20 山东枣庄-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

20 山东枣庄 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题的命题意图在于激发学生的创新思维，让学生通过想象和描述发明一种物品，来展现他们对解决学习问题的思考和创造力。 能力考查：主要考查学生的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法掌握、逻辑组织和表达清晰的能力。同时，也考查学生对题目的理解和把握能力，能否全面反映图文信息。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，鼓励学生运用所学的英语知识进行有意义的表达和交流，培养学生的综合语言运用能力。通过描述发明物品，培养学生解决实际问题的意识和能力。 （2024·山东枣庄·中考真题）为了培养学生的发明和创新精神，学校将举行中学生科技创新大赛。假定你是李华，你准备发明一件物品，参加本次大赛。请你以“I want to invent ________”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的发明物。内容包括： 注意：（1）请先补全标题； （2）短文须全面反映图文信息； （3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； （4）词数 80~100。 I want to invent ________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 I want to invent a special pen I want to invent a special pen that can help students learn more efficiently. It looks like a normal pen. This pen will have a built-in dictionary and translation function, allowing students to look up words and translate sentences instantly. It will also have a voice recording feature, so students can record lectures and listen to them later. The pen will be lightweight and easy to carry, making it perfect for use in classrooms, libraries, and at home. I believe this pen will greatly enhance students’ learning experiences and make studying more enjoyable and effective. 【知识点】发明与创造 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，想要发明一种特殊的钢笔； 第二步，具体介绍发明这种钢笔的原因、外观和用途、使用场合； 第三步，进行评价。 [亮点词汇] ①look like 看起来像 ②look up 查阅 [高分句型] ①I want to invent a special pen that can help students learn more efficiently.（定语从句） ②I believe this pen will greatly enhance students’ learning experiences and make studying more enjoyable and effective.（省略that的宾语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在通过让学生写一篇关于最喜欢的书的发言稿，考查学生的英语书面表达能力，包括对书籍信息的描述、喜欢理由的阐述以及语言组织和逻辑思维能力。 能力考查：它考查了学生用英语准确表达思想、描述事物的能力，以及运用所学词汇、语法和句型来构建完整篇章的能力。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，即培养学生的综合语言运用能力，包括语言知识、语言技能、情感态度、学习策略和文化意识等方面。通过这样的题目，鼓励学生阅读并分享阅读体验，提高学生的文化素养和语言表达能力。 （2023·山东枣庄·中考真题）为了响应国家全民阅读的号召，你校将举办读书节。假如你是李华，请你以“My favourite book”为主题，写一篇英语发言稿，在读书分享会中介绍自己最喜欢的一本书， 内容包括： 1.书名、书的类型和主要内容； 2.你喜欢这本书的理由。 注意：1.词数80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Ladies and gentlemen, I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad to share my favourite book with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for your attention. 【满分优秀范文】 Ladies and gentlemen, I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad to share my favourite book with you. My favorite book is Journey to the West. It is one of the Four Great Classical Novels in China. It was written by Wu Cheng’en, a great writer in ancient China. The story tells us about four main characters. They are Tang Monk, the Monkey King , Piggie and Monk Sha. They get over many difficulties on the way to the West. Finally, they make it. The Monkey King is my favorite character. He is so smart and brave that he can protect his master and brothers well. He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges. The book is so interesting that I lose myself in it. It tells me that as long as I never give up, I can achieve everything. That’s all. Thank you for your attention. 【知识点】文学名著 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为演讲稿； ②时态：主要时态是“一般现在时”； ③提示：本文主要是介绍自己最喜欢的一本书，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题。 第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的书的书名、书的类型以及主要内容； 第三步，介绍自己为什么喜欢这本书。 [亮点词汇] ①get over difficulties克服困难 ②on the way to在去往某地的路上 ③give up放弃 [高分句型] ①He is so smart and brave that he can protect his master and brothers well.(so...that引导的结果状语从句) ②He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges.(when引导的时间状语从句) 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让学生通过给笔友写信的方式，了解并掌握在中国不同场景下的礼仪规范，培养学生的跨文化交际意识和用英语表达文化差异的能力。 能力考查：考查了学生的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、句子结构以及逻辑表达。同时也考验学生对不同礼仪场景的理解和描述能力。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，让学生在实际情境中运用英语，提高语言综合运用能力，增强对不同文化的理解和尊重。 （2022·山东枣庄·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的笔友Mark将要来你家做客，向你寻问如何在中国举止得当。请根据下面的提示，给Mark写一封80~100词的回信。把答案写在答题卡上相应位置。（可能用到的单词：chopsticks筷子） 1. 见面礼仪。     2. 餐桌礼仪。      3. 外出礼仪。   Dear Mark, I am glad to hear that you are coming to China soon. I’d like to give you some suggestions on how to behave properly in China. When you come to my house, __________________________________________________________ When you are eating with us, __________________________________________________________ Before you go outside, __________________________________________________________ A safe trip to you and I hope to meet you soon!     Best wishes, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Mark, I am glad to hear that you are coming to China soon. I’d like to give you some suggestions on how to behave properly in China. When you come to my house, you need to buy some small gifts, such as some fruit. This is the basic etiquette for Chinese guests when they visit others. When you are eating with us, you should let the elders move their chopsticks first before we eat. Don’t make too much noise while eating. It’s impolite to point at others with your chopsticks or stick your chopsticks into the food. Before you go outside, you need to say goodbye to others. It’s polite. A safe trip to you and I hope to meet you soon! Best wishes, Li Hua 【知识点】中华文化、礼仪与习俗 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据提示内容，给Mark一封信，告诉他如何在中国举止得当。 2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第二人称为主。写作时需包含三个要点：见面礼仪；餐桌礼仪；外出礼仪。承接作文每段开头，展开叙述，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让学生通过描述父母在过去三年与自己相处方式的变化，锻炼他们的写作能力和对生活的观察与思考能力。 能力考查：考查学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力，以及能否清晰准确地表达自己的想法和感受。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用、情感表达和对生活观察反思的要求，鼓励学生用英语描述真实的生活经历和情感变化。 （2021·山东枣庄·中考真题）Write a short passage about your parents’ changes in the past three years when they get along with you. （写一篇关于在过去三年里你的父母在与你相处过程中变化的短文。）（请根据下面的提示, 在答题卡第六节下面, 写出一篇90-120词的短文。 注意∶不要出现自己的信息∶诸如姓名、学校, 人名可以用英文名字。） l. The title of your short passage. （你的短文的标题。） 2. First, write the general introduction about how your parents got along with you in the past; （首先写关于你父母过去是如何和你相处的总体介绍。） 3. Second, write the most important change and how it happened. （其次写最重要的一次变化以及是如何发生的, ） 4. Third, write about how you feel about this change. （最后写一下你对变化的感受。） __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： How my parents have changed! My parents have changed a lot in the past three years. They used to be strict with me. On Sunday, they always let me stay at home and study. So I didn’t any friends. Their biggest change is much gentler than before. Because I don’t have any friends, I’m very lonely. I’m not interested in my study, so my grades are worse and worse. Now my parents let me go out on Sunday. I have made many friends. We often help each other and get better grades. Now I get on well with my parents. I love my parents very much. 【知识点】家人和亲人 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时注意根据提示的内容，写出在过去三年里你的父母在与你相处过程中的变化：首先写父母过去是如何和你相处的总体介绍；其次写最重要的一次变化以及是如何发生的；最后写一下你对变化的感受。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称和第三人称来进行写作；时态采用一般现在时为主，用一般过去式介绍过去；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容全面，保证条理清晰。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让同学们通过回忆和描述初中生活中的难忘事件，锻炼大家的写作能力和语言表达能力，同时也引导大家去思考和总结生活中的经历对自己的影响。 能力考查：考查同学们对事件的叙述能力，包括时间、地点、人物等要素的清晰表达，还有对情感和感悟的准确传达。同时，也考验大家在规定词数内组织语言、逻辑清晰地完成写作的能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用、情感表达和思维发展的要求，让同学们能够运用所学的英语知识，有条理地讲述自己的经历和感受。 （2020·山东枣庄·中考真题）Write a passage about an event that's the most unforgettable for you during your junior high school. (写一件在三年的初中生活中你最难忘的事情。) (请根据下面的提示，在答题卡第六节下面，写出一篇90-120词的短文。注意：不要出现自己信息：诸如姓名，学校，人名可以用英文名字。) 1. The title of your story. (你的故事的标题。) 2. First write about the event(when and where it happened and who). (首先写关于事件的时间、地点、相关人物等。) 3. Next write about how it happened. (接下来写事件是如何发生的。) 4. Then write about how you feel about this event. (然后写一下你的感受。) 5. At last write about how this event has changed your life or what you learn from it. (最后写一下这件事如何改变你的人生或者你从中学到什么。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Giving is better than taking I'll never forget the day when my mom took me to the children's home. When I was in Grade 8, I was not satisfied with what I had. My mom knew all about my problem. One Sunny morning, she took me to the children's home. When I got there, I couldn't believe what I saw. There were some poor kids. Some were disabled. Others wore ugly clothes without toys. I gave away my beautiful clothes, toys and books to them. I felt I was happy and lucky enough to live in a family full of love. I knew happiness is giving not taking. Sample 2: The black boots When I was in Grade 7, I studied in town with my aunt's family. It rained a lot that autumn. My shoes were all wet when I walked to school. I complained about the weather and wore the wet shoes all day. One rainy day, I got home from school, my aunt said, "Jim, your uncle bought you black boots. Come and have a try." I was very thankful. I didn't think I could get boots. My aunt and uncle didn't have them, neither did my cousins. I would never forget how my cousins admired me. More than two years has gone by, the black boots are always in my memory. 【知识点】叙事忆旧 【详解】题干解读：这个题目要求学生们写写三年的初中生活中最难忘的事情。题目中列出了写作的提纲，学生们可以根据这一提示，组织文章的结构和内容。首先要有一个标题；然后详细叙述这件事情发生的经过；接下来介绍一下自己的感受；最后写一下这件事如何改变你的人生或者你从中学到什么。虽然有步骤和结构的提示，但具体的内容还需要学生们发挥想象力，结合自己的实际生活去叙述。注意所选的事情要有代表性，能从中有收获。短文应以一般过去时态为主。 【满分优秀范文】点评：两篇习作都非常优秀。首先是内容完整，叙述有条理。选取事例有代表性，能引起读者的共鸣，从中得到一些启示或体会到真情实感。其次短文都使用了正确的时态，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。句式多变，有节奏感。表达流畅，意思连贯。 高分亮点： 短语：be satisfied with；give away；full of；complain about；have a try；more than。 句型：When引导时间状语从句；what引导宾语从句；how引导宾语从句；There be句型；动词不定式作结果状语；倒装结构。 最新模拟 1．（2024·山东枣庄·三模）父母是我们的第一任老师。他们不但给了我们生命，还给了我们所需要的一切，包括衣食住行和教育等。作为青少年，你一定有很多话要对父母说，请你根据下面提示给父母写一封信。 1.感谢父母无私的爱；2.感谢父母的辛勤劳动；3.感谢父母对你的教育。 注意：1.短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 2.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。 3.词数80~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mom and Dad, I want to take a moment to express my love and gratitude to both of you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2．（2024·山东枣庄·三模）读下面文章，请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于 60，不多于80词。注意：在文章后标清你写的字数。 Wan Nian Li is the oldest solar calendar in ancient China. It is more like a guide and an important tool for farming and daily life of Chinese people. It’s said that in ancient times there was a young man named Wan Nian. He thought that there were natural rules for the change of seasons and climate, and wanted to find out the special rules of nature. When he climbed the mountain, he was inspired by the shadows (影子) of trees on the mountain, and made a sundial (日晷) that measures the shadow of the sun to fix the time. As time went on, he found that every more than three hundred and sixty days, the length of the day would repeat (重复) itself. When Wan Nian knew that the emperor of the Shang Dynasty, Zu Yi was worried because of the uncertainty of time, he nominated (推荐) himself to create a calendar for the country and help all the people. After the long-term study, Wan Nian worked out an exact calendar called Tai Yang Li. When he presented it to the emperor. Wan Nian was an old man with white hair. The emperor was very moved. To praise the achievements of Wan Nian, he named the solar calendar as Wan Nian Li. In memory of (为了纪念) Wan Nian, people called the first day of a year as “Nian”, so the Chinese New Year was born. 1. What is Wan Nian Li? 2. How did Wan Nian find out the special rules of nature? 3. Who asked Wan Nian to create a calendar? 4. What is Wan Nian Li named after? 5. What do you think of Wan Nian? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·山东枣庄·三模）世界上最亲的人是父母，他们给予我们生命，含辛茹苦地抚养我们长大。请根据下列提示给父母写一封80 — 100词的书信，表达自己的感激之情。文中不得出现真实姓名等信息。 提示：父母尽力给我们提供好的生活和教育；希望父母保持健康；自己会主动帮助做家务，等等。 词汇：provide 提供 offer to do 主动做…… Dear parents, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Your (son/daughter) 4．（2024·山东枣庄·三模）阅读下面短文，请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于60，不多于80。把答案写在答题卡上相应位置。 To our surprise, people make a huge amount of rubbish in their daily life. We should save the environment. The following 3 Rs rules may help us. Reduce We can reduce waste by using things wisely. People cut down millions of trees in order to make paper. However, people don’t save paper and waste a lot of paper carelessly. We may have no trees in the near future if we don’t save paper. Besides wasting paper, people also waste other things. They don’t know how to deal with the waste. That’s why people need to make waste less. Reuse We should think about how to reuse the used things before we throw them away. The clothes which are too small for you are still usable. We wash our old clothes and give them to the people who can’t afford new clothes. Family members can share the clothes with each other. Recycle Recycling some rubbish such as plastic bottles and used paper is very easy. We can make some money by recycling it. For example, used plastic bottles can be collected and smashed(粉碎). It can be made into usable plastic things again. So why not try our best to recycle things as many as possible? 1. Should we save the environment? What will happen if we don’t save paper?   2. Why do people need to make waste less? 3. What should we do before throwing the used things away? 4. What can family members share with each other to reuse them? 5. How can we make used plastic bottles useful again? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·山东枣庄·三模）读下面的文章，请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结，词数不少于60，不多于80词。 Ancestors left us many valuable things and intangible cultural heritage (非物质文化遗产) is one of them. It includes things like music, art, sports and other social practices. With a knife and scissors, people in Shanxi can creatively turn the dough (面团) into different characters. The common ones are babies and animals. During many festivals, even now, they are sent to friends and family as gifts. But few young people can make them. More than 1000 years ago, the Bai people used tie-dye (扎染) to make colorful clothes. During the Tang and Song Dynasties, it was popular. In the 1960s, it became a fashion in the US. Now some children learn it in their art classes. Hope more of them can join. As one of the most famous styles, Shu Embroidery (蜀绣) is known for its smooth needlework (针线活) and beautiful colors. However, because of cheaper products made by modern machines, fewer people buy hand-made embroidery products. So the skill is in danger. Luckily, some young people are learning it. West Lake Longjing Tea Roasting Technique is an important part of Chinese tea culture. Although machines can do the job now, the quality is not good. Only by hand can we make tea leaves have best color, shape and taste. We need to pass it down and let more young people learn it. 1. What does intangible cultural heritage include? 2. How do people turn the dough into different characters like babies and animals? 3. When was tie-dye popular in the US? 4. Do many people buy hand-made embroidery products? Why? 5. Why should we still learn the old way to roast West Lake Longjing Tea, even though machines can do it? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·山东枣庄·二模）中国饮食文化博大精深。假如你是李明，上周，你校开展了“品中华美食，传承中华文化”为主题的校园美食节活动。请你根据下面表格中的提示，用英语给你的英国笔友Mike写一封电子邮件，分享本次活动的过程和感受。 A Campus Food Festival Time last Friday Place the school dining hall Activities enjoy traditional Chinese food watch the process of cooking cook by yourself … Feelings …(至少谈及两点) 要求： 1. 电子邮件的内容必须包括表格中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以便行文连贯; 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名; 3. 词数：80 —100词 (开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数); 参考词汇：promote 促进，enrich丰富，campus校园， process过程 Dear Mike, How is everything going? In order to promote Chinese food culture and enrich students’ campus life, ______________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Ming 7．（2024·山东枣庄·二模）读下面文章。请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于60，不多于80词。 Have you tried to run or walk for exercise and then given up? If you answered yes, you should try a new kind of exercise: aquatic (水中的) exercise. Aquatic exercise is like exercise on land, but you do it in a swimming pool. More and more people are trying aquatic exercise. Aquatic exercise feels easier than exercise on land. Why? You weigh about 90% less in the pool. It is better for your knees than running or walking. Water is about 1000 times thicker and heavier than air. To move through the water, your body has to work four times as hard. As a result, you can burn more calories (卡路里). In fact, most people say they feel more relaxed in the water. They stop thinking about the things that make them worried. The cool, quiet environment makes them feel good. But what if you are afraid of the water? No problem! There is nothing to worry about. Aquatic exercise is safe and easy to learn. It doesn’t require any special skills. You don’t even need to know how to swim. Aquatic exercise is for everyone. 1. What is aquatic exercise? 2. What are the advantages (优点) of aquatic exercise? 3. Why do most people feel more relaxed in the water? 4. Is aquatic exercise for everyone? Why or why not? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·山东枣庄·二模）阅读下面短文，请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于60，不多于 80。 It’s difficult to be a star athlete (运动员), especially when you don’t even have arms. But Tim Bannon, who is 14, a student at Proviso West High School in Chicago, is trying his best. Bannon has gotten popular online thanks to a workout video that shows him overcoming his disability while exercising. He plans to take part in the Chicago Triathlon (铁人三项) soon. He is going to to run about 2km, swim 200 meters and bike 7km during the race. He knows the physical difficulties of the triathlon. What if he falls and isn’t able to get up? Keri Serota, the co-founder (共同创始人) of a community charity group, said Bannon is completely able to complete the event. He uses a special three-wheeled bike and gets buoyancy (浮力) while swimming by using a “dead man’s float”. Besides the triathlon, Bannon also plans to try out for the Panthers football team as a kicker. Many people doubt he’ll be able to do it, but he wants to try anyway. “I’m not worried. I don’t care if I get kicked off. I want to be a kicker,” he said. For Bannon, it’s a simple goal: Just live normally and be like one of the guys. 1. Who is Bannon? How old is he? 2. How is he different from the common people? 3. What does he plan to do soon? 4. How can he complete the event? 5. What else does he plan to do? 6. What’s Bannon’s simple goal? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·山东枣庄·二模）假如你是某软件公司营销经理，你们公司针对学生开发了一款名为 English Talent 的app，为推广使用该软件，你计划向中学生介绍这款新产品。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。 名称 English Talent 内容 英语知识的讲解，英语对话、美文、电影、歌曲等。 优势 1.便于复习学过的知识点； 2. 有利于提高英语阅读和听说能力； 3.……(自主发挥，至少一点) 注意事项： 1.100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.内容要包括表中要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯流畅。 Dear students, It is my great honor and pleasure to stand here introducing and sharing a new product of our company, a great and creative English learning app. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·山东枣庄·三模）21st Century Teens Junior 中“青春校园”板块开展“Enjoy My Teenage Life”的征文比赛，请根据提示内容，介绍一下自己的青春生活。内容要点如下： 享受阅读 热爱阅读，广泛阅读，读书打开全新的世界。 享受生活 健康的生活方式：健康饮食，每天锻炼，合理使用电子产品。 亲情：常与父母交流，分担烦恼。友情：与朋友分享快乐与悲伤，一起为社会做有意义的事情。（举例） …… 注意事项： 1.表达清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 2.必须包含表格中所有要点，并适当发挥； 3.词数100左右。 Enjoy My Teenage Life _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 20 山东枣庄 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题的命题意图在于激发学生的创新思维，让学生通过想象和描述发明一种物品，来展现他们对解决学习问题的思考和创造力。 能力考查：主要考查学生的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法掌握、逻辑组织和表达清晰的能力。同时，也考查学生对题目的理解和把握能力，能否全面反映图文信息。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，鼓励学生运用所学的英语知识进行有意义的表达和交流，培养学生的综合语言运用能力。通过描述发明物品，培养学生解决实际问题的意识和能力。 （2024·山东枣庄·中考真题）为了培养学生的发明和创新精神，学校将举行中学生科技创新大赛。假定你是李华，你准备发明一件物品，参加本次大赛。请你以“I want to invent ________”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的发明物。内容包括： 注意：（1）请先补全标题； （2）短文须全面反映图文信息； （3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； （4）词数 80~100。 I want to invent ________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 I want to invent a special pen I want to invent a special pen that can help students learn more efficiently. It looks like a normal pen. This pen will have a built-in dictionary and translation function, allowing students to look up words and translate sentences instantly. It will also have a voice recording feature, so students can record lectures and listen to them later. The pen will be lightweight and easy to carry, making it perfect for use in classrooms, libraries, and at home. I believe this pen will greatly enhance students’ learning experiences and make studying more enjoyable and effective. 【知识点】发明与创造 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，想要发明一种特殊的钢笔； 第二步，具体介绍发明这种钢笔的原因、外观和用途、使用场合； 第三步，进行评价。 [亮点词汇] ①look like 看起来像 ②look up 查阅 [高分句型] ①I want to invent a special pen that can help students learn more efficiently.（定语从句） ②I believe this pen will greatly enhance students’ learning experiences and make studying more enjoyable and effective.（省略that的宾语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在通过让学生写一篇关于最喜欢的书的发言稿，考查学生的英语书面表达能力，包括对书籍信息的描述、喜欢理由的阐述以及语言组织和逻辑思维能力。 能力考查：它考查了学生用英语准确表达思想、描述事物的能力，以及运用所学词汇、语法和句型来构建完整篇章的能力。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，即培养学生的综合语言运用能力，包括语言知识、语言技能、情感态度、学习策略和文化意识等方面。通过这样的题目，鼓励学生阅读并分享阅读体验，提高学生的文化素养和语言表达能力。 （2023·山东枣庄·中考真题）为了响应国家全民阅读的号召，你校将举办读书节。假如你是李华，请你以“My favourite book”为主题，写一篇英语发言稿，在读书分享会中介绍自己最喜欢的一本书， 内容包括： 1.书名、书的类型和主要内容； 2.你喜欢这本书的理由。 注意：1.词数80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Ladies and gentlemen, I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad to share my favourite book with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for your attention. 【满分优秀范文】 Ladies and gentlemen, I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad to share my favourite book with you. My favorite book is Journey to the West. It is one of the Four Great Classical Novels in China. It was written by Wu Cheng’en, a great writer in ancient China. The story tells us about four main characters. They are Tang Monk, the Monkey King , Piggie and Monk Sha. They get over many difficulties on the way to the West. Finally, they make it. The Monkey King is my favorite character. He is so smart and brave that he can protect his master and brothers well. He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges. The book is so interesting that I lose myself in it. It tells me that as long as I never give up, I can achieve everything. That’s all. Thank you for your attention. 【知识点】文学名著 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为演讲稿； ②时态：主要时态是“一般现在时”； ③提示：本文主要是介绍自己最喜欢的一本书，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题。 第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的书的书名、书的类型以及主要内容； 第三步，介绍自己为什么喜欢这本书。 [亮点词汇] ①get over difficulties克服困难 ②on the way to在去往某地的路上 ③give up放弃 [高分句型] ①He is so smart and brave that he can protect his master and brothers well.(so...that引导的结果状语从句) ②He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges.(when引导的时间状语从句) 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让学生通过给笔友写信的方式，了解并掌握在中国不同场景下的礼仪规范，培养学生的跨文化交际意识和用英语表达文化差异的能力。 能力考查：考查了学生的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、句子结构以及逻辑表达。同时也考验学生对不同礼仪场景的理解和描述能力。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，让学生在实际情境中运用英语，提高语言综合运用能力，增强对不同文化的理解和尊重。 （2022·山东枣庄·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的笔友Mark将要来你家做客，向你寻问如何在中国举止得当。请根据下面的提示，给Mark写一封80~100词的回信。把答案写在答题卡上相应位置。（可能用到的单词：chopsticks筷子） 1. 见面礼仪。     2. 餐桌礼仪。      3. 外出礼仪。   Dear Mark, I am glad to hear that you are coming to China soon. I’d like to give you some suggestions on how to behave properly in China. When you come to my house, __________________________________________________________ When you are eating with us, __________________________________________________________ Before you go outside, __________________________________________________________ A safe trip to you and I hope to meet you soon!     Best wishes, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Mark, I am glad to hear that you are coming to China soon. I’d like to give you some suggestions on how to behave properly in China. When you come to my house, you need to buy some small gifts, such as some fruit. This is the basic etiquette for Chinese guests when they visit others. When you are eating with us, you should let the elders move their chopsticks first before we eat. Don’t make too much noise while eating. It’s impolite to point at others with your chopsticks or stick your chopsticks into the food. Before you go outside, you need to say goodbye to others. It’s polite. A safe trip to you and I hope to meet you soon! Best wishes, Li Hua 【知识点】中华文化、礼仪与习俗 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据提示内容，给Mark一封信，告诉他如何在中国举止得当。 2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第二人称为主。写作时需包含三个要点：见面礼仪；餐桌礼仪；外出礼仪。承接作文每段开头，展开叙述，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让学生通过描述父母在过去三年与自己相处方式的变化，锻炼他们的写作能力和对生活的观察与思考能力。 能力考查：考查学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力，以及能否清晰准确地表达自己的想法和感受。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用、情感表达和对生活观察反思的要求，鼓励学生用英语描述真实的生活经历和情感变化。 （2021·山东枣庄·中考真题）Write a short passage about your parents’ changes in the past three years when they get along with you. （写一篇关于在过去三年里你的父母在与你相处过程中变化的短文。）（请根据下面的提示, 在答题卡第六节下面, 写出一篇90-120词的短文。 注意∶不要出现自己的信息∶诸如姓名、学校, 人名可以用英文名字。） l. The title of your short passage. （你的短文的标题。） 2. First, write the general introduction about how your parents got along with you in the past; （首先写关于你父母过去是如何和你相处的总体介绍。） 3. Second, write the most important change and how it happened. （其次写最重要的一次变化以及是如何发生的, ） 4. Third, write about how you feel about this change. （最后写一下你对变化的感受。） __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： How my parents have changed! My parents have changed a lot in the past three years. They used to be strict with me. On Sunday, they always let me stay at home and study. So I didn’t any friends. Their biggest change is much gentler than before. Because I don’t have any friends, I’m very lonely. I’m not interested in my study, so my grades are worse and worse. Now my parents let me go out on Sunday. I have made many friends. We often help each other and get better grades. Now I get on well with my parents. I love my parents very much. 【知识点】家人和亲人 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时注意根据提示的内容，写出在过去三年里你的父母在与你相处过程中的变化：首先写父母过去是如何和你相处的总体介绍；其次写最重要的一次变化以及是如何发生的；最后写一下你对变化的感受。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称和第三人称来进行写作；时态采用一般现在时为主，用一般过去式介绍过去；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容全面，保证条理清晰。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让同学们通过回忆和描述初中生活中的难忘事件，锻炼大家的写作能力和语言表达能力，同时也引导大家去思考和总结生活中的经历对自己的影响。 能力考查：考查同学们对事件的叙述能力，包括时间、地点、人物等要素的清晰表达，还有对情感和感悟的准确传达。同时，也考验大家在规定词数内组织语言、逻辑清晰地完成写作的能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用、情感表达和思维发展的要求，让同学们能够运用所学的英语知识，有条理地讲述自己的经历和感受。 （2020·山东枣庄·中考真题）Write a passage about an event that's the most unforgettable for you during your junior high school. (写一件在三年的初中生活中你最难忘的事情。) (请根据下面的提示，在答题卡第六节下面，写出一篇90-120词的短文。注意：不要出现自己信息：诸如姓名，学校，人名可以用英文名字。) 1. The title of your story. (你的故事的标题。) 2. First write about the event(when and where it happened and who). (首先写关于事件的时间、地点、相关人物等。) 3. Next write about how it happened. (接下来写事件是如何发生的。) 4. Then write about how you feel about this event. (然后写一下你的感受。) 5. At last write about how this event has changed your life or what you learn from it. (最后写一下这件事如何改变你的人生或者你从中学到什么。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Giving is better than taking I'll never forget the day when my mom took me to the children's home. When I was in Grade 8, I was not satisfied with what I had. My mom knew all about my problem. One Sunny morning, she took me to the children's home. When I got there, I couldn't believe what I saw. There were some poor kids. Some were disabled. Others wore ugly clothes without toys. I gave away my beautiful clothes, toys and books to them. I felt I was happy and lucky enough to live in a family full of love. I knew happiness is giving not taking. Sample 2: The black boots When I was in Grade 7, I studied in town with my aunt's family. It rained a lot that autumn. My shoes were all wet when I walked to school. I complained about the weather and wore the wet shoes all day. One rainy day, I got home from school, my aunt said, "Jim, your uncle bought you black boots. Come and have a try." I was very thankful. I didn't think I could get boots. My aunt and uncle didn't have them, neither did my cousins. I would never forget how my cousins admired me. More than two years has gone by, the black boots are always in my memory. 【知识点】叙事忆旧 【详解】题干解读：这个题目要求学生们写写三年的初中生活中最难忘的事情。题目中列出了写作的提纲，学生们可以根据这一提示，组织文章的结构和内容。首先要有一个标题；然后详细叙述这件事情发生的经过；接下来介绍一下自己的感受；最后写一下这件事如何改变你的人生或者你从中学到什么。虽然有步骤和结构的提示，但具体的内容还需要学生们发挥想象力，结合自己的实际生活去叙述。注意所选的事情要有代表性，能从中有收获。短文应以一般过去时态为主。 【满分优秀范文】点评：两篇习作都非常优秀。首先是内容完整，叙述有条理。选取事例有代表性，能引起读者的共鸣，从中得到一些启示或体会到真情实感。其次短文都使用了正确的时态，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。句式多变，有节奏感。表达流畅，意思连贯。 高分亮点： 短语：be satisfied with；give away；full of；complain about；have a try；more than。 句型：When引导时间状语从句；what引导宾语从句；how引导宾语从句；There be句型；动词不定式作结果状语；倒装结构。 最新模拟 1．（2024·山东枣庄·三模）父母是我们的第一任老师。他们不但给了我们生命，还给了我们所需要的一切，包括衣食住行和教育等。作为青少年，你一定有很多话要对父母说，请你根据下面提示给父母写一封信。 1.感谢父母无私的爱；2.感谢父母的辛勤劳动；3.感谢父母对你的教育。 注意：1.短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 2.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。 3.词数80~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mom and Dad, I want to take a moment to express my love and gratitude to both of you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2．（2024·山东枣庄·三模）读下面文章，请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于 60，不多于80词。注意：在文章后标清你写的字数。 Wan Nian Li is the oldest solar calendar in ancient China. It is more like a guide and an important tool for farming and daily life of Chinese people. It’s said that in ancient times there was a young man named Wan Nian. He thought that there were natural rules for the change of seasons and climate, and wanted to find out the special rules of nature. When he climbed the mountain, he was inspired by the shadows (影子) of trees on the mountain, and made a sundial (日晷) that measures the shadow of the sun to fix the time. As time went on, he found that every more than three hundred and sixty days, the length of the day would repeat (重复) itself. When Wan Nian knew that the emperor of the Shang Dynasty, Zu Yi was worried because of the uncertainty of time, he nominated (推荐) himself to create a calendar for the country and help all the people. After the long-term study, Wan Nian worked out an exact calendar called Tai Yang Li. When he presented it to the emperor. Wan Nian was an old man with white hair. The emperor was very moved. To praise the achievements of Wan Nian, he named the solar calendar as Wan Nian Li. In memory of (为了纪念) Wan Nian, people called the first day of a year as “Nian”, so the Chinese New Year was born. 1. What is Wan Nian Li? 2. How did Wan Nian find out the special rules of nature? 3. Who asked Wan Nian to create a calendar? 4. What is Wan Nian Li named after? 5. What do you think of Wan Nian? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·山东枣庄·三模）世界上最亲的人是父母，他们给予我们生命，含辛茹苦地抚养我们长大。请根据下列提示给父母写一封80 — 100词的书信，表达自己的感激之情。文中不得出现真实姓名等信息。 提示：父母尽力给我们提供好的生活和教育；希望父母保持健康；自己会主动帮助做家务，等等。 词汇：provide 提供 offer to do 主动做…… Dear parents, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Your (son/daughter) 4．（2024·山东枣庄·三模）阅读下面短文，请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于60，不多于80。把答案写在答题卡上相应位置。 To our surprise, people make a huge amount of rubbish in their daily life. We should save the environment. The following 3 Rs rules may help us. Reduce We can reduce waste by using things wisely. People cut down millions of trees in order to make paper. However, people don’t save paper and waste a lot of paper carelessly. We may have no trees in the near future if we don’t save paper. Besides wasting paper, people also waste other things. They don’t know how to deal with the waste. That’s why people need to make waste less. Reuse We should think about how to reuse the used things before we throw them away. The clothes which are too small for you are still usable. We wash our old clothes and give them to the people who can’t afford new clothes. Family members can share the clothes with each other. Recycle Recycling some rubbish such as plastic bottles and used paper is very easy. We can make some money by recycling it. For example, used plastic bottles can be collected and smashed(粉碎). It can be made into usable plastic things again. So why not try our best to recycle things as many as possible? 1. Should we save the environment? What will happen if we don’t save paper?   2. Why do people need to make waste less? 3. What should we do before throwing the used things away? 4. What can family members share with each other to reuse them? 5. How can we make used plastic bottles useful again? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·山东枣庄·三模）读下面的文章，请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结，词数不少于60，不多于80词。 Ancestors left us many valuable things and intangible cultural heritage (非物质文化遗产) is one of them. It includes things like music, art, sports and other social practices. With a knife and scissors, people in Shanxi can creatively turn the dough (面团) into different characters. The common ones are babies and animals. During many festivals, even now, they are sent to friends and family as gifts. But few young people can make them. More than 1000 years ago, the Bai people used tie-dye (扎染) to make colorful clothes. During the Tang and Song Dynasties, it was popular. In the 1960s, it became a fashion in the US. Now some children learn it in their art classes. Hope more of them can join. As one of the most famous styles, Shu Embroidery (蜀绣) is known for its smooth needlework (针线活) and beautiful colors. However, because of cheaper products made by modern machines, fewer people buy hand-made embroidery products. So the skill is in danger. Luckily, some young people are learning it. West Lake Longjing Tea Roasting Technique is an important part of Chinese tea culture. Although machines can do the job now, the quality is not good. Only by hand can we make tea leaves have best color, shape and taste. We need to pass it down and let more young people learn it. 1. What does intangible cultural heritage include? 2. How do people turn the dough into different characters like babies and animals? 3. When was tie-dye popular in the US? 4. Do many people buy hand-made embroidery products? Why? 5. Why should we still learn the old way to roast West Lake Longjing Tea, even though machines can do it? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·山东枣庄·二模）中国饮食文化博大精深。假如你是李明，上周，你校开展了“品中华美食，传承中华文化”为主题的校园美食节活动。请你根据下面表格中的提示，用英语给你的英国笔友Mike写一封电子邮件，分享本次活动的过程和感受。 A Campus Food Festival Time last Friday Place the school dining hall Activities enjoy traditional Chinese food watch the process of cooking cook by yourself … Feelings …(至少谈及两点) 要求： 1. 电子邮件的内容必须包括表格中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以便行文连贯; 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名; 3. 词数：80 —100词 (开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数); 参考词汇：promote 促进，enrich丰富，campus校园， process过程 Dear Mike, How is everything going? In order to promote Chinese food culture and enrich students’ campus life, ______________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Ming 7．（2024·山东枣庄·二模）读下面文章。请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于60，不多于80词。 Have you tried to run or walk for exercise and then given up? If you answered yes, you should try a new kind of exercise: aquatic (水中的) exercise. Aquatic exercise is like exercise on land, but you do it in a swimming pool. More and more people are trying aquatic exercise. Aquatic exercise feels easier than exercise on land. Why? You weigh about 90% less in the pool. It is better for your knees than running or walking. Water is about 1000 times thicker and heavier than air. To move through the water, your body has to work four times as hard. As a result, you can burn more calories (卡路里). In fact, most people say they feel more relaxed in the water. They stop thinking about the things that make them worried. The cool, quiet environment makes them feel good. But what if you are afraid of the water? No problem! There is nothing to worry about. Aquatic exercise is safe and easy to learn. It doesn’t require any special skills. You don’t even need to know how to swim. Aquatic exercise is for everyone. 1. What is aquatic exercise? 2. What are the advantages (优点) of aquatic exercise? 3. Why do most people feel more relaxed in the water? 4. Is aquatic exercise for everyone? Why or why not? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·山东枣庄·二模）阅读下面短文，请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于60，不多于 80。 It’s difficult to be a star athlete (运动员), especially when you don’t even have arms. But Tim Bannon, who is 14, a student at Proviso West High School in Chicago, is trying his best. Bannon has gotten popular online thanks to a workout video that shows him overcoming his disability while exercising. He plans to take part in the Chicago Triathlon (铁人三项) soon. He is going to to run about 2km, swim 200 meters and bike 7km during the race. He knows the physical difficulties of the triathlon. What if he falls and isn’t able to get up? Keri Serota, the co-founder (共同创始人) of a community charity group, said Bannon is completely able to complete the event. He uses a special three-wheeled bike and gets buoyancy (浮力) while swimming by using a “dead man’s float”. Besides the triathlon, Bannon also plans to try out for the Panthers football team as a kicker. Many people doubt he’ll be able to do it, but he wants to try anyway. “I’m not worried. I don’t care if I get kicked off. I want to be a kicker,” he said. For Bannon, it’s a simple goal: Just live normally and be like one of the guys. 1. Who is Bannon? How old is he? 2. How is he different from the common people? 3. What does he plan to do soon? 4. How can he complete the event? 5. What else does he plan to do? 6. What’s Bannon’s simple goal? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·山东枣庄·二模）假如你是某软件公司营销经理，你们公司针对学生开发了一款名为 English Talent 的app，为推广使用该软件，你计划向中学生介绍这款新产品。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。 名称 English Talent 内容 英语知识的讲解，英语对话、美文、电影、歌曲等。 优势 1.便于复习学过的知识点； 2. 有利于提高英语阅读和听说能力； 3.……(自主发挥，至少一点) 注意事项： 1.100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.内容要包括表中要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯流畅。 Dear students, It is my great honor and pleasure to stand here introducing and sharing a new product of our company, a great and creative English learning app. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·山东枣庄·三模）21st Century Teens Junior 中“青春校园”板块开展“Enjoy My Teenage Life”的征文比赛，请根据提示内容，介绍一下自己的青春生活。内容要点如下： 享受阅读 热爱阅读，广泛阅读，读书打开全新的世界。 享受生活 健康的生活方式：健康饮食，每天锻炼，合理使用电子产品。 亲情：常与父母交流，分担烦恼。友情：与朋友分享快乐与悲伤，一起为社会做有意义的事情。（举例） …… 注意事项： 1.表达清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 2.必须包含表格中所有要点，并适当发挥； 3.词数100左右。 Enjoy My Teenage Life _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】： Dear Mom and Dad, I want to take a moment to express my love and gratitude to both of you. Your love is like a warm blanket on a cold night, always making me feel safe and loved. You’ve always been there for me, through good times and bad.   I’m so grateful for everything you’ve done for me. You’ve worked hard to give me a good life, and I know I wouldn’t be where I am today without you.   I’m especially thankful for the education you’ve given me. It’s opened up so many doors for me, and I’m excited to see what the future holds.   You’ve taught me so much about life, and I’m so lucky to have you as my parents. I love you both more than words can say. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】情感、家人和亲人 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，感谢父母无私的爱并进一步阐述； 第二步，感谢父母的辛勤劳动并进一步阐述； 第三步，感谢父母对你的教育并进一步阐述； 第四步，总结全文，再次表达对父母的感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①through度过 ②grateful感激的 ③especially特别地 [高分句型] ①You’ve worked hard to give me a good life, and I know I wouldn’t be where I am today without you. (动词不定式表目的；并列句；宾语从句) ②I’m especially thankful for the education you’ve given me. (定语从句) 2．【满分优秀范文】 Wan Nian Li is the oldest solar calendar in ancient China. When he climbed the mountain, Wan Nian was inspired by the shadows of trees on the mountain and made a sundial. Later, he also discovered that every more than three hundred and sixty days, the length of the day would repeat itself. Wan Nian asked to create a calendar. Wan Nian Li was named after Wan Nian. I think Wan Nian is a man of innovation and dedication. (79词) 【知识点】中华文化、历史人物、发明与创造 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇小作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据问题提示，总结文章大意，不要遗漏信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，叙述什么是万年历； 第二步，具体阐述万年历的由来； 第三步，表达我对万年的看法。 [亮点词汇] ① more than超过 ② be named after以……命名 [高分句型] ① When he climbed the mountain, Wan Nian was inspired by the shadows of trees on the mountain and made a sundial.（when引导的时间状语从句） ② I think Wan Nian is a man of innovation and dedication.（省略that的宾语从句） 3．【满分优秀范文】 Dear parents, You love me more than anybody else in the world. As your child, I feel very happy and proud. You have tried to provide good life and education for me. You are very tired and have too much pressure. To keep healthy, you’d better do more exercise. You shouldn’t stay up so that you can get enough sleep. You should also eat healthy food. I will offer to help out around the house. First, I’ll help do more housework. Second, I’ll respect you and get on well with you. Third, I will study hard and try not to make you worry about me. I love you, my dear parents! Your son 【知识点】意见/建议、家庭关系、情感 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中主要帮助父母做家务，注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，表明父母很爱我们，我们应该关心父母； 第二步，具体介绍如何关心父母以及我们能为父母做的事情； 第三步，书写结语，表达我们爱我们的父母。 [亮点词汇] ①too much太多 ②keep healthy保持健康 ③get on well with sb.与某人友好相处 ④worry about担心 [高分句型] ①You shouldn’t stay up so that you can get enough sleep. （so that引导状语从句） ②Learning to care for our parents is what we should do.（动名词短语作主语；what引导表语从句） 4．【满分优秀范文】 We should save the environment. If we don’t save paper, we may have no trees in the near future. People need to make waste less because they don’t know how to deal with it. Before throwing the used things away, we should think about how to reuse them. Family members can share the clothes with each other to reuse them. What’s more, we can collect and smash the used plastic bottles to make them useful again. 【知识点】意见/建议、环境保护 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇小作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍为了保护环境，我们应该遵循3R规则； 第二步，分别介绍什么是3R原则以及每一个原则具体的做法是什么； [亮点词汇] ①deal with处理 ②each other互相，彼此 ③what’s more而且 [高分句型] ①If we don’t save paper, we may have no trees in the near future. (if引导的条件状语从句) ②People need to make waste less because they don’t know how to deal with it. (疑问词+不定式) 5．【满分优秀范文】： Intangible cultural heritage includes things like music, art, sports and other social practices. With a knife and scissors, people turn the dough into different characters. Bai people used tie-dye to make colorful clothes. In the 1960s, it became a fashion in the US. Nowadays, fewer people buy hand-made embroidery products because of cheaper products made by modern machines. Hand-roasting West Lake Longjing Tea is important in Chinese tea culture. We should teach young people these skills. 【知识点】中华文化 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇小作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据问题提示，总结文章大意，不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，叙述非物质文化遗产包括什么； 第二步，表达我们需要传承非物质文化遗产，让更多的年轻人学习它。 [亮点词汇] ①turn…into将……变成 ②nowadays如今，现在 ③because of因为 [高分句型] ①Bai people used tie-dye to make colorful clothes.（动词不定式作目的状语） ②Nowadays, fewer people buy hand-made embroidery products because of cheaper products made by modern machines.（动词过去分词作后置定语） 6．【满分优秀范文】： Dear Mike, How is everything going? In order to promote Chinese food culture and enrich students’ campus life, our school had a campus food festival last Friday. The festival was held in the school dining hall. We enjoyed lots of traditional Chinese food. And we could not only watch the process of cooking but also cook by ourselves. I learned to cook some dishes such as Mapo Tofu and Gong Bao Chicken on the festival. After cooking, we tasted the dishes of students, chose the most delicious dishes and gave the students some candies as rewards. The festival was very interesting. We learned much about food and experienced the fun of cooking together with our classmates. That will be a happy and unforgettable memory in my life. How about you? Can you tell me something about your campus life? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Wang 【知识点】中华文化、文体活动 【详解】[整体介绍] ①体裁：本文是一篇应用文，属于邮件； ②时态：采用“一般过去时”； ③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍活动时间、地点以及活动内容； 第二步：阐述学生的感受； 第三步：表达自己的期望。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also...不但……而且…… ②enrich students’ campus life丰富学生的校园生活 ③experience the fun of ....体验……的乐趣 [高分句型] ①And we could not only watch the process of cooking but also cook by ourselves. （并列连词） 7．【满分优秀范文】： Aquatic exercise is like exercise on land, but you do it in a swimming pool. Aquatic exercise has some advantages. First of all, aquatic exercise can help you burn more calories than running or walking. Moreover, people feel more relaxed in the water, stopping them from thinking about the things which make them worried. More importantly, aquatic exercise is safe and easy to learn. Therefore, aquatic exercise is suitable for everyone. 【知识点】锻炼/健身（个人）、健康与运动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇小作文，为大意总结； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应根据短文内容和题干给出的问题提示写大意总结。 [总体分析] 第一步，首先在文章中找出四个问题的答案； 第二步，然后将四个答案有条理的串联起来。 [总体分析] ①advantages优势 ②first of all首先 ③moreover此外 ④therefore因此 [高分句型] ①Moreover, people feel more relaxed in the water, stopping them from thinking about the things which make them worried. (定语从句) 8．【满分优秀范文】   Bannon is a 14-year-old student in Chicago. He doesn’t have arms, but he plans to take part in the Chicago Triathlon soon. He can complete the event by using a special three-wheeled bike and a “dead man’s float”. He also plans to try out for the Panthers football team as a kicker. For Bannon, it’s a simple goal to live normally and be like one of the guys. 【知识点】个人经历、其他著名人物、哲理感悟 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇小作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据文章内容及所给的六个问题总结文章的大意，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍Bannon的个人情况； 第二步，讲述Bannon参加铁人三项以及他如何完成的比赛； 第三步，讲述Bannon另外计划做的事情以及他的简单目标。 [亮点词汇] ①plan to do sth.计划做某事 ②take part in参加 ③try out for竞争，参加选拔 [高分句型] ①He doesn’t have arms, but he plans to take part in the Chicago Triathlon soon. (but引导让步状语从句) ②For Bannon, it’s a simple goal to live normally and be like one of the guys. (it作形式主语；并列句) 9．【满分优秀范文】 It is my great honor and pleasure to stand here introducing and sharing a new product of our company,  a great and creative English learning app. The powerful app is named English Talent, which not only explains all the language knowledge that you are learning in textbooks but also includes massive daily English conversations, fascinating English articles, English movies, English songs and so on. The app could make it much easier for you to review what you have learned in class. Especially, because of plenty of great reading and audio materials, it becomes interesting and convenient to improve your reading, listening and speaking. What’s more, you can also practice your spoken English by singing English songs and watching films. Of course, you can also enlarge your English vocabulary by using this app. In a word, the new app would become your English learning assistant if you’d love to. Thanks for your listening. 【知识点】发明与创造 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍这款软件，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据表格内容介绍这款软件的名称、内容和优势； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also不但……而且 ②and so on等等 ③because of因为 ④in a word总的来说 [高分句型] ①The powerful app is named English Talent, which not only explains all the language knowledge that you are learning in textbooks but also includes massive daily English conversations, fascinating English articles, English movies, English songs and so on. (which引导的非限制性定语从句，that引导的定语从句) ②The app could make it much easier for you to review what you have learned in class. (what引导的宾语从句) 10．【满分优秀范文】 Enjoy My Teenage Life I like reading. I enjoy reading all kinds of books. I think reading books can open up a new world for me and bring me happiness. I can learn a lot from books. I also enjoy my life. I have a healthy lifestyle. I eat healthily and do exercise regularly. The technology brings me many changes. At the same time, I can use these electronic products properly. I don’t spend too much time on them. In my spare time, I have a good communication with my parents and share our feelings. Whether I experience happiness or sadness, I share with my friends. My friends and I do volunteer work at weekends. We usually go to the Children’s Hospital to cheer them up. We should enjoy our life and value what we have. 【知识点】阅读、个人信息 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己享受阅读； 第二步，根据要点提示介绍自己享受生活； 第三步，最后表达感想“我们应该享受生活，珍惜我们所拥有的”。 [亮点词汇] ① all kinds of各种各样的 ② at the same time同时 ③ cheer sb up使某人振作起来 [高分句型] ①Whether I experience happiness or sadness, I share with my friends.（状语从句） ②We should enjoy our life and value what we have.（宾语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$