读后续写 午餐桌上的新朋友 讲义-2025届广东省江门市高三10月份调研英语试卷

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was young I had several surgeries to fix my cleft palate (腭裂), but I still have a hole in the roof of my mouth and I know how weird it looks — I eat like a tortoise. “August, lunch would be hard.” On my first day to middle school, I was warned. I just hadn’t expected it to be this hard. Basically, all the kids from all the fifth-grade classes poured into the cafeteria at the same time, talking loudly and bumping into one another while they ran to different tables. I tried to sit down at one table, but the kid in the next chair said, “Oh, sorry, but somebody else is sitting here.” So I moved to an empty table and just waited for everyone to finish rushing and the lunchroom teacher to tell us what to do next. As she started telling us the cafeteria rules, I looked around to see where my best friend Jack Will was sitting, but I didn’t see him on my side of the room. Kids were still coming in as the teachers started calling the first few tables to get their plates and stand on line at the counter. Mom had packed me a cheese sandwich, graham crackers, and a juice box, so I didn’t need to stand on line when my table was called. Instead, I just concentrated on opening my backpack, pulling out my lunch bag, and slowly opening the aluminum-foil wrapping of my sandwich. I could tell I was being stared at without even looking up. I knew that people were nudging (轻推) each other, watching me out of the corners of their eyes. I thought I was used to those kinds of stares by now, but I guess I wasn’t. There was one table of girls that I knew were whispering about me because they were talking behind their hands. Their eyes and whispers kept bouncing over to me. “Hey, is this seat taken?” 注意:   1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I looked up, and a girl I never saw before was standing with her lunch plate. ____________________________________________________________________________ At the end of lunch, Summer and I decided to have lunch together the next day. ____________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意： 这篇文章讲述了一个名叫August的男孩，他因为腭裂而经历了几次手术，尽管如此，他的口腔顶部仍然有一个洞，这使得他吃东西的样子看起来很奇怪。在他中学的第一天，他被警告说午餐可能会很困难，但他没有预料到会这么难。在食堂里，所有的孩子都涌入了同一个空间，大声交谈，互相碰撞。August试图坐在一张桌子旁，但被告知座位已经被占用了。他最终坐在一个空桌子旁，等待其他人安定下来。他试图找到他最好的朋友Jack Will，但没有在房间的这一侧看到他。当老师开始叫号去拿盘子时，August的妈妈已经为他准备了午餐，所以他不需要排队。他专注于打开背包，拿出午餐袋，慢慢地打开三明治的铝箔包装。他能感觉到自己被盯着看，尽管他没有抬头。他知道人们在轻推对方，偷偷地看着他。他以为他已经习惯了这种目光，但他猜他并没有。有一群女孩在窃窃私语，他知道她们在谈论他，因为他们在用手遮掩着说话，他们的目光和窃窃私语不断地投向他。这时，一个他从未见过的女孩走过来问他旁边的座位是否被占用了。 伏笔及回应： 1. August的腭裂和吃东西的样子 - 伏笔：文章开头提到August的腭裂和吃东西的样子。回应：在食堂里，他感觉到被盯着看，这与他的腭裂有关。 2. Jack Will的缺席 - 伏笔：August在食堂里寻找他最好的朋友Jack Will，但没有找到。回应：在续写中，可以提到Jack Will的缺席对August的影响，或者他如何适应没有朋友在场的情况。 3. 新女孩的出现 - 伏笔：一个女孩问August旁边的座位是否被占用。回应：在续写中，这个女孩可以成为August的新朋友，为他提供支持。 续写要点： 1. 第一段：描述August对新女孩的反应，以及他们之间的对话。可以包括他们如何开始交谈，以及August的感受。 2. 第二段：描述August和新女孩的友谊如何发展，以及他们决定第二天再次共进午餐。 感情线： 1. August感到孤独和被排斥，因为他的腭裂。 2. 新女孩的出现给了August希望和友谊。 3. August和新女孩之间的友谊逐渐加深。 故事线： 1. August在食堂里感到不自在和被盯着看。 2. 新女孩的出现打破了他的孤独。 3. August和新女孩开始交谈，建立了友谊。 4. 他们决定第二天再次共进午餐。 主旨升华句： 1. "In the midst of feeling out of place, a simple act of kindness can change everything." 2. "Sometimes, the most unexpected friendships can bloom in the most unlikely places." 3. "Courage isn't just about facing our own challenges, but also about reaching out to others." 4. "A single act of compassion can break the ice and open doors to new friendships." 5. "In the face of adversity, it's the small moments of connection that can make all the difference." 写作范文： 写作范文1： I looked up, and a girl I never saw before was standing with her lunch plate. She had a friendly smile that seemed to light up her face, and her eyes didn't hold the usual curiosity or pity that I was used to. "No, it's not taken," I replied, feeling a bit more at ease than I had all day. She nodded and set her tray down, introducing herself as Mia. We started talking about our shared classes and the teachers we had, and to my surprise, I found myself enjoying the conversation. It was a relief to have someone to talk to who wasn't staring at me like I was some kind of oddity. At the end of lunch, Mia and I exchanged a look that said more than words could. We both knew we'd found a friend in each other, someone who didn't care about the superficial things. "Want to sit together tomorrow?" she asked, and I nodded enthusiastically. It was a small victory, but it felt like a huge step forward. For the first time since starting middle school, I felt a sense of belonging, and it was all thanks to Mia's kindness and acceptance. As we parted ways, I couldn't help but feel a little more optimistic about the rest of the school year. 写作范文2 I looked up, and a girl I never saw before was standing with her lunch plate. She had a gentle expression that immediately put me at ease. "No, it's all yours," I responded, trying to hide the surprise in my voice. She thanked me with a warm smile and sat down, placing her tray on the table. Her name was Lily, and as we began to chat, I found that she had a way of making me feel like I was just another student, not someone with a noticeable difference. We talked about our favorite subjects and shared a few laughs over the quirks of our new teachers. At the end of lunch, Lily and I exchanged numbers, making plans to meet up the next day. I couldn't help but feel a sense of gratitude for this unexpected friendship. It was as if a door had opened, allowing a sliver of light to shine through the uncertainty of my first days in middle school. With each shared joke and moment of connection, I felt my confidence grow, and the daunting prospect of navigating the social landscape of a new school became just a little bit less intimidating. Lily's simple act of kindness had a profound impact on me, and I left the cafeteria that day with a newfound sense of hope and belonging. 【答案】 I looked up, and a girl I never saw before was standing with her lunch plate. I was a bit surprised but quickly shook my head. She put her lunch plate on the table, plopped her backpack on the floor, and sat down across from me. “I’m Summer,” she said. I introduced myself nervously. She didn’t seem to notice my cleft palate or care about the stares. We started chatting about our classes and hobbies. Soon, the uncomfortable stares and whispers didn’t matter anymore as I found a new friend. At the end of lunch, Summer and I decided to have lunch together the next day. As we walked out of the cafeteria, I felt a sense of relief and happiness. I realized that middle school might not be as hard as I thought. With Summer by my side, I was looking forward to more days of friendship and fun. Looking back, I realize that it wasn’t just Summer who changed my life that day; it was the courage to reach out and make new connections that made all the difference. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$