内容正文:
应用文写作
假如你是李华,你校外教Ryan想了解上周你参加的学校社团活动情况,请按照要求给Ryan写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 你的经历;2. 你的感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
写作提纲
一、邮件开头
1. 表达写信目的:向 Ryan 介绍上周参加的学校社团活动情况。
2. 简要提及对活动的总体感受,如兴奋、有趣等,引起外教兴趣。
二、活动经历描述
1. 介绍参加的社团活动具体内容(如绘画比赛、音乐表演排练、科学实验等)。
1. 描述活动的准备过程(如准备绘画工具、练习曲目、准备实验材料等)。
2. 讲述活动进行中的关键环节和自己的参与情况(如在绘画比赛中构思画作、在音乐表演中演奏乐器、在科学实验中操作步骤等)。
2. 遇到的困难及解决办法
2. 阐述遇到的问题(如绘画灵感缺乏、音乐演奏失误、实验结果不理想等)。
2. 说明如何解决这些问题(如参考其他作品获取灵感、多次练习纠正失误、与团队成员讨论改进实验方法等)。
三、活动感受
1. 个人成长方面
2. 技能提升(如绘画技巧提高、音乐水平进步、科学知识增长等)。
2. 心态变化(如变得更自信、更有耐心、更勇于尝试等)。
2. 社交方面
2. 结识新朋友,与社团成员合作的感受(如团队协作的愉快、互相学习的氛围等)。
3. 对未来的影响
2. 对继续参加社团活动的热情增加。
2. 对学习和生活的积极态度的促进作用。
语言积累
经历描述
1. I joined the photography club's outdoor shooting activity last week. We went to a beautiful park with diverse landscapes.
2. I carefully adjusted my camera settings, such as aperture and shutter speed, to capture the perfect shot of the flowers in bloom.
3. We also had to deal with changing lighting conditions as the sun moved across the sky, which required constant adaptation.
4. I explored different angles and perspectives to make my photos more unique, like getting down low to photograph a small insect on a leaf.
5. In the process, I learned from senior club members about composition techniques and how to use natural elements to enhance the visual impact of the photos.
感受表达
1. This experience made me feel extremely excited and fulfilled as I was able to capture the beauty of nature through my lens.
2. I became more patient as photography demands waiting for the right moment and the perfect lighting.
3. It enhanced my creativity as I had to think outside the box to create interesting and eye-catching images.
4. I felt a stronger sense of connection with nature, appreciating its details and nuances that I might have overlooked before.
5. I'm now more motivated to continue learning and improving my photography skills, and I look forward to participating in more club activities to further develop my passion.
写作示范一
Dear Ryan,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm writing to share with you my wonderful experience in the school calligraphy club activity last week.
In the calligraphy club, we were focusing on learning traditional Chinese calligraphy styles. I prepared my writing brushes, ink, and paper carefully before the activity. During the session, I practiced writing different characters, paying attention to the stroke order and the intensity of the brushstrokes. It was a bit challenging at first as I struggled to control the brush properly, but I didn't give up. I watched some instructional videos and asked the club seniors for advice. Through continuous efforts, I gradually improved my calligraphy skills.
This activity made me feel a deep sense of accomplishment. I not only learned a valuable traditional art form but also became more patient and focused. I made some new friends in the club who share the same interest. We encouraged and learned from each other, creating a great learning atmosphere. I'm now more enthusiastic about participating in such activities and believe it will have a positive impact on my study and life, helping me cultivate a better state of mind and aesthetic taste.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范二
Dear Ryan,
How are you? I'm excited to tell you about the school robot club competition I took part in last week.
Our robot club was preparing for a regional robotics competition. We spent days assembling the robot and programming it to perform specific tasks. Before the competition, we tested and adjusted the robot repeatedly to ensure its optimal performance. During the event, we faced some technical glitches when the robot didn't respond as expected. However, our team worked quickly and collaboratively. We checked the circuitry, reprogrammed some parts, and finally got the robot back on track.
This experience gave me a strong sense of achievement and growth. I improved my problem-solving skills and learned the importance of teamwork under pressure. I also got to know more about the field of robotics, which sparked my greater interest in science and technology. I feel more confident in my abilities and look forward to future challenges in the club. It has truly been an unforgettable and valuable experience that will motivate me to keep exploring and learning in this area.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范三
Dear Ryan,
I'm writing to let you know about my interesting experience in the school English speech club activity last week.
In the club, we were preparing for an English speech contest. I spent a lot of time researching and writing my speech, choosing a topic that I'm passionate about - the importance of environmental protection. Then I practiced my pronunciation, intonation, and gestures repeatedly. Before the actual performance, I was quite nervous. But when I stepped onto the stage, I reminded myself to stay calm and focus on delivering my message.
Through this activity, I've made significant progress in my English speaking skills. I became more confident in expressing myself in public and also learned how to better convey my ideas and emotions. I got to interact with many fellow students who have the same interest in English. We shared our experiences and learning methods, which broadened my horizons. This experience has inspired me to continue working hard on improving my English and to actively participate in more such activities in the future. It has added a lot of color and value to my school life.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范四
Dear Ryan,
I'm excited to tell you about the school club activity I participated in last week. It was a drama club event where we were rehearsing for a short play.
I got the role of a main character, which was both challenging and exciting. We spent hours practicing our lines, working on our expressions and movements. Through this process, I not only improved my acting skills but also learned how to cooperate better with my fellow club members. We faced some difficulties in understanding the character's emotions at first, but with the help of our club advisor and through continuous discussions and practices, we overcame them.
This experience made me feel a great sense of achievement. It also enhanced my confidence and made me more passionate about participating in such activities in the future. It was truly a memorable and valuable time.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
Dear Ryan,
Hearing that you wanted to know some information about the club activity, I'm delighted to share my experience of participating in the school calligraphy club last week.
The session was incredibly enriching. As I observed the master demonstrating the calligraphy, I was deeply attracted by the art. I was also struck by the masters’ elegant and amazing works. The art of calligraphy requires patience and focus, which I found both challenging and rewarding. While dipping my brush into the ink and practicing writing, I felt peaceful and calm.
Not only did I practise my artistic skills through calligraphy club activity but also learned the importance of patience and discipline. If our clubs can provide more opportunities for members to showcase their works, that will be better.
Yours,
Li Hua
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