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第二讲 建议信和道歉信
专项提能 循序写作
◆ 建议信 ◆
[谋篇布局]
[常用词汇]
mention v.提到 situation n.情况;形势
furthermore adv.此外 meanwhile adv.同时
discussion n.讨论 proposal n.建议
advise v.建议 suggest v.建议
wise adj.明智的 in my opinion 在我看来
[万能句式]
(1)开头常用句式
①I know you have trouble in...after reading your letter.I am writing this letter to give you some suggestions/a hand.
在读了你的信后,我知道你在……上有困难。我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。
②You've asked me for advice with regard to/regarding...and I'll try to make some useful suggestions here.
关于……你向我征求意见,在此,我将尽力提出一些有用的建议。
③I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how...
我很高兴收到你的来信,在信中你就如何……向我征求意见。
(2)主体部分常用句式
①When it comes to/As for...I would like to suggest/recommend...
当提到/关于……我建议……
②The following are my suggestions.
=My suggestions are as follows.
我的建议如下。
③In my opinion/Personally/As far as I'm concerned,it would be wise to take the following actions.
在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。
④You may/might as well do...
你不妨做……
⑤If I were you,I would...
如果我是你,我会……
⑥I think it would be more beneficial if you could...
我想如果你能……可能会更有利。
(3)结尾常用句式
①I hope you will find these suggestions helpful./I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.
我希望这些建议将对你有帮助。/我希望我的建议将对你有益。
②I hope you will take my advice into consideration seriously.If you have any questions or requirements,please do not hesitate to tell me./If you have any questions,please feel free to ask me at any time.
我希望你能认真考虑我的建议。如果你有任何问题或要求,请毫不犹豫地告诉我。/如果你有任何问题,请随时问我。
假定你是李华,你的英国好友彼得打算今年8月来中国旅游。他想先学习一些中文,却不知道如何入门。请你写一封邮件告诉他你的建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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[参考范文]
Dear Peter,
Glad to hear that you are going to take a trip to China this August. Welcome! As I know, you are always interested in Chinese culture and want to learn some Chinese. Therefore, I suggest that you choose Chinese daily dialogues as a start, like greeting people, asking for directions and bargaining for souvenirs. Apparently, I'd like to be your teacher and send you an e-book with my teaching schedule later. I will try my best to make your learning easier and surely you can speak some fluent Chinese before your arrival.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
◆ 道歉信 ◆
[谋篇布局]
[常用词汇]
apologize v.道歉 forgive v.原谅
inconvenience n.不便 appointment n.约定
oversight n.疏忽 make up for 弥补
[万能句式]
(1)开头常用句式
①I am writing this letter to apologize to you for...
我写这封信是因……向你道歉。
②I am writing to express/convey my deepest apologies to you.
我写信向你表达我深深的歉意。
(2)主体部分常用句式
①I regret to inform you that I can not/am unable to...
我遗憾地告知你我不能……
②I am sorry for my not being able to...due to the fact that...
非常抱歉因为……我不能……
③Much to my regret,I was unable to...and I wish that my apologies could help to some extent.
很遗憾,我不能够……希望我的道歉能在一定程度上有所帮助。
④I remember we planned to...but now because...I cannot...with you as planned.
我记得我们原本计划……但是现在由于……我不能与你如期……
⑤I must apologize for any inconvenience it may have caused you.
为此事可能给你带来的任何不便,我深表歉意。
(3)结尾常用句式
①Once again,I'm sorry for any inconvenience it caused.
对于造成的任何不便,我再次表示歉意。
②I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.
我衷心地希望你能够站在我的角度考虑一下,并接受我的道歉。
③Please accept my sincere apologies for...once more.
请再次接受我为……真诚的道歉。
④I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.
我衷心希望你能接受我的道歉。
假定你是李华,与留学生朋友鲍勃约好周五下午一起去书店,但你因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意并说明原因;
2.补救措施。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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[参考范文]
Dear Bob,
I'm sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go there on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we'll have more time to read and select books. If it's convenient for you, let's meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
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