18 山东烟台-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

18 山东烟台 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在考查学生的英语写作能力，包括对时间、地点等关键信息的准确表达，对故事的理解和概括能力，以及用英语传达意义和呼吁的能力。 能力考查：考验学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力，还有对课本知识的灵活运用以及对英语词汇和语法的掌握程度。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，让学生能够在实际情境中运用英语进行交流和表达，培养学生的跨文化意识和文化理解能力。 （2024·山东烟台·中考真题）假如你是光明中学英语社团成员，本周末社团将演出课本剧《愚公移山》，校园广播站准备通知在学校访问的外国学生前去观看，请你用英语写一篇广播稿。 主要内容包括： 1.演出时间、地点； 2.课本剧内容简介及意义； 3.欢迎对演出提出意见建议。 要求： 1.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使行文连贯； 3.不得出现真实的个人姓名、校名等信息。 提示词汇：课本剧 textbook drama；《愚公移山》Yu Gong Moves the Mountains Good morning, everyone! This is an announcement for all the foreign students visiting our school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your attention! 【满分优秀范文】 Good morning, everyone! This is an announcement for all the foreign students visiting our school. A textbook drama called Yu Gong Moves the Mountains will be held in our school hall this weekend. It is a story about an old man named Yu Gong. Two high mountains stopped his family from walking to the other side. Yu Gong decided to move the mountains with his family. Many people laughed at him, but he never gave up. He believed that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died. Then a god was moved by Yu Gong so he sent two gods to help him move the mountains. The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up. After watching the drama, you are welcome to give your opinions and suggestions on it. Thanks for your attention! 【知识点】寓言童话、文体活动 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；   ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤]   第一步，介绍课本剧表演的时间和地点；   第二步，讲述《愚公移山》的故事以及从这个故事中学到的东西。   [亮点词汇]   ①stop sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事   ②give up放弃   ③as long as只要   [高分句型]   ①A textbook drama called Yu Gong Moves the Mountains will be held in our school hall this weekend.（一般将来时被动语态）   ②He believed that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died.（宾语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想通过让学生写感谢信的形式，考查学生的英语书面表达能力，以及对感恩之情的表达和对他人帮助的描述。 能力考查：考查学生运用所学词汇、句型和语法知识进行有条理、清晰表达的能力，包括描述事件、表达情感、运用复杂句型等。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生英语写作能力的要求，如正确运用词汇和语法，逻辑清晰地组织语言，表达自己的思想和情感。 （2023·山东烟台·中考真题）假定你是李华，在外教Mr. Brown的指导下，你在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛（English Opera Competition）中获得了一等奖。请给Mr. Brown写一封感谢信，主要内容包括： l. 对Mr. Brown表示感谢； 2. Mr. Brown的帮助、你取得的进步及比赛的结果； 3. 邀请Mr. Brown到家里做客。 要求： 1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯； 3. 信中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。 Dear Mr. Brown, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Mr. Brown, I am very excited to tell you something about the English Opera Competition I took part in last week in our school. I got First Prize out of 40 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination. When I heard the final result, I couldn’t believe my ears and jumped with joy. It’s because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English. Before the contest, whenever you had free time, you would help me practise my spoken English. Besides, you communicated with me as much as possible, and corrected my pronunciation and intonation. What’s more, you taught me some helpful speaking skills and made me full of confidence. Without your help, I wouldn’t have achieved such a good result. Also, I have benefited a lot from this competition. All in all, I really appreciated your help. Thank you again for your advice and kind help. I sincerely invite you to my home for dinner and have a good time. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】叙事忆旧、情感 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示向外教表示感谢，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，告知他这个好消息以及比赛的结果； 第二步，详细介绍他对你的帮助以及你取得的进步； 第三步，再次表示感谢并邀请他到家里做客。 [亮点词汇] ①communicate with和某人交流 ②full of充满 ③all in all总的来说 [高分句型] ①I got First Prize out of 40 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②It’s because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English.(强调句) 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图在于通过设定这样的情境，促进学生对中华优秀传统文化的了解和传播，同时提高英语写作能力。 能力考查方面，着重检验学生的语言表达、逻辑思维和跨文化交际能力。 课标要求学生能够运用所学语言知识，清晰、准确地传达信息，展现对不同文化的理解和尊重。 （2022·山东烟台·中考真题）假设你是李华。你校为弘扬中华优秀传统文化，于5月16日在礼堂（school hall）举办了一年一度的中华传统文化展评活动，有剪纸、绘画、诗词大赛（poetry competition）等。你的英国朋友John对活动很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件。主要内容包括： 1. 展评的时间及地点； 2. 展评的内容及你的感受； 3. 邀请John明年来参加。 要求： 1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯； 3. 邮件中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。 Dear John, How is everything going? I’m writing to introduce our school’s annual Chinese Traditional Art Exhibition to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear John, How is everything going? I’m writing to introduce our school’s annual Chinese Traditional Art Exhibition to you. In order to promote the excellent traditional Chinese culture, our school held the annual traditional Chinese culture exhibition and evaluation activities at the school hall on May 16th, including paper-cutting, painting, poetry competition and so on. Among all the activities, I like the Chinese Poetry Contest best. And I won the third prize in the contest. These activities not only cultivated the habit of learning traditional culture, but also aroused the interest in it. What’s more, we benefited a lot from them. I hope you will come next year and your participation will make a difference. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容向John介绍展评并发出邀请，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时主要以第三人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍展评的时间，地点，内容和感受；第三段发出邀请。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在通过让学生写邀请邮件，考查学生的英语书面表达能力，以及对相关话题的理解和组织能力。 能力考查：考查学生运用英语词汇、语法和句型来准确、清晰地表达信息的能力，同时也考查学生的逻辑思维和跨文化交际意识。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生在书面表达方面的要求，即能够根据给定的情境和任务，用英语进行有效的交流和表达。 （2021·山东烟台·中考真题）为庆祝中国共产党建党100周年，你校将于下周举办艺术节，活动丰富多彩。假设你是李华，负责组织英语演讲比赛，请你给外教Smith写封邮件，邀请他担任演讲比赛的评委（judge），主要内容包括： 1.艺术节的基本情况和意义； 2.演讲比赛的时间、地点； 3.表达邀请的愿望。 要求： 1.词数100词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.须包括所有要点提示，并适当补充，语句通顺，内容连贯； 3.信中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。 Dear Mr. Smith, To celebrate the 100-year anniversary of the Communist Party of China, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Mr. Smith, To celebrate the 100-year anniversary of the Communist Party of China, our school is to hold an activity. Knowing that you’re interested in it. I’m writing to invite you to be one of the judges in the speech contest. As planned, we are going to hold an art festival. We will sing red songs and pay a visit to Xiaoping’s former residence to show our love for the Party and our motherland. We will also hold a speech contest. It will be held in our school hall at 10 o’clock this Saturday. The event is so meaningful that not only can it raise patriotic awareness of us, but also enrich our school life. I hope you can come and have a good time. Looking forward to your earliest reply. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇电子邮件。要求根据提示内容，邀请外教Smith做演讲比赛的评委，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时主要以第一人称来介绍，时态以一般将来时为主。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题，告知自己的目的；第二段介绍将举行的艺术节和演讲比赛的相关信息；第三段表达邀请的愿望；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想通过让学生写邀请信的方式，考查学生对活动的描述和组织能力，以及用英语进行书面表达和交流的能力。 能力考查： 1. 考查学生对书信格式的掌握，包括开头、结尾的称呼和落款。 2. 考查学生能否清晰、准确地描述活动的时间、内容和意义。 3. 考查学生运用所学词汇和句型来表达自己想法的能力，比如“clean up”“last from...to...”“can't wait to”等。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生英语书面表达能力的要求，即能够根据给定的主题和提示，用英语写出连贯、有逻辑的短文，并且能够正确运用所学的语法、词汇和句型。 （2020·山东烟台·中考真题）假设你是李华，你校将要举办“劳动实践周”活动。请根据以下提示，给你的英国朋友Scott写一封信，邀请他参加。 内容包括 1.活动时间：…… 2.活动内容：校园环境美化、实践基地劳动、劳动主题演讲…… 3.活动意义：…… 要求 1.100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.包括所有提示要点，并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯； 3.信中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇∶Labour Practice Week 劳动实践周；practice base实践基地 Dear Scott, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】： Dear Scott, How's it going? I’m glad to tell you a piece of good news. Our school will have a Labour Practice Week. Welcome you to join it. This activity lasts from September 1st to 7th. During the week, we'll clean up our campus completely to make our school more beautiful. What's more, we can work in the practice base. It must be really interesting. We'll learn to do lots of things, for example, doing some cooking, driving a car, even shooting. I can't wait to take part in it! Don't forget to prepare a talk, everyone has to give a talk about the activity at last. We'll learn a lot and open our mind in it. We must have a good time together there! Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】社团/俱乐部 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应根据题目要求介绍劳动实践周活动的时间、活动内容及意义。 2.写作指导：本文用第一人称来写作，时态采用一般将来时为主，介绍活动的具体内容叙述完整，条理清晰。 最新模拟 1．（2024·山东烟台·一模）假设你是红星中学的一名学生，学校要求你们暑假期间参加一些社会实践活动。请根据下面表格中的提示信息，用英语写一篇短文发表在学校微信公众平台的英语栏目中。 Social Practical Program (社会实践活动) Activities Reasons Learn to do housework Learn basic life skills, help parents Clean up the city park Make our city more beautiful (增加一条) …(增加一条) 要求： 1.句子通顺，条理清晰，无语法、单词拼写及标点符号错误。 2.所写短文与表中提示内容相符。 3.字数在80以上。 4.可在完成提示内容的基础上，展开想象，适当发挥。 5. 短文开头已给出，但不计入总字数。 During the coming summer vacation, I am going to take part in these activities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·山东烟台·一模）作为即将毕业的学生，我们现在的学习压力很大，经常面对各种考试，因此有时会产生焦虑情绪。请你根据内容提示，简单描述一下我们的考试压力主要体现在哪些方面，并针对这些情况给出合理的建议。 提示： 1. 表现：担心考试，考前很难入睡，考试时发挥失常； 2. 建议：请从考前学习准备，作息时间和放松方式这三方面，给出缓解考试压力的具体建议。 要求： 1. 观点鲜明，要用到所有提示内容，并适当发挥，语言流畅，条理清晰； 2. 词数100词左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名与学校。 How to deal with the exam stress We students are very busy with schoolwork and in the face of many exams every school day. Some of us ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·山东烟台·一模）假如你是李华，想参加学校举办的以 “梦想职业体验” 为主题的实践活动。请给主办人Mr. Brown写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。 主要内容： 1. 个人信息和兴趣爱好； 2. 梦想职业和个人计划。 写作要求： 1. 包括所有内容要点，并适当拓展，以使语言通顺，行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校的名称； 3. 80—120 词之间，开头已给出，不计入总词数； Dear Mr. Brown, It’s my pleasure to introduce myself to you.____________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply. Best wishes! Your Sincerely, Li Hua 4．（2024·山东烟台·二模）假如你是学校某英语专栏的编辑Linda，收到Andy的投稿，她向你倾诉她一个月前转入一所新学校，因为没有朋友，她总是感到孤独，且成绩退步，她很忧愁。她希望你给她几点建议。请你根据以下提示给她回信。 你的建议 多交朋友：1. 主动和别人交谈   2. …… 改善学习方法：1.上课认真听讲 2.…… 丰富校园生活：1. 参加班级活动 2. …… 要求：1. 词数100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 须包括所有要点提示，并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯； 3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：talk to; listen to; take part in; make...colorful Dear Andy, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Linda ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 18 山东烟台 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在考查学生的英语写作能力，包括对时间、地点等关键信息的准确表达，对故事的理解和概括能力，以及用英语传达意义和呼吁的能力。 能力考查：考验学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力，还有对课本知识的灵活运用以及对英语词汇和语法的掌握程度。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，让学生能够在实际情境中运用英语进行交流和表达，培养学生的跨文化意识和文化理解能力。 （2024·山东烟台·中考真题）假如你是光明中学英语社团成员，本周末社团将演出课本剧《愚公移山》，校园广播站准备通知在学校访问的外国学生前去观看，请你用英语写一篇广播稿。 主要内容包括： 1.演出时间、地点； 2.课本剧内容简介及意义； 3.欢迎对演出提出意见建议。 要求： 1.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使行文连贯； 3.不得出现真实的个人姓名、校名等信息。 提示词汇：课本剧 textbook drama；《愚公移山》Yu Gong Moves the Mountains Good morning, everyone! This is an announcement for all the foreign students visiting our school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your attention! 【满分优秀范文】 Good morning, everyone! This is an announcement for all the foreign students visiting our school. A textbook drama called Yu Gong Moves the Mountains will be held in our school hall this weekend. It is a story about an old man named Yu Gong. Two high mountains stopped his family from walking to the other side. Yu Gong decided to move the mountains with his family. Many people laughed at him, but he never gave up. He believed that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died. Then a god was moved by Yu Gong so he sent two gods to help him move the mountains. The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up. After watching the drama, you are welcome to give your opinions and suggestions on it. Thanks for your attention! 【知识点】寓言童话、文体活动 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；   ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤]   第一步，介绍课本剧表演的时间和地点；   第二步，讲述《愚公移山》的故事以及从这个故事中学到的东西。   [亮点词汇]   ①stop sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事   ②give up放弃   ③as long as只要   [高分句型]   ①A textbook drama called Yu Gong Moves the Mountains will be held in our school hall this weekend.（一般将来时被动语态）   ②He believed that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died.（宾语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想通过让学生写感谢信的形式，考查学生的英语书面表达能力，以及对感恩之情的表达和对他人帮助的描述。 能力考查：考查学生运用所学词汇、句型和语法知识进行有条理、清晰表达的能力，包括描述事件、表达情感、运用复杂句型等。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生英语写作能力的要求，如正确运用词汇和语法，逻辑清晰地组织语言，表达自己的思想和情感。 （2023·山东烟台·中考真题）假定你是李华，在外教Mr. Brown的指导下，你在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛（English Opera Competition）中获得了一等奖。请给Mr. Brown写一封感谢信，主要内容包括： l. 对Mr. Brown表示感谢； 2. Mr. Brown的帮助、你取得的进步及比赛的结果； 3. 邀请Mr. Brown到家里做客。 要求： 1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯； 3. 信中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。 Dear Mr. Brown, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Mr. Brown, I am very excited to tell you something about the English Opera Competition I took part in last week in our school. I got First Prize out of 40 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination. When I heard the final result, I couldn’t believe my ears and jumped with joy. It’s because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English. Before the contest, whenever you had free time, you would help me practise my spoken English. Besides, you communicated with me as much as possible, and corrected my pronunciation and intonation. What’s more, you taught me some helpful speaking skills and made me full of confidence. Without your help, I wouldn’t have achieved such a good result. Also, I have benefited a lot from this competition. All in all, I really appreciated your help. Thank you again for your advice and kind help. I sincerely invite you to my home for dinner and have a good time. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】叙事忆旧、情感 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示向外教表示感谢，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，告知他这个好消息以及比赛的结果； 第二步，详细介绍他对你的帮助以及你取得的进步； 第三步，再次表示感谢并邀请他到家里做客。 [亮点词汇] ①communicate with和某人交流 ②full of充满 ③all in all总的来说 [高分句型] ①I got First Prize out of 40 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②It’s because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English.(强调句) 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图在于通过设定这样的情境，促进学生对中华优秀传统文化的了解和传播，同时提高英语写作能力。 能力考查方面，着重检验学生的语言表达、逻辑思维和跨文化交际能力。 课标要求学生能够运用所学语言知识，清晰、准确地传达信息，展现对不同文化的理解和尊重。 （2022·山东烟台·中考真题）假设你是李华。你校为弘扬中华优秀传统文化，于5月16日在礼堂（school hall）举办了一年一度的中华传统文化展评活动，有剪纸、绘画、诗词大赛（poetry competition）等。你的英国朋友John对活动很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件。主要内容包括： 1. 展评的时间及地点； 2. 展评的内容及你的感受； 3. 邀请John明年来参加。 要求： 1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯； 3. 邮件中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。 Dear John, How is everything going? I’m writing to introduce our school’s annual Chinese Traditional Art Exhibition to you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear John, How is everything going? I’m writing to introduce our school’s annual Chinese Traditional Art Exhibition to you. In order to promote the excellent traditional Chinese culture, our school held the annual traditional Chinese culture exhibition and evaluation activities at the school hall on May 16th, including paper-cutting, painting, poetry competition and so on. Among all the activities, I like the Chinese Poetry Contest best. And I won the third prize in the contest. These activities not only cultivated the habit of learning traditional culture, but also aroused the interest in it. What’s more, we benefited a lot from them. I hope you will come next year and your participation will make a difference. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容向John介绍展评并发出邀请，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时主要以第三人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍展评的时间，地点，内容和感受；第三段发出邀请。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在通过让学生写邀请邮件，考查学生的英语书面表达能力，以及对相关话题的理解和组织能力。 能力考查：考查学生运用英语词汇、语法和句型来准确、清晰地表达信息的能力，同时也考查学生的逻辑思维和跨文化交际意识。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生在书面表达方面的要求，即能够根据给定的情境和任务，用英语进行有效的交流和表达。 （2021·山东烟台·中考真题）为庆祝中国共产党建党100周年，你校将于下周举办艺术节，活动丰富多彩。假设你是李华，负责组织英语演讲比赛，请你给外教Smith写封邮件，邀请他担任演讲比赛的评委（judge），主要内容包括： 1.艺术节的基本情况和意义； 2.演讲比赛的时间、地点； 3.表达邀请的愿望。 要求： 1.词数100词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.须包括所有要点提示，并适当补充，语句通顺，内容连贯； 3.信中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。 Dear Mr. Smith, To celebrate the 100-year anniversary of the Communist Party of China, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Mr. Smith, To celebrate the 100-year anniversary of the Communist Party of China, our school is to hold an activity. Knowing that you’re interested in it. I’m writing to invite you to be one of the judges in the speech contest. As planned, we are going to hold an art festival. We will sing red songs and pay a visit to Xiaoping’s former residence to show our love for the Party and our motherland. We will also hold a speech contest. It will be held in our school hall at 10 o’clock this Saturday. The event is so meaningful that not only can it raise patriotic awareness of us, but also enrich our school life. I hope you can come and have a good time. Looking forward to your earliest reply. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇电子邮件。要求根据提示内容，邀请外教Smith做演讲比赛的评委，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时主要以第一人称来介绍，时态以一般将来时为主。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题，告知自己的目的；第二段介绍将举行的艺术节和演讲比赛的相关信息；第三段表达邀请的愿望；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想通过让学生写邀请信的方式，考查学生对活动的描述和组织能力，以及用英语进行书面表达和交流的能力。 能力考查： 1. 考查学生对书信格式的掌握，包括开头、结尾的称呼和落款。 2. 考查学生能否清晰、准确地描述活动的时间、内容和意义。 3. 考查学生运用所学词汇和句型来表达自己想法的能力，比如“clean up”“last from...to...”“can't wait to”等。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生英语书面表达能力的要求，即能够根据给定的主题和提示，用英语写出连贯、有逻辑的短文，并且能够正确运用所学的语法、词汇和句型。 （2020·山东烟台·中考真题）假设你是李华，你校将要举办“劳动实践周”活动。请根据以下提示，给你的英国朋友Scott写一封信，邀请他参加。 内容包括 1.活动时间：…… 2.活动内容：校园环境美化、实践基地劳动、劳动主题演讲…… 3.活动意义：…… 要求 1.100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2.包括所有提示要点，并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯； 3.信中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇∶Labour Practice Week 劳动实践周；practice base实践基地 Dear Scott, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】： Dear Scott, How's it going? I’m glad to tell you a piece of good news. Our school will have a Labour Practice Week. Welcome you to join it. This activity lasts from September 1st to 7th. During the week, we'll clean up our campus completely to make our school more beautiful. What's more, we can work in the practice base. It must be really interesting. We'll learn to do lots of things, for example, doing some cooking, driving a car, even shooting. I can't wait to take part in it! Don't forget to prepare a talk, everyone has to give a talk about the activity at last. We'll learn a lot and open our mind in it. We must have a good time together there! Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】社团/俱乐部 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应根据题目要求介绍劳动实践周活动的时间、活动内容及意义。 2.写作指导：本文用第一人称来写作，时态采用一般将来时为主，介绍活动的具体内容叙述完整，条理清晰。 最新模拟 1．（2024·山东烟台·一模）假设你是红星中学的一名学生，学校要求你们暑假期间参加一些社会实践活动。请根据下面表格中的提示信息，用英语写一篇短文发表在学校微信公众平台的英语栏目中。 Social Practical Program (社会实践活动) Activities Reasons Learn to do housework Learn basic life skills, help parents Clean up the city park Make our city more beautiful (增加一条) …(增加一条) 要求： 1.句子通顺，条理清晰，无语法、单词拼写及标点符号错误。 2.所写短文与表中提示内容相符。 3.字数在80以上。 4.可在完成提示内容的基础上，展开想象，适当发挥。 5. 短文开头已给出，但不计入总字数。 During the coming summer vacation, I am going to take part in these activities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·山东烟台·一模）作为即将毕业的学生，我们现在的学习压力很大，经常面对各种考试，因此有时会产生焦虑情绪。请你根据内容提示，简单描述一下我们的考试压力主要体现在哪些方面，并针对这些情况给出合理的建议。 提示： 1. 表现：担心考试，考前很难入睡，考试时发挥失常； 2. 建议：请从考前学习准备，作息时间和放松方式这三方面，给出缓解考试压力的具体建议。 要求： 1. 观点鲜明，要用到所有提示内容，并适当发挥，语言流畅，条理清晰； 2. 词数100词左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名与学校。 How to deal with the exam stress We students are very busy with schoolwork and in the face of many exams every school day. Some of us ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·山东烟台·一模）假如你是李华，想参加学校举办的以 “梦想职业体验” 为主题的实践活动。请给主办人Mr. Brown写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。 主要内容： 1. 个人信息和兴趣爱好； 2. 梦想职业和个人计划。 写作要求： 1. 包括所有内容要点，并适当拓展，以使语言通顺，行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校的名称； 3. 80—120 词之间，开头已给出，不计入总词数； Dear Mr. Brown, It’s my pleasure to introduce myself to you.____________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply. Best wishes! Your Sincerely, Li Hua 4．（2024·山东烟台·二模）假如你是学校某英语专栏的编辑Linda，收到Andy的投稿，她向你倾诉她一个月前转入一所新学校，因为没有朋友，她总是感到孤独，且成绩退步，她很忧愁。她希望你给她几点建议。请你根据以下提示给她回信。 你的建议 多交朋友：1. 主动和别人交谈   2. …… 改善学习方法：1.上课认真听讲 2.…… 丰富校园生活：1. 参加班级活动 2. …… 要求：1. 词数100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 须包括所有要点提示，并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯； 3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：talk to; listen to; take part in; make...colorful Dear Andy, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Linda 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】 During the coming summer vacation, I am going to take part in these activities. I’d like to learn to do housework first. We can learn basic life skills from it. Also we need to do something to help our parents. Second, I will volunteer to clean up the city park. I’ll pick up rubbish around the park and ask people not to litter anywhere. I hope it will make our city more beautiful. Finally, I will help in the city library. I can put away the books and I can also read some books in the library. Helping others is helping ourselves. I’m sure that I will get a lot of social experience through the holiday. 【知识点】计划 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章开头，介绍假期计划； 第二步，根据题干中表格给出的要点，详细介绍具体做哪些事情以及原因； 第三步，点评自己的计划，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①take part in参加 ②pick up捡起 ③put away收起 [高分句型] ①Helping others is helping ourselves.（动名词作主语） ②I’m sure that I will get a lot of social experience through the holiday.（宾语从句） 2．【满分优秀范文】 How to Deal with the Exam Stress We students are very busy with schoolwork and in the face of many exams every school day. Some of us are so worried about exams that it’s hard to fall asleep before them. When we pay much attention to the exam, the test results won’t be good. If we have proper stress, we can work harder, but if we have too much pressure, it may have a bad effect on our study. We should learn to deal with pressure. First of all, we should review carefully and study hard before the exam. Second, we shouldn’t stay up late to review for the exam. Third, after reviewing for a long time, we should also relax ourselves properly. In addition, if we do well in the exam, we can give ourselves proper rewards. So I hope everyone can deal with the exam stress well and get good grades. 【知识点】意见/建议、情绪、方法/策略 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。   ［写作步骤］   第一步，表明写作意图，介绍考试前学生焦虑的表现；   第二步，具体给出缓解考试压力的建议；   第三步，书写结语，期待所有人都可以缓解压力，取得好成绩。   ［亮点词汇］   ①be worried about担忧 ②fall asleep睡觉 ③deal with处理 ［高分句型］   ①So I hope everyone can deal with the exam stress well and get good grades.（宾语从句）   ②If we have proper stress, we can work harder, but if we have too much pressure, it may have a bad effect on our study.（if引导的条件状语从句） 3．【满分优秀范文】： Dear Mr. Brown, It’s my pleasure to introduce myself to you. My name is Li Hua. I like reading and writing. I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates. And I have a habit of keeping a diary. I want to be a writer when I grow up. So after learning about the activity, I feel very excited because it’s about dream job experience. If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job, I will cherish this chance. After the activity, I will spend more time making a summary. I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply. Best wishes!   Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【知识点】计划、爱好、个人信息 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍个人信息及爱好； 第二步，介绍职业梦想和个人计划； 第三步，书写结语。表达希望能加入活动并得到尽快回复。 [亮点词汇] ①have a habit of 有……的习惯 ②keep a diary 写日记 ③opportunity机会 ④cherish珍惜 ⑤look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①I want to be a writer when I grow up.  (时间状语从句) ②If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job, I will cherish this chance.  (if引导条件状语从句) 4．【满分优秀范文】： Dear Andy, As far as I am concerned, you can do something to make yourself happy again. First, you should try to make more friends by talking to others actively. In this way, you can have a bigger chance to meet those who you can make friends with. Besides, you should give others a helping hand so as to make more friends. Second, you should improve your learning styles. Listening to the teachers carefully and doing exercises after class can certainly make you do well in schoolwork. Last but not the least, you should make your school life colorful. I suggest taking an active part in class activities and joining all kinds of clubs. I hope these suggestions can help you become happy soon. Yours, Linda 【知识点】意见/建议、青少年问题 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中需要补充建议。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，表明“可以做些事情让自己再次开心起来”； 第二步，具体介绍自己的建议，围绕“多交朋友、改善学习方法和丰富校园生活”这三个方面展开； 第三步，书写结语，并表达出“希望这些建议能让对方再次开心起来”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①make more friends交更多的朋友 ②do well in擅长 ③last but not the least最后同样重要的是 ④all kinds of各种各样的 [高分句型] ①In this way, you can have a bigger chance to meet those who you can make friends with.（who引导定语从句） ②I hope these suggestions can help you become happy soon.（省略引导词that的宾语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$