2025届高考英语读后续写专题之个人成长类--特殊的 “爷孙” 情谊：从请求到成长 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My family moved in a small house in Brighton, Colorado on my seventh birthday. My first memory is our neighbor Bill, an old man, handing me strawberries from his garden through a hole in the chain-link fence. “We need to make the hole bigger,” he said jokingly. Later I knew that he lived alone. Bill spent much time working in the garden, and I was always talking to him from our yard. I was a chatterbox. I think what drew me to Bill is that he never got tired of listening to me. I also think Bill saw a lot of himself in me — we were both lonely and anxious — and that may be why he always took the time to listen to me. It was a wonderful connection. There weren’t any kids of my age in the neighborhood, and my parents were very busy, so I mostly played in the yard with my dog. I had a lot of imaginary friends — a whole family, actually, with a wife, children, a best friend... no joke. Weird kid. One day, my parents asked Bill whether he’d watch me while they were away on business. This worked for everyone, so it became a somewhat monthly occurrence. Bill had a spare room in his house, which became “my” room. Bill promised to teach me to drive the lawn tractor(割草机) someday and I was always looking forward to it. In winter, Bill would attach a snowplow(铲雪机) to the front of the dawn tractor. I seriously told him that I would invent a better snowplow when I grew up. “Sure you will. You’ll get a patent certificate. It takes a certificate to prove an important thing,” Bill said with a smile. One snowy morning, an idea suddenly hit me. My parents were watching TV when I spit it out, “What if I adopted Bill as my grandpa?” My parents said I could go over and ask him. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I knocked on his door, sat down in his living room, and asked, “Can I adopt you as my grandpa?” ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next morning, while learning to drive the lawn tractor with a snowplow, I accidentally plowed down our chain-link fence. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文章大意 文章讲述了作者七岁时搬到科罗拉多州布赖顿的一个小房子，邻居比尔是个独居老人，常和作者交流，作者孤独且爱幻想，因附近没有同龄孩子且父母忙，常与比尔相处。比尔会让作者在他外出时帮忙照看房子，还答应教作者开割草机，作者甚至说长大后要发明更好的铲雪机。一个下雪的早晨，作者突发奇想想要收养比尔做爷爷，并得到父母同意后去询问比尔。 （一）伏笔及呼应 1. 孤独的共鸣：文中提到作者和比尔都孤独且焦虑，这为他们之间深厚的情感连接埋下伏笔。在续写中，作者想要收养比尔为爷爷，进一步体现了这种情感的升华和彼此对陪伴的渴望，呼应了孤独这一伏笔。 2. 对发明的憧憬：作者说长大后要发明更好的铲雪机，比尔对此给予鼓励，这暗示了作者对未来的憧憬和积极向上的心态。在后续故事中，可能会围绕作者的创造力和积极行动展开，如在与比尔的互动中继续展现对新事物的探索和尝试，呼应了这种对未来充满希望的伏笔。 3. 相处的频繁：父母经常让比尔照看作者，比尔的房间成为 “我的” 房间，这说明他们之间的关系日益亲密。在续写中，这种亲密关系可能会进一步发展，如作者在比尔家发生的故事，体现他们如同爷孙般的相处模式，呼应了之前频繁相处的情节。 （二）续写要点 第一段： 1. 比尔的反应：描述比尔听到作者请求后的表情和反应，可能是惊讶、感动等，然后给出他的回应，比如欣然接受或者和作者进行一番温暖的对话，表达他对作者的喜爱和愿意成为 “爷爷” 的心情。 2. 情感的交流：作者和比尔进一步交流彼此的感受，分享这种特殊关系对他们各自的意义，强调他们之间情感的加深和互相带来的温暖与陪伴。 第二段： 1. 意外的发生：详细描述作者开着带铲雪机的割草机撞倒围栏的场景，包括作者的惊慌失措和当时的心理活动，以及可能对周围环境造成的影响。 2. 解决与成长：讲述比尔和作者如何一起面对这个意外，比尔可能会借此机会教导作者关于责任和解决问题的方法，作者从中吸取教训并有所成长，体现他们之间不仅有亲情的温暖，还有在生活中相互学习和支持的关系，进一步升华主题。 （三）故事线 以作者与比尔的特殊友谊为基础，经历作者想要收养比尔为爷爷的请求以及在学习开割草机时发生意外等事件，展现他们之间情感的发展和在生活中相互陪伴、共同成长的过程，从陌生的邻居关系逐渐发展为类似爷孙的亲密关系，并通过意外事件体现他们在相处中面临的挑战和从中获得的成长。 （四）情感线 从作者最初对比尔的好奇和依赖，到想要建立更亲密的关系提出收养请求时的期待和渴望，再到发生意外后的紧张和愧疚，以及在比尔的引导下解决问题后的成长和感悟，情感经历了多个层次的变化，突出了在特殊关系中人与人之间情感的丰富性和在经历中不断成长的主题。 二、主旨升华句 1. True relationships are built on love, trust, and the willingness to embrace each other in the journey of life, no matter what age or circumstance.（真正的关系建立在爱、信任和在人生旅程中彼此接纳的意愿之上，无论年龄或环境如何。） 2. In the simple moments of sharing and caring, we find the most precious treasures of life — the unbreakable bonds of friendship and family.（在分享和关爱的简单时刻，我们找到了生命中最珍贵的宝藏 —— 友谊和家庭牢不可破的纽带。） 3. Every interaction is an opportunity for growth, and when we open our hearts to others, we create a world filled with warmth and meaning.（每一次互动都是成长的机会，当我们向他人敞开心扉时，我们创造了一个充满温暖和意义的世界。） 4. The power of connection lies not in the grand gestures but in the small, everyday acts of kindness and understanding that bring people closer together.（连接的力量不在于宏大的姿态，而在于日常的小善举和理解，这些能让人们更亲近。） 5. Through the joys and challenges of life, the relationships we build become the pillars that support us, teaching us about love, responsibility, and the beauty of human connection.（在生活的欢乐和挑战中，我们建立的关系成为支撑我们的支柱，教会我们关于爱、责任和人类联系的美好。） 写作范文一 I knocked on his door, sat down in his living room, and asked, “Can I adopt you as my grandpa?” Bill's eyes widened in surprise for a moment, and then a warm smile spread across his face. He reached out and patted my head gently. "Of course, you can, kiddo," he said in a soft voice. I could feel the happiness bubbling up inside me. We talked about how much fun we would have together as a "grandpa-grandkid" pair. Bill told me he was honored that I wanted him to be a part of my family in this way. From that day on, our relationship seemed to grow even stronger. We spent more time together, sharing stories and laughing. The next morning, while learning to drive the lawn tractor with a snowplow, I accidentally plowed down our chain-link fence. I was so scared and worried that I had done something wrong. Bill came running over, but instead of getting angry, he comforted me. He said accidents happen and it was a good opportunity to learn how to fix things. Together, we worked to repair the fence. Bill taught me how to use tools and be responsible for my actions. Through this experience, I not only learned practical skills but also understood the importance of facing mistakes and taking responsibility. Our bond became even deeper as we overcame this little mishap together, and I realized that having Bill as my "grandpa" was the best thing that had happened to me. 写作范文二 I knocked on his door, sat down in his living room, and asked, “Can I adopt you as my grandpa?” Bill was taken aback at first, but then his face lit up with a big smile. He hugged me and said, "I'd be delighted to be your grandpa, my dear." We both felt a sense of joy and warmth filling the room. We spent the next few hours chatting about all the things we would do together as a family. I told him about my imaginary friends and he listened with interest, just as he always did. It felt like a dream come true to have a "grandpa" like him. The next morning, while learning to drive the lawn tractor with a snowplow, I accidentally plowed down our chain-link fence. Panic set in, but Bill's calm voice reassured me. He said it was okay and that we could fix it together. He showed me how to assess the damage and how to start the repair process. As we worked on the fence, he told me stories about his own mistakes when he was young and how he learned from them. I realized that this was not just about fixing a fence but about learning life lessons. With Bill's guidance, I learned about patience, perseverance, and taking responsibility. Our relationship became more meaningful through this experience, and I knew that our special bond would continue to grow stronger as we faced more adventures together. I was grateful to have Bill in my life, not just as a neighbor but as my beloved "grandpa." 官方答案： I knocked on his door, sat down in his living room, and asked, “Can I adopt you as my grandpa?” Bill stood frozen for a little while before a broad smile came across his face. Then I saw tears in his eyes. He wrapped me in his arms and buried his face in my coat to hide his tears, his voice trembling, “Of course, sweetheart! I’m so happy to be your grandpa!” Soon after, Bill printed out an adoption certificate and hung it on the wall of “my” room. Gazing at the snow outside, Bill said to me excitedly, “It’s time to learn how to drive a lawn tractor.” The next morning, while learning to drive the lawn tractor with a snowplow, I accidentally plowed down our chain-link fence. I was almost frightened to tears, but Bill just chuckled in his laid-back way and comforted me, “Don’t worry, Grandson. I have already planned to change a fence.” We eventually replaced it with a nice, tall wooden fence. My dad and Bill installed it together. What impressed me most was that there was a door on the fence, which definitely strengthened our connection. Underneath, I knew that we were a true family now. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$