Unit 4 Then and now写作提优-2024-2025学年六年级英语上册提优练习（译林版三起）

译林版六年级上册Unit 4写作提优专训 描写人物过去与现在变化 1、 方法指导 描写前后变化，可按“三步三要素法”，第一步开头，概括某人过去和现在的变化； 第二步正文，具体介绍以前和现在年龄、外貌、能力的不同三要素； 第三步结尾，介绍对变化的感受。 2、 素材积累 必备词汇 必备句型 开头 my sister, me, my brother... • This is me. 正文 年龄: nine, ten… 外貌: eyes, short, thin... 能力: could / couldn't sing/ talk/ walk... • I'm ten years old. • My eyes were small, but now I have big eyes. • I couldn't write six years ago, but now I can. • I couldn't sing well seven years ago, but now I can sing well. 结尾 happy, glad... • I am happy now. 3、 以读促写(阅读范文，补全思维导图，体悟写法) Hello, everyone,I'm Lisa. I'm a girl from Xuzhou. I have changed a lot in the past three years. Three years ago.I was six years old. I was very short. My eyes were small. I couldn't write or read well. But now I'm nine years old. I'm thin and tall. I have two big eyes. I can do many things well. I'm good at writing stories. I'm happy now. 4、 小试身手(参照以上范文，自己动手写一写吧) 琪琪今年12岁了。她想写邮件给她的网友蒂姆介绍自己过去和现在的一些情况。你能根据下面表格中的信息帮她完成这封邮件吗? 不少于5句话。 six years ago lived with my grandparents could draw couldn't read or write now can cook and ride a bike can't shopping on the Internet Dear Tim, How are you? I'm very happy to be your e-friend. How about you? Write to me soon. Love, Qiqi [提分练1] 请仔细回忆一下六年前的你，相比过去现在的你有哪些变化呢? 请以“ Six years ago and now”为题,运用正确的时态，写一篇不少于60词的短文。 Six years ago and now [提分练2] 30年前的学校和现在有什么不同? 观察图片，并适当发挥想象，写一篇英语短文，不少于6 句话。要求语句通顺，意思连贯。 参考词汇: building(大楼), gym(体育馆), canteen(食堂) Thirty years ago Now [提分练3] 同学们，你们已经是六年级的学生了，你们一定学会了很多以前不会的本领。现在，请写一篇英语短文介绍一下自己现在与六年前的变化吧。 要求：语句通顺，语法正确，不少于60词。 [提分练4] 同学们，你们已经是六年级的学生了，你们一定学会了很多以前不会的本领。现在，请写一篇英语小短文介绍一下自己现在与六年前的变化吧。 要求：语句通顺，语法正确，不少于 50词。 [提分练5] 请根据所给提示,以“The changes of our life”为题,写一篇不少于5句话的英文短文。 提示：以前我们给朋友们写信，用固定电话打电话，看报纸获取新闻，去商店买东西。现在我们可以用手机随时随地给人们打电话。我们可以在互联网上做许多事情，如交友、购物、聊天等。 The changes of our life 参考答案 单元写作提优专训 1. six 2. small 3. write or read 4. thin and tall 5. do many things 范文： Dear Tim, How are you? I'm very happy to be your e-friend. Six years ago, I lived with my grandparents. I could draw. But I couldn't read or write. Now, I can cook and ridea bike. I can't do shopping on the Internet. How about you? Write to me soon. Love, Qiqi [提分练1] Six years ago and now Hello! Do you know me? I am Jack. I am twelve years old. Can you see this photo? Yes, it's me. I was only six years old at that time. Six years ago, I was fat and short. I could draw, but I could not write. I could fly a kite, but I couldn't make a kite. Now I am tall and strong. I can do many things. I can read and write. I can make a kite. I can play basketball very well too. And I like making friends at school. (仅供参考) [提分练2] There were only small houses in my father's school thirty years ago. There weren't many students. The children could only play outside. They didn't have a gym. Now there are tall buildings in my school. There is a gym and a playground. There's a beautiful garden too. We can go to the library to read books. We can use computers too. We can have lunch in the canteen.(仅供参考) [提分练3] 示例： Six years ago, I was a little boy. I couldn't play the piano. I couldn't speak English either. Now I'm thirteen years old. I can do a lot of things. I can play the piano on the TV show. I can chat with my e- friends in English on the Internet. I can also teach them some Chinese. Growth changed me a lot. I want to change more to make myself better. I think I can do that! [提分练4] 示例： Six years ago,I was a little boy.I play the piano.I couldn't speak English. Now I'm thirteen years old.I can do a lot of things.I can play the piano on the TV show.I can chat with my e-friends in English on the Internet.I can also teach them some Chinese. How happy I am！ [提分练5] 示例： The changes of our life We wrote letters to our friends before. We used the telephone to call people. We got news in the newspapers. We bought things from the shops. 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！6 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$