写作规范练(七)-【优化探究】2025年高考英语一轮复习高考总复习配套课件（外研版2019）

写作规范练(七) 选择性必修第四册 第一节　(满分15分) (2023·湖南长沙质检)假定你是学生会主席李华，你校筹划下周举办一次“魅力中国”城市展览，给国际学生提供了解中国城市的机会。请你用英语写一份通知，号召国际学生积极参与，内容包括： 1．活动时间、地点； 2．活动内容及意义。 注意：词数不少于80。 NOTICE ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ The Students' Union [参考范文] NOTICE Aimed at providing a platform where international students can have a chance to know about cities in China，an exhibition is to be held on our school playground next Friday afternoon. With a theme of “Charming China”，the exhibition will present attractive pictures of major cities in China. Not only can you participate in kinds of activities where you will be exposed to cultures and customs，but you can enjoy stunning performances given by Chinese students as well. So if you are free at that time, please pay a visit to the exhibition! Undoubtedly, it will satisfy your curiosity about China and help you better fit in with Chinese culture. The Students' Union 第二节　(满分25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2023·浙江杭州联考)On a late afternoon，Brandon finished feeding his cows on the farm and decided to go back with his two sons，Louie，6，and Everett，3.As they headed for the house，the two boys ran ahead of their father. Suddenly Brandon was aware that he forgot to close the door of the barn (牲口棚).He told the boys to wait for him at the gate and returned to lock it. When he was at the gate minutes later，he saw only his younger son. “Where's Louie？”he shouted. “He fell into the hole！”Everett said. Brandon quickly realized what had happened. No, he thought. Louie could barely swim! He ran to the well and heard Louie splashing below. Instinctively，he jumped in. Somehow Brandon managed to grab a pipe that ran down the side of the well，which slowed his fall and kept him from crushing (压伤) his son. Finally, Brandon hit the freezing water at the bottom of the well. He popped his head out of the water and grabbed Louie，who was panicking and trying to stay afloat in water that was too deep for either of them to stand. Knowing they could tread water (踩水) for only so long，Brandon lifted his son onto his chest as he packed his own back against the narrow walls for support. “All right，Dad，you can pull us out now，”Louie said. If only it were that easy. There was no way he could climb out. The pipe that he'd grabbed during his fall was too slippery to be of any use. There was only one way out. Looking up to see Everett peering down at them from the top of the well，Brandon shouted，“Everett，you're going to have to be a big boy and save us. Run to the road and stand by the mailbox until someone stops. Tell them we need help.” Everett did as he was told. He stood alone by the side of the road，waving to stop someone. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 After a while，Chris and Mark，nearby farmers，were driving by the farm.___________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ Twenty minutes later, Louie emerged (出现), then Brandon，both cold and wet.________________________________________________ 写作思路： [故事梗概] Brandon喂完牛后和两个儿子——6岁大的Louie和3岁大的Everett——一起回家。途中，Brandon想起自己忘了关牲口棚的门，于是他叮嘱两个儿子一番后便回去锁门。等他锁好门回来后，却发现大儿子Louie不见了。小儿子Everett告诉他，Louie掉进了井里。于是Brandon跳进井里救Louie，但是因为水太深，两人都无法逃出去。Brandon让井口的Everett到路边去寻求帮助。Everett听从父亲的吩咐，站到了路边…… [续写思路] 根据续写第一段的提示句“After a while，Chris and Mark，nearby farmers，were driving by the farm.”可知，路边来了两个人，因此，在本段应首先描述Everett不负众望，找来了帮手。在这一部分的写作中，应适当使用一些对话。另外，还应着重讲述救援Brandon和Louie的过程。此时，需注意结合井下的状况，合理讲述救援过程。 根据续写第二段的提示句“Twenty minutes later，Louie emerged, then Brandon，both cold and wet.”可知，Brandon和Louie都得救了。同学们在本段应注意描写二人被救出后的反应。考虑到二人被救出时的状态cold and wet，还应写到二人脱险后的护理以及伤情确认等。此外，要注意表达对Chris和Mark的感谢，同时，也不要忘了感谢3岁大的Everett。 [参考范文] After a while，Chris and Mark，nearby farmers，were driving by the farm. Noticing Everett waving by the roadside，they pulled over and asked if he was OK.“My daddy and brother are in a hole，”Everett told them. Puzzled，they piled Everett into their pickup and asked him to show them the hole. Finding out what happened，Chris and Mark grabbed a long thick rope at the back seat and sprinted to the well. “Brandon，”Mark shouted，“tie the rope around the waist and we are going to pull you up.” Twenty minutes later, Louie emerged, then Brandon，both cold and wet. Chris rushed Louie to his pickup where he bundled him up in several jackets and turned the heater on at full blast.Then Brandon followed them into the pickup，hurrying to check Louie's injuries. Fortunately，other than some scratches，Brandon and Louie were both fine. While Brandon expressed sincere gratitude to Chris and Mark，Chris said，“We're just neighbors helping neighbors. Three-year-old Everett is a real lifesaver.” $$