应用文写作--分享邮件--班上周六在你校劳动园地进行了采摘活动 讲义-山东省泰安市2023-2024学年高二下学期7月期末英语试题

山东省泰安市2023-2024学年高二下学期7月期末英语试题 书信写作 假如你是李华，你们班上周六在你校劳动园地进行了采摘活动，请你给英国好友Jennie写封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： 1. 活动过程；2. 你的感想。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 请按以下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jennie, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 写作提纲 一、邮件开头 1. 问候 Jennie 并表明写信目的是分享上周六的采摘活动经历。 2. 提及对这次活动的期待，引起 Jennie 的兴趣。 二、活动过程描述 1. 到达劳动园地的情况 1. 描述劳动园地的大致环境（如种植的各类蔬菜水果、园子的布局等）。 2. 同学们的心情和状态（如兴奋、好奇等）。 2. 采摘过程 2. 分组情况及各自的任务（如有的小组负责摘苹果，有的负责摘蔬菜等）。 2. 采摘时的具体动作和遇到的问题（如水果太高够不着、如何判断果实是否成熟等）及解决办法（如用梯子、请教老师等）。 2. 与同学们的互动和交流（如互相帮助、分享采摘技巧等）。 3. 结束后的整理工作 2. 如何整理采摘的果实（如分类、装箱等）。 2. 清理劳动园地（如收拾工具、打扫地面等）。 三、活动感想 1. 个人收获 2. 对劳动的新认识（如体会到劳动的艰辛与快乐、懂得珍惜劳动成果等）。 2. 学到的知识和技能（如关于农作物生长的知识、采摘技巧等）。 2. 团队合作方面 2. 感受团队合作的重要性（如在解决问题、提高效率等方面的作用）。 2. 与同学们关系的增进（如更加了解彼此、合作更加默契等）。 3. 对未来的期望 2. 希望参与更多类似活动。 2. 鼓励 Jennie 也尝试参与此类活动（如果有机会的话）。 语言积累 活动过程 1. We gathered at the school gate early in the morning and then walked to the labor garden in an excited mood. 2. Upon arriving, we saw a variety of fruits and vegetables, and the teacher assigned us different areas to start the picking. 3. I was in the group picking grapes. We carefully cut the bunches of grapes from the vines, making sure not to damage the plants. 4. Some of us had to climb ladders to reach the higher fruits, while others collected the fallen ones on the ground. 5. We filled our baskets with the fresh produce and then carried them to the designated area for sorting and weighing. 感想 1. This activity made me realize the hard work and effort that farmers put into growing food, and I will cherish food more in the future. 2. I learned a lot about different fruits and vegetables and their growth processes, which broadened my knowledge. 3. Working together with my classmates enhanced our teamwork and communication skills, and we had a great time helping each other. 4. The fresh air and beautiful scenery in the labor garden made me feel closer to nature and relaxed my mind. 5. I'm really grateful for this experience as it not only brought me joy but also taught me valuable lessons about life and labor. 写作示范一 Dear Jennie, How are you? I'm writing to share an amazing experience we had last Saturday - a picking activity in our school's labor garden. When we arrived at the labor garden, we were greeted by a vibrant sight. There were rows of fruit trees laden with apples, pears, and various vegetables growing healthily. Everyone was excited and couldn't wait to start. We were divided into several groups. My group was responsible for picking apples. Some apples were high up in the trees, and we had to use ladders to reach them. We also learned to tell if an apple was ripe by its color and texture. While picking, we helped each other and shared tips on how to pick fruits without damaging them. After we finished picking, we carefully sorted and packed the fruits and vegetables. We then cleaned up the garden, putting away the tools and tidying the ground. This activity made me realize the joy and hard work of labor. I learned a lot about farming and gained practical skills. Through teamwork, we achieved our goals more efficiently and deepened our friendships. I truly hope to have more opportunities to participate in such activities in the future. I think you would also enjoy it if you had a chance to try. Yours, Li Hua 写作示范二 Dear Jennie, Hi Jennie! I want to tell you about the wonderful picking activity we had last Saturday in our school's labor garden. The labor garden had a large strawberry patch. As we entered, the sweet smell of strawberries filled the air, and everyone was in high spirits. We each got a small basket and started picking. We had to be careful not to step on the plants while looking for the ripest strawberries. It was a bit tricky as some strawberries were hidden under the leaves. We learned that redder and firmer strawberries were usually the tastiest. We chatted and laughed with our classmates as we picked, sharing our discoveries. After filling our baskets, we weighed and recorded our harvest. Then we helped clean the area around the strawberry patch. This experience taught me the value of patience and attention to detail in harvesting. I also felt a sense of accomplishment from gathering our own fresh strawberries. Working together with my classmates made the activity even more enjoyable. It made me appreciate the effort that goes into growing food. I hope you can have a similar experience someday. It's really unforgettable. Yours, Li Hua 写作示范三 Dear Jennie, How's it going? I'm excited to share with you the picking activity that took place in our school's labor garden last Saturday. When we got to the garden, it was a beautiful scene with different kinds of plants. We were excited to see the fruits and vegetables ready to be picked. We were divided into teams. I was in the team responsible for picking tomatoes. We had to be careful not to break the branches while picking. We faced the challenge of finding the ripest tomatoes, and we learned to judge by their color and firmness. During the process, we encouraged each other and worked together smoothly. After the picking, we helped sort the produce and clean up the garden tools. This activity made me understand the importance of hard work and perseverance. I not only learned about the growth cycle of plants but also improved my teamwork skills. It made me more aware of the connection between nature and our lives. I'm looking forward to more activities like this in the future. I believe you would also find it meaningful if you could experience it. Yours, Li Hua 参考范文 Dear Jennie, Our class participated in a harvest activity at our school’s labor garden last Saturday. I am writing to share this experience with you. The day began with our teacher explaining the significance of hard work and the value of food. Then, equipped with baskets and gloves, we were divided into teams to pick tomatoes and cucumbers. As we filled our baskets, the satisfaction of harvesting something we had helped grow was immense. This experience was not only fun but also deeply educational. Hope we can plan a similar activity together someday. Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$