2025届高考英语读后续写专题之人与动物--跨越物种的友谊：Dylan与Bo的故事 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。In 2019, I rescued a skittish donkey (容易受惊的驴). Bo came from a nearby cattle ranch and now lives peacefully on my ranch in the Bitterroot Valley of Montana, along with another donkey, three horses, and two dogs. But the key to Bo’s successful recovery from nervous rescue to happy ranch animal wasn’t anything I did. It was my grandson, Dylan. When he was just shy of four years old, Dylan came with his parents to spend the Fourth of July with me on their way to Canada for a vacation. Bo kept his distance from the grown-ups, but he displayed an unusual fascination with Dylan. So we decided to introduce them. “Move slowly, keep your arms down, be quiet, and stoop down sometimes,” I told my grandson. Dylan cautiously approached Bo, step by step, holding a soft rubber comb. Bo held his ground, but he seemed interested with this little visitor. Dylan rubbed Bo’s shoulders and neck softly with the comb, removing remains of his thick winter coat. It’s hard for an almost four-year-old to stay still for long, and motivation overcame self-control. Dylan made one quick move, and Bo jumped off with light steps. But Bo and Dylan were not ready to give up. Dylan approached again. To witness a preschooler learn to control himself in such a short time was amazing. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As we watched, true love developed between this once distrustful donkey and a gentle boy. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ They met again one week later as the family passed through on their return trip.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意： 这篇文章讲述了作者在2019年救助了一只容易受惊的驴子Bo，并将其带回蒙大拿州Bitterroot Valley的农场。Bo最初对成年人保持距离，但对作者的孙子Dylan表现出了不寻常的兴趣。Dylan在四岁前的一个七月四日假期中与Bo相遇，并在作者的指导下，小心翼翼地接近并用橡胶梳子为Bo梳理毛发。尽管Dylan一时冲动让Bo受惊，但他们并没有放弃，Dylan再次尝试并学会了自我控制。 几处伏笔及在续写中的回应： 1. Bo对Dylan的特别兴趣（伏笔）- 在续写中，这种兴趣发展成为深厚的情感联系。 2. Dylan的自我控制学习（伏笔）- 在续写中，Dylan的成长和自我控制的提高被进一步展现。 续写要点（分两段）： 第一段：描述Dylan和Bo之间情感的发展，以及Dylan如何通过耐心和温柔赢得Bo的信任。 第二段：描述Dylan和Bo一周后再次相遇的情景，以及他们之间情感的进一步加深。 感情线： Dylan和Bo之间的感情从最初的好奇和兴趣，发展到深厚的友谊和信任。 故事线： 故事从Dylan和Bo的初次相遇开始，经历了Dylan的自我控制学习，到他们之间情感的建立，最后到他们再次相遇的情感加深。 主旨升华句： 1. "The bond between a child and an animal can be a powerful force for healing and growth." 2. "Patience and gentleness often unlock the hearts of even the most fearful creatures." 3. "Love, in its purest form, knows no boundaries, not even between species." 4. "The innocence of childhood can bridge the deepest divides, creating connections that last a lifetime." 5. "Sometimes, the smallest acts of kindness can lead to the most profound changes." 写作示范一： As we watched, true love developed between this once distrustful donkey and a gentle boy. Dylan's presence seemed to calm Bo, and the donkey would often seek out the boy's company. They would spend hours together, with Dylan reading stories to Bo or simply sitting quietly beside him. It was as if Bo understood that in Dylan, he had found a friend who would never hurt him. The transformation in Bo was remarkable; he became more playful and less skittish, his eyes reflecting a newfound joy and trust. They met again one week later as the family passed through on their return trip. The reunion was a heartwarming sight. Bo, from a distance, recognized Dylan and trotted towards him with an eagerness that was new. Dylan, with a wide grin, ran to meet Bo, and they shared a moment that seemed to solidify their bond. The donkey nuzzled Dylan's hand, and the boy hugged him tightly. It was clear that their connection had not faded with time or distance, but rather, it had grown stronger, a testament to the enduring nature of the love that had blossomed between them. 写作示范二： As we watched, true love developed between this once distrustful donkey and a gentle boy. Dylan's quiet determination and tender touch spoke volumes to Bo, who responded in kind with a softening of his once-tense demeanor. Each day, their interactions grew longer and more relaxed, with Bo allowing Dylan to come closer, to touch him more freely. It was a dance of trust and friendship, played out in the quiet corners of the ranch. They met again one week later as the family passed through on their return trip. The anticipation was palpable; both Dylan and Bo seemed to sense the impending reunion. When they finally came face to face, it was as if no time had passed at all. Dylan's eyes lit up, and Bo's ears perked up in recognition. They moved towards each other with a familiarity that only comes from a deep and genuine connection. The scene was a poignant reminder of the power of love and understanding, a moment that would forever be etched in the hearts of all who witnessed it. 【参考范文】 As we watched, true love developed between this once distrustful pony and a gentle boy. Over the next few days, Bo let Dylan throw his arms around his neck, pet his legs, hold his head in his hands, and pat his cheeks. And Dylan felt free to sit at Bo’s feet while Bo carefully sniffed his shirt collar and hair and rubbed Dylan’s back with his hairy chin. Just as Dylan had earned Bo’s trust, Bo showed attachment to Dylan. Thus, Bo seemed unable to tear himself away from Dylan when he and his parents had to depart. They met again one week later as the family passed through on their return trip. It was almost dark, but Dylan and his dad paced to the far reaches of the ranch. Bo came to meet them enthusiastically. He hugged Dylan as if saying “long time no see” ---yes, a donkey can hug---without knocking him off balance. He is now a changed and trusting donkey. And Dylan is a miracle worker. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$