36 吉林-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

36 吉林 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在引导学生关注在生活中遇到问题时应采取的积极态度和行动，即学会向他人寻求帮助，培养学生解决问题的能力和积极的心态。 内容把握：短文内容先强调了积极应对问题并寻求帮助的重要性，接着通过作者自身英语语法薄弱向老师求助并取得进步的经历进行具体说明，最后给出了向身边人求助和上网搜索等寻求帮助的方法，内容完整且逻辑清晰。 能力考查：考查学生的英语表达能力、逻辑思维能力以及对所学知识的运用能力。例如，运用了时间状语从句、定语从句等语法结构，还使用了“because of”“in a word”等短语。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，培养学生用英语描述个人经历、表达观点和想法的能力，同时也注重对语法、词汇等基础知识的考查。 （2024·吉林·中考真题）当我们遇到自己无法解决的问题或烦恼时，应该学会积极向他人寻求帮助。请以“Asking for Help”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括： （1）积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性； （2）寻求帮助的益处； （3）结合生活经历，简述你或他人寻求帮助的一个事例； （4）提供寻求帮助的方法(至少两个)。 写作要求： （1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； （2）词数90—100，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数； （3）书写规范，卷面整洁； （4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Asking for Help There might be some problems or worries in life.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Asking for Help There might be some problems or worries in life. When we encounter problems or troubles that we cannot solve ourselves, we should learn to actively seek help from others. It’s important to ask for help, and it will help you relax. Last year, my English grammar was weak. Because of this problem, my English was not good. So I went to ask my English teacher for help. With the help of my teacher and my own efforts, my English score has gradually improved. Now I’ve really learned how to learn lessons myself. In a word, it is normal to have problems. When we meet problems, we can ask people around us for help, such as teachers, classmates or parents. In addition, we can also search the Internet for solutions. 【知识点】个人经历、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性以及寻求帮助的益处； 第二步，结合生活经历，简述自己寻求帮助的一个事例； 第三步，最后给出提供寻求帮助的方法。 [亮点词汇] ① ask for help寻求帮助 ② because of因为 ③ in a word总之 [高分句型] When we encounter problems or troubles that we cannot solve ourselves, we should learn to actively seek help from others.（when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的定语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在引导青少年关注自我成长，培养自我反思的意识和能力，通过写作的方式让学生深入思考自己的优点和不足，并提出改进和保持的方法，同时倡导自我反思的习惯。 内容把握：要求学生结合自身的成长历程，从学习、运动、劳动等方面展开，内容要具体、真实，能够体现自我反思的过程和结果。 能力考查：考查学生的英语语言表达能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、句子结构合理等；同时也考查学生的逻辑思维能力，能否清晰、有条理地阐述观点。 课标要求：符合英语课程标准中对学生写作能力的培养要求，即能够用英语表达个人的想法和经历，并且能够运用所学的语言知识进行有效的书面交流。 （2023·吉林·中考真题）青少年应勤于反思，在自我反思中正确认识自己、不断完善自己。请以“Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better”为题，结合自己的成长历程，从学习、运动、劳动等方面，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括： （1）结合实际，谈谈自我反思的重要性； （2）列举自身存在的至少一个优点，并据此提出如何保持优点的方法； （3）列举自身存在的至少一处不足，并据此提出如何改进不足的方法； （4）发出自我反思的倡议。 写作要求： （1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； （2）词数90-100，开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数； （3）书写规范，卷面整洁； （4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇：self-reflection n. 自我反思        reflect on sth. 反思（往事） Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better. Through self-reflection, we can find out the advantages and disadvantages of what we did, and strive to do it perfectly the next time. I like reading. It can not only increase my knowledge, but also open my eyes. If you want to develop a good habit of reading, you must stick to the good habit of reading, and keep writing after reading to improve your interest in reading. But I sometimes read so inaccurately that some of the author’s intentions cannot be understood. In the future I will read sentence by sentence to get rid of this bad habit. So let’s do some serious self-reflection together to make us better ourselves. 【知识点】哲理感悟 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，谈谈自我反思的重要性； 第二步，列举自身存在的至少一个优点，并据此提出如何保持优点的方法；列举自身存在的至少一处不足，并据此提出如何改进不足的方法； 第三步，发出自我反思的倡议。 [亮点词汇] ①strive to do努力做 ②not only…but also不但……而且…… ③develop a good habit of培养成一个……的好习惯 ④get rid of摆脱 [高分句型] ①We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better.（because引导原因状语从句） ②If you want to develop a good habit of reading, you must stick to the good habit of reading, and keep writing after reading to improve your interest in reading.（if引导的条件状语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在引导青少年关注自我管理能力的培养，让他们认识到随着年龄增长，独立和自我管理的重要性。 内容把握：题目要求结合实际谈重要性、列举薄弱现象并提建议，最后发出号召。内容涵盖了青少年生活的多个方面，需要学生有一定的观察和思考能力。 能力考查：考查学生的英语表达能力、逻辑思维能力以及对生活现象的分析和解决问题的能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用、思维发展和文化意识培养的要求，鼓励学生用英语表达自己的观点和想法，同时培养他们的社会责任感和自主意识。 （2022·吉林·中考真题）随着年龄的增长，青少年需要在生活中不断提高自我管理能力，以便在衣、食、住、行等方面更好地管理自己。请以“Learning to Manage Our Own Lives”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1.结合实际，谈谈在生活中提高自我管理能力的重要性。 2.列举在生活中自我管理能力薄弱的现象(至少两个)，并提出合理化建议。 3.发出在生活中提高自我管理能力的号召。 写作要求： 1.语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥。 2.词数80-100，开头与结尾部分已经给出，不计入总词数。 3.书写规范，卷面整洁。 4.文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Learning to Manage Our Own Lives These days, we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In short, the earlier we manage our own lives, the better it is for our future. 【满分优秀范文】 Learning to Manage Our Own Lives These days, we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives. we can’t deal with difficulties by ourselves. So it’s important for us to learn to manage our own lives. I think our parents should believe in us and never do everything for us. Sometimes it’s OK to give us proper advice and they should allow us to make our own decisions. Also, I think parents should encourage us to face the problems bravely and try to solve them. For me, I seldom did housework in the past, because I thought it is our parents’ work. This is a wrong opinion. We should learn to do housework like sweeping the floor and taking out the rubbish. I hardly cooked either. When my mother was on business, I realized I must learn to cook by myself. After that, I find that cooking is not as difficult as it seems. In short, the earlier we manage our own lives, the better it is for our future. 【知识点】意见/建议、叙事忆旧、青少年问题 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“学习管理我们自己的生活”为题写一篇短文。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。本文分为四段式：第一段引出主题；第二段谈谈在生活中提高自我管理能力的重要性；第三段列举在生活中自我管理能力薄弱的现象；第四段发出在生活中提高自我管理能力的号召。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题主要是想让同学们通过写作，提高对自我保护这一主题的认识和理解，培养大家在日常生活中关注安全问题，并能够用英语清晰地表达自己的观点和想法。 内容把握： 题目要求同学们结合生活实际，阐述自我保护的重要性，列举至少两个方面的安全问题并给出建议，最后发出自我保护的号召。这就需要同学们对生活中的安全问题有一定的观察和思考。 能力考查： 考查了同学们的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、逻辑清晰、语言表达等方面。同时，也考查了同学们对生活中安全问题的分析和解决问题的能力。 课标要求： 符合英语课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，让同学们在实际情境中运用所学的英语知识。 解题思路： 1. 确定结构 • 开头引出话题，阐述人们对安全问题的关注。 • 中间详细列举安全问题及建议，如交友、交通、饮食、防疫等方面。 • 结尾发出自我保护的呼吁。 2. 内容要点 • 自我保护的重要性要阐述清晰，比如从保障自身健康和安全等角度。 • 安全问题及建议要具体且合理，结合实际生活。 • 语言表达要准确、流畅，符合英语的语法和表达习惯。 （2021·吉林·中考真题）在日常生活中，人们会遇到交友、饮食、交通或防疫等安全问题。请以“Self Protection”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1.结合生活实际，谈谈自我保护的重要性。 2.列举生活中的安全问题（至少两个方面），并分别提出合理化建议。 3.发出自我保护的号召。 写作要求： 1.语言流畅，层次清晰，可以适当发挥。 2.词数80-100词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；书写规范，卷面整洁。 3.文中不能出现考生本人的学校名称和姓名。 Self Protection These days, people pay more attention to safety problems. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In short, self protection is important to us. Wish everyone a safe life! 【满分优秀范文】： Self Protection These days, people pay more attention to safety problems. As students, we have to go to school every weekday. On the way to school we need go across the road sometimes. If we are not careful enough, we may be hit by a car. So we have to learn to protect ourselves. But how can we protect ourselves? First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, don’t cross the street when the lights are red. Also, we should eat healthily and safely. These three suggestions are good for us to protect ourselves. We should adopt these suggestions to protect ourselves. In short, self protection is important to us. Wish everyone a safe life! 【知识点】意见/建议、自我保护 【详解】1.题干解读：本题为话题作文，要求以“Self Protection”为题写一篇关于自我保护的文章。题目已给出三个方面要点提示，学生应对几个要点进行叙述。 2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，时态应用一般现在时或在叙述过去发生的事情时用过去时。文章包含三个要点提示，第一个是结合生活实际来讲述自我保护的重要性，第二个是关于自我保护的一些建议，第三个是号召大家进行自我保护。文章应要点齐全，层次分明，条理清楚，不要出现单词拼写、语法时态使用错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题旨在培养学生对文明行为的关注和思考，提高学生的社会责任感，同时考查学生的英语写作能力和语言表达能力。 内容把握： 演讲稿内容需涵盖不文明现象及其影响、争做文明中学生的建议以及发出号召。两个版本都很好地完成了这些要点。 能力考查： 考查学生观察生活、分析问题、组织语言和逻辑思维的能力。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对学生语言运用、文化意识和思维品质的培养要求。 解题思路： 首先，要仔细审题，明确题目要求。然后，结合生活实际，列举常见的不文明现象并分析其影响。接着，从不同方面提出切实可行的文明建议。最后，用有号召力的语言呼吁大家行动起来。 （2020·吉林·中考真题）假如你是李华，你所在的学校即将开展以“文明礼貌伴我行争做文明中学生”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请完成下面的演讲稿。 内容包括： 1. 列举生活中至少两种不文明现象并写出各自产生的影响； 2. 提出至少三条争做文明中学生的建议； 3. 发出争做文明中学生的号召。 写作要求： 1. 词数80—100词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现真实的学校名称和姓名； 3. 可以适当发挥。 Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________     I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves.     That's all. Thanks for listening. 【满分优秀范文】一： Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However, some bad behavior can be seen around us. For example, some students throw rubbish everywhere, which makes the environment worse and worse. Some students are always shouting back angrily to their parents gradually the relations between them have become difficult. How can we behave well? First, I think we should be polite and kind to others. Be ready to help others in need. Second, try to be honest and keep promises. The most important thing is to follow the rules at school or in public. Let's pull together and take action from now on. I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves. That's all. Thanks for listening! 【满分优秀范文】二： Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However, we can hear some students talk loudly on the bus. What's worse, some students smoke in public places. These may make others uncomfortable and smoking is harmful to people's health to be better students. We should think of others and keep the voice down in public. And we should follow the traffic rules to make sure we are safe. Besides, we should try to be honest students and we shouldn't lie to others. Let's pull together and take action from now on. I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves. That's all. Thanks for listening. 【知识点】意见/建议、青少年问题 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于演讲稿写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据内容提示列举生活中至少两种不文明现象并写出各自产生的影响，提出至少三条争做文明中学生的建议并发出争做文明中学生的号召。 2.【满分优秀范文】点评：【满分优秀范文】主要用第三人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作。讲述争做文明中学生的建议分成三点来写，叙述完整且条理清晰。 3.高分亮点： 短语：care more about; in fact; for example; throw rubbish; shouting back; behave well; in need; try to; keep promises; follow the rules; pull together; take action; from now on；what's worse; is harmful to; think of; keep the voice down; in public; make sure; lie to。 句型：I think… 宾语从句；which引导的定语从句；as long as引导的条件状语从句；we should do表示建议的句子。 最新模拟 1．（2024·吉林松原·三模）同学们，我们对未来都充满美好的向往。你能设想一下20年后我们过着怎样的生活吗？请以“Our life in 20 years”为题，根据表格提示写一篇文章描述我们未来的生活。 学习 computer, at home 工作 robots, free time 生活 an easy life 交通 new energy cars, walk, ride a bike 环境 trees and flowers, sky 自由发挥 … 要求： 1. 须包括所有要点提示，并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 词数：90-100词；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Our life in 20 years Can you imagine what our life will be like in 20 years? I think we will have a better future. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I believe that our future must be more wonderful! 2．（2024·吉林·二模）良好的同学关系对我们的学习和生活至关重要。我们既要与同学建立良好的关系，但若遭遇不公平对待时，也要很好地保护自己。请你根据写作要求，以“How to get along with our classmates”为题，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。 内容包括： 1. 建立良好的同学关系的意义； 2. 举例说明不良的同学关系给我们带来的影响； 3. 谈谈日常生活中你是如何与同学建立良好的人际关系的 (至少两点)； 4. 受到不公平对待时应该如何保护自己。 写作要求：1. 语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； 2. 词数90-100，开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 书写规范，卷面整洁； 4. 文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 How to get along with our classmates Relations with our classmates usually have a strong influence on us. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·吉林松原·三模）九年磨一剑，中考试锋芒！忙碌又充实的初中学习生活即将结束，在装载你收获的行囊——成长记录袋中还应该增添一份你自己满意的答卷。请以“My Middle School Life”为题，写一份90-100词的自我评价。 My Middle School Life ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·吉林延边·一模）百善孝为先，孝道是中华民族的传统美德。父母为孩子不辞辛苦，身为子女，尽孝须及时。请根据下列提示以“Respecting Our Parents”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的想法。 内容包括： (1) 叙述一件父母为你做的事情，以及你的感受； (2) 你打算如何孝敬父母，请列出至少两条； (3) 表达孝敬父母的决心。 写作要求： (1) 语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； (2) 词数90-100，开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数； (3) 书写规范，卷面整洁； (4) 文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Respecting Our Parents Parents do a lot of things for us every day. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·吉林四平·三模）有人说，“人的一生只有健康和快乐是自己的。”可见健康对每个人都很重要，我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以“How to keep healthy?”为题，写一篇英语短文，向学校校刊投稿。 should（√） shouldn’t（×） do sports every day keep a balanced diet eat fruit and vegetables have enough sleep keep happy ... refuse to exercise have junk food stay up too late play computer games a lot sit for a long time 要求：1.短文必须包含以上表格中的至少4个要点信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名等信息 ； 3.词数90—100，短文开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 How to keep healthy? Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·吉林松原·三模）生活中，总有很多重要的人或者事情，帮助我们成长。比如：一本书、一句话、一次经历等等。请你以“________help/helps me grow up”为题，结合图示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要求：1. 短文需包含如图所示的所有要点； 2. 词数90~100； 3. 短文中不得泄露个人信息。 ________ help/helps me grow up _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·吉林松原·一模）健康对每个人都很重要，我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以“How to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇英语短文，向学校校刊投稿。 Should(√) Shouldn’t(×) do sports every day refuse to exercise keep a balanced diet have junk food eat fruit and vegetables stay up too late have enough sleep play computer games a lot keep healthy sit for a long time … … 写作要求: 1.语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可适当发挥； 2.词数90—100。开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3.书写规范，卷面整洁； 4.文中不得出现考生姓名和学校名称。 How to Keep Healthy Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·吉林白山·一模）走出书斋,畅游天下,外出旅行已经成为人们生活的一部分。人生中的每一次旅行都能给自己带来不一样的精彩。假如你是李华,准备参加某英文网站举办的“读万卷书,行万里路”的征文比赛。请你根据以下思维导图内容用英文写一篇投稿。 提示： 要求：1.要点齐全,结构完整;表达通顺,语言规范,书写清晰; 2.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息; 3.90-100词（作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数）。文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名及其他相关信息。 A person who loves traveling must like his life. As the saying goes, “Read ten thousand books, travel ten thousand miles.” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·吉林松原·二模）学习和生活中所遇到的各种困难或问题会给我们带来一些不良情绪，从而导致一些不良后果。而有效控制不良情绪却往往能带给我们解决困难的力量。某青少年英文网站以“How to control our feelings”为主题开展征文活动，请你给该网站投稿。 包括： 1. 阐述你成功管理情绪的一次经历； 2. 就如何有效管理情绪给出两点建议。 要求： 1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 2. 语句连贯，词数90-100词。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·吉林四平·一模）虽然我们与父母会有不同见解，但父母依然是我们最亲的人，请以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents”为题，用英语写一篇短文，与大家分享一下你的做法。 内容包括： 1. 与父母相处融洽的意义； 2. 分享你与父母亲和谐相处的做法； 3. 提出倡议。 写作要求： 1. 语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； 2. 词数90左右； 3. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 How to Get on Well with Our Parents ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 36 吉林 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在引导学生关注在生活中遇到问题时应采取的积极态度和行动，即学会向他人寻求帮助，培养学生解决问题的能力和积极的心态。 内容把握：短文内容先强调了积极应对问题并寻求帮助的重要性，接着通过作者自身英语语法薄弱向老师求助并取得进步的经历进行具体说明，最后给出了向身边人求助和上网搜索等寻求帮助的方法，内容完整且逻辑清晰。 能力考查：考查学生的英语表达能力、逻辑思维能力以及对所学知识的运用能力。例如，运用了时间状语从句、定语从句等语法结构，还使用了“because of”“in a word”等短语。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，培养学生用英语描述个人经历、表达观点和想法的能力，同时也注重对语法、词汇等基础知识的考查。 （2024·吉林·中考真题）当我们遇到自己无法解决的问题或烦恼时，应该学会积极向他人寻求帮助。请以“Asking for Help”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括： （1）积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性； （2）寻求帮助的益处； （3）结合生活经历，简述你或他人寻求帮助的一个事例； （4）提供寻求帮助的方法(至少两个)。 写作要求： （1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； （2）词数90—100，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数； （3）书写规范，卷面整洁； （4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Asking for Help There might be some problems or worries in life.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Asking for Help There might be some problems or worries in life. When we encounter problems or troubles that we cannot solve ourselves, we should learn to actively seek help from others. It’s important to ask for help, and it will help you relax. Last year, my English grammar was weak. Because of this problem, my English was not good. So I went to ask my English teacher for help. With the help of my teacher and my own efforts, my English score has gradually improved. Now I’ve really learned how to learn lessons myself. In a word, it is normal to have problems. When we meet problems, we can ask people around us for help, such as teachers, classmates or parents. In addition, we can also search the Internet for solutions. 【知识点】个人经历、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性以及寻求帮助的益处； 第二步，结合生活经历，简述自己寻求帮助的一个事例； 第三步，最后给出提供寻求帮助的方法。 [亮点词汇] ① ask for help寻求帮助 ② because of因为 ③ in a word总之 [高分句型] When we encounter problems or troubles that we cannot solve ourselves, we should learn to actively seek help from others.（when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的定语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在引导青少年关注自我成长，培养自我反思的意识和能力，通过写作的方式让学生深入思考自己的优点和不足，并提出改进和保持的方法，同时倡导自我反思的习惯。 内容把握：要求学生结合自身的成长历程，从学习、运动、劳动等方面展开，内容要具体、真实，能够体现自我反思的过程和结果。 能力考查：考查学生的英语语言表达能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、句子结构合理等；同时也考查学生的逻辑思维能力，能否清晰、有条理地阐述观点。 课标要求：符合英语课程标准中对学生写作能力的培养要求，即能够用英语表达个人的想法和经历，并且能够运用所学的语言知识进行有效的书面交流。 （2023·吉林·中考真题）青少年应勤于反思，在自我反思中正确认识自己、不断完善自己。请以“Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better”为题，结合自己的成长历程，从学习、运动、劳动等方面，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括： （1）结合实际，谈谈自我反思的重要性； （2）列举自身存在的至少一个优点，并据此提出如何保持优点的方法； （3）列举自身存在的至少一处不足，并据此提出如何改进不足的方法； （4）发出自我反思的倡议。 写作要求： （1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； （2）词数90-100，开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数； （3）书写规范，卷面整洁； （4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇：self-reflection n. 自我反思        reflect on sth. 反思（往事） Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better. Through self-reflection, we can find out the advantages and disadvantages of what we did, and strive to do it perfectly the next time. I like reading. It can not only increase my knowledge, but also open my eyes. If you want to develop a good habit of reading, you must stick to the good habit of reading, and keep writing after reading to improve your interest in reading. But I sometimes read so inaccurately that some of the author’s intentions cannot be understood. In the future I will read sentence by sentence to get rid of this bad habit. So let’s do some serious self-reflection together to make us better ourselves. 【知识点】哲理感悟 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，谈谈自我反思的重要性； 第二步，列举自身存在的至少一个优点，并据此提出如何保持优点的方法；列举自身存在的至少一处不足，并据此提出如何改进不足的方法； 第三步，发出自我反思的倡议。 [亮点词汇] ①strive to do努力做 ②not only…but also不但……而且…… ③develop a good habit of培养成一个……的好习惯 ④get rid of摆脱 [高分句型] ①We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better.（because引导原因状语从句） ②If you want to develop a good habit of reading, you must stick to the good habit of reading, and keep writing after reading to improve your interest in reading.（if引导的条件状语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在引导青少年关注自我管理能力的培养，让他们认识到随着年龄增长，独立和自我管理的重要性。 内容把握：题目要求结合实际谈重要性、列举薄弱现象并提建议，最后发出号召。内容涵盖了青少年生活的多个方面，需要学生有一定的观察和思考能力。 能力考查：考查学生的英语表达能力、逻辑思维能力以及对生活现象的分析和解决问题的能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用、思维发展和文化意识培养的要求，鼓励学生用英语表达自己的观点和想法，同时培养他们的社会责任感和自主意识。 （2022·吉林·中考真题）随着年龄的增长，青少年需要在生活中不断提高自我管理能力，以便在衣、食、住、行等方面更好地管理自己。请以“Learning to Manage Our Own Lives”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1.结合实际，谈谈在生活中提高自我管理能力的重要性。 2.列举在生活中自我管理能力薄弱的现象(至少两个)，并提出合理化建议。 3.发出在生活中提高自我管理能力的号召。 写作要求： 1.语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥。 2.词数80-100，开头与结尾部分已经给出，不计入总词数。 3.书写规范，卷面整洁。 4.文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Learning to Manage Our Own Lives These days, we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In short, the earlier we manage our own lives, the better it is for our future. 【满分优秀范文】 Learning to Manage Our Own Lives These days, we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives. we can’t deal with difficulties by ourselves. So it’s important for us to learn to manage our own lives. I think our parents should believe in us and never do everything for us. Sometimes it’s OK to give us proper advice and they should allow us to make our own decisions. Also, I think parents should encourage us to face the problems bravely and try to solve them. For me, I seldom did housework in the past, because I thought it is our parents’ work. This is a wrong opinion. We should learn to do housework like sweeping the floor and taking out the rubbish. I hardly cooked either. When my mother was on business, I realized I must learn to cook by myself. After that, I find that cooking is not as difficult as it seems. In short, the earlier we manage our own lives, the better it is for our future. 【知识点】意见/建议、叙事忆旧、青少年问题 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“学习管理我们自己的生活”为题写一篇短文。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。本文分为四段式：第一段引出主题；第二段谈谈在生活中提高自我管理能力的重要性；第三段列举在生活中自我管理能力薄弱的现象；第四段发出在生活中提高自我管理能力的号召。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题主要是想让同学们通过写作，提高对自我保护这一主题的认识和理解，培养大家在日常生活中关注安全问题，并能够用英语清晰地表达自己的观点和想法。 内容把握： 题目要求同学们结合生活实际，阐述自我保护的重要性，列举至少两个方面的安全问题并给出建议，最后发出自我保护的号召。这就需要同学们对生活中的安全问题有一定的观察和思考。 能力考查： 考查了同学们的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、逻辑清晰、语言表达等方面。同时，也考查了同学们对生活中安全问题的分析和解决问题的能力。 课标要求： 符合英语课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，让同学们在实际情境中运用所学的英语知识。 解题思路： 1. 确定结构 • 开头引出话题，阐述人们对安全问题的关注。 • 中间详细列举安全问题及建议，如交友、交通、饮食、防疫等方面。 • 结尾发出自我保护的呼吁。 2. 内容要点 • 自我保护的重要性要阐述清晰，比如从保障自身健康和安全等角度。 • 安全问题及建议要具体且合理，结合实际生活。 • 语言表达要准确、流畅，符合英语的语法和表达习惯。 （2021·吉林·中考真题）在日常生活中，人们会遇到交友、饮食、交通或防疫等安全问题。请以“Self Protection”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1.结合生活实际，谈谈自我保护的重要性。 2.列举生活中的安全问题（至少两个方面），并分别提出合理化建议。 3.发出自我保护的号召。 写作要求： 1.语言流畅，层次清晰，可以适当发挥。 2.词数80-100词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；书写规范，卷面整洁。 3.文中不能出现考生本人的学校名称和姓名。 Self Protection These days, people pay more attention to safety problems. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In short, self protection is important to us. Wish everyone a safe life! 【满分优秀范文】： Self Protection These days, people pay more attention to safety problems. As students, we have to go to school every weekday. On the way to school we need go across the road sometimes. If we are not careful enough, we may be hit by a car. So we have to learn to protect ourselves. But how can we protect ourselves? First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, don’t cross the street when the lights are red. Also, we should eat healthily and safely. These three suggestions are good for us to protect ourselves. We should adopt these suggestions to protect ourselves. In short, self protection is important to us. Wish everyone a safe life! 【知识点】意见/建议、自我保护 【详解】1.题干解读：本题为话题作文，要求以“Self Protection”为题写一篇关于自我保护的文章。题目已给出三个方面要点提示，学生应对几个要点进行叙述。 2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，时态应用一般现在时或在叙述过去发生的事情时用过去时。文章包含三个要点提示，第一个是结合生活实际来讲述自我保护的重要性，第二个是关于自我保护的一些建议，第三个是号召大家进行自我保护。文章应要点齐全，层次分明，条理清楚，不要出现单词拼写、语法时态使用错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题旨在培养学生对文明行为的关注和思考，提高学生的社会责任感，同时考查学生的英语写作能力和语言表达能力。 内容把握： 演讲稿内容需涵盖不文明现象及其影响、争做文明中学生的建议以及发出号召。两个版本都很好地完成了这些要点。 能力考查： 考查学生观察生活、分析问题、组织语言和逻辑思维的能力。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对学生语言运用、文化意识和思维品质的培养要求。 解题思路： 首先，要仔细审题，明确题目要求。然后，结合生活实际，列举常见的不文明现象并分析其影响。接着，从不同方面提出切实可行的文明建议。最后，用有号召力的语言呼吁大家行动起来。 （2020·吉林·中考真题）假如你是李华，你所在的学校即将开展以“文明礼貌伴我行争做文明中学生”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请完成下面的演讲稿。 内容包括： 1. 列举生活中至少两种不文明现象并写出各自产生的影响； 2. 提出至少三条争做文明中学生的建议； 3. 发出争做文明中学生的号召。 写作要求： 1. 词数80—100词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现真实的学校名称和姓名； 3. 可以适当发挥。 Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________     I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves.     That's all. Thanks for listening. 【满分优秀范文】一： Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However, some bad behavior can be seen around us. For example, some students throw rubbish everywhere, which makes the environment worse and worse. Some students are always shouting back angrily to their parents gradually the relations between them have become difficult. How can we behave well? First, I think we should be polite and kind to others. Be ready to help others in need. Second, try to be honest and keep promises. The most important thing is to follow the rules at school or in public. Let's pull together and take action from now on. I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves. That's all. Thanks for listening! 【满分优秀范文】二： Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However, we can hear some students talk loudly on the bus. What's worse, some students smoke in public places. These may make others uncomfortable and smoking is harmful to people's health to be better students. We should think of others and keep the voice down in public. And we should follow the traffic rules to make sure we are safe. Besides, we should try to be honest students and we shouldn't lie to others. Let's pull together and take action from now on. I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves. That's all. Thanks for listening. 【知识点】意见/建议、青少年问题 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于演讲稿写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据内容提示列举生活中至少两种不文明现象并写出各自产生的影响，提出至少三条争做文明中学生的建议并发出争做文明中学生的号召。 2.【满分优秀范文】点评：【满分优秀范文】主要用第三人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作。讲述争做文明中学生的建议分成三点来写，叙述完整且条理清晰。 3.高分亮点： 短语：care more about; in fact; for example; throw rubbish; shouting back; behave well; in need; try to; keep promises; follow the rules; pull together; take action; from now on；what's worse; is harmful to; think of; keep the voice down; in public; make sure; lie to。 句型：I think… 宾语从句；which引导的定语从句；as long as引导的条件状语从句；we should do表示建议的句子。 最新模拟 1．（2024·吉林松原·三模）同学们，我们对未来都充满美好的向往。你能设想一下20年后我们过着怎样的生活吗？请以“Our life in 20 years”为题，根据表格提示写一篇文章描述我们未来的生活。 学习 computer, at home 工作 robots, free time 生活 an easy life 交通 new energy cars, walk, ride a bike 环境 trees and flowers, sky 自由发挥 … 要求： 1. 须包括所有要点提示，并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 词数：90-100词；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Our life in 20 years Can you imagine what our life will be like in 20 years? I think we will have a better future. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I believe that our future must be more wonderful! 2．（2024·吉林·二模）良好的同学关系对我们的学习和生活至关重要。我们既要与同学建立良好的关系，但若遭遇不公平对待时，也要很好地保护自己。请你根据写作要求，以“How to get along with our classmates”为题，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。 内容包括： 1. 建立良好的同学关系的意义； 2. 举例说明不良的同学关系给我们带来的影响； 3. 谈谈日常生活中你是如何与同学建立良好的人际关系的 (至少两点)； 4. 受到不公平对待时应该如何保护自己。 写作要求：1. 语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； 2. 词数90-100，开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 书写规范，卷面整洁； 4. 文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 How to get along with our classmates Relations with our classmates usually have a strong influence on us. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·吉林松原·三模）九年磨一剑，中考试锋芒！忙碌又充实的初中学习生活即将结束，在装载你收获的行囊——成长记录袋中还应该增添一份你自己满意的答卷。请以“My Middle School Life”为题，写一份90-100词的自我评价。 My Middle School Life ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·吉林延边·一模）百善孝为先，孝道是中华民族的传统美德。父母为孩子不辞辛苦，身为子女，尽孝须及时。请根据下列提示以“Respecting Our Parents”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的想法。 内容包括： (1) 叙述一件父母为你做的事情，以及你的感受； (2) 你打算如何孝敬父母，请列出至少两条； (3) 表达孝敬父母的决心。 写作要求： (1) 语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； (2) 词数90-100，开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数； (3) 书写规范，卷面整洁； (4) 文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 Respecting Our Parents Parents do a lot of things for us every day. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·吉林四平·三模）有人说，“人的一生只有健康和快乐是自己的。”可见健康对每个人都很重要，我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以“How to keep healthy?”为题，写一篇英语短文，向学校校刊投稿。 should（√） shouldn’t（×） do sports every day keep a balanced diet eat fruit and vegetables have enough sleep keep happy ... refuse to exercise have junk food stay up too late play computer games a lot sit for a long time 要求：1.短文必须包含以上表格中的至少4个要点信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名等信息 ； 3.词数90—100，短文开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 How to keep healthy? Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·吉林松原·三模）生活中，总有很多重要的人或者事情，帮助我们成长。比如：一本书、一句话、一次经历等等。请你以“________help/helps me grow up”为题，结合图示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要求：1. 短文需包含如图所示的所有要点； 2. 词数90~100； 3. 短文中不得泄露个人信息。 ________ help/helps me grow up _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·吉林松原·一模）健康对每个人都很重要，我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以“How to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇英语短文，向学校校刊投稿。 Should(√) Shouldn’t(×) do sports every day refuse to exercise keep a balanced diet have junk food eat fruit and vegetables stay up too late have enough sleep play computer games a lot keep healthy sit for a long time … … 写作要求: 1.语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可适当发挥； 2.词数90—100。开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3.书写规范，卷面整洁； 4.文中不得出现考生姓名和学校名称。 How to Keep Healthy Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·吉林白山·一模）走出书斋,畅游天下,外出旅行已经成为人们生活的一部分。人生中的每一次旅行都能给自己带来不一样的精彩。假如你是李华,准备参加某英文网站举办的“读万卷书,行万里路”的征文比赛。请你根据以下思维导图内容用英文写一篇投稿。 提示： 要求：1.要点齐全,结构完整;表达通顺,语言规范,书写清晰; 2.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息; 3.90-100词（作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数）。文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名及其他相关信息。 A person who loves traveling must like his life. As the saying goes, “Read ten thousand books, travel ten thousand miles.” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·吉林松原·二模）学习和生活中所遇到的各种困难或问题会给我们带来一些不良情绪，从而导致一些不良后果。而有效控制不良情绪却往往能带给我们解决困难的力量。某青少年英文网站以“How to control our feelings”为主题开展征文活动，请你给该网站投稿。 包括： 1. 阐述你成功管理情绪的一次经历； 2. 就如何有效管理情绪给出两点建议。 要求： 1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 2. 语句连贯，词数90-100词。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·吉林四平·一模）虽然我们与父母会有不同见解，但父母依然是我们最亲的人，请以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents”为题，用英语写一篇短文，与大家分享一下你的做法。 内容包括： 1. 与父母相处融洽的意义； 2. 分享你与父母亲和谐相处的做法； 3. 提出倡议。 写作要求： 1. 语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； 2. 词数90左右； 3. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 How to Get on Well with Our Parents ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】 Our life in 20 years Can you imagine what our life will be like in 20 years? I think we will have a better future. In the future, computers can help us study at home easily. A lot of work will be done by robots, which means we have more free time. With the development of science and technology, our life will become simpler and simpler. I believe that new energy cars will replace ordinary cars. But we should still advocate walking or biking. There will be many trees and flowers in our city, and the sky will be bluer. In terms of diet, we will eat fresh and high-quality food. I believe that our future must be more wonderful! 【知识点】畅想未来 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我想我们会有一个更好的未来。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——20年后的学习、工作、生活、交通、环境等均要一一阐述； 第三步，书写结语。表达“我相信我们的未来一定更加精彩！”的美好。 [亮点词汇] ①With the development of 随着……的发展 ②simpler and simpler越来越简单 ③In terms of就……而言 [高分句型] ①A lot of work will be done by robots, which means we have more free time. (定语从句） ②I believe that our future must be more wonderful! (宾语从句) 2．【满分优秀范文】： How to get along with our classmates Relations with our classmates usually have a strong influence on us. Good relations can not only help us get out of trouble but also help us grow up healthily. However, bad relations will make us feel sad and disappointed, especially when we get into a fight with our classmates. So how can we get along with our classmates? Here are some of my ways. I think the key is to give love to whoever is in trouble. When I find my classmates going through a hard time, I will offer to help them without thinking twice. Besides giving love, respecting others is also important. When my friends and I have different opinions on something, I will listen to them patiently and respect their points. But what if we meet something unfair? I think we should first ask the teachers and parents for help because they have more experience and are always there to help us. If necessary, we must call for the police. 【知识点】意见/建议、友谊、青少年问题 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：材料所给内容请勿遗漏，文章多以第一人称视角叙述。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍同学关系的好坏对我们的意义和影响； 第二步，阐述与同学建立良好人际关系的方法； 第三步，讲述受到不公时应如何保护自己。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also...不仅……而且…… ②grow up长大 ③get into a fight打架 ④in trouble陷入困境 [高分句型] ①I think the key is to give love to whoever is in trouble. （宾语从句） ②When I find my classmates going through a hard time, I will offer to help them without thinking twice. （时间状语从句） 3．【满分优秀范文】： My Middle School Life How time flies! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. In the past, I was proud of myself because I got on well with my classmates and my grades were good. I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them. Now, I have many interests, such as reading books, playing sports and so on. In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life. As for the future, I’ve two dreams. One is to be a teacher, and the other is to be a volunteer. Helping others is my greatest happiness. Although I have made much progress, I’ll try my best to be better. Believing in myself is the key to success. 【知识点】叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时、一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”介绍自己的初中学习生活。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引言，导入正文； 第二步，介绍自己的初中学习生活； 第三步，总结。 [亮点词汇] ①be proud of 为……感到骄傲 ②get on well with 和……相处得很好 ③be busy doing sth 忙于做某事 [高分句型] ①In the past, I was proud of myself because I got on well with my classmates and my grades were good.（使用because引导的原因状语从句） ②Helping others is my greatest happiness.（使用非谓语动词） 4．【满分优秀范文】： Respecting Our Parents Parents do a lot of things for us every day. Once I had a fever, my mother stayed up all night to take care of me, which made me have a deeper understanding of my parents’ love. They not only give birth to us but also take good care of us. So showing respect to our parents is very necessary. We should show them our respect by doing small everyday things. For example, we can remember our parents’ birthdays and express our love on that day. We should also understand and care about them. They may feel tired after a busy day, so we can share housework to make them have a rest. Most importantly, we should work hard and look after ourselves. Good marks and our health are the best gifts to them. All in all, we should respect our parents, no matter how old we are. 【知识点】情感、家人和亲人、方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题目中的内容要求，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“父母为我做的事情以及我的感受”来引出下文中对如何孝敬父母的描述； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“尊重父母、理解和照顾父母、不让父母担心”三方面入手，重点介绍如何孝敬父母； ③第三步，书写结语。表达自己孝敬父母的决心。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also 不但……而且 ②give birth to 生育 ③take care of 照顾 ④care about 关心 ⑤have a rest 休息 ⑥look after 照顾 ⑦all in all 总之 [高分句型] ①Once I had a fever, my mother stayed up all night to take care of me, which made me have a deeper understanding of my parents’ love. （which引导的定语从句） ②They may feel tired after a busy day, so we can share housework to make them have a rest.（so连接的因果并列句） 5．【满分优秀范文】 How to keep healthy? Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy. Here are some things that we should do. First, we should do sports every day and keep a balanced diet. As for food, we should eat more fruit and vegetables. Besides, we should have enough sleep, it’s good for our health. The most important is that we should keep happy every day. On the other side, we shouldn’t harm our health. For example, we shouldn’t refuse to exercise, and having junk food too much is bad for us. Then we shouldn’t play computer games a lot and we shouldn’t sit for a long time. What’s more, we shouldn’t stay up too late, because it’s the most dangerous for us. All in all, if we follow these ways, each of us will have a healthy body. 【知识点】健康与运动、健康饮食、方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何保持健康； [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍一些应该做的事情； 第三步，介绍一些不应该做的事情； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①keep a balanced diet保持均衡饮食 ②be good for对……有好处 ③refuse to do sth.拒绝做某事 ④stay up late熬夜 ⑤all in all总的来说 [高分句型] ①The most important is that we should keep happy every day. (that引导的表语从句) ②What’s more, we shouldn’t stay up too late, because it’s the most dangerous for us. (because引导的原因状语从句) 6．【满分优秀范文】 Failure helps me grow up It’s known that failure is the mother of success. If we can learn to turn a failure into our advantage, we will learn another secret to success. What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees, without which we cannot arrive at the place where we hope to go. As long as we face it bravely, we will succeed one day. There was once a time when I had difficulty in maths. However hard I tried, my maths grade was still bad. Later, I failed to pass an important examination. Before I decided to give up, it was my maths teacher who gave me a hand and told me that failure could also teach us a lesson. What she told me encouraged me to face my maths problem bravely. Knowing the importance of failure, I was not afraid of maths any longer. Finally, my maths grades improved. Taking my experience into conclusion, everyone can conquer the unavoidable failure in our life so long as we have faith in ourselves. Treasure the failure, and you will win the treasure. 【知识点】叙事忆旧、哲理感悟 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏图示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全题目，开头引出本文主题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“什么帮助我成长、帮助我成长的原因、帮助我成长的方式等”几个方面进行阐述； 第三步，书写结语，发表感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①as long as只要 ②fail to do sth.没做成某事 ③give up放弃 [高分句型] ①If we can learn to turn a failure to our advantage, we will learn another secret to success. (if引导的条件状语从句) ②As long as we face it bravely, we will succeed one day. (as long as引导的条件状语从句) 7．【满分优秀范文】： How to Keep Healthy Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy. We should do sports every day. We shouldn’t refuse to exercise. Running for an hour every day is good for health. We should keep a balanced diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. We shouldn’t have junk food, because they are bad for health. We had better not stay up too late. Getting enough sleep is helpful. We shouldn’t play computer games a lot. It is bad for our eyes. Sitting for a long time is also bad for our health. We may feel pain in our shoulders and backs. We should have a happy mood. We can keep happy by listening to music and talking to our friends. And we shouldn’t be angry so often. It’s important to be healthy. 【知识点】意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出本文“如何保持健康”的主题。 第二步，根据提示材料提出建议。 第三步，书写结语。表明“健康很重要”。 [亮点词汇] ①do sports做运动 ②refuse to do拒绝做某事 ③stay up too late熬夜 [高分句型] ①Running for an hour every day is good for health. (动名词作主语) ②We shouldn’t have junk food, because they are bad for health. (because引导原因状语从句) 8．【满分优秀范文】： A person who loves traveling must like his life. As the saying goes, “Read ten thousand books, travel ten thousand miles.” I took a trip to Sanya with my friends last summer vacation. The trip was much more amazing than I had expected. I walked on the shore, collecting pebbles and shells. What impressed me most was the beautiful sunrise. I also tasted much delicious seafood. What’s more, I went snorkeling for the first time in my life. How exciting it was! Travelling can not only broaden our horizon but also help us to relax after a period of boring work. I have become much more independent after the trip and learnt how to make a plan before taking action. Travelling benefits us a lot. I hope all of us love travelling and enjoy our life. 【知识点】旅行 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时，一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述自己去三亚旅行的所见所闻。 第二步，写出旅行对我们的好处，可以放松心情，拓宽视野。 [亮点词汇] ①what’s more 此外 ②for the first time 第一次 ③not only…but also 不仅……而且 [高分句型] ①A person who loves traveling must like his life.（定语从句） ②I hope all of us love travelling and enjoy our life.（宾语从句） 9．【满分优秀范文】 Feelings play an important role in our life. If we manage our feelings well, everything can go on well. In my life, I have a lot of pressure on study. Sometimes I cry a lot. But once I took control of my bad feeling. In the final exam of junior high school, I did poorly. After I returned home, my mother severely criticized me. I felt very down. But I didn’t shout at her or cry. Instead, I chose to go running alone. Through running, I released my bad feeling and told myself to study harder to get good grades. I think there are two ways to manage feelings. The first is to release our bad feeling through exercise. The second is to share our bad feeling with our good friends. 【知识点】个人经历、意见/建议、情绪 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出管理好情绪的重要性； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。作者讲述一次成功管理情绪的经历； 第三步，书写结语。作者就如何有效管理情绪给出两点建议。 [亮点词汇] ①take control of…取得对……的控制 ②feel down情绪低落 ③shout at sb.对某人大喊 ④choose to do sth.选择做某事 ⑤share sth. with sb.与某人分享某事 [高分句型] ①If we manage our feelings well, everything can go on well. (if引导条件状语从句) ②I think there are two ways to manage feelings. (省略that的宾语从句) ③Through running, I released my bad feeling and told myself to study harder to get good grades. (并列复合句) 10．【满分优秀范文】 How to Get on Well with Our Parents Parents are the people who love us most. They care for us and take care of us. Without doubt we should get on well with them and respect them. Here are some of my ways to get on well with my parents. First of all, I often talk with my parents about my feelings and worries so that they can know me better. Sharing ideas can make us closer. What’s more, I am never rude to them even if we don’t agree with each other. Being polite is the key to a better relationship. Besides, I often find out the reasons why we have different ideas. Only in this way can we accept each other little by little. Let’s try our best to get on well with our parents. The more we do, the better relationship with our parents we will have. 【知识点】意见/建议、家庭关系 【详解】[总体分析] ①本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，阐述与父母相处融洽的意义。可以站在父母及自身两个角度阐述； 第二步，分条罗列自己与父母和谐相处的做法。 第三步，提出倡议，让更多的青少年意识到与父母相处融洽的意义，并能够与作者共情，真正做到身体力行。 [亮点词汇] ①without doubt毫无疑问 ②First of all...首先……；What’s more...其次…… ；Besides...除此以外…… [高分句型] ①Only in this way can we accept each other little by little.（倒装句） ②The more we do, the better relationship with our parents we will have.（the+比较级，the+比较级...“越……就越……”） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$