第六讲 读后续写之环境描写-【优化探究】2025年高考英语一轮复习高考总复习配套课件（译林版2020）

第六讲　读后续写之环境描写 专项提能 循序写作 ◆ 积累素材 ◆ 必备单词 山 hill n．小山，山丘　　mountain n．高山 peak n．山/顶峰 cave n．山洞；洞穴 valley n．山谷 必备单词 山 gentle平缓的　　rolling 起伏的 rocky 多岩石的 green 绿色的 bare光秃秃的 steep 陡峭的 grassy 长满草的 forested草木丛生的 wooded树木茂盛的 distant遥远的 remote偏远的 towering高耸的 lofty/'lɒfti/高耸的 damp潮湿的 dark 黑暗的 shallow浅的 narrow狭窄的 snowy 积雪覆盖的 snow-covered被雪覆盖的 snow-capped顶部被雪覆盖的 必备单词 水 stream n．小溪　river n．河流 lake n．湖泊 shallows n．浅滩 sea n．海 deep 深的　clear 清澈的 blue蓝色的 rough风浪很大的 calm/smooth平静的 winding蜿蜒曲折的 fast-flowing水流湍急的 slow-moving 流动缓慢的 必备单词 风 wind n．风　　typhoon n．台风 hurricane n．飓风 breeze n．微风 tornado/tɔː'neIdəʊ/n.龙卷风 strong强劲的　　terrible可怕的 slight轻微的 icy 冰冷的 cold寒冷的 bitter严寒的 biting刺骨的 必备单词 雨 rain n．雨　　　shower n．阵雨 storm n．暴风雨 flood n．洪水 drizzle/'drIz(ə)l/n.细雨 雪 snow n．雪　　snowstorm n．暴风雪 blizzard/'blIzəd/n.暴风雪 snowflake/'snəʊfleIk/n.雪花 树 tree n．树　　　　　forest n．森林 woods n．森林 高级词块 水 listen to the water rolling down the river 听着河水潺潺而下 the winding/running/gurgling stream蜿蜒的/奔流的/潺潺的小溪 山 low and rolling hills 山势低缓，连绵起伏 the steep mountains 陡峭的山脉 the snow-covered peaks积雪覆盖的山峰 the deep valley 深谷 高级词块 风 the howling wind嚎叫的风 be destroyed in a typhoon 被台风摧毁 the gentle breeze 温柔的微风 be hit/struck by a typhoon 遭到台风的袭击 雨 heavy/light rain 大/小雨 rain hard/heavily下大雨 get caught in the rain 遇上雨 pour with rain 下着倾盆大雨 with the rain pouring down大雨倾盆而下 an unexpected shower 一场突降的阵雨 高级词块 雪 the dancing snow blanketing the mountain 舞动的雪裹住了山 the pure feathery snowflake 洁白如羽毛的雪花 光 in the dim light 在昏暗的灯光下 the burning sunshine灼热的阳光 in the setting sun 在夕阳下 bathe in the sun 沐浴在阳光下 with the sun rising/setting 日升/日落 the shining/twinkling stars闪耀的星星 高级词块 云 the misty cloud雾霭 the thundering clouds带着雷电的云 a deep blue sky湛蓝的天空 a deep cloudless sky万里无云的天空 其他 the songs of the birds鸟儿的歌声 the sight of the coastline海岸线的景色 the fragrant flowers芬芳的花朵 句子赏析 1.My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farmhouse listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.听着附近的蛙叫声和潺潺的流水声，我和爸爸在农舍的客房里过了一夜。 2．“Stay there！”he shouted at the others over the howling wind．“你们待在那儿！” 他在呼啸的狂风中对另外几个人喊道。 句子赏析 3．It was pouring with rain，and lame for a moment，I hopped around to the driver's side.正下着倾盆大雨，我跛脚了一会儿，跳到了驾驶座那边。 4．However，the lakes shone like glass in the setting sun and looked wonderful.然而， 湖泊在落日的余晖下如玻璃一样闪闪发光，景色迷人。  句子赏析 5.In the distance，they could see the misty cloud that rose from the great Niagara Falls，which is on the south side of the lake.在远处，他们可以看到湖南边的尼亚加拉大瀑布上方升腾着的雾霭。 精彩片段 　　We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.I looked out of the car window，winding rivers，fragrant flowers, warm breeze，gurgling streams, lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys holding me entirely in their fascination.我们开车穿过几个州，沿途看到了许多美景。我向车窗外望去，那蜿蜒崎岖的河流，芬芳的花朵，暖暖的微风，潺潺的小溪，高耸的山脉，阳光海滩和深谷完全使我为之着迷。 ◆ 运用素材 ◆ 一、完成句子 运用表格中的必备单词/高级词块，把下面的句子补充完整。 1．当太阳落山的时候，温度越来越低了。 __________________________，the temperature was becoming lower. 2．他相信他会从暴风雪中存活下来。 He believed he would ______________________________． When the sun was setting survive from the snowstorm 3．雨倾盆而下，敲打着成排的树枝。 ________________________，beating against the branches of lined trees. 4．他们立即骑着雪地摩托来到他可能被困的地方。(where引导的定语从句) They rode the snowmobiles immediately to the possible place ____________________________． The rain was pouring down where he was trapped 5．天完全黑了，然后下起了雪，很快雪又覆盖了整座山。 (分词短语作状语) It was completely dark and then the snow fell， ________________________________________． soon blanketing the whole mountain again 二、篇章练习 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On Sunday，Nicholas，a teenager，went skiing with his father at Sugarloaf Mountain in Maine. They had a wonderful day and decided to drive home to Massachusetts after a final run. They took a chairlift (升降椅) to the top of the mountain，where they split up to go down in different trails. When the father finished his run, he headed to the parking lot to wait for his son. However, Nicholas never showed up. It turned out that a fierce snowstorm had swept the area as Nicholas was on his way down. Unable to see far，he accidentally turned off the path and ventured (冒险) down the west side of the mountain.Before he knew it, Nicholas was lost and all alone. His way back to the ski trails was blocked. What's worse, he didn't have any food or water with him，let alone his cell phone or other supplies.The sun began to sink and he was getting colder by the minute. Nicholas had no idea where he was.He tried not to panic.He thought about Bear Grylls' survival show Man vs. Wild that he used to watch on TV. In the show, Grylls is abandoned in a wild area and has to help himself out.It was time to put the tips he had learned to use. He decided to stop moving around.He needed the energy，and the winds weren't as strong in the valley where he stood as they were up on the mountain.Plus，there was a better chance of someone finding him if he stayed put.The first thing he did was to seek shelter from the freezing wind and snow. Using his skis, Nicholas built a snow cave. He gathered a huge mass of snow and dug out a hole in the middle. Then he piled branches on top of himself，like a blanket，to stay as warm as he could. When evening came，Nicholas was really hungry.He ate some snow and drank some water from nearby stream so that he wouldn't dehydrate (脱水).Then he returned to his cave and slept. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 When Nicholas didn't show up, his father realized there must be something wrong.__________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ The next day，Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile. ______ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] When Nicholas didn't show up，his father realized there must be something wrong. When the sun was setting，the temperature was becoming lower.He soon calmed down and turned to the police for help. After analyzing the map of the vast and high mountain，they rode snowmobiles immediately to the possible place where Nicholas was trapped.It was completely dark and the snow fell，soon blanketing the whole mountain again.All around was the howling wind.Frightened as Nicholas was，he believed he would survive from the snowstorm. The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile.Excited，he shouted back desperately “Help！Help！”．But the wind was blowing so fiercely that his voice was swallowed.Fortunately，they found him.His father hugged him tightly and cried.The frozen snow under their feet melted in their warm heart.For Nicholas，what a thrilling but memorable experience！For us，from this experience，we should learn to be more careful and gain some survival knowledge in advance to help ourselves out in nature. $$