读后续写 意外的救援 讲义-陕西省西安中学2024-2025学年10月第一次质量检测英语试题

陕西省西安中学高2025届高三2024年10月第一次质量检测 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。  Katie was happily jumping rope on the grass in front of her house facing the expansive city park just across the road. The neighborhood residents often enjoyed walking around the lake in the park, and on this pleasant day, with the sun casting its warm light, Katie spent the unhurried moments devoted to her jumping routine.  Her thoughts were focused on her jumping: how to match the spinning of the jump rope in her hands and the jumping of her feet so that they didn’t get mixed, causing her to trip. When her mind and muscles were working together, and when every move flowed smoothly, all of it felt pretty good in the afternoon sunshine.  While jumping, she remembered that her grandmother had given her the jump rope for Christmas. She knew that her grandmother didn’t have a lot of money and had to save up to buy the jump rope for her. Before Christmas, her grandmother had taken her to some toy shops to look at different things, hoping to find out what Katie wanted. When Katie finally got the gift, it was not just a jump rope but the very jump rope she had wanted for a long time. She felt especially loved by her considerate grandmother.  The warmth of the afternoon sun enhanced the joy Katie felt as she skipped along. Suddenly a boy rushed across the road to her. Without any warning he robbed her of her jump rope, shouting,“ Give me that” and raced back across the road towards the park.  Empty-handed, Katie was left in confusion. It took her a while to recover from the shock. When she came to her senses and realized the theft of her grandma’s gift, tears welled up. A wave of anger and disappointment swept over her. But in that moment of upset, something unusual in the park captured her attention. 注意：  1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。  Following the boy quickly, she spotted a group of kids crying anxiously by the lake.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After making sure the drowning girl was alright, the boy approached Katie with the jump rope.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意： 这篇文章讲述了Katie在自家门前的草地上愉快地跳绳，享受着温暖的阳光和悠闲的时光。她回忆起祖母送给她的跳绳，祖母没有很多钱，但还是攒钱给她买了她一直想要的跳绳。然而，当她沉浸在跳绳的快乐中时，一个男孩突然冲过来，抢走了她的跳绳，然后跑向公园。Katie感到困惑和震惊，当她意识到祖母的礼物被偷时，她感到愤怒和失望。但在她感到不安的时刻，公园里一些不寻常的事情引起了她的注意。 伏笔及回应： 1. Katie的祖母送给她跳绳作为圣诞礼物，显示了祖母对她的爱和考虑。伏笔：祖母的经济状况和对礼物的挑选。回应：Katie感到被爱，但随后跳绳被抢走，增加了情感的冲突。 2. 男孩抢走跳绳的行为。伏笔：男孩突然出现并抢走跳绳。回应：Katie的困惑和失望，以及她对祖母礼物的重视。 续写要点： 1. 第一段：描述Katie跟随男孩到公园，发现一群孩子在湖边焦急地哭泣的情况。 2. 第二段：描述男孩用跳绳救了一个溺水的女孩，然后归还跳绳给Katie，并解释了他的行为。 感情线： 1. Katie对祖母的爱和感激。 2. Katie对跳绳被抢的愤怒和失望。 3. Katie对男孩行为的理解和宽恕。 故事线： 1. Katie在户外享受跳绳。 2. 祖母送的跳绳被抢。 3. Katie跟随男孩到公园，发现紧急情况。 4. 男孩用跳绳救了一个溺水的女孩。 5. 男孩归还跳绳并道歉。 主旨升华句： 1. "In the face of loss, sometimes we find something more valuable in the process of recovery." 2. "A single act of kindness can outweigh a moment of thoughtlessness." 3. "Understanding can turn a tragedy into a story of growth." 4. "The true value of a gift lies not in its price, but in the love it represents." 5. "Even in the darkest moments, there is always a glimmer of hope." 写作范文： 范文一： Following the boy quickly, she spotted a group of kids crying anxiously by the lake. As she got closer, she saw that a girl had fallen into the water and was struggling to stay afloat. The boy, realizing the emergency, had used Katie's jump rope to reach the girl, pulling her safely back to the shore. Katie's heart raced as she watched the rescue unfold, her anger dissipating as she understood the boy's desperate action. After making sure the drowning girl was alright, the boy approached Katie with the jump rope. "I'm so sorry," he said, his eyes filled with remorse. "I didn't mean to scare you. I saw the girl in trouble and knew I had to act fast." Katie, her earlier disappointment replaced by relief and admiration, accepted the jump rope and forgave the boy, grateful for the unexpected lesson in compassion and quick thinking. 范文二： Following the boy quickly, she spotted a group of kids crying anxiously by the lake. Among them, she saw the boy from earlier, now using her jump rope as a lifeline, reaching out to a girl who had slid into the lake by accident. The boy's quick thinking had turned Katie's cherished gift into a tool for saving a life. As the girl was pulled to safety, the tension in the air eased, replaced by a collective sigh of relief. After making sure the drowning girl was alright, the boy approached Katie with the jump rope. "I didn't mean to take your things," he explained, his voice trembling with emotion. "But when I saw her fall in, I knew I had to do something." Katie, her initial anger replaced by a newfound respect for the boy's bravery, took her jump rope back, nodding in understanding. "Thank you for saving her life," she said, her voice soft but filled with gratitude. The incident had taught her a valuable lesson about the unexpected ways in which life can surprise us, and the importance of forgiveness and empathy. 参考答案    Following the boy quickly, she spotted a group of kids crying anxiously by the lake.Curiosity drove her through the crowds, her heart pounding. Upon reaching the bank, she spotted the boy who had snatched the rope, now diving in and extending it towards a girl who was desperately struggling in the freezing lake. Fortunately, Katie and the residents joined the rescue, putting in every effort to pull the rope . Although they were extremely exhausted, they were greatly relieved to pull the little girl back to the lakeside.   After making sure the drowning girl was alright, the boy approached Katie with the jump rope. Feeling embarrassed and guilty, he handed over the sodden lifeline, apologize softly, 'I'm sorry for taking your jump rope without permission.' In a flash, she realized how meaningful the rope her grandmother had given her was. She smiled and said, 'You are a superhero.' The sun continued to cast its warm light across the sky, and with misunderstandings gone in a split second, a sense of warmth and joy swept over her. From that moment on, she knew that one should never rush to judgment before fully understanding a situation.      学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$