第七讲 读后续写之情感描写——感动-【优化探究】2025年高考英语一轮复习高考总复习配套课件（外研版2019）

第七讲　读后续写之情感描写——感动 专项提能 循序写作 ◆ 积累素材 ◆ 必备单词 move vt.感动 touch vt.感动；触动 affect vt.打动 impress vt.使感动 impressed adj.深受感动的 stir vt.打动 高级词块 move sb. deeply 深深打动某人 be moved to tears被感动得热泪盈眶 touch one's heart触动某人的心 be touched/moved by被……感动 a wave of warmth一股暖流 be touched beyond words被感动得说不出话来 melt one's heart 融化某人的心 feel extremely/deeply touched/moved 深受感动 句子赏析 1.“What moves me so deeply, about this little prince who is sleeping here，is his loyalty to a flower—the image of a rose that shines through his whole being like the flame of a lamp，even when he is asleep...”“这个熟睡的小王子最让我感动的地方是他对一朵花的忠诚——这朵玫瑰花即使在小王子睡着的时候，也像一盏灯的火焰一样在他身上闪耀着光辉……” 句子赏析 2.Fortunately，the child was moved to hug her，so she managed to hide her face for an instant，hoping the Professor did not see it.幸运的是，这个孩子感动地抱着她，所以她设法把脸藏起来片刻，希望教授不要看到。 3.Deeply stirred by his speech，I was determined to study harder.被他的演讲深深地打动了，我决心更加努力地学习。 4.I was touched that he still remembered me.他仍然记得我，这使我十分感动。 精彩片段 　　As the little prince dropped off to sleep，I took him in my arms and set out walking once more.I felt deeply moved，and stirred．It seemed to me that I was carrying a very fragile treasure.It seemed to me，even，that there was nothing more fragile on all Earth.小王子睡着了，我就把他抱在怀里，又重新上路了。我深受感动，也很激动。在我看来，自己好像抱着一个脆弱的宝贝，好像在地球上没有比这更脆弱的东西了。 ◆ 运用素材 ◆ 一、完成句子 运用表格中的必备单词/高级词块，把下面的句子补充完整。 1．这件漂亮的红绸缎裙子使她的心都融化了，很快她就不再抱怨了。 The beautiful red satin dress _______________，and soon the complaint disappeared. melted her heart 2．看到这些人的生活方式，我深受感动。 It has_____________________ to see how these people live. 3．我被他温柔的语气打动了。 I ________________________________his gentle tone. 4．我知道，他一想到我母亲接受礼物时深受感动的场面，他就感到很高兴。 I knew upon imagining the scene that ______________________when she received the gift，he felt delighted. moved me deeply was touched/moved/stirred by my mom was deeply moved 5．她手心冒汗，喉咙发紧，泪流满面，感动得说不出话来。 Her palms sweating，throat tightening and tears streaming down her face，she ________________________． was touched beyond words 二、篇章练习 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2021·新高考Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷) A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a．m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Knowing what they were preparing for, he was greatly surprised. So immediately, he offered to get involved in the kids' job. Firstly，he put the pot of porridge on a gentle heat, asking Jeff to watch out for it going for fifteen minutes. And then, he asked Jenna to break another two eggs and mix them with milk. With all preparations done, they started to fry bread together. In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen. To their delight, the breakfast was a success in the end. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Eyes opened, the woman heard a harmonious “Happy Mother's Day” from her twin kids with hot sweet breakfast before her. Behind the children stood their father.He told the mother the whole story. After learning about what had happened, she rose quickly to gaze at the boy's hand with moved tears rolling down her cheeks. “Thank you, my honey！” said the mother. $$