him or her? 注意： 1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.不能出现你的真实学校和姓名； 3.词数100左右。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） Thank you, ________ How time flies! My wonderful junior high school life is coming to an end. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·海南海口·二模）青少年在成长过程中，会收获成功和喜悦，也会面临困难和压力。我们应如何做到受挫而不短志？ 请根据以下内容要求写一段话，在英语角时间和大家分享。 内容： 1. 谈谈你对挫折的认识； 2. 描述一次曾经的受挫经历； 3.分享你此次经历的收获。 要求； 1. 内容须涵盖所有要点； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯， 语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名； 4. 100 词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Hello everyone, It’s my pleasure to speak to all of you here. Today I am going to share my opinions about difficulties in our life. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 43 海南 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想考查学生用英语表达自己的未来职业规划、实现梦想的途径以及工作地点选择的能力，同时也考查学生对相关话题的语言组织和运用能力。 内容把握： - 理想工作部分，要清晰明确地表达自己的选择，并给出合理且有深度的原因。 - 实现梦想的方法需要具体、可行，展现出积极向上的态度和努力的方向。 - 工作地点的选择要结合个人情感和家乡发展等因素，给出令人信服的理由。 能力考查： - 考查学生的英语书面表达能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、句子结构等。 - 考查逻辑思维能力，使回答有条理、有层次。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，能够运用所学知识进行有效的交流和表达。 解题思路： - 认真阅读题目要求和所给的问题，明确每个问题的要点。 - 针对理想工作，先确定职业，再从兴趣、个人发展、榜样等方面阐述原因。 - 对于实现梦想的方法，要具体可行，如努力学习、投入精力、坚持不放弃等。 - 关于工作地点，结合家乡情感和发展需求进行说明。 - 注意语言表达的准确性和流畅性，避免语法错误。 （2024·海南·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom给你写了一封电子邮件。请根据邮件内容进行回复。 Tom tom@thinkmail.com Dear Li Hua, Hope everything goes well. I’m writing to ask you for help. My teacher asks me to do a survey and write a report about how teenagers will choose their jobs in the future. Here are the questions: 1. What is your dream job in the future, a teacher, a doctor, an engineer or…? Why? 2. What will you do to make your dream come true? 3. Where are you going to work, in Hainan or other places? Why? Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Tom 注意： 1. 要点齐全，适当拓展； 2. 行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 4. 100词左右（文章开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, I’m so glad to receive your e-mail. Here are my answers to your questions. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my reply will be helpful. Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Tom, I’m so glad to receive your e-mail. Here are my answers to your questions. It is my dream job to be a great scientist. I decide to choose to be a scientist for not only my endless interest on science but also the development of our country. Yuan Longping who has made a big difference to solve the food safety problem is a fantastic inspiration to me. I want to be a scientist like him to make our country stronger and stronger. In order to make my dream come true, I’ll make up my mind to study hard. I’ll put more effort on science learning and never give up. I’m going to do lots of experiments and read news. I’ll keep my love for science no matter what difficulties I’ll face. As for my working place, I’m going to work in Hainan, because Hainan is my hometown where I grow up. I make a decision to devote myself to its development. I love my hometown and I’m willing to stay here. I hope my reply will be helpful. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】愿望 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，介绍自己的理想工作及原因； 第三步，介绍实现梦想的方法； 第四步，介绍未来的工作地点及原因并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①not only…but also不仅……而且 ②made a big difference产生了很大的影响 ③come true成真 ④make up one’s mind下定决心 ⑤devote oneself to全身心投入 [高分句型] Yuan Longping who has made a big difference to solve the food safety problem is a fantastic inspiration to me.(who引导定语从句) 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在引导青少年关注生活技能的重要性，培养他们的思考和表达能力，让他们认识到不断学习新技能对创造美好生活的积极作用。 内容把握：题目要求学生结合自身需求，明确想要学习的生活技能，并阐述原因和学习方法。需要涵盖这三个方面，内容要具体、合理且逻辑清晰。 能力考查：考查学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力以及对生活的观察和思考能力。 课标要求：符合英语课程标准中对学生语言运用、思维发展和文化意识培养的要求，鼓励学生用英语表达自己的想法和观点。 解题思路：首先，要认真阅读题目和提示，明确写作要点。然后，根据自身实际情况选择一个具体的生活技能，比如烹饪。接着，从多个角度阐述学习这个技能的原因，如对日常生活的帮助、个人兴趣等。最后，详细说明学习这个技能的具体方法，如向家人请教、利用网络资源等。在写作过程中，要注意语言表达准确、流畅，语法正确。 （2022·海南·中考真题）为创造美好的生活，青少年在成长的过程中应不断学习新的生活技能（如烹饪、种植、救护方法……)。请结合下列提示和自身的需求，以“Little Life Skills Are a Big Help”为题写一篇短文，在英语课堂上分享。 提示： 1. What life skill do you want to learn? 2. Why do you want to learn this skill? 3. How do you learn this skill? 要求：1.内容须涵盖所有要点； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名； 4. 80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Little Life Skills Are a Big Help Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new skills... ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Little Life Skills Are a Big Help Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new skills. As for me, I would like to choose cooking, which is a basic skill in our daily life. It’s wonderful to create my own dishes. Besides, learning to look after my family is also my wish. In order to develop my cooking skill, I will first ask my mother for help. I think the dishes she cooks are the most delicious in the world. And it’s also a good idea to learn from the cooking videos online. Little life skills are a big help. Let’s take action now. 【知识点】计划、家庭生活 【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“Little Life Skills Are a Big Help”为题，并结合题干中的三个问题，描述自己想要学习的生活技能，可适当增加细节。 2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段介绍自己想要学习什么样的生活技能以及为什么要学习这项技能；第二段描述如何学习这个技能；最后一段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是为了考查学生的英语综合运用能力，包括语言表达、知识储备、人际交往能力以及对时间的安排等方面。通过让学生写自荐信，来检验他们能否清晰地展示自己的优势和与志愿者工作的匹配度。 内容把握：自荐信内容完整，涵盖了英语水平、国画知识、人际交往、时间安排等关键要点，全面且有条理地展示了自己作为志愿者的优势。 能力考查：考查了学生的英语写作能力，要求语法正确、行文连贯、逻辑清晰。同时，也考查了学生对自身能力的认知和总结能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用、文化理解和跨文化交际能力的培养要求。 解题思路：首先，明确表明自己想成为志愿者的意愿。然后，分别从英语能力、国画知识、人际交往和时间安排等方面详细阐述自己的优势，每个方面都有具体的说明和支撑。最后，以期待回复结尾，礼貌且完整。 （2021·海南·中考真题）为迎接英国某中学文化交流团到海南博物馆参加即将举办的中国国画展，博物馆在海南某英文报上发布了一则志愿者招聘广告。假定你是红星中学的李华，想成为其中一员，请根据广告内容和要求写一封自荐信。 要求： 1.要点齐全，适当发挥； 2.行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名； 4.80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua. a student from Hong Xing Middle School.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 参考范文 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua, a student from Hong Xing Middle School. I want to be a member of the volunteers. First of all, I’ve been learning English for 8 years. I speak fluent English so I have no difficulty in expressing myself clearly in English. Besides, I started to learn painting at the age of 4, and I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings. I will be able to tell students from England about Chinese paintings and culture. Finally, I’m outgoing and good with people. And I’ll be totally free in August. I’m sure I am the right person you are looking for. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】特长、中华文化、合作与交流 【详解】1.题干解读：本题为书信作文，要注意书信标准格式。题目已给出要点提示，学生应按照要点进行写作，不要遗漏要点。 2.写作指导：写作时应用第一人称，时态根据所述内容正确使用现在时、过去时或将来时。文章应包含全部要点，并可进行适当发挥，不要出现单词拼写、语法时态使用错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在引导学生思考如何合理规划周末生活，培养学生的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力，同时让学生关注家庭、兴趣爱好、社会公益以及自身健康等方面。 内容把握：答案内容全面且有条理，涵盖了家庭团聚、发展兴趣爱好、参与志愿活动和进行锻炼等方面，符合题目中关于让周末更有意义的主题。 能力考查：考查了学生的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、句子结构以及逻辑连贯等方面的能力。 课标要求：与课程标准中培养学生综合语言运用能力的要求相符，让学生能够用英语表达自己的想法和观点。 解题思路：首先，要仔细理解题目要求和思维导图中的提示信息。然后，按照一定的逻辑顺序，如使用“First of all”“Secondly”“Thirdly”“Last but not least”等连接词，将各个要点清晰地表达出来。在表达过程中，注意运用恰当的词汇和语法结构，使文章通顺、连贯。 （2020·海南·中考真题）周末是我们生活中重要的一部分，合理利用周末时间对青少年至关重要。某校英语杂志社就“如何让周末生活更有意义”开展征文活动。请你根据下面的思维导图，以“How to Make Our weekends more meaningful”为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 要求： 1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范。 2.所有提示须全部用上，并作适当发挥。 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。 4.80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 How to make Our Weekends More Meaningful Life on weekends is an important part of our daily life. How can we make our weekends more meaningful? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In short, let’s make good use of our weekends! How to Make Our Weekends More Meaningful Life on weekends is an important part of our daily life. How can we make our weekends more meaningful? Here are some of my suggestions. First of all, the weekend is a great time for family to get together. It's good to help our parents do some housework. That can help us understand each other better and show our love for them. Secondly, we should spend time developing our interests and hobbies at the weekend. For example, I would like to choose some books to read and communicate with others after reading Thirdly, we can take part in volunteering activities, like visiting the old people's home or doing some cleaning in public places. Last but not least, to make ourselves healthier, taking exercise is a good choice. In short, let's make good use of our weekends 【知识点】方法/策略、周末活动 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要按说明文格式写。在写作时介绍周末的生活是我们日常生活的重要部分；第二段介绍我们如何让周末生活更有意义；最后一段总结要充分利用周末。 2.【满分优秀范文】点评：【满分优秀范文】采用三段式；用第一、三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，在介绍让周末生活更有意义的建议时，叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 3.高分亮点： 短语：first of all；spend time doing sth；for example；would like to；communicate with；take part in；make good use of。 句型：Here be句型；It's+形容词+to do sth。 最新模拟 1．（2024·海南海口·一模）劳动创造美好生活，劳动实践从我做起。作为一名中学生，你是如何做的？请你根据下表要点，以“Labor is Glorious(劳动光荣)” 为题，向校报 “英语园地” 栏目投稿。 What you do In school, ... At home, ... In the community (社区), ... What you learn Learn some basic life skills; ... How you feel ... 要求： 1. 词数100左右(标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯： 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Labor is Glorious    It is well known that labor is glorious. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·海南海口·三模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来中国旅游，回国前他想为家人买一件具有中国传统特色的礼物带回家，特向你求助。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括： 1.建议买什么礼物； 2.介绍这个礼物： 3.推荐该礼物的理由。 注意：1.适当增加细节，使之语句通顺，意义连贯； 2.语法正确，书写规范，不得出现真实个人信息； 3.100词左右。（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Peter, Nice to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·海南省直辖县级单位·二模）研学让我们得以开阔视野，学习新知，发展能力。假如你是李华，你校的外教Mr. Smith正在筹办三个暑假研学项目。请你根据以下表格信息，给Mr. Smith写一封信，谈谈你最想参加的一个项目及原因，并对该项目的活动提出至少两点可行性建议且说明理由。 Projects Activities Reasons A Volunteer Week   ●visit the Old People’s Home ●…   ●care for the old ●… A Sport Week   ●play basketball ●…   ●keep healthy ●… A Tour Week   ●go to the countryside   ●… ●be close to the nature ●… 要求： 1.短文应包括所给提示要点，可以适当发挥，使文章连贯； 2.词数100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Smith, I am Li Hua from Class 2, Grade 9. I was excited when I got the news about the projects during the summer holiday. And I would like to ... ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4．（2024·海南省直辖县级单位·二模）“You Ask, We Answer”是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发布了一个关于作业的帖子。假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的经历，用英语跟帖。 You Ask, We Answer     This term we don’t have much homework. But I find that I still spend too much time on it and I stay up almost every day. It makes me really tired. Do you spend a lot of time on your homework? Does anyone have some good ways to help me? Looking forward to your replies. Miyoko, Japan 要点： 1.回复Miyoko提出的问题； 2.给她一些高效完成作业的建议； 3.告诉她良好睡眠的重要性。 注意： 1.要点齐全，适当拓展； 2.行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名； 4.100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Hi, Miyoko. I’m sorry to hear that you’re upset about your homework. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·海南海口·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob想在暑假期间到海南旅游，因此来信向你咨询，请你回复一封邮件，内容包括： 1.简要介绍海南； 2.推荐两个岛内游玩地点； 3.说明推荐的理由。 要求：1.内容应包括所有的要点提示，可做适当拓展； 2.语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯，书写规范，不得出现真实个人信息； 3.100词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Bob, I can’t wait to see you in Hainan. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·海南海口·二模）假定你是李华。你校英语俱乐部准备创办一份中学生英文电子杂志 English Weekly，现面向全校师生就栏目 (column) 设置征询建议。请你从下面备选的三个栏目主题中选取两个，或选其一加一个个人喜欢的主题，给杂志编辑 Mr. Smith 写封信进行推荐。信件内容包括： 1. 表达你对创办杂志的看法； 2. 建议两个栏目并说明理由。 注意： 1. 内容需涵盖要点提示，可做适当发挥； 2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯，条理清晰，书写规范，不得出现真实个人信息； 3. 100 词左右 (文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Mr. Smith, I am so excited to learn that our school is going to start an E-magazine English Weekly._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 7．（2024·海南海口·三模）为了响应国家劳动教育的号召，提高学生劳动的积极性，你校打算开展主题为“我爱做家务”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿参加此次比赛。 提示： 1. Why do you love doing chores? 2. What was your experience of doing chores? 3. How did you feel? 要求： 1. 演讲稿内容须涵盖所有要点； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名： 4. 100 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数） I love doing chores Hello, everyone! I enjoy doing chores. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·海南省直辖县级单位·二模）劳动是人类生存的根本，劳动可以创造财富，实现自我价值。请你根据下面问题提示和结合自身实际情况，用英语写一篇发言稿，分享你的劳动经历、感想和所得，并号召大家一起参与劳动。 提示问句： 1．What do you usually do? (in school/at home/...) 2．How do you feel about these activities? 3．What can you learn from these labor activities? 注意： 1．要点齐全，适当拓展。 2．行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范。 3．文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名。 4．100 词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：meaningful; volunteer work; independent, Dear classmates, It’s my honor to share my experiences in labor activities with everyone._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·海南省直辖县级单位·二模）假如你叫李华，三年的初中学习生活即将结束，在你的学习生涯中，一定有不少帮助过你的老师、朋友和同学。值此毕业之际，请以“Thank you, ________”为题，用英语写一篇短文向学校校刊英文栏目投稿。 内容包括： 1. Who do you want to thank the most? 2. Describe his or her appearance or personality; 3. Describe an event he or she helped you; 4. What do you want to say the most to him or her? 注意： 1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.不能出现你的真实学校和姓名； 3.词数100左右。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） Thank you, ________ How time flies! My wonderful junior high school life is coming to an end. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·海南海口·二模）青少年在成长过程中，会收获成功和喜悦，也会面临困难和压力。我们应如何做到受挫而不短志？ 请根据以下内容要求写一段话，在英语角时间和大家分享。 内容： 1. 谈谈你对挫折的认识； 2. 描述一次曾经的受挫经历； 3.分享你此次经历的收获。 要求； 1. 内容须涵盖所有要点； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯， 语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名； 4. 100 词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Hello everyone, It’s my pleasure to speak to all of you here. Today I am going to share my opinions about difficulties in our life. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】 Labor is Glorious It is well known that labor is glorious. As a middle school student, I often do some labor activities in everyday life. For example, I clean the classroom and playground with my classmates at school. I cook dishes, wash clothes and tidy rooms at home. And in the community, I work as a volunteer to help the old or disabled. By doing these, I’ve learnt some basic life skills to take care of myself. Besides, I have not only got the strong feeling of satisfaction but also become more and more independent and responsible. All in all, labor creates a better life so let’s take an active part in doing the daily labor. 【知识点】劳动实践 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，介绍自己进行的劳动及收获； 第三步，介绍自己的感受并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①labor activities劳动活动 ②tidy rooms整理房间 ③work as担任 ④volunteer志愿者 ⑤not only…but also不仅…而且 ⑥take an active part in积极参与 [高分句型] Besides, I have not only got the strong feeling of satisfaction but also become more and more independent and responsible.(比较级and比较级) 2．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Peter, Nice to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture. I’d love to give you my suggestion about Chinese gifts. From my point of view, paper-cut is a good choice to be special Chinese gifts for your family. Paper-cuts are usually used to decorate the house. They are put on windows, doors and walls to celebrate the Spring Festival. Paper-cuts are a traditional Chinese culture, from which you can have a better understanding of China. People like them very much because they are seen as symbols for good luck and a happy new year. I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】中华文化、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示信息介绍一件代表中国文化的礼物，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍推荐的礼物是什么； 第二步，介绍这个礼物； 第三步，说明推荐理由。 [亮点词汇] ①from my point of view依我看来 ②be used to do被用来做某事 ③be seen as被看成 [高分句型] ①Paper-cuts are a traditional Chinese culture, from which you can have a better understanding of China.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②People like them very much because they are seen as symbols for good luck and a happy new year.（because引导的原因状语从句） 3．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Mr. Smith,   I am Li Hua from Class 2, Grade 9. I was excited when I got the news about the projects during the summer holiday. And I would like to participate in the Tour Week. The reason why I am most interested in the Tour Week is that it allows us to be close to nature. Spending time in the countryside can help us relax and appreciate the beauty of the natural world, which is a great way to relieve stress from our studies. Here are two suggestions for the activities during the Tour Week: The first one is Nature Walks and Hikes. Organizing guided nature walks and hikes can help us learn about the local flora and fauna. The second one is Agricultural Experience. You can arrange students to visit local farms. We can participate in farming activities like planting and harvesting crops. I believe these activities will make the Tour Week both educational and enjoyable. Thank you for considering my suggestions. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】假日活动、文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，从三个项目中选择一个； 第二步，介绍自己选择这个项目的理由； 第三步，针对该项目的活动提出至少两点建议。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ③participate in参加 [高分句型] ①The reason why I am most interested in the Tour Week is that it allows us to be close to nature. （定语从句，表语从句） ②Spending time in the countryside can help us relax and appreciate the beauty of the natural world, which is a great way to relieve stress from our studies.（定语从句） ③I believe these activities will make the Tour Week both educational and enjoyable.（宾语从句） 4．【满分优秀范文】 Hi, Miyoko. I’m sorry to hear that you’re upset about your homework. I used to have the same problem as you. But now I often finish my homework in an hour. Here’s some advice for you. First, listen carefully in class. The homework usually practices what you have learned in class. If you can’t understand what your teachers say in class, you will find it hard to finish your homework. Second, you need to manage your time wisely. For example, you can start your homework early. Third, try to find some good learning methods, like breaking tasks down into smaller parts. Remember, good sleep is helpful to your health and it can make you full of energy and study well the next day. So, better not stay up too late. I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Wish you a successful term! Li Hua, China 【知识点】意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给原帖和要求完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，回复Miyoko提出的问题； 第二步，给她一些高效完成作业的建议，告诉她良好睡眠的重要性； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①used to曾经 ②practice练习 ③wisely明智地 ④break…down将……分成若干部分 ⑤stay up熬夜 [高分句型] If you can’t understand what your teachers say in class, you will find it hard to finish your homework.(if引导条件状语从句；what引导宾语从句) 5．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Bob, I can’t wait to see you in Hainan. Hainan is a beautiful place. It is in the south of our country. It is the second largest island in China. I’d like to introduce some famous tourist attractions to you. First, Nanshan Cultural Tourism Zone is a must visit for anyone interested in Chinese culture and history. The main attraction is the Nanshan Temple which is one of the largest Buddhist temples in China. The temple complex is home to many beautiful statues and buildings, and there are also cultural shows and performances to enjoy. Another place is Wuzhizhou island. The island is home to several beautiful beaches, and there are also many water sports and activities to enjoy. If you like the beach and the sea, you must come here. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【知识点】城市、景点/建筑 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏相关介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，借用“海南是一个美丽的地方”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体介绍岛内的两个游玩地点及推荐理由； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①can’t wait to do等不及做某事 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③I’d like to我想 [高分句型] ①The main attraction is the Nanshan Temple which is one of the largest Buddhist temples in China. (which引导的定语从句) ②I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. (省略that的宾语从句) 6．【满分优秀范文】： Dear Mr. Smith, I am so excited to learn that our school is going to start an E-magazine English Weekly. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that. I would like to recommend two columns which are really my cup of tea. “Culture in the world” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “Language learning” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve. Well, I think the magazine is to help us learn English and broaden our horizon. I really can’t wait to read the magazine. Li Hua 【知识点】社团/俱乐部、爱好、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达你对创办杂志的看法； 第二步，建议两个栏目并说明理由； 第三步，书写结语，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①agree with同意 ②each other彼此 ③can’t wait to do sth.情不自禁做某事 [高分句型] ① I would like to recommend two columns which are really my cup of tea. (which引导的定语从句) ②Well, I think the magazine is to help us learn English and broaden our horizon. (宾语从句) 7．【满分优秀范文】 I love doing chores. Hello, everyone! I enjoy doing chores. It can not only help my parents out but also develop my independence. So I think it’s necessary for me to do chores. When I’m free, I usually clean the house and cook for my parents. Last Friday afternoon, I arrived home earlier than my parents, so I decided to prepare dinner for them. I cooked potato pancakes-their favorite food. When they came back home, they tried some and told me these were the best pancakes in the world. You couldn’t imagine how happy I was when I heard that. From this experience, I learned that parents could also easily get satisfaction. So I plan to do more chores from now on to make them happy. That’s all. Thank you for your listening. 【知识点】劳动实践 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要是“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据提示完成写作，重点写出“做家务的经历”，注意语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确。 [写作步骤] 第一步，写出喜欢做家务的原因和意义； 第二步，详细介绍做家务的经历，表达自己的感受； 第三步，总结。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also...不仅……而且…… ②prepare for为……做准备 ③from now on从现在开始 ④thank sb. for sth.因某事感谢某人 [高分句型] ①When I’m free, I usually clean the house and cook for my parents. (When引导时间状语从句) ②I learned that parents could also easily get satisfaction. (that引导宾语从句) 8．【满分优秀范文】 Dear classmates, It’s my honor to share my experiences in labor activities with everyone. I think labor education is an important part in the development of the young people. So it’s necessary for us teenagers to take an active part in labor activities. I take part in a series of labor activities in my spare time. When I’m at school, I clean classrooms and sometimes water flowers. When I’m at home, I often help my parents with housework, such as cooking, sweeping the floor, doing the dishes and so on. When I’m free on weekends, I do voluntary service with friends at old people’s homes. With labor activities, I not only learn teamwork with others but also develop a sense of responsibility. Labor makes me know more about others and I can understand them better now. Doing labor activities helps me grow. Let’s take action now. That’s all. Thank you. 【知识点】劳动实践 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，参加各类劳动的重要性； 第二步，介绍你通常做的劳动活动以及感受； 第三步，最后介绍你从参加劳动活动中学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②and so on 等等 ③not only...but also...不但……而且…… ④take action采取行动 [高分句型] ①So it’s necessary for us teenagers to take an active part in labor activities.（It’s+形容词+for sb+to do sth 句型） ②When I’m free on weekends, I do voluntary service with friends at old people’s homes.（when引导的时间状语从句） 9．【满分优秀范文】 Thank you, My Deskmate How time flies! My wonderful junior high school life is coming to an end. Looking back at the past three years, the person I want to thank most is my deskmate, Li Ming. He is of medium build with bright eyes and always wears a pair of glasses. The deepest impression Li Ming left on me was when I couldn’t solve a math problem and was about to give up. I wanted to copy his homework, but he refused and encouraged me to think independently and solve the problem seriously. His words inspired me to ponder the math problem further. When I finally solved it, my heart swelled with pride and satisfaction, as well as admiration for Li Ming’s wisdom and kindness. Time flies like a fleeting horse. As we are about to separate from each other, I want to tell him, “Thank you for your company and encouragement.” I do hope we can continue our friendship in the future. 【知识点】朋友、学校人员、叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先表达自己最想感谢的人是同桌； 第二步，介绍同桌的外貌、性格，并具体介绍一件他曾经帮助过自己的事情； 第三步，书写结束语，表达自己最想要和他说的话，以及希望友谊长存。 [亮点词汇] ①looking back at 回顾 ②give up 放弃 ③encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事 ④think independently 独立思考 ⑤swelled with 充满 [高分句型] ①The deepest impression Li Ming left on me was when I couldn’t solve a math problem and was about to give up.（省略that的定语从句及when引导的表语从句） ②When I finally solved it, my heart swelled with pride and satisfaction, as well as admiration for Li Ming’s wisdom and kindness.（when引导的时间状语从句） ③I do hope we can continue our friendship in the future.（省略that的宾语从句） 10．【满分优秀范文】 Hello, everyone, It’s my pleasure to speak to all of you here. Today I am going to share my opinions about difficulties in our life. Difficulties can bring sufferings to us, but after going through them, we will grow as better people. I’ve still remembered the basketball match I had in Grade Eight. On that day, all my classmates gathered around the playground and cheered for us. As one of the strongest player, I threw the ball to the basket again and again, but unluckily, most of them failed to get in. At last, we lost the game. My classmates were angry with me because I didn’t often pass the ball to my teammates. I felt sad and sorry. From then on, I’ve learned one tree can’t make a forest. I should always keep teamwork spirit in mind. 【知识点】叙事忆旧、个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：作文要求讲述自己对挫折的认识，以及受挫经历和收获，考生应注意在叙述自己过去经历时，用一般过去时。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。点明主题，吸引读者兴趣； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。讲述自己对挫折的认识，以及受挫经历； 第三步，书写结语。叙述自己从这次经历中的收获和心得。 [亮点词汇] ①go through经历 ②be angry with对……生气 ③From then on从那时起 [高分句型] ①I’ve still remembered the basketball match I had in Grade Eight.（定语从句） ②My classmates were angry with me because I didn’t often pass the ball to my teammates.（原因状语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$