16 浙江-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

16 浙江 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题主要是想让同学们通过写邮件的方式，锻炼英语的书面表达能力，同时考查对相关信息的整合和运用能力。 能力考查： 1. 考查同学们的阅读理解能力，要理解题目中给出的关于两所学校的信息。 2. 考查语言组织和表达能力，能够清晰、准确地用英语向 Candy 推荐学校，并说明理由。 3. 考查逻辑思维能力，要根据 Candy 的喜好，有针对性地选择学校并阐述原因。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对学生英语写作能力的要求，能够运用所学的词汇、语法和句型，完成一定主题的书面表达任务，并且表达清晰、逻辑合理。 （2024·浙江·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，向她推荐一所合适的学校。 I like sports, and I’m interested in traditional Chinese art. Chinese food is great. My cousin’s school ◆in the city center ◆a good ping-pong team ◆hand-made food classes My school ◆in the countryside ◆a new sports center ◆local art clubs 注意： （1）邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （3）词数80左右：邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】① Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I know you love traditional Chinese art and food. I think my school is perfect for you. It is in the beautiful countryside. The local food here is really fresh and delicious. I believe you’ll enjoy it. Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! Also, our school has traditional art classes, and you can learn paper cutting, Chinese painting and so on. I’m sure you’ll love my school. Looking forward to your coming. Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】② Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. As you love sports and Chinese food, I think my cousin’s school is a good choice. It is in the city center with many restaurants nearby. You’ll find it easy to try different local foods there. In her school, there are some special hand-made food classes. You can learn to make food by yourself. I’m sure you’ll be interested in them. What’s more, the ping-pong team in her school is great. As a ping-pong lover, you can’t miss it! Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】学校设施、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] （以【满分优秀范文】①为例） ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容给她推荐一所合适的学校，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，向她推荐一个学校； 第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍推荐学校的信息； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①play basketball打篮球 ②and so on等等 [高分句型] Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! (so连接的并列句) 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想考查同学们的英语书面表达能力，包括语言组织、逻辑思维和对日常交流场景的应对能力。 能力考查：通过让同学们回复邮件，考查大家能否清晰准确地用英语表达自己的想法，能否根据对方的问题给出恰当的回答，以及能否运用所学的词汇和语法知识进行有效的交流。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生在语言运用、交际能力和文化意识等方面的要求，鼓励同学们在真实的语境中运用英语，提高综合语言运用能力。 （2023·浙江杭州·中考真题）假定你是李平，请你对英国朋友Jack的邮件进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 TO  LiPing@mail.com SUBJECT  C U soon! Hi Li Ping Next week I’ll be with you in Hangzhou. I can’t wait! It’s going to be so cool! We can do lots of exciting things together! I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me? Is there a swimming pool or tennis center nearby? I’d like to get you a gift from where I live. What would you like me to get you? I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon. Jack Hi Jack, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ping 【满分优秀范文】 Hi Jack, I am so glad to receive your email. I can’t wait to see you, too. It will be very hot in Hangzhou next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. There is a big swimming pool near my house. We can swim in it for free. In addition, there is a tennis center three kilometers from my home, so we can also go to play tennis. I like English local products very much. If it is convenient for you, please bring me some. I am looking forward to meeting you. Li Ping 【知识点】意见/建议、朋友 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先表示自己很开心收到对方的邮件； 第二步，具体阐述他需要带的东西以及介绍家附近的游泳池或网球中心； 第三步，最后介绍自己想要对方带什么。 [亮点词汇] ①can’t wait to do迫不及待做 ②as well as和，以及 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①It will be very hot in Hangzhou next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. （so引导并列句） ②If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.（if引导的条件状语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想考查学生用英语进行书面交流的能力，包括表达欢迎、介绍活动、给出建议等方面，同时也考查学生对相关词汇和句型的运用。 能力考查：考查学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力以及对所学英语知识的综合运用能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生在书面表达方面的要求，即能够根据给定的情境，用恰当的语言清晰、连贯地表达自己的想法和观点。 （2022·浙江杭州·中考真题）假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件，接受邀请并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 To: LiPing@mail.com Subject: Exchange Visit! Hi there, Li Ping! My name’s Jack and I’m going to be at your school for the exchange visit next month. I’m really excited about it! Well, why am I writing right now? for one thing, I really want to know something about the interesting activities at your school, so could you introduce one of them? Also, I am interested in Chinese culture. So what do you suggest I do after school? Take care and hope to hear from you soon. Jack Dear Jack, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ping One possible version: Dear Jack, I’m pleased to know that you’re coming for the exchange visit. We have many interesting school activities. Among them, the singing competition is the most popular. It offers a great chance to show our talents and helps us to learn something new. As for Chinese culture, I suggest you visit the Hangzhou National Tea Museum. You can learn about the history of Chinese tea there. Hope this helps. And tell me if there is anything else you need to know. Li Ping 【知识点】文体活动、中华文化、意见/建议 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据邮件内容进行回复，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍学校的一些有趣的活动，以及介绍关于中国文化的活动。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题主要是想考查同学们的英语书面表达能力，包括对邀请邮件的理解、回复邮件的格式和内容组织，以及对相关词汇和句型的运用。 能力考查： 考查同学们能否清晰地表达自己的想法和意愿，比如接受邀请、说明到达时间和携带食物等，同时还考查了同学们在英语写作中运用恰当的连接词和短语来使行文连贯的能力。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对同学们在语言运用、交际能力和文化意识方面的要求。通过这样的题目，让同学们能够在实际情境中运用所学的英语知识，提高英语的综合运用能力。 （2021·浙江杭州·中考真题）假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件，接受邀请并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Hi Li Ping, How is everything going with you? Next week my cousin Mike is staying with me. We’re having a party next Saturday. Please come! We’ll have lots of drinks. But if you remember, can you bring some Chinese food? The party will be starting at 6 p.m. What time do you think you’ll be coming? I’ll probably need one or two people to help me tidy up after the party. Do you think you’ll be able to stay and help? Anyway, hope you can make it. Please write back to tell me if you can come or not. All the best. Matt Dear Matt, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ping 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Matt, It’s good to hear from you. Everything is fine with me here. Thanks for the invitation! I will definitely come! It will be good to meet Mike. I’ll arrive at around 5:30 next Saturday and bring some traditional Chinese foods, like dumplings and zongzi for you. I hope you would like them. Don’t worry. I will stay after the party to help you clean up. Thanks again for the invitation. I am really looking forward to it! All the best. Li Ping 【知识点】周末活动 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时根据收到的邮件内容，接受邀请并回复，内容包括几点到达，以及所带的食物等。 2.本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容；时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时；在写作时，力求语言准确，格式准确，保证条理清晰。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想考查学生的英语书面表达能力，包括对邀请的回应、信息的询问以及语言的组织和运用。 能力考查：考查学生能否理解邮件内容并做出恰当回复，能否运用所学的英语知识清晰准确地表达自己的想法，同时也考查学生的逻辑思维能力，比如有条理地询问相关细节。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生在书面表达方面的要求，即能够根据给定的情境，用英语进行有效的交流和表达，并且能够运用适当的语言形式和结构。 （2020·浙江杭州·中考真题）假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复。内容包括接受邀请并询问至少三个相关细节（如具体地点……） 注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Li Ping, We would like to invite you to give us a talk on Chinese folk music. The talk will be on the evening of Friday, July 10th at 7:00. If you’re able to come, please reply in writing to this invitation by July 2nd. Hope you can make it! Larry Smith President of Foreign Students’ Club Dear Larry, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Larry, Thank you so much for your invitation. As a big fan of Chinese folk music, it’s my great honor to share something interesting with all of you. I’m available on the Friday evening, July 10th and I’ll be there on time. But I am still wondering more details about the talk. The first question I would like to know is where the talk will be held. Moreover, I will appreciate if you tell me how long the talk will last so that I can arrange the content of my talk. The last one is who will come to the talk. Thanks again for your invitation. Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Ping 【知识点】社团/俱乐部、合作与交流 【详解】1.题干解读：本题为书信作文，要求根据已有的邮件进行回复，开头和结尾已经给出。人称用第一人称，时态应用现在时。 2.【满分优秀范文】点评：【满分优秀范文】按照书信格式，采用“感谢并接受邀请——询问细节——再次感谢邀请”结构，其中对三点细节的询问（地点、时长、参与人员）是本文写作重点。【满分优秀范文】书信格式标准，层次分明，思路清晰，达到了题目写作要求，是一篇优秀的【满分优秀范文】。 3.高分亮点： 短语：share … with，on time，thanks for，look forward to。 句型： （1）Thank you so much for your invitation.（thank you for …句型） （2）As a big fan of Chinese folk music, it’s my great honor to share something interesting with all of you.（it作形式主语） （3）Moreover, I will appreciate if you tell me how long the talk will last so that I can arrange the content of my talk.（宾语从句） 最新模拟 1．（2024·浙江温州·三模）英语项目化学习复盘阶段，你班就“如何解决英语资料阅读困难”这一问题进行了调查，请根据如图，介绍调查结果，并结合自身经历谈谈你的做法和体会。 注意: 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 2. 词数：110词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I am going to share the results of our survey about how students dealt with the difficulties when reading English materials. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·浙江杭州·二模）假如你是李雷，上周参观了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息，写一篇短文，在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。 What were on show What they are made of/from What you think     clothes     chairs     model planes     …     waste paper     plastic bottles     used wood and glass     …     creative     save …     … 注意：（1）短文须介绍至少两项展品，可以适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （3）词数：110字左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·浙江温州·三模）你的学校将举行传统文化嘉年华（Traditional Culture Festival）。假如你是李华，请根据以下表格信息给你的好友Tony写一封邮件，介绍活动的相关内容及意义，并邀请他参与此次活动。 Time next Friday place in the school playground Activities ●watch… ●know about… Meaning educational… 注意： 1. 邮件必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息； 3. 词数：80—100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tony, Knowing that you like Chinese culture a lot, I’d like to tell you something about our Festival. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4．（2024·浙江台州·三模）假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：the fifth day of lunar May, Zongzi, dragon-boat races, in honor of (纪念) To: Li Ping@mail.com   Subject: the Dragon Boat Festival   Hi Li Ping, How is everything going? I hear that the Dragon Boat Festival is coming soon. I’m so interested in it. Would you like to tell me something about it? Also, what do you plan to do on that day? Hope to hear from you soon. Jack Dear Jack, I am so glad to receive your email. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·浙江金华·三模）假如你是李华，你校正举行以“用英语讲中国故事”为主题的征文比赛，请写一篇讲述与某位民族英雄相关的历史故事的短文参赛。 内容包括：故事的背景，故事的情节（起因、经过、结果），故事的意义。 注意：（1）文中不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息；（2）词数：80~100。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·浙江嘉兴·三模）即将过去的初中三年，想必你有很多甜蜜的回忆和感慨。对于即将到来的新生活，你又有什么计划呢？假设你是李华，你校将举行题为“Sweet Memories and Bright Future”的征文比赛。请你根据以下内容写一份征文投稿。 Memories ·sports meeting ·… unforgettable … Future ·be better at... ·… exciting … 注意： （1）必须包括以上所有要点，可适当增加； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息； （3）首句不计入总词数，词数：80-100。 Sweet Memories and Bright Future How time flies! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·浙江宁波·三模）作为中学生，我们现在的学习压力很大，经常面对各种考试，因此有时会产生焦虑情绪。 校英语报邀你写一篇短文，给考试焦虑的同学们提一些建议。请你结合自己的学习经历阐述你的观点，结合以下要点，以”How to Deal with the Exam Stress”为题写一篇短文。 Reasons Be afraid to fail the exam * Advice Prepare hard Sleep well before the exam * 注意： (1)短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥； (2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； (3)词数：80—100。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·浙江舟山·三模）假设你是李华，你在英国笔友Jack在做一个关于中国学生如何过暑假的调查，他给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解一下有关情况，请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际情况用英语回复，可以有适当的发挥。 注意： 1.字数 80 词左右； 2.回复中不得提及学生所在学校和本人姓名； 3.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Jack, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 9．（2024·浙江杭州·二模）学校英文报正以“Wonderful Zhejiang”为题开展征文活动。请根据以下图示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 注意要求： 1．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 2．词数100词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·浙江绍兴·二模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Dave正在调查中学生的烦恼及应对情况，请你根据Dave发给你的调查表内容，给他回复一封邮件，谈谈你最近解决过的最大烦恼。 A Survey on Problem Solving 1. What was the biggest problem you have solved these days? How did you feel? (Tip: You can write about your friendship, study, parent-child relationship and so on.) 2. What did you do to solve it? What was the result? 3. What can you learn from the experience? 注意：(1) 短文必须包括图表中所有内容，可适当增加细节； (2) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； (3) 词数：100词左右； (4) 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Dave, Thanks for your last e-mail. I’d like to share the biggest problem I have solved recently. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 16 浙江 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题主要是想让同学们通过写邮件的方式，锻炼英语的书面表达能力，同时考查对相关信息的整合和运用能力。 能力考查： 1. 考查同学们的阅读理解能力，要理解题目中给出的关于两所学校的信息。 2. 考查语言组织和表达能力，能够清晰、准确地用英语向 Candy 推荐学校，并说明理由。 3. 考查逻辑思维能力，要根据 Candy 的喜好，有针对性地选择学校并阐述原因。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对学生英语写作能力的要求，能够运用所学的词汇、语法和句型，完成一定主题的书面表达任务，并且表达清晰、逻辑合理。 （2024·浙江·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，向她推荐一所合适的学校。 I like sports, and I’m interested in traditional Chinese art. Chinese food is great. My cousin’s school ◆in the city center ◆a good ping-pong team ◆hand-made food classes My school ◆in the countryside ◆a new sports center ◆local art clubs 注意： （1）邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （3）词数80左右：邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】① Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I know you love traditional Chinese art and food. I think my school is perfect for you. It is in the beautiful countryside. The local food here is really fresh and delicious. I believe you’ll enjoy it. Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! Also, our school has traditional art classes, and you can learn paper cutting, Chinese painting and so on. I’m sure you’ll love my school. Looking forward to your coming. Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】② Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. As you love sports and Chinese food, I think my cousin’s school is a good choice. It is in the city center with many restaurants nearby. You’ll find it easy to try different local foods there. In her school, there are some special hand-made food classes. You can learn to make food by yourself. I’m sure you’ll be interested in them. What’s more, the ping-pong team in her school is great. As a ping-pong lover, you can’t miss it! Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】学校设施、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] （以【满分优秀范文】①为例） ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容给她推荐一所合适的学校，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，向她推荐一个学校； 第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍推荐学校的信息； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①play basketball打篮球 ②and so on等等 [高分句型] Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! (so连接的并列句) 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想考查同学们的英语书面表达能力，包括语言组织、逻辑思维和对日常交流场景的应对能力。 能力考查：通过让同学们回复邮件，考查大家能否清晰准确地用英语表达自己的想法，能否根据对方的问题给出恰当的回答，以及能否运用所学的词汇和语法知识进行有效的交流。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生在语言运用、交际能力和文化意识等方面的要求，鼓励同学们在真实的语境中运用英语，提高综合语言运用能力。 （2023·浙江杭州·中考真题）假定你是李平，请你对英国朋友Jack的邮件进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 TO  LiPing@mail.com SUBJECT  C U soon! Hi Li Ping Next week I’ll be with you in Hangzhou. I can’t wait! It’s going to be so cool! We can do lots of exciting things together! I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me? Is there a swimming pool or tennis center nearby? I’d like to get you a gift from where I live. What would you like me to get you? I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon. Jack Hi Jack, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ping 【满分优秀范文】 Hi Jack, I am so glad to receive your email. I can’t wait to see you, too. It will be very hot in Hangzhou next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. There is a big swimming pool near my house. We can swim in it for free. In addition, there is a tennis center three kilometers from my home, so we can also go to play tennis. I like English local products very much. If it is convenient for you, please bring me some. I am looking forward to meeting you. Li Ping 【知识点】意见/建议、朋友 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先表示自己很开心收到对方的邮件； 第二步，具体阐述他需要带的东西以及介绍家附近的游泳池或网球中心； 第三步，最后介绍自己想要对方带什么。 [亮点词汇] ①can’t wait to do迫不及待做 ②as well as和，以及 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①It will be very hot in Hangzhou next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. （so引导并列句） ②If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.（if引导的条件状语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想考查学生用英语进行书面交流的能力，包括表达欢迎、介绍活动、给出建议等方面，同时也考查学生对相关词汇和句型的运用。 能力考查：考查学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力以及对所学英语知识的综合运用能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生在书面表达方面的要求，即能够根据给定的情境，用恰当的语言清晰、连贯地表达自己的想法和观点。 （2022·浙江杭州·中考真题）假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件，接受邀请并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 To: LiPing@mail.com Subject: Exchange Visit! Hi there, Li Ping! My name’s Jack and I’m going to be at your school for the exchange visit next month. I’m really excited about it! Well, why am I writing right now? for one thing, I really want to know something about the interesting activities at your school, so could you introduce one of them? Also, I am interested in Chinese culture. So what do you suggest I do after school? Take care and hope to hear from you soon. Jack Dear Jack, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ping One possible version: Dear Jack, I’m pleased to know that you’re coming for the exchange visit. We have many interesting school activities. Among them, the singing competition is the most popular. It offers a great chance to show our talents and helps us to learn something new. As for Chinese culture, I suggest you visit the Hangzhou National Tea Museum. You can learn about the history of Chinese tea there. Hope this helps. And tell me if there is anything else you need to know. Li Ping 【知识点】文体活动、中华文化、意见/建议 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据邮件内容进行回复，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍学校的一些有趣的活动，以及介绍关于中国文化的活动。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题主要是想考查同学们的英语书面表达能力，包括对邀请邮件的理解、回复邮件的格式和内容组织，以及对相关词汇和句型的运用。 能力考查： 考查同学们能否清晰地表达自己的想法和意愿，比如接受邀请、说明到达时间和携带食物等，同时还考查了同学们在英语写作中运用恰当的连接词和短语来使行文连贯的能力。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对同学们在语言运用、交际能力和文化意识方面的要求。通过这样的题目，让同学们能够在实际情境中运用所学的英语知识，提高英语的综合运用能力。 （2021·浙江杭州·中考真题）假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件，接受邀请并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Hi Li Ping, How is everything going with you? Next week my cousin Mike is staying with me. We’re having a party next Saturday. Please come! We’ll have lots of drinks. But if you remember, can you bring some Chinese food? The party will be starting at 6 p.m. What time do you think you’ll be coming? I’ll probably need one or two people to help me tidy up after the party. Do you think you’ll be able to stay and help? Anyway, hope you can make it. Please write back to tell me if you can come or not. All the best. Matt Dear Matt, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ping 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Matt, It’s good to hear from you. Everything is fine with me here. Thanks for the invitation! I will definitely come! It will be good to meet Mike. I’ll arrive at around 5:30 next Saturday and bring some traditional Chinese foods, like dumplings and zongzi for you. I hope you would like them. Don’t worry. I will stay after the party to help you clean up. Thanks again for the invitation. I am really looking forward to it! All the best. Li Ping 【知识点】周末活动 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时根据收到的邮件内容，接受邀请并回复，内容包括几点到达，以及所带的食物等。 2.本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容；时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时；在写作时，力求语言准确，格式准确，保证条理清晰。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想考查学生的英语书面表达能力，包括对邀请的回应、信息的询问以及语言的组织和运用。 能力考查：考查学生能否理解邮件内容并做出恰当回复，能否运用所学的英语知识清晰准确地表达自己的想法，同时也考查学生的逻辑思维能力，比如有条理地询问相关细节。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生在书面表达方面的要求，即能够根据给定的情境，用英语进行有效的交流和表达，并且能够运用适当的语言形式和结构。 （2020·浙江杭州·中考真题）假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复。内容包括接受邀请并询问至少三个相关细节（如具体地点……） 注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Li Ping, We would like to invite you to give us a talk on Chinese folk music. The talk will be on the evening of Friday, July 10th at 7:00. If you’re able to come, please reply in writing to this invitation by July 2nd. Hope you can make it! Larry Smith President of Foreign Students’ Club Dear Larry, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Larry, Thank you so much for your invitation. As a big fan of Chinese folk music, it’s my great honor to share something interesting with all of you. I’m available on the Friday evening, July 10th and I’ll be there on time. But I am still wondering more details about the talk. The first question I would like to know is where the talk will be held. Moreover, I will appreciate if you tell me how long the talk will last so that I can arrange the content of my talk. The last one is who will come to the talk. Thanks again for your invitation. Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Ping 【知识点】社团/俱乐部、合作与交流 【详解】1.题干解读：本题为书信作文，要求根据已有的邮件进行回复，开头和结尾已经给出。人称用第一人称，时态应用现在时。 2.【满分优秀范文】点评：【满分优秀范文】按照书信格式，采用“感谢并接受邀请——询问细节——再次感谢邀请”结构，其中对三点细节的询问（地点、时长、参与人员）是本文写作重点。【满分优秀范文】书信格式标准，层次分明，思路清晰，达到了题目写作要求，是一篇优秀的【满分优秀范文】。 3.高分亮点： 短语：share … with，on time，thanks for，look forward to。 句型： （1）Thank you so much for your invitation.（thank you for …句型） （2）As a big fan of Chinese folk music, it’s my great honor to share something interesting with all of you.（it作形式主语） （3）Moreover, I will appreciate if you tell me how long the talk will last so that I can arrange the content of my talk.（宾语从句） 最新模拟 1．（2024·浙江温州·三模）英语项目化学习复盘阶段，你班就“如何解决英语资料阅读困难”这一问题进行了调查，请根据如图，介绍调查结果，并结合自身经历谈谈你的做法和体会。 注意: 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 2. 词数：110词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I am going to share the results of our survey about how students dealt with the difficulties when reading English materials. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·浙江杭州·二模）假如你是李雷，上周参观了以“Working the Waste into Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息，写一篇短文，在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。 What were on show What they are made of/from What you think     clothes     chairs     model planes     …     waste paper     plastic bottles     used wood and glass     …     creative     save …     … 注意：（1）短文须介绍至少两项展品，可以适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （3）词数：110字左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·浙江温州·三模）你的学校将举行传统文化嘉年华（Traditional Culture Festival）。假如你是李华，请根据以下表格信息给你的好友Tony写一封邮件，介绍活动的相关内容及意义，并邀请他参与此次活动。 Time next Friday place in the school playground Activities ●watch… ●know about… Meaning educational… 注意： 1. 邮件必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息； 3. 词数：80—100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tony, Knowing that you like Chinese culture a lot, I’d like to tell you something about our Festival. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 4．（2024·浙江台州·三模）假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：the fifth day of lunar May, Zongzi, dragon-boat races, in honor of (纪念) To: Li Ping@mail.com   Subject: the Dragon Boat Festival   Hi Li Ping, How is everything going? I hear that the Dragon Boat Festival is coming soon. I’m so interested in it. Would you like to tell me something about it? Also, what do you plan to do on that day? Hope to hear from you soon. Jack Dear Jack, I am so glad to receive your email. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·浙江金华·三模）假如你是李华，你校正举行以“用英语讲中国故事”为主题的征文比赛，请写一篇讲述与某位民族英雄相关的历史故事的短文参赛。 内容包括：故事的背景，故事的情节（起因、经过、结果），故事的意义。 注意：（1）文中不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息；（2）词数：80~100。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·浙江嘉兴·三模）即将过去的初中三年，想必你有很多甜蜜的回忆和感慨。对于即将到来的新生活，你又有什么计划呢？假设你是李华，你校将举行题为“Sweet Memories and Bright Future”的征文比赛。请你根据以下内容写一份征文投稿。 Memories ·sports meeting ·… unforgettable … Future ·be better at... ·… exciting … 注意： （1）必须包括以上所有要点，可适当增加； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息； （3）首句不计入总词数，词数：80-100。 Sweet Memories and Bright Future How time flies! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·浙江宁波·三模）作为中学生，我们现在的学习压力很大，经常面对各种考试，因此有时会产生焦虑情绪。 校英语报邀你写一篇短文，给考试焦虑的同学们提一些建议。请你结合自己的学习经历阐述你的观点，结合以下要点，以”How to Deal with the Exam Stress”为题写一篇短文。 Reasons Be afraid to fail the exam * Advice Prepare hard Sleep well before the exam * 注意： (1)短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥； (2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； (3)词数：80—100。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·浙江舟山·三模）假设你是李华，你在英国笔友Jack在做一个关于中国学生如何过暑假的调查，他给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解一下有关情况，请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际情况用英语回复，可以有适当的发挥。 注意： 1.字数 80 词左右； 2.回复中不得提及学生所在学校和本人姓名； 3.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Jack, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 9．（2024·浙江杭州·二模）学校英文报正以“Wonderful Zhejiang”为题开展征文活动。请根据以下图示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 注意要求： 1．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 2．词数100词左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·浙江绍兴·二模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Dave正在调查中学生的烦恼及应对情况，请你根据Dave发给你的调查表内容，给他回复一封邮件，谈谈你最近解决过的最大烦恼。 A Survey on Problem Solving 1. What was the biggest problem you have solved these days? How did you feel? (Tip: You can write about your friendship, study, parent-child relationship and so on.) 2. What did you do to solve it? What was the result? 3. What can you learn from the experience? 注意：(1) 短文必须包括图表中所有内容，可适当增加细节； (2) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； (3) 词数：100词左右； (4) 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Dave, Thanks for your last e-mail. I’d like to share the biggest problem I have solved recently. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours Li Hua 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】： Hello, everyone! I am going to share the results of our survey about how students dealt with the difficulties when reading English materials. 57% of students ask teachers or group members for help. 34% of students use the Internet or dictionaries. Finally, 9% of the students give up. I also have difficulties in reading English materials. I solve them in the following ways. First, I expanded my English vocabulary. I usually read a lot of English articles or books. Second, break down sentences. I usually break down some long sentences into small sentences to understand their meaning step by step. Finally, I learned about the differences between different cultures, which helped me to better understand the culture and language of English. Here are some of my ideas that I hope you’ll find helpful. 【知识点】意见/建议、青少年问题、学习策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图是分享关于“如何解决英语资料阅读困难”的调查结果； 第二步，介绍调查结果，并结合自身经历谈谈你的做法和体会； 第三步，书写结语，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①deal with解决 ②give up放弃 ③have difficulty in doing sth.做某事有困难 ④break down拆解 [高分句型] ①Finally, I learned about the differences between different cultures, which helped me to better understand the culture and language of English. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②Here are some of my ideas that I hope you’ll find helpful. (that引导定语从句) 2．【满分优秀范文】 Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you something about the show “Working the Waste into Magic”. A number of creative works were on show, including clothes made from waste paper and model planes made of used wood and glass. Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles. They are glued together and painted in different colors. I was most interested in a backpack for computers. It is made out of a pair of old jeans! With the zipper of jeans on the top, two pockets on two sides, the backpack looks both useful and fashionable. It even has a logo! I felt amazed at how waste could be put to such good use. It really helps to save energy and build a greener future. 【知识点】环境保护 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍一些展品的信息以及自己最感兴趣的展品； 第三步，介绍自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①a number of大量的 ②be made of由……制成 ③be interested in对……感兴趣 [高分句型] ①A number of creative works were on show, including clothes made from waste paper and model planes made of used wood and glass. (过去分词作定语) ②Another fascinating work is a chair that is made of plastic bottles. (定语从句) 3．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Tony, Knowing that you like Chinese culture a lot, I’d like to tell you something about our Traditional Culture Festival. It will be held on the school playground next Friday. All the teachers and students will attend. We are going to learn paper cutting. We will make traditional Chinese food, such as zongzi, dumplings and so on. We are also going to watch traditional Chinese opera, such as Beijing Opera. In addition, we each will tell a story about traditional Chinese culture to know about traditional Chinese culture. It is an educational activity. I hope to learn more about Chinese traditional culture. I think it is very meaningful. I believe every one of us will be proud of our country. If you have any advice, please write to me and we can make some changes. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】文体活动、计划 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；   ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤]   第一步，开头引出本文主题；   第二步，介绍活动的情况； 第三步，总结感受。 [亮点词汇]   ①such as例如   ②in addition另外 ③know about了解 [高分句型]   ①I think it is very meaningful.（省略that的宾语从句） ②If you have any advice, please write to me and we can make some changes.（if引导的条件状语从句） 4．【满分优秀范文】： Dear Jack, I am so glad to receive your email. Now let me tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival. It’s one of the most important festivals in China, which falls on the fifth day of lunar May. We usually have a tradition of watching dragon-boat races and eating zongzi to honor Qu Yuan who was a great poet in history. Zongzi, as our Chinese traditional food, is made of rice, meat and so on. It’s so delicious that I plan to learn to make it from my mom. Our family will have a big dinner together to celebrate the festival. After dinner, we will watch dragon-boat races on TV. How exciting! I’m looking forward to your reply. Li Ping 【知识点】传统节日、中华文化、假日活动、计划 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：主时态为“一般现在时”，描述计划用“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要介绍端午节的相关情况； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍端午节的情况及自己端午节准备做的事； 第三步，书写结语。表达希望尽快得到回复。 [亮点词汇] ①fall降临 ②tradition传统 ③and so on等等 [高分句型] ①It’s one of the most important festivals in China, which falls on the fifth day of lunar May. (定语从句) ②It’s so delicious that I plan to learn to make it from my mom. (结果状语从句) 5．【满分优秀范文】 The Story of Zhao Yiman On the way to realizing our national dream, there’re many heroes who devoted their lives. Among them, Zhao Yiman is such a person who is best-known for her tough attitude in face of enemies. Since Anti-Japanese War broke out, people of all works had fought bravely against enemies. One day in 1935, Zhao Yiman was captured unfortunately. Despite of being cruelly treated in the prison, she never gave in. Before she died, she wrote a letter, expressing affectionate love to her son as well as fearless royalty to our country. A hopeful nation can’t live without heroes and a promising country cannot live without pioneers. Following their footsteps, we should study hard to make our country more prosperous and powerful. 【知识点】个人经历、情感 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍在实现民族梦想的道路上，有许多英雄献出了自己的生命； 第二步，从故事的背景，故事的情节（起因、经过、结果），故事的意义等方面具体介绍民族英雄的事迹； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①break out爆发 ②give in屈服 ③as well as而且 [高分句型] ①Among them, Zhao Yiman is such a person who is best-known for her tough attitude in face of enemies.(定语从句) ②Following their footsteps, we should study hard to make our country more prosperous and powerful.(动词不定式作目的状语) 6．【满分优秀范文】 Sweet Memories and Bright Future How time flies! The past three years of junior high school have been filled with happy memories—the sports meeting is an unforgettable experience. The excitement of competing with classmates and the cheers from the crowd still echo in my mind. Looking ahead to the future, I have plans to improve myself in different areas. I aim to do better at managing my time to achieve good grades. What’s more, I look forward to an exciting future filled with new opportunities and challenges. I believe that with hard work and a strong will, the future holds endless possibilities for success and happiness.   【知识点】个人经历、叙事忆旧、畅想未来、计划 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己在过去的初中三年中的甜蜜回忆和感慨； 第二步，介绍自己对于即将到来的新生活的计划； 第三步，书写结语，表达“只要努力和有坚强的意志，未来就会有成功和幸福的无限可能”的感想。 [亮点词汇] ①be filled with充满 ②compete with sb与某人竞争 ③what’s more除此之外还 ④look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①I believe that with hard work and a strong will, the future holds endless possibilities for success and happiness. （that引导宾语从句） 7．【满分优秀范文】 How to Deal with the Exam Stress As we all know, students are in the face of many exams every school day. Naturally, because of being afraid to fail the exam and let our parents and teachers down, we may have the exam stress. Too much stress will make us feel tired. Here I want to share some advice with you on how to use proper ways to deal with the stress. To begin with, preparing hard for the tests is a good choice for us, which can build our confidence and release our body. Besides, we are supposed to sleep well before the exam so that we can have enough time to relax. Last but not least, we are able to do something enjoyable like listening to the music or walking in the park. To sum up, we’d better plan and prepare everything well to deal with stress. Only in this way, we can make a progress in grades and be mentally healthy at the same time! 【知识点】学习策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，即结合自己的学习经历阐述如何处理考试焦虑，给同学们提一些建议，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，学生学习压力大，考试焦虑现象较严重； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，作者结合自己的学习经历阐述考试焦虑的观点，以及处理焦虑的一些建议； 第三步，书写结语。最好做好计划和准备，以应对压力。只有这样，才能在成绩上取得进步，同时也能保持心理健康。 [亮点词汇] ①to begin with 首先 ②last but not least 最后但同样重要的一点 ③sum up 总之 [高分句型] Besides, we are supposed to sleep well before the exam so that we can have enough time to relax.（so that引导的目的状语从句） 8．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Jack, How is everything going? The summer vacation in China starts at the beginning of July and ends at the end of August, which lasts for nearly 2 months. During the two months, some may choose journeys which increase their knowledge and broaden their eyes. Some would like to go to a summer camp to improve themselves. Some prefer to stay at home. They think it’s both relaxing and comfortable. As for me, this summer vacation, I will take a short trip with my parents first and spend the rest of the vacation at my grandparents’ home. There, I can not only help them with the housework but enjoy the peaceful country life. Hope your survey goes well. Li Hua 【知识点】假日活动、计划 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应对题干给出的“中国学生如何过暑假”进行描述并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍中国学生的暑假时间； 第二步，根据题干邮件中的问题进行回复，介绍中国学生通常在暑假做什么，以及自己的计划； 第三步，希望自己的答复有帮助，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①at the beginning of在开始 ②stay at home待在家里 [高分句型] ①The summer vacation in China starts at the beginning of July and ends at the end of August, which lasts for nearly 2 months.（定语从句） ②They think it’s both relaxing and comfortable.（宾语从句） 9．【满分优秀范文】 Wonderful Zhejiang Zhejiang is located in the southeast of China. It has a long history and splendid culture. The population of Zhejiang is more than 60 million. There are many kinds of delicious food in Zhejiang, such as seafood and West Lake lotus root starch and so on. Zhejiang also has many places of interest, such as West Lake in Hangzhou, Putuo Mountain in Zhoushan and so on. Many people travel there every year. The people here are friendly and helpful. If you come to Zhejiang, no matter what difficulties you meet, there will be someone to help you. Welcome to Zhejiang. 【知识点】城市 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，介绍浙江的地理位置和历史、人口。 第二步，介绍浙江的美食，名胜以及人文。 第三步，书写结语，表达欢迎。 [亮点词汇] ①be located in位于 ②more than超过 ③many kinds of 许多种类 ④such as比如 [高分句型] If you come to Zhejiang, no matter what difficulties you meet, there will be someone to help you. (条件状语从句；让步状语从句) 10．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Dave, Thanks for your last e-mail. I’d like to share the biggest problem I have solved recently. Last week, I had a fight with my best friend. I was so upset that I asked my mother for help. What my mother suggested me was that I was supposed to call her up. I knew I should, but I didn’t want to talk about it on the phone. Later, I made up my mind to come to her house, say sorry to her and invite her to go to the movies. At last, we became best friends again. It is common to have problems in our daily life. What we should do is having better communication with others and ask for help if needed. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】个人经历、青少年问题 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体介绍自己的经历； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①had a fight with 与某人发生争吵 ②be supposed to 应该 ③talk about 谈论 ④ask for help 寻求帮助 [高分句型] ①I was so upset that I asked my mother for help.（结果状语从句） ②What we should do is having better communication with others and ask for help if needed.（主语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$