Unit4 I used to be afraid of the dark 单元主题写作满分范文20篇-2024-2025学年九年级英语全一册重难点讲练全攻略（人教版）

2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品新课全攻略系列资料，已编校！ Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark 单元主题写作满分范文20篇 1.“时光荏苒，吐故纳新；精进不休，一日千里。”初中三年，相信大家在外貌性格、学习爱好各方面 都有了自己的变化和进步。我校英语角正在以“How I Have Changed These Years'"为题进行征文活动，请你 根据以下表格，用英语写一篇谈论自己近年各方面改变的文章。 要求： 1.不要逐字翻译，逻辑要通顺合理： 2.包含所有要点，可适当发挥补充： 3.文中不得出现考生真实信息，如姓名、班级等： 4.字数100-120词，不包括已给出的开头。 How I Have Changed These Years In the blink of an eye,I am in Junior Three.Looking back at the past years,I have changed a lot. 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 20242025学年一线教师制作精品新课全攻略系列资料，已编校！ 2.假定你是李明，你们学校校报“英语专栏"举行以“Great Changes In My Hometown'"为题的征文比赛。 请你结合以下表格提示，写一篇英语短文投稿应征。 注意事项： 1.必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头己给出，不计入总词数： 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范： 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 People's life home,food,clothes Infrastructure(基础设施) schools.hospitals,parks Environment air.water.street... Great Changes In My Hometown Since the reform and opening-up,especially the new century,great changes have taken place in my hometown 3.每个人都会幢憬未来美好的生活。请以“The beautiful life thatI'm looking forward to”为题，并根据 要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 1.要点： 1)请描述一下你所憧憬的美好生活（如教有、工作…）； 2)你的感受。 2.要求： 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 2 2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品新课全攻略系列资料，已编校！ 1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名： 2)词数100左右。 The beautiful life that I'm looking forward to 4.假如某中学生英文报开展关于生活变化的征文活动，请你根据下表中的提示，以“Changes in Our Life'” 为题写一篇短文，简述社会及个人生活各方面的变化，展望未来并浅谈如何为之努力。 家乡 老旧房屋→高楼林立 变化 交通 步行：骑车→乘坐公交车：开小汽车 个人 书本学习→网络学习 愿望 更加美好的生活（或自拟内容，说明自己的理想生活） 打算 要求：1.词数80左右： 2.必须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥： 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes in Our Life 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 3 20242025学年一线教师制作精品新课全攻略系列资料，已编校！ Great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years. I believe that our life will be better and better 5.请根据下列提示，写一篇题为Changes in My Hometown'的短文。l00词左右。 提示： 过去：1.居住条件差，一家人住在又小又旧的房子里。 2.主要通过寄信与朋友保持联系。 3.步行、骑自行车上班。 4.道路狭窄，车辆少。 现在：1.居住环境舒适，搬进高楼。 2.通过手机交流。 3.环形路宽阔，拥有自己的车辆。 4.可以做很多事情放松自己。 我很高兴看见这些变化，并为此自豪，相信家乡会变得越来越美丽。 Changes in My Hometown 6.杂志社正在开展主题为“今昔变化"的征文活动，请你结合以下要点用英语写一篇题为Grat changes in communication'"的短文参加此次活动。 要点：1.过去写信或使用公共电话，现在使用手机或因特网： 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 4 2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品新课全攻略系列资料，已编校！ 2.过去接收信息要花费很长时间，现在花费几秒钟： 3.这些变化改变着人们的生活。 注意：1短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当发挥。 2.短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 3.字数80一100词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数） Great changes in communication Now the development of science and technology is becoming faster and faster.so the way people communicate with each other is becoming more and more convenient. 7.你的名字是Li Ming。今年是新中国成立70周年的生日，你的美国朋友Lucy在给你的Email中提 到想了解我们的国家发生了哪些改变。请根据下列要点结合自己的生活经验或学到的知识，给她回一封 email。 要点包含： 要求： 1.对比过去与现在的情况：日常生活方面、交通方面、教育方 1.所给信息完整表述： 面（各1条）： 2.分段，合理使用过渡词，使文章通顺并 2.你认为最大的一个改变： 有逻辑： 3.拼写，语法正确，表达流畅，书写干净 3.国家发生改变的原因（至少1条）： 整齐： 4.你的感受（至少2条）。 4.格式正确，120词左右。 可能用到的短语：经济发展economic development70周年7 Oth anniversary 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 20242025学年一线教师制作精品新课全攻略系列资料，已编校！ 8.2021年7月24日，双减政策(double reduction policy)颁布。这一政策旨在通过减轻义务教育阶 段学生作业负担和校外培训负担来促进学生全面发展、健康成长。时至今日，此项政策己落地几个月，你 感受到了哪些改变？你对此政策有何看法？你可以从哪些方面努力来实现自己全面健康发展.请就以上 内容及下面的思维导图写一篇不少于100词的文章，文中不得出现真实人名、校名。 Double Reduction Policy Meaning Changes&your Things you can purpose ideas do 9.这些年，随着经济的迅速发展，你的生活也发生了很大变化。请以“fy Life Has Become Much Better'” 为题，根据下面的要点和要求，写一篇英语短文。 要点： 1,你的居住条件、周围环境、交通方式以及业余生活发生了哪些变化： 2.你对这些变化的看法。 要求： 1.文中不得出现你所在学校的名称和师生姓名： 2.词数100左右。 My Life Has Become Much Better 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 6 20242025学年一线教师制作精品新课全攻略系列资料，已编校！ your understanding 10. Growing up a story/an your feeling 成长对于青少年有着重大的意义。目前，学校公众号英语专栏以“Growing Up”为题，面向全体学生 开展征文活动。请你参考提示图（图片为非限定性内容），从你对成长的认识出发，结合自己初中阶段的某 个故事或某次经历，写一篇短文，谈谈你对成长的感受。 要求： 1.内容包含图中提示信息，可适当发挥，语句通顺，语意连贯： 2.书写规范，字迹清晰，90一100词； 3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Growing Up l】.时光荏苒，跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以I Have Changed a Lot!”为题，根据 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 7 20242025学年一线教师制作精品新课全攻略系列资料，已编校！ 以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其是如何发生的。 要求： 1,短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息： 2.100词左右。 提示： 1.What did you use to be like? 2.What is the most important change? 3.And how did it happen?Tell a story about it. I Have Changed a Lot! 12.人生的每一个选择都与个人成长紧密相关，它们互相交织，勾勒出人生轨迹。校报正在以Choice” 为主题举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇不少于80词的英语短文投稿。 要点： 1.描述自身与选择相关的一件事： 2.谈谈你对选择的理解与感悟。 l3.初中三年校园生活丰富多彩，有些活动一定令你雅忘。近期，你校英文报举办“The School Activity I Will Never Forget'"的主题征文活动。 要求： 1参考下图，确定至少一次活动并详细介绍，可适当发挥： 2.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数： 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 8 20242025学年一线教师制作精品新课全攻略系列资料，已编校！ 3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 为 a sports a club meeting activity a...competition a New Year celebration What?When?Where? With whom?Why?... The School Activity I Will Never Forget In the past three years,there have been many colorful activities in our school.I will never forget 14.在过去几年里，你一定有许多收获，也会有一些不足。展望未来，你肯定有许多美好的期待。 假如你被邀请在班会上发言，请你根据以下表格信息，写一篇发言稿。 提示内容 提示词 1.外貌上的变化 1.tall,wear glasses 2.性格上的改变 2.outgoing.get on with 回顾过去 3.学习上的成就 3.be interested in,make progress 4.反思不足 4.waste time,not understand 展望未来 未来的梦想 come true 要求：1.字迹工整，书写规范，语句通顺， 语意连贯： 2.包括表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥： 3.文中不可出现真实人名和校名等相关信息： 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 9 2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品新课全攻略系列资料，已编校！ 4.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear classmates, How time flies!I have improved a lot in the last few years. 15.世界在发展，生活在变化，社会的进步让我们的生活越来越好。请通过下面表格，从信息来源、 购物方式、居住环境和联系方式等方面，以“How life changes"为题写一篇英语短文。 In the past Now Newspaper,radio,television mobile phone:computer shop in a shop online shop old and dirty house new and clean house Letter,postcard Email;WeChat;QQ (请再列举1一2个方面) (请再列举1一2个方面) 要求： 1.词数不少于80。文章的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 How life changes Great changes have taken place in our life during the years. 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 10 2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品新课全攻略系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品新课全攻略系列资料，已编校！ Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark 单元主题写作满分范文20篇 1．“时光荏苒，吐故纳新；精进不休，一日千里。”初中三年，相信大家在外貌性格、学习爱好各方面都有了自己的变化和进步。我校英语角正在以“How I Have Changed These Years”为题进行征文活动，请你根据以下表格，用英语写一篇谈论自己近年各方面改变的文章。 要求： 1. 不要逐字翻译，逻辑要通顺合理； 2. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥补充； 3. 文中不得出现考生真实信息，如姓名、班级等； 4. 字数100-120词，不包括已给出的开头。 How I Have Changed These Years In the blink of an eye, I am in Junior Three. Looking back at the past years, I have changed a lot. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文                                                                  How I Have Changed These Years In the blink of an eye, I am in Junior Three. Looking back at the past years, I have changed a lot. I used to be short, shy and silent. I’m much taller now, outgoing and active. I used to have poor English study results, poor oral English, and often made mistakes. Now I have found the right learning methods, such as making foreign friends and speaking more English. I also make fewer and fewer mistakes by keeping an English diary. Now my English is better than before. I used to like playing games and watching short videos on my mobile phone. Now I like listening to music and join the school basketball team. If I have time on weekends, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：材料所给提示不得遗漏，写作过程中注意时态的切换。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，点题引出下文我的变化； 第二步，从外貌性格、学习习惯和生活爱好方面详细阐述自己的变化。 [亮点词汇] ①used to do 过去常常做某事 ②such as 例如 ③keep a diary 记日记 [高分句型] ①I also make fewer and fewer mistakes by keeping an English diary. (“by+动名词”表方式方法) ②If I have time on weekends, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends.(if引导条件状语从句) 2．假定你是李明，你们学校校报“英语专栏”举行以“Great Changes In My Hometown”为题的征文比赛。请你结合以下表格提示，写一篇英语短文投稿应征。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 People’s life home, food, clothes Infrastructure (基础设施) schools, hospitals, parks Environment air, water, street… Great Changes In My Hometown Since the reform and opening-up, especially the new century, great changes have taken place in my hometown. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Great Changes In My Hometown Since the reform and opening-up, especially the new century, great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the old days, people used to live in small and broken houses. But now most people live in apartments in tall buildings. People used to be hungry, but now they eat well. People’s clothes are much better than they used to be. There were fewer schools, hospitals and parks in the past. Now more schools, hospitals and parks have been built. The environment was bad in the past. Now the environment is getting better and better. There are many green trees on both sides of the street. The mountains are green, the rivers are clean and the sky is blue. The air is fresher, too. Thousands of visitors come here from all over the world. There is no doubt that our hometown will become more and more beautiful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，根据提示，介绍家乡的变化； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①used to曾经 ②apartment公寓 ③in the past在过去 ④all over the world世界各地 ⑤there is no doubt that毫无疑问 [高分句型] There is no doubt that our hometown will become more and more beautiful. (that引导同位语从句) 3．每个人都会憧憬未来美好的生活。请以“The beautiful life that I’m looking forward to”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 1. 要点： 1）请描述一下你所憧憬的美好生活（如教育、工作……）; 2）你的感受。 2. 要求： 1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2）词数100左右。 The beautiful life that I’m looking forward to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The beautiful life that I’m looking forward to Everyone expects to live a beautiful life in the future. So do I. Let me share my beautiful life that I’m looking forward to with you. First, I’m looking forward to getting the best education. It’s the best education that can help me achieve my dream. Second, I expect to find a good job. The company that I want to work is Huawei Company. I want to use what I have learned at school to make it stronger. Lastly, I’d like to buy a large house for my parents. My parents spare no efforts to make me become what I am today. I want to give them something in return. All in all, I know that Rome was not built in a day. Only when I try my best, can I turn my dream life into reality. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，描述一下你所憧憬的美好生活； 第二步，介绍你的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①achieve…dream实现梦想 ②expect to do期望 ③spare no efforts不遗余力 [高分句型] ①I want to use what I have learned at school to make it stronger.（宾语从句） ②Only when I try my best can I turn my dream life into reality.（倒装句） 4．假如某中学生英文报开展关于生活变化的征文活动，请你根据下表中的提示，以“Changes in Our Life”为题写一篇短文，简述社会及个人生活各方面的变化，展望未来并浅谈如何为之努力。 变化 家乡 老旧房屋→高楼林立 交通 步行；骑车→乘坐公交车；开小汽车 个人 书本学习→网络学习 愿望 更加美好的生活（或自拟内容，说明自己的理想生活） 打算 …… 要求：1. 词数80左右；          2. 必须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；     3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes in Our Life Great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I believe that our life will be better and better. 【答案】例文 Changes in Our Life Great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years. In my hometown, people used to live in old and broken houses. Now, there are tall and beautiful buildings everywhere. In the past, people had to walk or ride when they went out. But now, they can take buses or drive to wherever they want to go. Several years ago, people could only learn from books. Nowadays, they can also learn through computers. I hope people from all over the country can live a better life in the near future. And I will study hard and try my best to make it come true. I believe that our life will be better and better. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于较为常见的描述变化的作文。需要根据表格提示，将信息转化为语句。由于文章开头结尾已给，表格内容即为第二段，主要描述变化。 2.写作指导：本文主要为一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。已经产生的变化，用现在完成时进行总体概述。谈论到具体变化时，过去的状态使用一般过去时，现在的状态使用一般现在时。词语应尽量丰富，体现出变化后的美好。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 5．请根据下列提示，写一篇题为“Changes in My Hometown”的短文。100词左右。 提示： 过去：1. 居住条件差，一家人住在又小又旧的房子里。 2. 主要通过寄信与朋友保持联系。 3. 步行、骑自行车上班。 4. 道路狭窄，车辆少。 现在：1. 居住环境舒适，搬进高楼。 2. 通过手机交流。 3. 环形路宽阔，拥有自己的车辆。 4. 可以做很多事情放松自己。 我很高兴看见这些变化，并为此自豪，相信家乡会变得越来越美丽。 Changes in My Hometown ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Changes in My Hometown China has developed so fast in recent years. Great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, the living conditions were hard. There used to be old houses. A big family had to share small rooms. The roads were narrow and there were not many buses or cars. People went to work on foot or by bike. People kept in touch with friends mainly by sending letters. Now, the living conditions are comfortable. Most families have moved into tall buildings now. The ring roads are wide. Some people have their own cars. People can communicate with each other by cell phone. What’s more, people can do many things to relax themselves, such as going traveling and doing sports. I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. I’m proud of the rapid development in my hometown. I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future. 【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“Changes in My Hometown”为题进行写作，介绍家乡所发生的变化。具体的内容要包含所给的提示。 2. 写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。首先开篇点题，点明家乡发生了变化，紧接着介绍过去家乡的情况；第二段介绍现在家乡发生改变后的情况；最后一段表达自己的感想和希望。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 6．杂志社正在开展主题为“今昔变化”的征文活动，请你结合以下要点用英语写一篇题为“Great changes in communication”的短文参加此次活动。 要点：1. 过去写信或使用公共电话，现在使用手机或因特网； 2. 过去接收信息要花费很长时间，现在花费几秒钟； 3. 这些变化改变着人们的生活。 注意：1.短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当发挥。 2.短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 3.字数80—100词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数） Great changes in communication Now the development of science and technology is becoming faster and faster, so the way people communicate with each other is becoming more and more convenient. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Great changes in communication Now the development of science and technology is becoming faster and faster, so the way people communicate with each other is becoming more and more convenient. In the past, people used to keep in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone. But now people can communicate with each other anywhere at anytime on their mobile phones. Besides they can send and receive messages on QQ or WeChat. It used to take several days or even weeks to hear from each other, but now it takes only several seconds, even if they’re in different countries. With these changes, people’s life has improved a lot. They not only know more about the outside world, but they also have a more comfortable life. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述在人际交往的方式上过去和现在的变化以及这些变化对人们的生活的影响。 2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主，讲述过去和现在人际交往上的变化以及对人们的生活的影响，要叙述完整，条理清晰。 7．你的名字是Li Ming。今年是新中国成立70周年的生日，你的美国朋友Lucy在给你的Email中提到想了解我们的国家发生了哪些改变。请根据下列要点结合自己的生活经验或学到的知识，给她回一封email。 要点包含： 要求： 1. 对比过去与现在的情况：日常生活方面、交通方面、教育方面（各1条）； 1. 所给信息完整表述； 2. 你认为最大的一个改变； 2. 分段，合理使用过渡词，使文章通顺并有逻辑； 3. 国家发生改变的原因（至少1 条）； 3. 拼写，语法正确，表达流畅，书写干净整齐； 4. 你的感受（至少2条）。 4. 格式正确，120 词左右。 可能用到的短语：经济发展economic development  70周年70th anniversary __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear Lucy, Today is the 70th anniversary of the founding of new China. I feel very happy. There are many changes in our country, and it is slowly getting better. In the past, we were more inconvenient in our daily life, and now the traffic is very convenient. We can shop online, more importantly, we can buy things without cash. Our country implements nine-year compulsory education. I think the biggest change is students don’t have to pay any more for their books. I think that’s very good for some poor students. These changes are to make people live a better life. I am happy with these changes. Thanks to our country, thanks to our people. They make our life better and better. I want the motherland to be stronger and stronger, and you? Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点包含”中日常生活方面，交通方面，教育方面的介绍，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我们国家有很多变化”来引出重点介绍内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“日常生活方面、交通方面、教育方面、作者认为最大变化、发展原因、作者感受等”几个方面介绍国家发展相关情况； 第三步，书写结语。祝福祖国越来越强大并询问Lucy的观点。 [亮点词汇] ① in the past在过去 ② shop online 网上购物 ③ more importantly更重要的是 ④ pay for支付 ⑤ make sb do让某人做某事 ⑥ Thanks to多亏 ⑦ stronger ang stronger越来越强大 [高分句型] ① There are many changes in our country, and it is slowly getting better. （there be句型，表示某地有某物） ② I think that’s very convenient for some poor students. （I think+宾语从句） 8．2021年7月24日，双减政策（double reduction policy）颁布。这一政策旨在通过减轻义务教育阶段学生作业负担和校外培训负担来促进学生全面发展、健康成长。时至今日，此项政策已落地几个月，你感受到了哪些改变？你对此政策有何看法？你可以从哪些方面努力来实现自己全面健康发展……请就以上内容及下面的思维导图写一篇不少于100词的文章，文中不得出现真实人名、校名。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Since the “Double Reduction Policy” was released, our lives have changed a lot. Its purpose is to reduce the pressure and burden on students. It is very meaningful and necessary for us students. I used to have a lot of homework every day, so I had to stay up late at night. I didn’t have time for other sports. Now everything is getting better. I have less homework and I can finish it at school, so I can get enough sleep every night. In addition, I can do what I like in my spare time. I often play basketball and football with my friends. Now I’m healthier and happier than before. I think the “Double Reduction Policy” is very good, which reduces the burden on students and makes our school life more colorful and wonderful. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作； ② 时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③ 提示：写作时注意围绕“双减政策”的主题，根据思维导图的内容展开写作，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明“双减政策”的意义和目的； 第二步，具体描写“双减政策”之后感受到的变化和想法以及可以做的事情； 第三步，书写结语，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ① used to过去常常 ② stay up late熬夜 ③ In addition另外 ④ spare time空闲时间 [高分句型] ① Since the “Double Reduction Policy” was released, our lives have changed a lot. （现在完成时的运用） ② I think the “Double Reduction Policy” is very good, which reduces the burden on students and makes our school life more colorful and wonderful.（定语从句） 9．这些年，随着经济的迅速发展，你的生活也发生了很大变化。请以“My Life Has Become Much Better”为题，根据下面的要点和要求，写一篇英语短文。 要点： 1. 你的居住条件、周围环境、交通方式以及业余生活发生了哪些变化； 2. 你对这些变化的看法。 要求： 1. 文中不得出现你所在学校的名称和师生姓名； 2. 词数100左右。 My Life Has Become Much Better _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                           My Life Has Become Much Better      With the progress of society, now the family is getting smaller and smaller, generally only one or two children. In this way, children can enjoy a good education. They are also busy working. There are buses, subways and airplanes everywhere, and they make traveling very easy. We used to live in a very small house, but now we live in a very large house. There are many activities in people’s free time, such as mountain climbing, fishing and so on. There are many high-quality programs on TV, such as Beijing Opera and some old movies.      In a word, our life is better today and we eat better and live longer. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，以“My Life Has Become Much Better”为题，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍随着经济的迅速发展，你的居住条件、周围环境、交通方式以及业余生活发生了哪些变化； 第二步，谈谈你对这些变化的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①in this way以这种方式 ②used to do sth过去常常做某事 ③such as比如 ④in a word总之 [高分句型] ① now the family is getting smaller and smaller（比较级+and+比较级的用法） ②There are buses, subways and airplanes everywhere, and they make traveling very easy.（there be句型，and连接并列结构） 10． 成长对于青少年有着重大的意义。目前，学校公众号英语专栏以“Growing Up”为题，面向全体学生开展征文活动。请你参考提示图 (图片为非限定性内容)，从你对成长的认识出发，结合自己初中阶段的某个故事或某次经历，写一篇短文，谈谈你对成长的感受。 要求： 1. 内容包含图中提示信息，可适当发挥，语句通顺，语意连贯； 2. 书写规范，字迹清晰，90—100词； 3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 Growing Up ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文：                        Growing Up Growing up is meaningful to teenagers. In my opinion, I grow up in changes. The biggest change I’ve ever made is that I am not afraid of speaking to others any more. I used to be shy when I entered the middle school. It lasted for one year until I read the saying “It’s never too late to change” in my English book. I realized it’s time to change, so I began to communicate more with others and tried to speak louder when answering questions in class. Now my life is much more meaningful and colourful. I should be brave to improve myself when growing up. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己的观点——成长对青少年来说很有意义； 第二步，介绍自己在初中阶段关于成长的故事； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be afraid of害怕 ②communicate with sb.与某人交流 ③meaningful有意义的 [高分句型] ①Growing up is meaningful to teenagers. (动名词作主语) ②I used to be shy when I entered the middle school. (when引导的时间状语从句) 11．时光荏苒，跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以“I Have Changed a Lot!”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其是如何发生的。 要求： 1. 短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息； 2. 100 词左右。 提示： 1. What did you use to be like? 2. What is the most important change? 3. And how did it happen? Tell a story about it. I Have Changed a Lot! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I Have Changed a Lot! Time goes by quickly. My life has changed a lot in the past few years. Let me show you my changes. I used to be really short and thin. Because I used to be shy and quiet, I was always silent in class. But now I have changed a lot. The most important change in my life is that I become more outgoing. What made me change a lot? I remember when I was in Grade Eight, there was an English speech contest in our school. I wanted to take part in it, but I was afraid of it. Our English teacher, Mr. Wang encouraged me to take part in it. He guided me a lot, and I practiced a lot every day. Finally, I won the first prize in the speech contest. I felt very proud and happy. Since then, I have become more outgoing. I hope my life will become better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：“一般过去时”为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先总述和之前相比，自己改变了很多； 第二步，再描述你之前是什么样子的，例如可以从之前的外貌、性格等方面来描述；接着描述自己发生了哪些变化，其中最重要的变化是什么，这个变化是如何发生的。 第三步，书写结束语，表达自己对未来生活的憧憬。 [亮点词汇] ① used to be 过去是 ② take part in 参加 ③ be afraid of 害怕 ④ encourage sb to do 鼓励某人做某事 [高分句型] ① Because I used to be shy and quiet, I was always silent in class.（because引导的原因状语从句） ② The most important change in my life is that I become more outgoing.（that引导的表语从句） ③ I remember when I was in Grade Eight, there was an English speech contest in our school.（when引导的时间状语从句和there be句型） 12．人生的每一个选择都与个人成长紧密相关，它们互相交织，勾勒出人生轨迹。校报正在以“Choice”为主题举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇不少于80词的英语短文投稿。 要点： 1. 描述自身与选择相关的一件事： 2. 谈谈你对选择的理解与感悟。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Choice Life is full of choices, and each one shapes our future. I remember when I had to choose between joining the school basketball team or focusing on my studies. I loved basketball, but my grades were slipping. After much thought, I decided to focus on my studies. I spent more time in the library and less on the court. Eventually, my grades improved, and I felt a sense of accomplishment. This experience taught me that sometimes we have to make tough choices for long-term benefits. Every choice we make is a step towards our future, and it’s important to choose wisely. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：题目要求以“Choice”为题写短文投稿，结合自身经历来谈谈选择及自己的感悟。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述自己与“选择”相关的一件事； 第二步，谈谈自己对选择的理解与感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①shape our future塑造我们的未来 ②decide to do sth决定做某事 ③sense of accomplishment成就感 [高分句型] ①I remember when I had to choose between joining the school basketball team or focusing on my studies. (when引导时间状语从句) ②This experience taught me that sometimes we have to make tough choices for long-term benefits. (that引导宾语从句) 13．初中三年校园生活丰富多彩，有些活动一定令你难忘。近期，你校英文报举办“The School Activity I Will Never Forget”的主题征文活动。 要求： 1.参考下图，确定至少一次活动并详细介绍，可适当发挥； 2.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 The School Activity I Will Never Forget In the past three years, there have been many colorful activities in our school. I will never forget ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Possible version 1: The School Activity I Will Never Forget In the past three years, there have been many colorful activities in our school. I will never forget the club activity in Grade Eight. I was a member of the English Drama Club. Every Tuesday, we joined together in the room and learned to act interesting plays. It was my favourite time at my school. Last year, our teacher encouraged us to perform in front of all the students. We felt nervous at first, but our teacher believed us. To make it successful, we spent several weekends practising. It was tiring but no one gave up. Finally, we performed excellently and all the teachers and students praised us. Every member was satisfied with it. Thanks to the club activity, I not only achieved my acting dream but also made some true friends. I will never forget the experience.Possible version 2: The School Activity I Will Never Forget In the past three years, there have been many colorful activities in our school. I will never forget the sports meeting that I took part in last term. It was a sunny day. We gathered on the playground. All of us were happy and excited. I joined in the 400-metre race. At first, I was very nervous because I was worried about the result. However, when I heard the excited cheers from my classmates, I felt I was full of energy and completed the race successfully. Another activity that impressed me most was the badminton competition in Grade 8. Before my best friend entered the final, we practised hard together every day. At last, she finished fourth. Both of us thought it was meaningful for friends to help each other. Activities are over, but memories remain. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，选择一项校园活动； 第二步，具体阐述活动内容； 第三步，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事 ②give up放弃 ③be satisfied with对……满意 ④thanks to多亏 [高分句型] To make it successful, we spent several weekends practising.（动词不定式作目的状语） 14．在过去几年里，你一定有许多收获，也会有一些不足。展望未来，你肯定有许多美好的期待。 假如你被邀请在班会上发言，请你根据以下表格信息，写一篇发言稿。 提示内容 提示词 回顾过去 1. 外貌上的变化 2. 性格上的改变 3. 学习上的成就 4. 反思不足 1. tall, wear glasses 2. outgoing, get on with 3. be interested in, make progress 4. waste time, not understand 展望未来 未来的梦想 come true 要求：1. 字迹工整，书写规范，语句通顺，语意连贯； 2. 包括表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不可出现真实人名和校名等相关信息； 4. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear classmates, How time flies! I have improved a lot in the last few years. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear students, How time flies! I have improved a lot in the last few years. Firstly, I have grown taller and now I wear glasses. Secondly, I used to be very shy, but now I have become more outgoing and get on well with my classmates. In terms of my studies, I have developed a strong interest in science and have made significant progress. However, I also wasted a lot of time playing video games and sometimes didn’t understand my parents’ concerns. I dream of becoming a scientist when I grow up. I believe that with hard work and determination, my dream will come true. Thank you for listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态综合使用“一般过去时”、“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总述过去的几年有很大的变化； 第二步，回顾过去，详细阐述自己外貌、性格、学习的变化并反思自己的不足； 第三步，展望未来，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①get on well with 与……相处融洽 ②make significant progress 取得显著进步 ③with hard work and determination 通过努力和决心 [高分句型] ①I dream of becoming a scientist when I grow up. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②I believe that with hard work and determination, my dream will come true. (that 引导的宾语从句) 15．世界在发展，生活在变化，社会的进步让我们的生活越来越好。请通过下面表格，从信息来源、购物方式、居住环境和联系方式等方面，以“How life changes”为题写一篇英语短文。 In the past Now Newspaper; radio; television mobile phone; computer shop in a shop online shop old and dirty house new and clean house Letter; postcard Email; WeChat; QQ (请再列举1—2个方面) (请再列举1—2个方面) 要求： 1. 词数不少于80。文章的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 How life changes Great changes have taken place in our life during the years. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How life changes Great changes have taken place in our life during the years. In the past, people used to read newspapers, listen to the radio and watch TV for news and other information. People kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or sending postcards. They would buy everything in the shop or market. Big families had to share small houses which were old and dirty. More and more new inventions have appeared. And now people can get information on the mobile phones or computers almost at any place and at any time. They can buy things online at home. What’s more, people are able to talk to others by email, WeChat or QQ. More and more people live in big and bright apartments with several rooms. Some families are rich enough to send their children to school in their own cars. In a word, people live better than before. Thanks to the new inventions, our life is sure to get better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，结合提示内容进行写作，可适当添加细节，注意包含所有要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍过去的信息来源、购物方式、居住环境和联系方式等； 第二步，介绍现在的这些方面有哪些变化和不同； 第三步，总结全文，抒发现在生活的美好。 [亮点词汇] ①keep in touch with和……保持联系 ②in a word总而言之 ③be sure to do确定做某事 [高分句型] Big families had to share small houses which were old and dirty. (which引导的定语从句) 16．在成长的过程中，总有一些事情让我们感到恐惧，如害怕某种昆虫，害怕在众人面前发言……避而远之会令我们更恐惧，只有克服它才能帮助我们成长。请以Overcome Fear为话题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你是如何克服恐惧的。 内容包括： 1. 介绍你曾经恐惧的事情及原因； 2. 谈谈你克服恐惧的经历 (具体过程)； 3. 分享你克服恐惧的感想及经验，帮助更多人战胜恐惧。 要求： 1. 词数100词左右； 2. 所写内容应包括所给要点，可适当发挥； 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文：     Overcome Fear In our daily life, we have various fears preventing us from moving forward. And overcoming the fears helps us become more confident and make progress. I used to be afraid of speaking in public. Fearing I would make a fool of myself, I never dared to step up and speak in front of a crowd. Then, in senior 2, a speech contest was to be held in my school. With my teacher’s encouragement, I entered for it and made full preparations for it. But when my turn came, I was so nervous that my heart almost beat out of my throat! Gathering all my courage, I went onto the stage to begin my speech. Luckily, I finished it smoothly. To my surprise, I won the second prize, which greatly built up my confidence. Now I have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public. Don’t let the fear take you. Just step forward and you will find you can do it! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出克服恐惧的好处； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。讲述自己克服恐惧的一次经历及如何克服的； 第三步，书写结语。总结克服恐惧后的感想并鼓励大家勇敢战胜恐惧。 [亮点词汇] ①used to do sth. 过去常常做某事 ②be afraid of doing sth. 害怕做某事 ③make a fool of oneself 出丑 ④made full preparations for sth. 做好充分准备 ⑤step forward 走出，向前冲 [高分句型] ①And overcoming the fears helps us become more confident and make progress. (动名词作主语) ②But when my turn came, I was so nervous that my heart almost beat out of my throat! (when引导时间状语从句) ③I won the second prize, which greatly built up my confidence. (which引导定语从句) ④Don’t let the fear take you. Just step forward and you will find you can do it. (祈使句) 17．时光飞逝，不知不觉你们已悄然长大了。对比过去，你在外貌，性格，爱好，生活方式等方面肯定发生了很多的变化，你最大的变化是什么？针对你最大的变化请讲一个故事来描述一下吧！请以“How I have changed”为题，根据以下要求和提示，用英语写一篇短文。 要求： 1. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分； 2. 不少于60词。 提示： 1. What are your changes? 2. What’s the most important change? 3. How did it happen? Please tell a story about it.   _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How I have changed   Time flies, and I have grown up a lot. Comparing with the past, I have changed in appearance, personality, hobbies, and lifestyle. The most important change is my personality. I used to be very shy and introverted. I remember when I was in Grade Seven, I was afraid to speak in front of the class. One day, our teacher asked me to give a presentation. I was so nervous that I almost cried. However, with the encouragement of my teacher and classmates, I managed to finish it. Since then, I started to gain confidence. I joined the school’s debate team and participated in various activities. Gradually, I became more outgoing and confident. Now, I am not afraid to express myself in public. This change has made my life more colorful and meaningful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出主题——“我”的变化； 第二步，具体阐述变化内容，及怎样改变的； 第三步，书写结语，总结变化后的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①grow up成长 ②used to be曾经是 ③be afraid to害怕做 ④in front of在……前面 ⑤participate in参加 [高分句型] ①I remember when I was in Grade Seven, I was afraid to speak in front of the class. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②I was so nervous that I almost cried. (结果状语从句) 18．随着时间的推移，你发现周围的事物发生了很大变化。请根据以下提示，以“Great changes around me”为题，写一篇短文。 写作要点： 1．过去：道路狭窄(narrow)，房屋老旧，空气……河水……人们…… 2．现在：路面洁净、宽阔，交通便利；高楼林立；蓝天白云，绿树鲜花，小鸟歌唱；人们⋯⋯ 3．感受：国家富强，人民幸福，未来更美好…… 写作要求： 1．要点齐全，省略号处可作适当发挥，但不要逐句翻译; 2．语句连贯，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整; 3．文中不得出现任何真实的信息(地名、校名和人名等); 4．80-120词，短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Great Changes around Me In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Great Changes around Me   In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. The roads used to be narrow and crowded. The houses were old and small. The air wasn’t fresh enough. The river was polluted badly and there was rubbish in it. Nowadays, the roads are wide and clean. We can choose different kinds of transportation to go anywhere. Lots of tall buildings have been built in the city. Most of us have moved to big beautiful houses. The sky is blue and the cloud is white. The birds are singing happily. My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees, grass and colorful flowers. Our country is rich and strong. We are living a happy life. I’m sure our life will become better and better! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，不要遗漏写作要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，介绍周围的事物以前和现在的状况； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①different kinds of各种各样的 ②look like看起来像 [高分句型] The river was polluted badly and there was rubbish in it. (并列句) 19．成长的苦乐，与得失和好恶一样不停地交替。在成长中，会遇到各种困难，积极克服；还是佛系躺平，讲述一件你亲身经历的克服困难，收获成长的事。 提示： 1. 讲述这件事 (起因，经过，结果)； 2. 你的感悟； 3. …… 要求： 1. 语言表达要准确，短文连贯通顺； 2. 不能出现具体的人名，校名； 3. 80~120词。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: Everyone has his or her own unforgettable experiences, so do I! Let me share mine. One of the most unforgettable experiences happened in Grade 8. I worked hard to prepare an English speech. However, things didn’t go on as smoothly as expected. I fell ill a week before the speech. I coughed so badly that I could even hardly speak. I felt worried and helpless. It was my dearest teacher that helped me get out of trouble. She told me to calm down and looked after me carefully. During three years, I have known many kind teachers and helpful classmates. Thanks to them, my middle life is meaningful and colorful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为 “一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，讲述一件自己亲身经历的克服困难并收获成长的故事； 第二步，具体讲述这件事，介绍起因、经过以及结果； 第三步，书写结语，写出自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事 ②calm down 冷静 ③look after 照顾 [高分句型] I coughed so badly that I could even hardly speak.（so…that...引导结果状语从句） 20．随着年龄的增长，你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下要点提示，以“Great Changes Around Me”为题，写一篇短文。 写作要点：1. In the past（narrow roads，…houses，air…，water…）；2. At present（wide and clean roads，different kinds of transportation，…houses，…sky)；3. Your feelings… 要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现任何真实的信息（地名、校名和人名等）；3. 90词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。 Great Changes Around Me In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version： Great Changes Around Me In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. In my hometown, the roads used to be narrow and crowded. The houses were small and old. The air wasn’t fresh enough. Sometimes, there was terrible smell. The river was polluted badly. Nowadays, the roads are wide and clean. It’s really convenient for people to go out. We can choose different kinds of transportation to go anywhere. Lots of tall buildings have been built. Most of us have moved to big and beautiful houses. The sky is very blue. My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees, grass and colorful flowers. We are living a happy life. I’m sure as time goes by, our life will become better and better! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述过去的生活； 第二步，描述现在发生的变化； 第三步，描述自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①used to过去常常做某事 ②different kinds of各种各样 ③live a happy life过一个幸福的生活 [高分句型] ①It’s really convenient for people to go out.（it作形式主语） ②I’m sure as time goes by, our life will become better and better!（宾语从句） 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 7 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$