第四讲 祝贺信和投诉信-【优化探究】2025年高考英语一轮复习高考总复习配套课件（外研版2019）

第四讲　祝贺信和投诉信 专项提能 循序写作 ◆ 祝贺信 ◆ [谋篇布局] [常用词汇] congratulate sb. on...为……祝贺某人 express/send my sincere congratulations to sb. on sth.为某事向某人表达/送上我诚挚的祝贺 have the opportunity to do sth.有机会做某事 succeed in doing sth. 在……中获得成功 be proud of.../take pride in...为……感到自豪，以……为骄傲 win first place赢得第一名 come true实现，成真 achieve one's dream 实现某人的梦想 be of great help/benefit有很大的帮助/好处 witness your success见证你的成功 [万能句式] (1)开头常用句式 ①I am writing to express my congratulations on your winning first place in the English speech contest. 我写这封信是为了祝贺你在英语演讲比赛中获得第一名。 ②Please accept my most sincere congratulations and best wishes for the future. 请接受我最诚挚的祝贺和对未来的最良好的祝愿。 ③I feel very happy that your dream has come true. 我很高兴你终于梦想成真了。 (2)主体部分常用句式 ①In my view, you work hard and besides that, you are a very intelligent person. 在我看来，你工作努力，除此之外，你是一个很聪明的人。 ②I know that you were not good at Chinese at first. However, you practiced speaking Chinese every day. 我知道当初你不擅长中文。然而，你每天都练习说中文。 ③You don't know how excited I was when I heard the good news. 你不知道当我听到这个好消息时我有多兴奋。 ④As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits.” Finally, you succeeded! 俗话说，“功夫不负有心人。”最终，你成功了！ (3)结尾常用句式 ①Sincere congratulations to you again! 再次真诚地祝贺你！ ②I hope your future will be glorious. 我希望你的未来是辉煌的。 ③Wish you greater success at university and serve your hometown in the future. 祝你在大学取得更大的成功，将来为家乡服务。 ④Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning. 你能与我分享你是如何提高英语口语水平的吗？你的经验将有助于我的学习。 假定你是学生会主席李华，你校英国交换生彼得在全市机器人大赛中获得了第一名。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一封电子邮件，向他表示祝贺。 要点如下： 1．恭喜他获奖； 2．以何种方式为他庆祝。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Dear Peter， I am much delighted to learn that you have come in first in the city's robot contest. I am writing to offer you my sincere congratulations. It is quite inspiring and worth celebrating. It was a challenging competition but you made it. I know how talented you are in designing robots and how hard you have worked to achieve this goal. Undoubtedly, your success is a great honour for both you and our school. We are all proud of you. By the way, a celebration party will be held for you this Sunday. Looking forward to your coming. I wish you a further success. Yours sincerely， Li Hua ◆ 投诉信 ◆ [谋篇布局] [常用词汇] dissatisfaction n．不满意 complain about 抱怨，发牢骚 suffer a lot 遭受重大损失/伤害 put up with 容忍 refund the cost 退还费用 get this matter settled 解决这个问题 [万能句式] (1)开头常用句式 ①I am writing to you about...which I received/bought... 我给你写信是基于我所收到/购买的…… ②I am going to complain about... 我想就……表达不满。 ③I am sorry to have to send this letter... 很抱歉，我不得不寄这封信…… (2)主体部分常用句式 ①When I checked...I noticed... 当我检查……的时候，我注意到…… ②When I took...out of the bag and examined...closely，I found... 当我从包中拿出……并对……进行仔细检查时，我发现…… ③When I unpacked...and tried to use it，it did not work. 当我拆开……的包装想用它的时候，它出了问题。 (3)结尾常用句式 ①Please let me know what you intend to do with this matter. 请告诉我你打算如何处理这件事。 ②In view of the inconvenience this has caused，I think you should... 就此事造成的不便，我觉得你应该…… 假定你是李华，是某国外英语学习网站的注册会员，但最近你在使用网站时发现一些不太满意的地方，因此，你向网站负责人史密斯先生写一封投诉信，内容包括： 1．投诉原因； 2．提出希望。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Smith， I've recently signed up for your English learning website.________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours respectfully， Li Hua [参考范文] Dear Mr. Smith， I've recently signed up for your English learning website. However，I have come across some problems after using it for a short time.I'm writing to make a complaint about them. To begin with，some contents cannot be updated in time，which makes it impossible for me to learn something new related to my present lessons at school. Much to my dissatisfaction，I find the topics of some reading materials are not proper for us high school students. I hope you will take the matter seriously and make an effort to solve the problems. Yours respectfully， Li Hua $$