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征文投稿
一、“征文投稿”的写作规范
征文投稿是投稿人根据征稿要求进行的写作,所投稿件在内容上应紧贴主题,新颖、创新、实用,符合字数要求等。具体写作结构为:
[悟经典范例]
(2023·全国甲卷改编)你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.人物简介及事迹;
2.意义或启示。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
A Historical Figure in China
范文——熟读成诵,“仿”是最好的增分途径
A Historical Figure in China
Among the Chinese historical figures, Fan Zhongyan is the most influential in my opinion. Here are the reasons.
Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society. He spared no effort to carry out a series of reforms to make his country prosperous. Besides, he proposed founding a national school system, which had a farreaching influence on the Chinese educational system.
Fan Zhongyan is such a role model that he always encourages me to be a man of noble character.
[造高分亮点]
先声夺人开头句——点明目的
1.(2022·全国甲卷)June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day, which aims to raise people's awareness of protecting oceans.
2.(2022·全国乙卷)Recently, we conducted a survey concerning different ways to learn English beyond the classroom. The results are as follows.
引人入胜篇中句——介绍基本情况
3.(2022·全国甲卷)It goes without saying that oceans play a critical role in the world.
4.(2022·全国甲卷)Not only do they provide abundant resources and food for us, but they are also crucial for the global climate development.
5.(2022·全国甲卷)Additionally, oceans are the lungs of our planet, providing most of the oxygen we breathe.
画龙点睛结尾句——总结感想和祝福
6.(2022·全国甲卷)As high school students, it's our responsibility to protect oceans.
7.(2023·河北石家庄质检)In a word, if knowledge enriches the mind, then English adds wings.
[建写作模型]
Dear (收稿人),
I know (活动内容和地点). (现象表述). I have a strong desire to share my personal viewpoints on it.
From my perspective, (看法一). What's more, (看法二). Additionally, (看法三).
To put it in a nutshell, it is high time for us to (表达期待).
Yours sincerely,
(投稿人)
第二板块 实战演练(投稿信)
(2023·黑龙江大庆高三二模)你校英文报将以3月12日的“中国植树节(National Tree Planting Day)”为主题,举行征文比赛。请写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.简要介绍植树节;
2.说明树木的重要性;
3.呼吁履行植树义务。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Planting Trees for Our Future
Part1 正确审题
体裁
写作对象
人称与时态
要点
Part2 充实内容
纵向---要点多维度【多角度考】
简要介绍应该包含哪些信息?
时间/参与人/参与地点
树木的重要性体现在哪些方面?
环境
人类
野生动植物
呼吁植树义务
大家积极参与
坚持和努力
横向---细节要具体
What details can be added to the activities?
1.
2.
3.
第三板块:连句成篇
【参考范文】
Planting Trees for Our Future
National Tree Planting Day is held on 12 March every year, when millions of volunteers, both young and old, plant trees in schools, parks, city gardens and the countryside.
As we all know, trees are very important not only to the environment but also to humans. From improving air quality to fighting against climate change, trees play a vital role. In addition, they provide habitats and food for many species of wildlife.
Therefore, we each should do our bit by participating in voluntary tree planting activities. With perseverance and accumulated efforts, we will be able to make the environment better.
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