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Unit2 Travelling Around
Reading for Writing
Write a travel plan
Lead in
Watch the video and think about the question: What activities are you planning to do?
I am planning to go_________, because___________
Atrractions:
Terracotta Army/ Warriors 兵马俑
Big wild Goose Pagoda 大雁塔
Bell and Drum Tower 钟鼓楼
Xi’an City Wall 西安城墙
Food:
I am planning to taste_____, because_______
Steamed Cold Noodles
Lamb Pao-Mo Soup
Biangbiang Noodles
Chinese Hamburger
Richard is plannning to go to Terracotta Army because it is an amazing sight.
What is Terracotta Army?
For what were they made?
An army of soldier statues.
To guard the tomb.
The most attractive sight: Terracotta Army
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Before reading-prediction(预测)
Richard is writing to his friend Xiao Li to tell him that he is plannning to travel to Xi’an. So can you predict (预测)what will he write?
the purpose of writing
detailed plan-where to go
detailed plan-how to go
detailed plan-what to eat
his feelings
detailed plan-where to live
his expectations
Paragraph Main idea Details
1 main purpose for the trip
2 other plans for the trip
3 transport
4 final thoughts
go to Xi’an to see the
Terracotta Army
go to the Shaanxi History Museum,
the Xi’an City Wall, and a few other famous sights
take the train
write again soon and
send photos.
1. Summarize the email in the table .
Tip :
A travel plan usually consists of this four aspects
While reading
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2.Read for the structure and contents
A travel plan to Xi’an
Greeting
Main Body
Signature
contents
Purpose
Plans
Transport
Thoughts
Close
Greetings
structure
While reading
At the last of Richard’s email, he said “……Do you have any plans for the coming holiday? Hope to hear from you soon.”
Pretend you are Xiao Li and reply to Richard's email.
Writing
Pretend you are Xiao Li and reply to Richard's email.
destinations
北京(长城/故宫/颐和园)
reasons
...
transportation 坐火车
time
10月1日--- 10月6日
Final thoughts
... 增长知识,拓宽视野
Tip: Try to use the present continuous tense for future plans.
Writing a travel plan
Greeting
Body
Ending
Opening greetings
Travel plan
Main purpose for the trip
plans (activities/transport/food/accommodation)
Final thoughts (feelings/expectations
Signature
Writing a travel plan
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2.确定时态和人称
4. 布局
3.明确写作要点
1. 审题
1.体裁:应用文-介绍信
2.主题:写回信,介绍旅行计划
1.时态:一般将来时,一般现在时
2.人称:第一人称,第二人称
1.对来信做出评价和反馈
2.具体旅游计划3.心得体会
1.写信目的
2.主体部分
3.体会,期待回复
Writing a travel plan
第二步 遣词造句
【核心词汇】
1.最著名的旅游景点
2.去参观
3.一个伟大奇迹
4.欣赏美景
5.令人惊喜的
6.被公认为
7.迫不及待地做某事
8.期盼
the most famous tourist attractions
pay a visit to
a great wonder
admire amazing scenery
amazing
It is recognized...
can’t wait to do sth.
look forward to
【连词成句】
1.国庆节来临,我的家人计划去参观北京。
_________________________________________________
2.长城是中国古代人民创造的一大奇迹。
________________________________________________________
3.它已成为中国最著名的旅游景点之一。
________________________________________________________
With the National Day coming, my family are planning to pay a visit to Beijing.
The Great Wall is a great wonder which was created by the ancient Chinese people.
It has become one of the most famous tourist attractions in China.
4.我们也计划参观故宫,因为它被公认为“中国宝库”。
__________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
5.颐和园也同样很吸引人。
______________________________________
6.在那里,我们可以欣赏到令人惊叹的风景。
____________________________________________
The Summer Palace is equally attractive.
There we can admire amazing scenery.
We’re also planning to the Imperial Palace because it is recognized as a “Chinese treasure house”.
第三步 句式升级
1.用过去分词作定语改写句2。
The Great Wall is a great wonder which was created by the ancient Chinese people.
→______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
2.用定语从句和倒装句改写句5和句6。
The Summer Palace is equally attractive.
There we can admire amazing scenery.
→______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
The Great Wall is a great wonder created by the ancient Chinese people.
Equally attractive is the Summer Palace, where we can admire amazing scenery.
Dear Richard,
Thank you for your email about your travel plan in Xi'an, which is amazing. I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the coming holiday.
With the National Day coming, my family are planning to pay a visit to Beijing, which is a charming city in China. As we all know,The Great Wall is a great wonder created by the ancient Chinese people and now it has become one of the most famous tourist attractions in China. Apart from that, we’re also planning to visit the Imperial Palace because it is recognized as a “Chinese treasure house. Equally attractive is the Summer Palace , where we can admire amazing scenery. We will take the train and spend 6 days there, from Oct.1th to Oct. 6th. I can’t wait to try a wide variety of delicious food there like Peking Duck.
In my opinion, travel can not only enrich our knowledge, but also broaden our horizons. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Xiao Li
Dear Richard,
Thank you for your email about your travel plan in Xi'an, which is amazing. I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the coming holiday.
With the National Day coming, my family are planning to pay a visit to Beijing, which is a charming city in China. As we all know,The Great Wall is a great wonder created by the ancient Chinese people and now it has become one of the most famous tourist attractions in China. Other than that, we’re also planning to visit the Imperial Palace because it is recognized as a “Chinese treasure house”. Equally attractive is The Summer Palace , where we can admire amazing scenery. We will take the train and spend 6 days there, from Oct.1th to Oct. 6th. I can’t wait to try a wide variety of delicious food there like Peking Duck.
In my opinion, travel can not only enrich our knowledge, but also broaden our horizons. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Xiao Li
亲爱的理查德:
感谢你关于在西安旅行计划的邮件,那听起来很棒。我写信是想跟你讲讲我即将到来的假期计划。
随着国庆节的临近,我家人打算去游览北京,它是中国一座迷人的城市。众所周知,长城是古代中国人民创造的伟大奇迹,如今它已成为中国最著名的旅游景点之一。除此之外,我们还计划去参观故宫,因为它被公认为是一座“中国宝库”。同样吸引人的还有颐和园,在那里我们可以欣赏到令人惊叹的景色。我们将乘坐火车前往,在那儿待上6天,从10月1日到10月6日。我迫不及待地想去品尝那里各种各样的美食,比如北京烤鸭。
在我看来,旅行不仅能丰富我们的知识,还能拓宽我们的视野。期待尽快收到你的回信。
Go and explore and share!
There are always some surprises waiting for you!
The world is big.
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