06 深圳市-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

06 深圳市 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读如下： 1. 主题与素养考查： • 贴合课程标准主题：该作文题目围绕“人与自然”这一主题，符合新课程标准中对于中考英语作文命题的要求。这一主题的选择，旨在引导学生关注自然、热爱自然，培养学生的环保意识和对自然美的欣赏能力，体现了英语学科的育人价值。 • 考查综合素养：通过让学生分享摄影作品获奖的经历，不仅考查学生的英语语言表达能力，还考查学生对自然之美的理解、感受和表达能力，以及在公众场合进行演讲的能力，包括语言组织、逻辑思维、自信心等方面的素养。 2. 贴近学生实际生活：摄影是很多学生感兴趣且可能参与过的活动，学生对于摄影展有一定的认知和体验，这样的题目背景贴近学生的生活实际，能够让学生有话可说、有感可发。与学生生活的紧密联系使得学生能够更好地理解题目要求，并且能够运用自己的生活经验和感受来进行写作，增强了写作的真实性和感染力。 3. 写作类型与能力要求： • 写作类型明确：从写作类型上看，这是一篇演讲稿，属于应用类作文。此类作文要求学生掌握演讲稿的写作格式和语言特点，如语言要简洁明了、富有感染力，能够吸引听众的注意力等。这对于学生的写作能力提出了较高的要求，需要学生在平时的学习中积累相关的写作经验和技巧。 • 能力要求较高：该题目要求学生在有限的字数内（80 词左右）清晰地表达自己的观点和感受，这对学生的语言概括能力和表达能力是一个挑战。学生需要能够准确地选择合适的词汇和句式，将自己的想法简洁地表达出来，同时还要注意语言的连贯性和逻辑性。 （2024·广东深圳·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的作品在“the Beauty of Nature”主题摄影展上获得了一等奖。你的英语老师邀请你在“英语一分钟演讲”上给同学们做分享。要点如下： 1. 拍摄的时间，地点，内容； 2. 选择这张照片的原因； 3. 参赛感受。 Dear________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all! Thank You! 【满分优秀范文】 Dear classmates, My name is Li Hua, who is interested in photography. Here I would like to share my picture with you. The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass. If you are careful enough, you will also find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture. How cute they are! It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest. Actually, it also shows us the harmony between the animals and nature. Taking part in this competition makes me realize the beauty of nature and let us protect our Earth together! That’s all! Thank you! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】美术与摄影 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍演讲的主题，即介绍自己在摄影展上获得一等奖的照片； 第二步，介绍照片拍摄的时间、地点以及内容； 第三步，阐述选择这张照片的原因； 最后，表达自己的参赛感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②would like to do sth.想要做某事 ③harmony和谐 ④take part in参加 ⑤realize意识到 [高分句型] ①The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass.（which引导定语从句） ②If you are careful enough, you will also find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture.（If引导条件状语从句） ③It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest.（such a/an adj.+名词+that从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： • 题材与体裁：这是一篇自荐信题材的作文，属于应用文的范畴。这种体裁要求学生能够清晰、准确地表达自己的意图和优势，具有较强的实用性和针对性。 • 主题与背景：主题围绕学校的智慧校园建设以及志愿者招募活动展开。这既贴合学生的校园生活实际，又体现了时代发展的特点，智慧校园是当前教育领域的一个重要发展方向，通过这样的主题可以引导学生关注学校的发展和科技的应用。背景方面，涉及到与新西兰教育团的交流，体现了国际间的教育交流与合作，具有一定的开放性和国际性。 • 考查要点： • 个人优势阐述：学生需要准确地表达出自己在智慧校园方面的了解、交流能力以及英语水平等优势。这不仅考查学生的语言表达能力，还考查学生对自身优势的认知和总结能力。例如，在阐述熟知智慧校园时，不能只是简单地列举教师和学生可以在教室上网这一个点，还可以进一步说明智慧校园在教学管理、资源共享等方面的优势，以及自己对这些方面的理解。 • 期待收获的表达：关于期待的收获，学生可以从个人成长、知识拓展、国际交流经验等方面进行思考和表达。这部分内容能够反映学生对自我发展的期望和对参与活动意义的理解。 • 语言运用能力：在写作过程中，学生需要运用恰当的词汇、语法和句型来表达自己的观点。例如，在描述个人优势时，可以使用一些高级词汇和复杂句型来增强文章的表现力，如使用定语从句、状语从句等。同时，要注意语言的准确性和流畅性，避免出现语法错误和拼写错误。 • 难度与挑战：整体难度中等。挑战在于如何在有限的篇幅内全面、准确地表达自己的优势和想法，并且使文章具有一定的逻辑性和连贯性。学生需要合理安排文章的结构，使各个要点之间过渡自然。 （2023·广东深圳·中考真题）你是李华，你学校的外教老师 Mr Brown 打算招募志愿者迎接新西兰教育团，来介绍学校的智慧校园建设成果。你打算参加，请写一封自荐信，包含以下要点内容： 1. 你的个人优势： 你熟知智慧校园，例如教师和学生可以在教室上网； 你喜欢与人交流； 你擅长英语； 自行补充。 2. 你期待的收获； 3. 你希望获得机会。 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Mr. Brown, I am Li Hua. I am writing to express my strong interest in being a volunteer to welcome the New Zealand education delegation and introduce the achievements of our school's smart campus construction. I believe I have several advantages. Firstly, I am very familiar with the smart campus. Teachers and students can access the Internet in classrooms. Moreover, smart devices are widely used in teaching, which greatly improves the efficiency of learning. Secondly, I enjoy communicating with people. I am always enthusiastic about sharing ideas and experiences with others. This will help me better introduce our school to the guests. Thirdly, I am good at English. I can communicate fluently with the delegation without any language barriers. Additionally, I am organized and responsible. I am confident that I can complete various tasks well. As for what I expect to gain from this activity, I hope to improve my communication skills and expand my international perspective. I also look forward to learning about the educational concepts and practices of New Zealand, which will inspire me in my future study. I sincerely hope to get this opportunity. I will do my best to contribute to this event and make it a great success. Thank you! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 范文解析： 结构清晰：文章采用了书信的常见格式，开头表明写信目的，中间分别阐述个人优势和期待收获，结尾再次表达希望获得机会，结构完整，层次分明。 内容充实：在个人优势部分，不仅列举了题目中给出的要点，还进行了适当的拓展，如提到智能设备在教学中的应用以及自己有组织、有责任心等优点。在期待收获方面，表达了对提升沟通能力、拓展国际视野和学习新西兰教育理念的渴望。 语言准确流畅：语法正确，词汇丰富。使用了一些高级词汇和句型，如“be familiar with”“access the Internet”“without any language barriers”“expand my international perspective”等，增强了文章的表现力。同时，语言表达自然流畅，没有生硬的翻译痕迹。 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年写作命题为：为vlog配解说词。从话题上看，毕业旅行是大部分同学会参与的活动，近几年vlog作为新的媒介形式广为流行，相信同学们对此形式也并不陌生。因此此次写作任务既贴近学生生活，情境真实，又体现时代的发展特点。 同时，从语言运用角度来看，为vlog配解说词体现英语作为一门语言沟通交际的实用性，体现英语“聚焦语言能力，凸显语用思维”的学科要素。 该写作任务同时紧扣核心素养，体现学科育人的导向。任务通过沙滩排球及清理产生的垃圾等要点内容，引导考生选择健康向上的娱乐休闲活动，树立环保意识。任务给出大部分要点，同时需要补充要点，在帮助同学们搭建写作思路支架的同时，也给予同学们一定的发挥空间。 针对本次深圳中考作文，在写作前应当仔细审题，选择恰当的时态。从开头给出的是“Last.., we went to...”，因此文章应使用过去的时态。这就要求同学们要熟练掌握课标中的一般过去时和过去进行时的结构和用法，对动词的过去式也要熟稔于心，特别是不规则动词的过去式，如搭帐篷的搭建为put up，put过去式也是put。另外也需积累常见的动词短语表达。同学们还需判断要点的逻辑关系，有效利用连词。如晚上的活动比较多，可使用表示时间先后顺序的连词进行连接。 （2022·广东深圳·中考真题）假定你是李华，你和同学们拍了一个毕业活动视频，打算做成视频日志（vlog），参加主题为“青春飞扬”的国际中学生vlog作品展。请给该视频写一段解说词。 内容包括： 1. 海边活动： 下午：①沙滩排球；②……； 晚上：搭帐篷；聚餐和清理垃圾；分享会。 2. 活动感言。 注意： 1. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 参考词汇：冲浪surf  帐篷tent Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to present my vlog to you. Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it. Thank you. 【满分优秀范文】 Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. lt’s my great pleasure to present my vlog to you. Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, we had a beach volleyball game. Then, we enjoyed the fun of surfing in the sea. Before dark, we picked up the litter on the beach. How meaningful it was! At night, we put up two tents and had a picnic. The food cooked by us was so delicious. Finally, all of us shared our feelings about this fantastic experience. Not only can it promote our friendship, but also it leaves us a valuable experience. So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it. Thank you. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】毕业活动、周末活动、叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇解说词，属于演讲稿写作； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示的要点介绍在海边的活动，包括下午和晚上的具体活动，要列举具体的事例； 第三步，抒发活动带来的感悟并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①pick up the litter捡垃圾 ②not only…but also…不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①How meaningful it was!（how引导的感叹句） ②The food cooked by us was so delicious.（过去分词作定语） ③Not only can it promote our friendship, but also it leaves us a valuable experience.（部分倒装结构） 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年深圳中考英语作文命题解读 命题背景分析 本次深圳中考英语作文命题十分具有“特区体质”。“年轻”是深圳的血液，“拼搏”是深圳的特质，而“创新”就是深圳灵魂。《关于支持深圳建设中国特色社会主义先行示范区的意见》，推动深圳在科技创新治理体系上率先破题，率先建成国际化创新型城市和具有国际竞争力的创新创业创意之都，率先形成现代化经济体系，发挥科技创新在中国特色社会主义先行示范区建设中的支撑引领作用。 所以，不管是5G技术还是人工智能、集成电路、生物医药、高端装备、新材料、区块链等领域关键核心技术，都是英语考试命题的热点趋势。 （2021·广东深圳·中考真题）深圳是一座科技之城、创新之城，为培养学生对科技的兴趣，你的学校上周举办了科技节。假定你是你校英语报的小记者，请你编写一篇新闻报道，介绍这次活动。 要点： 1. 活动目的 2. 活动项目： 模型制作比赛 3. 活动亮点：学生发明的服务于校园的机器人：外表、功能 4. 学生感受 提示词： 1. 科技节 science festival   2. 实验 experiment Shenzhen is well-known as a city of technology and innovation. Last week, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Shenzhen is well-known as a city of technology and innovation. Last week, our school held a science festival, which aims to develop students’ interest in science and technology and broaden their horizons. At the festival, some students took an active part in the model-making competition. Many of their robots, which were the highlight of the festival, drew people’s attention. These robots were in the shape of lovely animals, such as rabbits, monkeys and dogs. They were doing some simple tasks like sweeping the floor and throwing away rubbish. Besides, some other students carried out science experiments. The students who were present at the festival were all surprised at the exhibits and gave them a big around of applause. Our school hopes that more and more students can learn science and technology better to serve our country. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于新闻报道的写作，在写作时要根据汉语提示的内容，介绍科技节的目的，活动项目以及活动亮点和学生们的感受。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，内容完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2022年深圳中考英语作文要求就深圳创建全国文明城市写一封倡议信。 命题背景：这一命题融入了本土化元素，与深圳当时积极进行的城市建设活动相关，具有潜在的教育意义，引导学生关注并参与到城市的发展中。 能力考查：既考查学生对书信这种应用文体的掌握，包括格式、语言的规范性等，又考验学生对创建文明城市这一主题的理解和思考能力，以及如何用英语准确表达自己的观点和建议，对学生的语言综合运用能力有较高要求。 （2020·广东深圳·中考真题）深圳市正在争创全国文明城市、假定你是鹏城中学学生会主席，希望同学们为"创文'做出自己的贡献。请你按照所提示的要点，代表学生会写一篇倡议书。 环境保护 ①垃圾分类；②绿色出行 公益慈善 ①志愿服务；②…… 人际交往 ①诚信友善；②…… 要求： 1、词数80左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)； 2、要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3、条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：分类 sort out    志愿者volunteer     贡献 contribution Dear friends, As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It's time to take action. The Student Union July 20, 2020 【满分优秀范文】 Dear friends, As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City.(引出话题) It's well known that Shenzhen is striving for one of the ten civilized cities in China, and now it is a good opportunity for us to make our own contributions.(倡议缘由) Firstly, more changes in our daily life, such as sorting out the rubbish and travelling in a greener way, can be made to protect the city environment. What's more, to make Shenzhen a loving city, we are also supposed to help those in need by doing some voluntary work or raising donations.【高分句型一】 Last but not least, get along with others in an honest and friendly way. We'd better avoid talking about others' privacy if we want to show our respect.(具体介绍如何做) I strongly believe that we will make Shenzhen a more civilized and beautiful city with our joint efforts.(展望) All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It's time to take action.【高分句型二】(号召) The Student Union July 20, 2020 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于倡议书写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；第一段引出话题；第二段写倡议缘由；第三段具体介绍如何做；第四段进行展望；第五段号召大家行动起来。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来进行写作；时态采用一般现在时为主，写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。 最新模拟 1．（2024·广东深圳·模拟预测）假如你是李华，请根据提示，结合自己小区的实际，以“Building a greener community”为题，用英文写一份倡议书。 参考词汇：垃圾分类sort out the rubbish；电动车motorbike 小区的现状 1. 乱扔垃圾； 2. 乱摆放单车和电动车； 3. 树倒下了，没有去维护、种植。 具体提议和做法 1. 垃圾分类，扔到正确的垃圾桶； 2. 单车和电动车摆放到专门地方。 …… (自行补充一至两点) 号召和呼吁 小区是我家，每个人行动起来，共建绿色小区 Building a greener community As we all know, green mountains and clear water are as good as mountains of gold and silver. It is important for everyone to protect the environment and build a beautiful China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·广东深圳·三模）很多同学在暑假期间做过多种多样的创意性作业，如海报，小调查，Vlog制作等。创意性作业可以帮助同学们发展多种能力。最近，校英文报开展以“My Creative Homework”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇文章，讲述自身经历，并提出合理建议。 内容：1.让你印象最深刻的一次创意性作业（内容、收获）； 2.对创意性作业的建议（形式或内容、理由）； 3.呼吁同学们重视创意性作业。 要求: 1.80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称； 3.可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 4.书写规范，卷面整洁。 My Creative Homework During the summer vacation, many students completed a variety of creative assignments, such as designing posters, conducting surveys, and making logs. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·广东深圳·一模）学校学生会正在招募志愿者，为外国来访学生展示传统手工制作(如剪纸、风筝、灯笼等)，以弘扬中华传统文化。假如你是李华，请你用英语给校学生会写一封自荐信，在信中说明你申请成为志愿者的理由以及你的优势。 内容提示： 1.你申请志愿者的理由； 2.你的优势； 3.你当选之后的打算。 参考词汇： 传统手工制作 traditional Chinese handicrafts 要求： 1.结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2.表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰； 3.文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息； 4.词数80—100词。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua. Learning that the Student Union is looking for volunteers, I’m writing to apply to become a volunteer. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your early reply! Yours, Li Hua 4．（2024·广东深圳·三模）假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，你的学校将举办“Creative Reading Week”活动，请你根据以下给学校外教Mr. Archer 写一份邮件，告知活动安排并邀请他致开幕词。 内容包括： 1. 发出邀请； 2. 告知安排； (1)开幕时间、地点：下周一下午2点学校智能图书馆 (2)活动目的：以创新的方式激发学生阅读兴趣 (3)活动内容：体验AI工具辅助阅读…… 3. 期待与感谢； __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·广东深圳·三模）假如你是李华，临近中考冲刺阶段，你将向同学们分享如何提高复习效率，请根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。要点如下： 1.制定学习计划； 2.养成好习惯: ①早睡早起 ②勤锻炼 ③……； 3.有乐观的态度。 …… 注意： 1.词数为 80 左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文章不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 参考词汇: high school entrance exam （中考） It’s my honor to be here to give a speech.                                                   __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening. 6．（2024·广东深圳·三模）你校英文报打算增加一个栏目“用英语讲好中国故事”（“Telling China’s Stories in English”）。你是栏目负责人李华，请给外教Ray写封邮件咨询建议。 内容包括： 1．介绍栏目意义：弘扬中国文化（自行补充2—3点）； 2．询问他的建议； 3．表达感谢和期望。 栏目  column 要求： 1．80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 3．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4．标点正确，书面整洁。 Dear Ray, My name is Li Hua. As the leader of the new column “Telling China’s Stories” for our school’s English newspaper, I’m writing to _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 7．（2024·广东深圳·三模）假如你是李华，你校交流生Tom将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关礼仪。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1.提前5—6分钟到； 2.带合适的礼物； 3.餐桌礼仪：①用餐时，需等长辈先动筷子，②吃饭时避免发出声响，③…… 要求：1.可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称； 3.书写规范，卷面整洁； 4.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：风俗 (custom) Dear Tom, How are you doing? Learning_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 8．（2024·广东深圳·三模）假如你是学生李华，你校下周将举办主题为“节俭让你更美丽”的英文演讲比赛活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿。 生活中的浪费现象 请简述至少两种。 节俭的必要性 请列出至少两点。 节俭的做法 至少两点做法并适当举例说明。 要求： 1. 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数内)； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 Saving makes you more beautiful Dear teachers and fellow students, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·广东深圳·三模）近些年来，刷短视频(short video)占据了许多人的空闲时间。有人担心短视频最终会取代文本阅读，但也有人认为不会。针对此现象，英文校刊社 Green Buds 面向全体同学发出征文倡议，请你就此写一篇文章投稿，发表自己的看法。 要点： 1. 阐述目前过度刷视频的现象； 2. 此现象引发的负面影响（至少两点）； 3. 呼吁大家理性刷视频。 要求： 1. 短文必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 词数不少于 80 词；(开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。 提示词: browse short videos(刷短视频) My View on Short Videos Over the past few years, it is common that people spend excessive time on browsing short videos which may bring some negative effects. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·广东深圳·二模）为期一个多月的南山区第二十一届学校英语节即将落幕。假如你是学生李华，你所在学校也为此次英语节举办了多种活动。请根据以下提示，给你的外国朋友Rebecca写一封邮件，介绍此次学校英语节活动。 要点： 1. 活动主题：穿越中国文化，链接未来世界 2. 文化节内容：①英语戏剧大赛 ②演讲比赛 3. 你所参加的活动以及感受 要求： 1. 80词左右，开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚，行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 参考词汇：戏剧大赛：drama competition  主题：theme  穿越：travel through Dear Rebecca, Hope you’re doing well. I wanted to tell you something about an exciting English Festival that was held at our school recently. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案： 1．【优秀满分范文】 Building a greener community As we all know, green mountains and clear water are as good as mountains of gold and silver. It is important for everyone to protect the environment and build a beautiful China. And I think first we should build a greener community first. Our community has many problems now. First, it is not as green as before. Many people throw rubbish everywhere. Second, some people put bikes or motorbikes as they like, so our community looks a mess. Then, after the typhoon, many trees were down. But we don’t repair them or plant more trees. It is time for us to take action and solve these problems. First, we’d better sort out the rubbish at home, then we put the rubbish into the right rubbish bins in our community. I think it is easy for us to do that. Second, we can find an area and let all the bikes and motorbikes be here. Please put our bike or motorbike in the right area in order. Third, trees are very important to our environment. We should plant more trees and take care of the trees that were down on the typhoon. The community is our home. Everyone should take action and build a greener and more beautiful community. Let’s look forward to a greener community! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】方法/策略、社区 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍小区现状； 第二步，介绍关于创建绿色社区的具体提议和做法； 第三步，书写结语。表达希望有一个绿色社区。 [亮点词汇] ①take action采取行动 ②important重要的 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①And I think first we should build a greener community first. (宾语从句) ②We should plant more trees and take care of the trees that were down on the typhoon. (定语从句) 2．【优秀满分范文】 My Creative Homework During the summer vacation, many students completed a variety of creative assignments, such as designing posters, conducting surveys, and making logs. Doing homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. Doing creative homework makes us more interested in English. Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreign friend of hers. We were told to introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival in the letter. It not only helped me improve my written skills but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture. In my opinion, it’s also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding of the lessons. Besides, we can learn to watch English movies, since most of us love movies. Creative homework is of great value for us. Let’s try our best to do more creative homework. I hope we’ll become smarter by doing creative homework. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明自己观点； 第二步，描述自己经历； 第三步，提出呼吁和希望。 [亮点词汇] ①not only... but also不仅……而且 ②In my opinion在我看来 ③of great value很有价值 [高分句型] ①Doing homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class.（what引导宾语从句） ②I hope we’ll become smarter by doing creative homework.（省略that的宾语从句） 3．【优秀满分范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua. Learning that the Student Union is looking for volunteers, I’m writing to apply to become a volunteer. The reason why I want to be a volunteer of your program is that I love Chinese culture very much and I want to spread Chinese culture and make people from other countries know more about China. Besides, I can have a chance to communicate in English with others and make more friends. I have many advantages to be a volunteer. First, I am very good at English, so I can talk with them very easily. Second, I am very outgoing. I can have a better communication with foreign students. What’s more, I have similar work experiences as a volunteer in other activities. I think traditional Chinese culture is important and useful. I am going to show the traditional handicraft, such as paper cutting, kites, lanterns to spread the traditional Chinese culture. If I have the chance, I can make videos to tell international students the history of kites and teach them to make kites. I’m sure they will be very interested in it. I’m looking forward to your early reply! Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】志愿服务 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 。③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你申请志愿者的理由； 第二步，描述你的优势； 第三步，最后介绍你当选之后的打算。 [亮点词汇] ①what’s more而且 ②such as比如 ③be interested in对……感兴趣 [高分句型] ①The reason why I want to be a volunteer of your program is that I love Chinese culture very much and I want to spread Chinese culture and make people from other countries know more about China.（why引导定语从句，that引导表语从句） ②I think traditional Chinese culture is important and useful.（省略引导词that的宾语从句） ③If I have the chance, I can make videos to tell international students the history of kites and teach them to make kites. （if引导的条件状语从句） 4．【优秀满分范文】 Dear Mr. Archer, My school will hold the “Creative Reading Week” activity in the school intelligent library at 2 p.m. next Monday, and I would like to invite you to participate. The purpose of this activity is to stimulate students’ interest in reading in an innovative way. The content of this activity mainly includes experiencing AI tools to assist reading and sharing reading experience. Look forward to your arrival and thank you for your support. Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“邀请对方致辞开幕式”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，发出邀请； 第二步，根据题干中的要点，告知详细的安排； 第三步，期待对方的到来并表示感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①invite sb. to do邀请某人做某事 ②look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①My school will hold the “Creative Reading Week” activity in the school intelligent library at 2 p.m. next Monday, and I would like to invite you to participate.（and连接并列句） ②The purpose of this activity is to stimulate students’ interest in reading in an innovative way.（不定式作表语） 5．【优秀满分范文】         It’s my honor to be here to give a speech.  As the high school entrance exam is coming, we should learn to be self-disciplined. To make us review our lessons effectively, I’ve made a list of things I need to do. I’d like to share my ideas with you.         The first thing for me is to make a good learning plan for myself. Secondly, I think forming a good living habit will benefit me a lot in both of my study and health. As we know, early to bed and early to rise makes me healthy, wealthy and wise. Also I need to eat healthily and say no to junk food. Besides, to make myself active and strong, I plan to do an hour’s exercise at least a day. Additionally, I will manage to have a positive attitude towards the stress and face difficulty bravely. If I am happy, I can study better. In all, I believe being self-disciplined will bring me enjoyment and success. I hope more and more students can join the group of being self-disciplined like me.         Thank you for listening. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题。表明“中考即将到来，分享关于‘提高复习效率’的一些观点和建议”； 第二步，介绍具体要做的事情，并阐明如何实施。围绕“制定学习计划、养成好的学习习惯、树立积极乐观的的态度”等方面展开； 第三步，书写结语。“感谢大家聆听”。 [亮点词汇] ①give a speech 做演讲，发言 ②self-disciplined 自律 ③have a positive attitude towards 对……有积极的态度 ④make a good learning plan 制定一个好的学习计划 ⑤early to bed and early to rise 早睡早起 [高分句型] ①As the high school entrance exam is coming, we should learn to be self-disciplined.（as引导状语从句） ②As we know, early to bed and early to rise makes me healthy, wealthy and wise.（as引导非限制性定语从句） 6．【优秀满分范文】 Dear Ray, My name is Li Hua. As the leader of the new column “Telling China’s Stories” for our school’s English newspaper, I’m writing to discuss and seek your valuable advice. Our aim with this column is to share informative and engaging stories about Chinese culture. The reasons will be illustrated as follows. To begin with, this initiative aims to celebrate and promote Chinese culture. What’s more, we believe it will encourage students to develop their English language skills through storytelling. Another purpose of it is to enhance students’ cross-cultural understanding and foster a deeper appreciation for our rich cultural heritage. Besides, it will also make our newspaper more comprehensive and help us gain more popularity. Given your expertise in storytelling and cultural exchange, we highly value your suggestions or advice regarding the content plan, or any other aspects of the column. Thank you for your time. We’re eager to hear your thoughts and excited about the possibility of cooperating with you on this exciting project. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】文体活动、中华文化 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍这个栏目，并向外教咨询建议，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明写作目的； 第二步，介绍这个栏目的意义； 第三步，询问他的建议； 第四步，表达感谢和期望。 [亮点词汇] ①to begin with首先 ②encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 ③be eager to do sth.迫切要做某事 [高分句型] ①Our aim with this column is to share informative and engaging stories about Chinese culture. (动词不定式作表语) ②Given your expertise in storytelling and cultural exchange, we highly value your suggestions or advice regarding the content plan, or any other aspects of the column. (过去分词作状语) 7．【优秀满分范文】 Dear Tom, How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and wondering about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice. Firstly, try to arrive 5 to 6 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, bringing some appropriate gifts for the host is a kind action. Things like small gifts from your home country can serve as nice gifts. Besides, understanding table manners is also important. When dining with a Chinese family, remember to wait for the elderly to start the dinner first. Try not to make any noise when eating. Also, please avoid sticking your chopsticks into your food, and instead, lay them on your dish. If you have any other problems, please feel free to contact me. Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议、礼仪与习俗 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中餐桌礼仪的介绍要点，适当添加细节，语句连贯，条理清楚，突出重点。 【写作步骤】 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“交流生汤姆将去中国朋友家做客”来引出重点建议的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“时间”“礼物”“餐桌礼仪”三个维度进行阐述，每个部分都包含具体细节，如提前到达5-6分钟、合适的礼物类型以及餐桌上的注意事项。 第三步，书写结语。表达“如有问题，随时联系我”。体现了友好和支持的态度。 【亮点词汇】 ①pay a visit to拜访；参观 ②put forward提出 ③serve as充当 【高分句型】 ①Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and wondering about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.（现在分词作原因状语） ②Firstly, try to arrive 5 to 6 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. （which引导的非限制性定语从句） ③Secondly, bringing some appropriate gifts for the host is a kind action.（动名词短语作主语） ④When dining with a Chinese family, remember to wait for the elderly to start the dinner first.（when引导的时间状语从句） 8．【优秀满分范文】 Saving makes you more beautifulDear teachers and fellow students,     As we know, one of today’s hot topics is to save resources. However, many people waste food, water, electricity and so on. We often see lights and fans left on when people leave the room. They don’t realize the bad effect of their behavior. It can make them become more selfish. What’s more, it can cause the reduction of energy and resource. It’s time for us to say “NO” to unnecessary waste. It is very necessary to save something to make you more beautiful. Here is my advice as follows.     First, we shouldn’t leave the tap on after using it. Besides, eat up the food we order in the restaurant, or pack the leftovers. Furthermore, remember to turn off the lights or the air-conditioners before leaving the room. Let’s take action to stop wasting resources. We can make a difference.     Thank you for listening! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】节约与浪费 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是演讲稿； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格内的提示要点，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“众所周知，当今的热门话题之一是节约资源”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——浪费现象、节俭的必要性以及节俭的做法等一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“谢谢您的聆听”的感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①eat up吃光 ②turn off关闭 ③take action采取行动 [高分句型] ①Besides, eat up the food we order in the restaurant, or pack the leftovers. (祈使句） ②We often see lights and fans left on when people leave the room. (状语从句) 9．【优秀满分范文】 My View on Short Videos Over the past few years, it is common that people spend excessive time on browsing short videos which may bring some negative effects. First of all, watching short videos wastes lots of time. Sometimes, students spend too much time watching short videos, which can influence their schoolwork. Some even stay up late watching short videos and often feel tired and sleepy in class. Next, watching short videos is also bad for our eyes. Students may have less time for sports and that’s not good for their health. What’s worse, some of the bad short videos may lead to negative values or bad behaviors. Finally, some even argue with their parents because their parents stop them watching short videos. In my opinion, videos might change the way we entertain ourselves, but texts are like immortal stars which shine from the past to the future. So, video will never replace text. As students, we should take our schoolwork and home lives more seriously. It’s necessary for us to control the time of watching short videos. When we are free, we can share the housework, read some books or do some sports. Work hard and enjoy ourselves. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】微信/微博/短视频、意见/建议、青少年问题 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所列三个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称和第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，阐述目前过度刷视频的现象； 第二步，重点阐述过度刷视频的负面影响； 第三步，表达自己的观点：呼吁大家理性刷视频，控制时间。 ［亮点词汇］ ① take … seriously  认真对待…… ② stay up late 熬夜 ［高分句型］ ①Sometimes, students spend too much time watching short videos, which can influence their schoolwork. (which引导非限制性定语从句) ② It’s necessary for us to control the time of watching short videos. (it作形式主语) 10．【优秀满分范文】 Dear Rebecca, Hope you’re doing well. I wanted to tell you something about an exciting English Festival that was held at our school recently. The theme of this festival is to go through Chinese Culture and link future world. There were all kinds of activities during the festival. There was an English Drama Competition, which students and teachers took an active part in to perform their drama. What’s more, there was a speech competition. The theme of the speech competition could be anything that had to do with Chinese culture. I took part in the speech competition and I won the second prize. From this festival, I had a better understanding of Chinese culture and I also felt proud of our country. Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍学校举办的英语节活动，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍活动的主题以及文化节内容； 第三步，介绍你所参加的活动以及感受。 [亮点词汇] ①all kinds of各种各样的 ②take an active part in积极参加 ③have to do with和……有关 ④have a better understanding of对……有更好的理解 [高分句型] ①There was an English Drama Competition, which students and teachers took an active part in to perform their drama. (定语从句) ②From this festival, I had a better understanding of Chinese culture and I also felt proud of our country. (and连接的并列句) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 06 深圳市 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读如下： 1. 主题与素养考查： • 贴合课程标准主题：该作文题目围绕“人与自然”这一主题，符合新课程标准中对于中考英语作文命题的要求。这一主题的选择，旨在引导学生关注自然、热爱自然，培养学生的环保意识和对自然美的欣赏能力，体现了英语学科的育人价值。 • 考查综合素养：通过让学生分享摄影作品获奖的经历，不仅考查学生的英语语言表达能力，还考查学生对自然之美的理解、感受和表达能力，以及在公众场合进行演讲的能力，包括语言组织、逻辑思维、自信心等方面的素养。 2. 贴近学生实际生活：摄影是很多学生感兴趣且可能参与过的活动，学生对于摄影展有一定的认知和体验，这样的题目背景贴近学生的生活实际，能够让学生有话可说、有感可发。与学生生活的紧密联系使得学生能够更好地理解题目要求，并且能够运用自己的生活经验和感受来进行写作，增强了写作的真实性和感染力。 3. 写作类型与能力要求： • 写作类型明确：从写作类型上看，这是一篇演讲稿，属于应用类作文。此类作文要求学生掌握演讲稿的写作格式和语言特点，如语言要简洁明了、富有感染力，能够吸引听众的注意力等。这对于学生的写作能力提出了较高的要求，需要学生在平时的学习中积累相关的写作经验和技巧。 • 能力要求较高：该题目要求学生在有限的字数内（80 词左右）清晰地表达自己的观点和感受，这对学生的语言概括能力和表达能力是一个挑战。学生需要能够准确地选择合适的词汇和句式，将自己的想法简洁地表达出来，同时还要注意语言的连贯性和逻辑性。 （2024·广东深圳·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的作品在“the Beauty of Nature”主题摄影展上获得了一等奖。你的英语老师邀请你在“英语一分钟演讲”上给同学们做分享。要点如下： 1. 拍摄的时间，地点，内容； 2. 选择这张照片的原因； 3. 参赛感受。 Dear________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all! Thank You! 【满分优秀范文】 Dear classmates, My name is Li Hua, who is interested in photography. Here I would like to share my picture with you. The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass. If you are careful enough, you will also find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture. How cute they are! It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest. Actually, it also shows us the harmony between the animals and nature. Taking part in this competition makes me realize the beauty of nature and let us protect our Earth together! That’s all! Thank you! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】美术与摄影 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍演讲的主题，即介绍自己在摄影展上获得一等奖的照片； 第二步，介绍照片拍摄的时间、地点以及内容； 第三步，阐述选择这张照片的原因； 最后，表达自己的参赛感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②would like to do sth.想要做某事 ③harmony和谐 ④take part in参加 ⑤realize意识到 [高分句型] ①The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass.（which引导定语从句） ②If you are careful enough, you will also find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture.（If引导条件状语从句） ③It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest.（such a/an adj.+名词+that从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： • 题材与体裁：这是一篇自荐信题材的作文，属于应用文的范畴。这种体裁要求学生能够清晰、准确地表达自己的意图和优势，具有较强的实用性和针对性。 • 主题与背景：主题围绕学校的智慧校园建设以及志愿者招募活动展开。这既贴合学生的校园生活实际，又体现了时代发展的特点，智慧校园是当前教育领域的一个重要发展方向，通过这样的主题可以引导学生关注学校的发展和科技的应用。背景方面，涉及到与新西兰教育团的交流，体现了国际间的教育交流与合作，具有一定的开放性和国际性。 • 考查要点： • 个人优势阐述：学生需要准确地表达出自己在智慧校园方面的了解、交流能力以及英语水平等优势。这不仅考查学生的语言表达能力，还考查学生对自身优势的认知和总结能力。例如，在阐述熟知智慧校园时，不能只是简单地列举教师和学生可以在教室上网这一个点，还可以进一步说明智慧校园在教学管理、资源共享等方面的优势，以及自己对这些方面的理解。 • 期待收获的表达：关于期待的收获，学生可以从个人成长、知识拓展、国际交流经验等方面进行思考和表达。这部分内容能够反映学生对自我发展的期望和对参与活动意义的理解。 • 语言运用能力：在写作过程中，学生需要运用恰当的词汇、语法和句型来表达自己的观点。例如，在描述个人优势时，可以使用一些高级词汇和复杂句型来增强文章的表现力，如使用定语从句、状语从句等。同时，要注意语言的准确性和流畅性，避免出现语法错误和拼写错误。 • 难度与挑战：整体难度中等。挑战在于如何在有限的篇幅内全面、准确地表达自己的优势和想法，并且使文章具有一定的逻辑性和连贯性。学生需要合理安排文章的结构，使各个要点之间过渡自然。 （2023·广东深圳·中考真题）你是李华，你学校的外教老师 Mr Brown 打算招募志愿者迎接新西兰教育团，来介绍学校的智慧校园建设成果。你打算参加，请写一封自荐信，包含以下要点内容： 1. 你的个人优势： 你熟知智慧校园，例如教师和学生可以在教室上网； 你喜欢与人交流； 你擅长英语； 自行补充。 2. 你期待的收获； 3. 你希望获得机会。 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Mr. Brown, I am Li Hua. I am writing to express my strong interest in being a volunteer to welcome the New Zealand education delegation and introduce the achievements of our school's smart campus construction. I believe I have several advantages. Firstly, I am very familiar with the smart campus. Teachers and students can access the Internet in classrooms. Moreover, smart devices are widely used in teaching, which greatly improves the efficiency of learning. Secondly, I enjoy communicating with people. I am always enthusiastic about sharing ideas and experiences with others. This will help me better introduce our school to the guests. Thirdly, I am good at English. I can communicate fluently with the delegation without any language barriers. Additionally, I am organized and responsible. I am confident that I can complete various tasks well. As for what I expect to gain from this activity, I hope to improve my communication skills and expand my international perspective. I also look forward to learning about the educational concepts and practices of New Zealand, which will inspire me in my future study. I sincerely hope to get this opportunity. I will do my best to contribute to this event and make it a great success. Thank you! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 范文解析： 结构清晰：文章采用了书信的常见格式，开头表明写信目的，中间分别阐述个人优势和期待收获，结尾再次表达希望获得机会，结构完整，层次分明。 内容充实：在个人优势部分，不仅列举了题目中给出的要点，还进行了适当的拓展，如提到智能设备在教学中的应用以及自己有组织、有责任心等优点。在期待收获方面，表达了对提升沟通能力、拓展国际视野和学习新西兰教育理念的渴望。 语言准确流畅：语法正确，词汇丰富。使用了一些高级词汇和句型，如“be familiar with”“access the Internet”“without any language barriers”“expand my international perspective”等，增强了文章的表现力。同时，语言表达自然流畅，没有生硬的翻译痕迹。 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年写作命题为：为vlog配解说词。从话题上看，毕业旅行是大部分同学会参与的活动，近几年vlog作为新的媒介形式广为流行，相信同学们对此形式也并不陌生。因此此次写作任务既贴近学生生活，情境真实，又体现时代的发展特点。 同时，从语言运用角度来看，为vlog配解说词体现英语作为一门语言沟通交际的实用性，体现英语“聚焦语言能力，凸显语用思维”的学科要素。 该写作任务同时紧扣核心素养，体现学科育人的导向。任务通过沙滩排球及清理产生的垃圾等要点内容，引导考生选择健康向上的娱乐休闲活动，树立环保意识。任务给出大部分要点，同时需要补充要点，在帮助同学们搭建写作思路支架的同时，也给予同学们一定的发挥空间。 针对本次深圳中考作文，在写作前应当仔细审题，选择恰当的时态。从开头给出的是“Last.., we went to...”，因此文章应使用过去的时态。这就要求同学们要熟练掌握课标中的一般过去时和过去进行时的结构和用法，对动词的过去式也要熟稔于心，特别是不规则动词的过去式，如搭帐篷的搭建为put up，put过去式也是put。另外也需积累常见的动词短语表达。同学们还需判断要点的逻辑关系，有效利用连词。如晚上的活动比较多，可使用表示时间先后顺序的连词进行连接。 （2022·广东深圳·中考真题）假定你是李华，你和同学们拍了一个毕业活动视频，打算做成视频日志（vlog），参加主题为“青春飞扬”的国际中学生vlog作品展。请给该视频写一段解说词。 内容包括： 1. 海边活动： 下午：①沙滩排球；②……； 晚上：搭帐篷；聚餐和清理垃圾；分享会。 2. 活动感言。 注意： 1. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 参考词汇：冲浪surf  帐篷tent Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to present my vlog to you. Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it. Thank you. 【满分优秀范文】 Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. lt’s my great pleasure to present my vlog to you. Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, we had a beach volleyball game. Then, we enjoyed the fun of surfing in the sea. Before dark, we picked up the litter on the beach. How meaningful it was! At night, we put up two tents and had a picnic. The food cooked by us was so delicious. Finally, all of us shared our feelings about this fantastic experience. Not only can it promote our friendship, but also it leaves us a valuable experience. So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it. Thank you. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】毕业活动、周末活动、叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇解说词，属于演讲稿写作； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示的要点介绍在海边的活动，包括下午和晚上的具体活动，要列举具体的事例； 第三步，抒发活动带来的感悟并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①pick up the litter捡垃圾 ②not only…but also…不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①How meaningful it was!（how引导的感叹句） ②The food cooked by us was so delicious.（过去分词作定语） ③Not only can it promote our friendship, but also it leaves us a valuable experience.（部分倒装结构） 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年深圳中考英语作文命题解读 命题背景分析 本次深圳中考英语作文命题十分具有“特区体质”。“年轻”是深圳的血液，“拼搏”是深圳的特质，而“创新”就是深圳灵魂。《关于支持深圳建设中国特色社会主义先行示范区的意见》，推动深圳在科技创新治理体系上率先破题，率先建成国际化创新型城市和具有国际竞争力的创新创业创意之都，率先形成现代化经济体系，发挥科技创新在中国特色社会主义先行示范区建设中的支撑引领作用。 所以，不管是5G技术还是人工智能、集成电路、生物医药、高端装备、新材料、区块链等领域关键核心技术，都是英语考试命题的热点趋势。 （2021·广东深圳·中考真题）深圳是一座科技之城、创新之城，为培养学生对科技的兴趣，你的学校上周举办了科技节。假定你是你校英语报的小记者，请你编写一篇新闻报道，介绍这次活动。 要点： 1. 活动目的 2. 活动项目： 模型制作比赛 3. 活动亮点：学生发明的服务于校园的机器人：外表、功能 4. 学生感受 提示词： 1. 科技节 science festival   2. 实验 experiment Shenzhen is well-known as a city of technology and innovation. Last week, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Shenzhen is well-known as a city of technology and innovation. Last week, our school held a science festival, which aims to develop students’ interest in science and technology and broaden their horizons. At the festival, some students took an active part in the model-making competition. Many of their robots, which were the highlight of the festival, drew people’s attention. These robots were in the shape of lovely animals, such as rabbits, monkeys and dogs. They were doing some simple tasks like sweeping the floor and throwing away rubbish. Besides, some other students carried out science experiments. The students who were present at the festival were all surprised at the exhibits and gave them a big around of applause. Our school hopes that more and more students can learn science and technology better to serve our country. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于新闻报道的写作，在写作时要根据汉语提示的内容，介绍科技节的目的，活动项目以及活动亮点和学生们的感受。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，内容完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2022年深圳中考英语作文要求就深圳创建全国文明城市写一封倡议信。 命题背景：这一命题融入了本土化元素，与深圳当时积极进行的城市建设活动相关，具有潜在的教育意义，引导学生关注并参与到城市的发展中。 能力考查：既考查学生对书信这种应用文体的掌握，包括格式、语言的规范性等，又考验学生对创建文明城市这一主题的理解和思考能力，以及如何用英语准确表达自己的观点和建议，对学生的语言综合运用能力有较高要求。 （2020·广东深圳·中考真题）深圳市正在争创全国文明城市、假定你是鹏城中学学生会主席，希望同学们为"创文'做出自己的贡献。请你按照所提示的要点，代表学生会写一篇倡议书。 环境保护 ①垃圾分类；②绿色出行 公益慈善 ①志愿服务；②…… 人际交往 ①诚信友善；②…… 要求： 1、词数80左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)； 2、要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3、条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：分类 sort out    志愿者volunteer     贡献 contribution Dear friends, As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It's time to take action. The Student Union July 20, 2020 【满分优秀范文】 Dear friends, As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City.(引出话题) It's well known that Shenzhen is striving for one of the ten civilized cities in China, and now it is a good opportunity for us to make our own contributions.(倡议缘由) Firstly, more changes in our daily life, such as sorting out the rubbish and travelling in a greener way, can be made to protect the city environment. What's more, to make Shenzhen a loving city, we are also supposed to help those in need by doing some voluntary work or raising donations.【高分句型一】 Last but not least, get along with others in an honest and friendly way. We'd better avoid talking about others' privacy if we want to show our respect.(具体介绍如何做) I strongly believe that we will make Shenzhen a more civilized and beautiful city with our joint efforts.(展望) All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It's time to take action.【高分句型二】(号召) The Student Union July 20, 2020 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于倡议书写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；第一段引出话题；第二段写倡议缘由；第三段具体介绍如何做；第四段进行展望；第五段号召大家行动起来。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来进行写作；时态采用一般现在时为主，写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。 最新模拟 1．（2024·广东深圳·模拟预测）假如你是李华，请根据提示，结合自己小区的实际，以“Building a greener community”为题，用英文写一份倡议书。 参考词汇：垃圾分类sort out the rubbish；电动车motorbike 小区的现状 1. 乱扔垃圾； 2. 乱摆放单车和电动车； 3. 树倒下了，没有去维护、种植。 具体提议和做法 1. 垃圾分类，扔到正确的垃圾桶； 2. 单车和电动车摆放到专门地方。 …… (自行补充一至两点) 号召和呼吁 小区是我家，每个人行动起来，共建绿色小区 Building a greener community As we all know, green mountains and clear water are as good as mountains of gold and silver. It is important for everyone to protect the environment and build a beautiful China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·广东深圳·三模）很多同学在暑假期间做过多种多样的创意性作业，如海报，小调查，Vlog制作等。创意性作业可以帮助同学们发展多种能力。最近，校英文报开展以“My Creative Homework”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇文章，讲述自身经历，并提出合理建议。 内容：1.让你印象最深刻的一次创意性作业（内容、收获）； 2.对创意性作业的建议（形式或内容、理由）； 3.呼吁同学们重视创意性作业。 要求: 1.80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称； 3.可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 4.书写规范，卷面整洁。 My Creative Homework During the summer vacation, many students completed a variety of creative assignments, such as designing posters, conducting surveys, and making logs. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·广东深圳·一模）学校学生会正在招募志愿者，为外国来访学生展示传统手工制作(如剪纸、风筝、灯笼等)，以弘扬中华传统文化。假如你是李华，请你用英语给校学生会写一封自荐信，在信中说明你申请成为志愿者的理由以及你的优势。 内容提示： 1.你申请志愿者的理由； 2.你的优势； 3.你当选之后的打算。 参考词汇： 传统手工制作 traditional Chinese handicrafts 要求： 1.结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2.表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰； 3.文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息； 4.词数80—100词。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua. Learning that the Student Union is looking for volunteers, I’m writing to apply to become a volunteer. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your early reply! Yours, Li Hua 4．（2024·广东深圳·三模）假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，你的学校将举办“Creative Reading Week”活动，请你根据以下给学校外教Mr. Archer 写一份邮件，告知活动安排并邀请他致开幕词。 内容包括： 1. 发出邀请； 2. 告知安排； (1)开幕时间、地点：下周一下午2点学校智能图书馆 (2)活动目的：以创新的方式激发学生阅读兴趣 (3)活动内容：体验AI工具辅助阅读…… 3. 期待与感谢； __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·广东深圳·三模）假如你是李华，临近中考冲刺阶段，你将向同学们分享如何提高复习效率，请根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。要点如下： 1.制定学习计划； 2.养成好习惯: ①早睡早起 ②勤锻炼 ③……； 3.有乐观的态度。 …… 注意： 1.词数为 80 左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文章不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 参考词汇: high school entrance exam （中考） It’s my honor to be here to give a speech.                                                   ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening. 6．（2024·广东深圳·三模）你校英文报打算增加一个栏目“用英语讲好中国故事”（“Telling China’s Stories in English”）。你是栏目负责人李华，请给外教Ray写封邮件咨询建议。 内容包括： 1．介绍栏目意义：弘扬中国文化（自行补充2—3点）； 2．询问他的建议； 3．表达感谢和期望。 栏目  column 要求： 1．80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 3．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4．标点正确，书面整洁。 Dear Ray, My name is Li Hua. As the leader of the new column “Telling China’s Stories” for our school’s English newspaper, I’m writing to _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 7．（2024·广东深圳·三模）假如你是李华，你校交流生Tom将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关礼仪。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1.提前5—6分钟到； 2.带合适的礼物； 3.餐桌礼仪：①用餐时，需等长辈先动筷子，②吃饭时避免发出声响，③…… 要求：1.可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称； 3.书写规范，卷面整洁； 4.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：风俗 (custom) Dear Tom, How are you doing? Learning_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 8．（2024·广东深圳·三模）假如你是学生李华，你校下周将举办主题为“节俭让你更美丽”的英文演讲比赛活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿。 生活中的浪费现象 请简述至少两种。 节俭的必要性 请列出至少两点。 节俭的做法 至少两点做法并适当举例说明。 要求： 1. 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数内)； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 Saving makes you more beautiful Dear teachers and fellow students, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·广东深圳·三模）近些年来，刷短视频(short video)占据了许多人的空闲时间。有人担心短视频最终会取代文本阅读，但也有人认为不会。针对此现象，英文校刊社 Green Buds 面向全体同学发出征文倡议，请你就此写一篇文章投稿，发表自己的看法。 要点： 1. 阐述目前过度刷视频的现象； 2. 此现象引发的负面影响（至少两点）； 3. 呼吁大家理性刷视频。 要求： 1. 短文必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 词数不少于 80 词；(开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。 提示词: browse short videos(刷短视频) My View on Short Videos Over the past few years, it is common that people spend excessive time on browsing short videos which may bring some negative effects. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·广东深圳·二模）为期一个多月的南山区第二十一届学校英语节即将落幕。假如你是学生李华，你所在学校也为此次英语节举办了多种活动。请根据以下提示，给你的外国朋友Rebecca写一封邮件，介绍此次学校英语节活动。 要点： 1. 活动主题：穿越中国文化，链接未来世界 2. 文化节内容：①英语戏剧大赛 ②演讲比赛 3. 你所参加的活动以及感受 要求： 1. 80词左右，开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚，行文连贯； 4. 标点正确，书面整洁。 参考词汇：戏剧大赛：drama competition  主题：theme  穿越：travel through Dear Rebecca, Hope you’re doing well. I wanted to tell you something about an exciting English Festival that was held at our school recently. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案： 1．【优秀满分范文】 Building a greener community As we all know, green mountains and clear water are as good as mountains of gold and silver. It is important for everyone to protect the environment and build a beautiful China. And I think first we should build a greener community first. Our community has many problems now. First, it is not as green as before. Many people throw rubbish everywhere. Second, some people put bikes or motorbikes as they like, so our community looks a mess. Then, after the typhoon, many trees were down. But we don’t repair them or plant more trees. It is time for us to take action and solve these problems. First, we’d better sort out the rubbish at home, then we put the rubbish into the right rubbish bins in our community. I think it is easy for us to do that. Second, we can find an area and let all the bikes and motorbikes be here. Please put our bike or motorbike in the right area in order. Third, trees are very important to our environment. We should plant more trees and take care of the trees that were down on the typhoon. The community is our home. Everyone should take action and build a greener and more beautiful community. Let’s look forward to a greener community! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】方法/策略、社区 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍小区现状； 第二步，介绍关于创建绿色社区的具体提议和做法； 第三步，书写结语。表达希望有一个绿色社区。 [亮点词汇] ①take action采取行动 ②important重要的 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①And I think first we should build a greener community first. (宾语从句) ②We should plant more trees and take care of the trees that were down on the typhoon. (定语从句) 2．【优秀满分范文】 My Creative Homework During the summer vacation, many students completed a variety of creative assignments, such as designing posters, conducting surveys, and making logs. Doing homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. Doing creative homework makes us more interested in English. Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreign friend of hers. We were told to introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival in the letter. It not only helped me improve my written skills but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture. In my opinion, it’s also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding of the lessons. Besides, we can learn to watch English movies, since most of us love movies. Creative homework is of great value for us. Let’s try our best to do more creative homework. I hope we’ll become smarter by doing creative homework. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明自己观点； 第二步，描述自己经历； 第三步，提出呼吁和希望。 [亮点词汇] ①not only... but also不仅……而且 ②In my opinion在我看来 ③of great value很有价值 [高分句型] ①Doing homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class.（what引导宾语从句） ②I hope we’ll become smarter by doing creative homework.（省略that的宾语从句） 3．【优秀满分范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua. Learning that the Student Union is looking for volunteers, I’m writing to apply to become a volunteer. The reason why I want to be a volunteer of your program is that I love Chinese culture very much and I want to spread Chinese culture and make people from other countries know more about China. Besides, I can have a chance to communicate in English with others and make more friends. I have many advantages to be a volunteer. First, I am very good at English, so I can talk with them very easily. Second, I am very outgoing. I can have a better communication with foreign students. What’s more, I have similar work experiences as a volunteer in other activities. I think traditional Chinese culture is important and useful. I am going to show the traditional handicraft, such as paper cutting, kites, lanterns to spread the traditional Chinese culture. If I have the chance, I can make videos to tell international students the history of kites and teach them to make kites. I’m sure they will be very interested in it. I’m looking forward to your early reply! Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】志愿服务 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 。③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你申请志愿者的理由； 第二步，描述你的优势； 第三步，最后介绍你当选之后的打算。 [亮点词汇] ①what’s more而且 ②such as比如 ③be interested in对……感兴趣 [高分句型] ①The reason why I want to be a volunteer of your program is that I love Chinese culture very much and I want to spread Chinese culture and make people from other countries know more about China.（why引导定语从句，that引导表语从句） ②I think traditional Chinese culture is important and useful.（省略引导词that的宾语从句） ③If I have the chance, I can make videos to tell international students the history of kites and teach them to make kites. （if引导的条件状语从句） 4．【优秀满分范文】 Dear Mr. Archer, My school will hold the “Creative Reading Week” activity in the school intelligent library at 2 p.m. next Monday, and I would like to invite you to participate. The purpose of this activity is to stimulate students’ interest in reading in an innovative way. The content of this activity mainly includes experiencing AI tools to assist reading and sharing reading experience. Look forward to your arrival and thank you for your support. Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“邀请对方致辞开幕式”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，发出邀请； 第二步，根据题干中的要点，告知详细的安排； 第三步，期待对方的到来并表示感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①invite sb. to do邀请某人做某事 ②look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①My school will hold the “Creative Reading Week” activity in the school intelligent library at 2 p.m. next Monday, and I would like to invite you to participate.（and连接并列句） ②The purpose of this activity is to stimulate students’ interest in reading in an innovative way.（不定式作表语） 5．【优秀满分范文】         It’s my honor to be here to give a speech.  As the high school entrance exam is coming, we should learn to be self-disciplined. To make us review our lessons effectively, I’ve made a list of things I need to do. I’d like to share my ideas with you.         The first thing for me is to make a good learning plan for myself. Secondly, I think forming a good living habit will benefit me a lot in both of my study and health. As we know, early to bed and early to rise makes me healthy, wealthy and wise. Also I need to eat healthily and say no to junk food. Besides, to make myself active and strong, I plan to do an hour’s exercise at least a day. Additionally, I will manage to have a positive attitude towards the stress and face difficulty bravely. If I am happy, I can study better. In all, I believe being self-disciplined will bring me enjoyment and success. I hope more and more students can join the group of being self-disciplined like me.         Thank you for listening. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题。表明“中考即将到来，分享关于‘提高复习效率’的一些观点和建议”； 第二步，介绍具体要做的事情，并阐明如何实施。围绕“制定学习计划、养成好的学习习惯、树立积极乐观的的态度”等方面展开； 第三步，书写结语。“感谢大家聆听”。 [亮点词汇] ①give a speech 做演讲，发言 ②self-disciplined 自律 ③have a positive attitude towards 对……有积极的态度 ④make a good learning plan 制定一个好的学习计划 ⑤early to bed and early to rise 早睡早起 [高分句型] ①As the high school entrance exam is coming, we should learn to be self-disciplined.（as引导状语从句） ②As we know, early to bed and early to rise makes me healthy, wealthy and wise.（as引导非限制性定语从句） 6．【优秀满分范文】 Dear Ray, My name is Li Hua. As the leader of the new column “Telling China’s Stories” for our school’s English newspaper, I’m writing to discuss and seek your valuable advice. Our aim with this column is to share informative and engaging stories about Chinese culture. The reasons will be illustrated as follows. To begin with, this initiative aims to celebrate and promote Chinese culture. What’s more, we believe it will encourage students to develop their English language skills through storytelling. Another purpose of it is to enhance students’ cross-cultural understanding and foster a deeper appreciation for our rich cultural heritage. Besides, it will also make our newspaper more comprehensive and help us gain more popularity. Given your expertise in storytelling and cultural exchange, we highly value your suggestions or advice regarding the content plan, or any other aspects of the column. Thank you for your time. We’re eager to hear your thoughts and excited about the possibility of cooperating with you on this exciting project. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】文体活动、中华文化 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍这个栏目，并向外教咨询建议，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明写作目的； 第二步，介绍这个栏目的意义； 第三步，询问他的建议； 第四步，表达感谢和期望。 [亮点词汇] ①to begin with首先 ②encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 ③be eager to do sth.迫切要做某事 [高分句型] ①Our aim with this column is to share informative and engaging stories about Chinese culture. (动词不定式作表语) ②Given your expertise in storytelling and cultural exchange, we highly value your suggestions or advice regarding the content plan, or any other aspects of the column. (过去分词作状语) 7．【优秀满分范文】 Dear Tom, How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and wondering about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice. Firstly, try to arrive 5 to 6 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, bringing some appropriate gifts for the host is a kind action. Things like small gifts from your home country can serve as nice gifts. Besides, understanding table manners is also important. When dining with a Chinese family, remember to wait for the elderly to start the dinner first. Try not to make any noise when eating. Also, please avoid sticking your chopsticks into your food, and instead, lay them on your dish. If you have any other problems, please feel free to contact me. Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议、礼仪与习俗 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中餐桌礼仪的介绍要点，适当添加细节，语句连贯，条理清楚，突出重点。 【写作步骤】 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“交流生汤姆将去中国朋友家做客”来引出重点建议的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“时间”“礼物”“餐桌礼仪”三个维度进行阐述，每个部分都包含具体细节，如提前到达5-6分钟、合适的礼物类型以及餐桌上的注意事项。 第三步，书写结语。表达“如有问题，随时联系我”。体现了友好和支持的态度。 【亮点词汇】 ①pay a visit to拜访；参观 ②put forward提出 ③serve as充当 【高分句型】 ①Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and wondering about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.（现在分词作原因状语） ②Firstly, try to arrive 5 to 6 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. （which引导的非限制性定语从句） ③Secondly, bringing some appropriate gifts for the host is a kind action.（动名词短语作主语） ④When dining with a Chinese family, remember to wait for the elderly to start the dinner first.（when引导的时间状语从句） 8．【优秀满分范文】 Saving makes you more beautifulDear teachers and fellow students,     As we know, one of today’s hot topics is to save resources. However, many people waste food, water, electricity and so on. We often see lights and fans left on when people leave the room. They don’t realize the bad effect of their behavior. It can make them become more selfish. What’s more, it can cause the reduction of energy and resource. It’s time for us to say “NO” to unnecessary waste. It is very necessary to save something to make you more beautiful. Here is my advice as follows.     First, we shouldn’t leave the tap on after using it. Besides, eat up the food we order in the restaurant, or pack the leftovers. Furthermore, remember to turn off the lights or the air-conditioners before leaving the room. Let’s take action to stop wasting resources. We can make a difference.     Thank you for listening! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】节约与浪费 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是演讲稿； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格内的提示要点，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“众所周知，当今的热门话题之一是节约资源”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——浪费现象、节俭的必要性以及节俭的做法等一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“谢谢您的聆听”的感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①eat up吃光 ②turn off关闭 ③take action采取行动 [高分句型] ①Besides, eat up the food we order in the restaurant, or pack the leftovers. (祈使句） ②We often see lights and fans left on when people leave the room. (状语从句) 9．【优秀满分范文】 My View on Short Videos Over the past few years, it is common that people spend excessive time on browsing short videos which may bring some negative effects. First of all, watching short videos wastes lots of time. Sometimes, students spend too much time watching short videos, which can influence their schoolwork. Some even stay up late watching short videos and often feel tired and sleepy in class. Next, watching short videos is also bad for our eyes. Students may have less time for sports and that’s not good for their health. What’s worse, some of the bad short videos may lead to negative values or bad behaviors. Finally, some even argue with their parents because their parents stop them watching short videos. In my opinion, videos might change the way we entertain ourselves, but texts are like immortal stars which shine from the past to the future. So, video will never replace text. As students, we should take our schoolwork and home lives more seriously. It’s necessary for us to control the time of watching short videos. When we are free, we can share the housework, read some books or do some sports. Work hard and enjoy ourselves. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】微信/微博/短视频、意见/建议、青少年问题 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所列三个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称和第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，阐述目前过度刷视频的现象； 第二步，重点阐述过度刷视频的负面影响； 第三步，表达自己的观点：呼吁大家理性刷视频，控制时间。 ［亮点词汇］ ① take … seriously  认真对待…… ② stay up late 熬夜 ［高分句型］ ①Sometimes, students spend too much time watching short videos, which can influence their schoolwork. (which引导非限制性定语从句) ② It’s necessary for us to control the time of watching short videos. (it作形式主语) 10．【优秀满分范文】 Dear Rebecca, Hope you’re doing well. I wanted to tell you something about an exciting English Festival that was held at our school recently. The theme of this festival is to go through Chinese Culture and link future world. There were all kinds of activities during the festival. There was an English Drama Competition, which students and teachers took an active part in to perform their drama. What’s more, there was a speech competition. The theme of the speech competition could be anything that had to do with Chinese culture. I took part in the speech competition and I won the second prize. From this festival, I had a better understanding of Chinese culture and I also felt proud of our country. Yours, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍学校举办的英语节活动，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍活动的主题以及文化节内容； 第三步，介绍你所参加的活动以及感受。 [亮点词汇] ①all kinds of各种各样的 ②take an active part in积极参加 ③have to do with和……有关 ④have a better understanding of对……有更好的理解 [高分句型] ①There was an English Drama Competition, which students and teachers took an active part in to perform their drama. (定语从句) ②From this festival, I had a better understanding of Chinese culture and I also felt proud of our country. (and连接的并列句) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$